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I love how this is rent free: the game with Avesta. Literally seething at every second of every day. Honestly I thought Kalve would show up at her job, a public restroom, or even in her own house it was getting ridiculous lol. This was funny, a little sad, and a bit sweet. I'd love to see it with the art cause the bats and dolls and stuff seemed pretty cool. I think the beginning is a bit heavy-handed with the beating and stuff but I still think a story like this from a transphobe's perspective is a fun idea to explore.

Thank you so much for playing!!! I actually don't know if i'll have art anymore actually, my artist as been very busy and even of she did end up available one day i'd rather work on a new project... We'll see.

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It was fun playing through this and seeing how Avesta reacts and changes in response to the queer and trans folks around her! I think the juxtaposition of toxicity (in the form of transphobia and obsession) slowly turning into healing and growth was neat. The change in pronouns over time was a clever trick and it's one of my favorite things in stories. It's interesting having a POV from a transphobe but I think the story does a great job of showing just how pathetic and miserable they are. shout-outs to kalve for her incredible amount of patience and understanding!

I'm also excited to see where else you go with game creation :3

Thank you so much for playing my game!!!! 

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Thank you so much !!!! And yea Kalve is super patient and kind :3 

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really liked what you have here so far!! avesta changing throughout the story made me really happy. i wish her the best :)

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Thank you so much !!!!!!!!!

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Well you're not wrong with what the story's about XD

This was a different experience than I've gone through so far but I think it knows what what it is and sticks hard to it. 

Gonna be honest this is so far out my usual thing that I don't know if I got words for what I just went through, no complaints though, this was good, curious what it'll be like with sprites and CG

In short: The description doesn't lie 9/10

Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!