American Literature
American Literature
In which of these novels are you like to meet violence, romance, crime
investigation, psychological insights, magic, humour? Which of these books
would you like to read? Explain your choice.
Exploring Genres
The concept of genre is found across various media. It presupposes division
of material into classes or types according to certain criteria or agreed-upon
conventions. As a result, literary genres are loosely defined with regard to
their content, tone, style, technique length, etc., and certain flexibility in this
matter is acceptable.
The most enduring literary genre division (known since the times of Plato
and Aristotle) relies on the attribution of speech. It groups fictional works
into three major classes: lyric (spoken in the first person), epic / narrative
(the narrator speaks and lets other characters speak) and drama (all
characters speak for themselves). The dichotomy of tragedy and comedy
also goes back to the ancient times. Another common distinction is between
prose and poetry, while the criterion of length accounts for such genres as
novel, novella and short story. Content-related genre definitions are
autobiography, biography, romance, gothic fiction, crime fiction, fantasy,
science fiction, mysteries, historical novel, travel writing, etc.
When a fictional work is written with the intent of fitting within a certain
genre, it is sometimes referred to as genre fiction, which is almost
synonymous with popular fiction. It is assumed that these works are written
mainly to entertain readers and gain commercial success. In contrast, literary
fiction is uncategorised fiction that aspires to artistic expression. Mainstream
literature is an ambiguous term which is used as the counterpart for both
literary and popular fiction.
Each genre has its conventions and characteristic features, as well as
subgenres. For example, fantasy fiction includes such varieties as epic,
heroic, historic, comic, dark, urban and others. A cross-genre (or hybrid
genre) relies on blending themes and elements from two or more different
genres. Since genre attribution is conventional, it is sometimes problematic
to establish the genre of a specific text, especially in cases when boundaries
between genres are uncertain, as between fantasy and magic realism.
Task 1
What is the difference between literary fiction and genre fiction? Provide
examples of both.
Have you read any cross-genre works? Did you enjoy them? Why / why
not?
Task 2
Look at the subgenres of science fiction / fantasy below. Do you know their
distinctive features? Use the Internet to help you.
Task 3
Read the following review comments on Salman Rushdie’s novel “The
Enchantress of Florence”. Which of them relate to the novel’s genre? Do
they inspire you to read the book? Why / why not?
“A romance of beauty and power from Italy to India... so delightful an
homage to Renaissance magic and wonder.”
Michael Dirda, The Washington Post Book World
“This is ‘history’ jubilantly mixed with postmodernist magic realism.”
Joyce Carol Oates, The New York Review of Books
“Brilliant... Rushdie’s sumptuous mixture of history and fable is
magnificent.”
Ursula K. Le Guin, The Guardian
Margaret Atwood, a famous Canadian
author, has always been experimenting
with genres and pushing the boundaries
in her fiction. Her collection “The
Tent” (2006) contains diverse short
pieces that are hard to categorise. They
have been called “fictional essays” or
“mini-fictions”, their prominent themes
being feminism, ecology and fiction
itself. Employing a number of
metafictional strategies and reworking
classical mythological and literary motifs,
Atwood addresses the issues of fame,
creativity and responsibility of a writer.
Such stories as “Voice”, “Three Novels
I Won’t Write Soon”, “But It Could
Still”, “Plots for Exotics”, “The Tent”
are poignant and self-consciousness explorations of a writer’s mind, often
with a bitter and satirical slant. Another satire in this collection, “Take
Charge”, is directed at genre fiction and its limitations.
Read the story and say how the author attacks formulaic writing.
Take Charge
by Margaret Atwood
I)
– Sir, their cannons have blown a hole in the ship. It’s below the
waterline. Water is pouring into the hold, Sir.
– Don’t just stand there, you blockhead! Cut a piece of canvas, dive
down, patch it!
– Sir, I can’t swim.
– Bloody hell and damn your eyes, what wetnurse let you go to sea?
No help for it, I’ll have to do it myself. Hold my jacket. Put out that fire.
Clear away those spars.
– Sir, my leg’s been shot off.
– Well do the best you can.
II)
– Sir, their anti-tank missiles have shredded the left tread on our tank.
– Don’t just sit there, you nitwit! Take a wrench, crawl underneath the
tank, fix it!
– Sir, I’m a gunner, not a mechanic. Anyway that wouldn’t work.
– Why in hell do they send me useless twits like you? No help for it,
I’ll have to do it myself. Cover me with your machine gun. Stand by with
grenades. Hand me that spanner.
– Sir, my arm’s been burnt off.
– Well do the best you can.
III)
– Sir, their diabolical worm virus has infected our missile command
system. It’s eating the software like candy.
– Don’t just lounge there, you dickhead! Get going with the firewalls,
or whatever you use.
– Sir, I’m a screen monitor, not a troubleshooter.
– Shit in a bucket, what do they think we’re running here, a beauty
parlour? If you can’t do it, where’s the nerdy spot-faced geek who can?
– Sir, it was him wrote the virus. He was not a team player, Sir. The
missiles have already launched and they’re heading straight for us.
– No help for it, I’ll have to do it myself. Hand me that
sledgehammer.
– Sir, we’ve got sixty seconds.
– Well do the best you can.
IV)
– Sir, the makorin has malfunctioned and set off the pizzlewhistle.
That has saddammed the glopzoid plapoodle. It may be the work of hostile
nanobacons.
– Don’t just hover there, you clonedrone! Dopple the magmatron,
reboot the fragebender, and insert the hi-speed crockblade with the
pessimal-point attachment! That’ll captcha the nasty little biobots!
– Sir, the magmatron is not within my area of expertise.
– What pixelwit deployed you? No help for it, I’ll have to do it myself.
Hand me the mutesuck blandplaster!
– Sir, I have been brain-napped. My brain is in a jar in Uzbekistan,
guarded by a phalanx of virtual gonkwarriors. I am speaking to you via
simulation hologram.
– Well do the best you can.
V)
– Sir, the wild dogs have dug their way into the food cache and they’re
eating the winter supplies.
– Don’t just squat there, you layabout! Pick up your stone axe and
bash them on the head!
– Sir, these are not ordinary wild dogs. They are red-eyed demon-
spirit dogs, sent by the angry ancestors. Anyway, my stone axe has a curse on
it.
– By my mother’s bones, what did I do to deserve such a useless duck-
turd brother’s nephew’s son as you? No help for it, I’ll have to do it myself.
Recite the red-eyed demon-spirit dog-killing charm and hand me my
consecrated sacred-fire-hardened spear.
– Sir, they’ve torn my throat out.
– Well do the best you can.
Task 2: Vocabulary
Study the words in the table below and translate the examples into
your first language.
To evoke is to call up, trigger The story abounds in descriptive passages
or produce an emotional that evoke the colours and smells of exotic
reaction, a memory, an lands.
association, etc. The adjective The author’s style is his forte: the language
evocative is often used to of the novel is richly evocative.
describe artistic elements.
Poignant is an adjective used It’s a poignant coming-of-age story set in the
to refer to phenomena that post-war London.
evoke strong emotional The film was subject to some poignant
reactions, especially sorrow, criticism.
distress and compassion. It Revisiting the memories of his childhood
may imply keenness and gave him a poignant pleasure.
intensity in certain contexts.
Atmospheric elements in The book cover and illustrations are
fiction and art create a certain haunting and atmospheric.
atmosphere and evoke an Atmospheric descriptions of autumnal
emotional and aesthetic landscapes lend the story a lyrical element.
response.
Things that teasingly attract A tantalising book title piqued her curiosity.
attention and arouse desire Have you seen the trailer of the “Game of
but stay out of reach are Thrones” final season? Wasn’t it
tantalising. tantalising?
When artistic creations or The book has a risqué cover, but don’t let it
their elements are shocking, put you off.
suggestive or contain George Carlin couldn’t think of a more
innuendos they may be called provocative title for his book than “When
risqué or provocative. Will Jesus Bring the Pork Chops?”: it
offends three major religions in one go.
To catch one’s eye is to attract The provocative title caught my eye, as well
attention visually. The as the glaring pink of the cover.
adjective is eye-catching. The cover artist had a hard time trying to
produce an eye-catching design for this
novel.
The term open loop is used in Stephen Colbert’s book “I Am America
several spheres. As a (And So Can You!)” cunningly employs an
rhetorical device, it means a open loop in the title: one can’t help
phrase / text that instills wondering how they might become
curiosity and creates America.
anticipation for what will A question in a book’s title often works as
come next. (Also known as “a an open loop.
tension loop”).
Work in pairs. What do you think of the three book covers on the next
page?
Flip through the textbook and look at the covers and illustrations you’ll find
there. Comment on them using the vocabulary above.
Exploring Titles
The title of a fictional work is its integral and significant part. It is one of the
first elements to attract and intrigue potential readers by creating certain
expectations. As the story unfolds, the reader may return to the title again to
confirm or dismiss their initial perceptions and gain new insights. Since titles
often rely on intertextuality, a broader context is sometimes needed to
decipher its message.
Read the passage on titles taken from David Lodge’s “The Art of Fiction”
and say how the tradition of naming novels has changed with time:
“The titles of the earliest English novels were invariably the names of the
central characters, Moll Flanders, Tom Jones, Clarissa. Fiction was
modeling itself on, and sometimes disguising itself as, biography and
autobiography. Later novelists realized that titles could indicate a theme
(Sense and Sensibility), suggest an intriguing mystery (The Woman in
White), or promise a certain kind of setting and atmosphere (Wuthering
Heights). At some point in the nineteenth century they began to hitch their
stories to resonant literary quotations (Far From the Madding Crowd), a
practice that persists throughout the twentieth (Where Angels Fear To
Tread, A Handful of Dust, For Whom the Bell Tolls), though it is now
perhaps regarded as a little corny. The great modernists were drawn to
symbolic or metaphorical titles – Heart of Darkness, Ulysses, The Rainbow
– while more recent novelists often favour whimsical, riddling, off-beat titles,
like The Catcher in the Rye, A History of the World in 10½ Chapters, For
Black Girls Who Consider Suicide When The Rainbow Is Not Enuf.”1
Task 1
Symbolic and metaphorical titles are still widely used in contemporary
fiction. Comment on the concepts and ideas expressed figuratively in the
following titles of famous novels:
“The Silence of the Lambs” by Thomas Harris
“The Devil Wears Prada” by Lauren Weisberger
“The Lovely Bones” by Alice Sebold.
What can you add to this list?
Task 2
Titles often contain various stylistic devices. Identify the tropes used in the
titles of novels and plays given below and group them accordingly. There
should be at least 5 groups. Some of the titles may belong to more than one
group.
“Equal Rites” “Of Mice and Men” “How to Lose Friends and Alienate
People” “Nostradamus Ate My Hamster” “The Importance of Being
Earnest” “Alone Together” “A Dance with Dragons” “The Fifth Elephant”
“Neverwhere” “The Hollow Chocolate Bunnies of the Apocalypse” “The
Sound of Silence” “Deaf Sentence” “Pygmalion” “Up the Down Staircase”
“Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf?” “Cabbages and Kings” “This is Not a
Novel” “Wintersmith” “Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?”
1
David Lodge, “The Art of Fiction”, p.193 – 194.
Task 3
Look at the covers and the titles and guess what these books are about:
Choose one of the books you have recently read and show its cover to the
class. Can they guess the genre of the book and what it is about?
Use the words and expression from the vocabulary section above in your
answers.
Writing
Task 1: Games with Titles
There are online generators of novel titles. Use one of those or
make up your own title and give it to your classmate. They must
choose the genre for this title and write a short summary of the plot.
The central panel from the triptych “The Garden of Earthly Delights” by
Hieronymus Bosch
4
Thomas B. “Narrative. The Basics.” p. 63- 66.
Task 1
Go back to the excerpts from “Past Imperfect” by Julian Fellowes. Do you
think the narrative is ideologically neutral or does it have an implicit or
explicit political agenda?
Task 2
Watch the video “Narrative and Ideology: Part 1 – What is ideology? (VCE
Media 2018)” and answer the questions:
What metaphor is used in the video for ideology?
What examples of different ideologies are given?
The term “male gaze” is employed in the video regarding the
character of Wonder Woman. What does it mean?
What opposing ideological “lenses” can be applied to the film “Okja”
(2017)?
Think of your own examples of books films that can be perceived
differently because of one’s political and other views.
Task 3
The Bechdel test (pronounced as /ˈbɛkdəl/) is a famous tool to measure the
representation of women in fiction. The test is named after the American
cartoonist Alison Bechdel who was the first to apply it in her 1985 comic
strip. A character in that comic strip said that she would only see a film
which meets three simple requirements:
It has at least two female characters
These two characters talk to each other
They talk about something beside a man.
The test has been very popular ever since and it has been applied to fiction
in general. The requirement that the two women must have names is
sometimes added. It has been noted that a huge amount of creative works
fail to pass the test. It should be mentioned, however, that failing the test
does not necessarily make the work discriminatory to women, while passing
the test does not automatically indicate a feminist agenda.
Work in pair. Discuss the films and books you have recently read or
watched. Which of them pass the Bechdel test?
There are other ways of assessing gender (in)equality in art. Study the chart
below and explain which criteria are used in it.
Episode One
Our house is almost at the edge of the Seam1. I only have to pass a few gates
to reach the scruffy field called the Meadow. Separating the Meadow from
the woods, in fact enclosing all of District 12, is a high chain-link fence
topped with barbed-wire loops. In theory, it’s supposed to be electrified
twenty-four hours a day as a deterrent to the predators that live in the woods
— packs of wild dogs, lone cougars, bears — that used to threaten our streets.
But since we’re lucky to get two or three hours of electricity in the evenings,
it’s usually safe to touch. Even so, I always take a moment to listen carefully
for the hum that means the fence is live. Right now, it’s silent as a stone.
Concealed by a clump of bushes, I flatten out on my belly and slide under a
two-foot stretch that’s been loose for years. There are several other weak
spots in the fence, but this one is so close to home I almost always enter the
woods here.
As soon as I’m in the trees, I retrieve a bow and sheath of arrows from a
hollow log. Electrified or not, the fence has been successful at keeping the
flesh-eaters out of District 12. Inside the woods they roam freely, and there
are added concerns like venomous snakes, rabid animals, and no real paths
to follow. But there’s also food if you know how to find it. My father knew
and he taught me some before he was blown to bits in a mine explosion.
There was nothing even to bury. I was eleven then. Five years later, I still
wake up screaming for him to run.
Even though trespassing in the woods is illegal and poaching carries the
severest of penalties, more people would risk it if they had weapons. But
most are not bold enough to venture out with just a knife. My bow is a rarity,
crafted by my father along with a few others that I keep well hidden in the
woods, carefully wrapped in waterproof covers. My father could have made
good money selling them, but if the officials found out he would have been
publicly executed for inciting a rebellion. Most of the Peacekeepers turn a
blind eye to the few of us who hunt because they’re as hungry for fresh meat
as anybody is. In fact, they’re among our best customers. But the idea that
someone might be arming the Seam would never have been allowed.
In the fall, a few brave souls sneak into the woods to harvest apples. But
always in sight of the Meadow. Always close enough to run back to the safety
of District 12 if trouble arises. “District Twelve. Where you can starve to
death in safety,” I mutter. Then I glance quickly over my shoulder. Even
here, even in the middle of nowhere, you worry someone might overhear
you.
When I was younger, I scared my mother to death, the things I would blurt
out about District 12, about the people who rule our country, Panem, from
the far-off city called the Capitol. Eventually I understood this would only
lead us to more trouble. So I learned to hold my tongue and to turn my
features into an indifferent mask so that no one could ever read my
thoughts. Do my work quietly in school. Make only polite small talk in the
public market. Discuss little more than trades in the Hob, which is the black
market where I make most of my money. Even at home, where I am less
pleasant, I avoid discussing tricky topics. Like the reaping2, or food
shortages, or the Hunger Games. Prim might begin to repeat my words and
then where would we be?
In the woods waits the only person with whom I can be myself. Gale. I can
feel the muscles in my face relaxing, my pace quickening as I climb the hills
to our place, a rock ledge overlooking a valley. A thicket of berry bushes
protects it from unwanted eyes. The sight of him waiting there brings on a
smile. Gale says I never smile except in the woods.
“Hey, Catnip,” says Gale. My real name is Katniss, but when I first told
him, I had barely whispered it. So he thought I’d said Catnip. Then when
this crazy lynx started following me around the woods looking for handouts,
it became his official nickname for me. I finally had to kill the lynx because
he scared off game. I almost regretted it because he wasn’t bad company.
But I got a decent price for his pelt.
“Look what I shot,” Gale holds up a loaf of bread with an arrow stuck in it,
and I laugh. It’s real bakery bread, not the flat, dense loaves we make from
our grain rations. I take it in my hands, pull out the arrow, and hold the
puncture in the crust to my nose, inhaling the fragrance that makes my
mouth flood with saliva. Fine bread like this is for special occasions.
“Mm, still warm,” I say. He must have been at the bakery at the crack of
dawn to trade for it. “What did it cost you?”
“Just a squirrel. Think the old man was feeling sentimental this morning,”
says Gale. “Even wished me luck.”
“Well, we all feel a little closer today, don’t we?” I say, not even bothering
to roll my eyes. “Prim left us a cheese.” I pull it out.
His expression brightens at the treat. “Thank you, Prim. We’ll have a real
feast.” Suddenly he falls into a Capitol accent as he mimics Effie Trinket,
the maniacally upbeat woman who arrives once a year to read out the names
at the reaping. “I almost forgot! Happy Hunger Games!” He plucks a few
blackberries from the bushes around us. “And may the odds —” He tosses a
berry in a high arc toward me.
I catch it in my mouth and break the delicate skin with my teeth. The sweet
tartness explodes across my tongue.
“— be ever in your favor!” I finish with equal verve. We have to joke about
it because the alternative is to be scared out of your wits. Besides, the
Capitol accent is so affected, almost anything sounds funny in it.
I watch as Gale pulls out his knife and slices the bread. He could be my
brother. Straight black hair, olive skin, we even have the same gray eyes. But
we’re not related, at least not closely. Most of the families who work the
mines resemble one another this way.
That’s why my mother and Prim, with their light hair and blue eyes, always
look out of place. They are. My mother’s parents were part of the small
merchant class that caters to officials, Peacekeepers, and the occasional
Seam customer. They ran an apothecary shop in the nicer part of District
12. Since almost no one can afford doctors, apothecaries are our healers.
My father got to know my mother because on his hunts he would
sometimes collect medicinal herbs and sell them to her shop to be brewed
into remedies. She must have really loved him to leave her home for the
Seam. I try to remember that when all I can see is the woman who sat by,
blank and unreachable, while her children turned to skin and bones. I try to
forgive her for my father’s sake. But to be honest, I’m not the forgiving type.
Gale spreads the bread slices with the soft goat cheese, carefully placing a
basil leaf on each while I strip the bushes of their berries. We settle back in
a nook in the rocks. From this place, we are invisible but have a clear view
of the valley, which is teeming with summer life, greens to gather, roots to
dig, fish iridescent in the sunlight. The day is glorious, with a blue sky and
soft breeze. The food’s wonderful, with the cheese seeping into the warm
bread and the berries bursting in our mouths. Everything would be perfect if
this really was a holiday, if all the day off meant was roaming the mountains
with Gale, hunting for tonight’s supper. But instead we have to be standing
in the square at two o’clock waiting for the names to be called out.
Notes:
1. Seam is the poorest neighbourhood in District 12, inhabited by miners
and their families.
2. Reaping is the annual ceremony of choosing players for the Hunger
Games. The events in this excerpt take place just before the reaping.
Episode 2
After Katniss volunteered at the reaping, she was taken to the Capitol to
prepare for the Hunger Games. In the excerpt below she meets Cinna, her
personal stylist, whose task is to get her ready for the opening ceremony.
