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Script for Orson Welles Columbia Pictures thriller starring Rita Hayworth.
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TAKE THIS WOMAN
(IF I SHOULD DIE BEFORE I WAKE)
CtAPb From sraveHh)”)
Screenplay by
orson Welles
FINAL DRAFT
(For Estimating Purposes)
August 17, 1046It's late August, -- very early morning....The city,
fretfully awake, gasps for breath in the stuffy atmosphero
of a closet.
In the dizzy heat Spires and tenements seem to sweat
like the New Yorkers living in them. It's been a heavy
sunmer and the whole weight of it has been congealed
into one oven of a night.
under the TITLE and CREDITS.+-
We seo Manhattan at such an
hour in such a seasons
In particular: We see a girl walking. We see a man
following her. She hears his footsteps, stops, he ducks
out of her sight.
In the dark doorway of a building we watch him hiding, --
listening...
She has returned, searching for him, but she halts short
of the door, changes her mind, and crosses the street,
moving toward the place where hansoms and Victorias are
waiting near the parkere
The man scuttles away. CAMERA PANNING HIM takes in a
luminous vista of the city acess.
The CREDITS finish, ani wo
DISSOLVE TO:INT,
1
NIGHT CLUB
DOODLES....the screen is filled with theme». Figures, 1
drafted nervously ona tablecloth. HOT RUMBA MUSIC comes
over the scene. CAMERA PULLS BACK to show the doodler;
an aging playboy (Grisby) = in a most unheppy sweat of
apprehension. He's sitting at a table in 2 night club,
from the pattern of the upholstery: El loroceo. A waiter
is speaking into his ear.
THE WAITER
-- No sir. I've checked again.
THE PLAYBOY
(nis voice shaking
a little)
You're sure?
THE WAITER
That's right, sir. She hasn't called.
The waiter laves. The Playboy stares straight ahead,
gripping the pencil in his shaking fingers. The pencil
breaks... At this the CANERA WHIPS OFF THE SCENE. In a
frantic smear of light =
DISSOLVE TO:
INSERT: A RADTO AND A PHONE 2
The music of El Morocco is being broadcast, but we hear it
more tinnily now from the speaker. A phone in the f.g. is
ringing. A hand coms into the scene, and lifts the
roceiver off the cradle, CAMERA MOVING UP TO SHOW A MAN ==
a cripple, with a sharp, intelligent fece (this is Bannister).
THE CRIPPLED MAN
Yes -- 7
With his free hand, he completes anaction commenced when
the phone rang. He knocks a pill or two cut o” a bottle,
picks them up in his uncertain fingers, pops [Link] in his
mouth and swallows them with a glass of water. He has
just started his drink when something said on the phone
makes himstop to answere
THE CRIPPLED MAN
(sharply)
What do you mean == you lost hor?
CUT TO:4
PHONE BOOTH
GARAGE SEEN IN B.G. A man is at the phone (Broome). 3
His blank
face shows nothing but greed. A loose mouth
sports a set of teeth tho color of Camembert cheese. About
two of these unlovely grinders are missing and this man
Broome has a way of nursing a fat reptilian tongue through
the gaping space with exactly the grimace of a sick lizard.
Indeed, though a big fellow, he's quite probably unwell.
Anyway, he looks ill. He also looks like a hoodlum.
THE OTHER
BROOME
I tagged her as far as the Plazas
Then she took this horse and buggy...
I had to leave her go or she'd spot
Me wee
CUT TO:
END OF THE PHONE CONVERSATION: 4
THE ORIPPLED MAN
(furiously)
You read the papors, don't you?
You know the kind of things that're
happening in the park nowadays? --
What's she doing out there +=
gone?
DISSOLVE TO:EXT. CENTRAL PARK
5 CLOSEUP A GIRL 5
The girl we saw befores+seA very beautiful girl. She's
riding in a carriage in the mrk. CAMERA CRANES BACK to
show @ POLICE SQUAD CAR moving up behind her.
INSERT: THE LITTLE DIAL OF A RADIO
IN SQUAD CAR
Through the speaker ani over the
rattling of static comes the cop
announcer reciting the police callse
POLICE RADIO VOICE
Car in 52nd Precinct, Signal 30 =
196th & Jerome - cries for help
Car 510 will respond = proceed
cautiously.
+ SQUAD CAR - NIGHT
6 MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT 6
4 couple of cops are listening to the calls.
cop 2
Gettin! a lot of action up in tho
Bronxe
CoP 2
Yeah, quiet around here, -- for once.
COP 1
Hey! Just a minute --
He jerks his hoad to indicate something we can't see outside.
COP 1
(continuing)
How about that guy, -- watchs think?
Tho Voice ca the short wave radio drones on with the police
callseres
EXT. CENTRAL PARK = NIGHT
7 Tho redio in the parked squad car can still be heard, faint, 7
but audible. It's quict out here. And very hot. A man is
walking in the park late at night. His footsteps echo on
the sidowalk. He's singing under his breath, and with more
than a touch of Irish brogue:10
CONTINUED: 7
‘THE MAN
Bold Robert Emmett, the darlin' of Erin
Bold Robort Emmett, he died with a smile.
So farewell ==
It's dark and the man's face is in shadow. But now a blade
of light stabs through the darkness and picks up his face
interrupting the song. The flashlight is held by a police=
man, ond of the two, in the squad care Nothing is said for
a waile. The flashlight travels up and dow scarching tho
mane The cops looking him over without comment. The short
wave radio rattles on with its routino refrain...
TRUCKING SHOT 8
The man moves to a pedestrian crossing with traffic lights,
the squad car inching after him.
CLOSEUP THE MAN 9
He's big strapping Irishman with a pug nose =~ a little
wild-eygd maybe, but he doosn't really look dangerous. This
is Michacl. 0.8. the carriage is heard coming up.
MEDIUS SHOT MICHAEL 10
Squad car in beg. The horse-drawn hack approaches =- a
Victoria, chauffeured by a broken-down ola character in a
topper, and containing by wy of a passenger, the Girl.
With a lonely sounding "click," the traffic light changes
and the carriage comes to @ halt beside Michnol.
MICHAEL
(he grins at
the cabby)
That horse o' yours, -- does he
always stop by himself on a rea
light?
THE CABBY
It's a her and she ain't color blind.
MICHAEL
(apparently for the
benefit of the police)
Sure, it's the middle of the night
in the middle of the park, an! if
there's over a point in a traffic
light eat all, thore's no point in
it here. So why does she stop?10
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CONTINUED: 10
THE CABBY
This hore's a law-abiding horses
MICHAEL
Therc's nobody obeys a law unless
they're afraid of something.
Michacl now pretends to talk to the horso, but of course
all this isreally meant for the cops, end more importantly,
for the girl.
MICHAEL
(continuing)
Is it the old man's whip you tromble
under, Rosinante?
THE CABBY
{dead pan)
Now, don't be callin' her namese
MICHAEL
{catehing the Irish
remnant In the old
ecabby's infloction)
You're a Cork man?
THE CABBY
Limericks But I left Ireland when
Twas a kid
MICHAEL
So did T
THE CABBY
You're from the North, ain't ya?
MICHAEL
Tho West. Connomarra.
(to the girl)
Will you have a cigarette, mtam?
CLOSEUP THE GIRL al
Michael's eyes haven't left hors during all the foregoing
and for good reasons, too. She's wearing a simple print
frock -= but sho fills it with groat style. She's young -
nothing frosh or cheap about her = reserved = but her cyes
meet Michacl's with a level twinkle.
MEDIUM SHOT IN CENTRAL PARK 12
The Cops in the squad car have been silently watching all of
this and listening. Now, ono of them speaks:12
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CONTINUED: 12
cop 1
It's a bad time to be out alonc,
lady. Been a lotta trouble out
hore lately =
COP 2
Yeah, and maybe the Irishman Imows
something about it.
CoP 1
Maybe we ought to take him in and
find oute
Michacl, paying no attontion to this, repeats his offer to
the girl.
MICHAEL
Cigarette?
THE GIRL
No, thanks.
MICHAEL
(as though the cops,
who are watching him
still - don't exist)
The brand is ordinary but the
smoke is sweet in the open
night air.
cop 1
(with a grunt)
Aw = he's just showin' off to the
girl.
Tho squad car starts away..
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 13
The muscle twitches in Michael's jaw, but he goos on offering
the cigarette.
‘Two SHOT
MICHAEL
It's mo last one. Ami Ibeoon
looking forward to it, so please
don't refusce
MICHAEL AND THE GIRL 14
THE GIRL
But I don't smokoe4
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CONTINUED: 14
MICHAEL
Experiment with this ono. In the
dark of the road up there, there'll
be nobody to see yous You've the
look of a queen about you entirely,
ridin! in your solitary luxuriousness,
end it's only a queen Imows how to
be aftor roceivin' a gifte
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL, THE GIRL AND CARRIAGE 15
The lonely "click" again - tho traffic light has changeds
MICHAEL
I vant toremember you as the queen
of tho night-time, the Empress of
Central Park, so take the gift, Your
Majesty, and don't disappoint mo»
THE CABBY
We better get goin', miss, bofore
tho light changes againe
With nice gravity, tho girl accopts the cigarotto, takes a
handkerchief out of hor bag and wraps Michael's foolish
little gift in ite
CLOSEUP THE GIRL 18
She looks at Michacl for 1 minute, thon:
THE GIRL
Go ahead.
‘The way sho says it = still looking at him = it sounds vory
much like an [Link] =
MEDIUM SHOT THE CARRIAGE AND MICHAEL Bs
But tho old Cabby takes it literally, and with a crack of
his whip he starts up tho carriago. There's a sloepy 'clop=
clop? of hooves as thoy go on off into ‘he darkness leaving
Michacl all by himself.
ORANE SHO? MICHAEL IN THE PARK 18
He starts slowly up the sidewalk in the samo direction. Then,
after a bit, ho whispers his little song againe
MICHAEL
"gold Robert Emmett, he dicd with a smiles
So farewell, companions, both brave and loyal,
I laid down my life -- "
Again hesinterrupted. Again by the return of the squad care19
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MEDIUM SHOT SQUAD CAR 19
The car stops beside Michael.
coP 1
Whatayu celebratin', bud?
MICHAEL
(with quiet belligerence)
What do you mean?
coP 1
Whatehu singin for?
MICHAEL
Sure, there isn't a soul for me
to wake out here save the birds
in the trees. Can't a man whisper
@ small song to himself in the night-
time for the companionship of it?
And to keep himself from remembrint
that the world is full of cops?
A voice on the short wave radio comes over scene.
COP 2
Just a second, Mac.
VOICE (0.8.)
Cars in the 22nd Precinct, Signal 32
at 86th St. trance, Cars 442, 464
will respond...
cop 1
That's us.
They drive off.
TRUCKING SHOT MICHAEL 20
He continues on his walk. After a bit, something catches
his eye. He passes it - then returns and picks it up; a
woman's handbag. It looks like the Girl's. Michael glances
around.
LONG SHOT DESERTED PARK 21
Nothing but empty silence.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 22
He opens the handbag. There is the handkerchief, and
in it, the cigarette.23
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MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL 23
He sees something on the ground.
INSERT: ‘THE TRACKS OF CARRIAGE WHEELS 24
CUTTING ACROSS THE LAWN.
TRUCKING SHOT MICHARL FOLLOWING CARRIAGE TRACKS 25
The carriage tracks lead to a dark place where there's
no street lamp, but a thicket of young trees. The horse
end carriage stand motionless in front of a grass embankment,
CLOSE SHOT THE EMPTY CARRIAGE 26
CLOSE SHOT CABBIE, 27
Slumped over on oné side lying on the ground is the
old cabbie. He's been knocked out,
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 28
Looks around.
LONG SHOT MICHAEL'S POINT OF VIEW 29
He sees three men, their backs to him, surrounding the
Girl. One of the men holds a gun, The Girl looks towards
Michael, Her face brightens with hope as she sees him,
DOLLY SHOT MICHAEL 30
He leaves the old cabbio and rushes toward the men.
MEDIUM SHOT THE THREE MEN AND THE GIRL 31
Michael takes on the man holding the gun -- delivers
a well aimed punch at the jaw.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL AND THE MEN HOLDING THE GUN 32
It's a lucky punch and the man drops to the ground un-
conscious - the gun falling in the bushes nearby, The
second man closes in on Michael.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 33
Swinging full force, Michael slashes wildly at this
man, The man takes off, and, Roughneck, Number Two
beats it, too, The girl, pale with shock, looks wonder-
ingly up at her rescuer, the big Irishman, Nothing is
said, he just looks back. They both like what they see,
but her escape from the attackers has been too serious and
energetic a business for a mood conducive to flirtation.
Michael takes her by the arm and leads hor towards the
carriage. He pats the horse, calming it.35
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MED. SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
THE GIRL
What about the driver?
MICHAEL
He'll be the first towake up;
He's bound to bese..
CLOSE SHOT THE CARRIAGE
Michael takes out the carriage blanket, very carefully
throws it over the unconscious cabbie, Michael kisses
the horseshoe and places it on top of the blanket.
CLOSE SHOT THE OLD CABBIE
Dreaming peacefully, the blanket over him, the horse~
‘shoe on top. ?
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
MICHAEL
The copstll find him in a minute.
They can figure it out for them
selves. Climb aboard now and I'll
take you home.
She gets in the carriage with him.
MEDIUM SHOT THE CARRIAGE
Michael starts the Victoria and brings it back to
the road.
TWO SHOT MICHASL AND THE GIRL IN THE CARRIAGE
(PROCESS)
THE GIRL
Well, you can take me to the
garage = home's too far away.
MICHAEL
Nothing's too far away.
THE GIRL
(looking at him)
You mean for yous
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CONTINUED:
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
TNO SHOT
MICHARL
I mean for me,
THE GIRL
We'll spend the whole night, then --
driving at this rate of speed.
MICHAEL
MICHAEL
sure, and there's nothin! to do
with the night but to spend it,
You can't be saving it. The night
won't keep.
‘THE GIRL
THE GIRL
hat sounds like something in a
book.
MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
MICHAEL
It will bee
THE GIRL
Are you a writer?
MICHAEL
I will be.
THE GIRL
What kind of stories do you
write?
MICHAEL
I'll decide after I've written
them,
THE GIRL
But how can you write a story
before you think about it?
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43 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 43,
MICHAEL
sure, you can't decide about a
thing 'til it's all over end done,
and even then, you can't be certain
ecause who kmows when anything's
done with -- for good and all.
44 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND GIRL 44
THE GIRL
(slowly)
I think I kmow what you mean.
MICHAEL
I'm sure I don't.
THE GIRL
(giving him a
sharp look)
Are you making fun of me?
MICHAFL
I only make fun of myself.
THE GIRL
You're that funny?
MICHAEL
I'm that Irish.
45 CLOSEUP THE GIRL 45
THE GIRL
(after a minute)
You're wrong about love affairs.
46 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 46
MICHAEL
I never mentioned any.
a7 CLOSEUP THE GIRL 47
THE GIRL
I think a person knows when they're
not in love anymore -- You know when
that's over.13
48 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL 48
MICHAEL
(giving her a
shrewd glance)
You know, but does he?
The girl doesn't answer, She looks away.
MICHAEL
(continuing)
You're sure it's overs
THE GIRL
It's none of your businoss.
MICHAEL
That's just why you can trust me
with the secrets of your heart.
I don't even kmow your name and
you'll nover be sedin' me again,
THE GIRL
There you go being certain of
something.
A pauses
49 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 49
We see him changing his mind about several thingse
MICHAEL
You better give me your name.
THE GIRL
(with e twinkle)
‘And my phone number?
MICHAEL
Faith, tomorrow I!11 be out on
the sea in a boat and it bound
for the dark continent of Africas
50 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL 50
THE GIRL
(ner eyes laughing
ab him)
You've decided that, too?14
50 CONTINUED: 50
MICHAEL
(looking at
her - ruefully)
You lmow something - you're too
logical altogethers
Michael watches her mouth as it decides to smile, then
he speaks, thoughtfully.
MICHAEL
(continuing)
Im going to call you Rosaleen,
THE GIRL
Rosaleen? Why?
MICHAEL
It's a gorgeous romantical name
to be sure -- and nobody called
Rosaleen could ever be logical,
THE GIRL
(ponders this
for a minute’)
I think you like to hear yourself
talc.
MICHAEL
I enjoy it immensely.
THE GIRL
What shall I call you?
MICHAEL
-+ My true name.
THE GIRL
(atinge of sophisticated
irony accents her tone)
Now, don't tease me -~ what is 1t?
MICHAEL
Michael. And you're teasin'.
THE GIRL
(with more warmth)
Yes, Michael, I'm teasing you.
Do you enjoy that?
51 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 52
MICHAEL
I'm enjoyint the two of us.52
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CLOSEUP THE GIRL
THE GIRL
(smiling up eat him)
And you're still going off to
the dark continent of africa?
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(smiling back)
But I'll see you again, I've changed
my mind about that, and it's gifts
I'll be bringing you, combs from
the tusks of the wisest elephants
to put in your heir, Rosaleen, It's
a marvelous fan I'l] wheedle away
from the pygmy people, so you'll be
coolin! your cheek from the feathers
of educated peacocks.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
THE GIRL
Michael, youtre a character,
MICHAEL
I'm nothin! more than a sailor-man
and him with the queen of the night
ridin! along at his side.
FULL SHOT THE PARK
The squad car is glimpsed through the trees, passing
then, but not seeing them, on another road,
CLOSE TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
THE GIRL
There's @ police car --
MICHAEL
Wetre just comin? out of the park,
the horse. and cart'll make it too
simple for the cops to be findint
us --
He pulls up to a lamp-post.
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MEDIUM SHOT THE CARRIAGE
Michael gets out of the carriage and hitches the horse to
the lamp.
THE GIRL
You don't care for them very much,
do you, Michael?
MICHAEL
The cops?
(somberly)
Faith, they can struggle along with-
out our doin! their work for ‘em.
He helps the girl down out of the carriege, then bows
to the horse.
MICHAEL
(continuing )
Farewell, Rosinante.
THE GIRL
That sounds like my name.
(smiles)
He takes her arm.
TRUCKING SHOT MICHAL AND THE GIRL
They start walking.
MICHAEL
Sure, Rosinante's a horse ina
book. You're Rossleen.
THE GIRL
Who's she?
MICHAEL
A girl in a book.
THE GIRL
I remember -- Rosinante was the old
nag Don Quixote rode when he went out
after those windmills, I think you're
a lot like Don Quixote, yourself
Wichael. You haven't heard about the
age of chivalry. It's out of business.
MICHAEL
The tough boys that went after you
in the park == they didn't look like
windmills to me =
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CONTINUED:
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THE GIRL
They weren't. I'm sorry, Micheel,
I guess you're really what you think
you are.
MICHAEL
Whatever's that now?
THE GIRL
A knight errent -~ A real live knight
errant. When you were e boy, you read
all about them, didn't you, Michael?
And you never got over it,
MICHAEL
(with a quizzical grin)
You mean I never grew up? And what,
can you tell me, does a knight errant
do for his livelihood?
THE GIRL
Oh, he doesn't bother mach about
earning e living. He spends most
of his time rescuing maidens in
distress. He always slays the
dragon and saves the princess, and
he makes the prettiest speeches.
But you'd better be careful. Things
have changed, Sir Knight. Nowadays
it's usually tho dragon that lives
happily ever after.
MICHAEL
Don't the princess and the knight
ever make it?
THE GIRL
(stopping and turning
to him)
Sometimes she gives hime kiss.
Michael just looks at her, terribly embarrassed. A funny
little spark comes into her eye.
THE GIRL
(continuing )
Michael....You know what's wrong
with being a knight errant?
MICHAEL
No.18
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THE GIRL
He's brave and bold because his heart
is pure, But he's an awful fool --
He doesn't know anything about women.
She takes his hand and leads him to tho street corner.
THE GIRL
(continuing )
If I hadn't seen the way you can
fight, I'd say you spend all your
time reading.
MICHAEL
A sailor has nothin! but time, Paith,
go must @ girl ridin! all by herself
in a carriage in the lonesome dark.
You must have time and to spare.
THE GIRL
(quietly)
No, I haven't much timo
(after a minute ~
she's been thinking)
You don't like the police, Michael.
Is there some reason why they don't
like you?
MICHAEL
(darkly)
They've never put mo in jail --
in America.
By now they've stopped at the stroct corners
EXT. STREET CORNER
59 MEDIUM SHOT 59
THE GIRL
My car's a block down that way
MICHASL
(Lightly)
The nicest jails are in Australia.
The worst are in Spaine
THE GIRL
You must be a naughty boy, Michael.
MICHAEL
I'm careless.1g
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THE GIRL
Now, you're bragging. ,
(her smile is at once
affectionate and derisive)
Look at you, you're waiting for
the red light! Come on, Michael.
Leading him, she starts crossing the street against the
ght.
THE GIRL
(continuing)
What law did you break in Spain?
MICHAEL
I killed a man.
A taxi whizzes by and almost runs them down, They continue
crossing.
THE GIRL
(laughing)
You almost killed a girl on
Sixty-sevonth Street.
MICHAEL
Is there a law against that?
Tney've reached a garage.
EXT. GARAGE
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THE GIRL
Try it. You won't like the
jails in New York.
She leads him into the garage.
INT. GARAGE
61 The girl gives an attendant a chcck. She and Michael stand 61
together waiting for hor cars
MICHAEL
(during the foregoing
business)
There was a woman hore killed her
husband last wook. Ho'd gone to the
ice-box for a bite of supper. The
woman said she thought her husband
was e burglar. She shot him fivo
times in the head.61
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THE GIRL
She had a good lawyer.
TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
MICHAEL
Evidently. I saw the woman's picture
in the nowspaper this morning -~
'Vacation-bound for Bermuda,! it said.
Come to think of it, they had the
lawyer-man's picture, as woll. A
sorry little eripplo fella, he was.
Bainbridge or somethin'. ‘The paper
called him the ‘World's Greatest
Criminal Lawyer.' He looked like the
World's greatest criminal.
