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°A WALK AMONG THE TOMBSTONES*
Screenplay by
Scott Frank
from the novel by
Lawrence Block
REVISED
3/7/04BLACK
We hear the sound of A POLICE RADIO OVER. We then
FADE IN:
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR - MORNING
Two cops. The one behind the wheel is DANNY ORTIZ -- thirties,
wrapped in a nice suit, pair of dark shades atop a shaved head.
ORTIZ
Anyway...
(shrugs)
That’s all I gotta say.
He turns now to the passenger seat:
ORTIZ
Manana.
The other cop, MATT SCUDDER -- few years older with hair cut
close, slept-in overcoat and no tie -- turns, looks right at
us/CAMERA as he replies to his partner
MATT
Fuck you.
He then opens his door and gets out of the car.
EXT. STREET - WASHINGTON HEIGHTS - SAME
As Matt kicks the car door closed with a heavy boot, then turns,
doesn’t look back as the car now pulls away into traffic. Matt
crosses the street to a BAR.
INT. BAR - SAME
Dark. Smpty. Dust motes float in sunlight that breaks from the
open door as Matt enters. THE OWNER, a tubby, grey-haired man,
straightens up from some chore behind the bar as Matt enters.
OWNER
Scudder.
Matt takes the owner’s newspaper and heads straight for a booth in
the back, sits down and starts to read. From the day’s headlines,
the sharper among us may pick up that we’re several years back in
time. We then
CUT TO: A CLOSE UP OF THE TABLE
As a steaming CUP OF COFFEE is set down. Followed by first one,
then two SHOTS OF BOURBON.
OWNER
You’ re welcome.2s
Matt dumps one shot into the coffee and takes a sip. He silently
reads the paper while, behind the bar, the owner goes through his
wn morning routine of wiping down, stocking this and that. It’s
quiet in here. We HOLD ON MATT. Savor the peace. But then...
The door opens, spilling a wedge of light into the joint that, for
an instant, illuminates half of Matt’s face. He keeps on reading,
Feaches for that second shot glass while we hear...
VOICE
Kay passo, homie? Remember us?
And then sharp LAUGHTER. Followed by...
OWNER _(0S)
Okay. Alright-- fuckin get outta
here, botha you. I told you last
night I--
Then BANG. LOUD. As A GUN GOES OFF -- shocks Matt, who drops the
second shot glass onto the table and instinctively reaches for his
own GUN, fumbles it clear of his holster, only to drop it onto the
floor, the sound of it hitting the hardwood a;
Sf the assholes over by the door looking this way, because just as
Matt ducks down to pick up his lost weapon..
...A SHOTGUN BLAST blows away half the booth. Light spills in as
énce more the door swings open as TWO FIGURES get the fuck out of
{here while Matt slides out of the booth, his gun firmly in both
hands now as he crosses the joint in a few quick steps, ignoring
the cut down owner lying on his back behind the bar, floating in a
sea of his own blood.
EXT. BAR - WASHINGTON HEIGHTS - SAME
As Matt steps outside and immediately fires his gun we WHIP PAN TO
an old BONNEVILLE parked at the curb where TWO DOMINICAN BANGERS
row sit while a THIRD dives into the backseat just as Matt yells...
MATT
Police--
_..and then shoots the diving man several times before he’s even
halfway in the car, adrenaline and fear now overriding the booze.
The car starts away from the curb when Matt turns and shoots the
driver once in the face, killing him just like that, but the car
keeps rolling down the avenue, no one alive at the wheel anymore
The guy in the passenger seat panics, fires wild with the shotgun,
blowing a big hole through the roof as Matt’s spent clip bounces
SEE the sidewalk and he reaches into his coat for another, all the
while keeping one eye on the last guy as he now jumps from the
rolling Bonneville and takes off running like a banshee.
Matt runs down the sidewalk after him, passing the BONNEVILLE which
jumps the sidewalk and rolls along wreaking its own havocAs Matt runs, adrenaline overrides everything including fear, as
the guy starts firing wild shots over his shoulder with a pistol,
puts a couple holes in Matt’s flapping overcoat.
Matt returns a few shots of his own, but then stops, takes his
time, and blows the guy off his feet just as he turns into an
alley.
INT, ALLEY - SAME
We see Matt now walking up the alley. The thug crawling along, his
leg roaring with blood. He gets up, Matt unceremoniously kicks him
in the wound and the man screams, but keeps somehow pulling himself
along like Matt’s not even there. Determined...
The thug finally reaches out with a shaky hand for his GUN which
had apparently slid away from him. Matt steps on his wounded leg.
The banger screams once more and covers his head with his leather
jacket. Matt crouches down, calmly pulls the jacket down and puts
his gun to the banger’s forehead.
MATT
Did you throw shots at me, asshole?
BANGER
(grabs one of the
many gold crosses
around his neck)
Please...
MATT
Did you?
And now Matt presses the gun into the man’s forehead...
BANGER
I'm sorry--
MATT
Fuckin-A you are.
We hear A WOMAN SCREAM somewhere off in the street. Matt ignores
the scream, cuffs the guy as we PUSH PAST MATT to the mouth of the
alley, whatever chaos on the street beyond is washed out by bright
light as we now...
FADE TO WHITE
MATT (vO)
I stopped drinking that day.
FADE IN: CLOSE-UP MATT - NOW
Weary, but still watchful. A stare that can still daunt the
receiver.
MATT
It just wasn’t as much fun after
that.We hear SOFT LAUGHTER at that, and now we...
WIDEN TO REVEAL: AN AA MEETING HALL
Matt stands at the microphone addressing the group.
MATT
I'm eight years sober. And...
well, T guess, I’m just...
He stands there another moment. Nothing left to say.
MATT
That's all. Thanks.
Matt starts out of the room as A WOMAN makes her way to the mic.
WOMAN
My name is Denise, and I'm an
alcoholic- addict: .~
MATT /EVERYONE
Hi, Denise!
As Matt walks out of the room, we see another MAN -- early
thirties, long hair, faded, green army jacket over jeans and a
Sweatershirt -- get up and’ follow Matt out.
EXT. CHURCH - NIGHT
A light rain begins to fall as Matt hurries down the steps and
pulls up his collar. He starts down the street, people taking one
look at him and giving him plenty of room. He crosses the street
umbrellas opening up all around him. Now the MAN from the meeting
exits the church, pensively watches Matt cross as we then...
CUT TO: VETERANS AVE. (BROOKLYN) PAYPHONE - NIGHT
Pouring rain. The payphone is RINGING as a black BMW jumps the
Garb aed KENNY KRIStO'-~ forty, in a long leather duster, jeans and
black boots, hurries out of the car, his door hanging open into the
street as he runs and grabs the receiver...
KENNY
Hello?
VOICE (PHONE)
Where's the money?
KENNY
In the backseat, two bags like you
said.
VOICE (PHONE)
Good. Now leave it, walk up Sixty-
sixth Street to Avenue M.
Kenny looks around the neighborhood, the dark storefronts, but,
can't see anybody.KENNY
And then what?
VOICE (PHONE)
Wait on the corner for five minutes,
then walk back, get in your car and
go home.
KENNY
What about my wife?
VOICE (PHONE)
She'll be in the car waiting for you.
EXT. STREET - TWO BLOCKS AWAY - NIGHT
As Kenny paces back and forth in the rain. He checks his watch,
looks down the street. He then quickly starts walking back the way
he came.
EXT. STREET - KENNY KRISTO'S CAR - NIGHT
As Kenny now runs to the car, whips the door open...
KENNY
carrie!
But THE CAR IS EMPTY. He stands there a moment, looking around.
KENNY
Fuck this shit...
He takes out his keys and opens the trunk. It's empty as well.
And now we hear THE PAYPHONE RING ACROSS THE STREET. He slams the
trunk and runs to it. Picks it up...
VOICE (PHONE)
Go home. She'll probably get there
before you do.
INT. KENNY'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Decent art mixed with pricey antiques. We glimpse the panicked
Kenny in a framed mirror as he bursts through the door.
KENNY
Carrie!
We clock more of the deluxe furnishings as he moves through the
house. Black & white photographs of A WOMAN are everywhere...
KENNY
Carrie!
Kenny throws open a door, calls up the staircase. He knows she’s
not here. He stands there a moment, then suddenly PUTS HIS FIST
THROUGH THE WALL. Then his OTHER FIST.fle sees himself in the MIRROR and smashes both of his hands against
it, shattering the glass. Slicing his hands
He stares up at a huge PORTRAIT OF HIS WIFE -- CARRIE -- that hangs
above the fireplace. She’s beautiful, dark, and young; no more
than twenty-five-years-old. It’s her image we see all over the
walls.
KENNY
Oh, God... please...
THE PHONE RINGS. Kenny grabs it on the first ring.
KENNY
Where is she?!
VOICE (PHONE)
My apologies: There was a slight
change in plans.
The CALLER ID BOX reads UNKNOWN CALLER. We can hear someone else
LAUGHING in the b.q.
KENNY
Where is she?
VOICE (PHONE)
She's just, around the corner from
yous obr juny Seventyoninth Street.
elieve’ it's the south side, three or
four houses from the corner~-
KENNY
What?
VOICE, (PHONE)
There's a car parked illegally at a
fire hydrant. A grey Ford Tempo.
Your wife's in it.
KENNY
She's in the car?
VOICE, (PHONE)
She's in the trunk.
KENNY
You put her in the trunk?
VOICE (PHONE)
Don't worry, There's plenty of air.
But it’s cold out tonight, so you'li
want to get her out of there as soon
as possible.
KENNY
Is there a key? How do I open the
VOICE (PHONE)
The lock’s broken. You won't need a
key.KENNY
If it’s broken, why can’t she--
The LINE GOES DEAD. Kenny drops the phone, looks at his hands,
both covered with bloody cuts from the broken mirror.
EXT. SEVENTY-NINTH STREET - NIGHT
Where a battered Tempo sits parked at the curb. The windshield is
starred and the passenger door is deeply dented. Kenny now moves
INTO FRAME, approaches the trunk and hesitates -- THE LOCK IS
MISSING ALTOGETHER. He flings the lid open and we...
CUT TO BLACK
As A CAR WIPES PAST and we now REVEAL
EXT. COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT
Where Matt sits alone in a booth. The man from the AA meeting
watches him a moment, then crosses the street and goes inside.
INT. COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT
As Matt folds back the newspaper, smiles at the waitress who
refills his coffee cup. When she moves away, we hear:
VOICE
Hello, Matt.
And now Matt looks up and sees the man from the meeting standing
there. Matt looks at him blankly. Doesn’t know him from Adam.
MAN
It's me, Peter-- Peter Kristo.
MATT
oh. Peter. Hi.
(then)
Do I know you, Peter?
PETER
I led a meeting a few weeks ago.
(explaining)
I'ma painter... got hooked on smack
in Art School
MATT
Hegh, you're the one, did, the Jackson
Pollack number on the wall a the john
with the blood from your...
PETER
--syringe. Yeah, that was me.
MATT
I enjoyed your story.PETER
Thanks.
(indicates the
booth)
You mind...
MATT
Sure. Sit down.
Peter slides in and Matt watches Peter glance this way and that.
He smiles nervously at the WAITRESS who appears.
PETER
Nothing for me, thanks.
MATT
Something wrong, Peter?
PETER
It's... my brother.
(then)
He needs your help.
MATT
What kind of help?
PETER
I think it would be better, you came
Fr
there
MATT
Bay Ridge...
PETER
ly brother’ 11 pay, for your cab out
there and back. And your time.
Whether you take the job or not.
Matt can see Peter’s not in good shape. The guy can’t sit still.
PETER
Please. Just hear what he has to
say. That’s all I’m asking.
Matt looks past Peter, watches as the waitress now comes out of the
kitchen balancing a plate of food on her fingertips while she grabs
a bottle of ketchup off the counter, and then heads this way
MATT
Uh-huh, and when would your brother
like to have this chat?
PETER
Right now.
Matt watches, somewhat sadly, as the waitress now sets down a
steaming plate of STEAK & EGGS in front of him.MATT
That’s what I thought you were gonna
say.
Matt puts some money on the table, takes one last look at the meal
he’s not gonna have.
MATT
It's faster, we take the subway.
EXT. SUBWAY - BAY RIDGE - NIGHT
We CRANE UP as Matt and Peter walk up from the subway and start off
towards the nicer neighborhoods down closer to the water.
EXT. KENNY KRISTO’S HOUSE - NIGHT
As Matt starts up the walk, Peter hangs back on the sidewalk. Matt
stops, turns back.
PETER
I’m gonna wait out here.
Matt looks at him.
PETER
It’s all right. He’s expecting you.
And now the door opens and we see Kenny Kristo standing there.
He's wearing the same clothes from the night before, except that
now he’s barefoot and his right hand is bandaged. Matt watches now
as he and Peter look at each other a moment, before Peter finally
turns away.
KENNY
Mr. Scudder. Come in.
INT. KENNY KRISTO'S HOUSE - NIGHT
As Matt comes inside, Kenny extends his hand.
KENNY
Kenny Kristo. Thank you for coming.
He moves away from the door.
KENNY
Can I get you something to drink?
Not a drink drink. I know you know
Peter from AA, but there's coffee
made or I can’ offer you a soda...
Matt sees a pile of BROKEN GLASS in a corner. An overturned chair.
A broken lamp, looks like it was thrown against the wall.