The door opens and a young man who must be Cinna enters. I’m taken
aback by how normal he looks. Most of the stylists they interview on
television are so dyed, stenciled, and surgically altered they’re grotesque. But
Cinna’s close-cropped hair appears to be its natural shade of brown. He’s in
a simple black shirt and pants. The only concession to self-alteration seems
to be metallic gold eyeliner that has been applied with a light hand. It brings
out the flecks of gold in his green eyes. And, despite my disgust with the
Capitol and their hideous fashions, I can’t help thinking how attractive it
looks.
“Hello, Katniss. I’m Cinna, your stylist,” he says in a quiet voice somewhat
lacking in the Capitol’s affectations.
“Hello,” I venture cautiously.
“Just give me a moment, all right?” he asks. He walks around my naked
body, not touching me, but taking in every inch of it with his eyes. I resist
the impulse to cross my arms over my chest. “Who did your hair?”
“My mother,” I say.
“It’s beautiful. Classic really. And in almost perfect balance with your
profile. She has very clever fingers,” he says.
I had expected someone flamboyant, someone older trying desperately to
look young, someone who viewed me as a piece of meat to be prepared for
a platter. Cinna has met none of these expectations.
“You’re new, aren’t you? I don’t think I’ve seen you before,” I say. Most of
the stylists are familiar, constants in the ever-changing pool of tributes. Some
have been around my whole life.
“Yes, this is my first year in the Games,” says Cinna.
“So they gave you District Twelve,” I say. Newcomers generally end up with
us, the least desirable district.
“I asked for District Twelve,” he says without further explanation. “Why
don’t you put on your robe and we’ll have a chat.”
Pulling on my robe, I follow him through a door into a sitting room. Two
red couches face off over a low table.
Three walls are blank, the fourth is entirely glass, providing a window to the
city. I can see by the light that it must be around noon, although the sunny
sky has turned overcast. Cinna invites me to sit on one of the couches and
takes his place across from me. He presses a button on the side of the table.
The top splits and from below rises a second tabletop that holds our lunch.
Chicken and chunks of oranges cooked in a creamy sauce laid on a bed of
pearly white grain, tiny green peas and onions, rolls shaped like flowers, and
for dessert, a pudding the color of honey.
I try to imagine assembling this meal myself back home. Chickens are too
expensive, but I could make do with a wild turkey. I’d need to shoot a
second turkey to trade for an orange. Goat’s milk would have to substitute
for cream.
We can grow peas in the garden. I’d have to get wild onions from the
woods. I don’t recognize the grain, our own tessera1 ration cooks down to an
unattractive brown mush. Fancy rolls would mean another trade with the
baker, perhaps for two or three squirrels. As for the pudding, I can’t even
guess what’s in it. Days of hunting and gathering for this one meal and even
then it would be a poor substitution for the Capitol version.
What must it be like, I wonder, to live in a world where food appears at the
press of a button? How would I spend the hours I now commit to combing
the woods for sustenance if it were so easy to come by? What do they do all
day, these people in the Capitol, besides decorating their bodies and waiting
around for a new shipment of tributes to roll in and die for their
entertainment?
I look up and find Cinna’s eyes trained on mine. “How despicable we must
seem to you,” he says.
Has he seen this in my face or somehow read my thoughts? He’s right,
though. The whole rotten lot of them is despicable.
Notes:
1. Tessera is an additional food supply a family can get in District 12. If a
young person signs up for it, his or her chances of being chosen for the
Hunger Games will increase.
There are a lot of Hunger Game inspired food recipes online and in
puslishes cookbooks. There are similar publications in many other popular
franchises. What is your attitude to this phenomenon? Have you ever
cooked anything related to a fictional world? If not, would you like to?
Language Practice
Task 1. Pronunciation Tips
There is no definitive rule as to the pronunciation of the letters “i”
and “y”: both can turn into /aɪ/ or /ɪ/, while “i” is sometimes pronounced as
/i:/. In a number of cases both /aɪ/ and /ɪ/ are acceptable variants:
The prefixes multi-, anti-, semi- can be pronounced both ways. It is
more typical, however, to say /mʌltɪ/, etc. in British English, while
/mʌltaɪ/ is widespread in the USA.
Which variant do you prefer? Read the following words and phrases:
A multinational company, an antihero, anti-immigration laws, a
semidetached house, a multilingual community, a semifinal.
A number of words can be pronounced with /aɪ/ or /ɪ/: ideology,
direct, privacy, dynasty, primer, dilemma, itinerary, divert,
advertisement, diverse, albino. Some of them are more typical for
British or American speakers (e.g., (Americans say /ˈpraɪvəsɪ/, while in
the UK /ˈprɪvəsɪ/ is common), but it is not the general rule.
Which variant do you prefer? Read the following sentences:
There is an innuendo in this advertisement.
When it comes to his privacy, he will fight like a tiger.
It’s always a dilemma: to make your pile or to preserve your integrity.
I’ve had enough of vague hints. Just say it directly.
While /-aɪl/ is standard pronunciation of the ending –ile in British,
Canadian and Australian English, it is common for American speakers
to resort to schwa /ə/. For example, “fragile” becomes /ˈfrædʒəl/.
Other words that are pronounced with schwa in the USA include:
sterile, mobile, fertile, volatile, tactile, agile, futile, hostile, juvenile.
Do you pronounce these words in a British or American way?
Tactile imagery, hostile attitude, a fragile peace, a futile attempt, volatile
nature, juvenile tantrums.
In other cases it is not always possible to predict the pronunciation.
Look at the words below and decide how they are pronounced.
Which of them have alternative variants?
Group these words according to their pronunciation and practise reading
them:
Blind, typical, routine, linen, driven, famine, resilient, hind, wind, dynamic,
prestige, climb, fatigue, scythe, regime, whilst, tyrant, Vaseline, indict, bikini,
machine, minute, reptile, cynical, plasticine, hinder, exile, pivotal, cuisine,.
Study the example below and explain what differences in meaning the usage
of infinitive or gerund creates:
I regret to tell you that you failed the test.
I regret blurting out the truth to her.
She tries to hold her tongue, but it’s too hard to her.
She tried talking to her mother about the problem, but it didn’t help,
so she tried phoning a helpline.
Don’t forget to invite them / Remember to invite them.
I’ll never forget tasting peanut butter for the first time / I’ll always
remember tasting peanut butter for the first time.
Work in pairs. Practise using the verbs forget, regret, remember, stop, try
with infinitive / gerund in everyday situations (reminding your friends about
something important, sharing memories, discussing recent events, etc.).
Rewrite the sentences below using the verbs in the brackets as infinitives or
gerunds depending on the situation.
1. I can’t stop (read) now: it’s the pivotal moment in the story!
2. Your essay lacks logic and concrete examples. Try (find) better
arguments and (be) less vague next time.
3. She had a perfect punchline in mind. She regrets (not use) it.
4. The jury is expected (indict) him for murder.
5. We appreciate your (pursue) the truth in this matter.
6. I ran into Lynn while jogging and we stopped (catch up).
7. Nothing can force her (laugh). I tried (be) ironic, (use) double entendres,
(create) puns, even (do) slapstick – and then I gave up (try).
8. I’m sure you’d prefer (maintain) fragile peace rather than (continue)
fighting.
9. I’ll never forget (watch) my first Charlie Chaplin film: the memory always
brings on a smile.
10. The counsellor advised me (not be) too modest and (take) credit for
this achievement.
Writing
Watch a review of “The Hunger Games” by a popular YouTuber
Laci Green (“Messages in The Hunger Games”). Do you agree with
her interpretation?
Write a comment for this video, expressing your attitude to her vision. Here
are some expressions you can use to show that…
You agree with her:
I couldn’t agree with you more.
This exactly how I feel about the book.
You have a point there.
Your interpretation rings true / sounds convincing because…
You have doubts about some of her conclusions:
I’m not sure about your interpretation of… because…
I’d go along with this view to a point…
I agree up to a point, but…
I find it difficult to accept that…
I still have my doubt about…
You disagree with her:
I’d say the opposite is true.
I beg to differ on this point.
There is no way I could agree with… / accept that…
I think you got the wrong end of the stick when you said that…
We’ll have to agree to disagree about it.
Project
Food and Ideology
Food has always been an ideologically charged notion. Both in
pagan belief systems and monotheistic religions there have always
been food limitations and taboos, as well as products or dishes linked to
divinity. Contemporary philosophy and ethics address the morality of food
consumption, while dieticians voice numerous health concerns. Such issues
as vegetarianism, genetically modified food, organic produce, hunger relief
and many others are hotly debated in the media and widely reflected in
fiction.
Choose a book or a film that focuses on food-related ideological issues and
explore its major themes. Trace the ideas and values inherent in the story
and say how they are conveyed. Analyse imagery and / or symbolism
connected with food and the ways characters interact with it. Present the
results of your investigation in class.
Lead In
Remember a story you read as a child or teenager and were impressed by
it. Have you reread it since then? If yes, compare your responses to it.
Has your perception of the story changed?
Discuss which of the factors influence your response to a film or TV
series most:
The plot of the film
The genre of the film
Your favourite actors starring
The way actors play / their credibility
Visual effects, costumes, settings, etc.
Sound editing / musical score
The themes and ideas presented in the film
Your current mood
Your previous experience / your present life circumstances
Presence of your friends or loved ones when you watch
Other factors.
In Search of the Ideal Reader
It is often claimed that literature cannot be properly analysed, if the role of
the reader is not taken into account. Reader-response criticism is concerned
with the active role of the reader and studies the act of reading itself with its
corresponding processes. The belief that the reader is not a passive
consumer of the meaning presented by the text stems from the fact that two
readers may construe the meaning of the same work in different ways.
Moreover, readers may return to the same text at a later point and perceive
it differently due to their new experiences, motivation or a change in mood
or circumstances. The main premise of reader-response criticism is that
readers create meaning rather than extract it from the text.
The act of reading gets a lot of critical attention. It is viewed as transaction
between the text and the reader, in which the latter, being aware of the
associations and feelings that the text triggers, returns to it elaborating and
correcting the interpretation until it is complete. The important part of this
process is indeterminacy, or “gaps” in the text, which readers fill in with
regard to their individual experience and aesthetic predilections. Therefore,
readers may come up with a whole range of acceptable interpretations of the
same text. Readers’ mental processes that are activated by the text are also
studied from cognitive, psychological, social and linguistic perspectives. The
fact that many texts elicit very diverse, even conflicting responses from
readers testifies to the problematic nature of text interpretation and reflects
the complexity of the interpretation of the world itself.
When discussing the notion of the reader, critics often refer to a
hypothetical reader, preferably an informed reader who is ready to
appreciate the text “in the fullness of its linguistic and literary complexity,
and who conscientiously tries to suppress the personal or idiosyncratic
dimension of his or her response”5. This hypothetical reader is also known
as implied, optimal or ideal, and should not be confused with the narratee,
who is a fictional entity inside the text to whom the narrator is speaking.
Contrary to this, such representatives of reader-response criticism as
Norman Holland and David Bleich gather empirical data by working with
actual readers and their subjective responses, studying how they might
project their own beliefs and desires onto fictional characters.
5
Tyson L. Critical Theory Today. P.187
Task 1
Remember the responses the excerpts in this textbook have elicited from
you. Write down three words that describe your reactions to each text best,
as in the example:
“Take Charge”: puzzlement, amusement, curiosity.
“Take Charge”
“A Year in the Merde”
“Past Imperfect”
“The Hunger Games”
Walk around the class and talk to students in your group. Find people who
have the same or similar words in their lists. Discuss your responses.
Task 2
In 1990 Umberto Eco gave a famous lecture on interpretation and
overinterpretation in which he stated that, although there is a range of
possible interpretations, it is not unlimited: “What I want to say is that there
are somewhere criteria for limiting interpretation”. He also ridicules the
notion of “ideal reader” by saying that “I know that there are poetic texts
whose aim is to show that interpretation can be infinite. I know that
Finnegan’s Wake was written for an ideal reader affected by an ideal
insomnia.”6
Work in groups of 3 or 4. Discuss the possibilities of interpretation. Are
they infinite or limited? If limited, what by? Brainstorm the arguments in
favour of both opinions.
6
Eco U. Interpretation and Overinterpretation: World, History, Texts. The Tanner Lectures on Human Values. P.159.
Responding to Characters
Episode 1
Moody, listening to his mother describe their new tenants, was intrigued less
by the artist than by the mention of the “brilliant” daughter just his age. A
few days after Mia and Pearl moved in, his curiosity got the better of him.
As always, he took his bike, an old fixed-gear Schwinn that had belonged to
his father long ago in Indiana. Nobody biked in Shaker Heights, just as
nobody took the bus: you either drove or somebody drove you; it was a
town built for cars and for people who had cars. Moody biked. He wouldn’t
be sixteen until spring, and he never asked Lexie or Trip to drive him
anywhere if he could help it.
[…]
In front of the house, Pearl was carefully arranging the pieces of a wooden
bed on the front lawn. Moody, gliding to a stop across the street, saw a
slender girl in a long, crinkly skirt and a loose T-shirt with a message he
couldn’t quite read. Her hair was long and curly and hung in a thick braid
down her back and gave the impression of straining to burst free. She had
laid the headboard down flat near the flowerbeds that bordered the house,
with the side rails below it and the slats to either side in neat rows, like ribs.
It was as if the bed had drawn a deep breath and then gracefully flattened
itself into the grass. Moody watched, half hidden by a tree, as she picked her
way around to the Rabbit, which sat in the driveway with its doors thrown
wide, and extracted the footboard from the backseat. He wondered what
kind of Tetris they had done to fit all the pieces of the bed into such a small
car. Her feet were bare as she crossed the lawn to set the footboard into
place. Then, to his bemusement, she stepped into the empty rectangle in
the center, where the mattress belonged, and flopped down on her back.
On the second story of the house, a window rattled open and Mia’s head
peered out. “All there?”
“Two slats missing,” Pearl called back.
“We’ll replace them. No, wait, stay there. Don’t move.” Mia’s head
disappeared again. In a moment she reappeared holding a camera, a real
camera, with a thick lens like a big tin can. Pearl stayed just as she was,
staring up at the half-clouded sky, and Mia leaned out almost to the waist,
angling for the right shot. Moody held his breath, afraid the camera might
slip from her hands onto her daughter’s trusting upturned face, that she
might tumble over the sill herself and come crashing down into the grass.
None of this happened. Mia’s head tilted this way and that, framing the
scene below in her viewfinder. The camera hid her face, hid everything but
her hair, piled in a frizzy swirl atop her head like a dark halo. Later, when
Moody saw the finished photos, he thought at first that Pearl looked like a
delicate fossil, something caught for millennia in the skeleton belly of a
prehistoric beast. Then he thought she looked like an angel resting with her
wings spread out behind her. And then, after a moment, she looked simply
like a girl asleep in a lush green bed, waiting for her lover to lie down beside
her.
“All right,” Mia called down. “Got it.” She slid back inside, and Pearl sat up
and looked across the street, directly at Moody, and his heart jumped. “You
want to help?” she said. “Or just stand there?”
Moody would never remember crossing the street, or propping his bike in
the front walkway, or introducing himself. So it would feel to him that he
had always known her name, and that she had always known his, that
somehow, he and Pearl had known each other always.
Episode 2
College applications had been increasingly on Lexie’s mind. Shaker took
college seriously: the district had a ninety-nine percent graduation rate and
virtually all the kids went on to college of some kind. Everyone Lexie knew
was applying early and, as a result, all anyone could talk about in the Social
Room was who was applying where. Serena Wong1 was applying to Harvard.
Brian2, Lexie said, had his heart set on Princeton. “Like Cliff and Clair 3
would let me go anywhere else,” he’d said. His parents were really named
John and Deborah Avery, but his father was a doctor and his mother was a
lawyer and, truth be told, they did exude a certain Cosbyish vibe, his father
sweatered and affable and his mother wittily competent and no-nonsense.
They’d met at Princeton as undergraduates, and Brian had pictures of
himself as a baby in a Princeton onesie.
For Lexie, the precedent was not quite so clear: her mother had grown up in
Shaker and had never gone far – just down to Denison for her undergrad
before boomeranging back. Her father had come from a small town in
Indiana and, once he’d met her mother at college, simply stayed, moving
back with her to her hometown, finishing a JD at Case Western, working his
way up from a junior associate to partner at one of the biggest firms in the
city. But Lexie, like most of her classmates, had no desire to stay anywhere
near Cleveland. It huddled on the edge of a dead, dirty lake, fed by a river
best known for burning; it was built on a river whose very name meant
sadness: Chagrin. Which then gave its name to everything, pockets of agony
scattered throughout the city, buried like veins of dismay: Chagrin Falls,
Chagrin Boulevard, Chagrin Reservation. Chagrin Real Estate. Chagrin
Auto Body. Chagrin reproducing and proliferating, as if they would ever run
short. The Mistake on the Lake, people called it sometimes, and to Lexie,
as to her siblings and friends, Cleveland was something to be escaped.
As the deadline for early applications approached, Lexie had decided to
apply early to Yale. It had a good drama program, and Lexie had been the
lead in the musical last year, even though she’d only been a junior. Despite
her air of frivolity, she was near the top of her class – officially, Shaker did
not rank its students, to reduce competitive feelings, but she knew she was
somewhere in the top twenty. She was taking four AP classes5 and served as
secretary of the French Club. “Don’t let the shallowness fool you,” Moody
had told Pearl. “You know why she watches TV all afternoon? Because she
can finish her homework in half an hour before bed. Like that.” He
snapped his fingers. “Lexie’s got a good brain. She just doesn’t always use it
in real life.” Yale seemed a stretch but a distinctly possible one, her
guidance counselor had said. “Plus,” Mrs. Lieberman had added, “they
know kids from Shaker always go on to do well. They’ll give you an edge.”
Lexie and Brian had been together since junior year, and she liked the idea
of being just a train ride away. “We can visit each other all the time,” Lexie
pointed out to him as she printed the Yale early application. “And we can
even meet up in New York.” It was this last that finally swayed her: New
York, which had exuded a glamorous pull on her imagination ever since
she’d read Eloise6 as a child. She didn’t want to go to school in New York;
her guidance counselor had floated the idea of Columbia, but Lexie had
heard the area was sketchy. Still, she liked the idea of being able to jaunt in
for a day – a morning at the Met7 looking at art, maybe a splurge at Macy’s
or even a weekend away with Brian – and then zip away from the crowds
and the grime and the noise.
Before any of that could happen, though, she had to write her essay. A good
essay, Mrs. Lieberman had insisted, was what she needed to set herself apart
from the pack.
“Listen to this dumbass question,” she groaned that afternoon in Pearl’s
kitchen, fishing the printed-out application from her bag. “‘Rewrite a famous
story from a different perspective. For example, retell The Wizard of Oz
from the point of view of the Wicked Witch.’ This is a college app, not
creative writing. I’m taking AP English. At least ask me to write a real essay.”
“How about a fairy tale,” Moody suggested. He looked up from his
notebook and the open algebra textbook before him. “‘Cinderella’ from the
point of view of the stepsisters. Maybe they weren’t so wicked after all.
Maybe she was actually a bitch to them.”
“‘Little Red Riding Hood’ as told by the wolf,” Pearl suggested.
“Or ‘Rumpelstiltskin,’” Lexie mused. “I mean, that miller’s daughter
cheated him. He did all that spinning for her and she said she’d give him
her baby and then she reneged on their deal. Maybe she’s the villain here.”
With one maroon fingernail she tapped the top of the Diet Coke she’d
bought just after school, then popped the tab. “I mean, she shouldn’t have
agreed to give up her baby in the first place, if she didn’t want to.”