CLOSEUP THE GIRL
THE GIRL
(slowly)
Some poople think he is. His name
is Bannister. Harry Bannister.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
You seem to know a lot about him.
CLOSEUP THE GIRL
THE GIRL
I ought to, but I don't.
TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL
MICHAEL
(after a silence)
I don't know what that means, but
I won't apologize, regardless.
THE GIRL
Don't ever.
MICHAEL
I don't ever.
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GARAGE
67 MEDIUM SHOT 67
ATTENDANT
(coming into the Scone)
Here's your car, Ma'am.
Another Attendant drives up with a really huge and fiercely-
alcok Hispano Suiza.
THE GIRL
Sond the bill to my husband.
68 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 68
MICHAEL
Your husband.
69 CLOSEUP THE GIRL REACTION 69
70 CLOSEUP ‘ NICHAEL 70
MICHAEL
Did you go ridin* in the carriage
because you wanted loneliness to
be thinkin! of him, or just so
they could fix the plug?
72 PRESH ANGLE OF THE GARAGE 7
A concrete pillar behind Michacl. Broome's face inchos
into tho picture. He watches the Girl and Micheel, careful
not to be seen. 3
72 CLOSEUP THE. GIRL 72
THE GIRL
(she looks at him for a
minute )
I dontt like driving this things...
Like to drive it for me?
73 ‘WO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL 73
He doosn't ansver. Sho gots into the cer, bohind the whoel.
14 CLOSEUP THE GIRL 74
THE GIRL
@ like it.15
76
17
73
79
22
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 75
MICHAEL
I'm shippin' out tomorrow.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL 16
THE GIRL
You've been to Africa. I'11 bet
you've nover seon Long Island.
It'll bo a now experience.
Michacl's cyos don't leave hers, but he doosn't answer,
THE GIRL
(continuing )
Are you interestod in monoy?
MICHAEL
Not at ell.
THE GIRL
(giving him a card)
In case you change your mind =~
CLOSEUP MICHAEL id
Ho tears the card in two and throws it aways
CLOSEUP THE GIRL . 78
THE GIRL
I'11 make it worth your while --
Suddenly, her face changos..-her hand 1s still in hor bag.
She misses something. She's frightenod.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND THE GIRL. 79
MICHAEL
Is this whet you're lookin! for?
(no brings out a gun)
You wore smart to carry it, ridin!
alone in the park, but if you knew
you had it in your bag why throw it
away?
THE GIRL
I hopod you'd find it. I don't
know how to shoot+
MICHAEL
It's easy. You just pull the
trigger.79
23
CONTINUED: 79
All at once her eyes fill with tears. Sho's a very scared,
very helpless=looking little girl. Sho starts up the big
car with a jerk.
INT. GARAGE
80
el
82
MEDIUM SHOT 80
jhe Girl drives the car, much too quickly, out of ths garage.
Michael stands looking after her. Broome comes up beside him.
BROOME
Some damo, ain't she?
Michacl makes no reply.
A GARAGS ATTENDANT
Yoah -- and some car. Mr. Bannister
had it made spocial for hor.
CLOSEUP. MICHAEL 81
MICHAEL
Bannister?
TWO S{0T MICHAEL AND THE ATTENDANT 82
THE ATTENDANT
Harry Bannister himsolf.
(he sighs in an
ecstasy of admiration)
Some guys have all the luck!
DISSOLVE TO:24
83 MOVING SHOT CRIPPLED LEGS OF A MAN LINPING THROUGH A 83
CROWD CAMERA PULLS BACK to show this man, Quite tragically
crippled, he is -- wa've seen him before, Small, very
palding, sharp faced, with a twisted mouth and very bright
beady eyes. CAMERA SULLS FURTHER BACK to show:
SEAMAN'S HIRING HALL
84 Hundreds of seamen gathered in groups -- faces represent- 64
ing all the people of the earth, In the center of the room,
ona chair, a port steward stands calling off names.
PORT STEWARD
8.8. American Trader, four A.B.'s,
two ordinary seamen, one oiler,
one wiper, three cooks, and boatewain,
one quartermaster. She lays at Pier
43, She's feeding «++
‘The crippled man comes up to one of the sailors.
HE CRIPPLED 2AN
Excuse me, could you help me
locate a Mr, O'Hara -- Michael
O'Hara?
THE SAILOR
(nis name is GOLDIE)
Black Mike O'Hara ... a big harp
that talks fancy?
THE CRIPPLED MAN
I Gn't kmow the man myself.
Another sailor comes up to them, this one's name 1s Jake.
TAKE
I know him,
THE CRIPPLED MAN
Shipmetes?
TAKE
We was in Sriin together.
A voice cuts in over the loudspeaker.
VOICE 0.8.
Michael O'Hara ... O'Hara ...
Man wants to see you. Please
step to the water cooler.84
85
CONTINUED:
25
84
JAKE
They started’ callin' him Black
Irish in '39, after what he did
to then two strikebreakers. There's
a lotta blarney in Mike, but he
knows how to hurt a man when he gots
mad.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
Everything goos black, huh?
JAKE
Black and blue.
VOICE 0.8.
(Loudspeaker)
I got a tanker needs a cook's
assistant. A short run to the
Gulf. She's feedin', shoe's hot.
MICHAEL 0.8,
Youtre looking for me?
THE CAMERA PANS to include Michael. The ex‘ippled man sizes
him up with shrewd eyes.
TWO SHOT
THE CRIPPLED MAN
O'Hare?
MICHAEL
O'Hara.
MICHAEL AND THE CRIPPLED MAN 85
THE CRIPPLED MAN
You're what they call an able-bodied
seaman?
MICHAEL
That's what they call it.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
Can you drive a car?
MICHAEL
Yes.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
I presume you can manage a specd
boat?85
86
87
ge
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CONTINUED: 85
. MICHAEL
I presume so.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
Do, you drink?
MICHAEL
(very softly)
I beg your pardon.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
I asked you if you drink.
MICHAEL
Whatever's set in front of me,
mister. It doesn't have to be
wholesome, just so it's strongee.
THE CRIPPLED NAN
You drink habitually?
MICHAEL
May Iask, air, if you're extending
an invitation?
CLOSEUP THE CRIPPLED MAN a6
He chokes down his gall, pulls himself together, forces a
smile.
THE CRIPPLED MAN
I guess it might as well bo.
(he turns on the charm)
If you'll show mo to the nearest
bar, Mr, O'Hara, we'll sit down
together and discuss your going
to work for me. My name is
Bannister.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL'S REACTION 87
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL, THE CRIPPLED MAN AND THE TWO 88
SAILORS
Michael addresses Goldie and Jake (who haven't been able
to make up their minds whether to go away or to stick around
in case their friend's being insulted.)
MICHAEL \
Me Boyes, may I present Mr. Harry
Bannister, the criminal lawyer.
He'll get you out of anything --
Mr, Jake Bejornson and Goldie,
(to Goldie)
Right?27
88 CONTINUED: as
GOLDIE
(shakes hands
with Bannister)
Chaim Goldfish 1s the namo.
Glad to know you, Mr. Bannister,
The muscle is working now in Michael's jaw, Hots sore as
hell, but his voice is soft.
MICHAEL
Mr, Eannister's wife sent him to
get me.
(turning to Bannister)
Didn't she, Mr. Bannister?
The knuckles of Bannister's hands are white as he grips his
canes.
MICHAEL (CONT'D)
-- And now Mr, Bannister's going
to buy us all a fow drinks while
I entertain myself by refusin' to
go to work for him.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. BAR
89 A juke box is playing. Bannister and Michael face each 89
other across a booth ... dake beside Bannister and Goldie
seated by Michael, Several hours have passed, There's
eon a lot of drinking and Bannister is very drunk.
JAKE
(grinning affection-
ately at Michael)
«+. Yeah, Mike's kind of a screwball,
Dut he's got a great line with the
broads.
BANNISTER
So I hear Saved my wife's life,
y'know. 0 a hero, Quite a
tough guy.
JAKE
Mister, there ain't no such thing.
BANNISTER
No such thing as a tough guy?89
90
91
92
93
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CONTINUED: 89
JAKE
What's a tough guy? Hets a guy
with an edge.
A pause. We hear a crooner, Sinatra or Crosby, on the juke
‘box.
JAKE
(continued)
What makes him sing purtier 'n me?
CLOSEUP JAKE 90
He points to his throat.
JAKE
(contimaed)
Somethin! in here, What makes
it loud? A microphone. That's
his edge. What's an edge? se»
‘An edge is a gun or a kmifo or a
nightstick or a razor, Somethin!
the other guy dontt have... A
little extra reach on e punch, or
a set of brass knuckles, or a
stripe on your sleeve, or a badge
that says 'Copt on it, or a piece
of rock in your hand, or a bank
roll in your pocket. That's an
edge, brother ... Without no edge
they ain't no tough guy.
MEDIUM SHOT THE FOURSOME 91
Bannister, glassy-eyed, focuses balefully on Michsel.
BANNISTER
You hear that, Black Irish?
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 92
MICHAEL
It's true.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 98
BANNISTER
Well, bear it in mind.
Bannister passes out cold.
DISSOLVE TO:29
INT. MAIN HOUSE OF THE BANNISTER ESTATE - LONG ISLAND ~ DAY
94 ‘THE FRONT HALLWAY 94
Elsa goes to tho door.
ELSA
(as she comes into
scene)
+++ Where?
She's followed by Bessie, the housekeeper. Bessie is a
Negro woman, about fifty, with a lean, strong face and
weary, very gentle eyes. Her little frame is stooped after
a life-time of hard work, but the spirit in her is erect
and quite undaunted, Ina word, here 1a no Aunt Jemima,
BESSIE
++ssIn front, Miz Bennister...
seid he wouldn't go away without
he could see you.
ELSA
He didn't give you his name?
BESSIE
Jest said it was personal, ma'am,
that's all he'd say.
EXT, DRIVEWAY: OVERSHOULDER SHOT
95 Elsa opens the door and sees an old battered Chevvy waiting 95
in the drive. Michael sits at the wheel.
EXT. BANNISTER HOUSE
96 Bessie waits on the steps and Elsa moves down to Michael. 96
ELSA
Hello...
MICHAEL
I guess with a car like this, I
should've gone 'round t> the rear.
ELSA
It's yours?
MICHAEL
Goldie's. He's a friend of mine,
97 TWO SHOT ELSA AND MICHAEL 97
ELSA
You didn't go to Africa.30
97 CONTINUED: 97
MICHAEL
Goldie took my berth.
ELSA
Does that mean you've changed
your mind about me?
MICHAEL
Sure, I told you before -- I
never decide about anything at
ell, till it's done with.
98 CLOSEUP ELSA 98
ELSA
(very quietly, with really
tremendous sincerity)
I'm 4n trouble, Michael. I don't
imow what would have happened if
you hadn't come.
(after a moment she goes on)
You had to come, didn't you, Michsel?
99 CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 99
He looks at here
MICHAEL
I thought I'é better, You misplaced
something.
He gots out of the car.
MICHAEL
I thought you'd like to have it
back.
He opens the rear door.
MICHAEL
I'm returning your husband, Urs.
Bannister.
INT. CAR
100 CLOSE SHOT 100
In the back, a crumpled heap, is Herry Bannister lost in
érunken dreams.
101 MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA AT THE CAR 101
Bannister is quite a sight - Elsa takes it in, then turns,
calling:101
102
103
104
105,
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CONTINUED: _ 101
ELSA
Bossiet
NEDIUM FULL SHOT 102
Bessie comes down the steps to Elsa.
BESSIE
Yes, Miz Bannister --
Bessie sees what's in the car, quickly comes to Elsa's aid.
CLOSE SHOT BESSIE 103
The housokeeper struggles with Bannister's arm, trying to
pull him out of the car,
BESSIE
(brisk and business-
‘like - to Michaol)
Come on, you. Help mo out with this.
MEDIUM SHOT THE CAR AND THE HOUSE. 104
With a fast, expert movement -- but not roughly -- Michael
lifts Bannister out of the auto and carries him up the steps.
Elsa picks up the cripple's cane, Bessie holds open the door.
Michael steps back, holding the little lawyer like a sleeping
child,
MICHAEL
After you, Mrs. Bannister --
Elsa looks at him, then goes into the great, marble-faced
mansion.
TWO SHOT BESSIE AND MICHAEL. 105
The housekeeper stops Micheel in the doorway --
BESSIE
(under her breath)
Don't go away, Mr. Nan -- She needs
you --
MICHAEL
I'm going to stay.
Michael's hooked now, He carries Bannister over the thres-
holes Bessie closes the door after them =-
FADE OUT:32
FADE IN:
INT. BANNISTER HOME - THE SERVANT!S WING
106 Broome, the butler, he of the gap-toothed leer, hurries 106
into the scene, goes to a phone, furtively lifts 1t off
the cradle, and listens -- obviously to a conversation on
another phone somewhere in tho house,
107 CLOSE SHOT BROOME LISTENING TO PHONE 107
This Broome, as earlier noted, is by no manner of moans the
typé of the perfect servant.
108. MEDIUM SHOT BROOME AT PHONE 108
Bessie comes down the hell, and hearing her, Broome slides
the phone behind his back. Bossie gives hime suit of
clothes on a hanger.
BESSIE
Take these in to the new chauffeur,
Then you cen got to work on all the
barbecue stuff, I been after you to
clean it for days.
Bessie goos off down the hall. Broome brings the phone
around from behind him end listens agein, We sco from his
expression that the phone's dead now, Broome grunts an
inaudible curse, and puts it back on the cradle. Carrying
the suit, he moves up the hall, CAMERA FOLLOWING HIM, ‘He
stops at a door - listens, Then he opens the door.
109 - OVER-SHOULDER SHOT FAVORING MICHAEL 109
Over Broome's shoulder we see into the room, Michael has
been standing at the window. As Broome enters, he turns.
INT. MICHAEL'S ROOM
ant. wees ee no
110 A tiny, sparsely furnished apartment at the rear of the house.
The low raked cefling makos Michael look even taller then
he is, Broome steps quickly to Michael's side and peers out
of the window, Then he grins.
FULL SHOT THE GARDEN FROM BROOME'S ANGLE
a
111s Elsa, dressed for work in a coolie hat, a blouse and a cute
little pair of shorts, is seen benéing over a bed of dahlias.
BROOME'S VOICE
(his voice comes 0.8, over
this tableau)
Enjoying the scenery, huh?33,
INT. MICHAEL'S ROOM
112‘ MEDIUM SHOT ne
Michael turns on Broome, who bares his fangs in an answering
leer.
BROOME
(continued)
Quite a nature lover, ain't you,
ur. O'Hara?
MICHAEL
O'Hara, Didn't I soo you last
night in the garage?
BROOME
I get around -- Tako your chauffeurts
suit, Mr, O'Hara, and try it on for
size.
He hands the uniform to Michael.
113° «MO SHOT MICHAEL & BROOME ns
BROOME
(continued)
We're glad to seo ya. It sure gots
lonesome out here in the sticks.
Specially for a dame.
Broome stops a quick movement of Michael's with one of his
own toward his pocket.
BROOME
(continued)
Hold on a minuto, Irish -- Byes.
Broomo brings out a bottle of scotch ~ good scotch.
BROOME
(continued)
Look what I got -- Benniater's
dest ain't none too good for us,
huh?
He puts the bottle down on the table.
BROOME
(continued)
Save me a snort or two, I'll be backs
He turns at the door, flashing a parting smirk at Michael,
BROOME
(continued)
S'long, Danny Boy.113
ExT.
CONTINUED:
Broome goos out. Michael watches the door close, starts
toward it, then stops, feeling holpless, In spite of
hinself, he turns back to the window,
GARDEN
114
Elsa, her arms full of flowers now, crosses towards tho
house.
MICHAEL'S WINDOW
EXT.
115
116
SHOOTING FROM GARDEN
CLOSEUP MICHAEL'S FACE IN WINDOW
He watches her,
DISSOLVE TO:
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ne117
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CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL IN CAR 7
Now hets drossed in the chauffeur's uniform, and seated at
the wheel of the Hispano Suiza. As in the previous shot,
he's looking off scene -- mach the same expression on his
face.
EY. BANNISTER'S PRIVATE BEACH
ne
ny
121
0
8
FULL SHOT FROM MICHAEL'S ANGLE 1s
A big lonely strip of beautiful white sand, Down near the
water, Elsa. She's wearing quite some bathing sult, Indeed.
Littered about her person are sun-tan lotions, magazines, all
the usual props.
REVERSE ANGLE 1g
- Upon on the crest above the beach is the big Hispano Suiza.
Wiehael is waiting at the wheel. CLOSE IN ON MICHAEL, watch-
ingthe girl. The ear radio is playing a soap opera.
ANNOUNCERS VOICE
( (o.8.)
=- will Betty turn back to John if the
operation is successful? Will John
regain his sight? Does Ruth realize what
happened in Bridgeport? Tune jn =~
Michael switches over to some jazz music ~~ hits the station
very much too loud, and this makes Elsa turn -r sho looks up
chael.
UX SHOT ELSA ON THE BEACH 120
She hopes the loud music is a signal. Michael raises a
newspaper, pretends to read it so he can't see her. She turns
back. A Car comes up next to Michael and stops very close -~
as close as a car can get. It's on Michael's left, so that
the man sitting at the wheel in the American car is next to
Michael.
CLOSE SHOT THE MAN IN THE CAR 122
Wetvs seen him before -- doodling doller signs on the night
club tablo -- a hearty, silly ass, a racquet-club glamour boy
in his late : orties, an expensively toggod out phoney, with
the look about him of always coming fresh from the barberts
and the steam bath. A real pillar of cafe society, this out
of Groton and Harvard, and darn lucky to be out of jail.
THE MAN
(to Michael)
Why don't you go swimning?36
122 TWO SHOT THE MAN AND MICHAEL lee
MICHAEL
(turning off
the radio)
Excuse mo, sir?
THE MAN
Why don't you go swimming?
MICHAEL
(grimly)
Itm on duty.
THE HAN
{his is your first cheuffeuring
job or you wouldn't take it so
seriously, fella.
MICHAEL
I didn't bring a swim suit along on
the job, sir.
THE MAN
You ought to the next time.
MICHAEL
Thore won't be a next time, sir.
I'm quittin'.
THE MAN
My trunks should fit you. The groen
ones. You'll find 'om in the locker
back at the house.
Michael doesn't lmow what to make of this anymore than wo do.
1ee CLOSEUP THE MAN 42s
He answers Michael's puzzled look.
‘THE MAN
I'm George Grisby -- the Grisby of
Grisby & Bannistor. My partner
tells me you once killed a man. I
don't want to seem too inquisitive,
but when did that happen?
MICHAEL
(taking his time to
answer the queer question)
At Murcia.Bs
124
125
126
37
CONTINUED : 123
GRISBY
How did you do it? Forgive me for
asking - or anyway, lot mo guess --
you killod him with your hands,
didn't you?
Michael doesn't answer. Thoro is no sound for a while excopt
the breakers spending themselvos on the boach in front of Elsa.
TO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 124
GRISBY
Does it over bother you thinking
about it?
MICHAEL
No.
GRISBY
What did he do to you?
MICHAEL
Nothing.
GRISBY
(giggles, thon changes nis
tack, Almost locherously)
Just killed him for the fun ef 1t?
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 125
MICHAEL
He was a Franco spy. There was a war
on at the time.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND GRISBY 126
GRISBY
That moans it wasn't murder, I
SUPPOSO sees
The SOUND of the wavos again during another pauso.
GRISBY
(continuing)
Would you do it again?se..
More waves.126
127
128
lee
CONTINUED : 126
GRISBY
Would you mind killing another man?
MICHAEL
(grimly pationt)
I'd kill anothor Franco spy.
GRISBY
(with a grin)
I was on @ pro-Franco Comittec,
fella, during tho Spanish War. ‘Would
you kill mo if I gavo you the chanco?
PAN PROM CLOSEUP OF MICHAEL TO THE SEA. Michaol's oyos go to
the sea, It's as though ho woro watching something -- not the
girl -- something way out on the horizon.
CLOSEUP GRISBY . 127
Grisby follows his look, soes nothing, turns back.
GRISBY
I may give you tho chanco,
Another breaker crashos on the boach.
TWO SHOT WICHAEL AND GRISBY 128
Elsa calls up from tho beach,
ELSA'S VOICE
(o.8.)
Michael.
Thoy both look.
FULL SHOT ELSA ON BEACH lee
Sho hasn't rison, but sho's turned around, We hear her voice
again.
ELSA
Michaol.
GRISBY'S VOICE
(o.s.)
She's calling for you.
ELSA
Bring down tho lunch, pleaso.130
131
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MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL AND GRISBY 130
Michaol gots out of tho car.
MICHAEL
Yes, matam.
Ho takos a wickor baskot from tho side of the driver's scat.
GRISBY
(smirking)
Is thoro onough for two?
Michacl stops, not looking at Grisby at his shoulder or at
Elsa waiting for him down at tho beach.
MICHAEL
(in a tight voico)
Im suro I don't know, sir, Why don't
you ask Mrs, Bannistor.
GRISBY
(loaning out of the car
window, speaking into
Michacl's car)
Way don't you?
MICHAEL
(politely)
Would you 1iko a good paste in the
oy, sir?
FULL SHOT ELSA ON BEACH TAKING IN GRISBY AND MICHAEL 182
Elsa has rison, Wow sho soos Grisby and waves,
ELSA
(without much onthusiasm)
Hello, Goorgo.
GRISBY
(rotumns tho wave)
Hil
ELSA
(shading her oyes)
What arc you doing out horo?
GRISBY
(calling back)
Giving Michacl a message.
Sho stands for a moment looking at him and thon runs into tho
surf.132
133
134
135
40
MEDIUM SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL
GRISBY
(to Michaol)
I wish shotd ask mo to go swimming.
Michaol turns back to tho car and gots out a thormos bottle.
GRISBY
(continuing)
shofll ask you, wait and soc.
Michaol turns on Grisby, about to answor or do somothing about
it, but Elsa's voicc, o.s, stops him.
ELSA'S VOICE
(0.58.,calling)
Michaol!
