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Writing Test
36 MINUTES, 44 QUESTIONS
‘Turn to Section 2 of your answer sheet to answer the questions in this section.
Peer
Each passage below is accompanied by a number of questions. For some questions, you will consider how the
Passage might be revised to improve the expression of ideas. For other questions, you will consider how the
passage might be edited to correct errors in sentence structure, usage, or punctuation. A passage or a question
may be accompanied by one or more graphics (such as a table or graph) that you will consider as you make
revising and editing decisions,
‘Some questions will direct you to an underlined portion of a passage. Other questions will direct you to a location
ina passage or ask you to think about the passage as a whole,
‘After reading each passage, choose the answer to each question that most effectively improves the quality of
\riting in the passage or that makes the passage conform to the conventions of standard written English. Many
questions include a "NO CHANGE” option. Choose that option if you think the best choioe is to leave the relevant
Portion of the passage as its.
Questions 1-11 are based on the following passage.
A) NO CHANGE
Relatively Speaking: Einstein’s Theory of Experience 2) sure, id ease the)
©) further, but because these
Albert Einstein, in his work The Meaning of Relativity, D) further because these
explains that what we individually experience is aranged ina gh
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) from
remember are arranged as happening ether “earlier” or “ater,” ©) about
D) than
series of events. In
is series, the single moments that we
two time signatures which we cannot break down Ml further,
these words do not have concrete, universal definitions.
‘Therefore, each of us as an individual experiences an
‘or subjective time: what is considered earlier to me might be
different Ill over what is considered earlier to you,
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i Unfortunately for us, Einstein suggest
associate numbers with the events, so that a greater number
Wi being associated with a later event and a smaller number
with an earlier one (eg. the 27th event in my day was dinner,
while the 3rd event was breakfast). However, he ultimately
concludes thatthe “nature of this association may be quite
meaningless.” This is because the number associations would
bbe different for different people. Ill For example, dinner might.
be the 34th thing you do ina day, or, ifyou ae les inclined to
be active, the 7th thing
Which choice most smoothly and effectively introduces the
discussion of Einstein's ideas about understanding time?
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) Because who knows why, Einstein suggests trying to
associate numbers with the events
©) Inan attempt to understand time more objectively,
Einstein suggests trying to associate numbers with the
events
D) He found this issue to be bothersome, and so Einstein
suggests trying to associate numbers with the events
a
A) NO CHANGE
B) is
©) are
D) are being
a
‘The writer is considering deleting the underlined sentence.
Should the writer make this deletion?
A) Yes, because it provides an example that contradicts the
previous sentence.
B) Yes, because it provides an example that is unrelated to
the previous sentence.
©) No, because it provides an example that further explicates
the previous sentence,
1D) No, because it provides an example that is a necessary
‘counterargument to the previous sentence.
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‘Thus, we have highly individuated experiences. Through
talking to each other we can, to a certain extent,
compare
them, We can come to understand that some of our “sense
perceptions,” as Einstein calls them (which are what we
‘eel and what we experience), can correspond to others’
perceptions. But some don’t match up quite so well. We tend
to believe in shared experiences Ill easier, and believe that
common feeling is more real than differentiated feelings. This
tendency Ml sation or emotion fee! more
impersonal, more scientific. Einstein suggests that we envision
life experience asa clock: we can all experience and relate to
the mathematical, scientific turning of seconds into minutes,
‘minutes into hours, and hours into days. il However, how.
sual i is compete
unique experience, not of science,
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) easy
C) more easly
D) more easy
a
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) make a given sensation or emotion feels
(C) makes given sensations or emotions feel like
1D) makes a given sensation or emotion fel like
go
The writer would like to conclude the paragraph by
suggesting that time may not be as definite as Einstein
described. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?
A) NO CHANGE
B) Time is measurable, immutable, and shared by everyone
across the world
©) However, time is also important to other scientific fields:
geology, archeology, and meteorology, just to name a few.
D) Unfortunately, many cultures are resistant to adherit
rigidly timed schedules.
