RELATIONSHIPS
An investigation into the effects of single-parent upbringing
on school children in Jamaica
Candidate Name:
Candidate Number:
School: St. Mary Technical High School
Center Number: 100099
Year of Examination: 2022
Teacher’s Name: Miss S. Bennett
Subject: Communication Studies
Theme: Relationships
Territory: Jamaica
Table of Contents
Content Page
Introduction …………………………………………………… 2-3
Preface …………………………………………………………...4
Reflection……………………………….……………………….5-7
Analysis ………………………………………………………….8-9
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Introduction
This research focuses on the theme “Relationship”. The researcher decided to explore
the topic the “effects of single-parenting child upbringing on school children in Jamaica”.
[Link] defines single parenting as a family in which a parent brings up a child or
children alone, without a partner. This research will be conducted in a rural community
Richmond in the Parish of St. Mary
The exposition highlights the possible solutions and effects of single-parent child
upbringings. The researcher’s secondary artefact takes the form of a research article while the
primary method of data collection will be in the form of a questionnaire. The data will be
used in the exposition to treat the theme of this portfolio.
The reflective piece will take the form of a short story entitled “Struggles”. It
illustrates a 5th form boy Tyrone Jackson who is determined to make his mother proud
knowing how hard she has to work to provide for their family. The researcher will use the
formal register, casual register, standard English and creole to achieve her purpose. Dialect
variation and language registers will be analysed in the analysis.
The researcher is currently studying Communication at the CAPE level. Therefore,
this research will assist her academically since she will be able to relate, interact and
communicate with my classmates and teachers effectively about the issue.
The theme relationship peaked her interest because it ties in with the career the
researcher would like to pursue which is a social worker. A social worker is a person who
provides advice, support and resources to families to help solve their problems. Therefore,
this research will help me in the future.
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Seeing that most children in the researcher’s community are raised in a single parent
family, as well as herself, this theme personally interests the researcher.
Teacher’s comments
GENERAL INTRODUCTION 12/12
Theme and Purpose 2/2
Treatment 4/4
Relationship to academic interests 2/2
Relationship to work-related interests 2/2
Relationship to personal interests 2/2
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Preface
Single parent families have become the new norm in our society. Many children in
Jamaica have been raised in a single parent family. The researcher’s reflection will take the
form of a short story entitled “Struggles.” It illustrates a fifth form student who is determined
to turn out to something good in life knowing the struggles his mother faces to provide for
them. The purpose of the reflective piece is to entertain while informing the audience about
the challenges school children who are raised in a single parent family experience.
A story was chosen to bring across the researcher’s purpose because it is easier to
capture “the effects of single-parenting child upbringing on school children in Jamaica”. This
genre was also chosen because I believe that it is the most entertaining medium to bring out
the topic.
The story targets teenagers from a single parent family to show them that they are not
doomed to failure because of their humble beginnings but instead use it as a motivation to go
above and beyond academically. This research will be presented on social media platforms
such as but not limited to Instagram, Facebook and scholarly. These mediums would allow
greater access for the target audience.
Teacher’s comments: 4/4
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Struggles
As Tyrone sat on the veranda of the two-bedroom board house that he shares with his
mother and two younger sisters, he couldn’t help but wonder what life would have been like
if only his father had bothered to stick around. His mother worked extremely hard to make
two ends meet. The salary she received as a bartender in the community they lived in was
hardly enough to cover their basic needs. This therefore saw her having a little farm where
she would sell her produce to the members of the community as well as other farmers. She
also washed for some people in the community on a fortnightly basis just to ensure that they
never went to their bed hungry at night nor having to miss a day of school. Tyrone was
extremely grateful for how hard his mother was working and therefore made it his priority to
ensure he was working even harder at school.
Tyrone Jackson, a 5th form student at the Mount Vernon Academy, was the first child
for his mother Tanesha Saunders. He has never met his father who had disappeared the
minute he found out he was on the way but that didn’t affect him as he knew how to satisfy
with what little his mother was able to provide for them. Sometimes, he couldn’t help but
wonder the extent to which life would have been easier especially for his mom if she didn’t
have to work herself tirelessly just to ensure they had the most essential needs to survive.
However, they were the only family in the community that still uses a pit latrine, bathes
outside as well as washing dishes outside and for these reasons he vowed to continue working
hard at school so he’d one day be able to change these circumstances for his mother and
sisters.
As the place grew dark, he got up off the veranda and went into the room that he shared
with his two sisters. He sat on his bed and started to read over some notes in preparation for a
monthly test he had the following day. He didn’t even realize how late it was until his mother
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came in the room to check on them as she always does when she comes home at night. “Wah
yaa study fa now Ty-Ty?” she asked him. “Mi have a Physics tomorrow,” he replied. For the
first time ever, she told him she wouldn’t be able to send him to school because she didn’t
have any money. Without missing a beat Tyrone told her he would go without the lunch
money. Bus fare is all he would need because he couldn’t afford to miss any test now. She
wouldn’t want to disappoint him as he took his school work very seriously so she decided to
borrow the money from the bar sales so he could go to school the following day.