MATT
Coffee's fine.
As Kenny pours a cup, Matt looks through the doorway, can see that
the entire house is a mess, looks like it’s been tossed.10.
KENNY
So, you're a private detective, is
that right?
MATT
Unlicensed.
KENNY
What's that mean?
MATT
It means that sometimes I do favors
for people and sometimes in return
they give me gifts.
KENNY
Gifts. Uh-huh. But you used to be a
cop, right?
MATT
Iwas with the Sixth Precinct in the
village for a while, and before that
Iwas over here with the Seventy-
6
£1fth.
KENNY
So why'd you quit?
MATT
I didn’t like the hours.
KENNY
What, the corruption get to you?
MATT
Not really. It would've been hard to
support my"family without it. What
gan I do for you, Kenny?
Kenny considers Matt a long moment.
KENNY .
This was really my brother's idea,
bringing you out here.
MATT
You want, I can leave.
Kenny glances at the portrait above the fireplace, then...
KENNY
Someone’s kidnapped my wife.
MATT
(beat)
That’s a federal matter.
KENNY .
They said not to call the police.ll.
MATT
Naturally, they would. When did this
happen?
KENNY
Yesterday.
MATT
You should be talking to the FBI.
KENNY
I’m talking to you.
MATT
Look, Mr. Kristo--
KENNY
Kenny.
MATT
Look, Kenny, if you're asking me to
run 4 bag, deliver money, that’s not
something’ I--
KENNY
I already paid them.
MATT
(beat)
When?
KENNY
Last night.
MATT
How much?
KENNY
Four hundred thousand.
And now Matt cuts a look at that portrait.
MATT
And your wife?
KENNY
She's dead.
Matter of fact. No emotion. Kenny takes a breath
KENNY
I paid them, but they killed her
anyway.
MATT
I see. And I’m sorry.
KENNY
I don’t want you to be sorry, I want
ou to find the men who did’ it, bring
hem to me.12.
Matt looks at the portrait once more.
MATT
vou say you paid them the four
hundred the same day?
KENNY
That’s right.
And now Matt levels his gaze at Kenny
MATT
You mind I ask, what kind of business
you're in, Kenny?
KENNY
Construction.
MATT
What exactly do you construct?
KENNY
Houses.
MATT
Uh-huh. And T guess Peter’s standing
outside in the rain right now because
he -- what, doesn’t like your
building methods?
KENNY
He doesn’t approve of my profession
(MATT
Since when is drug dealing a
profession?
Kenny just looks back at him. Matt smiles.
MATT
I,mean, that’s the reason, isn’t it,
I’m sitting here and not the cops?
You're a dealer?
Kenny considers Matt a moment, clears his throat, then...
KENNY
Properly speaking, I’m more of a
trafficker than a’dealer. You
understand the distinction?
MATT
I really don’t give a shit one way or
the other. But whoever it was, took
your wife didn’t just pick your name
out of a hat. | They must/ve had sone
idea you had that kinda cash on hand.
KENNY
That’s exactly what I’d like you to
find out. who... did this13.
Kenny reaches into a bag, tosses TWO BRICKS OF CASH onto the table
in front of Matt.
KENNY
That’s ten thousand dollars.
Consider it my “gift” to you.
Matt looks at it, but leaves it where it is.
KENNY
You get another ten, you find the two
fucks who killed her.
MATT
So that you can kill them.
Kenny says nothing, just looks back at Matt.
MATT
(gets up)
I’m sorry, but I can’t help you.
EXT. KENNY’S HOUSE - NIGHT
As Matt walks down the walk to where Peter leans against a car,
nervously smoking a cigarette.
MATT
Would’ ve been nice, you told me your
brother’s a fucking drug dealer.
PETER
You wouldn’t/ve come.
MATT
You’ re right.
And with that, Matt starts down the sidewalk.
EXT. A RESIDENTIAL HOTEL ~ NIGHT
Midtown. One of those places has a little neighborhood bar
attached. Matt crosses through the rain to the lobby.
INT. HOTEL LOBBY - NIGHT
As Matt enters, HOWIE, the desk clerk -- twenties, pierced ear,
nose and eyebrows -- tips back in A WHEELCHAIR as he feverishly
works the controls for Grand Theft Auto IV, the game running on the
TV stashed behind the counter. As he pulls his headphones off, we
can hear KORN blasting away at 100 dbs.
MATT
Howie.
(indicates the
chair)
Hurt yourself?14.
HOWIE
(pops a wheelie)
Found it out back by the dumpster.
Mrs. Dahlgren in 202 left it there
when Mr. D stroked out last week
Matt tries not to shake his head, give any kind of reaction to that
one at all. Instead, he smiles the best he can and asks:
MATT
Any messages?
Howie rolls over to the message boxes, then stands up out of the
chair to reach Matt’s box on the top row, takes down a slip and
squints at it.
HOWIE
Sol Edwards.
Howie hands Matt the slip, sits back down in the wheelchair.
MATT
Sol Edwards...
HOWIE
He said he was a cop, but I think the
guy was fucking with’me.
MATT
Sol Edmunds?
HOWTE .
Could be. I was watching Dragonball
and could’ ve maybe heard wrong. But
anyways...
(pops another
wheelie)
He said to call him at some hospital.
MATT
Some hospital?
HOWIE
Westland or Westside. One of those.
MATT
Which is it, Howie? One’s on Long
Island. The other one’s in Harlem.
HOWIE
(shrugs)
Guess you'll just have to call ‘em
both.
MATT
Howie, you gotta write this stuff
down.
Howie turns back to his game. Matt shakes his head, moves to the
elevator, then turns and looks back at Howie.18.
MATT
Why'd you think he wasn’t for real?
Howie looks up. Huh?
MATT
You said the guy told you he was a
cop, but you thought he was fucking
with you.
HOWIE
Oh, not about that, about your son.
MATT
(stops the elevator
door)
My what’
HOWIE
Yeah, that’s what I said-- no way
Scudder’s got a fucking kid
INT. HOSPITAL E.R. - NIGHT
As an AMBULANCE pulls up, the doors burst open and the ATTENDANTS
OFFLOAD what looks like a GUNSHOT VICTIM. Matt slips past them,
grabs the first NURSE he sees.
MATT
My name’s Scudder. My son is
VOICE
Matt...
He turns as a young uniformed cop approaches, hand extended.
COP
Sol Edmunds.
He sees the look on Matt’s face and smiles.
CoP/soL.
You, thought it was my old man
called... He’s dead, five years now
Colon cancer. Shit he ate, it’s no
wonder--
MATT
About my son-~
SOL
Oh, yeah, he’s okay, a little banged
up’is ali. He’s right over here
Matt hesitates, then starts to follow the cop down a row of
curtained-off beds...
MATT
Which one is it, Mike or Andy?16.
The cop looks at him.
MAT?
The message I got was a little vague
SOL
It’s Michael. He and a buddy
borrowed a car, took it for a ride
until they ran’a red light, bounced
off a sanitation truck into a
basketball hoop at Linney Park.
MATT
They hit anybody?
soL
They were lucky. Tt was after dark,
nobody's around.
$01 leads Matt, stops, pulls back a curtain and we see a SEVENTEEN
YEAR-OLD BOY lying on’a gurney, eyes closed, a gauze bandage on his
forehead, an ace around his wrist. Matt stares at him..
SOL
They got him sedated.
Matt moves around the gurney, stares down at the kid lying on the
bed.
MATT,
You call his mother?
coP
My partner did, but she was up in
Nyack. At a wedding or something.
That’s when I remembered the name
and thought how many Matt Scudders
could there be-~
Matt turns away from the boy, uncomfortable. The cop misreads
this.
SOL
Don’t worry. He’s gonna be fine.
And me and my partner, we’re not
makin’ a thing.
The kid opens his eyes. Blinks at Matt.
KID
Who are you?
MATT
Matt.
(then)
Your father.
And now the kid sits up.
KID
Am I dying?17.
EXT, LONG ISLAND NEIGHBORHOOD - NIGHT
Middle class. A TAXI moves up the street, stops in front of a well
kept home.
INT. TAXI - SAME
Matt and Michael in the back. The kid has a bandage on his head.
MICHAEL,
You used to have a mustache.
Matt turns to his son.
MICHAEL
And your hair’s a lot longer, That’s
probably why I didn’t recognize you--
MATT
No problem.
(indicates the cut)
How you feeling?
MICHAEL
I got a rippin’ headache.
They sit there a moment. Matt looks off at the house.
MATT
You repainted the house.
MICHAEL
Jerry did.
(then)
Four years ago.
They sit there in silence a moment, neither knowing what to say.
MICHAEL
You know, I don't remember you being
drunk.
MATT
(beat)
That's because I never was.
(then)
But I was always drinking.
MICHAEL
What, like scotch?
MATT
Bourbon mostly. With coffee.
MICHAEL
(nods)
Coffee to speed things up. Bourbon
to slow them down.18.
MATT
Something like that, yeah.
MICHAEL
It was vodka did it to me.
Matt doesn’t move. The kid looks around the cab.
MICHAEL
i’/d pitch nine innings drunk off my
ass and no one would know.
And now Michael looks him in the eye.
MICHAEL
i've been going to meetings. A year
now.
Matt says nothing. Barely nods.
MICHAEL
today, the thing with the car... I
uh, 1’ slipped.
MATT
It happens.
(then)
Have you got a sponsor?
MICHAEL
No. I mean, I did, but... he’s not
sober anymore.
Matt takes a breath, then takes a risk:
MATT
You could call me.
(then)
Tf you wanted to.
MICHAEL
Are we allowed to do that?
MATT
Allowed? You're my son.
vhe kid looks at Matt, then turns and looks out the window.
MICHAEL
You remember the Blumes across the
street?
MATT
(Looks)
The old couple. Sure. Max... and
what was her name, Jane?
MICHAEL,
Joy.19.
MATT
Joy. Right. What about them?
MICHAEL
Remember how you look in their
windows, they’d be sitting on the
couch in front of the TV, each one
hooked up to their own okygen tank
MATT
The truck came twice a week.
MICHAEL
Max finally died a couple years ago.
Matt nods, not all that sure where this is going, but enjoying the
reminiscing nonetheless; glad for his son’s apparent effort to
reconnect. He doesn’t want to jeopardize it, so he keeps his mouth
shut.
MICHAEL
Few weeks after that, I see Joy out
in the garden, Working. Pushing a
wheelbarrow. No oxygen tank, A month
jater she’s going to yoga class with
Mom. A year later, she meets some
guy and moves down’ to Ft. Lauderdale
with him. We got a Christmas card
picture of her and the guy swimming
with the dolphins.
Matt tries to smile as he says this next thing
MATT
You're telling me you don’t need me
MICHAEL,
I’m telling you maybe I never did
So maybe you don’t have to feel so
guilty about, you know, walking out
Before Matt can even react to that, they’re bathed in LIGHT for
just a moment as A CAR PULLS INTO THE DRIVEWAY
MICHAEL
shit.
He watches as JERRY, his stepfather and ANITA, Matt’s ex-wife, get
out of the car. They both look towards the cab. Anita is dressed
up, put together and pretty. She starts coming this way.
ANITA
Michael?
MICHAEL
What am I gonna say to her?
Before Matt can answer, Anita opens the door20.
ANITA
My God, sweetie, are you all right?
Twas 50-~
She stops cold as she sees Matt lean into the light.
ANITA
Matthew.
And now her husband steps up behind her.
MATT
I gave him a lift home.
ANITA
How did you~
MATT
It was a mistake. The uniform,
oe eh he couldn’t get
a hold of you, he called me.
ANITA
A mistake?
MATT
He didn’t know the... situation.
She looks at her son, at Matt, and just gives a tired nod.
ANITA,
All right, well, thank you for
bringing him home.
Matt couldn’t feel smaller as Michael now gets out of the cab.
MICHAEL
Yeah, thanks for the ride.
Matt nods, holds out his hand.
MATT
Good luck, Michael.
MICHAEL
(shakes it)
You too, Dad.
She looks at her son, touches the bandage as she leads him towards
the house. Matt watches for a moment, then turns and faces front.
MATT
(to the driver)
Go ahead.
INT. MATT’S HOTEL - CORRIDOR ~ NIGHT
As Matt gets off the elevator, starts up the hall, we TRACK with
him as he starts for his room. Matt slows down as he sees KENNY
KRISTO now sits slumped on the floor beside Matt's door.21.
KENNY
I never told you her name.
He looks up at Matt, his eyes red, his face warped with grief.
KENNY
I don’t want you to think I’m cruel
or don’t care. I just can’t say it.
Matt crouches down beside him.
MATT
What happened?
We HEAR A PHONE RING OVER.
INT. KENNY KRISTO’S LIBRARY - DAY (FLASHBACK)
As Kenny naps on the leather couch, book open across his chest.
The PHONE RINGS until he stirs, sits up and reaches for it
KENNY
Hello?
MAN’S VOICE (PHONE)
(in the background,
singing)
Hey, Carrie Anne...
KENNY
Hello.
Laughter. Then we hear a different man. Voice low and coarse.
MAN. (PHONE)
She never came home, right?
KENNY
Excuse me?
THE OTHER MAN (PHONE)
(in the background)
What’s your game? Can anybody play?
CUT TO: A MAN'S LIPS
Blurry, distorted, in tight CLOSE-UP...