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[1] The cloc, then, represents for Einstein the “epitome |
of our experiences.” [2] Itcan describe our shared experience, A) NO CHANGE
B) whats’
but it can go no further. [3] He states that he is “convinced ©) whats being
D) what's
thatthe philosophers have had a harmful effect upon the
progress of scientific thinking in removing certain fundamental A NOCHANGE
concepts from the domain of empiricism, where they are under 8) not only into rigid structure; however, also into
© not into rigid structures only but also into
‘our control, where we can observe and determine them.” [4] ) not only into rigid structures, but also into
Granted, by philosophizing, we lose Il whats real and in front oO
of our faces, [5] We want to rationalize what we find and apply ‘The writer plans to add the following sentence to this
paragraph,
it to our lives. [6] We want our experiences to be made Ill not.
i But what good is science without philosophical
conly into rigid structures, and into a seemingly irrational bank thought?
of fetngs. [7] We are human, afte al ;
‘To make this paragraph most logical, the sentence shouldbe
placed
A) after sentence I
B) after sentence 2.
©) after sentence 4,
D) after sentence 7,
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Questions 12-22 are based on the following passage
and supplementary material.
No Exam Left Behind
fe today is tered with exams. From the day we are born,
ur progress is measured a nearly regular intervals, moments
when we find ourselves trapped in a chilly hall, our bodies tense
with nervousness, mouths rigidly tight, hearts beating fst. We
sit at desk, closed booklets before us, pens gripped in our hands
For many of ll we, an exam is a torture far worse than anything
invented by the Spanish Inquisition,
‘Thankfully, the Inquisition Hil comprises a relatively bre
part of history. This contemporary form of insitutionally-
sanctioned torture, however, refuses to go away. A recent study
indicates thatthe average number of exams taken since 2005 has
i increased steadily and will continue to rise in 2020. Social
scientists and educator alike condemn this tren, eitically
citing government programs such as Former president George
W. Bush's “No Child Left Behind” Act of 2001, Il which.
resulted ina marked increase inthe number of standardized tests
axiministered,
Exam Taking Trends
as
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Average Number of Exams Taken
1995 2000 2005 2010 21s
a
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) them
©) us
D) him or her
B
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) is comprising
) had comprised
D) comprise
Which choice best interprets the data in the graph?”
A) NO CHANGE,
B) plateaued but
C) decreased but
D) steadily risen and
o
Which choice most accurately interprets the data in the
raph?
A) NO CHANGE
'B) which resulted ina sight increas inthe number of
standardized tests administered.
©) which resulted in a marked decrease in the number of
standardized tests administered
) which resulted in no net change in the number of
standardized tests administered
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In this vein, author Michael Morpurgo has asserted that
“One of the great failings of our education system is that we tend
to focus on those who are succeeding on exams, and there are
plenty of them. But the students we should be looking at—and
1 lot more urgently—are those who fail.” He lll puts his finger
‘accurate on the limitation of any examination system. If you
pass an exam, you are eligible forthe next step in ie: if you
fail then too bad! You're finished, and your future is apparently,
terminated
Of course, that i a sweeping statement, We all now and
admire people who have been successful in lif, despite
Wi shee failures inthe exam hall, For example, many of our best
‘actors left school without any success in the exam stakes. As
revered actress Edith Evans once said, “You don't take exams
for acting: you take courage.” She is right. One of life's major
ironies Hil are that many ofthe great actors, and businessmen,
‘and authors, and pop singers, who never made it into universities,
because they failed Ill exams—are offered honorary degrees by
universities in recognition oftheir successes. Do they despise
o
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) accurately puts his finger
©) is accurate and putting
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‘A) NO CHANGE
By his or her
©) they're
D) its
‘A) NO CHANGE
B) will be
© being
Dy is
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‘A) NO CHANGE
B) exams: are
© exams, are
D) exams are
fo
“The writer wants to conclude the paragraph by suggesting
that the practice of bestowing these honorary degrees is
flawed, Which choice best aecomplishes this goal?
A) NO CHANGE
B) Do they despise academia as much as I do?
) Would these people perhaps do beter on exams ifthey
retook them today?
) Am [alone in thinking that ths isa rather condescending
gesture?
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[1] Whether intended or no, there soften an elitism implied
in this system of exams that we enforce at every step of life NO CHANGE,
B) intellectually, economically, socially, and even morally
[21 To some people, letters before or after one’s name suggest that C) intellectually, economically, socially and, even, morally
D) intellectually, economically and socially, and even
‘one has arrived a a level which somehow implies that one i beter ‘morally
intellectuals, economically, socially and even, morally, than
those who have not made the grade. [3] Common sense should tell | THE writer plans to ad the following sentence to this
Paragraph,
us that it isn’t necessarily so, [4] We should not feel bullied and
We are individuals, and each one of us approaches life in