FULL SHOT BEACH FROM MICHAEL'S ANGLE 133
Elsa is kmco-doop in tho water.
MEDIUM SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 134
MICHAEL
Coming, Mrs. Bannistor.
GRISBY
No noed to hurry....
Grisby starts up his car.
GRISBY
(continuing)
shotll wait for you.
Tho car starts to back away.
MOVING SHOT KICHAEL 135
Michaol, burning, moves slowly down onto the boach with tho
picnic lunch. CAMERA CANES WITH HIM as ho puts tho basket
down with tho girl's [Link] things. Thon wo soo hor logs
come into the scono, wot from the sea. CAMERA PANS UP as
Michacl straightons, and thu framo takes in Hlsa. Sho woars
a terry cloth beach robo. Hor portablo radio is squeaking
out an’ extromcly unploasant singing commorcial, OVER this,
the crash of the breakors....,Thon, from tho radio, somothing
slow and sultry and South Amoricanses.136
187
138
139
140
141
142
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TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 136
Thoy look at cach other.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 137
MICHAEL
Do all rich womon play games liko
this?
TWO SHOT ELSA AND MICHAEL 158
Elsa stands bofore him without moving and making no answer,
MICHAEL
(continuing)
You're going to havo to got yoursolf
somebody olso, Mrs. Bannistor.
Elsa vory slowly moves right up to Michaal until her wot
bathing suit touches his clothes.
ELSA
Call me Rosaloon,
Michael slaps her hard.
CLOSEUP ELSA 139
She docsn't flinch. Moistncss starts into her oyos. Thon sho
speaks under hor breath.
ELSA
I didntt think you'd do that,
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 140
MICHAEL
Noithor did I.
CLOSEUP ELSA 141
ELSA”
(soarching his oyos)
You're scarod.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 142
Wo sou that ho is scared!
MICHAEL
Itm not sorryeese142
143
144
145
146
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CONTINUED: 142
ELSA
Itm scarod too...
At this, something changes in Michacl's oyos.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 143
ELSA
(speaking very
quickly
Ploaso don't kiss mo!
Then Michel's oyos hardon again.
MICHAEL
You think that's the way you'ro going
to got mo to do it -- by tolling mo
not to?
ELSA
(still vory quickly,
‘and roally moaning
what sho says)
Ploaso don't kiss mo....
MICHAEL
T wontt.
CLOSEUP ELSA 144
Tho words broak out of her as though she couldn't stop thom,
as though somothing damnod up inside of hor suddenly can't
stoppod.
ELSA
Iwas oighteon. Ky mother was
sick-- really sick, Sho nooded
hospitals and doctors...oxponsivo
ones. He was kind.,thon..,.and
tho had monoy.
CLOSEUP REACTION SHOT MICHAEL 145
CLOSEUP ELSA 146
ELSA
(a dosperate whisper}
I novor loved Harry =~ -147
148
149
43
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 147
MICHAEL
Did you care for any of tho othors --
the othors boside mo you hired to
drivo you to the boach ani -- consolo
you?
4 toar falls on Elsa's faco but sho doosn't look away.
ELSA
I wish I could hate you.
MICHAEL
It's oasy.
ELSA
(suddonly almost angry)
I'm not what you think I am -- I
just try to bo liko that -- I just
try.
MICHAEL
Go on trying. But loavo mo out ot ite
't. His lip
Michacl wants to turn, to loavo, but finds ho
now like a
tromblos. Her wholo body is shaking. Sho spo
littlo girl lost in the dark.
ELSA
Michacl, what are we scarcd of?
Ho erushos hor wot body against him, kissos her brutally,
There's the sharp noiso of an auto horn. Thoy broak and
look up ---.
FULL SHOT THE RIDGE ABOVE THE BEACH FROM THEIR ANGLE 149
Grisby's car, moving slowly, circles around in front of
thom. He sotmds tho horn again, derisivoly, and wavos. Thon
he drivos off.
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA ON BEACH REACTION
QUICK FADE OUT:INT, BANNISTER'S STUDY - EVENING
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150 Bannister is in his favorite chair by the window, Grisby 150
stands nearby. The door opens and Michacl enters,
BANNISTER
I'd like to talk to you, Micheel.
MICHAEL
Yes, sir,
BANYISTER
Mr. Grisby has justtold me some-
thing I'm very sorry to hear,
Behind Michael, Bessie comes shrough the open door with a
glass of water and Bannister's bottle of pills.
BESS 1E,
Time for yo! mediciae, sins...
Your coffee's on ths way, Mr. Grisby.
GRISBY
Thanks, Bessie.
BANK (STER
Will yéu please as} Mrs. Bannister to
come in for a momen.
BESS 1E
Yes, sir.
She goos out. There follows in uneasy pause, Finally,
Bannister speaks:
BANNISTER
You've met Mr, Grisby, Michael?
GRISBY
We've spoken together.
Another pause...Then Elsa appears in the door.
BAL
Sit down, lover,
‘STER
She does so.
(continued)
This really concerns you more
then anybody else. George here
brought me some news about Michael...151
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CLOSEUP ELSA 151
BANNISTER 0.8.
(continued)
seeeellaybe you can help...
CLOSEUP BANISTER 152
BANSISTER
(continued)
«+.-According to George, Michael
is anxious to leave.
(to Elsa)
Did you kmow about that?
CLOSEUP ELSA 183
ELSA
No, IT didn't.
MEDIUM SHOT THE FOURSOME 184
BANNISTER
I should have thought Michael
would have talked to you about
it. Perhaps we can make things
easior for him. What's wrong,
Michael? Are the hours too long?
MICHAEL
No, sir.
BANNISTER
How about the money? Suppose we
gave you a raise?
MICHAEL
I don't care about that.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER . 155
BANNISTER
(rather sharply)
Money doesn't seem to interest
you, Michael, Are you inde~
pendently wealthy?156
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CLOSEUP MICHAEL 156
MICHAEL
I'm independent.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 187
BANNISTER
of money? Before you start that
novel Elsa says you're going to
write, you'd better learn something.
Youtve been travelling too much
to find out anything about the world.
MEDIUM SHOT BANNISTER'S STUDY ise
Bossio coms in with a house-meid, bringing coffee things
and brandy. CAMERA DOLLIES IN T0 CLOSBUP OF MICHAEL es he
speaks.
MICHAEL
Well, sir, I've always found it
very sanitary to be broke.
Bessie places coffee before him.
BANNISTER
Thanks, Bessie...
(he takes a sip of coffee)
«+Money cannot bring you health
and happiness, et cetera, is that
ite
(he puts the cup dow)
Listen, without money I'd be flcé
on my back in the ward of a county
hospital. Look at this house
CAMERA DOLLIES IN T0 CLOSEUP OF BANNIS{ER
BANISTER
(continued)
It once belonged to Jules Bachrach,
the grat Bachrach, who kept me out
of his club because my mother was a
Manchester Greek. I got him on perjury.
He died bankrupt and here I am, Each
men has his own idea of happiness, of
course, but money's what all of us have
in common,159
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CLOSEUP BESSIE 159
BANXISTER 0.8.
(contimed)
Bessie here -- she worked for Bachrach...
I pay her more...don't I, Bessie?
BESSIE
Yes, Mr. Bannister
CLOSEUP BANNISTER z 160
BANNISTER
(continued)
Her salary means the happiness of a
home in Harlem, Three rooms for
two families.....
CLOSEUP BESSIE 161
BANNISTER 0.8.
(continued) A
Bessie's a grandmother and a widow
and only one of the boys is working...
MEDIUM SHOT BANNISTER'S STUDY -162
BANNISTER
(continued)
[Link] Bessie goes to church every
Sunday she gets off and prays to
God she'll never be too old to earn
one hundred and sixty dollars a month.
(with a long, cold
look at ifichsel)
You call yourself independent.....
Come around and see me five years
from now.
Bannister rises painfully to nis feet. His cane falls to
the floor.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 165
Michael picks up the cane, Bannister takes it from him,
walte-lipped.163
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Im
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BANNISTER
(continued)
(he catches his breath)
ieanvhile, your two weeks’ notice is
accepted. And now, Mr. Grisby wants
you to take him back to town in the
boat.
MEDIUM SHOT BAINISTER'S STUDY 164
Bannister turns to Elsa.
BANNISTER
(continued)
But perhaps wo oug
Elsa's permission?
ELSA
Why. ask me?
Bannister just looks at her.
ELSA
(continued)
Get the boat ready, Hichael.
MICHAEL
Yes, matam, I'11 be at the dock,
Mr. Grisby. Is that ell Mrs.
Bannister?
ELSA
That's all, Michael...You can go.
Michael leaves. Grisby raises his coffee cup, watching
Elsa -~-~
DISSOLVE 70:
TER KITC:
Bessie is at the sink, Michaol comes through the pantry 165
door taking the chauffeur's cap off a hook. He crosses tho
kitchen on his way out -- then s tops, and turns back to the
housekeeper,165
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MICHAEL
Bessie, why do youstand for thet?
I'm quitting, why don't you?
CLOSEUP BESSIE 16s
BESSIE
(furiously angry)
You heard him, Mr. Post. need
the money.
‘TWO SHOT BESSIE AND MICHAEL 167
MICHAEL
I'm sorry.e.
She turns to the sink and makes herself busy there.
MICHAEL
(continued)
Gantt you get work anywhere else?
BESSIE
Maybe...
CAMERA FOLLOYS MICHAEL over to the window,
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 168
MICHAEL
Am I ivsane? I must be. Or else this
is a crazy housed -~ All this talk of
money and murder. The double moanin's
to everythin! that's said...
CLOSE SHOT BESSIE 169
BESSIE
(nunbly)
I know -- That's why I can't leave.
That poor little child he married...
IKCHAEL AND BESSIE 170
TWO SHOT
Michael turns. The old woman looks up into his face.
BESSIE
(continued)
I'm scare for her.
DISSOLVE TO:50
NEW YORK HARBOR - NIGHT
171
FULL SHOT a1
A luscious molon of a moon hangs over Manhatten. In the: :
sequin train of its light a swanky speedboat 1s seen approach-
ing shore.
LOWER NEW YORK BY MOONLIGHT
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FULL SHOT 172
UPSHOT: AN IMPRESSIVE NOCTURNAL PANORAMA OF THE SKYLINE. 173
GRISBY'S VOICE
(oss)
Ever think what a job Just one
atom bomb could do to those
puildings?
MEDIUM TWO SHOT (PROCESS) GRISBY AND MICHAEL IN THE SPEED-174
BOAT COMING INTO DOCK
A strango lock is in Grisby's face. Feeling Michael's eyes,
he turns to him with a smile, forcing a brisk, businesslike
tone:
GRISBY
(cont'd. )
I usually stop in at the office
for a little night work, -- I
like the quict....Mind walking
with me, fella? I want to make
you & proposition.
Michael has made the boat fast. He gives Grisby a hand up on
to the dock.
GRISBY
(cont'd. )
‘Thankss.+
He looks up at the black buildings above him «gain, a little
sweat showing on his forehead.
MEDIUM TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND GRISBY 175
. GRISBY
(cont'd.)
Think the world's coming to an end.
MICHAEL
Well, there was a start to it somotime,
so I guess there'll be a stop.175
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GRISBY
(glassy-eyed, still
looking up at the
spired city above)
This'll be the first to go.....
One bomb -- and no more New York.
He looks down at Michael and starts out of the scene. Michacl
not knowing what to make of all this, follows.
MEDIUM TRUCKING SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 176
Their feet sound like drums in the empty street.
GRISBY
(cont'd.)
seseIt's coming -- The bomb.
Itts got to comoses.
MICHAEL,
(with a wry smile)
I prefer to be elsewhere when it
does.
GRISBY
Iwill be. I'm making sure I won't
be around, That's what I need you
for, Michael: To see to 1t that I'm
not around.
He stops, looking up.
GRISBY
(cont'd.)
The twenty-third floor....
FULL SHOT A TALL BUSINESS BUILDING + FROM THEIR ANGLE - 177
LOOKING BLACK AND DISTORTED IN THE NIGHT.
GRISBY'S VOICE
(oss)
That's where he stood.
TWO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 176
MICHAEL
Who was that, sir?178
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CONTINUED!
CLOSE UP
CLOSE UP
GRISBY
That suicide. You remember the
caso. It was in all the papers.
Pictures of him standing thore
on the ledge. My office window's
there, just oprosite. I sat and
watehéd him that whole night. A
hot night 1t was, iike this one now.
Ho was in shirt sleeves. He looked
like a white flage...
GRISBY
GRISBY
«»sBut he didn't surrender, after
all. Eighteen hours he was up
thore. Thoy had priests and mini-
sters loaning out of the windows
and hanging by ropes preaching and
pleading. They lowered food to him
and champagne...
MICHAEL
GRISBY
(o.s.)
They even got a pretty girl where ho
could see her and hear what she sald,
I don't know what she promised him if
he'd come on back inside.
CLOSE UP GRISBY
TWO SHOT
GRISBY
But nothing in this world was cnough.
Thoy stretched nets over the stroote...
But he was smart -~ He got away from them.
GRISBY AND MICHAEL
GRISBY
(cont'd.)
It cost tho city moro than ono hundred
thousand dollars to try to persundo
that mon to stay alive. But he know
better.
(pointing)
That's where he landed, -- there. Ho
was too smart, So amt, How would you
like five thousand dollars, Michael?
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CLOSE UP
CLOSE UP
TWO SHOT
CLOSE UP
CLOSE UP
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MICHAEL 163
MICHAEL
(his tone that of the
healthy man speaking
to.a sick one)
I'd like it, sir. What do I have
to do for it?
GRISBY 184
GRISBY
I'll give you the details tomorrow.
Meanwhile, think it over. Five
thousand dollars, Michael....it's
yours. All you have to de is kill
somebody.
185
GRISBY AND MICHAEL
MICHAEL
Who, Mr. Grisby? I'm particular
who I murder.
GRISBY
(with an approving smile)
Good boy.
MICHAEL
I wouldn't like to kill just anybody
-- Is it someone I know?
GRISBY
(pleased with his
secret)
Oh, yos. But youtll never guessees
MICHAEL
I give up.
GRISBY 166
GRISBY
It's me.
REACTION MICHAEL 187
He can't believe he hoard right.188
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TWO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 188
GRISBY
(cont'd. )
I'm perfectly sober, Michaol...I'm
willing to pay five thousand if the
Job's well done.
Michael just stares at him.
GRISBY
(cont'd.)
This is a straight-forward business
offer: I want you to kill mo.
A moment's pause, then Grisby turns and goes into his office
building.
GRISBY
(cont'd.) (with a parting
smile)
Goodnight, folla....
CLOSE UP REACTION MICHAEL 189
On his reaction to this wo:
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT, PIER - NIGHT
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192
FULL SHOT BANNISTER'S BEACH 190
Michael makes the boat fast. Then turns to go ashore. He
stops, startled.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT ELSA 191
Elsa in a white bathing suit is standing on the ladder on
the other side of the landing. She's como up from the water
and waited quietly for Michael to pass her.
‘TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 192
MICHAEL
A bit late, isn't it, for swimming?
Elsa smiles at him,
ELSA
No, it's nico.
Michaol doesn't smile back. She climbs up off tho laddor.196
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ise.
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CONTINUED:
ELSA (CONT'D. )
«sesif I swallowed all of them, if
maybe they wouldn't kill my pain, -=
the pain of just being alive.
CLOSE UP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(with angry humor)
Sure, Grisby wants me to do tho
job for him] Grisby wants mo
$0 kill Grisby’
He throws the cigarette into the water.
MICHAEL
(oont!d.)
I think he's out of his mind.
MEDIUM TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA
ELSA
(still vory serious)
Ho ise..He's not really sano,
anyway. Neither's Harry.
MICHAEL
(grim now)
Your husband can take care of
himself,
Suddenly seeing something off soreon. Addressing it
sharply: ==
MICHAEL
What do you want?
Elsa screams.
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT BROO!E STANDING IN THE SHADOW OF THE
LOCKER SHED
BROOME
Just taking a stroll. Beautifu2
moon...Nice night for it. Ain't
it, Mp. O'Hara?
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ELSA
I couldn't sleep --
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 2193
Ho turns and starts away. Her voice stops him.
ELSA (cont.) 0.8.
== Michael .+.
MICHAEL
Yos?
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 194
ELSA.
Did George say anything about us?
MICHAEL
No, he's very interested in [Link]
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 195
With o sigh Michaol relaxes against the railing lighting a
cigarotto.
MICHAEL
He's afraid the world's going to
explode == Ho talked about suicide.
He takes a deep breath of smoke, oxhales 1t slowly, looking
past Elsa up at the moon, She's curled up with a towel on
a pile of cushions.
ELSA
Ttve thought of that myself some-
times..,Do you think it's wrong
Michael?
He goos on looking past her at the moon.
ELSA (cont.)
Would you kill yourself if you had to?
MICHAEL
If I had to.
CLOSE UP ELSA 196
BLSA
You know I've looked at those pills
of Harry's so many times, -- the ones
he takes to kill the pain, and wondered200
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CLOSE UP MICHAEL 200
Michsol glowers at him,
CLOSE SHOT BROOME 201
BROOME
(cont'd. )
You didn't answor me, Mr. O'Hara,
You ought to speak when you're
spoken to. I'd hate to hafta
report you to the lady's husband...
I said it's a nice night for it.
MEDIUM THREE SHOT MICHAEL, ELSA, BROOME 202
Without any warning movement Michael socks him. And as we've
seen before, Michael can sock hard. With a little whining
grunt Broome plunisdown on the wooden pier, and stays there
inert, Clinging to her beach-robe, E1sa runs off scene.
MEDIUM SHOT THE ROAD ABOVE BANNISTEE'S BEACH - NIGHT 203
Elsa is seon-running, a white exclemition point of terror on
the dark road. Then she stops.
MEDIUM SHOT ELSA LOOKING TEARFULLY A30UT HER. 204
She sees the car, its door open. She jumps in. After a
moment Michael onters the scene. He starts to the chauffeur's
seat, but turns in spito of himself and stands at the door.
Looking int -=
MICHAEL
Stop cryin!
From within the car we hear a miffled sob.
MICHEAL (contta.)
(furiously)
I can't stand for you to ery --
Another sob.
MICHEAL (cont'd.)
Hear mo?.eeee
Beside himself, Michael jumps into the back.
CAR
Elsa 1s huddled in the corner, her head buried in the 205
cushion of tho scat, her little body shaking, He sits at
the edge of the soat for a long minute looking at her quite
holplessly, then lays a well intentioned, clumsy hand on hor
shoulder, She turns on him wildly:205
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CONTINUED:
ELSA
You fool! Don't you mow that only
makes ovorything worse! You can't
solve anything by knocking peoplo down!
MICHAEL
(with quiot gravity)
But suro, ho's a wicked man entirely.
ELSA
(biting her words out
through her sobs)
And I'm the princess in the fairy book...
So you hit him ond mako a pretty speech
to mo and we ride off together into the
sunset...
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(aftor a second, with
a tentative grin)
Well, why don't wo?
CLOSEUP: ELSA
CLOSE TWO
ELSA
(Looking into
his oyes)
Why don't wo what?
SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA
MICHAEL
Ride off together -= into tho
sunset? It's been done, you know,
by roal live people. That's where
they get the ideas for the books.
ELSA
Books aren't like people. People
try to act like books.
MICHAEL,
Oh, no, Rosaleon, people are
botter than books.
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ELSA
Or worse. What about mo? You don't.
Imow what I'm like. I hope you never
find out. You'd better go before you
do. Koop your droam, -- ride off into
your sunset by yourself and look for
windmills. I don't want to hurt you,
Michael.
209 CLOSEUP ELSA 209
ELSA (cont'd.)
I'm afraid for you,...You don't bolong
here.
210 CLOSE TWO SHOT MICHAEL aND ELSA 210
ELSA (conttd.)
Wo'ro different than you aro, Michacl.
Horribly different. You're alivo
Wotro dead...All of us are dead already!
Please go away, Michael, before it's Se
late.
BROOME'S VOICE 0.5.
Too late for what?
211 MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT BROONE'S HEAD, FRAMED IN THE CAR WIN- 211
i DOW. HE GRINS PHOSPHERESCENTLY
212 TIGHT SHOT BROOME, MICHAEL AND ELSA 212
Michael stiffens. She puts out a hand to stop him, He gots
up slowly. Quickly Broome backs away as Michael opens the
car door.
EXT. CAR.
213 MEDIUM SHOT 213
Michaol gots out. Looks at Broome. Closes the car door and
moves slowly, wordlessly to the whecl. Ho starts the engine
and drives off.
214 CLOSE SHOT BROOME 214
In the moonlight he looks like a gargoyle leering after tho
doparting car.
FADE OUT:60
FADE IN:
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218
FULL SHOT: NEW YORK HARBOR (NEAR THE BATTERY): DAY, 215
The Bannister speed-bosat roars into the scene, then slows
down approaching the dock: Michael is piloting the boss
to his office.
216
MEDIUM TWO SHOT: MICHAEL & BANNISTER IN THE BOAT (PROCESS)
Over the water from the city comes the mttering traffic
of lower Wall Street on a business day.
BANNISTER
Got a cigarette?
Michael slows the boat almost to a stop and gets out a
package of cigarettes for Bannister.
BANWISTER
Match?
Michael strikes one for him,
BANNISTER (Cont 'd.)
{as he gets the light)
You're quite en exceptional fellow,
aren't you, Michael -- What are
you efter? My wife?
CLOSE UP_MICHAEL e217
Michael looks straight ahead, very chauffeur-like
MICHAEL
Isn't this where you dock,
Xr, Bannister?
CLOSE UP BANNISTER 218
Bannister goes on after a second:
BANNISTER
You don't want to talk about
it, of course, and I respect
the delicacy of your feelings,
put don't you think you owe mo
an answer? After all, I'm the
husband.
Still no word from Michael.
BANNISTER
(cont)
Would you call yourself an
honest man?219
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223,
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CLOSE UP MICHAEL e219
‘ MICHAEL
I wouldn't call myself a thief....
You might sey I'm not in the market.