FIRST MAN
We got your wife, fucko.
INT. KENNY KRISTO'S LIBRARY - DAY
As the LINE GOES DEAD and Kenny hangs up and gets to his feet. On
the wall behind him are framed diplomas from the University of
Wisconsin and UC Berkley for degrees in Philosophy and History.
KENNY
Carrie!22.
INT. LIVING ROOM ~ SAME
As Kenny quickly crosses the spotless room to the stairs.
KENNY
Baby? You up there?
EXT. HOUSE - SAME
As Kenny lifts the garage door, sees the car is gone. We can hear
the phone RINGING INSIDE...
INT. HOUSE - SAME
As Kenny comes back inside, the PHONE RINGING. Kenny looks at the
CALLER 1D box; it reads PAYPHONE followed by a NUMBER. le picks up
the phone, writes the number on his palm...
KENNY
What do you want?
CUT TO: A BLURRY IMAGE OF A MAN
This voice calmer, more cultured than the first guy who called. A
well-trimmed goatee frames a doughy mouth. He chuckles. A lot.
SECOND MAN
I want to help you get your wife
back. If you want her back, that is
KENNY,
Of course I want her--
SECOND MAN
Then stay close to the phone. And
lease don't call the police. I'll
ein touch. Very soon...
INT. KENNY KRISTO'S HOUSE - DAY
And again the line goes dead. Kenny hangs up the phone, starts
pacing the room, He stops in front of the MIRROR, takes « deep
Breath to calm himself. He closes, then opens his eyes and..
His expression goes from panic to resolve as he turns from the
mirror and sits down in a chair next to the phone. It doesn't take
Tong for it to RING. The CALLER ID box reads: PAYPHONE. Kenny
lets it ring once more, then calmly answers the phone.
KENNY
Just tell me how much you want?
SECOND MAN
(beat)
What does your wife weigh, Mr.
Kristo? One ten, one twenty,
somewhere in that neighborhood?
Something like... fifty kilograms we
might say?23.
Kenny doesn't answer
SECOND MAN
So let's see, fifty keys at twenty a
key, well, run the numbers for me
why’don't’ you. Comes to a mil,
doesn't it?
KENNY
What's the point?
SECOND MAN .
The point is you'd pay a million for
her if she was product, Mr. Kristo
You'd pay that Ruch SF" she was
jowder. Isn't she worth as much in
Pigsn
‘and blood?
KENNY
I can't pay what I don't have
SECOND MAN
How much do you have?
KENNY
(beat)
Four hundred.
SECOND MAN
Five.
KENNY
Tim not haggling. I gave you the top
figure right away. It's four
hundred.
SECOND MAN
(beat)
Ah, well, if that’s the best you can
do! “Four hundred it is.
KENNY
Before I give you anything, I want to
make sure my wife is all right.
__ SECOND MAN
That's impossible. I'm at a
payphone.
KENNY
How do I even know you've got her in
the first place?
SECOND MAN
(beat)
Are you familiar with her tits?
KENNY
Excuse me?24,
SECOND MAN
They're quite nice. Would you
recognize one of them? That would be
the simplest way. 1711 cut. off the
one with the pretty mole and leave it
6n your doorstep. Would that put
your mind at rest?
KENNY
Jesus, don't say that.
SECOND MAN
Then let's not talk about proof,
okay?
(then)
Put the money in two hefty bags. Go
to the phone booth on the corner of
6eean Avenue and Farragut Road and
wait for my call.
INT. MATT’S ROOM - DAWN
sun-faded carpet. Pressboard furniture. A small kitchenette. To
suncEibe the room as monastic would be to infuse the place with too
much cheer.
Kenny sits at the table staring into a cup of coffee. Matt stands
sent window, listening to the story. The Tv is on (it’s always
on). The sound muted.
KENNY
They xun me around. Then finally
eli me she’s at home waiting for me.
°go home, she’s not there either
He looks up at Matt. This next part's hard
KENNY
Phone rings again, They send me over
to Seventy ninth Streets tell me
She’s in the trunk of this abandoned
car...
EXT. SEVENTY-NINTH STREET - NIGHT
As Kenny moves around to the trunk. No lock at all
KENNY
Carrie?
He stands there a moment and flings the lid open.
KENNY
No.
INSIDE THE TRUNK
‘Are dozens of PACKAGES. Bundles of various sizes wrapped in BLACK
PLASTIC and secured with duct tape2s.
KENNY
No, no, no...
He grabs one of the parcels from the trunk, takes a jackknife from
his pocket and cuts away the tape...
KENNY
No, no, no..+
A bit of BLOOD runs from the packet and he quickly drops it back
into the trunk and starts backing away as he now notices several
thin streams of BLOOD running from many of the bundles...
A HIGH ANGLE OF KENNY KRISTO
As he throws his head back and cries out like a gutshot animal, the
rain falling all around him like knives as he crumples.
INT. MATT'S ROOM - NIGHT
Kenny sits at the table, trying to keep hold of himself.
KENNY
That’s not even the worst part.
Matt looks at him as he pulls something from his pocket.
KENNY
This was taped to the inside of the
trunk.
He sets a MICRO CASSETTE TAPE down on the table
KENNY ;
With a note said, For your listening
pleasure.
Kenny takes a small recorder from his other pocket and inserts the
tape. He looks up at Matt. We hear nothing for a moment. Just
silence...
And then, gradually, we become aware of the sound of BREATHING. A
man’s hurried, excited breaths. And then, a WHIMPER. Then
VOICE
SHHHHH...
And then more breathing. The breaths become more hurried, not
louder, just faster, and then a long, raspy sigh. A chuckle.
Then...
VOICE
My turn...
(singing)
Hey, Carrie Anne...
(whisper)
You wanna kiss me? Hm?
(then)
Here, let's take the tape off26.
land now we hear the sound of tape being pulled off skin. More
‘sounds of raspy breathing. Movement. The van shifting on its
springs.
Matt looks at Kenny. He's turned away from the table now. We then
hear another, horrible sound: A TOOL BOX IS OPENED.
CARRIE (VO)
No--
But her voice is stifled, as if something covered her mouth
VOICE (vO)
(singing)
Hey, Carrie-Anne...
‘And now we can hear CARRIE SCREAM. But it’s then cut off, as if
Someone shut off the recorder. Kenny stares at the recorder in
front of him, the sprockets turning. Until Matt shuts it off
MATT
(inally)
I/11 find them.
EXT. SEVENTY-NINTH STREET ~ DAY
he SUN is out now as Matt walks over to the curb where the Tempo
was parked, bends down and picks up a shred of torn plastic from a
bush) A piece of grey DUCT TAPE is still stuck to it
EXT. PHONE BOOTH - DAY
As Matt crosses to the booth where Kenny got his first call. He
goes inside, takes out his notebook and writes down the number.
EXT. PHONE BOOTH - FLATBUSH - DAY
lg Matt does the same thing at the second booth. As he’s writing
ee un the number, THE PHONE RINGS and Matt looks at it, then picks
up.
MATT
Hello?
But the line goes dead. Matt then steps out of the booth, looks at
the neighborhood around it. Looks at the storefronts, at the
houses up the side street. A group of kids play in the street.
EXT. D'AGOSTINO'S - DAY
As Matt talks to a BAG BOY.
BAG BOY
She tipped me two dollars,27.
QUICK CUT TO: THAT DAY
As the Bag Boy shuts the trunk of a car to reveal Carrie Kristo
smiling at him, holding out a couple of bills.
BAG BOY, (vO)
.;-which is twice what anybody else
tips, if they even tip at all.
CUT BACK TO: MATT AND THE BAG BOY
As Matt looks at the street...
MATT
You said something about a van?
BAG BOY
Yeah, it was parked right there.
QUICK CUT TO: THAT DAY
A BLURRY IMAGE of A VAN parked at the curb. We move past it and
gee...
BAG BOY (VO)
Two guys got out of it...
TWO MEN in coveralls, some kind of uniform, dark sunglasses looking
ata clipboard. The men are moving in FAST MOTION as they get out
of the van, then the images SLOW as they stop and look at Carrie...
BAG BOY (VO)
I remember they, checked her, out
ST
he same in some kind of uniform...
CUT BACK TO: MATT & THE BAG BOY
As the Bag Boy points...
BAG BOY
They pulled out after Mrs. Kristo,
right. in front of a Mercedes, almost
got hit.
CUT TO: THE STREET
As we see the van pull out in FAST MOTION, then FREEZE as we hear A
HORN honk and a Mercedes stops inches from the van.
CUT BACK Ti
MATT & THE BAG BOY
MATT
You remember what the van looked
like?
BAG BOY
Yeah, it was light blue...28.
QUICK CUT TO: A GARAGE - RIGHT NOW
Dark, but we can see TWO MEN in here, with SPRAY GUNS, PAINTING THE
VAN. | WHITE.
BAG BOY (VO)
Definitely light blue.
INT. D'AGOSTINO'S - DAY
As Matt shows Carrie's photograph to a CASHIER.
CASHIER
I could tell she was a good cook
which is rare for young women her
Sge. Nothing frozen her cart, only
the very freshest ingredients,
Anyway, she asked me if we had any
foul madamas and I sent her over to
the Arabian Gourmet.
EXT. ARABIAN GOURMET - DAY
Ag Matt talks to a man wearing a nametag that says "ROLAND" and
below that "MANAGER."
MANAGER
Yeah, the van was parked across, the
Street. I thought they were making a
delivery...
INT. ARABIAN GOURMET - DAY
As Matt talks to a TEENAGE CASHIER...
TEENAGE CASHIER
I don't remember any van, but I do
remember Mrs. Youness came in with
Some story about three people robbing
the place...
INT. SMALL HOUSE - DAY
As Matt sits at a table, some sort of STICKY DESSERT in front of
hin “He's talking with’ MRS. YOUNESS, a woman in her eighties. She
speaks in Arabic. A NEIGHBOR translates...
NEIGHBOR
She saw two men and a woman run
across the street away from the
store...
EXT. ARABIAN GOURMET - (FLASHING BACK
As we see two BLURRED FIGURES rush Carrie Kristo across the
street...
NEIGHBOR (VO)
...and leap into a truck.23.
As they all pile into the back of the van and the van blows right
by CAMERA... the FRAME REVEALING MRS. YOUNESS watching it squeal
around the corner...
NEIGHBOR (VO)
She thought they had just robbed the
store...
EXT. D'AGOSTINO'S - DAY
As Matt scribbles in his notebook...
BAG BOY
I think it had the name of some TV
repair place on the side. Two
initials like...
INT. GARAGE - DAY
As the two men paint over the stencil on the side of the truck.
BAG BOY (VO)
B&R...
EXT. ARABIAN GOURMET
As the manager closes his eyes.
MANAGER
R & L Stereo.
INT. THE SMALL HOUSE - DAY
As Mrs. Youness looks right at Matt, says in English...
OLD WOMAN
B & A Appliance.
INT. GARAGE - DAY
As the TWO MEN step back and admire the freshly painted truck.
It's now PAINTED WHITE with no initials anywhere. One man is short
and round, the other quite tall, well over six feet. They stand
with their backs to us. We see no faces just yet.
DISSOLVE TO:
A NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
As it’s scroll-popped into FRAME. A microfiche slide. BROOKLYN
WOMAN KIDNAPPED. A photo of a pretty African-American woman. We
get the quick gist through either the sub-head or the first few
lines that the woman was returned safely and we then...
WIDEN TO REVEAL:30.
INT, THE NEW YORK PUBLIC LIBRARY - DAY
As Matt, the rain beating against the window beside him, sits at a
microfiche station scrolling through old editions of the New York
Times. He scrolls through the year old newspaper...
We hear SOMEONE COUGHING OS. Matt stops to read another story
Rnother one like the previous: “WOMAN KIDNAPPED.” We hear MORE
COUGHING OS and Matt turns and looks at
A NEARBY TABLE
Where someone, back to us/Matt, bundled up in a down jacket leans
over a piece of paper, intensely working on something. Dozens of
pages are scattered about the table. The person COUGHS once more
then resumes his frantic scribbling. The LIBRARIAN comes over to
the table, puts her hands on her huge hips...
LIBRARIAN
I'd like a word with you, TJ. Over
here, please.
Matt goes back to the machine, scrolls on as we then go to
EXT. BRIGHTON BEACH STREET - DAY
POURING RAIN. An attractive WOMAN, in her early thirties, driving
a big black Mercedes, stops for a red light.
INT. MERCEDES - SAME
RAIN POUNDS the roof of the car as the woman adjusts the rearview
mirror to check her lipstick. She starts to HUM.
IN THE MIRROR, we see THE GRILLE OF A WHITE VAN pull up behind her.
On the seat beside her, a DOG, a Rhodesian Ridgeback, raises its
head and looks out. Smelling something...
MATT (VO)
Marie Gotteskind...
QUICK CUT TO: A VACANT LOT - NIGHT
As several GARBAGE BAGS are tossed from the back of a van. We then
FREEZE and PULL OUT FROM...
CLOSE-UP OF NEWSPAPER PHOTOGRAPH
[A VACANT LOT. COPS are everywhere. SEVERAL GARBAGE BAGS STREWN
ABOUT, A LENGTH OF CRIME SCENE TAPE STRETCHED BETWEEN THO NARROW
BUILDINGS that border the lot on either side.
REVEAL: INT. LIBRARY ~ DAY
As Matt studies another article.
