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You could have made Morgana cartoonishly evil, or her friend a simple side character, or Arthur the obvious right one. You could have made so many moments an obvious strawman, but you didn't. I can't gush enough about how nuanced and intricate you made these characters, where every motive makes sense.

I also love the dynamic personality at play. I LOVE how many options there are to respond to a situation, instead of pigeonholing me into like, 3 obvious personalities. It's such a great feeling that in every selection of options, i find one that is exactly how I feel in the moment.  

This is so well written. The pain and strife are balanced and so perfectly crafted. Everyone is sympathetic, whether you like them or not. I love the range of romantic options, though Galahad is my fave by far. 

I'm looking forward to more and so happy to see how active you are!

This has been the most unique, interesting, and hauntingly beautiful universe I've heard. I'm trying to snag every detail that comes along to piece together this world, i'm soaking in every word because I want to complete the picture. I'm going to keep an eye out for your next release, I'm eager to read it!

The quality improvement in the rewrite is amazing! The personalities are more naturally brought out. Mostly though, thank you for letting me punch Lorelei! That was so incredibly satisfying.

I absolutely love the drama so far, the tension! I'm so excited for any future updates!

I will say tho that the names Kailee and Kalea are painfully similar and it was really hard remembering who was who at the beginning.

I'm so happy that you came back to this one, I've always loved the level of rage I get from this MC and am glad that I still can!

I think your writing has definitely improved, but I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote the children's speaking, like they're actually children. I love that my responses as a young child are immature, it's great! I can hear a squeaky little voice behind them! 

I'm just so glad you're returning to this, I'm so excited for more updates. Welcome back!!

I love Farrah so much, she deserves the world. I hate how much I cry with her scenes, she is just so precious.

What can I say, I'm a huge fan of mystery. I think this would have been better without the title kind of giving it away, but it still leaves so much to discover. I love the MC not being sure of themselves. This one is my third favorite, fighting with Lost to Time tooth and nail. I hate the cliff-hanger this one ended on though, so mean.

I love the emotional rollercoaster of this one, but mostly I'm excited to unravel what happened, what the future with aliens is like, the LORE!!! I love how much my imagination gets to fill in what the characters sound like. This one is my second favorite of your 5 demos. I love the tenderness and curiousity in this one.

I absolutely loved this one, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, and I really felt the connection to the characters. Of your demos, this one is my favorite. I'm a sucker for a good mystery though, and I'm excited to see what the MC is capable of. Very good, Janitor on the 3rd floor/10

I absolutely adore this, the writing is so stylized and incredible. I felt like I was reading a novel at some points. The world lore is so intriguing and I love the main character! I'm looking forward to any updates!

This is an incredible story so far, and I look forward to more, but I'm also rather confused. The prelude is an absolute masterpiece but feels unfinished. Then the present story starts and it's such an abrupt change in writing style, it's repeating things we already knew. Is the story being rewritten starting wit hthe prelude? 

The story is great and I want to know more, don't get me wrong, but the stunning writing in the prelude launched this IF right into the top 10s for me, but then changes so suddenly?

This game is so dramatic and I am LIVING for it! I love the characters and the romance and heartache!!!

I'm glad you're able to continue this masterpiece! I'm absolutely enamoured with how much character each person has in this, even from just the descriptions. I'm looking forward to being able to play more!

I am really looking forward to where this story goes. I'm already hooked!

I hope you come back to this, I've thoroughly enjoyed this one!

The audacity to leave on cliffhanger like that, how could I ever forgive you T^T

I wonder if this story will get any more updates, I really hope so!

Oswin is the love of my life, I will follow that man to hell and back. Likely mentally. 

Seriously though, this game is incredible. I actually recommended this game to someone who wanted to write better flashbacks. The writing is masterful, the characters are interesting, and I'm deeply in love with the world. Oh, and I LOVE my character. I appreciate the customization.

I am excited for the next update!

I hope this gets updated, I am captivated by the story!!

Uh, so it doesn't have to do with gender, but a special kink that you can toggle off. If you go to your bedroom and look at your forbidden tomes, "Jealousy and Pride: How Inferiority Can Engender Ecstasy" is one of those tomes. I don't recommend having it on for a first-time playthrough since it does change some of the context of the game, but the whole point is to have your partners be critical of you specifically as a fetish. They would have similar dialogue if your character had a penis as well.