“Well,” Mia put in suddenly. She turned around, the bowl of popcorn in
her hands, and all three of them jumped, as if a piece of furniture had
begun to speak. “Maybe she didn’t know what she was giving up until
afterward. Maybe once she saw the baby she changed her mind.” She set the
bowl down in the center of the table. “Don’t be too quick to judge, Lexie.”
Lexie looked chastened for an instant, then rolled her eyes. Moody darted a
look at Pearl: See how shallow? But Pearl didn’t notice. After Mia had gone
back into the living room – embarrassed at her outburst – she turned to
Lexie. “I could help you,” she said, quietly enough that she thought Mia
could not hear. Then, a moment later, because this did not seem like
enough, “I’m good at stories. I could even write it for you.”
“Really?” Lexie beamed. “Oh my god, Pearl, I’ll owe you forever.” She
threw her arms around Pearl. Across the table, Moody gave up on his
homework and slammed his math book shut, and in the living room, Mia
jammed her paintbrush into a jar of water, lips pursed, paint scrubbing from
the bristles in a dirt-colored swirl.
Notes:
1. Serena Wong is one of Lexie’s friends.
2. Brian is Lexie’s African-American boyfriend.
3. Cliff and Clair are characters from “The Cosby Show”, a popular sitcom
featuring an upper middle-class African-American family living in
Brooklyn, New York.
4. JD (the Juris Doctor) is the Doctor of Jurisprudence degree, a
professional degree in law.
5. AP stands for Advanced Placement, which is a program in the USA and
Canada that offers college-level curricula and examinations to high school
students.
6. “Eloise” is a series of children’s books written by Kay Thompson
illustrated by Hilary Knight about a girl who lives in New York City, at
the Plaza Hotel, with her Nanny and her pets. There are many Eloise-
inspired films, merchandise and events (see the images below).
7. The Met is The Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York.
8. Macy’s is Macy’s Herald Square in New York City, an iconic department
store, one of the world’s largest and most famous, offering top fashion
brands and luxurious window displays.
Comprehension 1. How did Moody and Pearl first meet?
2. What was Moody’s reaction to Mia’s photos?
3. What was Lexie worried about?
4. What associations did she have with Cleveland?
5. Why was Lexie attracted to the idea of Yale?
6. How did Moody feel about his sister?
7. Why did Lexie dislike the assignment on the
college application?
8. What effect did Mia’s comment produce on the
teenagers?
Discussion 1. Compare your responses to the characters. Which
of them did you like and dislike? Explore your
reactions and say what might have caused them.
2. Focus on the characters of Moody. Which traits of
his personality are revealed in the episodes?
3. What role does the image of the bed play in
Episode 1? How is Mia’s artistic nature conveyed?
4. Focus on the character of Lexie. She is about to
make a choice that will have a huge impact on her
life. What are her concerns in this matter? Which
of them are rational and which are emotional?
5. What is your attitude to Lexie’s decision to cheat
and Pearl’s willingness to help her in this?
6. When you are faced with a crucial decision, are
you usually governed by your intellect, intuition or
emotions?
7. Describe how you made the decision to enter the
university you are studying at. What factors
influenced you and why?
Language Practice
Task 1. Pronunciation Tips (Silent Consonants)
Read the list below and underline the silent letters:
Dumb, wrath, pneumonia, poignant, debt, bristle, knit, reign, solemn,
muscle, chasten, rendezvous, tomb, corps, gnat, sword, doubt, aisle, indict,
castle, wrinkle, column, scythe, yacht, folklore, mnemonic, cupboard,
psalm, receipt, debris, mortgage, rapport.
Work in pairs. Make up short tongue-twisters and rhymes to practise the
pronunciations of these words.
Task 2: Vocabulary
Study the words in the table below and translate the examples into
your first language.
To sway means to convince, He made a solemn promise to help her
influence or control someone; to and it finally swayed her: she joined the
change someone’s opinion. project.
We describe someone’s attitude The professor has a cut-glass British
(tone, approach, etc.) as no- accent and no-nonsense approach to
nonsense if it is sensible, her lectures and classes, which helps
businesslike, practical or her build rapport with her students.
straightforward.
The word edge is frequently used The story lacks Stephen King’s usual
to refer to 1) force, keenness or edge.
effectiveness; 2) a margin of The promise to pay off the national
superiority or an advantage over debt gave the party a slight edge over
someone else. the opposition.
To float an idea means to offer it When we discussed our methodology
for consideration. of teaching vocabulary, I floated the
idea of applying mnemonic techniques.
Shallow, meaning superficial and I regret drawing him into the
lacking depth, is often used to discussion: all of his ideas seem to be
characterise a person, as well as flippant and shallow.
mindset, ideas, arguments, etc. She is just a shallow social climber,
hungry for glamorous lifestyle.
A pull on something is an informal Fantasy stories have a pull on my
word for the ability to draw or imagination.
attract someone or something. One of the pulls of rural life is its
pastoral tranquility.
To chasten someone is to restrain, The teachers often turned a blind eye
subdue or rebuke them, often to cheating, but they felt chastened
causing a change in behaviour or after the lecture on the dangers of
attitude. plagiarism.
A sketchy idea may be existing I have an idea for my term paper, but it
only in outline or superficial, is still sketchy.
uncertain or unreliable. The book contains explicit ideological
concerns expressed with the help of
rather sketchy arguments.
To renege on something is to go I can’t believe he reneged on our deal!
back on one’s promise or to fail to
fulfill a commitment.
React to the following sentences using the vocabulary from the table above:
1. I had a hard time explaining Mark why his behaviour is unacceptable.
2. I spent 3 hours yesterday writing my essay on the future of higher
education.
3. My mother can’t bear to leave New York even for a week.
4. My attempts to engage Randal in our project were futile. Perhaps you can
try to change his mind about it.
5. If you want to impress your tutor, try talking posh.
6. Should I mention my volunteering experience in my CV?
7. What was the uproar about? What did you say to the committee?
8. Vincent keeps bragging about his achievements and annoys people, but
you just turn a blind eye. Isn’t it time you talked to him?
9. I remember reading some very poignant stories by this author. But these
new ones are rather insipid.
10. The president’s speech conjured up the vision of a better future.
Work in pairs. Practise using the words above in everyday situations
(discussing choices, promises, good and bad decisions you have made, etc.)
Task 3: Idioms
Study the idioms in the table below and provide your own examples.
To run short (of sth) is to use something I wanted to break the ice with
up until supply is insufficient. humour but I soon ran short of
jokes.
To change one’s mind or to have a change You can’t just renege on your
of heart means to change one’s decision or promise! – Sorry, I’ve changed
attitude. my mind / I’ve had a change of
heart.
When someone starts from a humble She started as a secretary but
position, but then rises in status, worked her way up to a senior
importance or influence through hard manager.
work and perseverance, we use the idiom
to work one’s way up.
To get the better of someone or I was determined not to watch
something is to gain superiority, control or the new season of the show, but
an advantage over someone or something. my curiosity got the better of me.
To have one’s heart set on something is to The protagonist has his heart set
have a strong desire or expectation of breaking into show business.
something.
Work in groups of 3 or 4. Role-play the following situations, suing the
idioms and vocabulary above.
You are members of a student council at a university. You are supposed
to organise a charity event and you need to brainstorm ideas for it.
You are a family of two parents and a teen-aged son or daughter. You are
discussing which university the child should choose after school.
You are undergraduate students discussing whether to start a career, take
a gap year or go for postgraduate studies.
You are a group of students who are doing a project to collect artwork
that invite the viewer to look at traditional stories from a new perspective.
Find several images online and discuss which ones should be included in
your project.
Writing
Choose a well-known fairy story and rewrite it from a different
perspective. If you do not feel creative, read your classmates’ work
and write a review. Compare different responses to the stories
written in your class. Discuss what factors influenced your appreciation of
the stories.
Project
Being a Student
What kinds of students have you seen in books and films? Do they
have the same problems and dilemmas as you have? What choices
regarding education (what, where, how to study) do they make and why?
How will these choices influence their future? Explore the themes related to
contemporary students’ life and their choices, singling out the most
significant issues. How are these issues presented in terms of genre, style,
tone and humour?
Present your findings in class giving your audience an opportunity to
compare and contrast the highlighted aspects to their own experience.
Task 2
Work in groups. Discuss the way
you use emoticons in your daily
life.
Task 4
What is the distinction between emotion and feeling? Express your own
understanding of these terms first, them look them up and compare to your
ideas.
Look at the wheel of emotion below. Which of the states in it are feelings
rather than emotions?
The Taste of Emotions
Aimee Bender (born in 1969) is an American author. She has published
several novels and short stories, most of which have magic, absurd or surreal
elements. Bender was influenced by fairy-tales as a child, especially Hans
Christian Andersen, but her own stories gravitate towards the adult
audience. She has been awarded several prizes for her fiction and has been
teaching creative writing at the University of Southern California.
“The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake” (2010) is a novel about a 9-year-
old girl, Rose Edelstein, who discovers that she has a strange gift: when
tasting food she can discern the emotions of the person who cooked it. It all
starts with the birthday cake her mother bakes for her, and from that
moment on Rose’s perception of people and herself is beginning to change.
The novel traces Rose’s story as she becomes a young woman who manages
to come to grips with her unusual talent and puts it to good use.
Read the excerpt from the novel given below focusing on the language the
author uses to describe emotions.
After dinner, while Dad finished the rest of his work in the bedroom, Mom
stretched out on the living-room carpet in front of the red brick fireplace,
and even though it was warm out still, almost seventy degrees, she lit a fire
using an old pine log she’d found in the garage. Come sit, Rose, she called
to me, and we nestled up together and stared as the flickering flames licked
the log into ash. I had nightmares that night, since they say you have
nightmares more easily when the house is too warm. I dreamed we were
plunging down frozen rivers.
My birthday cake was her latest project because it was not from a mix but
instead built from scratch – the flour, the baking soda, lemon-flavored
because at eight that had been my request; I had developed a strong love for
sour. We’d looked through several cookbooks together to find just the right
one, and the smell in the kitchen was overpoweringly pleasant. To be clear:
the bite I ate was delicious. Warm citrus-baked batter lightness enfolded by
cool deep dark swirled sugar.
But the day was darkening outside, and as I finished that first bite, as that
first impression faded, I felt a subtle shift inside, an unexpected reaction. As
if a sensor, so far buried deep inside me, raised its scope to scan around,
alerting my mouth to something new. Because the goodness of the
ingredients – the fine chocolate, the freshest lemons – seemed like a cover
over something larger and darker, and the taste of what was underneath was
beginning to push up from the bite. I could absolutely taste the chocolate,
but in drifts and traces, in an unfurling, or an opening, it seemed that my
mouth was also filling with the taste of smallness, the sensation of shrinking,
of upset, tasting a distance I somehow knew was connected to my mother,
tasting a crowded sense of her thinking, a spiral, like I could almost even
taste the grit in her jaw that had created the headache that meant she had to
take as many aspirins as were necessary, a white dotted line of them in a row
on the nightstand like an ellipsis to her comment: I’m just going to lie
down… None of it was a bad taste, so much, but there was a kind of lack of
wholeness to the flavors that made it taste hollow, like the lemon and
chocolate were just surrounding a hollowness. My mother’s able hands had
made the cake, and her mind had known how to balance the ingredients,
but she was not there, in it. It so scared me that I took a knife from a drawer
and cut out a big slice, ruining the circle, because I had to check again right
that second, and I put it on a pink-flowered plate and grabbed a napkin
from the napkin drawer. My heart was beating fast. Eddie Oakley1 shrank to
a pinpoint. I was hoping I’d imagined it – maybe it was a bad lemon? or old
sugar? – although I knew, even as I thought it, that what I’d tasted had
nothing to do with ingredients – and I flipped on the light and took the plate
in the other room to my favorite chair, the one with the orange-striped
pattern, and with each bite, I thought – mmm, so good, the best ever, yum –
but in each bite: absence, hunger, spiraling, hollows. This cake that my
mother had made just for me, her daughter, whom she loved so much I
could see her clench her fists from overflow sometimes when I came home
from school, and when she would hug me hello I could feel how inadequate
the hug was for how much she wanted to give.
I ate the whole piece, desperate to prove myself wrong.
When Mom got up, after six, she wandered into the kitchen and saw the
slice taken out of the cake and found me slumped at the foot of the orange-
striped chair. She knelt down and smoothed the hot hair off my forehead.
Rosie, she said. Sweets. You all right?
I blinked open eyes, with eyelids heavier now, like tiny lead weights had
been strung, fishing-line style, onto each lash.
I ate a slice of cake, I said.
She smiled at me. I could still see the headache in her, pulsing in her left
eyebrow, but the smile was real.
That’s okay, she said, rubbing the underside of her eye bone. How’d it turn
out?
Fine, I said, but my voice wavered.
She went and got herself a piece and sat down with me on the floor, crossing
her legs. Sheet lines pressed into her cheek from the nap.
Mmm, she said, taking a small bite. Do you think it’s too sweet?
I could feel the mountain swelling in my throat, an ache spreading into the
lining of my neck.
What is it, baby? she asked.
I don’t know.
Joe home from school yet?
Not yet.
What’s wrong? Are you crying? Did something happen at school?
Did you and Dad have a fight?
Not really, she said, wiping her mouth with my napkin. Just a discussion.
You don’t have to worry about that.
Are you okay? I said.
Me?
You? I said, sitting up more.
She shrugged. Sure, she said. I just needed a nap. Why?
I shook my head clear. I thought –
She raised her eyebrows, encouraging.
It tastes empty, I said.
The cake? She laughed a little, startled. Is it that bad? Did I miss an
ingredient?
No, I said. Not like that. Like you were away? You feel okay?
I kept shaking my head. The words, stupid words, which made no sense.
I’m here, she said, brightly. I feel fine. More?
She held out a forkful, all sunshine and cocoa, but I could not possibly eat
it. I swallowed and, with effort, the spit slid around the mountain in my
throat.
I guess I shouldn’t spoil my dinner? I said.
Only then – and only for a second – did she look at me oddly. Funny kid,
she said. She patted her fingers on the napkin and stood. Well, then.
Should we get started?
Dinner? I said.
Chicken, she said, checking her watch. It’s late!
Notes
1. Eddie Oakley is a boy from school whom Rose often thinks about.
Work in pairs. Have you ever flown off the handle? Do you sometimes get
cold feet? Discuss these and other situations with your partner.
Writing
Read the excerpts from the readers’ reviews of “The Particular
Sadness for Lemon Cake”. How did this book make them feel?
Overall, I enjoyed this very unusual novel. It was not depressing or heavy,
but left me with a lingering sadness as I thought about my own childhood.
Wow. Extremely disturbing and haunting. And it was so depressing for most
of the book but only because I didn’t understand it until much too late.
“The Particular Sadness for Lemon Cake” is a combination of unique,
disturbing and unorganized. I have no other words to describe this novel as
I found myself tuning in and out of the events as they were slapped together
in a messy sort of way that made me feel tossed around from scene to scene
in a random fashion.
Everything about this book just went down right. Like that perfect cup of tea
– it’s not too hot but almost too hot, and not too milky, no sugar. It goes
down and you want to gulp it but you want to sip it too and you don't want to
finish it because you know your next cup of tea won’t be anywhere near as
good. And you kind of want to convince everyone that there’s whiskey in
your coffee mug instead of tea, it’s a little embarrassing but it doesn’t change
the way you feel about it. Not one little bit.
Choose a story you have recently read and describe your emotional
response to it. Post it on goodreads.com and compare to other reviewers’
emotions evoked by the same book. Are they similar to yours?
Project
The Way We See Our Emotions
What are our dominant emotions and what role do they play in our
lives? What imagery, metaphors and symbols do we use to talk
about them? How can they be represented visually?
Choose one or several emotions and find their representations in fiction,
poetry or cinema. Focus on visual representations. Find out which
portrayals elicit most sympathetic response from the class.
Task 1
Read the quote by Albert Einstein below. Do you agree or disagree?
Task 2
Look at the following tropes taken from the TV Tropes website. Can you
guess what they mean by their names?
Wish Fulfillment
Daydream Believer
Welcome to the Real World
Work in small groups. Share your opinions of these tropes and provide
examples from fiction, films, comics, etc.
Task 3
Read the excerpts below. What elements of world-building can you sot in
them? Can you identify the cases of ekphrasis?
Frodo was left to himself for a while, for Sam had fallen asleep. He was
alone and felt rather forlorn, although all about him the folk of Rivendell
were gathered. But those near him were silent, intent upon the music of the
voices and the instruments, and they gave no heed to anything else. Frodo
began to listen.
At first the beauty of the melodies and of the interwoven words in elven-
tongues, even though he understood them little, held him in a spell, as soon
as he began to attend to them. Almost it seemed that the words took shape,
and visions of far lands and bright things that he had never yet imagined
opened out before him; and the firelit hall became like a golden mist above
seas of foam that sighed upon the margins of the world. Then the
enchantment became more and more dreamlike, until he felt that an
endless river of swelling gold and silver was flowing over him, too
multitudinous for its pattern to be comprehended; it became part of the
throbbing air about him, and it drenched and drowned him. Swiftly he sank
under its shining weight into a deep realm of sleep.
From “The Lord of the Rings” by J.R.R.Tolkien
He had a number of pictures on hand; most of them were too large and
ambitious for his skill. He was the sort of painter who can paint leaves better
than trees. He used to spend a long time on a single leaf, trying to catch its
shape, and its sheen, and the glistening of dewdrops on its edges. Yet he
wanted to paint a whole tree, with all of its leaves in the same style, and all of
them different.
There was one picture in particular which bothered him. It had begun with
a leaf caught in the wind, and it became a tree; and the tree grew, sending
out innumerable branches, and thrusting out the most fantastic roots.
Strange birds came and settled on the twigs and had to be attended to. Then
all round the Tree, and behind it, through the gaps in the leaves and
boughs, a country began to open out; and there were glimpses of a forest
marching over the land, and of mountains tipped with snow. Niggle lost
interest in his other pictures; or else he took them and tacked them on to
the edges of his great picture. Soon the canvas became so large that he had
to get a ladder; and he ran up and down it, putting in a touch here, and
rubbing out a patch there. When people came to call, he seemed polite
enough, though he fiddled a little with the pencils on his desk. He listened
to what they said, but underneath he was thinking all the time about his big
canvas, in the tall shed that had been built for it out in his garden (on a plot
where once he had grown potatoes).
From “A Leaf by Niggle” by J.R.R.Tolkien
Kimimmid comes across the meadow to visit, and he and Shuku talk
together, and walk together in the meadows and down by the stream.
Presently, after a day or a week or two, he asks her if she would like to
dance. "Oh, I don't know," she says, but seeing him stand tall and straight,
his head thrown back a little, in the posture that begins the dance, she too
stands up; at first her head is lowered, though she stands straight, arms at her
sides; but then she wants to throw her head back, back, to reach her arms
out wide, wide... to dance, to dance with him...
And what are Shuku's parents and Kimimmid's parents doing, in the kitchen
garden or out in the old orchard, but the same thing? They face each other,
they raise their proud and narrow heads, and then the man leaps, arms
raised above his head, a great leap and a bow, a low bow... and the woman
bows too... And so it goes, the courtship dance. All over the northern
continent, now, the people are dancing.
Nobody interferes with the older couples, recourting, refashioning their
marriage. But Kimimmid had better look out. A young man comes across
the meadow one evening, a young man Shuku never met before; his
birthplace is some miles away. He has heard of Shuku's beauty. He sits and
talks with her. He tells her that he is building a new house, in a grove of
trees, a pretty spot, nearer her home than his. He would like her advice on
how to build the house. He would like very much to dance with her
sometime. Maybe this evening, just for a little, just a step or two, before he
goes away?