CLOSE UP BANNISTER 220
BANNISTER
The market -- What's that?
(giving him a sharp
quizzical look)
MEDIUM SHOT THE DOCK 221
Grisby is standing by the pilings.
* GRISBY
(with a vacant grin)
Morning, Harry.
MEDIUM SHOT BANNISTER & MICHAEL IN THE BOAT (PROCESS) 222
(his choery tone
equally blank)
What you doing here at the
docks, George?
MEDIUM SHOT THE DOCKS 223
Grisby watches the boat as it comes into the scene.
GRISEY
(calling)
I need Michael's help for
something, Can I borrow him
for a few mimites?
BANNISTER
Why not?
TWO SHOT MICHAEL & BANNISTER (PROCESS) 224
BANNISTER
(quietly to Michael)
The market? -~ You mean
aren't buying anything? Or
are you telling me you aren't
for sale?224
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MICHAEL
(carefully)
I don't need to make any deals,
MEDIUM SHOT THE SPEED-BOAT 225
Michael edges the boat along the side of the dock,
TWO SHOT: BANNISTER & MICHAEL 226
BAWNISTER
A crust of bread and the open
road and the song of the thrust at
twilight, that's all you want,
isn't it? You'll wake up out of
your dream, Romantic Miko...,
CLOSE yp BANNISTER 227
BANNISTER
(cont)
You'll want something and yout!
pay for 4t. You'll go to the
market like any other fat little
pig or hungry farmer and you'l)
make your deal.
MEDIUM SHOT THE SPEED-BOAT 228
Still holding the wheel, Michael stands up and tosses
a line to the dock attendant.
BANNISTER
(cont; looking up
at him)
But your kind always gets the
worst of it.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT, THE BANK (DOWNTOWN) THE SAFETY DEPOSIT VAULT.
229
The regulation lay-out. All icy-glistening and very 229
formidable.
Grisby is removing his safety deposit box as Michael
watches, CAMERA TRUCKS with Grisby as he brings the
box to one of the tables in the center of the vault, Grisby
takes in Michael's discomfort with a side-long smirk,63
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GRISBY
She wants to leave him, you kmow,
MICHAEL
Who?
GRISEY
Now, don't act dumb, fella.
see. Elsa's never had any kind
of life with Harry, That's no
secret. He can't hold her any
longer.
(Counting monoy)
Three, four, five. Five thousand,
Grisby gives the wad of bills to Michael, locks the
safe deposit box, and takes it back to its place.
GRISBY
(Cont; speaking to
the Guard)
How you been Pote?
i THE CUARD
Fine, thanks, Looks 1ike
another hot day.
230 TWO SHOT GRISBY & MICHAEL 230
Grisby turns to Michael,
GRISBY
(to Michael)
You've got the money,
havon't you, Michael?
MICHAEL
(bewildered)
Yes, sir.
Michael crosses and hands the money to Grisby.
Daring this:
GRISBY
(loudly, to the guard)
It's got to let up soon. What
we need's a good rain,
Puts the money in his pocket, and starts away.64
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GRISBY
(Cont; quietly to Michael)
She doesn't love him, If you want
the truth of it, she hates hin.
..seWell, she's not alone in that.
Gome on, fella,
Wichael, sore and puzzled, follows.
DISSOLVE
INT, BANNISTER'S PRIVATE OFFICE .
231 Bannister closes the door behind Broome. 231
BANNISTER
(coldly furious)
I told you not to see
me here,
BROOME
This is important, Harry.
BANNISTER
I won't be satisfied without
real evidence.
He limps over to his desk,
232 CLOSE UP BANNISTER 232
BANNISTER
(Cont.)
What I really want is photo-
graphs. It's the new chauffeur,
Of COUrSo+e+e
233 OVER SHOULDER SHOT -- FAVORING BROOME 233
Broome crosses to the desk,
BROOME
(urgently)
You can stop worryin' about
your wife findin' herself 2
boy friend, Harry. I got
something real for you to
frot over. Tnis 1s hot.234
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CLOSE UP BROOME
He finds it hard to say this next:
BROONE
(Cont)
---The way I figure it's worth
a little extra dough,
TIGHT TWO SHOT BROOME AND BANNISTER
Bannister takes this in; finally speaks with an icily
sweet smile: °
BANNISTER
The old shakedown--?
Why, Sid, you ought to knowl
wouldn't’ go for a shakedown}
CLOSE UP BROOME
He covers up by trying belligerence.
BROOME
When you hear what I got for
ya, you'll say you bought it
cheap,
TIGHT TWO SHOT: BROOME AND BANNISTER
BANKISTER
(sighing) .
You've worked a lot of cases for
me, Sid, I'll be sorry if we
have to make this one the last.
BROOME
(now completely on the
defensive)
But, Mr. Bannister, this is hot!
CLOSE UP BANNISTER
BANNISTER
There's a plot against my
life -- Correct? I'm going
to be mrdered..,Isn't thet
the information you're ped=
dling?
CLOSE UP BROOME ~ REACTION
His jaw is hanging foolishly by now -~
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“ BANNISTER
(Cont)
I'm going to be killed --~
241 @WO SHOT: BANNISTER & BROOME 241
Bannister tilts back in his swivel chair.
BANISTER
(Cont)
Why, Sid, don't you think I
Imow about 1t? All about it?
Still leaning back in his chair:
BANNISTER
(Cont; his voice quiet
but the tone threatening and
really dangerous)
Go on now, beat itd And don't
let me see you anywhere except
where you belongee, Unless you've
got some news.
242 CLOSE UP BROOME 242
On his goggle-eyed reaction we ~~
FADE OUT:67
FADE IN:
EXT. BANNISTER'S PRIVATE BEACH - NIGHT
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FULL SHOT 245
Portable barbecue wagons are in full blaze, Bessie is
supervising with Broome; e house-man and a first maid
helping. In evidence are all the gadgets ever sold by
Abercrombie & Fitch. lear the water, a camp-fire, on
which Elsa 1s doing some secondary cooking. Besids her
Bannister, propped against one of those portable backrests
used generally on the beaches for sunbething. He's been
doing some more serious drinking. Across from hin is Grisby,
surrounded by neat little buckets of ice, elaborate fitted
eases of the best leather with silver flasks and cups, horn-
handled corkscrews and every costly thing conceivevle for
the manufecture of cocktails.
THREE SHOT GRISBY, BANISTER, ELSA 244
Grisby right now is busy with a shaker, his flushed face
announcing the effects of his own bartending, In spite of
Elsa's remonstrances, Crisby 1s careful at all times to see
thet his partner's glass is kept filled. Nor is Zannister
unaware of this, He knows that Grisby likes to get him
drunk, but he finds in this some private brand of his own
black and bitter pleasure. Meybe Bannister is sc very fond
of disaster; that even when 1t involves himself he enjoys it.
GRISBY (cont)
Time for another, Harry?
BANNISTER
(holding out his glass)
Time for another.
CLOSE Si0T ELSA 245
Sho fiddles with the radio and gots some music. Cocktail
lounge jazz. Torchy but unobtrusive. She tunes it down
so it's just loud enough for her to listen. She doesn't look
at either of the men.
CLOSE UP BANNISTER 246
BANNISTER
Funny, --+------~
He takes a long drink.
THREE SHOT BANISTER, GRISBY, ELSA (cont) 247
ELSA
(no tone in her voice)
What's funny?247
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BANNISTER
(lowering his glass)
Michael scoms to think you'ro
the one who persuaded me to hire
him. Actually it was George.
GRISBY
‘That's right, Harry.
CLOSEUP ELSA 7
With a sharp look at Grisby:
ELSA
You don't usually take George's
advice.
CLOSSUP BANISTER |
BANNISTER
Nobody takes George's advico --
But I wanted to see ycur doughty
rescuer for myself, #lsa, I didn't
really mean to give tho Irish Superman
a job, but he went and got me drunics
That's what George wants to do now.
But George 1s only # broken-down playboy.
He finishes the drink with satisfaction.
BANNISTER (cont)
I can outdrink George.
CLOSEUP GRISBY
GRISBY
Yes, Michael told mo he was quitting.
Try to make him change his mind, Harry.
CLOSEUP [Link]
ELSA
Why? Why shouldn't he go if he
wants to?
THREE SHOT BANSISTER, GRISBY, ELSA
BANNISTER
Goorge likes to havo him around,
lover. Michael is so big and
strong. He makes a good bodyguard
for you. Isn't that what you said, George?
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GRISBY
Right, Herry.
BLSA
I don't neod a bodyguard.
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BANNISTER
Not evon a big , strong bodyguard,
lover, with an irish brogue?
254 TWO SHOT BANISTER & ELSA 264
ELSA
Pleaso, Harry -=
BANNISTER
And when you feel like cruising around
the park again, you wouldn't have to
be alone =~
255 THREE SHOT GRISBY, BANNISTER, ELSA 255
ELSA
(to Grisby)
Don't make another drink, Harry's
had enough.
(tight-voiced)
I'm gotting a now chauffeur, that
settlos it, Now let's talk about
something olso...
BANNISTER
George thinks Michael's fallen
for you. And that makes mo unhappy
George hopes.
256 CLOSEUP GRISBY 256
BANNISTER (cont) 0.8.
But George is wrong again.
GRISBY
(with blank-oyed innocence)
Harry, I didn't say anything about
Michael and Elsas
257 THREE SHOT GRISBY, BAILITST@R, ELSA 257
BANNISTER
George is always wrong. Make us
another cocktail, Goorgo.70
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GRISBY
(with mechanical charn,
repeating an old party
wheoze of his)
Another Grisby Special -~ coming
upt
ELSA
Ploase --
258 — CLOSEUP_BAMINISTER 258
BANNISTER
You're a stupid fool, George, but
you ought to roalize that I don't
mind a bit if my chauffour's in
love with my wife. Ho's young.
She's young. He's strongs She's
peautiful.
259 CLOSHUP ELSA 259
She rises to her fect.
BANNISTER 0.S.
Sit down, darlings
260 CLOSEUP BANNISTER 260
Ho goes on looking up at her, his little beads of eyes agleam
in the firolight.
BANNISTER
Where's your sense of humor?
261 CLOSE SiO? ELSA 261
ELSA
I don't have to ait there and
hear you talk like that, Harry --
BANNISTER 0.8.
(without much emphasis,
but with lots of authority)
Oh, yos, you do, lovers
Prosently Elsa sits down.
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GRISBY
Here's your drink, Harry. Now
you leave Elsa alone.265
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CLOSEUP BANNISTER 263,
Not looking away from Elsa, he takes tho frosh cocktail
from Grisby.
BANNISTER
scome to think of it, it's
CLOSEUP GRISBY 264
GRISEY
What's queer, Harry?
THREE SHOT GRISEY, BANNISTER, ELSA 265
BANNISTER
Why doesn't Michael want to work here?
ELSA
(staring into the fire)
Why would enybody want to work hore?
Why would anybody want to live
around us?
BANISTER
(nis voice thickening now
with drink)
Where's his sense of adventure?
MEDIUM SHOT THE BEACH 266
BANNISTER (cont)
(calling)
Broome! -- Broome!
Broome appears out of the darkness.
BROOME
Yos, Mr, Bannister.
BANNISTER
Is Michael waiting in the car?
BROOME
Yes, sir.
BANNISTER
Ask him to step over hero for a
moment, will you, Broome?
BROOME
Yes, sir,
Broome walks up the beach to the car, CAMERA FOLLOWING.
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TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BROOME 267
BROOME
They want to see you.
Without answering, Michael gets out of the car. In silence
he goes down to the campfire, CAMERA FOLLOWING,
WEDIUN SHOT BANNISTER, GRISEY, ELSA 268
The girl still stares into the fire. The men are watching
the chauffeur as he comes into the sceno, Michael stands
by them for a time before anything is said.
BANNISTER
Well, Michael?
MICHAEL
Well, lir, Bannister.
BANNISTER
My wife's lost her sense of humor,
Michael, and you've lost your sense
of adventure, She says you're quitting.
CLOSE UP MICHAEL 269
MICHAEL
That's right, sir.
CLOSE UP BANNISTER 270
BANNISTER
Sit down and have a drink, Michael.
I'll go on calling you Michael, if
I may? You call mo Harry,
MEDIUM SHOT THE FOURSOME =~ 27
There is an ombarrassed pauscess.
BANNISTER (cc .t)
Make hima cocktail, George, and don't
ook so shocked. Michael may not be in
the Social Register, but then, neither
are you -- anymoree. If he isn't work-
ing for us, it's quite proper for
Michael to join the family circle, And
since I've invited hin, it would be quite
incorrect for Michael to refuse,..Take
off your coat, Michael, and be comfortable.271
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CONTINUED: 271
And sure enough, Michael takes off his coat, with very
deliberate gestures. Grisby hands him up a glass.
GRISBY,
Here's your drink, fella.
Slowly and easily Michael sits down by the fire, Then
he takes the cocktail.
MICHAEL
Thank you, Mr, Grisby.
BANNISTER
You can call him George.
MICHAEL
I'd rather not.
BANNISTER
Call him what you like, He won't do anything
about it, George used to be some sort of
athlete -- you Imow, polo end rhumba,..But
George 1s too fat novadays Go object
anything, At the Stork Clvb I hear oven
the busboys insult him,
Michael looks from one to the others
MICHAEL
Is this what you folks do for amsement
in the evenin's -~ Sit around toastin'
marshmallows and callin! each other names?
Nobody answers.
CLOSE UP MICHAEL 272
MICHAEL (cont)
Sure, if you're anxious for me to join
the game, I'll be glad to. I can think
of afew 2:ames I'd like to be callin!
you myself,
MEDIUM SHO? THE FOURSOME 273
BANNISTER
Oh, but Michael, that isn't fair.
MICHAEL
It isn't fair -- and why not?273
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BANYISTER
You're bound to lose the contest. We'll
have to give you a handicap, Hichael,
You dm't know enough about us.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
I know enough,
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER
BANNISTER
I doubt it, You ought to Imow what
George. knows about me, for instance,
if you really want to call me names. Of
course, my partner's very considerate ¢
my feelings e+e
CLOSEUP ‘ GRISEY'S REACTION
BANISTER 0.S.
He likes the way his name looks in gold
letters on the door in that big office
of mine down in Wail Street. And I let
him keep it there because I appreciate
his consideration.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER
BANKISTER (cont)
Now if you wanted to call George a nasty
name you'd necd some facts, and ell the
facts are going to dic with the respected
firm of Bannister & Grisby, Attorneys-at-Law,
CLOSEUP GRISEY
BANNISTER 0.8. (cont)
Blacimailer, now thero's a real nice
nasty name for you, but as it is, you'll
havo to be satisfied with "partner."
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CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER 279
TWO SHOT
BANNISTER (cont)
That's not meh of an insult: "partner,"
=- but you Imow, from my point of view
I sometimes think it is ....
And Michael, if the story of how George
got to be my partner is interesting, you
ought to hear the one about how Elsa got
to be my wife,
ELSA & BANNISTER 260
ELSA
(her eyes still fixed on the
flames)
Want me to tell him what you've got on
mo, Harry?
BANISTER
(with demoniac srmgness)
Please, lover. I have my prideve..
There is a silence....then Michael speals:
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 281
MICHAEL
(very slowly, as though to
himself)
Once, off the bump of Brazil, I saw
the dcean so darkened with blood it was
black, with the sun faintin' away over
the lip of the sky, We'd put in at Fortaleza,
and a few of us had lines out for a bit o
dle fishin', It was me had the first stvikos..
CLOSHUP REACTION SHOT ELSA 282
MICHAEL 0.S.(cont)
«eeA shark it was, and then thero
was another, and another shark
again, -- till all about the sea was
made of sharks, and more sharks still,
and no salt water at all...,283
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CLOSEUP REACTION SHOT BANNISTER
UICHABL 0.8. (cont)
sesMine had torn himself from the hook,
andthe smell or maybe the stain
it was, -- and him bleedin' bis life
away -- drove the rest of 'em mad...
CLOSEUP REACTION SHOT GRISBY
MICHAEL 0.8. (cont)
«+[Link] the sharks all took to eatin'
each othor,...in their frenzy they ate
at themselves...
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL (cont)
You could fool the lust of murder
like a wind stingin! your eyes, and you
could smell the death reekin' up out
of the sear I never saw anythin! worse
until this little picnic tonight.
(he looks around from face to
face)
And dty! Imow -- there wasn't one of
thim sharks in tho whole crazy pack that
survived.
MEDIUM SHOT THE FOURSOME
Michael gets up,
MICHAEL
(looking down at the others)
I'11 be leavin' you now,
He turns and goes off into the darlmess.
BANNISTER
(after a moment to Grisby)
You should've thanked hin,
George, that's the first time
anybody ever thought enough of you
to call you a shark, If you were a good
lawyer you'd be flattered.
CRISBY
(ignoring this last)
I think Elsa ought to try to persuade
him to stay.
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CLOSEUP BANNISTER
He looks suddenly at Grisby.
BANNISTER
Why?
(then quickly)
Don't bother to answer that. I!11
figure it out for myself.
(to Elsa)
Go talk to the Irishman, lover.
CLOSE SHOT ELSA
ELSA
You want mo to?
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Sure, why not?
MEDIUM SHOT THREESOME
Elsa gets up.
BANNISTER (cont)
How doos the song go? -- 4 good man
ia herd to finds
CLOSEUP ELSA REACTING
CLOSHUP BANNISTER
BANNISTER (cont)
(with a queer grin)
When you look at me like that,
lover, I feel as though you'd like
to kil me.
MEDIUM SHOT THREESOME
Elsa wheels and hurries away. Bannister watches her go,
then turns to Grisby:
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BANNISTER (cont)
Everybody wants to kill me, but 4t won't
be easy. I know what everybody's up to.
That's my edge. That makes mo a tough
guy, George -~ (the grin hardens)
too tough to kill.
DISSOLVE TO:
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GARAGE BANNISTER'S ESTATE
294 Michael is throwing some of his gear‘into the back of the 294
little chevvy, which, by the way, looks mighty pathetic in
the expensive company of the Bannister motor flest. He sees
Elsats reflection in the glass and turns to hor.
295 CLOSHUP MICHAEL 295
MICHAEL
I'm going to take you with me.
296 CLOSEUP ELSA 296
ELSA
Now?
297 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 297
MICHAEL
Now.
ELSA,
(trying to talk sense)
George wants to go to the city.
He wants you to drive him in,
MICHAEL
You're goin! with mosses.
Before hia sad looking little auto, Michael stands staring at
hen, trying to understand, She goes to an open wing of the
garage door, CAMERA FOLLOWING, and closes it.
298 CLOSEUP ELSA 298
ELSA
Michel! Michael, listen to me!
Don't you know what Broome was
doing last night?
290 TIGHT TO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 299
MICHAEL
(crossing to her)
spyin' on you. I'm goin! to take
you where there aren't any spies.60
299 CONTINUED? 299
ELSA
Oh, darling, you're: such a foolish
knight errant, Will you ever grow
up and find out how to defend yourself?
Your fists aren't enough, Michael.
No matter how good your heart may be,
you can't get along with what you call
Twicked men,! until you learn something
about wickedness.
MICHAEL
But I don't want to get along with
them.
300 CLOSEUP ELSA 300
ELSA
Then where will you live? Is there a -
place in the world where everybody's
good? I don't know where it is.
(she Looks at him out
of mother's eyes)
You're big and strong but you just
don't know how to take care of your=
selfs
301 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA 301
ELSA
(continued )
So how could you take care of me?
Michael opens the door and starts out of the garage, Elsa
following.
EXT, GROUNDS OF THE BANNISTER ESTATE = NICHT
502 TRUCKING SHOT 302
Michael moves distractedly across the lawn. Elsa calls him
back, the sharpness of her tone partly fire.
ELSA
Michael!
(then, almost
whispering)
seeThat Broome is a detectives302
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He doesn't tako her eyo.
ELSA
(continuing)
can't you understand that? My
husband hires him to try and get
ot
‘something on Ho wants ti
ice Tri never divorce him.
: MICHAEL
Why?
ELSA
(simply)
He needs me. I help him prove
somothing to the world, end himself,
too, maybe.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
Ho's not your husband, He's 8
jailer!
CLOSEUP ELSA
ELSA
(with a queer kind
of tenderness)
That's what he needs to bevers.
You soc, dearest, what I say is true!
You don't kmow anything about wicked-
ness. How can you fight for the things
you beliove in and the woman you love,
until you do?
TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA
MICHAEL
(wryly)
Well, I been roundin' out my education
of late,
He stops, grasping her arms savagely.
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MICHAEL
You think I can't take caro of you-~
don't you? You think I'd bo after
takin! you to a desert island to eat
berries and goat's milk, Somewhore
east of the sun and wost of the moon,
whoro you'd have to take in washing
to support mo?
REVERSE ANGLE CLOSEUP ELSA 307
ELSA
(with a little smile)
Well..eeee
Sho looks off scene.
ELSA
(continuing)
There comes Georgo! He mustn't
see me horo with you ~~
Sho starts away, is halted by Michael's tone.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 308
Michacl is boside himself -- a new Michael now -- almost mad
in his dosperato noed of her.
MICHAEL
What would you say to five thousand
dollars to got us started?
CLOSEUP ELSA 309
She stares at him, Then Grisby's voice 1s heard off scene.
GRISBY'S VOICE
Hello, kiddies!
MEDIUM SHOT GRISBY 310
He's dressed for the city. CAMERA MOVES WITH HIM to Michael
and Elsa,
GRISBY
Roady to go, fella?
Michacl shoots a last look at Elsa.31O CONTINUED: 310
MICHAEL
Yes, sir. Ready to go.
He leaves, bound for the car in the garage.
3112 WO SHOT GRISBY AND ELSA 311
GRISBY
(Looking at Elsa)
Harry's asking for you -- He wondered
where you'd gone.