LIBRARIAN (0S)
I_know you've been sleeping in here
Td...31.
Behind Matt, the librarian chews out the figure in the jacket.
ON THE PHOTOGRAPH
As we MOVE DOWN to where the caption below the photograph reads
“THE REMAINS OF MARIE GOTTESKIND...” etc
LIBRARIAN (OS)
I know because Mr. Keyser says you
left a God awful mess in the men's
room, not to mention the mess you
left’ right there.
(then)
Now, I want you to --
MATT
He'll clean it up. Later. Okay?
The Librarian looks over at Matt who, his back to her, calmly pulls
a sheet of paper from the printer...
MATT
Right, now he’s helping me with
something.
She looks at Matt, moves on. And now the coughing person turns and
looks this way, his hood falling to his shoulder so that we see. A
BoY -- black, fifteen, skinny, intelligent eyes -- turns and looks
at the screen.
BOY/TJ
Child of God.
Matt turns and looks at the kid who indicates the photo.
1
The name, Gotteskind. Means Child of
God. It's German.
MATT
Huh...
(looks at the
screen)
13? That short for something?
Tg
Yeah, it's short for TJ.
Matt keeps his eyes on the screen, holds out his hand.
MATT
Matt.
Tw.
Short for Matthew.
(sits down)
What am I helping you with, Matthew?32.
INT. THE WHITE VAN - DAY
two dark figures inside. Staticky voices come from A POLICE RADIQ
as they follow the Mercedes. The MAN in the passenger seat, round
Gnd short, has a worn FILE open in his lap. He peruses it
INSERT - FILE
A long lens surveillance shot of a black Mercedes. The same black
Mercedes they now follow.
|, ROUND MAN
It's raining, it's pouring...
He HUMS the rest of it as he now flips through the file. The TALL
MAN behind the wheel snaps his gum, blows a bubble. The ROUND MAN
frowns at him, turns back to...
THE FILE
Where we see pictures of a BALD MAN coming out of a CLUB with
several other men, the name of the club is written in RUSSIAN
Another blurry photograph shows A WOMAN -~ presumably the one in
the car in front of us, pregnant -- standing beside the Russian
Man, holding his hand.’ The Round Man now looks up from the file at
the car in front of them.
ROUND MAN
...bumped his head against the bed
ghd couldn’t get up in the morning..
fe clutches the file to his chest, so that we see the DEA INSIGNIA
on the front.
t3 (vO)
So these guys we looking for, they, be
ike real seven-thirty, or just like
thugs?
INT. LIBRARY ~ NIGHT
As TJ now sits at the microfiche machine beside Matt scrolling
Gway, TJ's jacket is now draped over the back of the chair. He
aeeys a skullie on his head and a wuwear T-shirt, an animated
character on the front that looks a lot like TJ.
MATT
Like real what?
Ta
Seven-thirty. Time they give out the
meds in the mental ward.
MATT
Ah, right. Seven-thirty. From the
Tatin mental, 1 don’t know. Just
keep on looking., To
Be easier, you go u
computer room,
MATT
Yeah, well,
googling.
TJ cuts a look at Matt.
TW
You five-oh?
MATT
Nope.
Tg
Cuz you got that look.
MATT
I work private.
Ty
Yeah? Like Sam Spade?
MATT
Yeah, just like him.
33.
stairs to the
google this shit.
T’m not really big on...
The Librarian looks over at them as they continue scrolling side~
by-side. After another moment...
To
What I'm sayin,
I've read about him.
And Marlowe, too. All them guys.
MATT
You spend much time in here?
To
Some. When it rains, I like the
sound it makes, you know?
Matt looks at the kid. Something more to him than meets the eye.
TJ stops scrolling, sits back and shakes his head.
Td
Huh. How ironical.
MATT
What’s that?
To
Dumpin’ an already dead body in a
cemetery.
INSERT - SCREEN
A black & white photograph of the huge, stone entrance to GREEN-
WOOD CEMETERY. Several NYPD blue
& whites parked out front.34,
Tg
Tuesday, the body of Leila Alvarez, 2
twenty-fear-old Interioz Design major
at Brooklyn College was found at
Green-Wood Cemetery.
QUICK CUT TO: A GARBAGE BIN
As a MAN in a tight t-shirt and pierced eyebrow lifts the lid to
Be oy away some old flowers, takes one look inside and SCREAMS. --
Ta (VO!
Alvarez had been missing two days
when Eduardo Solomon, a florist
Geross the street from the cemetery
found what was later identified as a
portion of the victim’s leg in the
Gumpster behind his shop...
QUICK CUT TO: THE CEMETERY
As the GROUNDSKEEPER, his back to us, wades out into the water with
AS ERE, reaches for THE POWDER BLUE GARBAGE BAGS that float on the
surface.
rd_(VO) :
That same day more human remains were
found in more garbage bags scattered
about the cemetery.
QUICK CUT TO: A STREET
As LEILA ALVAREZ gets into the back of a van, the DOOR SLAMS and we
Bee A MAN’S FACE in the window of one of the doors.
TI (vO
Witnesses say Alvarez was last, seen
getting into a grey van with three
men...
BACK TO THE LIBRARY
las Matt leans over and looks at the screen where we see © photo of
aS VAN standing out front of an apartment building, ap awnitg above
Ay Mhead reads “THE WINDSOR ARMS.” He’s surrounded Py cops--
MATT
‘Alvarez’ fiancée, Reuben Quintana,
told police that he and Leila were
SQppesed to meet for lunch, but she
never showed...
Tg
So what, I get a badge now?
MATT
Yeah, and a decoder ring.
tg watches as Matt now prints out the page35.
MATT
I’m gonna go get something to eat.
You want a hamburger or sémething?
Ts
I don’t eat meat.
MATT
Oh. Okay. Nice meeting you, TJ.
TJ watches as Matt gets his things together.
1
What I'm sayin, I don't care none
about cows, you know, I just care
about what’I put inside iy body. No
meat. No soda. No Pringles, None a
that shit.
Matt nods, grabs his coat, starts to go.
Tg
But... I was thinking about maybe
getting a Tittle eat on myself.
MATT
All right, So we can both get our...
eat on's together.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - NIGHT
As the Mercedes pulls into the driveway. The woman gets out of the
car, grabs a couple of grocery bags, and then leads the big DOG to
the front door.
As she goes inside, THE WHITE VAN cruises past the townhouse to the
end of the block, then makes a u-turn and doubles back, parking
across the street. A WHITE FACE appears in the driver's window.
INT. VAN - SAME
As the two men watch the house. We hear the crackle of the police
radio under the Round Man’s constant HUMMING.
The Tall Man behind the wheel works on a LOOP of PIANO WIRE. He
slips a wood handle on the bottom, looks through the loop at the
house... his face is framed by it.
He watches the woman THROUGH THE LOOP as she comes back out and
grabs a last grocery bag. He then pulls on the wood handle and the
loop CONSTRICTS TO NOTHING.
MATT (Vo)
Where do you sleep?
INT. "THE FLAME" COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT
TJ wolfs down a plate of pancakes. Matt, a cup of coffee in front
of him, watches him.the kid’s drawings are scattered all over the table.
he picks up a stub of a pencil and absently sketches
MATT
.,.those nights you can't hide in the
jibrary?
TW
1 got a bed over at Coyenant House.
this shelter over at Times Square.
MATT
What happened to your parents?
Ta
(beat)
You don't gotta feel sorry for me.
MATT
I don't.
Tg
Good.
Tg sits back in the booth now.
Ta
You could hire me, though, make me
your partner.
MATT
I don’t think so.
tg
Why not? You don’t think T got what
it’takes, be a good detective?
MATT
/m sure you do. I’m just not the
partner type.
Tg nods, goes back to eating, pauses...
1
what does it take to be a good
detective?
MATT
A strong bladder.
Tg
Come on.
MATT
t don't know what it takes. Takes 4
lot of things. Instincts. Patience.
Blind luck mostly.
1
And a good name. One with real
flavor. Like Sam Spade or Phillip
Marlowe.
36.
Periodically,
something.37.
MATT
What's wrong with the name you got?
TJ waves him off, looks out the window a moment, then...
Tw
I'm thinking something like maybe...
Daunte Culpepper.
MATT
Quarterback for Minnesota?
Tg
Yeah. It's a good detective name,
but a lame-ass name for a guy plays
football.
MATT
Daunte Culpepper.
Tg
Daunte Culpepper. Private Eye.
(then)
Yeah, I'm feelin' that.
WAITRESS
Sure you don't want a soda or
something, honey?
TJ looks up at her.
TI
J, kmow you'd just love to, get a young
black man like me to drink one o
our sperm killer sodas. But no
thank you, ma'am. “{'ll stick with
water.
TJ sees Matt looking at him and leans across the table.
To
They sell cheap sodas to low income
people, got these chemicals in ‘em.
terilize you. TI only drink water.
Gallon a day.” Keep myself hydrated.
MATT
And you don’t eat meat.
Tg
You got a problem with that?
MATT
Not at all. My ex-wife was a
vegetarian.
Tr
So_what happened? Why’d you split
up? She a Clucker?38.
MATT
A what?
Tr
A chicken. Only feels cats give her
nice rings and shit. You ain't bling
blingin, you ain't nothin’.
MATT
(beat)
can’t you fucking speak English?
vs
E.pit a nerve. Sorry. What time is
t?
MATT
Almost ten.
tg
Shit, I gotta go. Covenant House
closés at ten...
73 shoves his drawings into his backpack.
Ty
Thanks for the pancakes.
And he bolts out of there. Matt watches him go, then looks to the
anSle where TJ LEFT SOME OF HIS DRAWINGS. Matt picks one up...
INSERT - DRAWING
A mythological figure with a cape, holding raised sword, a half
nook be sickile-shaped symbol on his chest. It’s a beautiful
Teehering. The eyes on the figure are intense and intelligent.
Like TJ's.
EXT. MEETING ROOM - A WINDOW - NIGHT
hooking in through a rain-streaked window. An AA MEETING: | Matt
oem ne S oundtable. We hear HIS VOICE just over the rain...
MATT
[ was off duty one day in this bar in
flashington Heights where cops didn’t
have to pay for their drinks...
CUT TO: A SHOT GLASS
As it’s set down hard next to a cup off a coffee.
cut TO: MATT (NOW)
As he continues with his story.--
MATT
--when a couple guys came in to rob
the place.39.
CUT TO: TIGHT ON MATT (THEN)
As we hear a GUNSHOT and Matt turns with a jerk and we...
CUT BACK TO: MATT (NOW)
As he recites by rote:
MATT
L,chaged them into the street, shot
As we hear TWO MORE GUNSHOTS just as we...
CUT TO: THE BONNEVILLE (THEN)
As the DRIVER’s head snaps back and we immediately...
CUT BACK TO: MATT (NOW)
MATT
Caught a third one in the leg.
CUT TO: THE ALLEY (THEN)
As Matt kicks the third banger in his wounded thigh. He cries out
as we then...
CUT BACK TO: MATT (Now)
Pensive a moment.
MATT
He’ ll never walk right again.
CUT TO: THE ALLEY (THEN)
As Matt cuffs the Banger and we hear THE WOMAN SCREAM OS and this
time, instead of ignoring it as he did the first time we saw this
scene, he turns and looks that way, to the mouth of the alley now
once Qgain washed out in WHITE LIGhT. .
MATT (vO)
I quit drinking that day.
CUT BACK TO: MATT (NOW)
As he looks at his rapt audience, then...
MATT
It just... wasn’t as much.
after that.
fun
He says the same line he did in the opening meeting, but says it
differently this time. Not so much humor in it.
EXT. FOURTH AVENUE - BROOKLYN - DAY
As Matt comes up from the subway, starts up Twenty-fifth Street.
The sky is greying over, threatening rain.40.
suddenly, Matt turns around and we see someone kly duck into a
Suddenty: Methind him. Matt waits a moment, then turns back and
resumes walking.
EXT. GREEN-WOOD CEMETERY - DAY
As Matt walks up the driveway and passes through the huge iron and
AS na'gates.. The place has an odd, yet imposing majesty that only
an old graveyard can provide
Matt stands at the top of one of the hills, looking over the wall
wort ne gratue of Liberty beyond. He looks down at the small lake
at the base of the hill, surrounded by old crypts and markers.
fle hear the SOUND OF THE MOWER and see the GROUNDSKEEPER ride up
over the rise towards us.
ON THE GROUNDSKEEPER
ls he leans to one side then the other as he steers the mower in
As she saad the markers when he sees Matt standing in his way and
atops just shy of him. He’s a little man in his thirties with a
Stringy goatee and long hair pulled back in a ponytail.
MATT
James Loogan?
GROUNDSKEEPER/LOOGAN
Yes?
MATT
You're the gardener here?
LOOGAN
I'm the Groundskeeper, can I help
you?
MATT
I'm Matthew Scudder.
Matt takes out his Retired Badge and quickly shows it to the man on
the mower. Loogan looks at the badge, shuts off the mower
LOOGAN
Wow, that was fast.
(gets off the
mower) on
public Affairs lady at the 77°" said
it would be at least a week before
Anyone got back to me.
MATT
Excuse me?
LOOGAN
I really want the book to have an
authentic feel, you know?
MATT
Book. ..?41.