The following morning, Tyrone made sure to eat something no matter how small it was
before going to school because he didn’t know how he was going to manage; he found a
ramen noodle which he boiled for his breakfast and got ready for school. He collected his bus
fare and left for school. He was very early for school, so he sat in his form room and went
over his notes some more so he would be fully prepared for his test. Physics was the first
class he had that morning and the teacher gave the test in the first half of the class after which
they all went through the paper together and he was sure he aced the test. He went to the
remainder of his classes until it was finally lunch time where he went to the library to read
something because he had nothing to eat. Couple minutes before the lunch bell rang, he
started to feel hungry and he didn’t know what to do so he went to the back of the school yard
where an apple tree was and luckily the tree was loaded, he started stoning some of the apples
and got a few which he washed and ate quickly then drank some water from the stand pipe
before heading back to class. By the time the dismissal bell had rang he was dying of hunger
so he hurriedly went home because he knew his mother always prepared their dinner before
going to work in the mornings.
He went to the bar to collect his sisters after which he went home, warmed the dinner
and shared it for him and his sisters. He helped them with their homework and they all went
to bed early. He silently wished he didn’t have to endure that kind of hunger another day
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though. Unfortunately, he did have a couple more of those days but he pulled himself through
because he had his goal in mind and he wasn’t about to give up now.
At the end of Tyrone’s tenure at Mount Vernon Academy he was awarded top boy in
the school, highest achiever, highest performer in various subject areas as well as top CSEC
student. It didn’t stop there as he was awarded top CSEC student in the Caribbean, as a result
of this he received various funding and scholarships to pursue his tertiary education.
As he collected his awards, he looked at his beaming mother and said “I did this for
you”, her heart swelled with pride as she ran up to him, scooped him up and hugged him like
she has never hugged him before and said “mi proud a yuh mi bwoy, yuh mek mi really
proud”.
Teacher’s comments: 9/10
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Analysis
The researcher has chosen to analyse the dialect variety and the language register that
was used the reflective piece entitled “Struggles”
Dialect variation can be defined as the spoken and written difference in the use of
language within a speech community. Creole and the standard variety (English) was used
throughout the candidate’s reflective piece. Dialect can be influenced by several factors such
as mother tongue, geographical location and attitude. In the story, you can see where creole
(basolect) was used whenever Tyrone and his mother conversed. An example of this can be
seen in the seventh paragraph in the last sentence “mi proud a yuh mi bwoy, yuh mek mi
really proud”. Creole was used by the characters to show that they are from the Caribbean.
Also, it highlighted their relationship and social status.
The narrator uses standard English throughout the story. As can be seen in the first
sentence, “As Tyrone sat on the veranda of the two-bedroom board house that he shares with
his mother and two younger sisters, he couldn’t help but wonder what life would have been
like if only his father had bothered to stick around”. This variety was used because it is
known as the acceptable variety and will therefore be easy for people outside the Caribbean
to read.
Language register is defined as the type of dialect that a person decides to use with a
particular person. The formal and informal register was used in this piece. The informal
register also called casual register is a conversational register used in writing and talking to
people you know very well. The informal register was used between Tyrone and Tanesha this
was effective because it shows the familiarity between both characters. An example of the
informal register is “Wah yaa study fa now Ty-Ty?” she asked him, “mi ave a physics
tomorrow”. The clear use of nicknames highlighted the relationship they shared.
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The formal register was used when the narrator told the story. The formal register is
defined as a more appropriate register used for professional writing or speaking with a boss
or stranger. The formal register was effective because it is able to reach a wider audience .
In conclusion, language register and dialectal variation was used in the story to achieve
the writer’s purpose. Examples of dialect variation such as standard English and creole were
used and examples of language variation that was used include the formal register and
informal register.
Teacher’s comments:
ANALYSIS 17/18
Content 8/8
Expression 4/5
Organisation 5/5
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APPENDIX
Interview Questions
[Link] old are you?
2 Are you from a single parent-family?
[Link] you have any siblings?
[Link] is it like for you growing up in a single parent family?
[Link] growing up in a single-parent family place you at any disadvantage?
If yes how?
[Link] does growing up in a single-parent family affect you academically?
[Link] is you biggest struggle as a child raised in a single parent family
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References
[Link]
Salami S.O. & Alawode E.A (2016). The influence of single-parenting on the academic
achievement of adolescents. Retrieved from scholarly
[Link]
nting&oq=effects+of+sin
Osborne S. et al (2015). Communication Studies Guide 2nd edition published by
MacMillan publishers.
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