(Then -- the sudden
silly smile)
I won't tell him,
With a kind of giggle, Grisby walks out of the scene, Elsa
stands looking after him,
DISSOLVS TO:
INT. GRISBY'S OFFICE NIGHT
312 A lonely desk lamp lights the scene, Michael sits in the 312
shadows twisting his cap, listening as Grisby reads:
GRISBY
"I, Michael O'Hara, in order to live
at’ peace with my conscience and ny
God, do freely make the following
confessions: On the evening of August
ninth" -- that's tomorrow night, folla -~
"I shot and killed Mr. George Grisby,
placing his dead corpse in Long Island
Sound.” --
313 ‘OVER SHOULDIR SHOT FAVORING MICHAEL 313
MICHAEL
Just a minute.
Grisby looks up at him,
MICHAEL (CONT.)
What you're readin' there... I'm
supposed to have written84
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GRISBY
Forgive me if I fail to catch your
literary style, folla, But it's
the thought that matters,
MICHAEL
Go on.
GRISBY
(continuing reading again)
"It happoned this way: Mr. Grisby
had como out by cab to the Bannister
estate to got somo papers ho'd for-
gotten. He askod mo to drive him to
the station. Wo arrived too late for
the ten-fifteon, ‘tho next train doesn't
leave for three-quarters of an hour, and
since it was a hot night, Mr, Grisby
suggested that we fill the time by
ériving to the beach -- “
314 REVERSE ANGLE 314
GRISBY
(continuing: to Michaol
again)
Wetll hold that conversation right in
front of the ticket window, Michael,
so the station attendant won't be able
to miss a word... You sce I'vo got the
whole thing very carefully planned,
Adjusting his glasses, he goos back to the typewritten shoot
in‘his hand,
GRISBY
(continuing; roading aloud)
Wo arrivod at the seaside at approx-
imately ten-twenty, a fairly deserted
area just below tho Bannister private
beach, As I pulled up Mr. Grisby said
he heard a sound, Something suspicious.
He said he was frightened of a holdup
and asked me to got the gun out of the
side pocket of the car just in case. T
reached in and got it. But I had hardly
taken the gun when it wont off in my
hand. And I saw that Mr, Grisby was
all covered with blood.”315
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GRISBY
(continuing)
"gen I saw that he was dead. --
Michael rises.
GRISBY (CONT.)
(quickiy)
fake it easy, Michaol. JT want
you to got this straight, It's
your story and you're going to
have to stick to it.
Michael steres down at him. Grisby goes back to the
paper, Reading: -~
GRISBY (CONT. )
---"I saw that he was dead, T was
too startled by this to think
clearly and I remember that I dragged
his body out of the car into s clump
of bushes. Then some people, who were
picnicking on the beach" ---
(Looking up)
They do every night. I checked for a
whole week, There're always two or
three bonfires --
(going back to the paper;
reading:)
",,,people who were picnicking on the
peach came up to see about the gun-shot.
I told thom I'd just been doing some
target practice, and when they went
away I throw Mr. Grisby's body into the
Sound, I then drove back to the Bannister
estate, where this is being written now --"
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 316
GRISBY (0.8.)
(continuing)
"T can't say why I'm signing my name
to this, but I think it 1s to ease my
mind end perhaps also force myself to
toll the truth when the police make
Anquiries about this horrible accident."
TWO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 317
Grisby lowers the paper, takes off his glasses and slides
them delicately into their leather case.317
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GRISBY
(continuing)
That's the easiest five thousand
dollars you're ever going to earn,
fella.
A long silence... Then -
MICHAEL
Why don't you do it yourself?
GRISBY
Commit suicide? Don't be silly.
MOVING SHOT 318
CAMERA FOLLOWS GRISBY. He rises, moves into the darimess
the other end of the room, and twiddles with the wall safe.
GRISBY
(at the safe)
I want to live, but I want to vanish.
That isn't oasy nowadays. If theytro
looking for you, thoy find you. Eveu
on the smallest island in the South
Seas... That's where I'1l be, Michas:.,
on that smallest island. But I want to
live there in peaco and that won't bo
possible unless the world is satisfied
I'm dead,
He opens the safe and brings out a packet of monoy.
GRISBY
(continuing)
You Imow, the law is a funny thing,
fella... The people of the state of
New York will say I'm dead if somebody
will say they mrdered mo, That's
what I'm paying you to say,
MEDIUM SHOT 319
He tosses the money on the desk in front of Michael and
comes around into the light, looking down at him,
GRISBY .
(continuing )
And hore!s the real joker ere's
what makes it such a pipe for you, You
can confess to murder all you want to,
but according to the law they can't got
you for it, Look it up for yourself.
In this state, there's no such thing as
murder without finding the body and they'll
make it hot for you while they search for mine,87
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GRISBY (CONT. )
But thoy kmow it's a rough tide out
thore on that part of the Sound. They!11
have to give up pretty quick. And then,
they'll have to let you go.... Cigar?
He opons a humidor with his flashing smile of hospitality.
MICHAEL
Mo, thanks.
320 CLOSE TWO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 320
GRISBY
(removing long blond Havena
and crinkling it by his ear)
I mow, fella, you're wondering what's
behind it all. “None of your business,
actually, but since wetre what you
might-call --
“(with a pleasant laugh)
-- paftners in crimo -- I might as well
tell you that this firm's insured. I
nave-a wife that nags mc, end I don't
want to be within a thousand miles of
this eity when they drop that bomb...
He rests his cigar lovingly on a Morocco leather box and
unsheaths a fountain pen from an elaborate onyx desk set.
Then, putting down the pen near Michael's hands --
GRISBY
(continuing)
Sounds crazy, I mow, but then -- wo
all have our little eccentricities.
Sign this
321 CLOSEUP MICHAEL sel
Michael picks up the pen, looks at it for a steady minute in
silence. Then scratchos his namo with a single gosture
on the bottom of the paper.
322 TWO SHO? MICHAEL AND GRISBY 322
Grisby pulls the papor back toward him across the glass top
of the desk, He folds the paper in two tidy creases, and
files it away in his pocket with a satisfied sound of ox-
heled breath.322
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GRISBY
(continuing during the
above procedure)
I hate to mako it all so formal,
but you Imow the legal mind.
(patting his pocket)
This is just in case you change your
story aftor the "murdor," I voulén't
like that. And just in case you should
@ecido not to go through with it, I'll
koop the other half of the five thousand
til tomorrow night. You'll get the rest
pefore I climb into tho spoodboat, You
might call this a rotednor,
MICHAEL
What about the shot?
GRISBY
That's a silly question, folla, You
fire into the sand, of Course.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL 323
MICHAEL
Koop your money. I'll take it if I
do the job.
TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND GRISBY 324
Michael has rison, Grisby looks up at him, his cyes
nerrowing in the glare of the desk lamp.
GRISBY
You'll do it... five thousand dollars
ought to take a little girl and a
sailor on quite a nico little trip.
Maybe wo'll all moet togother somewhere,
Shall we make @ date in Pango Pango?
MICHAEL
(tonelc ssly)
I'11 see you at tho house tomorrow
night.
GRISBY
(with a ploasant grin)
Goodbyo 'til then, you bloodthirsty
killer, you.
Ho laughs ... Michael movos away into the darkness and
wo hear the office door closo -- good and hard.
ChogRughing his silly leugh all by hinsolf 528
«+elaughing his 3) augh a! self.
ening v " FADE OUT:89
FADE IN:
INT. KITCHEN BANNISTER HOME - THE NEXT NIGHT
326 Wichacl sits in his shirtslooves smoking, a half empty cup 326
of coffee and an open book before him on the kitchen table.
Bessio, drossed for her night out, stops by for a word.
BESSIE
What's eatin’ you, Mr. Man?
I know, you were all set to quit
last night, an! here you is... T
know -- That gal can talk e body.
into anything sho wants... I'm glad
she kin. She needs you, -- Say, where
is she now?
MICHAEL
Where you're goin! --, to the films?
BESSIE
(cheerfully)
Not tho same theatre, Mr, Man, I'd
vetter hurry. Whore I'm goin' it's
bank night.
MICHAEL
Feol lucky?
BESSIE
No, jest hopeful.
She starts out the door.
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
EXT, BANNISTER ESTATE BEHIND THE GARAGE - NIGHT
327 Aman ia standing in the shadows. Grisby ontors the Scene, 327
GRISBY
Is thet you, Broome?
It 1s, but he doosn't enswer. Grisby looks about him
nervously+
GRISBY
Well, here I ame527
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330
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CONTINUED: se
BROOME
(quietly)
Yes, sir, hore you are.
TIGHT TWO SHOT GRISBY AND BROOME 3268
GRISBY
(trying to koop
his voice down)
Lock, Broome, I'vo got to get into
the city. I'm late and Michael's
going to have to take me -~
He looks sherply at Broomo's face.
GRISBY
(continued )
What are you laughing at?
BROOME
The way you say it, it sounds phon:
Like you practiced 1t too meny times!
GRISBY
(shrilly)
I don't get what you're driving at.
BROOME,
Sure you do.
CLOSEUP_GRISBY 329
Grisby looks at him for a silent, breathless minute, then
speaks?
GRISBY
What do you want?
CLOSEUP BROOME 330
BROOME
I'll settle for five thousend dollars.
Grisby gulps the air in a couple of times as though he'd
been running heavily.
TIGHT TWO SHOT GRISBY AND BROOME 331
Grisby tries to go, but finds ho can't.
GRISBY
I'l] talk to you tomorrow.91
331 CONTINUED: 331
BROOME
Tomorrow? When you'll be playin!
dead an' somebody else we both know's
really dead? No, thanks, Mr. Grisby,
WetiTscttie our account ‘right now,
GRISBY.
(his tone suddenly
quite cool)
All right, Broome, if you insist --
He reaches in his pocket and takes out a gun --
332 CLOSEUP BROOME 332
BROOME
(sharply)
Not
cur tor
INT. KITOHEN
333. Michael is reading his book. From outside comes the SOUND 333
of a shot! Michaol looks up, puzzled. CAMERA PANS iim to
the door. He goos out.
EXT, KITCHEN ENTRANCE BANNISTER HOME - NIGHT
334 As Michacl comes out on the porch we can see he's trying 334
to place the direction of the gunshot.
CUT TG:
EXT. BACK YARD BEHIND THE GARAGE - NIGHT
335 CLOSE SHOT BROOME 335
lying with his face in the earth. CAMERA TILTS UP to HOLD ON
Grisby, the smoking revolver, still in his hend. CAMERA MOVES
with Grisby around to the side door of the garage. He opens
it and starts in.92
INT. BANNISTER GARAGE - NIGHT
336
337
358
Grisby comes in the side door, tekes a flashlight out of 336
his left pocket and makes his way to the Hispano, CAMERA
FOLLOWING. Moving quickly, Grisby wipes the gun with a
big linen handkerchicf, end holdiny it in tho handkerchief,
opens tho car door. Ha reaches in'> the flap pocket of the
door and takes out another gun, (‘ae sano gun Elsa carried
in hor bag in Central Park), Stil pinching the revolver
he used to shoot Broome in the del sate folds of his
handkerchief, ho drops it .in the evs pocket,
MICHAEL'S VOICE (0.S.)
What wes that shot?
Grisby starts and straightons! Th: overhead floodlights. in
the garage flash on as Michael turis tho switch
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL 337
at the garago door. His hand on t'2 switch, Ho looks
suspiciously off scroen. CAMERA F LLOWING, he crosses to
Grisby, who manages to jam the gun ne took from the car
into his coat pocket before Michae comes up to him.
THO SHOT MICHAEL AND GRISBY 338
- GRISBY
Iwas just doing a littl: target
practices.
Michael's eyes squint down at him, Grisby giggles nervously.
GRISBY
(continued)
That's your line, isn't it?
Remomber, that's what you'ro
supposed to say.
Michael is watchful and silont. With another of his childish
spasms of laughter, Grisby climbs into tho car.
GRISBY
Como on, time to start...
Very low thunder mumbles in the air outside. Slowly Michael
gets in beside him, starts tho car and drives it out of tho
garage
DISSOLVE TO:EXT.
93,
COUNTRY ROAD - NIGHT
339
EXT.
340
341
342
343
344
345
346
An overcast sky, Lightning, and the far-away threat of 339
thunder. The car races down the road,
DOORWAY OF THE BANNISTER KITCHEN - NIGHT
For a while nothing moves on the screen. Then over the 340
SOUND TRACK we hear the rasping static-like sounds of tortured
breathing -- the breathing of a dying man. Up from the bottom
of the Frame -- up to the steps, crawls Broome. Moving on his
belly, an inch at a timo, he tries to get the door open with
his fingers, tries to raise himself to the knobs..fallsee.
finally makes it.
CUT TO:
h
MEDIUM SHOT (PROCESS) 341
Michael is driving; Grisby slumped in the beck clenches an
unlit cigar between his teeth.
CLOSE. SHOT MICHAEL 342
His hands grip the wheel, nervouslyse.s
CLOSE SHOT GRISBY 343
in the back seat.
CLOSE S4OT MICHAEL 344
at the wheel, He stares into the rear view mirror of the car.
CLOSE SHOT REAR VIEW MIRROR (SPECIAL EFFECTS) 345
Grisby, his forehead dripping
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 346
at the wheel, Impatiently, he steps on the gas. The car
gathers still more speed.
COUNTRY ROAD - NIGHT
EXT,
347
In the distance ahead is seen the red light on the tail of 347
a truck. Michael's car rockets toward the truck.94
INT. CAR WINDSHIELD SHOT FROM MICHAEL'S PONT OF VIEW
348
349
350
352
EXT.
The tail light comes closer -- and still closer... 348
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 349
He quickly jerks back the emergency breke, swings the wheel
around, jams on the footbrake --
CLOSE SHOT GRISBY 350
WINDSHIELD SHOT (SPECIAL EFFECTS) FROM MICHAEL'S POINT OF VIEW
The CAMERA ZOOMS UP 'ti1 the glare of the tail light fills 351
the whole of the screen. A sudden jolt of CAMER‘ as the red
blaze is broken by the shattering of glass in front of
CAMERA Lens, splintering the entire picture...
CUT TO:
ROAD - NIGHT
352
REVERSE CLOSE SHOT ON MICHAEL 352
through broken windshield glass. Michael, stunned, hunches
over the wheel, his face bleeding. Grisby, beg. Michaol
comes to and with effort starts to leave the car.
COUNTRY ROAD
353
MEDIUM SHOT 353
Michael's car has smashed into a truck. A man, the truck-
driver runs toward Michael.
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL AND TRUCK DRIVER 354
TRUCK DRIVER
Anyboey hurt?
MICHAEL
I don't know.
(he looks in back)
Mr. Grisby --
Grisby slides out of the car, blood on his white linen suit,
holding his hand to his wrist.
GRISBY
That was close, wasn't it? Not
hart, aro you fella?355
356
357
358
359
360
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CONTINUED: 354
MICHAEL
I'm all right.
TRUCK DRIVER
You're lucky, flyin! glass can take
your head off,
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL, GRISBY AND TRUCK DRIVER 355
Followed by Grisby, Michael and the truck driver move into
the bleze of the twisted headlights. The wholo front of the
car is jammed against the back of the truck.
CLOSE S1OT RED TAIL LIGHT OF THE TRUCK 356
smashed, s
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 357
He looks toward Grisby.
CLOSE SHOT GRISHY 358
holding his bleeding wrist. He notices Michael looking at
him and smiles back.
GRISBY
It's okay, folla,
CLOSE SHOT TRUCK DRIVER 359
"TRUCK DRIVER
You're cut bad.
CLOSE SHOT GRISBY 360
He wraps s handkerchief around his wrist.
GRISBY
It's okay, really it is.
MEDIUM SHOT CAR AND TRUCK 361
Michael gets inside the car and starts the motor. Grisby
stands outside and turns to the truck driver.
GRISBY
What's your namo?
TRUCK DRIVER
Hey, you ain't goin' to try en' say
I aia it?362
IN
362
96
CONTINUED: 361
GRISBY
Don't be silly. We just want to be
sure you're compensated for any
damage we may havo caused your truck.
TRUCK DRIVER
That's different. Here's the driver's
License .e.
He starts getting it out.
cur TO:
BANNISTER OFFICE - NIGHT
Pitch blackness and the empty atmosphere of lowor Wall 362
Street by night... Nobody around for a million miles...
A phone is ringing... An insistent janglo... almost as
though the phone itself were complaining of loneliness...
cur TO:
ROAD
EXT.
363
Grisby is just giving the truck driver one of his cards. 365
GRISBY
(as he climbs back into the
partly wrecked Hispano)
All right, now, you've got my name
and address. Be sure end let me know
the damage.
Michael starts tho car. It roars up the road and out of
sight. The truck drivor, holding Grisby's card betweon a
couple of grimy fingers, stands watching it gows.r.
QUICK DISSOLVE ‘TO:ov
INT. BANNISTER'S OFFICE
364 As before. Tho phone still rings -~ seems to ocho through 364
the empty building... Thon the ringing stops abruptly --
cur TO:
INT, BANNISTER KITCHEN - NIGHT
365 EXTREME CLOSE SHOT PHONE 365
Tho recolver hangs down on the cord as though it had been
dropped. It swings and dangles aimlessly as the CANERA
MOVES QUICKLY IN and the Frame 4s filled with the por-
foratod membrane of the receiver. Over tho SOUND TRACK
tho very tiny, very tiny voice of an opcrator 1s heard.
OPERATOR'S VOICE
(filter)
Operator... Operator
Oporator!.. Operator
DISSOLVE TO:98
FRONT CAR
366
LOW ANGLE SHOT SHOWING DASHBOARD AND RIGHT GLOVE COMPART- 366
MENT CAMERA ON FLOOR OF CAR SHOOTING UP.
Grisby's arm, a handkerchicf tied around it, is at scroon
left (suspended over the Camera.) As hisother hand romoves
the handkerchief, drops of blood fall over the Camera lens.
As the first drop of blood spatters the lens, the loft hand
of the screen becomes slightly blurred.
MICHEAL 0.8.
What are you doing?
GRISBY 0.8.
Gotting blood o11 over the floor
of the cars My blood. It's ver-
fect. If you shot mo thore!d be
blood, folla -- sco?
While Grisby's voice is heard over sceno, more drops of blood
fall on the Camera lens, and tho left half of the screen
decomes progressively more blurred.
GRISBY 0.8.
Get out the gun!
Tho loft half of the frame 1s now complotely blurred, a fuzzy
lino of demarcation between the left and right halves of tho
soroon. Michacl's arm shoots out from this blurred dividing
line into the right half of the sercen and raises the lid of
tho glove compartment. Ho takes out a gun. Wo now seo in
tho right half of the screen, Michaol's arm holding a gun.
CAR
INT.
367
TWO SHOT 367
Grisby, in the back, loaning over the front sent as he tics
his handkerchief around his wrist. He is directly behind
Michael who holds the gun in his hand. Michael closes the
glove compartmont and opens the ear door. He and Grisby
got out.
EXT. CAR - NIGHT
368
Tho top of a little hill sloping down to tho sand and 368
tho sea.99
EXT. BEACH
369 © LONG SHOT 369
liany little fires are burning up and down the beach. By fit—
ful hoat lightning people can be seen moving about and sitting
in groups. A voice is heard singing, and an amatourish gui- -
tar. Far in the distance 1s Bannister's pier and his speod
poat.
370 TWO SHOT MICHAEL aND GRISBY 370
on the hill overlooking tho beach.
GRISBY
It's all working out perfectly.
That truckdriver's going to make
a Grado "A" witness. Now, mako
suro somobody soos you go back
whon you leave here. When you
got back to tho garage, start
washing out tho blood stains,
You're trying to wino out tho
evidence, soo, But bo caroful
not to do such a good job that
they can't analyze the’ stains.
Grisby pauses, smiles at Michael.
GRISBY (Cont'a.)
To save your own neck, they've
got to make sure Ttm dead.
Grisby walks closor to Michaol and suddenly, pulling the
handkerchief off his wrist, wipos some of the blood on
Michael's clothes.
371 CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 371
as ho draws back.
372 CLOSE SHOT GRISBY 372
laughing.
FRISBY
Just try to wasa that off!
EXT. BEACH - NIGHT
373 TWO SHOT GRISBY AND MICHAEL 373
Grisby roties the handkerchief around his wrist.
GRISEY (Conttd.)
Woll, thatts about all, folla,
Soon as you hear the speedboat
get away! - fire the gun.373
374
375,
376
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378
379
380
100
CONTINUED: 373
He shakes Michael's hand.
GRISBY (Cont'd.)
Well, this is gocdbyo.
Ho quickly walks down the hill to the pier.
OVER SHOULDER SHOT MICHAEL IN F.G. 374
Iightining shows Grisby walking towards the pier, Wo soe
the many little firos and tho people on tho beach. Michael
stands watching, the gun in his hand.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 375
Ho wets his lips, looks nervously about and starts to lift
his gun. The bedch is quiet save for desultory laughtor
from the picnic groups and the distant song. Suddenly!
VOICE 0.8.
WaIT! WaIvs
It's Grisby. Michael swings around.
376
‘Wo SHOT
Grisby runs up to Michael, out of breath.
GRISBY
A little thing like this and
I forget 1t! Quick, give mo
your cap.
Michael hands Grisby his cap, and without ancthor word, Grisby
starts off again.
OVER SHOULDER SHOT 377
Michael watching Grisby as ho goes to the speedboat at the
pior,
CLOSEUF MICHAEL'S FACE 378
Tho noise of the speedboat fills the air = then slowly dios
away.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 379
Ho points the gun toward the sand and fires it.
LONG SKOT BEACH MICHAEL IN F.G. 380
The singing and the laughtor suddenlys top, Michnol stands
thore, tho smoking gun in his hand Silence,381
382
383
384
101
TRUCKING SHOT 381
Michael runs down to the pior, turns and starts along tho
beach. A fat man ina bathrobe grabs him by the arm and
swings him around.
MEDIUM SHOT FAT MAN 382
The fat man grabs the gun from Michael's hand.
Fa? MAN
Here! Hore, what are you doing?
Other pooplo dressed in boach robes, mon and women, run
into sceno.
PEOPLE - AD LIBS
What havponed?
What was the shooting for?
What does ho want?
Who is he?
Michael tries to laugh, - motions to tho gun.
MICHAEL
I just folt like hoaring it go
off. Anything wrong with that?