LOOGAN
That's why this ride along’s_so
important to me, you know? "spend
some real time with real cops
Matt just looks at him. Loogan’s smile goes away. He realizes
he’s been talking to the wrong person. An embarrassed anger
replaces his earlier enthusiasm. The flip of a switch. And now
LOOGAN
What do you want?
MATT
I was wondering if I could talk to
you about Leila Alvarez.
LOOGAN
Who?
MATT
The woman they found over here.
‘LOOGAN
I don’t know anything about that.
MATT
Your boss tells me you were here the
day they found her.
Now uncomfortable, he turns away, scans the darkening horizon
LOOGAN
You spoke to Larry?
MATT
Yeah.
‘LOOGAN
Because my boss is Gretchen. Okay?
And now Loogan starts to walk away from him.
MATT
Oh, boy. I messed up. You’re too
smart for me, James. Damn...
(then)
Think you can you help me anyway?
LOOGAN
(beat)
I already told everything I know to
the police.
MATT
Eduardo, guy ovns the shop across the
street, says there were about twenty
garbage bags over here. That true?
LOOGAN
Well, Eduardo was wrong. There were
only’ about ten. And most of those42.
LOQGAN {CONTD) |
were on the Fifth Avenue side. There
were two more floating in the pond
down there...
MATT
So you saw them?
LOOGAN
No, I saw the pigeon first.
He turns and looks out at the LAKE.
LOOGAN
I keep a coop on my roof, and this
was a gay. And if was Alone which -
ow
~ if you anything at all about
grays -- is quite unusual for the
breed.
QUICK CUT TO: THE CEMETERY
[As we see two POWDER BLUE GARBAGE BAGS floating in the small pond
in the middle of the cemetery. A bird lands atop one of them,
tries to get inside...
LOOGAN (VO)
Anyway, the bird was sitting on one
of the’ bags.
oogan wades into the water with a rake, reaches for the bags...
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
He stares at the now pristine pond
LOOGAN
I fished them both out after I was
done with the mowing and threw ‘em
away.
MATT
You didn’t open them?
LOOGAN.
I figured it was all just some
waterlogged trash kids had thrown in
there the night before. They do
that, you know, throw their rubbers
or thelr empties into the pond
MATT
You see cops across the street?
LOOGAN
Yeah, but I didn’t make the
connéction until Vince came running
over from the Fifth Avenue entrance.
MATT
vince?43.
He's the other groundskeeper He's
the one found the bags over there.
MATT
Is Vince around? I'd like to talk to
him.
LOOGAN
He quit.
(then)
He opened one of the bags.
The guy looks at Matt, then at the water, as if something was still
floating out there.
LOOGAN
I was just starting to forget about
her. Thank you so much for bringing
it all back.
MATT
What's your book about?
Loogan looks at him...
LOOGAN
Please. Don’t patronize me
Matt watches the guy, visibly upset now, climb back on his tractor
and ride off, then disappear back down the hill.
EXT, PUB - MIDTOWN - DAY
As Matt goes inside.
INT. PUB - DAY
Matt hangs up his coat on a rack, takes the place in. Lots of cops
and lawyers. He stares into the back, takes a deep breath walks to
where...
Det. JOANNE DURKIN -- forties, dark suit, her hair pulled back --
sits at a table, in the middle of cleaning up a spilled drink. She
picks up a ruined sandwich, a soggy report..
MATT (0S)
Nothing important, I hope.
She looks up, sees Matt standing there. She finally smiles.
indicates the wet sheet of paper
go
I was just reading about today’s dead
Dominican drug dealer when the whole
soda goes right over...
MATT
Probably a sperm killer anyway44.
MATT (CONTD
(looks at her)
Not that it matters I guess...
(to the waitress)
Just coffee, please.
He sits down across from her and looks around. A lot of guys are
looking his way, trying to place him.
MATT
You got your gold shield.
Jo
Three years ago.
MATT
Too bad. You looked good in uniform
go
Like you noticed.
MATT
I noticed.
JO
You didn’t do anything about it.
MATT
Yeah, well, I was a fucking idiot.
JO
Yes, you were. You were a fucking
idiot with a wife and two sons.
He shrugs as the waitress sets down his coffee.
Rey
What are you doing here, Matt?
MATT
I had the urge to commit a felony
JO.
1 know the feeling. | There's hardly 2
day goes by that {don't get the urge
myself. Haye you got any particular
felony in mind?
MATT
I was thinking of a Class D --
Something like Two Hundred Point Zero
Zero of the Criminal Code.
Jo
Bribery in the third degree.
MATT
That's the one.45,
JO
Huh. You sure you wouldn't prefer to
violate Section Two Hundred Point
Zero Three?
MATT
What's that?
go
Bribery in the second degree, It's
the same as your Class D, only for
Bribery two the gift you'confer's in
excess of ten thousand dollars.
MATT
I think class D is my limit. say
dinner, somewhere nicer than here.
You could wear your old uniform.
Jo
(beat)
I’m married now. Three years.
MATT
(beat)
You happy?
JO
On occasion.
MATT
Good for you.
And he means it. He takes a drink of his coffee, then:
MATT
Three months ago, in Queens, two men
grab a woman named Marie Gotteskind
Off Jamaica Avenue and sprinkle her
all over a vacant lot a week later.
Jo looks picks up from her sandwich.
MATT
Six months ago -- in Brooklyn this
time -- a woman named Leila Alvarez
gets grabbed off the street by three
men. Two days later, she was found
bumping into herself’ in a pond in
Green-Wood Cemetery.
JO
I’m gonna guess that by such colorful
yet Coy phrases as ‘sprinkled her’
and ‘bumping into herself’. you mean
to say that these women were found in
a less than whole condition?
MATT
You're eating. We don’t have to get
into that much detail right now.46.
JO
Aren’t you sweet.
MATT
I'd love to see the murder book on
Gotteskind, see what background the
one-twelve’ developed.
JO
I’m sure you would.
Jo looks around the pub a moment.
JO
what's your interest in this?
MATT
I can't say.
go
Well, Jesus Christ, Matthew. You
sure do want it al{ flowing in one
direction, don't you?
MATT
(beat)
I have a client whose wife got taken
off the street by a couple guys in a
van.
go
He report it?
MATT
No.
Jo
Why not?
MATT
(beat)
He's in the country illegally
Jo
So what? Half the city's in the
country illegally.
Matt doesn't say anything. Jo studies Matt a moment, sighs
She looks
JO
The wife come back dead?
MATT
Among other things.
at him a moment.
go
You really stop drinking?a7.
MATT
So far. You really married?
She ignores him, takes out her pad.
JO.
How do you spell “Gotteskind?”
EXT. GREEN-WOOD CEMETERY - AFTERNOON
As James Loogan walks out of the big stone gates, his lunchbox in
one hand, an umbrella in the other. He comes down the driveway,
starts off down Fourth Avenue. A moment later
MATT STEPS INTO FRAME and starts to follow. As Matt walks past a
storefront window, we see the reflection of someone stepping from
the doorway next door and start following him.
EXT. BROOKLYN STREET - AFTERNOON
As Loogan crosses the street. Matt hangs back a block, walks on
the other side. We PAN to another block or so back and see the
FIGURE still follows behind Matt.
EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - BROOKLYN - AFTERNOON
As Loogan enters the old, eight-story building on the corner. Matt
steps to the corner now and watches Loogan go inside.
Matt then walks past the building and ducks into an alley. A
moment later, a HOODED FIGURE hurries past. Matt grabs the figure
by the hood and yanks him into the alley, revealing TJ’s startled
face buried in the jacket...
TJ
Yo, Matt, what the dealie?
MATT
Hello, TJ.
1
I been shadowing you.
MATT
No kidding.
He makes a big show of taking out a notebook, one just like Matt's,
and starting to rea
Tg
“I followed subject back from dinner
to a meeting at some church.”
(looks up)
You used to drink some, huh?
MATT
Only on days ended with a “y”
TJ nods, turns back to his notebook...48.
Ts
YT then followed subjegt back to, some
shitty ass hotel on 57™ where subject
remained until--*
MATT
I know where I was, TJ.
Ta
You made me at that flower shop,
didn’t you?
MATT
I made you back at the subway.
To
Damn. This book I'm reading says a
foot tail's hard to do on account of
they're s0 easy to spot.
MATT
That they are.
Tg
They say it’s better to use three
guys, two alternating behind, another
guy on the other side of the street.
MATT
Be good, you had three guys.
ty
You use e lotta payphones.
MAT?
So?
Ts
So you don’t got no cell?
MATT
I don’t like them.
To
Don’t like computers. Don’t like
cell phones. Fuckin Amish got more
flavor than you do, Matthew.
Matt turns away, looks at Loogan’s building.
Tg
I was watching you follow this guy.
You didn’t try to hide or nothin’.
MATT
He wasn’t looking for me.
We TILT UP as Matt looks up at Loogan’s building a moment.
Ta
it's funny, me following you while
you're following this other dude...49.
And now we PAN OVER as Matt turns and watches as a DOG WALKER walks
A DOZEN DOGS into the apartment ACROSS from Loogan’s building.
MATT
Uh-huh. It’s real...
And now Matt takes a step towards this other building...
MATT
Ironical.
Matt takes a SLIP OF PAPER from his coat and looks at it, then
looks up as the dog walker leads the animals inside the building
opposite Loogan’s. An AWNING above the door, On the awning are
two things: an address, and the name of the buildin:
“WINDSOR ARMS”
Matt looks down at the photograph he printed out at the library.
Leila Alvarez’ fiancée, Reuben Quintana, talking to reporters.
Rbove him is the same awning we now look at -- “WINDSOR ARMS.”
MATT
TI?
We then PAN BACK TO LOOGAN’S BUILDING as Matt steps away and looks
up. One building facing the other across a narrow street.
TJ
Yeah?
Matt turns and looks back at the kid.
MATT
Stop following me.
And now Matt heads for the Windsor Arms, pocketing the page as he
goes.
INT. BUILDING - DAY
As a MAN, Latino, handsome, in sweats, out of breath, opens his
door to the chain. A tiny yip of a DOG tries to bolt into the
hallway.
MAN
(holds him back
with his foot)
Mookie-- no!
(then)
I help you with something?
MATT
Reuben Quintana?
The man watches as Matt quickly flashes his “retired” badge.50.
MATT
My name is Matt Scudder. I was
wondering if I could talk to you
about your fiancée?
REUBEN
Fiancée? Oh, Leila... Uh, I kinda
have this other place I have to be...
MATT
I just need a minute.
‘The guy considers, then nods, shuts the door, removes the chain and
opens it up again and steps aside.
REUBEN
Okay.
INT. QUINTANA’S APARTMENT - DAY
Matt follows Reuben into the open space, begins appraising the nice
surroundings. An open kitchen. A huge stereo system. A PLASMA TV
hanging on the wall.
REUBEN
I get you something to drink?
MATT
No, thank you.
Matt looks at the huge, home gym set-up in one corner ~~ also first
class -- as Reuben turns off the treadmill, grabs a bottle of Evian
from the Subzero, takes a drink
MATT
Must be nice, have the time to go for
a jog in the middle of the day.
REUBEN
I'd rather be working.
(announcing)
I’m an actor.
MATT
Yeah, I thought you looked familiar,
Have I seen anything you’ve been in?
REUBEN
I did a Stetson commercial, ran on
that all sports channel.
MATT
(looking around)
Stetson-- the hat?
REUBEN
The cologne.
MATT
Oh...51.
REUBEN
Ran during the Stanley Cup finals a
few years ago.
MATT
Huh. Missed that one.
Matt watches as Reuben fills the dog’s water dish from the bottle
of Evian.
MATT
Leila went to Brooklyn College, is
that right? Studied decorating?
REUBEN
Interior Design.
MATT
Right
Matt moves to the window now, looks at the other building, the one
Loogan just walked into.
MATT
You know a man named James Loogan?
Works at Green-Wood cemetery?
REUBEN
No. Never heard of him.
Matt nods, thoughtful, he turns away from the window
MATT
You saw the men who took Leila?
REUBEN
Yeah, there were three of them.
MATT
You're sure?
REUBEN
Iwas there. I was right across the
street, at this coffee place Leila
was supposed to meet me at...
INT, COFFEE HOUSE - DAY
As Reuben looks out the window as LEILA ALVAREZ starts to cross the
street. A GREY VAN pulls to the curb...
REUBEN (VO)
I look out the window, see her start
to cross the street when two guys get
gut of a van and say something to
er.
MATT (vO)
What'd they look like?52.
REUBEN (VO)
I couldn't really see their faces
They were holding clipboards. One
was tall. Really tall. Like taller
than the’ van...
They say something to Leila and she walks around to the back of the
van with them. Reuben bolts for the door..
REUBEN (VO)
Next thing I know, she’s getting into
the back of the van with them...
EXT. COFFEE HOUSE - DAY
As Reuben shoves his way through several customers trying to get
into the coffee house. He makes it out the door onto the street
just as the van rounds the corner, He stands there horrified..
REUBEN (VO)
That was the last time I saw her.
INT. REUBEN’S APARTMENT - DAY
Matt nods, turns and looks around the apartment, takes in the
expensive stereo, flat screen TV, the appliances, furniture
MATT.
This is a nice place. Lots of nice
stuff...
Matt looks at the coffee table, its surface is full of SCRATCHES
MATT |
Leila do the design?
REUBEN
Yeah. You should see the bedroom
(then)
Wait, that didn’t sound right--
MATT
You don’t deal, do you, Reuben?
