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This document discusses the consequences of permissive parenting. It argues that allowing children to do whatever they want and buy whatever they ask for without discipline or boundaries could have negative long-term effects. Specifically, it claims that children raised this way may grow up to be self-centered adults with little consideration for others and a lack of self-control, impulsiveness, and difficulty making wise decisions. The document concludes that in order to help children develop self-control and respect for others, parents need to set clear expectations and say no to children's demands when necessary rather than constantly giving in to them.

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Ielts Writing Task 2-Sample Answer (Band 9) - 7 (New

This document discusses the consequences of permissive parenting. It argues that allowing children to do whatever they want and buy whatever they ask for without discipline or boundaries could have negative long-term effects. Specifically, it claims that children raised this way may grow up to be self-centered adults with little consideration for others and a lack of self-control, impulsiveness, and difficulty making wise decisions. The document concludes that in order to help children develop self-control and respect for others, parents need to set clear expectations and say no to children's demands when necessary rather than constantly giving in to them.

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  • IELTS Writing Task 2-Sample Answer (Band 9)
  • Vocabulary for Essay

IELTS Writing Task 2-SAMPLE ANSWER(BAND 9)-7

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their
children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What
consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get
older?

-It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their
children. In my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a
range of negative long-term consequences.

If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a


certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I
have learnt that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is
important to be able to say no to children when they misbehave or try to push
against these boundaries. This is the only way to help young people to regulate
their desires and develop self-control. In my view, parents who do the opposite
and constantly give in to their childrens demands, are actually doing more
harm than good. They are failing their children rather than being kind to them.

The children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several
negative personality traits. The first and most obvious danger is that these
children will become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the
feelings or needs of others. One consequence of such an attitude could be that
these adults are unable to work successfully in teams with other colleagues. A
second negative trait in such people could be impulsiveness. A person who has
never lived with any boundaries is likely to lack the patience to carefully
consider options before making decisions. This may lead, for example, to
compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity.

In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and


respect for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style
supports this objective.

(283 words, band 9)

IELTS AZErbaijan TEAM


EXTRA:Here's the 'band 7-9' vocabulary from the essay Wednesday:

-overly permissive -tend to spoil their children

-parenting style -a range of negative long-term consequences

-to raise respectful and well-behaved children

-a certain amount of discipline -Having worked with children myself,.....

-clear expectations and boundaries -to push against these boundaries

-to regulate their desires -develop self control

-constantly give in to their childrens demands -doing more harm than


good

-failing their children

-indulgent or lenient parents -negative personality traits

-The first and most obvious danger -self-centred adults

-show little consideration for the feelings or needs of others

-One consequence of such an attitude

-unable to work successfully in teams

-impulsiveness

-lack the patience

-to carefully consider options

-compulsive shopping

-unwise financial decisions

-criminal activity

-I do not believe that..... supports this objective

Notice that this is all "topic vocabulary", which contributes to the 'task
response' and 'lexical resource' scores. The words and phrases above are the
key reason why this essay would easily achieve a band 9.

IELTS Writing Task 2-SAMPLE ANSWER(BAND 9)-7 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some
EXTRA:Here's the 'band 7-9' vocabulary from the essay Wednesday: -overly permissive -tend to spoil their childr

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