FaT MAN
oh ... Just did it for a whim,
T s'poso?
MICHAEL
That's right. Just o whim.
Ho abruptly swings around and starts towards the top of
the hill.
“MEDIUM SHOT ‘THE PEOPLE ON THE BEACH 383
They watch him go.
MEDIUM SHOT TOP OF THE HILL 384
Michael, putting tho gun in his pocket, Jumps into the car
and starts the motor. .
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. CAR (PROCESS)
385
Michael at the whool driving ... He joms his foot on tho 385
brake, getting all possible epced he can. Suddonly the car
Lights go out.386
387
102
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 386
as ho reacts.
MEDIUM SHOT CAR 387
Pitch black «+» Michaol slows. The horn on the car jams.
Tho irritating long steady drone of the horn cuts the night
to ribbons +++
SLOW DISSOLVE TO:
INT. BANNISTER'S OFFICE
388
As before. 388
Tho visual action of the DISSOLVE is synchronized with a cross
fadé of sound: From tho maddening whine of the auto horn to
the mddoning whine of tho phone.
CUT TO:
INT. BANNISTER KITCHEN
389
Broome has somehow pulled himself uo from the floor long 569
enough to dial the numbor again. Ho's hanging on to tho
Poceiver now listening to the buzz...Gasping out his life...
CUT TO:
INT, BANNISTER'S OFFICE
390 Tho phone still yammers in tho darkmess, But now THE 390
GAMERA MOVES UP FROM THE DESK AND APPROACHES THE WINDOW.
391 HIGH ANGLE SHOT - SHOOTING DOWN INTO THE STREET 391
Far bolow the tiny figure of a man cen just be mdo out on
tho black pavement...Suddenly, with tho sound perspective
matching this distance, there is heard a faint but sharp
toxtured gunshot! The noice richochets off tho granite
faces of tho anpty buildings echoing remotely. This during
a silent phraso of one of the moasured pauses betwoon tho
exclamations of the phono puzzer...Precisely on the instant
of the gunshot, the moving CAMERA had pulled up and locked301
103,
CONTINUED: 391
its focus in a fixed stare at the strect below..,.The
miniscule shapo of the man 1s secon to foll....Tho phone bell
clattors....Tho man lies motionless.
SLOW DISSOLVE TO:
EXP.
302
393
304
ROAD - NIGHT
As before. 392
Tho action of the dissolve matches the movement of a cross fade
of sound effects. Tho phone bell merging into the ery of tho
jammed auto horn and melting away under it...His road lights
short-circuited, Michael sits at the wheel undecided what to
do...With the shock of a sudden shout, a not, bright light is
beamed on his faco.
CLOSEUP - MICHAEL 393
He swings around and squints into the glare.
MEDIUM SHOT OVER SHOULDER MICHAEL 394
A motorcycle cop comes opposite tho car.
THE COP.
Having troublo?
MICHAEL
The lights went out on mo and the
horn jamnod.
Tho cop dismounts and walks round the car -- noticos the
wreckod front.
THE COP
Looks like you had a little accident.
MICHAEL
Yeoh...A truck.
For a minute the cop studies Michacl. Then with his flash-
light looks into the car.395
396
104
CLOSE SHOT - MICHAEL 395
Ho holds his broath.
TWO SHOT = COP AND MICHAEL 396
THE COP
I'11 got ya a tow car.
He rides away on tho motorcycle.
DISSOLVE TO:105
EXT, NIGHT - HIGH ANGLE - STREET BELOW ~ SHOOTING
397
FROM WINDOW OF BANNISTER'S OFFICE 397
‘as boforo the CAMERA poors down the giddy distanco of twonty
stories to tho murky stroot. Soveral figuros are soor. to
gather, eircling tho placo where tho man foll. Polioc whistles
Ero hoard, and thon from blocks away! The banshoe yolling of
polico sirons....Tho phono has stoppod ringing...
DISSOLVE"):
EXT, NIGHT ~ WALL STREET
398
THE CAMERA IS ANGLED IN A DOWN-SHOT procisely as befere, 398
But now tho lens is a moro fiftoon feet apove tho pavorcnt.
The polico...squad cars...an ambulanco...The hoart of shis
tableau is the darkest objoct in tho composition. Th figure
of the fallon man, an obvious corpso.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. BANNISTER GARAGE
399
With a desperato striving and a feverish haste Michac’ 399
is washing away at tho blood stains in tho car. A vo'co is
heard.
THE VOICE
O'Hara l.e...0'Hara!!
Michacl looks toward tho door.
THE VOICE (CONT.)
It's Broome lessees
Wichacl docsntt moo =- scarcoly broathes. Thon Broomo's
voice scattors the silonco again, an agonizcd croak.
BROOME'S VOICE (Cort)
I know you'ro thero, O'Hara...Jot mo ine.e,
Michacl docsn't speak. For a momont all wo can hear is tho
Liguid spattoring from the cloth in his hand on to tho moist
conercto....Thon tho door of the garago swings sharply in
with a shrick of hinges and Broome falls into tho scono.106
TIGHT TWO SHOT - MICHAEL AND BROOME
400 Michaol catches him with his wot hands. 400
BROOME
(nis oyos glazed)
Blood. .+Blood..+
(wondoringly)
It ain't all, minds.
MICHAEL
(abruptly)
Thad an aceidont.
BROOME,
{sti11 clinging to «im)
And Bannister? Whon dié ao dio?
MICHAEL
(parking at him)
You'ro drunk, Broomo, Mr Bannister
isnt doad. :
Broomo sinks on to the ‘running bor. 4 of the: car, rolling his
eyes up at Michael.
401 CLOSE UP BROOME 401
BROOME
Whore's Grisby?
Ye can tell from the leer of blanked out tecth that Broome is
trying to smile.
402 CLOSE UP BROOME 402
BROOME (CONT. )
Did he give you the dough? Don't
stall, I nood a doctor. I got
somothingeres
4s hand goos to his breast, wo think to his wound, thon we
roalizo to his pocket.
BROOME (CONT.)
=+ to sell. Cost you five grand...
403 CLOSE UP MICHAEL 403
MICHAEL
(without exprossion)
What are you talking about?404
405
406
407
408
CLOSE UP BROOME
BROOME
(with an angry snoor)
Evorybody dummies up on moles.
You'ro all wastint your timo.
And I ain't got no timo. I bet
you don't know why Grisby stu
you on that murdor framo-up?,
CLOSE UP MICHAEL
Michaol still holds him in a blank stare.
BROOME (CONT.) 9.8.
Sure hots a lammestor -- but 1s
he's boatin! it, he's takin'
gimp with him.
WICHAEL
. What do you moan?
CLOSE UP BROOME
Ho gots for answor Broomo's ompty loor.
CLOSE TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BROOME
MICHAEL (CONT.)
Do you moan Bannister and Griaby
are’ running off togethor?
BROOME
Bannistor's dead, hots gonna bo
whon Grisby gots to Wall Streot.
That's why Grisby wants it to li
like you croaked hin, That way hots
cloan, sco? Without nobody goin!
aftor him, It's his alibi, soo?--
CLOSE UP BROOME
BROOME (CONT.)
All the timo hots supposed to bo
murdorcé, hots roally murderin!
Bannister --
Thon sharply, a fresh note of fright in his voico.
BROOME (GONT.)
107
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405
406
407
408409
410
ann
412
413
108
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 403
MICHAEL
Wall Stroot --
Michaol heg started into tho car.
MEDIUM SHOT 410
BROOME
If you wanta savo Bannistor, you
better stop on it...But first --
first -- gimme that fivo grand.
Michaol lodks back at him,
BROOME (CONT. )
It's on you now, It's gotta bol!
Ho's trying to sound vicious, but by now tho offoct is only
pathotic.
BROOME (CONT.)
Gimme that fivo grand!
MICHAEL
What for?
CLOSEUP BROOME 411
BROOME
A littlo picco of paper, that's
what for. A paper with your
namo signod to it. A confession
T lifted it offa Grisby whon ho
wasn't lockin',
CLOSE UP MICHAEL 412
MICHAEL
Show it to mo,
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BROOME = * 415
BROOME
Show mc that fivo grand...
Michael gets out tho monoy. Broomo soizos it in groody
fingors sticky with bloods413
414
415
416
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CONTINUED : 413
BROOME (CONT.)
(ereoring in a kind of dying
cestacy)
«ssFive G's...I worked hard for this.--
CLOSE UP BROOME 414
Ho slumps to tho conercto floor -~ falls dead in a biood
morass of paper monoy.
MEDIUM, CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 415
Aftor a minute, Michael forces himeclf into a scarch for tho
confossion. Finds it in Broomo's pocket. Puts it away in
his ows. Michacl would got into the car, but ho can't. --
Fivo thousand dollars cry out to him from tho ground,
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 416
As ono in a tranec, ho stoops and gathcrs up tho prosious
garbage. Shovels the moist and dripping stuff into the car.
Ho follows it in himsolf with a slam of tho door. Ho yanks
tho ear into speed and his face sot and rigid as a vioop~
walkerst, ho jolts out of the sconc.,.c hoar stripping gears
and serodching rubbor -- as Wo «..
DISSOL¥S TO:
ET - FIGHT
EXT, WALL S!
417
Tho samo shot as before -- but still closer. Now tho 417
shadowed corps? is ringed with a sizosblo crowd. TKE CAMERA
HASN'T MOVED, cut other clomonts in tho picturo have shifted
onough to indicate a passago of timo. Ono of tho cops, &
licutenant, turns and looks off-scenc.
THE COP LT.
Hoy! Whots that?
(to attonding subordinates)
Bo suro he stops.
CAMERA TILTS UP THE STREET to show tho approach of Michaol
in his car. Tho crowd swallows and stalls tho littlo Chovvy,
and the cops dcsecnd on Michaol like an cagor swarm of flicse418
110
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL AND THE COP CLOSEST TO HIM 416
MICHAEL
(to him)
Am I too late?
THE COP
Too lato for what, buddy?
MICHAEL
To save him! Is he alivo?
THE COP
Is who alivo?
MICHAEL
Bannistor -~ Harry Bannister,
THE COP
What was that name again?
THE COP LY
(moving majostically into
tho seoho
What's his namc? That's what I
want to Imow, What's he doing hero?
During the whole of this scone, CAMERA DOLLIES IN TOWARD
MICHARL'S FACE...The cops got to be voiccs only. As wo train
our sights on Michacl's mounting terror. --=
A COP'S VOICE 0.8,
Hoy, look! That's blood, aintt it?
ANOTHER COP 0.8.
Blood?
MANY VOICE OF THE POLICE 0.8.
Suro it's blood! All ovor his clothes!
Come on! Out!
THE FRAME CLOSES IN ON THE LIMITS OF MICHAEL'S FACE as tho
cops drag him out of tho car. The voleos pross ons
THE vo10ES
Samo thing a11 ovor tho soat!
Money! Hundred dollar bills!
Blood all over him! Gomo onJ
Who aro you? *
MICHAEL
Ho was killed wasn't ho? Or
you wouldn't bo hore,
Somobody slams him across tho faco.418
419
420
12
CONTINUED : 416
A HORASE VOICE 0.S,
Shut up!
5 THE LT. 0.8.
Search him! Soc if ho's armods
MICHAEL
I'm Michaol O'Hara. I just wan
to know about Bannistor, that's
all! I just --
THE COP 0.8,
(speaking in caroful tones)
O'Hore...0 -H-A-
ANOTHER COP 0.8.
(shouting)
What's this?!
show a uniformed
Exactly on this cry, CAMERA YANKS BACK
lod, stained
arm dragging from ifichacl's coat tho o
confossion.
MICHAEL
If somebody doosn't toll mo about Mr.
Bannister, I'11 go out of my mind!
‘A COP 0.8.
Liston to this!
(roading)
"I, Michaol O'Hara, in ordor te livo
at page with my conseleneo and my
Goa =~
A socond of silence grocts thia phraso.
CLOSE UP BANNISTER 419
Ho smilos sweotly at Hichacl, tho brilliant oyos aglow. Off
secre tho cop continuvs reading the confossion.
THE COP 0.8.
“.-do frooly mako tho following
confossion. On tho ovoning of
August ninth I shot and killed
Goorge Grisby --"
CLOSE UP NICHAEL 420
MICHAEL
Grisby!420
421
422
423
424
425
CONTINUED :
BANNISTER 0.8.
That's right, Michaol.
CLOSE UP BANNISTER
BANNISTER (CONT)
=:That's what you say thoro in
your confession.
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(the sky falling on his hoad)
Grisby! Grisby was killod....
TIGHT TWO SHOT BANNISTER AND MICHAEL
“ BANNISTER
Ys, Michaol, with your cap in
his hand. Iéts lucky Itm horow..
CLOSEUP HICHAEL
CLOSEUP BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Youtre going to nocd a good lawyor.
ne
420
421
422
425,
424
425
Tho flamos fairly cracklc in his tiny dark oyos as Bannistor
digs into Michaol with a long doop look.113
FADE IN:
INT, JAIL MICHAEL'S CELL- DAY
426 Bannister limps up to Michael, whos its stonily on hin cot, 426
In the b.g. the guard closes the cell door, locks it and
moves away.
BANNISTER
I brought you the papers.
Michael refuses to acknowledge this and Bannister tones
some gaudy looking tabloids onto the cot beside the prisoner.
BANNISTER
(continued)
They're giving the case a good
play. You're quite a sensation,
Michael wee
427 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 427
BANNISTER 0.S.
(continued)
ss. The papers are all saying your
confession's a phoney. They want
to know how you could kill Grisby
out on my beach in Long Island,
throw his body into the Sound, and
have his body turn up dry at the
foot of Wall Street? --
428 CLOSEUP BANNISTER 42E
BANNISTER
(continued)
«e- They think you did it, but
they don't know how .,. The D.A.'s
going to say you took him down
there -- in the speed-boat.
429 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 459
MICHAEL
I couldn't heve.
430 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 430
BANNISTER
Unless you got Mrs. Bannister
to lie about the time ... He
couldn't have taken himself.430
451
432
433
434
435
CONTINUED:
cLOsnUP
TWO SKOT
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
TiO SHOT
MICHAEL
Why not?
BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Because there wasn't any other
way for him to go. He didn't
take the train, we checked. He
didn't drive or we would've found
the car, He didn't take the speod-
boat because how could he. have got
ib back?
MICHAEL AND BANNISTER
MICHAEL
Back where?
BANNISTER
Back at the beach, That boat
couldn't have driven itseif
home. Maybe it was Grisby's
ghost, Maybe he took himself
down and the boat just drifted
pack. Or maybe you had semeone
working with you. --
BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Michael, you must see what an
odd position this puts me in --
defending a man for killing ny
own law partner. I'm going to
have a job persuading the judge
to let me do it. Now thon --
What really happened? Why'd you
shoot him?
MICHAEL
ICHAEL
I didn't shoot him,
MICHAEL AND BANNISTER
BANUISTER
Then why @id you say you did...to
get out of another crime --
the murder of Broome?
14
430
431
432
433
4351s
435 CONTINUED: 435
MICHAEL
(quickly)
No --
BAINISTER
Well, if you didn't shoot Grisby,
why that confession?
436 CLOSEUP MICHAEL 436
MICHAEL
He made me write it.
BAREISTER
Who?
MICHAEL
Grisby. I didn't know he was
going to get killed.
437 CLOSEUP BAY HISTER 437
BANSISTER
Are youtrying to make me think
you're crazy? Is that your ganc?
438 CLOSEUP MICHAEL ase
MICHAEL
It was supposed to be a fake murder.
439 CLOSECP BANNISTER 439
BARNISTER
ag
440 CLOSEUP MICHARL 440
MICHAEL
Grisby wanted to get avay from
his wife -- she wouldn't give
him a divorce. So he hired mo
to pretend to kill him accidently.441
442
443
444
445
TWO SHOT
CLOSEUP
TWO SHOT
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
ile
BANNISTER AND MICHAEL 442
BANNISTER
If you think I'm going into a
court with a story like that,
you are crazy! -- No, wetll say
Grisby took the boat to Wall
Street of his own accord and
died there from your shot.
BANNISTER 442,
BANRNISTER
Excusable homicide -- accident.
That's going to have to be the
plea, It's our only bet..
MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 443
MICHAEL
But we can prove I didn't do it
with that gun I had,
BANNISTER
Maybe you had another gun .
can't prove you didn't.
MICHAEL 444
MICHAEL
(slowly)
«++ So I'm going on trail for my
life, claiming to have killed a
man I didn't kill.
BANNISTER 0.8.
And hoping they'll believe you,
put not to the extent where they!1l
send you to the chair.
BANNISTER 445
He's almost smiling.
FADE OUT.117
FADE IN:
INT. COURTROOM
446 «THE TOP OF THE JUDGE'S BENCH 446
His books and papers impressively arrayed. But the no:t
prominent thing in the picture:
INSERT: A RACING FORM
447 CLOSEUP_ DOP OF DESK 447
On scratch paper His Honor is calculating the odds on «ome-
thing good for the Fifth. o.s, the District Attorney
Galloway is oxamining a witness.
D.A.'S VOICE
Now, then, Officer Peters, you say
you heard no shot. Yet from the |
condition of tho blood, which you
testified was still wet when you
discovered the body, we know the
death must have come on Wall Street,
put, not as it would appoar, from a
shot fired on Wall Strect or you
would have heard it, Isn't that
right?
448 MEDIUM SHOT THE COURTROOM 448
A burly policeman named Peters is testifying.
BANNISTER
(rising)
Objection! The shot might have been
fired before the Officer came within
hearing distance, Wo definite con-
clusion can be drawn from the fact
that the Officer heard no shot.
JUDGE
Sustained, Strike the District
Attorney's remarks from the record,
GALLOWAY
But, Your Honor, the fact no shot was
heard, simply bears out the defendant's
written confession -- But we'll return
to that later, Right now we'll continue
with the Officer's testimony as I'm sure
he's anxious to got home to his wife and
family before returning to duty.449
450
451
452
453
CLOSEUP PETERS
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY
CLOSEUP BaiiNISTER
iis
TWO SHOT PETERS AND GALLOWAY 449
Peters looks at him and starts to say something, but Galloway
GALLOWAY
An important point, Mr. Potors:
Will you tell: the jury the condition
of lir. Grisby's clothos the moment
you came upon the body?
PETERS
They seemed to be in good condition,
exeept for the blood, of sourse.
GALLOWAY
The clothes wore wet or dry?
450
PETERS
They were dry.
GALLOWAY
Dry! Yet the defendant ssid in
his confession that he'd thrown the
body into tho Sound,
452
BANNISTER
I object.
GALLOWAY'S VOICE
Grounds?
BANNISTER
ly client has withdravn the state-
mont that the body was thrown into
the Sound. The District attorney
is taking unfair advantage of a
situation which he knows has been
rectified.
MEDIUM SHOP COURTROOM 453
JUDGE
Objection sustained, The District
Attorney's last remarks will be
stricken from the rocord,4535
454
455
456
457
CONTINUED:
ne
453
Galloway shrugs and looks at the jury to make sure they got
it anyway,
MEDIUM SHOT JURY'S FACES
They got the point.
GLLLOWAY'S VOICE
The fact remains that the clothes
were dry. Now, Mr. Peters, was
there anything else that struck
you at the time of the discovery
of the body?
MEDIUM SHOT GiLLOWAY AND PETERS
PETERS
Yes, sir, Thoro was something, Mr.
Grisby was lying face down with his
arm throw out. His hat had rolled
to one side but in his right hend
he had a cap, Ho was holding it so
tight the Homicide man had a hard
time getting 1t loose.
GALLOWAY
What kind of cap?
Peters wets his lips and looks across the courtroom to
Michael,
PETERS
A cheuffeur's cap.
CLOSE REACTION SHOT MICHAEL
WEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM
454
455
456
457
Galloway crosses to the table, snatches up a cap, holds it
over his head,
GALLOWS
Is this the cap?
PETERS
It looks like it.
Galloway turns to the jury waving the cap.457
458
459
460
461
462
463
120
CONTINUED : 457
GALLOWAY
Here is a lawyer mortally wounded,
struck down in the prime of life,
yet with the quickness end brilliance
of thought that characterized his
whole carcer at the bar, he snatched
the evidence that would send his
murderer to the chair} -~
MEDIUM CLOSE SHOT JURY 458
GALLOWAY
So that a competent jury sitting in
trial upon that murderer might avenge
his death without the slightest foar
of error or possible miscarriage of
Justice...
CLOSE SHOT GiLLOWAY 459
GALLOWAY
Watch}
CLOSE THREE SHOT G/LLOWAY, MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 460
Galloway has crossed to Michacl's side. He slaps the cap
on his head tight,
BANNISTER
(rising; shouting)
Objections
Ho gots to his feet so quickly he wrenches his leg.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 461
Pain shoots through his face. He grabs the table to hold on,
THREE SHOT GALLOWAY, MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 462
GALLOWAY
Of course tho Defense Counsel objects.
The cap fits)
CLOSEUP B/NNISTER 463
BANNISTER
The District Attorney is supposed to
be conducting a direct examination.
Such dramatics are entirely unnecessary,
The cap would fit ton million others a3
easily.464
465
466
467
468
MEDIUM SHOT COURT
BANNISTER'S VOICE
I ask the District Attorney's
conclusions be stricken from the
record as being ill-timed, unfounded
and immaterial.
CLOSEUP JUDGE
suDeE
Sustained. I'd say the evidence
is material, but I mst caution the
District attorney to confine himself
to the direct examination until he's
ready for summation.
MEDIUM SHOT GALLOWAY
GALLOWAY
(yanking cap
off Michael)
It is not only highly material, but
I shall attempt to show it is positive
evidence. We haven't here a mere
case of accidental shooting, as the
defense would like us to believe, and
as attested in the defendant's so-
called confession, but an out and out
case of first degree murder,
Michael jumps to his feet.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL
MICHAEL
That's not true. I --
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER
The Judge pounds his gavel. Bannister puts a hand on
Michael's arm to keep him dow,
BANNISTER
Let him finish, Our turn will come
later,
MICHAEL
Will you put me on the stand?