Matt turns and looks at Reuben, something on his mind now
REUBEN
What?
MATT
You heard me.
REUBEN
You asking, am I drug dealer?
MATT
Unless you prefer trafficker. Or
maybe you wanna tell me you made the
fifty G pedaling cologne on ESPN.53.
REUBEN
I’ve got a trust fund.
MATT
From your rich family up in the
Bronx.
REUBEN
My mother won a lawsuit a few years
ago.
MATT
Hey, come on, Reuben, not even the
dog's dumb ehough to’ buy that one.
The guy looks pissed, but doesn’t have quite what he needs to take
a swing at Matt. Matt knows this, stays where he is.
MATT
Look, T don’t care how you earn your
living. But the guys who grabbed
Leila?’ They might have.
REUBEN
How do you mean?
But now Matt sees LOOGAN leave the building across the street.
Matt quickly heads for the door, leaving a perplexed Reuben to
stupidly stare after him.
MATT
Thanks for your time.
EXT. LOOGAN’S BUILDING - DAY
As an OLD WOMAN unlocks the front door with her key, starts to go
in.
MATT (OS)
Let me hold that for you...
And now we see Matt right behind her, smiling.
OLD WOMAN
Thank you.
INT. ENTRANCE HALLWAY - SAME
As Matt moves to the mailboxes, starts looking at them. He sees
the name LOOGAN on one of them.
INT. STAIRWELL - SAME
As Matt climbs the stairs, stops at a floor...
INT. HALLWAY - SAME
As Matt moves to an apartment door and listens. It’s quiet inside.
He tries the knob, but of course the door is locked.54.
WOMAN’ S VOICE
That you, James?
Matt quickly backs away from the door, moves down the hall for the
stairwell.
EXT. ROOF - DAY
As Matt comes out of the stairwell onto the roof. He walks to a
COOP and stares inside, a dozen birds stupidly staring back at him.
He then moves to the edge of the roof, looks down at the apartment
building across the way, the height advantage providing an Al view
down into Reuben Quintana’s place. He watches Reuben, on the phone
now, pace back and forth.
EXT. STREET - SAME
As Loogan heads to the corner. We hear a bit of THUNDER and he
looks up at the darkening sky. He starts to go then stops cold
when HE SEES SOMEONE UP ON THE ROOF OF HIS BUILDING.
EXT. ROOF - SAME
As Matt turns away from the edge and looks around, sees A SHED on
the far side of the roof. Matt walks over to it and sees the door
fs PADLOCKED. Matt gives a shove, rips the latch from the rotted
wood, and opens the door.
INT. SHED - SAME
As Matt stands in the doorway, RAIN PELTS THE METAL ROOF. He looks
at the bags of BIRDSEED, some TOOLS, and some OLD BOOKS that sit on
top of a sagging COT. Matt examines the books, all of them
PSYCHOLOGY TEXTBOOKS.
A CARD TABLE is set up in a corner with a folding chair. AN OLD
TYPEWRITER sits on the table. Matt rolls the sheet of paper out of
it and reads:
MATT
...he carried her through the field,
thé dandelions and cattails still wet
with the morning dew, and set her
down by a stream, whispering through
the strands of her fine, yellow hair,
“You're safe now. You're safe.”
(then)
Jesus...
Matt turns and moves the junk from the stained mattress, lifts it
up. He stands there, staring at a few dozen POLAROIDS spread out
across the springs. He picks one up and sees...
heila Alavarez. Getting dressed by the window. Another shows
eila sunbathing on the roof. In another she brushes her hair. In
another one she and Reuben, both naked, embrace on the bed.55.
JAMES LOOGAN appears in the doorway behind him and THE RAIN STOPS
PINGING THE ROOF OF THE SHED. Matt senses something, turns...
MATT
James...
Matt turns all the way around, the photos in his hands, and faces
Loogan. Stays calm.
MATT
You caught me.
Loogan says nothing, looks at the overturned mattress.
MATT
You gave the cops a different
addréss, didn’t you? That's why they
Hever put you across the street from
Leila.
LOOGAN
(beat)
This is my mother’s building. I live
in Sunset Park, but I’m not allowed
to keep my birds there... even though
there’s room on the roof.
MATT
Your mom home right now? Maybe we
could go down and talk, have a cup of
coffee.
LOOGAN
I can’t let you leave here.
And now we see A KNIFE in his hand.
LOOGAN
They’ 11 kill me if I do.
MATT
Who's “they”, James?
LOOGAN
The other two.
Loogan starts to come forward. Matt looks at the knife.
MATT
So what, you gonna stab me now, with
that knife?
LOOGAN
It's gonna bother me, too, For a
long time. I know it will...
MATT
How much is it gonna bother you, T
take that knife away, stick it in
your neck?56.
LOOGAN
(beat)
Could you really do that?
MATT
Yes, I really could, James.
(then)
But I/d rather not.
Loogan looks at Matt, believes him. Matt holds out the photos.
MATT
How ‘bout instead we trade?
LOOGAN
Okay.
Loogan bends at the knees and sets the knife down on the roof
Mate steps on the blade before handing Loogan the pictures. He
stares at them.
LOOGAN
what was it I said, gave me away?
MATT
Everything. You're a weirdo, James
But then, you were probably better
prepared for the real cops, having
Seen them all morning across the
street at the flower shop
Loogan looks at Matt.
LOOGAN
I never laid a hand on Leila. But
The other two — they’re the one’s you
better worry about.
MATT
What other two?
LOOGAN
They’re not human. Tt‘s not just
they’ ve got a lot of hostility toward
women, it’s the superiority, the
randiosity about it that scares me
eople like that, down deep, they
really feel inadequate, have to take
it all out on other people.
MATT
You've done some reading.
LOOGAN
Research.
MATT
How'd you meet them?57.
Loogan turns away, reaches into one of the coops, strokes one of
his birds with a finger.
LOOGAN
There’s this video store near my
house, They have this basement where
they keep some of their more...
specialized stuff. I go there
sometimes for--
MATT
--research, I know, You saw them
there?
CUT TO: A BASEMENT “VIDEO STORE”
Light floods around high windows blocked off with brown paper. MEN
avoid eye contact with each other as they browse the metal racks
full of underground videotapes.
LOOGAN (VO)
They always came in together.
We hear a DOOR OPEN and TWO FIGURES start down the wooden steps.
Their faces are barred in the shadow of the stairwell.
LOOGAN (VO)
I called them Laurel and Hardy on
account of one was tall and the other
one was short and round.
BACK TO SCENE:
As Matt takes out his notebook.
MATT
Can you be any more specific than
that?
LOOGAN
Well, the one guy was like really
tall. Taller than you...
CUT TO: THE BASEMENT “VIDEO STORE”
As the tall one emerges into the dim light...
LOOGAN (VO)
Like near seven feet with pale skin.
Bnd he had eyes that were dark, like
a bug.
And now the other one emerges a few steps behind the first...
LOOGAN, (VO)
And the other one had scars on his
face, little ones, like he had bad
acne when he was & kid.
BACK TO SCENE:
As Loogan sits down on a stool near the coop, looks at his birds.58.
MATT
What about names?
LOOGAN
You don’t exchange names in places
like that, not réal ones anyway
(then)
They loved that I worked in a
cemetery. They thought that was
funny.” They wanted to buy me
drinks
CUT TO: A BAR
‘A dark shit hole. A BURST OF LAUGHTER comes from the back where
Loogan and the other two sit at one of the three rickety tables
LOOGAN (VO)
So we went to this bar, the middle of
the day, drank Rum and’ Coke, talked
about the different videos we liked.
Another ugly burst of laughter. Loogan looks uncomfortable
LOOGAN (VO)
It was all one big laugh to, thems
watching all the drug addicts fuck
each other.
BACK TO SCENE:
As Matt looks up at Loogan.
MATT
what do you mean, drug addicts?
LOOGAN
They didn’t do drugs, but, they were
like obsessed with that whole world
dealers, addicts, the different kinds
of drugs... They told me they worked
with the DEA.
MATT
They were cops?
CUT TO: A HAND RADIO
Clippéd to a belt.
LOOGAN (VO)
They had a police radio. One of,
those handheld units. And they had
all these files on drug dealers, with
DEA stamps on them.
WIDEN SO THAT WE CAN SEE:
It's clipped to the round man’s belt. He’s showing Loogan a bunch
of file folders that he’s spread open on the table...LOOGAN (YO)
He said they worked for the DEA on
special assignments...
BACK TO SCENE:
MATT
You told them about Reuben?
LOOGAN
No, I told them about Leila, about
how I was gonna save her From
Reuben...
QUICK CUT TO: ROOF POV INTO REUBEN’S APARTMENT - DAY
As Reuben cuts a bunch of COKE on the coffee table. Leila waiting
on the couch, in her underwear.
LOOGAN (VQ)
§o we came up here and watched them
for a while.
BACK TO SCENE:
He looks off towards their building.
LOOGAN
They really liked her. They said
they wanted to help her, too.
MATT
So you followed her.
(Loogan nods)
You picked her up off the street.
(another nod)
Then what?
Loogan turns to Matt. He looks lost.
LOOGAN,
We drove around with her...
QUICK CUT TO: THE BACK OF THE VAN
More laughter. Ray, the round man, is laughing at something 0S. A
bit of jerky movement in the back.
LOOGAN (VO)
In this van they have. Got this
mattress in the back, all covered up
with plastic.
Loogan is at the wheel, glancing back. He sees the girl's face...
she looks up at him, pleading with her eyes, her mouth duct-taped
shut
LOOGAN (VO)
She was really scared.BACK TO SCENE:
As Loogan stokes one of the birds through the bars, with
60.
a long
finger...
LOOGAN
They loved that. They kept talking
to her, kept asking her how much
money her fiancée had. They thought
he was rich.
MATT
why?
LOOGAN
Her engagement ring. They were all
into iE," They wanted it.” But when
they cut it off...
MATT
Cut the ring off?
LOOGAN
Her finger.
fie hear A WOMAN SCREAM OVER as we now...
CUT TO: THE LOOP OF WIRE
As it’s held up, flashing in the light...
LOOGAN (VO)
That’s when I got out of there.
Suddenly one of the DOORS opens and light
can see LOOGAN running away from the van,
disappearing into the bright, white light
BACK TO SCENE:
As Loogan moves back to Matt...
LOOGAN
floods into the van.
his fleeing form
of the day as we go.
Wwe
We were somewhere in Brooklyn and T
just jumped out and ran.
two days later...
Loogan looks out at the city.
LOOGAN
I think the
come to worl
everywhere.
‘Bnd then,
‘thought it’d be funny, I
see the garbage bags
They knew I’d never say
anything.
MATT
Where was this video place, you met
these two?
LOOGAN
It moves around a lot. Back then, it
was in Flatbush.61.
MATT
How do I get in?
LOOGAN
They have to know you.
MATT
What if you come with me?
Loogan looks at Matt. He seems so sad now. Finally...
LOOGAN
can I feed my birds first?
Matt nods, watches as Loogan reaches into a bag of seed, pulls out
a plastic cup full of seed and starts walking to the coop.
LOOGAN
(quiet)
Ray.
MATT
What was that?
LOOGAN
That was his name.
MATT
Which one? The fat-~
Matt stops talking as James Loogan calmly walks off the edge of the
roof and drops from sight. We hear TIRES SCREECHING ON THE STREET
BELOW. Followed a moment later by A WOMAN’S SCREAM
EXT. BUILDING - DUSK
As Matt comes down the front steps and starts off down the street
away from the CROWD that now gathers around something that nobody
wants to see, but all of them look at it anyway
Matt gets to the corner, stops and looks back at the crowd. We
hear a WOMAN SCREAM and...
CUT TO: THE ALLEY (FLASHBACK
As Matt cuffs the banger and, this time, starts walking towards the
mouth of the alley, the light less washed out now as we see the
chaos out on the street...
MATT (VO)
I stopped drinking that day...
INT. AA MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt stands at the microphone...
MATT
It just wasn’t much fun after that.62.
No one laughs. There’s no humor in the statement this time. He
puts the microphone down and walks out of the meeting.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - EARLY MORNING
The MERCEDES is parked out front. The ground is wet from the rain
the night before. We see the WOMAN come out in her coat, start
down the walk...
WIDEN TO REVEAL: OUR POV IS INSIDE THE VAN
As the two Mutt ‘n’ Jeff figures in the front seat watch her. We
can see their breath as the shorter consults a DEA FILE in his lap
He looks at the PHOTOGRAPH of the bald man in Russia holding hands
with the woman, HER FACE BLURRED...
The Round Man looks up, watches as the woman bends down to pick up
the paper, then turns and goes back into the house. He sees that
she wears WHITE TENNIS SHOES. He reaches for the door..
ROUND MAN
I’1l be right back.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - SAME
[As Ray moves through the shadows at the side of the house. He
approaches a WINDOW, peers inside
THE ROUND MAN’S POV - INSIDE THE HOUSE
‘A BALD MAN sits down at the kitchen table with a glass of juice.
Tt’s the “Russian Man” from the file. A DOG lies at his feet.
In comes the woman now who hands the newspaper to the man who nods
then takes off her coat and we see she wears A NURSE’S UNIFORM
beneath it. She moves off down the hall, her white tennis shoes
squeaking on the wood floor...