He is a wonderful dancer. Dancing with him on the grass in the late evening
of early spring, Shuku feels that she is flying on a great wind, and she closes
her eyes, her hands float out from her sides as if on that wind, and meet his
hands...
From “Changing Planes” by Ursula K. Le Guin
Task 4
One of the episodes above contains Frodo’s impression of Rivendell, an
ancient place where Elves live, in “The Lord of the Rings”.
Watch the Rivendell episodes from the screen adaptation of the book and
express your opinion of the concept art for Rivendell. What impression
does it produce on you?
Somewhere in the world there is a box, and if you open that box, inside it
you’ll find the world.
What does that mean? I don’t know. I think it’s like one of those Zen
riddles that you’re not really supposed to figure out. It’s just supposed to
make you think – you know, the whole it’s the journey that’s important
thing, not the destination.
I can’t even remember where I heard it. It was probably one of those late-
night, slightly inebriated conversations you can get into, especially when
you’re young and weighing in on all the great mysteries of the universe.
Like, why are we here and where do we go when we die? Or, what if this
world is all a dream and one of us is the dreamer? Or, do things exist only
because we expect them to?
Man, if I knew now what I thought I did then, I’d be a very wise man.
Looking back, you have to smile. The meaning of life. Omnipotent
dreamers. The world hidden in a box.
Except one day I found that box.
Once we’d all finished laughing1, I went back to browsing his shelves and
they started bargaining again. That’s when I spied the little wooden box,
sitting in between an old pair of opera glasses with mother of pearl inlay and
a little brass statue of Joan of Arc that was missing the tip of its little sword. I
turned the box over in my hands, attracted to it for no reason that I could
fathom. I’d like to say that I had a flash of premonition at that moment, a
forewarning that my perception of everything was about to change, but the
truth is all I felt was a mild curiosity.
The wood had been oiled, bringing out the grain, and the sides had been
put together with dovetailed joints – hand-carved ones rather than
machined, which meant it was probably from the 1800s and explained the
twenty-five-dollar price tag. There were no hinges. The lid simply lifted off,
which I proceeded to do.
And then it seemed the world went still all around me.
You know those photographs of the earth taken from one of the space
shuttles, the ones that show this beautiful green and blue sphere just floating
there in the black velvet reaches of outer space? That’s what was inside the
box – not a photograph, but a tiny replica of the earth floating there in
space.
I held it closer to my eye, trying to figure out the illusion. But it wasn’t. An
illusion, I mean. Impossible as it should be, somehow there really seemed
to be a tiny planet hovering there in the middle of the box.
“Pretty little thing, isn’t it?”
I almost dropped the box, but I managed to keep my grip on it as I turned
to Trevor.
“It’s from the 1800s,” he said. “Probably a snuffbox. Or maybe something
to keep stamps in. See this?”
He reached out a hand and reluctantly I passed the box over to him. I
almost had a heart attack when he stuck his finger inside, the better to hold
it as he showed me the joints.
“Hand-carved,” he said. “And look how snugly the lid still fits on it. I picked
it up at an estate sale last week.” His gaze lifted to mine. “I could let you
have it for twenty.”
It was an automatic spiel, but it surprised me because, after my first few days
of booth-sitting, nobody in here ever tried to sell me anything because I
didn’t buy anything. But mostly I couldn’t understand how he obviously
couldn’t – or at least didn’t – see the world slowly spinning inside.
He handed it back to me and I looked inside.
The little planet was still there.
“Sure,” I found myself saying as I reached into my pocket with my free hand
for the money. “I’ll take it.”
We might have exchanged a few more words, but I don’t remember. I just
took my purchase back to Lizzie’s booth and sat there staring inside it until I
realized that Trevor was giving me a puzzled look. Well, I guess it must have
seemed weird, me sitting there, mesmerized by the box the way I was.
I caught his gaze before he could turn away and gave him a shrug and a
smile. Putting the lid back on, I set it on the counter in front of me.
I desperately wanted to ask him what he saw when he looked inside the box,
but managed not to. Obviously, he didn’t see anything or he’d have kept it.
Or sold it for a lot more than twenty dollars.
Unless I had just imagined it.
I popped the lid and had another quick look.
Still there.
Or I was still imagining it.
I closed the lid again.
But if I wasn’t imagining it, then what was it?
Notes
1. The protagonist is a musician who sometimes helps his friend Lizzie to
take care of her booth selling vintage clothes and antique objects. There
are some other booths around. In the episode the protagonist is hanging
out with Trevor, the owner of one of the neighbouring booths.
Work in groups of 3 or 4. Brainstorm ideas for what this artifact might do.
Then read the next excerpt and compare it to your ideas.
I knew Jenny1 was in town from seeing her face looking back at me from
flyers on various telephone poles and the like, advertising an upcoming gig,
so I tried calling her at the apartment she still keeps in the city.
We spent awhile catching up before I brought up the whole business with
the world in a box.
She laughed. “God, you don’t forget anything, do you?”
“Well, it was a weird story – the kind of thing that stays with you.”
“I guess.”
“I was wondering where you first heard about it.”
I could sense her smiling on the other end of the line. “You mean what wise
man, hidden far away from the eyes of the world, first revealed these great
truths to me?”
I laughed. “Something like that.”
“I made it up,” she said.
I was holding the box and looked down into it at the earth floating there,
suspended in the center of the space in a way that just didn’t seem possible,
but it was happening all the same.
“Did you now,” I said.
“Um-hmm. I was working up a song, actually. Something along the lines of
the microcosm reflecting the macrocosm – you know, above as it is below –
but it never quite jelled for me. See, I thought of it as being this talisman that
allowed whoever had it the ability to make anything happen. They’d be like
a God. But then I realized that anyone who did have a talisman that
powerful, well then, they probably were God, and it’s hard to lay any real
doubt or angst on God, you know? His followers can have a crisis of faith,
sure. But God? I figure even if He didn’t know the answers, He’d let on that
He did.”
“And being God,” I put in, “so it would come to pass.”
She laughed. “Something like that. Why are you so interested in this,
anyway?”
“Oh, I don’t know,” I lied. “It’s just one of those things that came into my
head like an advertising jingle and I haven’t been able to get it out again.”
“I hate when that happens. Especially when you’re sitting down to write
something yourself and all you’ve got in your head is some cheesy oom-pah-
pah ditty from a used-car lot.”
“It wasn’t quite that bad,” I told her. “Besides, it gave me an excuse to give
you a call.”
“Now you need an excuse?”
“You know what I mean.”
“Sadly, I do,” she said. “Where does all the time go? I keep meaning to
look up friends whenever I get back to town, but it seems like no sooner do
I open the door of my apartment, than I’m already packing my bags and
hitting the road again without having made one call.”
“The price of success.”
“Of steady work anyway. Are you coming to the show on Saturday? I can
put your name on the guest list.”
We talked a little more, then finally said our goodbyes with promises to get
together soon.
It had started to snow again while I was on the phone, which was a good
thing. It’s always a trade off in the winter. When you get a clear, sunny day,
it’s usually bitter cold. Snow brings its own challenges, but at least you’re not
freezing your butt off when you venture outdoors and I had to walk to the
antiques mall soon. And I don’t mind shoveling because all we’ve got is the
porch and the walkway to the street.
I looked away from the window and studied the box some more, thinking of
what Jenny had said.
The person holding it could make anything happen.
Okay, so it was just an idea she came up with for a song that never went
anywhere, but it was in my hand now, as real as the kitchen around me,
even if I was the only one who could see it.
Maybe I was making it happen. Maybe I was crazy. But there was one way to
find out.
Anything, I thought.
I picked something small.
It had been dead in the antiques market for a couple weeks now. None of
the dealers were doing well, but poor Lizzie seemed particularly hard hit. I
don’t think she’d grossed more than forty dollars so far this week and it was
already Wednesday.
So let her have a good day, I told the world, floating there in the wooden
box I held in my hand.
Let her have an amazing day.
***
I got to the booth just before one o’clock when I was supposed to take over
from her and it was… it was just weird. She had three or four people trying
to give her money for stuff they’d already chosen to buy, with another
couple looking in the display cabinet with the really pricey jewellery.
When she looked up and caught my eye, I could see the relief in her gaze.
“Thank God you’re here,” she said. “It’s been crazy all morning.”
I stuffed my coat under one of the tables and started taking money,
wrapping up purchases, and generally making myself useful. It was like when
Lizzie did the weekend shows, before she got the booth here. Those one-off
shows had always been so successful that it had seemed like a no-brainer to
get a permanent place to sell her stuff.
It hadn’t been bad the first few months, but this recent run of bad luck had
been making her seriously reconsider the feasibility of keeping the booth.
Closing wasn’t even a consideration today.
Notes
1. Jenny is a musician that the protagonist used to play with. He
remembered that she had mentioned a world in a box on the past so he
phoned her to find out more.
Comprehension 1. How did the protagonist find the box? What was
unusual about it?
2. What did he learn from Jenny?
3. What did he decide to do and why?
4. What was the outcome?
Discussion 1. What was the protagonist’s reaction to his unusual
find? How was it depicted in the text?
2. Which traditional trope is used in this story? What
genre is it typical for?
3. Brainstorm ideas how this story might end.
4. Can the story be interpreted as an allegory?
5. What would you do if you found a box like that?
Work in pairs and tell the story of your own world
in the box to your partner.
Language Practice
Task 1. Heteronyms / Homographs
Heteronyms are words that are spelt identically but pronounced
differently and have different meanings. Thus, heteronyms are homographs,
but not homophones. A large group of heteronyms in English are nouns
and verbs that are stressed differently, as in a rebel /ˈrebəl/ and to rebel
/rɪˈbel/. Changes in vowel and consonant sounds in such pairs are also
observed.
Read the phrases below out loud. Mind the stress.
To change the subject – to subject people to danger
To refuse to renege on the deal – too much refuse around
To project one’s resentment – to be engulfed by the project
To construct a new shopping mall – a philosophical construct
To create a news digest – to digest the information
Work in pairs. Make up sentences with the words below. Use them as both
verbs and nouns, as in the example. Let you partner read them.
It was a no-brainer to figure out how to break that record.
I am a bit anxious about my talk: they are going to record it!
present, produce, lead, incense, desert, convict, contract, conflict, conduct,
affect, intern, permit, object, console, delegate, suspect, attribute
Which of the words above have other changes in pronunciation, apart from
stress? Look at the following words. What difference in pronunciation do
they all share when used as a verb and as a noun?
excuse, house, close, abuse, use
Put them in sentences as in the activity above and practise their
pronunciation.
Task 2. Translation
Translate the following fragment from the story:
We might have exchanged a few more words, but I don’t remember. I just
took my purchase back to Lizzie’s booth and sat there staring inside it until I
realized that Trevor was giving me a puzzled look. Well, I guess it must have
seemed weird, me sitting there, mesmerized by the box the way I was.
Look up the etymology of the word “mesmerised”. What synonyms of this
word can you offer? Do you find optical illusions mesmerising?
Translate another fragment from the text and the quotation above:
It had started to snow again while I was on the phone, which was a good
thing. It’s always a trade off in the winter. When you get a clear, sunny day,
it’s usually bitter cold. Snow brings its own challenges, but at least you’re not
freezing your butt off when you venture outdoors and I had to walk to the
antiques mall soon. And I don’t mind shoveling because all we’ve got is the
porch and the walkway to the street.
Compare how you have translated “trade off” in the quote and in the text.
What is the classical definition of this term and how do people use it
situationally?
Discuss possible trade offs in the following situations:
Doing your work fast
Bottling up your emotions
Becoming the head of a team
Becoming a celebrity
Writing
Choose a series of books and / or a film franchise that are set in a
fictional universe. What are the important ingredients of world-
building (geography, flora and fauna, backstory, history, mythology,
technology, material culture, languages, folklore, etc.)? How is the
storyworld presented to the reader / viewer? How do we learn about this
world? How important are these elements to the plot and character
development?
Write a short review of the chosen material and express your own
appreciation of this fictional universe. Say whether you would like to live a
world like this one and explain why or why not.
Project
Artistic Languages
There are several fictional universes that have their own
constructed languages (Tolkien’s Middle-earth, Martin’s “A Song
of Ice and Fire”, the Star Trek franchise, etc.). Artificial languages that are
designed specifically for fictional purposes are also called “artistic
languages”. Do you consider creating a language an art? Choose one of such
languages and study their main phonetic and grammatical features. What
role do they play in the corresponding stories? Why would people want to
know more and even learn such languages (as many people do)?
Present your project in class and find out your classmates’ opinions about
the language you have chosen.
Calligraphy based on Tengwar, a script designed by J.R.R.Tolkien for his
invented languages.
UNIT 3
Discussing Stories: Belief and Incredulity
Lead In
When you read a book, are you desperate to know “what happened
next”?
Do you sometimes read
the last pages before
reading the whole novel?
Can you predict what the
story is going to be about
after reading its prologue
/ first chapter?
Do you prefer
predictable storylines or
unexpected “plot twists?”
What is your attitude to
“spoilers”?
Discussion
Work in pairs. Discuss your expectations for the novels which
opening passages you’ve just read. Would you like to read any of
them? Why / why not?
What can you guess about the genres of each novel? Compare your
impressions.
Sometimes the narrative starts in medias res, “in the middle of things”.
Flashbacks relate events that happened before the narrative starting point,
while technique of foreshadowing gives a hint of what will come later.
Depending on their role in the story, characters may be referred to as major
and minor. The main character is called the protagonist (also the hero /
heroine), while their main opponent is the antagonist. The latter can also be
the adversary, nemesis or villain (if he or she is considered evil). A character
who, by contrast, highlights the distinctive features of the protagonist is a foil.
The relation between the protagonist and the antagonist takes form of a
conflict.
Task 1
Read the summaries below and decide which one is “the plot” and which is
“the story”.
Jane Austen’s “Sense and Sensibility” follows the lives of the Dashwood
sisters, Elinor, Marianne and Margaret, as they are forced to move with their
widowed mother from the estate on which they grew up to a cottage on the
property of a distant relative. The two older sisters experience love and
heartbreak before finally they get happily married.
When Mr. Henry Dashwood dies, leaving all his money to his first wife’s
son John Dashwood, his second wife and her three daughters are left with
no permanent home and very little income. Mrs. Dashwood and her
daughters (Elinor, Marianne, and Margaret) are invited to stay with their
distant relations, the Middletons, at Barton Park. Elinor is sad to leave their
home at Norland because she has become closely attached to Edward
Ferrars, the brother-in-law of her half-brother John. However, once at
Barton Park, Elinor and Marianne discover many new acquaintances,
including the retired officer and bachelor Colonel Brandon, and the gallant
and impetuous John Willoughby, who rescues Marianne after she twists her
ankle running down the hills of Barton in the rain. Willoughby openly and
unabashedly courts Marianne, and together the two flaunt their attachment
to one another, until Willoughby suddenly announces that he must depart
for London on business, leaving Marianne lovesick and miserable.
(see SparkNotes on “Sense and Sensibility” for the whole summary)
Task 2
Think of famous novels you have read (“Pride and Prejudice”, “Anna
Karenina”, “The Lord of the Rings”, “The Catcher in the Rye”, etc.) Name
protagonists, antagonists, major and minor characters in these books. Did
any of the characters serve as a foil to the protagonist?
Task 3
Apply Freitag’s pyramid to the story “Good Boys Deserve Favours” by Neil
Gaiman or another story known to everyone in your class. Draw a diagram
in your notebook or on the board.
Task 4
Read the excerpts below. Identify the devices used in them.
Root glared at her. “I don’t know why it is, Captain Short, but whenever you start
agreeing with me, I get decidedly nervous.”
Root was right to be nervous. If he’d known how this straightforward Recon
assignment was going to turn out, he would probably have retired there and then.
Tonight, history was going to be made. And it wasn’t the discovery-of-radium,
first-man-on-the-moon happy kind of history. It was the Spanish-Inquisition,
here-comes-the-Hindenburg bad kind of history. Bad for humans and fairies.
Bad for everyone.
Language Practice
Task 1: Vocabulary
Read the vocabulary units in the table below and add your own
examples to the ones that are given.
We can talk of moral centre in our Scientists argue whether our brain has
brain or personality, as well as in a a moral centre.
certain area (business, education, Albus Dumbledore is the moral
fiction, etc.) It presupposed a centre of the Harry Potter novels.
certain code of ethics that defines
what is right and wrong.
A mishmash is collection or a There is a mishmash of bizarre
variety of miscellaneous things. characters in the series, but as the plot
unfolds we realize that most of them
are rounded and quite complicated.
A nondescript person or thing lack She seems quite nondescript at first,
in distinctive features or but now I see she has her own style.
characteristics. It was just another nondescript novel I
read and immediately forgot about.
To second-guess something is to It’s problematic to try and second-
criticize or correct it in hindsight, guess the jury’s judgment: that trial
after its outcome is already known. took place half a century ago.
When we concede (a make a I reluctantly conceded that I had
concession), we admit that others made a mistake.
may be right / we may be wrong. It In a debate, one should always make
also means to acknowledge defeat. concessions to the opposing opinion.
To be (un)sympathetic to The headmistress has always been
something or someone means (not) very sympathetic to our project.
to be favourably inclined or (not) to Kafka’s characters are often thought
understand and support. to be quite unsympathetic.
Sympathetic characters in fiction
make readers feel for them, while
unsympathetic fail to get their
sympathy.
When something stretches our The film has so many of plot holes
credulity, we find it hard to believe that it stretches the audience’s
it. It is often used when discussing credulity to the limit.
storylines and plot twists. Scenes that offer no motivation for
characters to act as they do usually
stretch my credulity.
Hand-waving in general terms is a When there is a major conflict in a
pejorative term referring to an book, one can’t just resolve it by
attempt to make something appear means of hand-waving, resulting in
reasonable and logical when it is some sloppy deus ex machina. If this
clearly not so. In literary terms, it happens, it will definitely stretch
refers to a plot device which readers’ credulity.
stretches readers’ credulity.
Task 2
Read the information about willing suspension of disbelief given below.
Answer the following questions, using the vocabulary above.
Is the state of immersion in a fictional world familiar to you? What is
required to maintain this state?
Can you think of “unwritten rules” that account for our “belief” in the
story?
Willing suspension of disbelief is a term introduced by S. T. Coleridge to
describe the reader’s ability to “suspend” judgment of the plausibility of the
story, if the writer manages to create “human interest and a semblance of
truth”. Nowadays, the term is freely applied to fiction, cinema, theatre, art,
etc. to point out that we are ready to “believe” the story that we read or
watch, as long as we are “transported”
by it, that is immersed in a fictional
world. J.R.R.Tolkien argued that to
achieve this writers must use
imagination to give “the inner
consistency of reality” to their fictional
worlds. Most recipients feel that certain
rules (often unwritten) should be
observed in order to uphold this
consistency. Another term that
describes the state of immersion into a
created world is “aesthetic illusion”.
Task 3
Match the idioms in the table below with their definitions. Think of
equivalents in your first language.
To take issue with (someone To do something seemingly impossible and
or something) surprising; to produce something in a way
that has no obvious explanation, as if done
by magic.
To keep (something) straight To disagree or to challenge.
(in one’s mind/head)
In character / out of To become chaotic and difficult to manage.
character
To get out of hand To exploit something to the maximum; to
get as much out of something as is possible.
To take things to heart To act in a way that is (in)consistent with
one’s typical or expected behaviour.
To make the most of Used to talk about something unnoticed,
something unappreciated or not having effect on
someone.
To pull a rabbit out of one’s To takes things seriously, to be influenced
/ the hat and affected by them.
To be lost on someone To understand something clearly; not to be
confused; to keep the details of something in
one’s mind.
Writing
Although narration in fiction usually deploys past tenses, plot
summaries are written mostly in the present. Write a short plot
summary of a famous book or film using the Present Simple. The
list of phrases below will help you to structure your summary, although you
are not required to use them all.
