Certainly!
Here are some sentences with incorrect parallel structure that
students can correct:
1. Incorrect: “She likes to hike, swimming, and reading.”
Correction: “She likes to hike, swim, and read.”
2. Incorrect: “The company aims to increase profits, expand
internationally, and improving customer service.”
Correction: “The company aims to increase profits, expand internationally,
and improve customer service.”
3. Incorrect: “His hobbies include playing basketball, to cook, and
fishing.”
Correction: “His hobbies include playing basketball, cooking, and fishing.”
4. Incorrect: “In the morning, I enjoy drinking coffee, read the news, and
going for a run.”
Correction: “In the morning, I enjoy drinking coffee, reading the news, and
going for a run.”
5. Incorrect: “The concert featured jazz music, dancing, and to showcase
local talent.”
Correction: “The concert featured jazz music, dancing, and showcasing
local talent.”
You can provide these sentences to the students and ask them to identify the
errors and correct them, reinforcing their understanding of parallel structure.
Sure! Here’s an assessment where students need to create parallelism
sentences:
1. **Instructions:** Create a sentence with parallel structure using the
following words: “swim,” “bike,” and “run.”
**Example Response:** “She enjoys swimming, biking, and running.”
2. **Instructions:** Construct a sentence with parallel structure using the
verbs “read,” “write,” and “study.”
**Example Response:** “He spends his evenings reading, writing, and
studying.”
3. **Instructions:** Form a sentence with parallel structure using the
adjectives “happy,” “excited,” and “grateful.”
**Example Response:** “We felt happy, excited, and grateful for the
opportunity.”
4. **Instructions:** Make a sentence with parallel structure using the
phrases “to travel,” “to explore,” and “to discover.”
**Example Response:** “Their dream is to travel, to explore, and to
discover new cultures.”
5. **Instructions:** Craft a sentence with parallel structure using the
nouns “friendship,” “loyalty,” and “trust.”
**Example Response:** “Their friendship was built on loyalty, trust, and
mutual respect.”
These exercises will challenge students to apply their understanding of
parallelism by constructing grammatically correct sentences with consistent
structure.