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464
465
466
467
468468
469
470
471
122
CONTINUED: 468
BANNISTER
That would give him just tye chance
he wants to cross examine “ou.
MEDIUM SHOT GALLOWAY 469
Galloway turns to Peters.
GALLOWAY
That's all, Your witness, Mr.
Bannister.
Bannister stands up slowly, thinkin.
BANNISTER
No questions -- except, ye, one,
He looks at Peters, who is half way out of his chair.
BANNISTER
of course, I don't want tc keep you
from your wife and childre. any more
than the District Attorne; who was
so concerned about them a woment ago.
But I would like to ask or question,
CLOSEUP PETERS 470
BANNISTER'® VOICE
Mr. Peters, have you a wifs and
children?
PETERS
Well --
Peters looks at Galloway and starts to smile,
PETERS
No.
MEDIUM SHOT COURTR OM 47.
A laugh goes up over the courtroom, The Judge bangs
his gavel. Galloway reddons, but tries to shrug it off.
BANNISTER
(to Peters)
Thank you, you may step down,
Bannister looks at Galloway, smiling, Laughter is still
heard in spite of the gavel.471
472
473
474
475
476
477
478
123
CONTINUED: 471
GALLOWAY
our next witness is a man of un-
impeachable integrity -- honest,
fearless and public-spirited in the
extreme. Although he may be somewhat
surprised at the request, I'm sure
he will not hesitate to testify.
I call Harry Bannister.
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER REACTION 472
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM 473
“ BAILIFF
« Harry Bannister...
A murmur starts up in the courtroom, as the Judge's gavel
hits, the bench.
CLOSKUP MICHAEL 474
Michgel looks at Zlsa.
CLOSEUP ELSA 475
She tries to smile encouragement. But wo can see that
she's plenty worried,
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 476
He is furious.
BANNISTER
All right. 1'11 take the stand,
CLOSE SHOT THE JUDGE 477
JUDGE
One minute, JI think the defendant
has something to say about that...
OVER SHOULDER SHOT FAVORING JUDGE 478
open
(continuing; he
looks at Michaol)
It is within your discretion to refuse
to allow Defense Counsel to place your
case in jeopardy by exposing himself to
the Proszcution's questioning.479
480
481
to
485
486
124
REVERSE SHOT FAVORING MICHAEL 479
MICHAEL
(ho has risen)
No, Your Honor, IT don't want any
other lawyer, if that's what you
mean, I'm not afraid of having Mr.
Galloway asking him any questions,
Because's there's nothing to be
afraid of, I haven't done anything,
FULL SHOT COURTROOM 480
excitement.
QUICK SERIES OF REACTION SHOTS: 461
REACTION: ELSA to
REACTION: MICHAEL 485
REACTION: SPECTATORS
REACTION: JURY
REACTION: REPORTERS
MEDIUM SHOT REPORTERS 486
1ST REPORTER
Hoy! Galloway can't make Bannister
testify against his om client, can
he?
2ND REPORTER
This whole trial gets screwier every
minutes
SRD REPORTER
He's going to be under oath, and
I always thought he was smart,
1s REPORTER
He's got something up his sleeve,
SRD REPORTER
Don't forget the kid was his chauffeur,
2ND REPORTER
This is a new one, all right. A lawyer
testifying in his own case against his
own client.
Over this last we hear the Bailiff swearing Bannister in,486
487
488
489
125
CONTINUED: 486
BAILIFF'S VOICE
(softly 3.)
Doyousweartotell thetruththewhole
truthandnothingbutthetruth, sohelp
youGod?
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER 487
BANNISTER
I doe
He sits down, his face dark, angered, his Jaw set. lic tries
to cover up his twisted leg so he wouldn't look awkwird -~
fails. It seems to hang loosely disconnectod...Thori. isn't
a sound in the whole courtroom.
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM 488
GALLOWAY
Your name?
BANNISTER
Harry Bannister,
GALLOWAY
fargion?
: BANNISTisn
Im a lawyers
GALLOWAY
Your address?
BANNISTER
120 Wall Street.
GALLOWAY
That's the address of your office?
BANNISTER
It is.
Y 489
TWO SHOT BANNISTER AND GALL
GALLOWAY
Now, Mr. Bannister, on the nighb of
August twelfth you were in that office?
BANNISTER
Yes.489
490
491
492
493,
494
126
CONTINUED: 489
GALLOWAY
=- waiting for your partner, George
Grisby, who'd gono out to your home to
got_somo papers, At what time did you
realize that Mr. Grisby wasn't coming back?
BANNISTER
At eleven thirty-five, whon the night
watchman came to tell'me that George
was lying dead out in the street. I
immediately atcompanied him downstairs .
and identified the body,
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY 490
GALLOWAY
You noticed the cap in Mr. Grisby's
hand?
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER 491
BANNISTER
I did.
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY 492,
GALLOWAY
Didn't you say that your chauffeur
must have killed him?
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 493
BANNISTER
I said it looked that way.
WO SHOT BANNISTER AND GALLOWAY 494
GALLOWAY
Did you or did you not suggest that a
search for the chauffeur be made at once?
BANNISTER
Naturally, if my chauffeur were
guilty I wanted him apprehended.
GALLOWAY
Naturally. You wanted to avenge George
Grisby's death, That was your duty just
as it is my duty. I should imagino you
also felt a certain senso of responsibility,
having hired and trusted the defendant
Michael O'Hara, who later showed his
gratitude by killing your ow partner.
Bannister just looks at him.495
496
497
498
1e7
CLOSEUP MICHAEL REACTION 495
OVER SHOULDER FAVORING BANNISTER 496
GALLOWAY
How long was Michael O'Hara in yo.»
employ before the shooting?
BANNISTER
A little less than a week,
GaLLoway
He wasn't very content with his jrb,
was he?
BANNISTER
No, I don't think he wase
GALLOWAY
As a matter of fact, he was prepe: ing
to leave the country -- Go back t: seas
I wonder if you can enlighten us ©a
that, Mr. Bannister? Why did he vant
to leave?
Bannister turns to the Judge.
MEDIUM THREE SHOT JUDGE, GALLOWAY AND BANTISTER 497
CLOSEUP
BANNISTER
As Defense Counsel I object to th:
District attorney's line of questioning.
By indirection he is attempting tc
establish premeditation which dos:
not exist.
JUDGE
Objection sustained.
GALLOwaY
Very well, thon, ‘to return to the
night of the crime. Wat did you
say about the five thousand dollars
discovered by the police on O'Hara's
person?
BANNISTER 498
BANNISTER
I didn't say anything.499
500
501
502
503
TWO SHOT
les
GALLOWAY AND BANNISTER 499
GALLOWAY
You weren't surprised?
BANNISTER
In,our profession, lr, Galloway,
one ceases to be surprised at
anything,
GALLOWAY
For the same reason that one
ceases to put much trust in his
fellow men.
BANNISTER
Possibly.
GALLOWAY
But yet you trusted Michael O'Hara --
without Imowing any more about hin
than that he had been a sailor?
BANNISTER
I trusted him,
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY 500
Galloway lashes a sharp fingor at him,
GALLOWAY
Then why did you hire the detective
Broome?
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 501
BANWISTER
We live in a rather deserted
section-=
TWO SHOT GALLOWAY AND BANNISTER 502
GALLOWAY
[Link], please. You live there
how long?
BANNISTER
Eight years.
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY 805
GALLOWAY
Eight yearst You've lived in a rather
deserted soction of Long Island for
eight years and then suddenly you feel P
called on to keep a detective on the
premisest504
505
508
507
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Your Honor, I fail to see what
possible connection the District
Attorney's present line of question-
ing can have on the case. If I
hadn't trusted my chauffeur, I would
have dismissed him, Certainly I
would not have gone to the expense
of hiring a detective to watch him,
THREE SHOT JUDGE, BANNISTHR AND GALLOWAY
CLOSEUP
Reaction,
MED.
SHOT
JUDGE :
Can the District Attorney justify
his present line of questioning?
GALLOWAY
I propose to show, Your Honor, that
the hiring of detective Broome has
a direct bearing on this case,
JUDGE
Very well.
GALLOWAY
I propose to show that the defendant
was hired because of his youth and
general physique and because he could
not be trusted!
MICHAEL
COURTROOM
JUDGE
Proceed.
GALLOWAY
Isn't it true, Hr. Bannister, that
you'd used the detective Broome in
Several of your cases having to do
with divorce actions?
BANNISTER
I'm not in the habit of accepting
such cases,
GALLOWAY
No, but you've handled a number,
have you not?
129
504
505
506
507507 CONTINUED:
508
509
510
S11
512
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
CLOSEUP
130
507
BANRISTER
Yes.
GALLOWAY
You found it expedient to hire
Broome for these cases because
you knew his whole reputation and
training had been in the procuring
of such evidence?
BANNISTER
Yes.
GALLOWAY 508
GALLOWAY
Do you mean to tell us you would
hire a man trained in divorce
actions, merely to watch your house?!
BANNISTER 509
BANISTER
Partly, yes.
GALLOWAY 510
GALLOWAY
What do you mean,partly?
BANNISTER S11
BANNISTER
(looking at the Judge)
I refuse to answer on the ground ==1
GALLOWAY 512
GALLOWAY
(breaking in)
Exactly as I thought, You didn't
hire him to watch your house at
all. You hired hin to watch your
wife, You didn't trust her with
‘your new chauffeur, You didn't fire
him either, You wanted to leave them
together. You wanted to gather
evidence,515
514
515
516
S17
518
519
CLOSEUP
reaction
CLOSEUP
reaction
CLOSEUP
Two SHOT
Bannister
MED, THREE SHOT JUDGE, GALLO
CLOSEUP
MED, SHOT
Bannister
gury.
131
ELSA 513
MICHAEL 514
BANNISTER 516
BANNISTER
I never had any thought of
having Michael watched.
BANNISTER AND GALLOWAY 516
GALLOWAY
Waom did you want watched?
doesn't answer. He just scowls angrily,
517
JUDGE
(breaking in)
I fail to see the connection
between that and the case at hand.
GALLOWAY
The connection would be quite
apparent if the questions were
answered truthfully.
JUDGE, 518
JUDGE
I think then that since lir, Bannister
has declined to answer on legal
grounds, that the present line of
questioning should be dropped.
COURTROOI 519
GALLOWAY
That's all then, Your witness,
Mr, Bannister,
climbs down off the stand and confronts the520
521
522
523
182
MED, SHOT BANNISTER AND JURY 520
BANNISTER
As defense counsel, I should like
to ask the witness, -- myself, that
is, -- a question, Why did I say
on seeing the cap in George Grisby's
hand that my chauffeur must have
Killed him? Because at the moment
that seemed to be the logical explans
tion.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN to CLOSEUP = BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Michael O'Hara did shoot George
Grisby, but after his voluntary
surrender he convinced me that’ he
had no premeditated ideas of murder -
that it had been an accident,
OVER SHOULDER SHOT OF BANNISTER FAVORING JURY S21
BANISTER (cont'd)
Ho told me he decided that the
most honorable course was to put
trust in the police and you, the
gury.
CAMERA PANS the Jury.
BANHISTER 0.S. (cont'd.)
He thereupon surrendered out of his
own innate sense of honor, That is
all.
MED, SHOT BANNISTER 522
Bannister goes back to his chair, Galloway smiles up
at him.
GALLOWAY
A very pretty speech.
Bannister doesn't look at him, He sits down,
GALLOWAY
(still smiling, on his
feet)
Call Mrs, Bannister.
Excitement in the courtroom!
CLOSEUP ELSA STARTLED 523
She rises, CAMERA TRUCKS WITH HER as she goes to the stand,523 CONTINUED:
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525
526
527
528
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BAILIFF
(the routine unintelli-
gible sprawl of sounds)
Doyousweartotellthetruth, the
wholetruthand nothingbutthe
truth, sohelpyouGod?
ELSA
I do,
CLOSE SHOT OF MICHAEL 524
watching her.
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 525
on the stand. She looks at Michael, tries to smile.
TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 526
Bannister takes out his medicine bottle. Pours out
couple of pills into a shaking hand and swallows the
‘TWO SHOT
CLOSEUP
GALLOWAY'S VOICE (0.8.)
Your name and occupation?
ELSA'S VOICE 0.3,
Elsa Bannister ... Housewife,
ELSA AND GALLOWAY sev
GALLOWAY
Mrs. Bannister, is it true that
you asked your husband to employ
fichael O'Hara as your chauffuer?
ELSA
Mr. Grisby suggested --
GALLOWAY
Answer the question, yes or no.
ELSA
No.
GALLOWAY
Is it true you were personally
acquainted with the defendant Michael
o'Hara before he entered your employ?
ELSA 528
ELSA
One evening in Central Park, I sss.529
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532
533
534
535
CLOSE SHOT GALLOWAY
GALLOWAY
Yes or no, Mrs, Bannister, if you
Please! You Imew Michael OTiara
personally before he was hired by
your husband?
ELSA
Yes.
TWO SHOT GALLOWAY AND ELSA
GALLOWAY
Why do you think he accepted the
position as chauffeur ~~ as your
chauffeur?
te ELSA
I don't understand the question.
CLOSE SHOT GALLOWAY
GALLOWAY
Urs, Bannister, let me simplify
it. Was it because of you?
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER
BANNISTER
Objectiont
CLOSE SHOT JUDGE
JUDGE
Objection overruled.
MED, SHOT COURTROOM
ELSA
(slowly)
Yes.
CLOSE SHOT GALLOWAY
GALLOWAY
Then it was because of you
that the defendant Michael O'Hara
stayed on in your house as your
servant? Is that true, Mrs,
Bannister?
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CLOSE SHOT ELSA 536
She hesitates, then looks toward Bannister,
ELSA
Yes, it's true.
CLOSE REACTION SHOT BANNISTER 537
CLOSE REACTION SHOT MICHAEL 538
CLOSH REACTION SHOT JURY 539
REACTION SHOT ee 540
REACTION SHO? REPORTERS 841.
CLOSE SHOT GALLOWAY 542
GALLOWAY
« Bannister, while the defendant
was in your employ as a chauffeur -~
what exactly were his duties?
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 543,
ELSA
To drive either Ure Bannister or
or myself, of courses
SOP GALLOWAY AND ELSA
GALLOWAY
Is that all?
She looks at him.
GALLOWAY (Cont'd)
Sorry, rs. Bannister, my fault.
Let me clarify the question.
CLOSEUP ELSA 546
GALLOWAY'S VOICE 0.8. (Cont'd)
Did Michael O'Hara in the performance
of his duties make love to you?547
548
549
550
581
552
553
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM
A wave of sound rises, and then, -- suddenly there isn't
a whisper. Bannister swings to his feet.
CLOSEUP BANWISTER
PANNISTER
(shouting)
GLOSEUP GALLOWAY
GALLOWAY
I should think the defense
counsel would object?
REDIU SHOT COURTROOM
Iaughter is heard ani the Judge's gavel?i
GALLOWAY (Cont'd)
The witness will please answere
Elsa looks at the Judge appealingly+
JUDGE,
Is the question pertinent?
MEDIU! THREE SHOT ELSA, GALLOWAY, JUDGE.
Your Honor,
pertinent!
I want to know exactly why
Bannister is protecting this mane
JUDGE
How do you mean ~ protecting him?
GALLOWAY
Ry saying he was back at her
husband's house by eleven o
on the night of the murder.
ock
CLOSE SHOT ELSA
She looks wildly at Bannister - sees no hope there evs
CLOSE SHOT BANISTER
He says nothing»
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550
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560
THREE SHOT GALLOWAY, JUDGE, ELSA
JUDGE
The witness may answers
GALLOWAY
Let me put the question this way,
Mrs» Bannister - The defendant
while working es wt chauffeur
has on more than one oecasion
kissed yout
CLOSEUP ELSA
ELSA
(almost eagerly)
Yes!
CLOSE SHOT BANNISTER PION
He segs in his chaire
CLOSE SHOT MICHEL REACTION
REACTION SHOT COURTROOM
TWO SHOT ELSA ..ND GALLOY
GALLOWAY
And that's why Michael didn't
leave as he at first intended,
isn't it?
ELSA
I don't knows
GALLOWAY
Well, I would have stayed!
FULL SHOT COURTROOM
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555
556
557
558
559
560
A laugh goes up from the gallery, but Calloway isn't laughe
ing himself. He plunges one CAMBRA DOLLIES IN to MEDIUM
SHOT GALLO
GALLOWAY (Cont'a)
That's why 3
about the
your lover
uu Lied to the police
rime he got back to the
house? You wanted to cover up for561
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564
565
566
867
568
CLOSSUP ELSA
ELSA
(scarcely breathing)
He was beck before elevene I know =~
I looked at the clock.
THO SHOT GALLOWAY .ND ELSA
GALLOWAY
Remember you're under oath!
ELSA
He was back before eleven ess
CLOSEUP ELSA
ELSA (Cont'a)
se You don't like the truth because
it means he couldn't have been down
at Wall Street the night Grisvy was
murdered -- ind he wasn't!
TIGHT TWO SHOP GALLOWAY AND ELSA
GALLOY
(coming close to her)
Mrs. Bannister, do you know the
laws in this state against perjury?
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL
He grips his chair with both hands.
CLOSEUP ELSA
ELSA
(flaring)
Yes!
CLOSEUP GALLOWAY
GALLOw.y
But you admit he kissed you ==
several time
282 =~
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM
GALLOWAY (Cont ta)
Thank you, Mrs. Bannister, Your
witness, Nre Bamistere
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564,
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566
567
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570
FADE
INTs
S71
S72
CONTINUED:
Bannister rises painfully and limps over to the witness
stand.
CLOSEUP BANNISTER
He starts to speak to Eisa, then changes his mind. He
looks at her for a vhile. Then:
RANNISTER
No questions.
ON JUDGE'S GAVEL
IT COMES DOWN ON THE LENS, BLACKING OUT THE SCREEN oe
FADE OUT.
IN:
JATL = THB VISITOR'S GALLERY - DAY.
Elsa and Michael are looking at each other through the
heavy wire screens She's veiled.
ELSA
I shouldn't come here. It would
be awful for you if I'm recognized.
MICHAEL
Your husband doesn't think I ve
much of a chance, does he?
EBA
Whatever else ho is, Harry's e worder=
ful lawyer. You ought to trust hin,
Michaele He says you told hiza
wild story =--
MICHAEL
About Grisby paying me five thousand
dollars to make believe I'd killed
him? Well, he did.
OVER SHOULTER OF [Link] FAVORING sbsi
ELSA
But he said you @id it to help
Grisby get away from his wife.
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874
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577
CONTINUED:
MICHAEL
That's what Grisby told me.
ELSA
But he wasn't married
REVERSE ANGLE FAVORING ICHAEL
MICHAEL
Whet? = But Grisby told me -~
BISA
George had no wifes
MICEAEL
Elsa, d'ya know the truth of it?
Grisby wanted to make it look like
she was'dead, because he wanted to
Kill somedoiy else. He knew they'd
never suspect him if I cculd prove
I'd killed him -= accidentally, of
course, that ho was already murdered
when ho himself was actually committing
a murders
CLOSEUP EISA
BISA
George Grisby?
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
That's right, Grisby»
CLOSEUP ELSA
ELSA
Michael, what aro you trying to
tell me?
ICHAEL
‘The truth.
ELS\
Did you kill Broome, Michael?
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
He stares at here
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873
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575
576
577577 CONTINUED:
ELSA 0.8. (Cont'd)
Please don't be afraid to tell mae
I don't care, I just want to knows
578 CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(slowly)
I never should have let you lie
about the time I got to the garage.
You shouldn't have lied about being
in the house» TI shouldn't have
let yous Now you think everything's
a lie.
ELSA
Michael, no matter what's
I love you.
hapre ned ~
MICHIEL
Grisby killed Broome. He was going
to kill your husbande
579 CLOSEUP BISA
EISA
Harry! That's fiossible! What
could he possibly gain from it?
580 CLOSEUP MICHiEL
MICKAEL
There's something called partnership
insurances.+«Never mind, if you don't
believe it, the jury never wills
5681 TWO SHOT MICHAEL axD =LSA
ELSA
But_where was Ge Georne goinn to go?
Where could he
HICHEL
He said he was going to the South Seas.
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580
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CLOSEUP
TWO SHOT
CLOsEUP
CLOSEUP
She looks at him not believing @ word he says.
uIsA
ELSA
The South Seas} Way the whole
thing's fantastic, Michael,
you haven't told this to anyone
> have you?
MICHAEL AND ELSA
EBA (Cont'd)
You mustn't. It's fhe worst
possitle thing you could say.
MICHAEL
MICHEL
But it's my only chance. Sure
and all I was supposed to dowas
to fire a shot into the send.
That's all I did. And now they're
trying to send me to the chair for
it. For a shot in the sani!
ELSA
DISSOLVE
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COURTROOM ~ DAY
Int.
586
587
588
590
591
592
593
MEDIUM SHOT THE JURY BOX 586
It is ompty.
LONG SHOT THE COURTROOM 587
A tonso silonco waits ovor tho room.
TO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 588
Bannistor flanks thy dofondant on ono sido and a Guard is on
tho other, Bannistor's pill bottle is on the table wiia a
glass of water.
MICHAEL
How long do thoy take usually?
BARRISTER
You can't ever toll about’ a jury.
MEDIUM SHOT SPECTATORS 589
Sowing, rosding papers and oating sandwichos....Somo h: ids
aro turned toward the jury rc
CLOSE sO? MICHAEL 590
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 5oL
His fingers drum on tho table...
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 592
Shots orying.
MEDIUM SHOT BANNISTER AND MICHAEL 593
BANNISTI
By tho way, what did Elsa havo
“to say for horsolf?ecs.
Wichaol looks at him quickly.
BANNISTER (cont. )
ino I wouldn't find
0 to sco your
Or did you im
out that sho
MICHAEL
She askod mo to trust you.594
595
596
THE COURTROOM
604
laa
CLOSEUP BANNISTER 594
BANNISTER
(Looking at him closcly)
But you don't. Why not?