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - SAME
The Round Man climbs atop a meter, wipes the rain away and peers in
through another window at...
A BEDROOM
Where we see ANOTHER WOMAN lying in the bed, her long hair fanned
on the pillow, her arms limp at her sides. She stares blankly at
the ceiling.
THIS is the woman from the file, the one the Russian Man was
holding hands with.
And now the Nurse comes into this room, puts some eye drops into
the prone woman's eyes, then sets about fluffing the pillows..63.
INT. VAN - MORNING
As the Round Man comes in, shuts the door, sits there a moment. He
looks at the file, at the woman with the man in Moscow. He
chuckles.
ROUND MAN
I wonder, you think he’d pay as much
for the hurse?
The Tall Man turns to him, The Round Man sighs.
ROUND MAN
It seems we/ve made a mistake.
(closes the file)
Let’s go.
The Tall Man starts the engine. Ray shakes his head, then watches
as the front door opens again, we see THE DOG come out attached to
an extension leash. He starts down the steps. And now we see an
arm holding the leash inside a RED SLICKER.
ROUND MAN
Wait--
And now we see A FIGURE in the hooded slicker holding the leash as
the figure comes out after the dog and starts down the walk. And
as the figure walks by the front of the van, the hood falls and we
see the face of A FOURTEEN-YEAR-OLD GIRL beneath it.
Her father comes out of the house a moment later in his own coat,
and together they walk the dog. The two men watch them go..
ROUND MAN
(smiles, sings)
Hey there, lonely girl... don’t you
know this’ lonely boy loves you...
INT. KENNY KRISTO’S HOUSE - MORNING
The house is now squeaky clean. All of the old photographs of
Carrie are off the walls. There’s no sign at all that she even
lived there. Several stacks of moving cartons line one wall. Matt
watches as Kenny shoves some of Carrie’s clothing into another
box...
KENNY
They worked for the fucking DEA?
MATT
Probably not for very long and almost
certainly not as agents.
Kenny nods, purposefully starts to seal up the box.
KENNY
Then what were they?64.
MATT
1 don’t know. Maybe they used them
as confidential informants... or
maybe they were office help
Whatever they were, they wouldn’t
have gone very far or lasted very
long.
KENNY
Why not?
MATT
Because they’re insane.
KENNY
But they managed to get their hands
on some files. One of which had my
name in it.
Kenny looks at Matt.
KENNY
And if my name’s in a DEA file, that
means I’m being looked at.
MATT
Or you were at one time
Kenny thinks for a moment.
This gets
MATT
you know a Lot of people, do what you
io’
KENNY,
it’s not like we have a_union or
anything, but I know a few, why?
MATT
I want you to call them up and tell
them what happened to Carrie. Tell
them you! ve red-"
KENNY
Jesus, Matt, if word gets out about
Carrié-- the cops are gonna be all--
MATT
They've done it before.
Kenny looking at him.
MATT
And they're gonna do it again, But
this time I wanna know about it.
KENNY
What do I say?65.
MATT
(starts for the
door)
You'll think of something.
Kenny shakes his head, stares at the all of the boxes.
KENNY
I could have paid them.
Matt pauses, turns back. “What?”
KENNY
I had the whole million, It was our
nest egg. You know, the money I was
gonna use to get out.
He looks up at Matt now, laughs bitterly.
KENNY
It was our future, And I didn’t
wanna give it to them. Now how
fucking stupid is that?
Matt watches as Kenny goes back to automatically shoving clothes
into boxes, like a robot.
MATT
She was already dead.
Kenny looks at him.
MATT
And if she wasn't, they would have
killed her anyway.
(turns to go)
call your friends...
EXT. BAY RIDGE AVENUE - DAY
As Matt walks to the SUBWAY, he passes A WHITE VAN parked at the
curb, the name VILLAGE PLUMBING stenciled on the side, the windows
in front all smoked so that we can’t see inside.
EXT. SUBWAY ENTRANCE - DAY
As Matt starts down the stairs, the WHITE VAN drives past. Matt
then comes back up a step and watches the van turn the corner.
CUT TO: INSERT OF NEWSPAPER PHOTO
The vacant lot where Marie Gotteskind was found. Two narrow
buildings on either side of it. We now...
TILT UP TO REVEAL: THE ACTUAL SITE - QUEENS
As Matt stands across the street, clocking the neighborhood. Most
of the storefronts are boarded up around here. The area’s dying a
slow death. Except for...66.
...a Bodega. A small Spanish grocery that seems to be quite busy
Bédple go in and out of it. Matt watches a group of teenagers go
inside, then crosses to it.
OWNER (VO)
Gotteskind?
INT. BODEGA - QUEENS - DAY
As the SHOP OWNER, a burly, bearded Hispanic man, works behind a
shabby deli counter cutting meat.
OWNER
I just knew her as Marie.
We hear the door CHIME and a young KID comes in, walks past Matt
who leans on the counter.
OWNER
Jacinto. My man.
The kid says something in Spanish and the owner points him to the
fridge in the back.
OWNER
You know where it is. Second fridge
over.
Matt watches the kid head to the back, The place is full of
people. The group of teenagers talk to A MAN -- Latin, neat
§oatee, all tattooed and stoved up, in the back of the place
MATT
She live around here?
OWNER
She worked around here.
MATT
Where?
And now the guy looks at Matt, smiles.
OWNER
On the corner.
(to the kid)
No, no, your mama likes the one
percent, not the two.
MATT
She was a dealer?
OWNER
Shhh.
The owner gestures to the kid who takes the carton of MILK back to
the fridge and exchanges it for another. Matt watches as the kids
walk out of the store, the owner eyeing them, then the man in the
back who nods, disappears into a door marked PRIVATE67.
OWNER
She worked out of a crib not too far
from here.
He smiles as the kid puts a CARTON OF MILK on the counter.
OWNER
Two dollars even.
He takes some money from him, then hands him a couple lollipops.
OWNER
Make sure you give the other one to
your brother. “And tell your mana
ello for me:
He waits for the kid to walk out, then turns to Matt.
OWNER
Around the block, there’s this old
building...
EXT. DECREPIT BUILDING - DAY
A vacuum repair place downstairs. The other storefront is boarded
up, full of GRAFFITI.
OWNER (VO)
Vacuum repair on the ground, a few
rooms upstairs...
Matt crosses to the building, goes into a door in between the two
retail spaces.
INT. STAIRWELL ~ SAME
Full of trash. More graffiti. Holes punched in the walls, Matt
now quietly goes right on up as if he’s been up hundreds of these
shitty stairwells in his lifetime. Which, of course, he has.
INT. UPSTAIRS ROOMS - SAME
Abandoned. Walls are buckled. Ceilings hang down. No one lives
up here. No one could. WE FOLLOW MATT into the front room. A
window.
Matt moves to it, looks down at the BODEGA across the street.
Something’s bothering him.
And now we see A FIGURE reflected in the glass behind Matt. Matt
turne around and is immediately hit across the face with a BOARD,
Matt goes down and the figure hits him again. Matt’s knocked to
the floor. He looks up at the big tattooed MAN from the Bodega...
MAN
Hola.
The man kicks Matt in the face and Matt goes down. And now we hear
FOOTSTEPS.68.
Matt looks to the doorway, sees the BODEGA OWNER, still in his
apron, now gain the top of the steps and calmly walk into the room.
OWNER
Alright, tell me, cocksucker, right
now, what do you’want with Marie G?
And now the other man has come out with Matt’s wallet followed by
his RETIRED BADGE.
OWNER
You on the job, fucker?
MATT
Retired.
OWNER
Who you working for? The family?
(throws the badge
at Matt)
Shit. When you guys gonna Jeave it
Alone? Huh? We didn’t do it, okay?
MATT
Okay.
OWNER
you think we’d chop up 2 cop, leave
her on our own fucking doorstep?
Matt looks at him.
MATT
A cop...
OWNER
My son’s a fucking moron, but he’s
not an idiot.
The other man tries to protest that last remark in Spanish, but the
owner shushes him.
MATT
Marie was a cop?
The owner stands up, considers Matt, realizes he’s made a mistake
OWNER
Who are you?
MATT
I’m not after you... or your son.
want the guys who killed Marie.
The other man, rants in Spanish, then pokes his own chest.
MAN
If I don’t kill them first.
Matt looks at him.69.
MATT
You dealing outta the store?
OWNER
(glares at his son)
Not anymore.
MATT
But Marie was working you?
OWNER
Working him?
(laughs)
Fucking moron wanted to marry her.
EXT. BUILDING - DAY
As Matt staggers out of the building, looks up at the windows...
INT. AA MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt sits in the back, beaten up, drinking coffee. Other people
keep stealing looks at him. And while the room is generally full,
the chairs on either side of him remain vacant. Matt stares off,
pensive. When we hear...
VOICE
My name is Peter. Im an alcoholic
addict.
(then)
And I have one day back.
Matt turns and looks as now a very shaky-looking Peter Kristo
stands at the microphone.
EVERYONE
Hello, Peter.
EXT. MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt walks with Peter down the street.
PETER
I slipped.
MATT
It happens.
He shakes his head, cuts a look at Matt.
PETER
Funny thing is, I didn’t even start
using until Twas twenty-eight. Up
until then, I'd never even’ smoked a
joint. Even when I was overseas and
alf my unit was on one thing or
another.70.
Matt looks around the dark street, sees a quick glimpse of A WHITE
VAN moving through the intersection behind them. Hard to tell if
it's the same one.
MATT
(watching it)
You were in the army?
PETER
Germany, then Desert Storm. I come
ome, "go back tovscheol) me and Kenn’
start dealing. You know, just enoug!
to get by.
Matt turns to Peter now.
MATT
You were doing it with him?
PETER
Back then, yeah.
(shakes his head)
1,dq it Eo pay for art school and
wind up getting hooked on the fucking
product and drop out. Meanwhile,
Kenny-- he stays in the business,
Starts making a fortune while I'm
eating garbage, sleeping in abandoned
buildings, until one night I nearly
blow my fucking heart outta my mouth
up in Harlem.
Peter laughs bitterly, then blows into his cold hands.
MATT
Where you gonna go now?
PETER
I got this job as a bread maker
Te’s night work, but I figure I keep
busy at night, Sleep during the day
Tii get in léss trouble.
Matt nods.
PETER
Anyway, I/1l see you around.
Matt stands there watching as Peter heads off down the street
rubbing his cold hands together, his posture sad and stooped
Just beyond Peter, we see the WHITE VAN pull to the curb across the
street. Matt looks at the PHONE NUMBER stenciled on the side
Matt turns and walks to a payphone, watches the van as he dials the
number, gets a recording telling him the number’s not in service
Matt inserts another coinne
MATT
I'd like the number for Village
Plumbing.
(then)
I assume it’s in the Village.
(then)
Try Brooklyn.
(then)
Try all the boroughs.
(then)
Thank you.
Matt hangs up, watches as the van now disappears around the
EXT. MATT'S HOTEL - NIGHT
An AMBULANCE is parked out front. Matt hears SOMEONE COUGH
sees TJ leaning against the back of it. TJ looks at Matt’s
face.
To
What happened to you?
MATT
I bumped into something.
TJ nods, can’t stop coughing, reaches into his backpack for
bottle of water which is when Matt sees the handle of A GUN
inside.
MATT
You okay?
Tw
I’m fine....
He takes a long drink of water.
MATT
What you got there in your backpack?
To
Just my notebook, some twizzlers,
unless you talking about my
pencils...
MATT
No, I'm talking about the black
Betetta 9 with the taped grip, you got
tucked beside your water bottle.
Tg looks at Matt, moves back into the doorway, then reaches
his backpack and pulls out a black 9mm.
Tg,
You mean, this? My new jammy?
corner.
and
bruised
nestled
into
Matt looks at the boy now casually holding the gun in his hand like
it’s a frisbee. Matt keeps his voice calm, leads TJ over between
two buildings. He looks at the pistol, nods...12,
MATT
That's a nice one. What’re you
planning on doing with it?
Ts
tt's for protection. I’m gonna be a
detective, I’m gonna need a piece.
MATT
Uh huh, where’d you get it?
1
im taking_a nap in this alley, 1
hear some footsteps, see this kid I
know works as a lookout for some
baliers, I see him drop this bag in a
dumpster, then split.
MATT
You stole someone’s stash?
TJ
IT left the money and the rock where
it was.
MATT
They’ re gonna come back for the
piece.
10,
Nab, they, ip the wind, Matthew. Cops
clipped their ass.
Tg turns away to cough and Matt considers him a moment, then..
MATT
You know how to use that?
TW
(gimme a break)
shit
MATT
Point it at me, like your gonna shoot
me.
TJ looks at him.
MATT
Go ahead.
pg hesitates, then holds it up, points it at Matt, but keeps it
sideways the way the gangbangers all think is so cool.
MATT
That the way you hold a gun?
Ww
That's the way I hold it, yeah.73.
MATT
You know how to jack the clip? Empty
it? Clean it?
Matt reaches out and quick as a flash takes the gun from him and
pops the clip, snicks out the bullets one by one into his palm.
MATT
But the gun’s still not empty. You
know that, right? You know there's
still 2 round’ left in the chamber
ere...
He opens the breach and shows TJ the last round. No, TJ didn’t
know that. Matt then hands him the clip and the bullets.
MATT
Now put it back together.
Tg takes the gun, puts the bullets back in the clip, replaces the
clip, looks up at Matt and smiles.