Read the summary to your classmates without mentioning the characters’
name sand let them guess the book. Be careful with spoilers – make sure
you use the stories that everyone already knows.
[The novel] tells the story of a… / follows the life of…
The story is set in…
The story is narrated by…
[The protagonist / the narrator] begins her story at…
The story opens with…
At the outset of the tale…
Soon… / Shortly after… / Twenty years later… / At this moment…
As the plot unfolds / unravels, we learn that…
As [the protagonist] travels to…, s/he discovers that… / encounters…
Eventually [the protagonist] decides to…
Finally… / In the end…
In the epilogue it is revealed that…
Project
Discover TV Tropes
TV Tropes is a website that collects various plot devices and
conventions (also known as tropes) from creative works, such film
and television (which was the site’s initial focus), as well as literature,
mythology, drama, music, comics, manga, video games, music,
advertisements and toys. The site provides both the explanation of tropes
and their examples across the media. Each trope has a descriptive name,
such as Brainless Beauty, Damsel in Distress, Dark and Troubled Past,
Foolish Sibling Responsible Sibling, Gold Digger, Knight in Shining Armor,
Not What It Looks Like, Wide-Eyed Idealist and so on. Research the site
and choose one of the tropes to study in more detail. Present the examples
of this trope in different creative works. Alternatively, you can focus on one
work and single out several tropes in it. In conclusion, describe how these
tropes affect our suspension of disbelief.
UNIT 7
The Art of Observation: Never Miss a Detail
Lead In
Think of an iconic fictional character (Sherlock Holmes, Mary Poppins,
Harry Potter, etc.). What details do you associate with this character?
Do you have an eye for details in real life? How observant do you think
you are? Take the quiz below to find out.
1. How is the smaller horizontal strip of the cross of the Orthodox Christian
church located?
a) inclined left down
b) inclined right down
c) without inclination
2. What is the order of the colours on the flag of France?
a) red blue white
b) blue red white
c) red white blue
e) blue white red
3. What shape is yield (give way) traffic sign?
a) triangular
b) square
с) round
d) hexagon
4. Which side are the buttons on a lady’s blouse?
a) left
b) right
5. The moon in the picture on the previous page is…
a) waxing
b) waning
c) full
6. Have you noticed the typo in the word “observant” in the picture?
a) yes
b) no
Score 5-7 Score 3-4 Score 0-2
You are truly observant, on You have an eye for detail, You should develop your
a par with Sherlock but some important things observation skills. Make it a
Holmes. Make the most of might slip by. Discover point to notice three new
your skills in the art of where your blind spots are things in the world around
noticing things around you. to notice more. you every day.
Details in art can tell you a lot. Look at the picture of an old woman by
Anton Pieck. What story do the details tell?
Discussion
Work in small groups.
Discuss whether the clothes tell much about people who wear
them. If yes, what exactly do they tell?
Look at the clothes you are wearing today. Decipher the messages these
clothes send to other people. Which details are particularly important?
Task 1
Synecdoche represents the whole through its part. What, in your opinion, is
the difference between synecdoche and artistic detail?
Task 2
Read an excerpt from “The Jane Austen Book Club” by Karen Joy Fowler
describing how the characters were dressed for another Book Club meeting.
Do you think some of the details can be regarded as implicit? If so, which
ones? Say how do you visualise…
Sylvia
Allegra
Jocelyn
Bernadette
Grigg
Sylvia was looking uncommonly elegant tonight. She had cut her hair as short as
Allegra’s and was dressed in a long skirt with a Chinese-red fitted top. Applied a
plumy lipstick and had her eyebrows shaped. We were pleased to see that she’d
reached that drop-dead stage of the divorce proceedings.
She was on her feet and dressed to kill.
Allegra was, as always, vivid. Jocelyn was classic. Grigg was casual – corduroys and
a green rugby shirt. Bernadette had already spilled hummus on her yoga pants.
The pants were spotted with olive and blue flowers, and now there was a
hummus-coloured spot as well on the ledge of her stomach. You could go a long
time without noticing the stain, however. You could go a long time without
looking at her pants. This was because she’d broken her glasses sometime after
our last meeting and patched them together with a startling great lump of paper
clips and masking tape.
It was possible they weren’t even broken. It was possible she’d merely lost the
little screw.
Task 3
Read four more excerpts from “The Jane Austen Book Club” and find
examples of depicting, authenticity and characterological details in them.
Are there any implicit details?
There was a rug by the couch that many of us recognized from the
Sundance catalogue as something we ourselves had wanted, the one with
poppies on the edges. The sun glanced off a row of copper pots in the
kitchen window.
Each pot held an African violet, some white, some purple, and you have to
admire a man who keeps his houseplants alive, especially when they’ve been
transferred into pots with no holes for drainage. It made us begrudge him
the rug less. Of course, the violets could all have been new, bought just to
impress us. But then again, who were we that we needed impressing?
Grigg had grown up in Orange County, the only boy in a family with four
children, and the youngest. His oldest sister, Amelia, was eight when he was
born, Bianca was seven, and Caty, who was called Catydid when she was
little and Cat when she was older, was five.
He was always way too easy to tease. Sometimes they told him not to be
such a boy and sometimes not to be such a baby. It didn’t seem to leave a
whole lot of things for him to be.
If Grigg had been a girl, his name would have been Delia. Instead he was
named after his father’s father, who’d died just about the time Grigg was
born and already no one seemed to remember him very well. “A man’s
man,” Grigg’s father said, “a quiet man,” which was a movie Grigg had seen
on television and so he always pictured his grandfather as John Wayne.
Grigg was the only one of the children with his own bedroom. This was a
continual source of resentment. The room was so tiny the bed barely fit and
his chest of drawers had to be put in the hall. Still, it was all his. The ceiling
slanted; there was a single window, and wallpaper with yellow rosebuds,
which Amelia had picked because the room had been hers until Grigg came
along. If he’d been a girl she would have gotten to keep the room.
When the wind blew, a branch tapped against the glass like fingers, but that
surely wouldn’t have scared Amelia. Grigg would lie in the dark, all by
himself, and the tree creaked and tapped. He would hear his sisters laughing
down the hall. He knew when it was Amelia laughing and when it was
Bianca and when it was Cat, even if he couldn’t hear the words. He guessed
they were talking about boys, a subject on which they had nothing pleasant
to say.
Grigg’s father couldn’t stand up to them at all. They hated the smell of his
pipe, so he smoked only in his tool shed. They hated sports, so he went out
to his car to listen to games on the radio. When they wanted money, they
flirted for it, straightening his tie and kissing his cheek until, helpless as a
kitten, he pulled his wallet from his back pocket. Once Grigg did the very
same thing, blinked his heavy lashes and pouted his lips. Cat laughed so
hard she choked on a peanut, which could have killed her. Amelia had
heard of that happening to someone, and how would Grigg have felt then?
Task 3
Watch the TED talk given by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie at TED Global
2009 entitled “The Danger of a Single Story” and comment on the following
details she mentions:
ginger beer
a well-crafted basket
a tape of Mariah Carey
Notes
1. Tostitos is a brand producing snacks, mostly crisps.
The few black locals she had seen A few other people were waiting on
were so light-skinned and lank-haired the platform, all of them white and
she could not imagine them wearing lean, in short, flimsy clothes.
braids.
Quantifiers a few / few / the few are used with countable nouns. A few
means some, several, while few means “not many” (often implying “not
enough”). The definitive article may be added before few in a specifying
context. The comparative form of few is fewer.
There are a few students in the library (several).
There are few students in the library (not many, not enough).
The few students who still visit the library are mainly attracted by the
free WiFi. (specified context).
Nowadays fewer students visit the library than 10 years ago
(comparison).
Respond to the sentences below using a few / few / the few / fewer + the
suggested word.
1. I don’t want to offend anyone by calling them “fat”, but what can I say?
(acceptable)
2. Who should we choose to represent out faculty in the competition? We
don’t seem to have a perfect candidate. (impeccable)
3. So what do you think of the sequel so far? (longwinded)
4. Why are you reading this blog about vegetarian diet? You’re not a
vegetarian, are you? (convincing)
5. Which books have really captivated you recently? (enthralling)
6. I need to find some material about poems and songs with interesting
settings. Can I pick your brain on that? (vibrant)
Task 2
A common mistake in writing is using run-on sentences and comma splices.
A run-on sentence consists of two or more clauses that are not joined
properly by a connecting word or not separated by a proper punctuation
mark. When two independent clauses are separated by a comma without a
proper conjunction the sentence turns into a comma splice. Both cases
should be avoided in formal writing. This error can also be fixed by
changing the two clauses into two separate sentences or by substituting the
comma to a semicolon. Consider the examples below:
Incorrect: I enjoyed the story enormously, its plot is utterly gripping.
Correct: I enjoyed the story enormously. Its plot is utterly gripping.
I enjoyed the story enormously; its plot is utterly gripping.
I enjoyed the story enormously because its plot is utterly gripping.
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Check the plot summaries and other written tasks you have done previously
for run-on sentences and comma splices. If you find any, correct their
punctuation.
Project
Devil is in the Detail
Do you remember stories where a seemingly innocuous detail
played a pivotal role? What was that detail? How was it
introduced in the beginning and when did it become apparent that
it was more that it seemed? Explain the role of this detail in the plot,
character development and your own perception of the story.
Exploring Themes
A theme in a narrative work is its main topic. Although “theme” is
sometimes viewed as the central idea or concept (e.g. “Crime doesn’t pay”),
nowadays it is more commonly used as the main subject of the work (what is
it about?), expressed in a single word (“Crime”, “Justice”, “Corruption”) or
in a phrase (“Justice vs. Corruption”, “Crime and Punishment”). Many
themes in fiction are universal (“Love”, “Death”, “Coming-of-Age”, etc.)
since they reflect experiences familiar to people all around the world. A
complex narrative may have multiple themes.
Themes are often manifested with the help of literary motifs: elements of
plot or imagery that are frequently seen in fiction (also referred to as clichés
or tropes). For instance, if the theme of the narrative is “justice”, it may
contain such motifs as “framing an innocent person”, “miscarriage of
justice” or “escape from prison”. If a motif is repeated and foregrounded
within one work or series, it is a recurring motif (also known as a leitmotif).
If themes address the question “what is the text about?”, then messages are
“what the text says about the subject”. Traditionally referred to as “the moral
of the story”, messages are explicit or implicit statements or concepts that
narratives offer to the reader. Messages can be expressed through the
characters’ speech and / or actions, as well as through the events of the plot.
In most cases, these statements relate to the human condition, the nature of
society, morality and other general issues of human existence. If the
narrative offers two consistent levels of meaning, a primary (literal), meaning
and a secondary (abstract or historical), then we are dealing with an allegory,
and some extra effort is required on the part of the reader to decipher its
message.
Task 1
Look at several universal themes presented in the wordcloud below. Which
ones have you got on your Top Ten list? Which books and films centered
on these theme can you remember?
What themes based on binary oppositions can you think of? Continue the
line below:
Good vs. evil, life vs. death…
Task 2
Study the words and phrases in the table below. Which of them relate to the
theme, the message and the impact they may have on the reader? Translate
the examples.
When something is thought- Due to the highly charged atmosphere of
provoking, it intellectually the setting, “The Handmaid’s Tale” is
stimulates and challenges us. not a comfortable read, but it is certainly
thought-provoking.
Insight enables clearer and Atwood’s fiction gives many insights into
deeper understanding of a Canadian history and mentality.
phenomenon. The adjective She has been named among the most
insightful is also frequently used insightful authors of our times.
in criticism.
Originally a biblical term, The film kept me on the edge of my seat
epiphany is used in criticism to and when the hero experienced his final
describe a moment of sudden epiphany, I had my own catharsis as well.
insight and revelation.
A premise is a foundation, a A solid premise ensures the story’s
basis, a core statement or verisimilitude and draws in the reader.
assumption. It can be used in The premise of “The Robber Bride” is
connection with the plot, the that there are three female characters
theme and the message of a united by one common enemy: a woman
story. who has stolen their loved ones.
To make others understand our The story deals with universal themes
message, we try to put it across and conveys the idea of the fragility of
or to convey it to someone. human life.
Atwood convincingly puts across her
feminist views.
When the message is hard or Have you read the famous “Animal
impossible to understand, we Farm”? It’s supposed to be an allegory,
say that we don’t know what to but I couldn’t make head or tail of it.
make of it or that we can’t make This collection of stories is perplexing: I
head of tail of the story. don’t know what to make of it.
Work in pairs. Make up dialogues discussing the stories you have recently
read or watched using the vocabulary above. Which of these lexical units
can also be used in everyday life? Think of situations where they can come
in handy.
Task 3
Work in pairs.
Think of a story about animals (a fable, a poem, a cartoon, etc.) which has
an allegorical meaning and which you are both familiar with. Extract the
moral of the allegory and put in down in your notebook without telling your
partner. After that compare it with the one your partner came up with. If
there are significant differences, discuss their possible source.
Read the three pieces from the collection given below and identify their
themes.
Voice
I was given a voice. That’s what people said about me. I cultivated my voice,
because it would be a shame to waste such a gift. I pictured this voice as a
hothouse plant, something luxuriant, with glossy foliage and the word
tuberous in the name, and a musky scent at night. I made sure the voice was
provided with the right temperature, the right degree of humidity, the right
ambience. I soothed its fears; I told it not to tremble. I nurtured it, I trained
it, I watched it climb up inside my neck like a vine.
The voice bloomed. People said I had grown into my voice. Soon I was
sought after, or rather my voice was. We went everywhere together. What
people saw was me, what I saw was my voice, ballooning out in front of me
like the translucent greenish membrane of a frog in full trill.
My voice was courted. Bouquets were thrown to it. Money was bestowed on
it. Men fell on their knees before it. Applause flew around it like flocks of
red birds.
Invitations to perform cascaded over us. All the best places wanted us, and
all at once, for, as people said – though not to me – my voice would thrive
only for a certain term. Then, as voices do, it would begin to shrivel. Finally
it would drop off, and I would be left alone, denuded – a dead shrub, a
footnote.
It’s begun to happen, the shriveling. Only I have noticed it so far. There’s
the barest pucker in my voice, the barest wrinkle. Fear has entered me, a
needleful of ether, constricting what in someone else would be my heart.
Now it’s evening; the neon lights come on, excitement quickens in the
streets. We sit in this hotel room, my voice and I; or rather in this hotel
suite, because it’s still nothing but the best for us. We’re gathering our
strength together. How much of my life do I have left? Left over, that is: my
voice has used up most of it. I’ve given it all my love, but it’s only a voice, it
can never love me in return.
Although it’s begun to decay, my voice is still as greedy as ever. Greedier: it
wants more, more and more, more of everything it’s had so far. It won’t let
go of me easily.
Soon it will be time for us to go out. We’ll attend a luminous occasion, the
two of us, chained together as always. I’ll put on its favourite dress, its
favourite necklace. I’ll wind a fur around it, to protect it from the drafts.
Then we’ll descend to the foyer, glittering like ice, my voice attached like an
invisible vampire to my throat.
Language Work
Task 1: Confusing Pairs
There are a lot of words in English that non-native speakers tend to confuse.
Common pairs like this are:
adapt / adopt
affect / effect
beer / bear / bare
imaginary / imaginative
flair / flare
human / humane
literal / literary
lose / loose
model / modal
moral / morale
serial / cereal
tell / say
Read these pairs and say where the confusion may come from.
Example:
“Tell” may be confused with “say” because they often mean exactly the
same thing, but are used in different collocations. “Tell” is used when a
direct object follows it (tell me, don’t tell the children) and in the
expressions like “tell the truth”, “tell a joke”, “tell a story”, etc.
Offer your own activity aimed at preventing errors in the usage of
the words above. Divide the class into several groups and try out
the activities you have come up with.
Example:
Offer images to your classmates
prompting them to describe them,
using the words above.
The painting by Norman Rockwell
“The Spirit of Education” tells a
story of a boy forced to participate
in a pompous public event and
impersonate “education”. The artist
seems to say, in an allegorical way,
that teachers and officials often
glorify the system of education and
pretend to feel the enthusiasm
which is not really there
(symbolised by the woman’s false
smile in the painting). You can
easily guess what she is saying at the
moment. The boy’s sulky
expression tells us exactly how he feels about the insincerity of the whole
situation.
Task 2: Vocabulary
Check your memory. Rephrase the sentences below using the vocabulary
you have learnt since the beginning of the course.
1. I find it hard to believe the story the author is telling.
2. The setting is very lively, but the characters are dull and they do not
move me.
3. The show was unbelievable! It was like a sudden discovery of truth.
4. Music helps me forget about my troubles. I just get inside each song I
hear.
5. You notice everything! I think you’ve work hard to acquire this skill.
6. The plot is not dynamic at all, and I find some of the imagery really
strange.
7. Atwood has a true talent: when you start reading her book, you just can’t
stop.
8. I don’t know how to end my story: I don’t want to force a happy ending
on it without proper explanation. I think I just need to start from the
beginning.
9. I know the narrator’s voice sounds superior at times, but it’s what you’d
expect.
10. Your progress is slowed down by the way you think about your
project: you always want to get it exactly right. Remember: no one had to
be perfect.
Writing
Go back to the plan of your book recommendation and the part
you have already written. Revise what you have done and add a
paragraph with a recommendation itself. Use the following words
and expressions in it:
I recommend it to anyone who is interested in…
It is a must-read for those who…
It has changed my understanding of… made me think of… made me realise
that…
This story will be thoroughly enjoyed by…
I would recommend it to those who appreciate insights into…
It’s a good choice for anyone who…
It’s a perfect / extraordinary / excellent read for…
It makes for a unique reading experience because…
The book is a rare treat for…
Exploring Dialogue
The main method of communication between characters in a fictional work
is dialogue. It is the direct speech uttered by characters and singled out with
the help of punctuation within the text. Authors use different strategies to
embed dialogue in their texts and combine it with their chosen point of view
perspective.
Characters’ background, education, social status, profession and personal
qualities are reflected in dialogue. Dialogues in fiction often tend to imitate
real-life oral speech and spontaneous communication, although it is seldom
an accurate imitation. Fictional speech is often stylized, “purified” and more
concise (devoid of numerous repetitions, errors and fillers). In some cases,
authors illustrate characters’ background by reproducing phonetic,
grammatical and lexical peculiarities of a dialect or a sociolect. A character’s
individual manner of speaking is referred to as idiolect.
Task 1
Read the two excerpts below and compare the ways dialogues are
incorporated in them. The first excerpt is narrated by a boy who attends a
magical University in a fantasy novel. The second excerpt is taken from a
short story about a small boy’s first day in an Irish school. The boy is a
refugee from Botswana.
1.
Another boy hurried in clutching a hardback. He was young, by which I
mean he looked to be no more than two years older than me. Hemme
stopped him before he could make it into a seat. “Hello there,” he said in
an over-courteous tone. “And you are?”
“Basil, sir,” the boy stood awkwardly in the aisle. […]
“Basil, you wouldn’t happen to be from Yll, would you?” Hemme asked,
smiling sharply.
“No sir.”
“Ahhh,” Hemme said, feigning disappointment. “I had heard that Yllish
tribes use the sun to tell time, and as such, have no true concept of
punctuality. However, as you are not Yllish, I can see no excuse for being
late. Can you?”
Basil’s mouth worked silently for a moment, as if to make some excuse,
then apparently decided better of it. “No sir.”
“Good. For tomorrow, you can prepare a report on Yll’s lunar calendar
compared to the more accurate, civilized Aturan calendar that you should
be familiar with by now. Be seated.”
Basil slunk wordlessly into a nearby seat like a whipped dog.
(from “The Name of the Wind” by Patrick Rothfuss)
2.