8
CLOSSUP . MICHAEL 5
MICHAEL
you wanted u2 to
Bocauge I Ime
bo convictud.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 596
BAMIISTER
(very suayo, almost
tondorly)
Michacl, you forgot
Do you imagino that I
record 30d? This
caso of its kind I over lo
at
YY ropr cation.
A sorios of shots, Tho idlo gesture: of tho gallory grow
more subdued, The prossure of waitins hangs hoavy ovor tho
POM. ve
MEDIUM SHOT THE DOOR TO TSE JURY ROC: 603
Tho Jury files in. CAMERA TOLLG!S TH JURY as thoy tako
thoir placos in the bex. (Tho above is intor-eut with tho
following :)
THO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 604
‘STER (CONT)
However -+ now thet it's too lato
for you to do anything about it, 111
bo frank with you. This is onc caso
I've njoyod losing.
BAY
MICHAEL
Suro, end that's why you dofonded mo,
isn't it? You wantua’to bo sure I'd lose.
BANNISTER
You could bo right, but thorots nothing
you could do about it now. Youtro going
to burnesese605
606
607
608
609
610
CLOSEUP BANNISTER
BANNISTER (CONT)
I'm going to coms to see you in the
death-house, Michael, every day.
Our little visits will be fun---
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
. BAKNISTER (CONT) 0.8.
I'm going to ask for a stay of execution.
And I really hope it will be granted.
I want you to live as long as possible --
before you die =~ You know why I want that,
don't you, Michael?
TIGHT TYO SHOT MICHAEL AND BAINISTER
: HICHAEL
Because youtre the
T_ know
killer ---
MEDIUM SHOT THE COURTROOM
The clerk steps forward.
THE CLERK
(to the Jury)
Have you agreed upon a verdict?
CLOSE S*oT THE JURY
The Foreman rises, very puffed up with his own importance.
THE FOREMAN
We have.
VERY TIGHT TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER
Micheel is staring into the lawyer's oyes.
ICHAEL
(with very quiet,
but terrible
intensity)
You killed Grisby!
THE CLERK 0.8.
The prisoner will rise!
Michael stands up.
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608,
609
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615
616
617
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620
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CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 611
CLERK 0.8.
The jury will lock upon the prisoner.
The prisoner will look upon the jury.
CLOSE SHOT JURY . 612
CLERK
How say you, guilty or not guilty?
‘The foreman clears his throat again.
GLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 613
He stands tense as the foreman pronounces him:
FOREMAN 0.8.
Guilty....
CLOSE SHOT REACTION: BANNISTER 614
CLOSE SHOT REACTION: GALLOWAY (D.A.)
CLOSE SHOT REACTION: ELSA 616
CLOSE SHOT REACTION: GOLDIEZ AWD JAYR (Michael's old
shipmates)
MEDIUM SHOT REACTION: SPECTATORS AN’) REPORTERS IN COURT 616
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 619
Her eyos, swimaing with tears, are signalling to Michael.
CLOSE SPOT MICHAEL 620
He follows her look to the bottle on the table before him.
Then, as her meening sinks into his brain, he looks back at
her, quite a now expression in his ey:
CLOSE UP ELSA 621
Almost imperceptibly sho rods.622
623
624
to
628
629
630
631
652
633
147
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 622
He looks back at tho bottle. Then with a quick movement he
seizos it, dumps out the pills. Before he can be stopped he
swallows most of them.
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM 623,
TFEN: A SERIES OF svoTs 624
to
All hell breaks loose.
628
SPLOTATORS (ad 1ib)
Hets taken poisons
Tried to beat the death rap.
That proves he's guilty.
He's comitted suicide.
etc.
Reporters make a mad ‘dash for their phones. Turmoil. The
judge bangs on the bench for order. Guards rush towards
Iichael,
CLOSE sho? ELSA 629
She rises.
MEDIUM SHOT HICHSEL AND BANNISTER 650
Michael sits dazed in his chair, Bannister and guards stand
over hin,
MEDIUM SHOT COURTROOM 651
Spectators strain to sec what's happoning.
gUDGE
Clear the court! Gcurt is in
recess! Take the prisoner to
my chambers,
The guards lift Michael out of the chair, into the judge's
chambers.
NEDIUH SHOT ELSA 632
Sho moves weakly out the door,
MEDIU SHOT COURTROOM 633
Confusion,148
634 INT. PRESS ROOM 634
to A quick series of reaction shots as reporters call their to
638 papers announcing that Michael on hearing the death 638
verdict committod suicide.
INT. JUDGE'S CHAYBERS
639 Hichaol lies on the couch in the judgots chambors. A 639
guaré is beside him. Another guard onters.
SECOND GUARD
Just spoke to the doctor. He says
keop him on his foot - koop him
moving till he gots here. Onco tho
guy falls asleep he's through.
Tho second guard exits. Tho first guard is left with Mlchacl,
He studies him for a moment, thon helps him to his foot.
FIRST GUARD
C'mon ~- Dee says you'vo got to
koop movinge
640 CLOSE SuOT MICHAEL 640
Dazed, ho stands on his foot and walks up and down in the
small anteroom. As he moves his head seems to clear.
641 TO SHOT GUARD AND MICHAEL 641
Without warning Michacl suddenly swings around and hits tho
guard, who crumples and falls wiconscious to the floor.
CAMERA PANS MICHAEL, to a side door of the judge's chambers,
He exits.
INT. CORRIDOR IN THE COURT oF GANER
642 TRUCKING SHOT 642
Quickly Wichael closes the door behind him and starts down
the corridor. The front entrance to court is hoavily
guarded so thero's no possible way for him to got out.
ci DOR FRESH ANGLE
645 Goldic and Jako. sooing Michaol, sot up a diversion for tho
bonofit of the cops at tho other ond of the hall.
GOLDIE
Thore ho goes. *
TAKE
This way! Hurry up! You can
still catch him,644
645
646
647
648
649
650
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MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL IN THE CORRIDOR 644
He notices across the way anothor courtroom where another
trial is in progross -- He steps outsido the door,
CLOSE SHOT JURY ROOM 645
Nichacl stands undecided, sces a guard, his back turned,
opening a door marked "Jury Room,
MEDIUN SHOT MICH&EL AND MEMBERS OF THE JUPY OF THE GRAND 646
LARCENY TRIAL,
Twolvo mon and women jurors file out of the room and Michaol
finds himsolf in their midst. Tho guard addrossos then.
GUARD
(mochanically)
Stay togethor now while I escort
you to dinner. Plcaso do not taik
about the caso outside tho jury 1aome
Tho judge hopos you arrive at a vordict
as soon as possiblo.
MTCHAEL 647
TRUCKING SHOT MEN AND WOMEN OF THE JURY A}
ae follows next
The guard loads thom down tho corridor. W.
toa little old lady.
THE OLD LADY
(whispora to iichaol)
Ho's too nico looking to have stoton
all that jowolry. It's such a rospons-
Ability knowing what to do,don't you think?
Wichaol morcly nods.
CLOSE s"O?r GUARD 48
The guard turns around and looks towards Michaol,
GUARD
Hoy, you!
CLOSE SHOT MiCHAEL 640
Eo stops abruptly, stands “rozon, as tho guard walks towards
hin.
AND Mid 650
chacl and solemly studios hia for a
TWO SHOT GUAT
The guard roaches K
socond,150
650 CONTINUED : 650
GUARD
You were told not to talk about
tho case. Wow, don't let it happon
agin, All right, now keep moving!
Vichacl manages a smile of apclogy as the guard continues
to lead thom down tho corridor and out the front entrance.
SIDS
EXT. COURT OF GENERAL
651 Led by tho guard, the jury start down the steps on their 651
way to dinner. liichael slips away during tho confusion,
Elsa is on tho other side of the street. She sees Michacl,
652 = TRUCKING ‘SHOT MICHAEL 652
Hichaol is walking -~ tuming back to s00 if he's followed,
Ho is -- by Hlsa- Sho hurrios trying to catoh up with him,
Dazod by tho drug, scereoly mowing vhat hets doing, Michacl
moves fastor trying to oludo hor.
[EDIUH SHOT sUBYAY 653,
A crowd of pyoplo aro coming out. Michael slips arong thom
and walks down to the trains.
653
INT, SUBWAY PLATFORN
654 Michael slips through the turnstile and enters the plat- 654
form, The train is just leaving the station, The crowds
clbew into the train, pushing fellow passengers and Nichaol
in with then,
iAY_ PLAPPORE
655 Elsa comes out of tho crowd, seus Hichaol, runs after 655
him.....The subway doors closc in her face and the train
pulls away.
AY TRAN
656 The jampacked train leavos the stabion gathering spood for 656
tho long run to 125th St. Passongors sottlo down into thoir
own small private worlds.
657 = CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 657
Ho tightons his clutch on an overhead strap -- sways back
and forth -- swoats ss.isl
Ind. CAR
658 MEDIUM SHOT 658,
659
660
to
665
Passengers building up their worlds behind nowspapers, maga=
zines, behind closed cyes, or staring et tho various cclorod
show cards that border the car.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 659
Fighting dosporatoly to keep from falling asleop, he tyes
to focus on the ads ~~
CLOSE SHOT ADS IN THE CAP SERIES OF sxoTS 660
Through Michacl's oyos, tho pestors socr. to chango. f to
girl in a bathing suit suddenly bocomes Zlsa, the man 665
noxt to hor advertising the razor becomes Bannister, ‘he
man in a apeodboat becomes Grisby. Each ad becomes sc in-
cident in Michael's ming, leading up to the murder. A vubway
sign streaks over the scene with a roar, then stops, v breting
quecrly,
‘CONDUCTOR'S VOICE 0.8,
205th Street. Youtll have to get
out buddy, This is the end of the linc.
Bannister's face bolts into tho aperture. (Distortion . ons)
BANETST!
(ochoing the Conductor's words)
The ond of tho linc....This is the
end of the linc, Michaol,
His face is replaced by tho floor of the garago....The pilo
of monoy swirls in a crazy windsee.
ELSA'S VOICE 0.8.--(normal quality)
Oh, Michael, I found youl I took tho
next train just on the chance you'd ride
this far --
GRISBY'S VOI!
(repeating the words)
eeeeeTho ond of tho Lincesers
BROOHE'S YOICE
. (filtor and ocho --vory
Tho end of the Line.
E (echo chamber)
‘ar away)
Over the abovo we also hear the perfectly Literal sound of a
nickel being droppod into a pay telophono and a numbor being
dialed, £6 the samo momont tho whirl: money changes to a
whirling phono dialssess
ELSA'S VOICE
Hollo -- Hollo, this is Krs. Bannister -.
Mrs. Harry Bannister ---
Hor voice FADES as the SCREEN goos black.
FADE OUT:152
FADE IN:
IND. ORAZY HOUSE - NIGHT
666,
Michael wakes up to find himself alon» in one of the 686
queorest rooms evor built by man... The floor is raked
at an angle of the shoorcst vortigo, tae walls end coiling
arc puro "Cabinet of Dr, Caligari"... Ho risos from tho
little pallet that's boon fixod for him, blinks his cyos,
shakos his head and wonders -- as wo «o ~~ where in hell
ho is, For a fact, Holl itself could:.'t bo a stranger place
to lock at. Ho staggors over to a co:k-eyod door, and
stumbles out. ‘
INT. HALIWAY CRAZY HOUSE - NIGHT
667
A corridor like the corrifors in dreams; a sloped tunnel 667
disbolically gimmiked to bump and trin the visitor without
morey, Down this terrifying alley Michael makos his painful,
bowlldered way,
A spring under his foot snaps a pancl opon with a suddon
squeak as shocking as a scroam in the night -~ a staring
corpse falls out at him. |
Tho head of the corpso falls off the shoulders and bobbles
hideously on a grotesque coil of wire.... A second look
shows Michael the dust on the wax fignre, and, as he approaches
it, his weight scts off a further mechanism: the dummy bolts
pack into the wall with an ochoing bonk of timber, there is
a rattle of countorweights and the devfoning complaint of
tortured, rusty metal as the floor itself tilts slowly down
and Gown and down.
Michael loses his footing and plummets into the blacimess
toward the chomping jaws of a dragon. The apparatus is very
nicoly calculated and the gore-stainod teeth grind and crash
shut a tight second after Micheel has rocketed through the
Holl-mouth into the woodon gullet of the mad Leviathan.
INT. ANOTHER ROOM IN THE CRAZY HOUSE
668
EXT, CRAZY HOUSE - NIGHT
669
Distortion mirrors, @ whole holl of thom... A monstrous 666
portrait gallory out of bedlam. Michecl soos himsolf (in-
sanely multipliod) as a scurrying humuneuli, e spider, all
logs and cyes -- sees himself dwarfish, distended... thin
as doath and fat as sin. He chooses one of sevoral doors
and finds the open air.
669
We realize now, if Michael doesn't that hots found his way
somehow into the bleak acreage of a deserted amusement park.669
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Rides and concessions are boarded up for tho winter, Lacking
the sounds and music and people, with the color and smell
of carnival suspended until spring, a dreary gloom hangs
over "Tho Palisados," -- a spooky calm worse than a morgue!s,
It's colder than the gravo out hére, lonejier than the
omptigst valley on tho moon ... a voice broaks the stillness:
THE VOICE
(0.56)
Michacl| Michaels
Ho turns and soes:
MEDIUM SHOT ELSA 670
It was sho who called,
MEDIUM SHOT BASE OF ROLLER COASTER 671
It's Elsa -- sho calls out in a sharp whisper:
ELSA
Don't stand out there, Michsel,
You'll be seen, Go back,
MEDIUM SHOT MICHAEL 672
Micheél dazed, holds his place in the center of the
dosortod mid-way.
MICHAEL
Go back == ?
ELSA
Tore. Where you came fror.
Michael looks behind him -- sees the mammoth, grinning
masks, -~ the sign:
-- "THE CRAZY HOUSE" --
ELSA
(continuing)
Through the rear -- this wey,
11] show you, Hurry.
He moves over to her, slowly.
ELSA
(continuing)
Bessie says ‘a car's just cone into
tho park.
BESSIE'S VOICE 0.8.
It may bo the police,CONTINUED:
Bessio steps into the scono behind Elsa.
BESSIE
One of moh boys works hyah as a night
watchnan, It's a fine place to hide
since it's closed up. So when Miz
Bannister phonod moe, we come and got
in his car and brung ph out while
yuh was sloepin'.
CAMERA DOLLIES with Bossie as during the above «
Michaol and Elsa under tho Roller Coaster and ar
the Crazy House.
BESSIE (CONT.)
Botter get inside now till we
seo who's comin'.
Bessie gocs, Elsa and Michael pass a brick bull
wo road a sign bege
"BUSINESS OFFICE
PALISADES AMUSEMENT-PARK"
They go through the back entrance into the Crazy
INT, CRAZY HOUSE
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MAZE OF MIRRORS
(No distortion mirrors here, this is tae rogule:
maze, gaffed so tho suckor's bound to loso his +
cones in to find a hundred Elsas waiting for hin
himself, reflected as many times... moving up tr
he speaks it is with an o@d, new note of coldnes:
MICHAEL
Why are you here?
ELSA
Bessie brought mo. She tolé mo where
they'd hidden you, Oh, Michsel, --
I want to be with you no m ctor where
you are, Put your arms arcand mo,
please Michael, -- I want your love,
REVERSE ANGLE
The door. Bessic rushos ins...
BESSIE
It's him, It's Mr. Bannister! Hido
Mizz Elsal -- both of youl... Hide
where ho can't find you, or he'll kill
ya sure!
(to Elsa breathlessly)
He mist!a followed mo when I brought
Re aa.
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‘and behind
ing and”
House.
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carnival
y). Michael
He soos
ner, Whon
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EXT. AMUSEMENT PARK
675 FULL DOWN SHOT ANGLING THROUGH ROLLER COASTER 675
A shadow, long, black and misshapen announcos the arrival of
Bannister. Ho limps into scene CAMERA PANNING him tovard
Crazy Housce
676 MED, CLOSE SHOT THE DOORWAY 676
Michael appears ‘and stands waiting for Bannister.
MICHAEL
it's me you're lookin! for.
I thine
677 —- REVERSE ANGLE BANNISTER (AMUSEMENT PARK B.G.) err
The little lawyer stops, leans on his cane, gasping [Link]-
fully from tho exertion of his wallc.
5 BANFISTER
No, Ihf not looking for you.
678 TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND BANNISTER 678,
BANSISTER (CONT, )
But since I'm here: --
(he grins iro:deally at the
Crazy House behind’ Michael)
---May I come in?
Kichaol doosntt spoak or move.
BANNISTER (CONTD. )
You're pot vory hospitable,-- or can
it bo youtre afraid? ... There's no
need tobe. I have no fircarms, I'm
alone, and I'm a harmless crippleses
Michael steps aside, -- Bannister entors.
INT. CRAZY HOUSE - PALISADES AKUSERENT PARK
679 TO SHOT MICHAEL /ND BANNISTER 679
BANNISTER
Now -- Where's my wifo?... I'm
not going to turn you in, Michaels
680 CLOS: MICHAEL REACTION 680
681
681 CLOSEUP BANNISTER
BANKISTER (CONTD)
I told you, Michacl, I want to keep
you alive - Just as long as possible.
fiinter's coming - It's going to be nico and
cold out hero, I'il stop by in tho evenings
afker work and wateh you shiver.682
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CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 682
MICHAEL
(finally: answoring)
You framed mo, why aron't you
satisfied with that?
THO SHOT 683
BANNISTER
I'm novor satisfied -- 1’m what thoy
call the jealous husband.
(His voice 1s raised abovo
its normal Level; Bannistor
knows Elsa's hiding sonovhero
near, and what ho says now is
for her to hear:)
If my wifo couldn't love me, I wanted
to be sure she wasn't capable of lovo.
That isn't much, but I'm nob very well,
you knov, and I’ simply had to have thet.
You took’ it away from mo. Not hor lovo ~
there wasn't any - just my poor 1ittlo
hopo that Elsa could nover truly love
anything -- oxcept monoye I think sho
loves you, Black Irish. I think sho really
does... Bat I know Elsa ~ shetli always
be trus to my monoy, Some day, of course,
she'll kill me for it, I know she will---
Ana yot T can't protoot mysolf, Thore
are women who do that to men. Look what
sho did to Grisby, -- he didn't have a chances
MICHAEL
(a donb bursting in his brain)
Is that another way you'ro tryin! to
torture me -~- Tellin! me that?
BANNISTER
Torture? Torture you? How do you think
I felt whon I loarned she'd persuaded
George to murder no ity God, how do
you think he folt?... What was it like
for George when he found her there in
Vall Street waiting for hin with a gun??
CLOSE SHOP ELSA 684
ELSA
What's it like for you, Horry?
She's standing in the door, A gun in her hand, pointed
at Bennister, He looks at hor -~684
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BANNISTER
Hello, lovor.
{a long silonce)
You're going to kill mo, too?
We can sce him finding the answor,
BANNISTER (cont!é:
Becauso I Imow about you - Lover’
I won't tell anybody - and Michsol
doosn't count.
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 685
She shoots.
MED, SHOT BANNISTER 686
AND, IN THE HALL OF MIRRORS MANY OF HIS REFLECTIONS
Mirrors shatter and crash, destroying many imagos,. Tho
rest of the Sannisters - (we can't tell which is the real
ono) stand facing Elsa, - calmly facing he, with a curious
relaxed kind of dauntlossnoss.
CLOSE SHOT ELSA a7
Madness in her oyes, Unable to docide whee Bannister
is, she looks from image to imags, then shoots again,
twice, and very quickly.
THE MAZE OF MIRRORS ” 688
Kore of Bannister's images smash to plecoe -- but he
still stands.
BANNISTER
Thoro's only one bullot left.
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 689
BANNISTER'S YOICE
Why don't you save it, lover?
CLOSE SHOT ELSA 690
Sho fires, Thore 1s no answoring crash of glass, We hear
the sound of a cane falling to the floor, thon a body-~
MED, SHOT BANNISTER 691
He lios dead.692
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CLOSE SHOT ELSA 692
She stares for a long silence, seeing a great deal of
Hamister or secing nothing of him--it's impossible to
say which. Then she looks quickly to Michael.
CLOSE SHOT MICHAEL 693
His face is a mask,
TWO SHOP MICHAEL AND ELSA 694
ELSA
I couldn't help it.
Michael grabs her-wtears the gun out of her fingers,--and
throws her away from him... She stumbles and fails,--lies
on the floor weeping.
ELSA (cont'd)
Icouldn't help it, Michael...
Michael says nothing, shows nothing.
ELSA (cont'd)
(with great pathos)
I couldn't let him say those
things in front of you.
‘MICHAEL
(very quietly)
There wouldn't be much point
in killing him if he was
lying.
CLOsaUP ELSA 695
A wretched figure huddled against the tin wall.
ELSA
Oh, Michael!--Michael!
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MED. SHOT
Michael turns away to the dead Bamister. Her looks follows
his.
ELSA 0.S.
(shouting)
You've got the gunt697
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703
MED. CLOSE SHOT ELSA
ELSA (cont'd)
Shoot me if you think it's true,
what he told youl--T don't want
to livel
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
Michael picks up the gun. Looks at it thoughtfully.
OVER SHOULDER MICHAEL - FAVORING ELSA
MICHAEL
Do you. really want to die?
She turns the tearful face of martyrdom toward the m:
of the gun.
REVERSE ANGLE FAVORING MICHAEL
MICHAEL (cont'd)
There is another bullet, you know --
CLOSEUP ELSA
Elsa jumps to her feet; with a yell 1
ELSA
Nol He said --
CLOSEUP MICHAEL
MICHAEL
(gently)
He waa lyin! about that. If you
missed the fourth shot, he might
have saved himself, He gambled
on your losing count. Sure, it
was one of his tricks. He did
it with mirrors.
TWO SHOT MICHAEL AND ELSA
ea fishwifet:
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Elsa wears quite a different face again, She's thinking
furiously about that bullet...
MICHAEL (cont'd)
(reveating the question,
the words sharp as razors)
Are you sure you want to die?
Now she's very frightened...