He sits.
He sits in the classroom. It is his first day.
He is late.
He is five years late.
And that is very late, he thinks.
He is nine. The other boys and girls have been like this, together, since they
were four. But he is new.
– We have a new boy with us today, says the teacher-lady.
– So what? says the boy who is behind him.
Other boys and some girls laugh. He does not know exactly why. He does
not like this.
– Now, now, says the teacher-lady.
She told him her name when he was brought here by the man but he does
not now remember it. He did not hear it properly.
– Hands in the air, she says.
All around him, children lift their hands. He does this too. There is then,
quite quickly, silence.
– Good, says the teacher-lady. – Now.
She smiles at him. He does not smile. Boys and girls will laugh. He thinks
that this will happen if he smiles.
The teacher-lady says his name.
– Stand up, she says.
Again, she says his name. Again, she smiles. He stands. He looks only at the
teacher-lady.
– Everybody, this is Joseph. Say Hello.
– Hello!
– HELLO!
– HELL-OHH!
– Hands in the air!
The children lift their hands. He also lifts his hands. There is silence. It is a
clever trick, he thinks.
– Sit down, Joseph.
He sits down. His hands are still in the air.
– Now. Hands down
Right behind him, dropped hands smack the desk. It is the so-what boy.
– Now, says the teacher-lady.
She says this word many times. It is certainly her favorite word.
– Now, I’m sure you’ll all make Joseph very welcome. Take out your Maths
Matters.
– Where’s he from, Miss?
It is a girl who speaks. She sits in front of Joseph, two desks far.
– We’ll talk about that later, says the teacher-lady. But maths first.
Task 2
Divide into three groups: each will work with one of the excerpts below.
Read your excerpt from “The Name of the Wind” by Patrick Rothfuss. Say
what is revealed about characters through dialogue.
1. After listening to a love ballad performed by the protagonist
“You’ll have to promise me,” a red-eyed Simmon said seriously, “That you
will never play that song again without warning me first. Ever.”
“Was it that bad?” I smiled giddily at him.
“No!” Simmon almost cried out. “It’s... I’ve never – ” He struggled,
wordless for a moment, then bowed his head and began to cry hopelessly
into his hands.
Wilem put a protective arm around Simmon, who leaned unashamedly
against his shoulder. “Our Simmon has a tender heart,” he said gently. “I
imagine he meant to say that he liked it very much.”
I noticed that Wilem’s eyes were red around the edges too.
2. Meeting a local swineherd
“Oi taut Oi heard sommat daen tae water aways,” he said, his accent so thick
and oily you could almost taste it. My mother referred to it as a deep valley
accent since you only found them in towns that didn’t have much contact
with the outside world. Even in small rural towns like Trebon, folk didn’t
have much of an accent these days. Living in Tarbean and Imre for so long,
I hadn’t heard a dialect this thick in years. The fellow must have grown up
in a truly remote location, probably tucked far back into the mountains.
He came up to where we stood, his weathered face grim as he squinted at
us. “Wat are the tae o’ yeh daen oot here?” he said suspiciously. “Oi taut Oi
heard sengen.”
“At twere meh coosin,” I said, making a nod toward Denna. “Shae dae have
a loovlie voice far scirlin, dain’t shae?” I held out my hand. “Oi’m greet glad
tae meet ye, sar. Y’clep me Kowthe.”
He looked taken aback when he heard me speak, and a good portion of the
grim suspicion faded from his expression. “Pleased Oi’m certain, Marster
Kowthe,” he said, shaking my hand. “Et’s a rare troit tae meet a fella who
speks propper. Grummers round these ports sound loik tae’ve got a mouth
fulla wool.”
3. Meeting an arrogant student from a rich family
Ambrose turned back to me, his smile bright, brittle, and by no means
friendly. “Listen, I’m going to give you a little advice for free. Back home
you were something special. Here you’re just another kid with a big mouth.
So address me as Re’lar, go back to your bunk, and thank whatever pagan
God you pray to that we’re not in Vintas. My father and I would chain you
to a post like a rabid dog.”
He shrugged. “Or don't. Stay here. Make a scene. Start to cry. Better yet,
take a swing at me.” He smiled. “I’ll give you a thrashing and get you thrown
out on your ear.” He picked up his pen and turned back to whatever he was
writing.
I left.
Language Practice
Task 1: Reported Speech
When we change direct speech into indirect (reported speech), it
might be necessary to change the tenses as well. To report statements, we
use the verbs to say and to tell, as well as to inform, to remark, to promise
and so on. Study the examples in the table below. Which tenses have
changed and which haven’t? Where do we have alternative variants and
why?
Direct statement Reported statement
“I will never play that song again”, He promised he would never play
he said. that song again.
“I have never encountered such She told me she had never
rude people”, she said to me. encountered such rude people.
“I wasn’t paying much attention”, The student conceded that he wasn’t
the student conceded. paying much attention.
“We were planning to go out but She explained that they had been
then it started to rain”, she said.planning to go out but then it started
to rain.
“I am cooking a chicken curry My brother said he is cooking a
tonight”, my brother said. chicken curry tonight / was cooking a
chicken last tonight
“I’m going to run for presidency”. He informs us he is going to run for
presidency.
Discussion
Work in pairs.
Do you always keep your promises? Discuss with a partner
something that you have
promised someone to do.
Do you keep promises
made to yourself?
Social movement “Because I
said I would” started by Alex
Sheen is trying to make the
world a better place with the
help of Promise cards.
Find out how this system
works and express your
attitude to it.
Dialogues in Stories
Patrick Rothfuss (born in 1973)
is an American writer who is
famous for his epic fantasy
books. He is also an active
gamer and podcaster. His series
“The Kingkiller Chronicle” won
several awards, including the
2007 Quill Award for his debut
novel, “The Name of the
Wind”, which he composed
during his nine-year advance
toward his B.S. in English.
Rothfuss drew inspiration from
diverse college courses he
explored, as well as from other
sources.
“The Name of the Wind” is set in an imaginary world of Temerant,
abundant in lands and cities. The protagonist is Kvothe, a hero skilled in
various spheres, including magic (called “sympathy” in the story) and music.
The plot comprises two timelines: one is third-person narration in which
Kvothe meets Chronicler, a gatherer of stories, in an inn, while the other is a
first-person account of Kvothe’s life (Chronicler is the narratee in this arch).
As it is often the case in epic fantasy, the language is stylised, especially the
characters’ speech. The episode below features Kvothe’s encounter with
Fela, a fellow student who he has rescued from the fire.
Read the episode paying attention to the way dialogue is used to reveal the
characters’ qualities, wishes and motivation.
Notes
1. Deoch is a doorkeeper at a tavern called the Eolian, where talented
musicians to exhibit their skill.
2. Denna is a mysterious girl Kvothe is on love with.
3. Stancheon is the owner of the Eolian.
4. Kvothe was raised in a troupe of wandering actors (his parents being
actors and musicians), so he is a talented actor himself and he is well-
versed in dramatic art of Temerant. Daeonica mentioned later in the
episode is one of major plays in this world.
Language Practice
Task 2: Vocabulary
The sentences below are taken from the website Goodreads where
readers write reviews about all kinds of literature. This is a selection from
reviews about “The Name of the Wind”. Translate the sentences into your
first language, paying special attention to the words in bold.
1. The narration is extremely engaging but there are probably only around
20 pages of action scenes in total.
2. The part that captivated me more than anything else in the book was its
depiction of music.
3. Kvothe is one of the most compelling characters I’ve ever come across in
literature. This is how an unreliable narrator is supposed to be crafted. I
have no idea how much of his story I’m supposed to believe, but I
choose to believe the vast majority because he’s just so convincing.
4. The Arcanum is a vibrant setting, well conceptualized and easy to see in
your mind’s eye as you read. The portrayal of music is impeccable.
5. Action and plot aren’t used as a blatant hook to force you to keep
reading.
6. While some reviewers have complained of slow pacing, I had no
problem at all. If I had to point to a weakness, it would be that some of
Rothfuss’ antagonists feel a bit two-dimensional. Kvothe’s foes at the
University are nasty, petty, and often a little dim.
7. This book (audiobook) was so enthralling that I could barely put it down
and managed to listen to 27 hours of audio in just ten days! The narrator
for the audiobook Nick Podehl was excellent. He had a great array of
voices and accents. He even managed to squeeze in an acceptable
Scottish accent for one character!
8. I think in all, while I liked the ambition to the story and it is a favorite
type of longwinded not-too-demanding story, I do not have much respect
for the mechanics of the storytelling here.
Task 3: Discussion
Work in pairs. Choose a book you have recently read and describe
your impressions using some of the words in the word cloud above.
Writing: Book Recommendations
Watch “My Top 10 Favorite Fiction Books” (a YouTube video by
a popular American vlogger Thomas Frank). While watching, put
down some words and expressions that may be useful for your own
book recommendations.
In the end Thomas asks the audience for book recommendations. Write a
script and then record a short video recommending one book that you think
Thomas might like.
Project
People with Many Voices
There are fictional characters who have several identities, each with
his or her own idiolect. In cinema, actors may play several different roles
within one film, completely transforming into new personalities. In
audiobooks, narrators often impersonate a range of characters by changing
their voices and putting on various accents. Choose one of such works and
analyse how dialogues are presented in it. Make sure to provide examples
during your presentation.
Task 1
Read an excerpt from “Deaf Sentence” by David Lodge. The story is
narrated by a retired professor of linguistics who is going deaf. His
grandchild Daniel is learning to speak. Compare the protagonist’s attitude
with that of Daniel’s mother, Marcia.
I thought about watching the News at Ten but the news is so depressing
these days - bombings, murders, atrocities, famines, epidemics, global
warming – that one shrinks from it late at night; let it wait, you feel, till the
next day’s newspaper and the cooler medium of print. So I came back into
the study and checked my email – ‘No New Messages’; and then I decided
to write an account of my conversation, or rather non-conversation, with the
woman at the ARC private view, which in retrospect seemed rather amusing,
though stressful at the time. First I did it in the usual journal style, then I
rewrote it in the third person, present tense, the kind of exercise I used to
give students in my stylistics seminar. First person into third person, past
tense into present tense, or vice versa. What difference does it make to the
effect? Is one method more appropriate to the original experience than
another, or does any method interpret rather than represent experience?
Discuss.
In speech the options are more limited – though my step-grandson Daniel,
Marcia’s child, hasn’t learned this yet. He’s two years old, two and a half,
and has quite a good vocabulary for his age, but he always refers to himself
declaratively in the third person, present tense. When you say it’s time for
bed, he says, ‘Daniel isn’t tired.’ When you say, ‘Give Grandad a kiss,’ he
says, ‘Daniel doesn’t kiss granddads.’ Pronouns are tricky for kids, of
course, because they’re shifters, as we say in the trade, their meaning
depends entirely on who is using them: ‘you’ means you when I say it, but
me when you say it. So mastery of pronouns always comes fairly late in the
child’s acquisition of language, but Daniel’s exclusive use of the third person
at his age is rather unusual. Marcia is anxious about it and asked me if I
thought it was possibly a symptom of something, autism for instance. I asked
her if she referred to herself in the third person when speaking to Daniel,
like ‘Mummy is tired’, or ‘Mummy has got to make the dinner’, and she
admitted that she did occasionally. ‘You mean, it’s my fault?’ she said, a
little resentfully. ‘I mean he’s imitating you,’ I said. ‘It’s quite common. But
he’ll soon grow out of it.’ I told her that Daniel’s sentences were remarkably
well-formed for his age, and that I was sure he would soon learn to use
pronouns. I actually find it charming, the way he says, ‘Daniel is thirsty,’
‘Daniel doesn’t tidy up,’ ‘Daniel is shy today,’ with a perceptible pause for
thought before he speaks. It has an almost regal gravity and formality, as if
he were a little prince or dauphin. Dauphin Daniel I call him. But young
parents, educated middle-class ones anyway, are very jumpy these days, they
get so much information from the media about all the things that could be
wrong with their child – autism, dyslexia, attention deficit disorder, allergies,
obesity and so on – they’re in a constant state of panic, watching their
offspring like hawks for warning signs. And it’s catching: I’m far more
anxious about the baby Anne is expecting than I was about any of Maisie’s
pregnancies. Thirty-seven is late to give birth for the first time.
Which of the challenges of modern parenting are discussed in this excerpt?
Do you have small children among your relatives? Describe their language
acquisition and their parents’ reaction to it.
Task 2
Read an excerpt from “The Casual Vacancy” by J.K.Rowling. One of the
many families portrayed in the novel is a family of Indian origin: the parents
are doctors and their three children are at school. Sukhvinder is very
unhappy: unlike her siblings, she is not good at studies and unpopular at
school (she is constantly bullied by some of her peers). Read the excerpt
and comment on Sukhvinder’s relationship with her mother.
Hairy, heavy and stupid. Plain and clumsy. Lazy, according to her mother,
whose criticism and exasperation rained down upon her daily. A bit slow,
according to her father, who said it with an affection that did not mitigate his
lack of interest. He could afford to be nice about her bad grades. He had
Jaswant and Rajpal, both top of every class they took.
‘Poor old Jolly,’ Vikram would say carelessly, after glancing through her
report.
But her father’s indifference was preferable to her mother’s anger.
Parminder did not seem able to comprehend or accept that she had
produced a child who was not gifted. If any of the subject teachers made the
slightest hint that Sukhvinder might try harder, Parminder seized upon it in
triumph.
‘“Sukhvinder is easily discouraged and needs to have more faith in her
abilities.” There! You see? Your teacher is saying you don’t try hard
enough, Sukhvinder.’Of the only class in which Sukhvinder had reached the
second set, computing – Fats Wall was not there, so she sometimes dared
put up her hand to answer questions – Parminder said dismissively, ‘The
amount of time you children spend on the internet, I’m surprised you’re not
in set one.’
Compare Sukhvinder’s father’s and mother’s attitude to their daughter.
Why did she feel her mother’s attitude was worse?
What would you do, if one of your children didn’t do as well in school as
the others? Role play the situation in class.
People born before 1922 are sometimes called “the Greatest generation”. It
is Millennials, however, who are considered to be the most influential
generation today: they are often viewed as “trailblazers” and trendsetters for
other generations. Marketers extensively use the Millennial mindset and
behaviour for advertising and predicting the behaviour of other generations.
The following features are typically associated with Millennials:
They embrace technology and diversity.
They are more educated and affluent than other generations.
They are obsessed with their careers.
They give up on traditional marriage.
They prefer to dress well and care about their appearance.
They are often self-absorbed and narcissistic.
Discussion.
Work in groups. Discuss which generation you belong to:
If you belong to Millennials, do you recognise yourself in these
characteristics? Browse the Internet to add more information on the
Millennial mindset.
If you belong to a different generation, find out what characteristics are
associated with it. Compare and contrast them with those of Millennials.
What generation do your parents belong to? Describe the generation gap
between them and yourself.
How to Tell the Story of One’s Life
Ted Chiang
(born in 1967) is
an American
science fiction
writer of
Chinese origin.
Chiang has
written several
short stories and
novellas and he
has won
numerous science fiction awards for them, including Nebula, Hugo and
Locus awards. His novella “Story of Your Life”, published in the 2002
collection “Stories of Your Life and Others”, was adapted into the film
“Arrival” (2016), which gained critical and commercial success. In his stories
Chiang makes extensive use of science, including mathematics, physics and
linguistics.
“Story of your life” centres on Dr. Louise Banks, a linguist who was
recruited by the U.S. army to establish contact with the aliens (heptapods)
that had arrived on Earth. Louise studies both the sounds heptapods make
and their written speech and makes several important discoveries about
them, the most important of which is that these two modes of speech are
not interconnected. She masters their Heptapod B, written speech, which
consists of complex chains of semagrams that do not follow any linear order.
As she uses the language, she starts thinking in the same way: in
directionless trains of thought, where causes are consequences are
interchangeable. This affects her perception of time: she can now
“remember the future”, in particular her daughter’s whole life. The story is
narrated in the first person, while the daughter is the second-person “you”.
The story of her daughter’s life is narrated with the help of future tenses,
while the plotline of Louise’ contact with heptapods and learning their
language is given in the past tenses. Before he attempted to write this story,
Chiang spent five years studying linguistics.
Read the episodes from the story and say which effect the use of the future
narration produces in them.
Episode 1
It’ll be when you first learn to walk that I get daily demonstrations of the
asymmetry in our relationship. You’ll be incessantly running off somewhere,
and each time you walk into a door frame or scrape your knee, the pain
feels like it’s my own. It’ll be like growing an errant limb, an extension of
myself whose sensory nerves report pain just fine, but whose motor nerves
don't convey my commands at all. It’s so unfair: I’m going to give birth to an
animated voodoo doll of myself. I didn’t see this in the contract when I
signed up. Was this part of the deal?
And then there will be the times when I see you laughing. Like the time
you’ll be playing with the neighbor’s puppy, poking your hands through the
chain-link fence separating our back yards, and you’ll be laughing so hard
you’ll start hiccuping. The puppy will run inside the neighbor’s house, and
your laughter will gradually subside, letting you catch your breath. Then the
puppy will come back to the fence to lick your fingers again, and you’ll
shriek and start laughing again. It will be the most wonderful sound I could
ever imagine, a sound that makes me feel like a fountain, or a wellspring.
Now if only I can remember that sound the next time your blithe disregard
for self-preservation gives me a heart attack.
Language Practice
Task 1: Expressing Future
Since there are several ways of expressing future in the English language,
they are sometimes confused.
Look at the table below and explain the difference between these future
situations. Match the examples below with the situations in the table.
The Present
will / won't (not) going to
Continuous
• Future • Future • Future
predictions predictions arrangements
• Willingness / • Plans
promises
Work in pairs. Think about what kind of parent you are going to be
in the future (if you already have children, think how your parenting
strategy will change in 5 years-time) and tell your partner about it.
Episode 2
In 1770, Captain Cook’s ship Endeavour ran aground on the coast of
Queensland, Australia. While some of his men made repairs, Cook led an
exploration party and met the aboriginal people. One of the sailors pointed
to the animals that hopped around with their young riding in pouches, and
asked an aborigine what they were called. The aborigine replied, “Kanguru.”
From then on Cook and his sailors referred to the animals by this word. It
wasn’t until later that they learned it meant “What did you say?”
I tell that story in my introductory course every year. It’s almost certainly
untrue, and I explain that afterwards, but it’s a classic anecdote. Of course,
the anecdotes my undergraduates will really want to hear are ones featuring
the heptapods; for the rest of my teaching career, that’ll be the reason many
of them sign up for my courses. So I’ll show them the old videotapes of my
sessions at the looking glass, and the sessions that the other linguists
conducted; the tapes are instructive, and they’ll be useful if we’re ever visited
by aliens again, but they don’t generate many good anecdotes.
When it comes to language-learning anecdotes, my favorite source is child
language acquisition. I remember one afternoon when you are five years
old, after you have come home from kindergarten. You’ll be coloring with
your crayons while I grade papers.
“Mom,” you’ll say, using the carefully casual tone reserved for requesting a
favor, “can I ask you something?”
“Sure, sweetie. Go ahead.”
“Can I be, um, honored?”
I’ll look up from the paper I’m grading. "What do you mean?"
“At school Sharon said she got to be honored.”
“Really? Did she tell you what for?”
“It was when her big sister got married. She said only one person could be,
um, honored, and she was it.”
“Ah, I see. You mean Sharon was maid of honor?”
“Yeah, that’s it. Can I be made of honor?”
Episode 3
I remember one day during the summer when you’re sixteen. For once, the
person waiting for her date to arrive is me. Of course, you’ll be waiting
around too, curious to see what he looks like. You’ll have a friend of yours,
a blond girl with the unlikely name of Roxie, hanging out with you, giggling.
“You may feel the urge to make comments about him,” I’ll say, checking
myself in the hallway mirror. “Just restrain yourselves until we leave.”
“Don’t worry, Mom,” you’ll say. “We’ll do it so that he won’t know. Roxie,
you ask me what I think the weather will be like tonight. Then I’ll say what I
think of Mom’s date.”
“Right,” Roxie will say.
“No, you most definitely will not,” I’ll say.
“Relax, Mom. He’ll never know; we do this all the time.”
“What a comfort that is.”
A little later on, Nelson will arrive to pick me up. I’ll do the introductions,
and we’ll all engage in a little small talk on the front porch. Nelson is
ruggedly handsome, to your evident approval. Just as we’re about to leave,
Roxie will say to you casually, “So what do you think the weather will be like
tonight?”
“I think it’s going to be really hot,” you’ll answer.
Roxie will nod in agreement. Nelson will say, “Really? I thought they said it
was going to be cool.”
“I have a sixth sense about these things,” you’ll say. Your face will give
nothing away. “I get the feeling it’s going to be a scorcher. Good thing you’re
dressed for it, Mom.”
I’ll glare at you, and say good night.
As I lead Nelson toward his car, he’ll ask me, amused, “I’m missing
something here, aren’t I?”
“A private joke,” I’ll mutter. “Don’t ask me to explain it.”
Discussion 1. Describe how Louise feels during this
conversation. How would you feel if you were in a
similar situation?
2. What role does the dialogue play in this episode?
3. How is non-verbal communication rendered in this
passage?
Sharing In-Jokes
An in-joke (an inside joke or a private joke)
is a joke that is understandable only for the
member of a small group. The equivalent of
an in-joke in video games, TV series and
cinema is called “an Easter egg”. As the
name suggests, sometimes they are well
hidden.
Are there any in-jokes in your class?
How did they start?
How do “outsiders” typically react to
inside jokes?
Episode 4
I remember a picture of you taken at your college graduation. In the photo
you’re striking a pose for the camera, mortarboard stylishly tilted on your
head, one hand touching your sunglasses, the other hand on your hip,
holding open your gown to reveal the tank top and shorts you’re wearing
underneath.
I remember your graduation. There will be the distraction of having Nelson
and your father and what’s-her-name there all at the same time, but that will
be minor. That entire weekend, while you’re introducing me to your
classmates and hugging everyone incessantly, I’ll be all but mute with
amazement. I can’t believe that you, a grown woman taller than me and
beautiful enough to make my heart ache, will be the same girl I used to lift
off the ground so you could reach the drinking fountain, the same girl who
used to trundle out of my bedroom draped in a dress and hat and four
scarves from my closet.
And after graduation, you’ll be heading for a job as a financial analyst. I
won’t understand what you do there, I won’t even understand your
fascination with money, the preeminence you gave to salary when
negotiating job offers. I would prefer it if you’d pursue something without
regard for its monetary rewards, but I’ll have no complaints. My own
mother could never understand why I couldn’t just be a high school English
teacher. You’ll do what makes you happy, and that’ll be all I ask for.
Episode 5
I practiced Heptapod B at every opportunity, both with the other linguists
and by myself. The novelty of reading a semasiographic language made it
compelling in a way that Heptapod A wasn’t, and my improvement in
writing it excited me. Over time, the sentences I wrote grew shapelier, more
cohesive. I had reached the point where it worked better when I didn’t think
about it too much. Instead of carefully trying to design a sentence before
writing, I could simply begin putting down strokes immediately; my initial
strokes almost always turned out to be compatible with an elegant rendition
of what I was trying to say. I was developing a faculty like that of the
heptapods.
More interesting was the fact that Heptapod B was changing the way I
thought. For me, thinking typically meant speaking in an internal voice; as
we say in the trade, my thoughts were phonologically coded. My internal
voice normally spoke in English, but that wasn’t a requirement. The
summer after my senior year in high school, I attended a total immersion
program for learning Russian; by the end of the summer, I was thinking and
even dreaming in Russian. But it was always spoken Russian. Different
language, same mode: a voice speaking silently aloud.
The idea of thinking in a linguistic yet nonphonological mode always
intrigued me. I had a friend born of deaf parents; he grew up using
American Sign Language, and he told me that he often thought in ASL
instead of English. I used to wonder what it was like to have one’s thoughts
be manually coded, to reason using an inner pair of hands instead of an
inner voice.
With Heptapod B, I was experiencing something just as foreign: my
thoughts were becoming graphically coded. There were trance-like moments
during the day when my thoughts weren’t expressed with my internal voice;
instead, I saw semagrams with my mind’s eye, sprouting like frost on a
windowpane.
As I grew more fluent, semagraphic designs would appear fully formed,
articulating even complex ideas all at once. My thought processes weren’t
moving any faster as a result, though. Instead of racing forward, my mind
hung balanced on the symmetry underlying the semagrams. The semagrams
seemed to be something more than language; they were almost like
mandalas. I found myself in a meditative state, contemplating the way in
which premises and conclusions were interchangeable. There was no
direction inherent in the way propositions were connected, no “train of
thought” moving along a particular route; all the components in an act of
reasoning were equally powerful, all having identical precedence.
Watch the trailer of “Arrival” (or the whole film) and say how
Heptapod B is visualised in it. Do you find it adequate?
Language Practice
Task 3: Vocabulary
Look at the list of expressions relating to speaking and language. What can
you add to this list?
To pick up (a word / phrase), to speak up, to speak the same language, to
speak someone’s language, like talking to a brick wall, to be at a loss for
words, beyond words, in plain English, it’s all Greek to me, loaded
language, watch your language, words fail me.
Work in pairs. Compile short dialogues using the expressions from the box
above. Play the interpreter game: while one pair presents their dialogue,
other students translate it into their first language.
Suggested topics are:
(mis)communication between parents and children
learning a new skill
describing something that has impressed you
Task 4: Discussion
Read the quote below. What did Hilary Clinton mean when she said that?
Without looking at the rest of the list, choose fictional parents and write
your own entry stating why you admire them. Share your writing in class and
check whether there are any overlaps with the list at the site.
Project
Talking about My Generation
Many works of fiction and non-
fiction attempt to capture the
zeitgeist of their epochs and
corresponding generations. Apart from
historical and social contexts, the image of
a particular generation is shaped by the
clothes its representatives wear and the
music they listen to, the way they dance
and the way they speak.
Choose several works (including books,
films, TV series, musicals, songs,
documentaries, comic strips, etc.) that
reflect the values, the visual image, as well
as the language of a particular generation.
Present your findings in class.
Lead In
What kinds of stories did you enjoy when you were a teenager? If you
are still a teenager, say whether your book preferences have changed
from your early teens up till now.
Choose one story that particularly impressed you or significantly
influenced you in your teens and talk about it to the class. Would you
like to reread it? Would you recommend it to your peers?
Coming-of-Age Narratives
A coming-of-age story focuses on a young protagonist, typically a teenager, in
transition from childhood to adulthood. The German term
“Bildungsroman” (“novel of formation”) is often used to describe a novel
that traces the protagonist’s psychological development in the passage from
childhood into maturity. This transition typically includes a number of
experiences, sometimes traumatic, and culminates in establishing of one’s
identity and discovering one’s role in the world.
Coming-of-age narratives are abundant in young adult fiction, a category of
fiction whose target audience embraces readers between 12 and 18 years
old, although the boundaries between children, young adult and adult fiction
have always been vague. Thematically, young adult fiction deals with
teenagers’ everyday life (family life, school, personal relationships,
friendship, etc.) and social problems (poverty, drug addiction, crime, teen
pregnancies, etc.). Styles and genres of young adult fiction are diverse and
include historical fiction, science fiction, fantasy, dystopian novels, comics
and other varieties. The format of a personal diary is frequently used.
Numerous young adult novels address the issue of multiculturalism.
According to “Multicultural Literature for Children and Young Adults” by
Mingshui Cai, such novels are aimed at developing social conscience in
children and teenagers teaching them to empathise with other ethnic groups.
These novels can be culturally conscious (depicting unique features of a
certain group) or “melting pot” narratives where characters of different races
are presented as culturally homogeneous. Cross-cultural fiction reflects
intercultural relationships between different groups.
Task 1
Brainstorm the criteria for setting the boundaries between stories for
children / young adults / adult. Draw a diagram in your notebooks.
age
age
age
Task 3
Watch a TEDx talk “A Place of Hope: From Refugee Camp to
International Fashion Model” by Halima Aden and explain what role
multiculturalism has played in her life. What does she mention about her
place of birth, Swahili, hijab-wearing, “cliques”?
Language Practice
Task 1: Pronunciation Tips
One of the most challenging consonants for the learners of English is /w/,
especially if there is no such sound in their first languages. It is frequently
pronounced as /v/. Practise pronouncing these consonants using the table
below.
/w/ /v/ /w/ + /v/
word, white, world, war, verse, novel, vibes, wave, over-
wordsmith, wear, volunteer, villain, whelming,
longwinded, whimsical, visceral, captivated, self- everywhere, weave,
wonder, worthy, evident, diverse, riveting, overwork, whatever,
heartwarming, willing, over-hyped, vibrant, wolverine, hand-
twist, obsequious, wimpy, advice, pensive, waving.
window, question, worry. verisimilitude, observant.
Episode 1
“May I have some volunteers?” Mrs. Brown is saying. We are preparing
skits1 for Thanksgiving, two weeks away. Although the Pilgrims never came
to the Dominican Republic, we are attending the American school, so we
have to celebrate American holidays.
It’s a hot, muggy afternoon. I feel lazy and bored. Outside the window, the
palm trees are absolutely still. Not even a breeze. Some of the American
students have been complaining that it doesn’t feel like Thanksgiving when
it’s as hot as the Fourth of July.
Mrs. Brown is looking around the room. My cousin, Carla, sits in the seat in
front of me, waving her arm.
Mrs. Brown calls on Carla, and then on me. Carla and I are to play the parts
of two Indians welcoming the Pilgrims. Mrs. Brown always gives the not-so-
good parts to those of us in class who are Dominicans.
She hands us each a headband with a feather sticking up like one rabbit ear.
I feel ridiculous. “Okay, Indians, come forward and greet the Pilgrims.”
Mrs. Brown motions toward where Joey Farland and Charlie Price stand
with their toy rifles and the Davy Crockett hats they’ve talked Mrs. Brown
into letting them wear. Even I know the pioneers come after the Pilgrims.
“Anita” – she points at me – “I want you to say, ‘Welcome to the United
States.’ ”
Before I can mutter my line, Oscar Mancini raises his hand. “Why the
Indians call it the United Estates when there was no United Estates back
then, Mrs. Brown?”
The class groans. Oscar is always asking questions. “United Estates! United
Estates!” somebody in the back row mimics. Lots of classmates snicker,
even some Dominicans. I hate it when the American kids make fun of the
way we speak English.
“That’s a good question, Oscar,” Mrs. Brown responds, casting a
disapproving look around. She must have heard the whisper as well. “It’s
called poetic license. Something allowed in a story that isn’t so in real life.
Like a metaphor or a simile.”
Just then, the classroom door opens. I catch a glimpse of our principal, and
behind him, Carla’s mother, Tía Laura, looking very nervous. But then, Tía
Laura always looks nervous. Papi likes to joke that if there were ever an
Olympic event for worrying, the Dominican Republic would win with his
sister on the team. But lately, Papi looks pretty worried himself. When I ask
questions, he replies with “Children should be seen, not heard” instead of
his usual “Curiosity is a sign of intelligence.”
Mrs. Brown comes forward from the back of the room and stands talking to
the principal for a minute before she follows him out into the hall, where
Tía Laura is standing. The door closes.
Usually when our teacher leaves the room, Charlie Price, the class clown,
acts up. He does stuff like changing the hands on the clock so that Mrs.
Brown will be all confused and let us out for recess early. Yesterday, he
wrote NO HOMEWORK TONIGHT in big block letters above the date
on the board, THURSDAY, NOVEMBER 10, 1960. Even Mrs. Brown
thought that was pretty funny.
But now the whole class waits quietly. The last time the principal came to
our classroom, it was to tell Tomasito Morales that his mother was here for
him. Something had happened to his father, but even Papi, who knew Señor
Morales, would not say what. Tomasito hasn’t come back to school since
then.
Beside me, Carla is tucking her hair behind her ears, something she does
when she’s nervous. My brother, Mundín, has a nervous tic, too. He bites
his nails whenever he does something wrong and has to sit on the
punishment chair until Papi comes home.
The door opens again, and Mrs. Brown steps back in, smiling that phony
smile grown-ups smile when they are keeping bad news from you. In a
bright voice, Mrs. Brown asks Carla to please collect her things. “Would
you help her, Anita?” she adds.
We walk back to our seats and begin packing up Carla’s schoolbag. Mrs.
Brown announces to the class that they’ll continue with their skits later.
Everyone is to take out his or her vocabulary book and start on the next
chapter. The class pretends to settle down to its work, but of course,
everyone is stealing glances at Carla and me.
Mrs. Brown comes over to see how we’re doing. Carla packs her
homework, but leaves the usual stay-at-school stuff in her desk. “Are those
yours?” Mrs. Brown points at the new notebooks, the neat lineup of pens
and pencils, the eraser in the shape of the Dominican Republic.
Carla nods.
“Pack it all up, dear,” Mrs. Brown says quietly.
We pack Carla’s schoolbag with everything that belongs to her. The whole
time I’m wondering why Mrs. Brown hasn’t asked me to pack my stuff, too.
After all, Carla and I are in the same family.
Oscar’s hand is waving and dipping like a palm tree in a cyclone. But Mrs.
Brown doesn’t call on him. This time, I think we’re all hoping he’ll get a
chance to ask his question, which is probably the same question that’s in
everyone’s head: Where is Carla going?
Mrs. Brown takes Carla’s hand. “Come along.” She nods to me.
Mrs. Brown leads Carla up the side of the classroom. I follow, afraid I’ll
burst into tears if I catch anyone’s eye. I look up at the portrait of our
Benefactor, El Jefe, which hangs above the classroom, his eyes watching
over us. To his left hangs George Washington in his white wig, looking off
into the distance. Perhaps he is homesick for his own country?
Just staring at El Jefe keeps my tears from flowing. I want to be brave and
strong, so that someday if I ever meet the leader of our country, he’ll
congratulate me. “So, you are the girl who never cries?” he’ll say, smiling
down at me.
Notes
1. Skits are short theatrical sketches.
Comprehension 1. What holiday is approaching? How are the school
kids going to celebrate it?
2. Why does the teacher introduce the notion of
“poetic license”?
3. What is happening to Carla?
4. What is Anita’s attitude to El Jefe?
Discussion 1. How would you describe the attitude of the teacher
and American kids to the Dominican ones? How
is this reflected in the language?
2. There is “the punishment chair” in Anita’s school.
What do you think of this method of disciplining?
3. The chapter from which the excerpt is taken is
called “The eraser in the shape of the Dominican
Republic”. Can you explain the symbolism of this
title?
4. Do you think that “poetic / artistic license” (e.g.,
changing historic facts or realities to suit the story)
is appropriate in theatrical performances such as
the one described in this episode?
How is the notion of artistic license connected with the willing suspension of
disbelief? (See Unit 3)
Discuss the following types of artistic
license in groups:
using anachronisms in stories;
changing historical facts in fiction;
changing elements of the original
story in translation;
changing elements of the book in
its film adaptation.
Look at the humoristic portrayal of
“artistic license” on the right. What is the
message of this picture?
What is meant by:
artistic temperament;
dubious aesthetic judgments;
wild conjecture?
Episode 2
In this episode, El Jefe has already been assassinated, and Anita’s father and
uncle have been arrested as the main conspirators. Anita and her mother
had to flee from their home to avoid being arrested as well. They are
currently hiding in their relatives’ house.
Both stations agreed on one thing: The plot did not work. Pupo, the head of
the army, just wasn’t there to announce the liberation over the radio, and
instead, Trujillo Junior has taken over, and it’s a bloodbath out there. The
SIM are doing house-to-house searches. Over 5,000 people have been
arrested, including family members of the conspirators. I wanted to block
my ears and not listen to this stuff!
Whenever I feel this way, I start writing in my diary so there’s another voice
that I can listen to. A third radio, tuned to my own heart.
So I snuck off to the bathroom with my diary, and soon enough, Mami was
calling me, saying it was rude for me to be off by myself, come join them
and be sociable, but then Tía Mari told her to let me be, that it’s a good
thing that I’m writing, that ever since I started keeping this diary, I’m talking
a lot more3.
It took her saying so for me to realize it’s true.
The words are coming back, as if by writing them down, I’m fishing them
out of forgetfulness, one by one.
Notes
1. OAS, the Organisation of American States is a continental
organisation that promotes regional solidarity and cooperation among
its member states.
2. SIM, the Servicio de Inteligencia Militar (English: Military Intelligence
Service) was the secret police that was used to keep control within the
Dominican Republic during the dictatorship of Trujillo.
3. Due to the stressful atmosphere of her home before the assassination
of Trujillo, Anita stopped talking almost completely.
4. Anita strokes the spot where she was kissed by Oscar, the boy she is
beginning to fall in love with. Oscar is the Mancini’s son and, although
the children are not supposed to know that Anita and her mother are
staying there, Oscar discoverers in anyway and finds a way to
communicate with Anita secretly.
Comprehension 1. Describe the state of affairs in the Dominican
Republic during the time period relevant for the
episode.
2. Which Spanish words are used in the text? Can
you guess their meaning from the context?
3. How is Anita feeling and what is she doing to cope
with the situation?
Discussion 1. Why do you think it is hard for Anita to pray?
2. Do you think that “thinking positively” is a helpful
technique in this situation?
3. Focus on the images of the radio, clock and kite.
What role do they play in the text? Compare
Anita’s memory of her father with the painting
below. Do you think they convey a similar feeling?
4. What does the format of a dairy add to the
narrative?
5. Can you tell from these two episodes that the book
is aimed at young adults? Do you find this a
suitable topic for them and an adequate rendering
of it?
6. Did your country have similar periods in its
history? Have you read any books covering this
period written specially for children / young adults?
Finish the sentences below paying attention to the usage of must / have to.
1. You’re barking up the wrong tree again! You really must…
2. Where are you table matters? You mustn’t… (chomp, cram, grab)
3. If you go on like this, I’ll get into hot water with your colleagues. You’ll
have to…
4. When I see modern art, words fail me. I am glad I don’t have to…
5. Your clothes are all crumpled. You have to…
6. It was like talking to a brick wall, really. So I had to…
7. The boat may lurch suddenly. We must…
8. They say the results fell short of my potential. Do I have to…?
Writing
When recommending a book for young adults, one should take
their age and interests into consideration. What kind of story
might captivate a contemporary teenager? Choose an English-
language book that you might recommend to teenagers in your country who
study English as a foreign language.
Write a short post for a social network about this book, using the plan
structure you have already employed.
Project
Dear Diary!
The format of a personal diary has allowed numerous authors to
create intimate and heartfelt narratives. One of the most famous
diaries in history is a non-fictional book “The Diary of a Young Girl” written
by Anne Frank when she was in hiding for two years with her family during
the Nazi occupation of the Netherlands. Among fictional diaries aimed at
young adults the popular examples are the Adrian Mole series by Sue
Townsend and “Diary of a Wimpy Kid” by Jeff Kinney. Adult fiction has
also exploited the format, e.g. the Bridget Jones novels by Helen Fielding.
Choose a novel / several novels written as a diary and explore how this
format shapes the narrative. You may compare how different authors
employ this device, focusing on:
Character presentation
Imagery and diction
Tone and atmosphere
Share your findings in class providing handouts with relevant examples.
Jeff Kinney, the author and illustrator of “Diary of a Wimpy Kid”, has been
actively creating new titles in the series. In 2018, “The Meltdown”, the
thirteenth book, was published.
UNIT 15
Over the Hill: Contemporary Society and Old Age
Lead In
What are your personal definitions of “young”, “middle-aged” and “old”?
What images do you associate with old age?
Some people claim that it is politically incorrect to speak of “old people”:
they insist on substituting the phrase with “senior citizens”. What is your
attitude to this? What do you say in your first language?
Think an old fictional character that you admire. Describe his / her
personality to the class.
Task 1
Think of stories you have read that fit the pattern described above as “an
aged narrator telling about his / her youth and maturity, mulling over past
experiences in retrospect”.
Say whether you enjoyed reading then? Why / why not?
Task 2
Read the excerpts below and say how what imagery is used to talk of
memory / past / reminiscence.
London is a haunted city for me now and I am the ghost that haunts it. As I
go about my business, every street or square or avenue seems to whisper of
an earlier, different era in my history. The shortest trip round Chelsea or
Kensington takes me by some door where once I was welcome but where
today I am a stranger. I see myself issue forth, young again and dressed for
some long forgotten frolic, tricked out in what looks like the national dress
of a war-torn Balkan country. Those flapping flares, those frilly shirts with
their footballers’ collars – what were we thinking of? And as I watch, beside
that wraith of a younger, slimmer me walk the shades of the departed,
parents, aunts and grandmothers, great-uncles and cousins, friends and
girlfriends, gone now from this world entirely, or at least from what is left of
my own life. They say one sign of growing old is that the past becomes more
real than the present and already I can feel the fingers of those lost decades
closing their grip round my imagination, making more recent memory seem
somehow greyer and less bright.
(from “Past Imperfect” by Julian Fellowes)
Two years after my mother died, my father fell in love with a glamorous
blonde Ukrainian divorcee. He was eighty-four and she was thirty-six. She
exploded into our lives like a fluffy pink grenade, churning up the murky
water, bringing to the surface a sludge of sloughed-off memories, giving the
family ghosts a kick up the backside.
(from “A Short History of Tractors in Ukrainian” by Marine Lewycka
We live in time – it holds us and moulds us – but I’ve never felt I
understood it very well. And I’m not referring to theories about how it
bends and doubles back, or may exist elsewhere in parallel versions. No, I
mean ordinary, everyday time, which clocks and watches assure us passes
regularly: tick-tock, click-clock. Is there anything more plausible than a
second hand? And yet it takes only the smallest pleasure or pain to teach us
time’s malleability. Some emotions speed it up, others slow it down;
occasionally, it seems to go missing – until the eventual point when it really
does go missing, never to return. I’m not very interested in my schooldays,
and don’t feel any nostalgia for them. But school is where it all began, so I
need to return briefly to a few incidents that have grown into anecdotes, to
some approximate memories which time has deformed into certainty. If I
can’t be sure of the actual events any more, I can at least be true to the
impressions those facts left. That’s the best I can manage.
(from “The Sense of Ending” by Julian Barnes)
Task 3
Look at the cartoon
on the right.
Which famous
picture is used in it?
What, in your
opinion, is the
message of the
cartoon?
Task 4
Look up current statistics on the world population. What percentage of
population is over 65? Which countries have highest percentage of ageing
population? What are the data for your own country?
Think which prejudices against seniors are typical of your country. Do you
personally share any of them?
Read the excerpts from the story and say how the author combines the
theme of old age and the plight of Native Americans.
Episode One
“I was a fool to have listened to you, Ozzie,” she said to her son on the drive
to Loma Vista. “I would prefer returning to my own home.”
“Don’t start in, Ma. You know you can’t live alone. You need someone to
look after you full time now. Remember poor Mrs. Olson.”
Ozzie, the eldest of her three boys, was no spring chicken himself. His
hairline receded just a bit and he had a double chin and a pot belly. A high
school and college football player, he had gone to fat in middle age. He was
a grandfather himself now.
“It’s okay, Ozzie. I’ll be better off in the home.” She was never that fond of
Maybelle, and no doubt Maybelle knew. She wondered why Ozzie hadn’t
married a girl from back home or one of the girls who was his college
classmate instead of a brassy blond white girl who worked at a hamburger
stand near the UCLA campus. But then who was she to question Ozzie’s
odd choice?
Now, firmly ensconced at Loma Vista, Claire knew better than to rock the
boat in any way. She kept no journal as there was even less privacy than at
Ozzie’s. She tried to keep quiet and cause no stir, to be as unobtrusive as
she could be. She didn’t want anyone to know how she felt. She could end
up like one or the other of the McIvers.
Henry and Martha McIver were the only married couple she ever
encountered at Loma Vista. Mr. McIver didn’t try to hide his anger. “We
were doing just fine, Martha and me, on our own. Our son just got tired of
waiting for us to pass away and decided to put us here and grab control of
our house and land, while he’s still young enough to enjoy it. We were fine.
Our grandson came every other Saturday to help with the yard work and
any heavy lifting we needed to have done. True, my driver’s license was
revoked last year because my vision and reflexes aren’t that good anymore,
but we don’t need to drive. Our neighbors give us lifts into town. The
supermarket delivers for seniors. Sonny Boy has another thing coming if he
thinks he can get away with this!” McIver’s lawyer paid him a couple of visits
at the home (he was going to sue the son and he was going to sue Loma
Vista Nursing Home, he said, for false imprisonment).
But the thing was, McIver was eighty-nine, and no matter how lucid of mind
or spry of body, no court would rule in his favor . . . no court would agree
with him that he would be fine living on his own. And then there was
Martha. Though “only” eighty, Martha, beginning shortly after the birth of
their only child, frequently suffered from depression and now began to show
signs of senility.
One day their grandson told Henry he worried about them. His father was
worried, too, that the old people couldn’t manage on their own anymore.
To set his mind at ease, Henry confided in the young man.
“No need to worry none about us. None at all. See, your grandmother and I
know we’re getting on and it might come to our not being able to manage.
We made a pact. If the going gets too rough and it appears we can’t handle
it anymore, well, keep it to yourself now, don’t mention it to your dad, but
we decided we’re going to check out together. Not some hideous way, now,
so don’t be afraid of any ‘grisly finds,’ but easy-like. Get in our car in the
garage and start the motor. Take some pills. Just go to sleep. Something real
easy-like. So don’t worry about us.” The grandson did tell their son. All in
all, it didn’t seem likely to Claire that any judge would find in Henry and
Martha’s favor.
“And when we get out of here, one of the first things I’m going to do is sue
this damned place for false imprisonment!” Henry said.
[After a while Henry McIver was taken away to a different place and his
wife, Martha, jumped out of the window. Clair went outside to say goodbye
to Martha.]
Later, after the ambulance took the corpse away, Claire snuck out into the
courtyard.
She knelt on the grass beside the spot where Martha had landed. Such a
small person, yet she had left an impression on the ground. The grass lay
flattened. Claire pressed the palm of her hand into the impression. “Now
you’re free, Martha dear,” she whispered.
“Hey, you crazy old bat, what do you think you’re doing?” Mrs. Lacey
grabbed her roughly by the arm and pulled her to her feet. It reminded her
of the nuns when she was a little girl back on the reservation and forced to
go to Catholic mission school. The nuns treated children like that, grabbing,
manhandling, scolding.
She never dreamed she would spend her old age in the same way she had
spent most of her childhood, under lock and key, keeping her guard up at
all times, being rudely spoken to and physically abused. Mrs. Lacey pulled
and pushed, all the while scolding. “You know better than that, Miz
LaFromme. You know good and well you’re not allowed outside without
supervision. I’m going to have to file a report on you now. And, of course,
your son will be told. We’ll tell your son you’re not to be trusted, you
sneaky little thing, you damned old weasel you. Just about had me fooled,
but you’re like all the rest. Can’t trust a one of ya’ damned coots1.”
That was when she first heard her own voice whispering: “ You’ve got to get
out of this place. If it’s the last thing you ever do.” Yes. But how? Probably
every inmate of
Loma Vista had heard at one time or another that same voice in their head,
their own voice saying the same thing. Did anyone ever succeed in running
away? She wondered. “You’ve got to get out of this place! ” it said again, no
longer a mere whisper, but with conviction.
“Yes,” she agreed silently. “Yes.”
Notes
1. A coot means “a foolish old person”.
Language Practice
Task 1: Idioms
Look at the idioms in the table below and translate the examples,
using idiomatic equivalents in your first language.
A spring chicken is a young and Ozzie, the eldest of her three boys,
naïve person. The expression is was no spring chicken himself
often used in the negative: no spring
chicken.
To be over the hill means to be no Teenagers think that when you’re
longer young, past your prime. thirty, you’re over the hill.
To have an old head on young The protagonist is a child prodigy: a
shoulders means being young and real old head on young shoulders,
yet wise and insightful. whose savvy about everything in life
sometimes just stretches your
credulity.
Originating in one of Shakespeare’s The old men sat and reminisced
plays, the expression salad days about their salad days.
refers to one’s carefree time of
innocence and inexperience.
When one is young at heart, one has In her fifties she was young at heart:
a youthful mindset, regardless of the always curious and upbeat.
biological age.
Episode 2
“Look, Granny Claire,” Buddy, Ozzie’s grandson, said, holding up a new
crayon drawing, “do you like it?” Buddy, who was eight, usually came with
Ozzie. Her tupiya.1 The one bright spot in all of this was that she had gotten
to know her tupiya. Buddy, who was very fair-skinned, had dark brown curly
hair and large grey-hazel eyes. No one would ever take him for an Indian. It
didn’t matter. He was her dear tupiya.
“Bring it here, let’s have a look.” She blinked back her tears.
The drawing appeared to be of two people sitting in a giant cup which was
on a giant saucer. One figure wore a baseball cap, the other had two long
braids. Both wore wide grins. She and Buddy were often the subjects of his
drawings. “Is that us?” he nodded. “Why are we sitting in a cup? Is
someone going to drink us?”
“No. We’re at Disneyland and here we’re riding the Mad Hatter’s Tea
Party. Next we’re going to Pirates of the Caribbean.”
“We sure look happy.”
“We are.”
“Ma, I have to go make a phone call, okay. I’ll be back in a few minutes.
You stay with your Gran, Buddy.”
“His tupiya,” Claire corrected her son, who ignored her.
“Okay,” Buddy said. As soon as Ozzie left the room, Buddy said in a very
quiet voice, just barely above a whisper, “Gran, I have something to tell you.
Don’t tell nobody, okay? I’ve got a plan.”
“Okay.”
“When I grow up, I’m going to come here and break you out.”
“How will you do that?”
“I’ll bring a disguise of some kind. We’ll walk right out the front door. Then
we’ll run away. They’ll never find us.”
“Where will we go, Buddy?”
“I don’t know. I was thinking maybe L.A.”
“Why L.A.?”
“Because it’s far away. Because it’s real big. And because it’s close to
Disneyland. After I get a job we’ll go to Disneyland on my days off. We’ll
have a good time.”
“Sounds good to me, Buddy. Sounds great. And thanks. I feel better now
knowing I’m not going to be stuck in this place forever.” Buddy smiled. One
of his front teeth was missing. Maybe he wasn’t eight. Maybe he was seven.
That was the second time she heard her own voice saying, “You’ve got to get
out of this place. And you’re going to have to do it all yourself. Nobody is
going to rescue you. You can’t wait for Buddy to grow up. You have to do it,
Claire. You’re all you’ve got.”
Yes. She already knew. She was all she had.
“I love that picture of us in a teacup, Bud. You know what, I’m not going to
tape this one to the wall. I’m going to keep it in my pocket so I can take it
out and look at it whenever I want.” One wall was covered with Buddy’s
drawings. Mrs. Sullivan said they were an eyesore and when Claire refused
to take them down, Mrs. Sullivan said she was going to complain, was going
to change rooms if she had to. Claire was making waves. She was afraid of
being taken away in the night as Henry McIver was to “someplace else.”
Claire had to get out.
That very evening, just before dinner was brought in, Claire stole into the
room of a man named Arthur, “Hi, Arthur. How’re you doing?”
Arthur narrowed his watery eyes and looked her up and down.
“What do you want?” he asked. He was a skinny little man about her size.
“I want to borrow some clothes from you, okay?” Claire said, opening the
old man’s locker. So spare and neat.
Arthur was not in his right mind, like many, perhaps most, of the inmates of
Loma Vista. He saw goblins and giant nuns and rodeo clowns traipsing
around his room at odd hours. Sometimes he thought he was still a soldier
in France. Sometimes he thought he was a young husband and father and
talked about his kids and his job at the factory. Some days Arthur thought
he was in a POW camp and would refuse to speak at all except to give his
name, rank, and serial number.
Nobody would believe Arthur if he told them Claire had come into his
room, opened his locker door, selected a sports coat, a pair of trousers, a
cotton dress shirt, and a vee-neck pullover sweater (all of which she knew
were there since she’d seen him decked out in these clothes when his
children came to visit, which was only once a year at Christmas). And
besides, he didn’t appear to recognize her today.
Maybe he thought she was an enemy soldier.
Arthur’s clothes fi t her nicely, except for the shoes, which were much too
big. Damn! Well, she had a pair of walking shoes, no heels, very plain.
Maybe they would pass for men’s shoes. She took the folded crayon
drawing Bud had given her, the one depicting the two of them happily riding
in giant cups at Disneyland, and put it in the inside pocket of the sports coat.
Claire decided she would make her break after they collected the dinner
trays. They were busy then and wouldn’t be around again until late evening.
And her cantankerous roommate, Mrs. Sullivan, always took a bath after
dinner.
The dinner trays were brought. Mrs. Sullivan ate her dinner. Then she took
a clean towel from her locker, a bar of soap, her robe. Claire couldn’t let
her leave just yet. She needed Mrs. Sullivan to be gone right after the trays
were collected. She had to dress, then make good her escape. Timing was
important.
“Mrs. Sullivan, tell me, are you sleeping well now?” Mrs. Sullivan frowned at
her.
“Why, yes, I am. Thank you. And I don’t think I’m to blame, not at all, for
your friend’s death. She was the one who chose to jump off the roof. I was
within my rights complaining about that horrid noise she made at night.”
“Of course, Mrs. Sullivan. Of course. Nobody thinks you’re to blame. You
need your rest. We all do.” Mrs. Sullivan left the room as the attendant
swept in and swept the trays away. Claire closed the door behind them. She
couldn’t lock it, though.
Loma Vista doors had no locks on them. She dressed quickly in Arthur’s
clothes and her leather walking shoes and looked at her reflection. “Not
bad, if I do say so myself,’’ she said. She looked like a man, except for the
long braids. They might be a giveaway down here. You didn’t see men, like
up on the reservation, in long braids.
Maybe she could get a hat somewhere and pin them up under it. For now,
though, she was ready. This was it.
The upper half of the window opened outward. She was very slim and, for
an old person, very agile. She made it out onto the ledge. Though they were
on the first floor, still, it was about a twenty-foot drop. She got down on her
knees and got hold of the ledge with both hands and let her body slide down
the outer wall. This way it was only about a ten-foot drop and, with any luck,
she would fall into the flower beds where the earth was damp and soft. She
did. She kept close to the ground and to the building. She cut across a park
and kept walking.
She could feel and hear her heart pounding. Her body, sensing her
excitement, sent adrenaline to her aid to help her out. Fight or flight. She
would rather take flight than put up a fight. Oh, the giddiness! The
exhilaration!
Notes
1. Tupiya in Coeur d’Alene Salish means both “great-grandparent” and
“great-grandchild.”
Task 2: Vocabulary
When ageing is depicted, its physical and mental sides are often
dwelt upon. Vitality or its absence is commented upon: both states
can be described in a number of ways.
Work in pairs. Look at the word cloud below. Consult the dictionary if
necessary. Describe real or fictional old people using these words. Let your
partner guess who you are describing.
Episode 3
For several hours she walked, aided by her fine new walking stick, leisurely
taking in the scenery, which was mostly desert. Once she spotted a
rattlesnake curled up near a pile of boulders. He blended in quite nicely
there. Rattlesnakes were okay, she thought. This one held himself still as
could be. He thought she didn’t see him. He would not strike at her unless
she came near enough to step on him. She had no intention of going near
him.
Garter snakes, the little black things with yellow or red stripes down their
backs, the nonpoisonous “good” snakes that ate pests were the kind she
didn’t like. They were always darting around imposing their presence on
humans as though they didn’t know they were repulsive, as though they
thought themselves cute. Rattlers weren’t like that at all. They knew how to
keep their distance.
When she came to the top of a high hill and saw a winding creek way down
yonder, she headed for it and found a good camping place. She took off her
clothes and washed her underpants and shirt and pullover sweater and
draped them over bushes to dry. She took the elastic fasteners off the ends
of her braids and undid them. Her hair fell loose about her shoulders and
down to her waist in back.
She waded out just a few feet into the icy cold river, until the water was
knee-deep, then she sat down in a spot that had few stones and bathed
herself and rinsed her hair.
Oh, the water was so cold it made her teeth chatter. As soon as she felt clean
enough, she waded back out of the water and lay on her back on a smooth,
flat rock that was very warm. She spread her white hair all around her to dry
in the sun. She felt the sun and warm chinook1 wind on her naked body and
laughed a little to herself.
This was so fine, this moment, so fine. All was perfect, absolutely perfect.
She was alive again and was glad. Life could be good. No, it is good. Despite
everything, despite heartache and loss and meanness and unfairness and the
fact that we all must die, life is good and in these perfect moments we know
the goodness.
Such times occurred most often, it seemed, when she was a child. Once,
seventy-one years ago, she was perfectly content a whole summer.
Notes:
1. Chinook wind is dry, warm, down-slope wind in the interior West of
North America.
Discussion 1. What is the atmosphere of this
episode? What feeling does it evoke
in you?
2. How do you think this story is going
to end?
3. What would be your own “perfect
moment”? Do you think you can only
experience it while you are young or is
it possible to enjoy life to the full in
the old age?
4. Look at the poster on the left. In this
piece, the artist Ernesto Yerena
depicted Helen Red Feather of the
Lakota tribe who showed bravery and
resilience at the Standing Rock
reservation in 2016. She took part in
protests against the Dakota Access
Pipeline that prevented the tribe from
accessing clean water and threatened
the sacred burial grounds. What
imagery is used in this poster? How
would describe its message?
Language Practice
Task 3: Pronunciation Tips
The pronunciation of the voiceless glottal fricative /h/ in English differs from
that in many other languages. Make sure the sound is produced by the
glottis and the air escapes freely through the mouth.
hale, heartwarming, habit, headache, handsome, hideous, handle, whole,
hilarious, hand-waving, hinder, enhance, inhabit
In the weak forms of function words (have, he, his, her, him, etc.) so-called
h-dropping often occurs: the sound ‘h’ is omitted.
Practise h-dropping in the following sentences:
She had no intention of going near him.
She spread her white hair all around her to dry in the sun.
Compile your own phrases using both function words with /h/ and words
from the list above, as in the example:
She thought he had hideous habits.
Offer your phrases to other students for practicing /h/ and h-dropping.
Writing
Imagine that you have heard your older relative or acquaintance
complain that all books / films seem to be about young people,
while old age is presented as ridiculous / pitiful. Think which book
/ film / TV series you could recommend to this person. Write an email to
them, explaining your choice. Focus on the character of the protagonist /
character that you want specifically to draw your addressee’s attention to.
Here are some ideas that you might use:
Project
The Young and the Old
Many stories portray special relationships between the young and
the old. They draw heavily on the contrast between two age groups,
juxtaposing their innocence and experience. The relationship can be fueled
by mutual respect and love or, on the contrary, by antagonism and
generation gap. Find such pairs in fiction and research the dynamics of the
relationship. Share your conclusions in class.