MATT
Caress it. Rub it. Like it’s part
of you.
TJ rubs the gun, nods, likes the feel.
MATT
Feels good, doesn’t it?
tT
It’s all oily...
MATT
Turn off the safety.
(TJ does)
Now cock it...
TJ racks the slide, looks up at Matt.
MATT
Now put it to your temple and pull
the fucking trigger.
Ta
What?
MATT
You heard me. Shoot yourself in the
head.
TJ just stands there looking at Matt.
MATT
Might as well get it over with now,
because you walk around with a gun,
sooner or later, it’s gonna happen’
anyway.
And now TJ stares at the gun in his hand.74,
MATT
No rewind. No going out for popcorn
and then coming back to the show.
{t's just you with that gun in your
hand,-a stupid look on your face and
your’hash all over the wall.
TI
You don’t ever carry?
MATT
No.., anybody’s gonna shoot me
they're gonna have to bring their own
gun. You take it easy now, TJ.
And with that, Matt turns and crosses to his hotel. He starts to
go in, then stops, sighs, turns and goes back to where TJ stood a
moment earlier. But the kid is now gone
INT. MATT’S HOTEL - LOBBY - NIGHT
As Matt walks to the desk. Howie, the desk clerk, pulls down a
message.
HOWIE
Jo Durkle’s waiting for you next
door.
MATT
Durkin.
HOWIE
No, look, I wrote it down.
He holds out the slip for Matt to see, but Matt just looks back at
the moron. We hear A CHIME as the elevator arrives, then...
VOICE
Coming through...
Matt turns as two AMBULANCE ATTENDANTS wheel an ELDERLY WOMAN off
the elevator. Howie shakes his head as they pass...
HOWIE,
They’ re dropping like flies.
Matt then moves across the lobby and looks into the BAR adjoining
We see JO DURKIN sitting at a table in the back.
INT. BAR - NIGHT
As Matt walks over to Jo. She’s got a beer in front of her
go
You know, this may very well be the
shittiest hotel bar I’ve ever been
in.
MATT
You're lucky it’s open.15.
MATT (CONTD)
(sits down)
They get, the early office crowd
during the week, but don’t even
bother to open up on the weekends.
Matt signals to the bartender.
She waits
MATT
One of those places, it’s basically a
bar in the neighborhood without being
a neighborhood bar.
JO,
Huh, yeah, well, we can talk about
the’ sociology of taverns later.
Meantime, I see that you've been
busy.
(re: his
appearance)
Who did you beat up?
MATT
More the other way round.
as the bartender sets a coke down in front of Matt.
MATT
Thanks.
Jo
Friend of mine, Brooklyn South, tells
ne that a guy hamed, James Loogan took
a header offa building out there.
MATT.
Wow, that’s too bad.
Jo
Just so happens building was across
the street from where Leila Alvarez
used to live.
MATT
You’ re kidding?
JO
No, I’m not. It also turns out this
Loogan was a gardener at Green-Wood
Cemetery, the same place Alvarez’s
body got’ dumped.
MATT
Groundskeeper.
Jo
What’s that?
MATT
He was the groundskeeper, not the
gardener.16.
Re)
Yeah, well, now he’s plant food.
MATT
The great circle of life.
go
Of course, you, don’t happen to have
any idea why the man killed himself?
MATT
I’m guessing he was depressed.
Re)
Yeah, that’s what the note said
MATT
There you go.
JO
one line. Typewritten.
MATT
sounds pretty open and shut to me.
JO
A typewritten suicide note? You
don’t find that a little bit unusual?
MATT
Maybe he couldn’t find a pen.
JO
They dust the machine, I wonder whose
rints they’re gonna find on the
eys?
MATT
Probably nobody's.
go
That's what I thought you'd say
(then)
What happened, Matt?
MATT
Guy walked off the roof.
go
Matt--
MATT
Loogan didn’t kill anybody
JO
If he was some kind of material
witness, or in any other way
involved...
MATT
Marie Gotteskind was a cop. That's
why there was no background on her.le
Jo
Actually she was DEA, on loan to
Narcotits.
Matt looks at her.
MATT
You looked at the book?
JO
I talked to the cop at the one-twelve
who caught it. She was killed in her
apartment, then dumped.
Matt thinks about that for a moment.
Jo
Apparently, Marie was rather good
undercover. Deserved a fucking SAG
card from what I hear. But fuck her
for the moment.
(then)
What’re you doing, Matt?
MATT
I’m trying to find these guys.
go
And how are, you doing that? Outside
of getting the shit kicked outta you
and helping guys walk off rooftops?
She considers him, then leans in close.
JO
It ever occur to you, Matt, that you
may have stopped Grihking, ‘but you’ re
still not sober?
MATT
I’m not looking to make any kind of
problem. I just want to find these
guys.
0
why? a
MATT
Because it'll feel good.
JO.
To what, get them off the board? or
' shoot it out with them in the middle
of the street?
She shakes her head, lays some money on the table.
JO.
You can’t say Dallas doesn’t love
you.78.
MATT
What?
go
Nellie Coneliy, in the car on the big
day, says to JFK, “Mr. President, you
can't say Dallas doesn’t love you.”
She stands up now and looks at Matt.
JO
Things never happen the way you think
they will. P :
INT. A BASEMENT - DAY
As A TALL FIGURE vacuums the floor with a shop vac. The place is
neat and orderly. A lawn chair is tucked under a ping-pong table
that’s used as a desk.
The figure shuts off the vacuum and coils the cord and puts it away
in a metal cupboard. He grabs some WOODWORKING TOOLS and a roll of
DUCT TAPE off the ping-pong-table-desk and shoves them both into @
DUFFLE BAG.
He wipes down a LOOP OF WIRE with a chamois, then throws it into
the duffle along with several KNIVES
He moves to a wall of cabinets and slides a MATTRESS out from
pehind it. He pulls into the center of the room and lets it fall
onto the ground. He then takes some 3 mil PLASTIC and begins to
wrap it up.
VOICE
Albert?
He shuts off the light and we then follow him up the wooden stairs.
Through a door into...
A BRIGHT KITCHEN
Where he returns the knife to a wooden block. The other man, the
shorter and rounder one, stands at the old stove cooking an
omelette.
ROUND MAN
You can sit down now.
The Tall Man washes his hands at the sink, dries his hands on a
hand towel and neatly replaces it while the Round Man puts the eggs
on a plate.
The Tall Man goes to the fridge, grabs a pitcher of low acid orange
juice and sits down at a table, already set for two. The Round Man
serves them both.
ROUND MAN
There’s toast if you want it.79,
The two of them tuck into their breakfast. All the while, SUNLIGHT
continues to stream into the spotless kitchen. Outside we can hear
A CHURCHBELL and the sounds of CHILDREN PLAYING NEARBY.
INT. MATT’S ROOM - MORNING
Matt pours himself a cup of coffee, wipes down the counter. The
place is already spotless. He sits down at the table, stares at
the muted television set. THE PHONE RINGS.
MATT
Hello?
BOY'S VOICE (PHONE)
Dad?
MATT
(sits up)
Michael-- hi... what’s-- what’s up?
MICHAEL (PHONE)
I realized there were a couple things
I needed to ask you.
MATT
Oh... okay.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Mom says, when you_were a Cop, you...
did some’things. Is that true?
MATT
Some things...?
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Like did you beat people up?
MATT
(beat)
Yes.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
You ever shoot anybody?
MATT
Yes.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
You ever kill anybody?
MATT
Yes.
More silence on the other end. Then...
MICHAEL (PHONE)
You know step 8, the one about making
amends?
MATT
Sure. I know it.80.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Did you do that? Make amends?
MATT
(beat)
To those T could.
MICHBEL, (PHONE)
Okay. I guess that’s all I wanted to
say-~ oh-- wait-- Uh...
(then)
I got accepted at Tulane. You know,
where Grandpa went?
MATT
You’ re kidding. Congratulations.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Yeah, I got a scholarship.
MATT
Football?
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Baseball.
shit. Matt winces, shuts his eyes.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
You know, if you're ever down in New
Orleans,’ maybe you could, you know,
look me’ up.
And now Matt opens them.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
We could go to a meeting together.
MATT
sure. That sounds great.
Matt stands, suddenly not at all sure of his emotional footing.
MATT
Listen, I gotta get going...
MICHAEL (PHONE)
Yeah, me, too.
MATT
You take it easy, Michael.
MICHAEL (PHONE)
You too, Dad.
Matt hangs up, stares at the television for a moment, then moves to
the window and looks out at the city. He looks down, sees TJ down
on the street below, shifting from foot to foot, looking up at him.81.
EXT. MATT’S HOTEL - DAY
As Matt walks out of the building, looks to where TJ stands waiting
and stops cold, Matt quickly turns and walks the other way. As TJ
calls after hin.
1g
I don’t have the gun no more!
...we now see what Matt just saw: the grille of THE WHITE VAN
Gruising up the street barely half a block behind TJ
And we now understand that Matt didn’t want whoever’s inside to
connect him to the kid. Matt turns and disappears up an alley.
EXT. ALLEY ~ SAME
As we see the van stop and now A MAN -- in a flannel shirt and work
boots -- gets out. Other than the dark glasses, we can’t see his
face. Matt looks back, then bolts up an alley as the guy takes off
after him.
EXT. STREET - DAY
As Matt comes out of the alley and picks up his pace. People give
him room as he checks the doorways and storefronts for a good place
to wait.
Up ahead he sees A MAILMAN come out of a building and start up the
sidewalk. Matt runs up the step, stops the door before it closes
then ducks inside as FLANNEL SHIRT exits the alley now...
INT. LOBBY - SAME
As Matt steps to one side of the door, A CRACKED WINDOW in the
upper half. He then takes off his jacket and starts to wrap it
around his fist when A FACE PRESSES AGAINST THE GLASS, the dark
glasses still covering the eyes.
Flannel Shirt tries the door, but finds it locked. He moves away
just as Matt quickly steps out from beside the door, all ready to
Swing at the face in the glass that was there a second ago. Now
realizing the guy’s moved on, Matt steps back to one side of the
door, TAPS LOUDLY ON THE GLASS
The FACE REAPPEARS and Matt once more steps out and this time nails
him one right through the window...
EXT. SIDEWALK - SAME
As Flannel Shirt is knocked on his ass down the steps. Matt comes
through the door after him, unwrapping his fist as he comes. Nose
broken, brain rattled, the guy struggles onto all fours when Matt
kicks him back down to the cement.
The WHITE VAN comes to a screaming halt at the curb just as Matt
pulls Flannel Shirt’s gun from his waistband and points it at the82.
gentleman in the sweatshirt who jumps out of the van, his own gun
leveled right back at Matt...
SWEATSHIRT
Scudder, I'm gonna assume you’ re not
dumb enough to shoot a federal
agent...
MAT?
Show me a fucking shield-- right now.
SWEATSHIRT
Okay. I'm reaching for my folder. .
He pulls out a badge folder, flips it open for Matt to see.
SWEATSHIRT
Stover. Drug Enforcement. Okay?
suddenly A GUN is jammed into Matt's ear... then another is in his
face as two more FEDS arrive on scene, out of breath from running
Stover takes the gun from Matt, hands it to Flannel shirt who
glances at the other feds...
STOVER
Put him in the van.
INT. VAN - DAY
Chock-full of SURVEILLANCE EQUIPMENT. Matt's now cuffed, jammed in
between a couple big guys. Flannel Shirt wipes the blood from his
nose...
FLANNEL SHIRT
Great-- it’s broken...
MATT
Next time identify yourself.
he guy looks at Matt.
FLANNEL SHIRT
Hey, maybe we should pull over, try
again, this time without the sucker
punch, See how well you do
MATT
Why wait?
The guy makes a move for Matt but is shoved back into the side of
the van by another agent.
STOVER
That's enough.
Matt and the Flannel Shirt glare at each other across the space.
Stover looks at Matt’s Retired badge
STOVER
Who you working for? Kenny Kristo?83.
MATT
I can’t say.
STOVER
Cut it out, Scudder, you’re not
licensed, so you don’t have
privilege. And this--
(tosses Matt his
“retired” badge)
=-gives you about as much legal
authority as a fuckin mailman. So
the sooner you tell me what you're
doing hanging with known drug
dealers, the sooner you can get to an
AA meeting and not talk about it.
MATT
I’m trying to find Ray and his buddy,
what’s-his-name, the real tall one?
Matt looks at Stover.
MATT
You know, the two guys, killed Marie
Gotteskind?
They all look back at him.
STOVER
I don’t know who you mean.
MATT |
Really? They're going around saying
they! re on the, DEA payroll. | Usually
' right before they chop someone into
little pieces.
STOVER
You keep shaking that tree, Scudder
all you’re gonna get is a face fulla
bird shit.
MATT
That’s a swell metaphor, but I think
you know who Tim talking about. Was
otteskind looking at Kenny?
STOVER
I can’t answer that, but maybe Mrs.
Kristo can.
Matt looks at him.
STOVER
Although, we haven’t seen her around
for awhile. Have we guys?
And Stover snaps his finger.84.
STOVER
Hey, I know, maybe you should go talk
to the brother, Peter. Seeing as she
used to spend 4 lotta time over
there
Matt takes that in as Stover looks at the other agents.
STOVER
You know what? I was wrong. This
guy doesn’t know a fucking thing
Stover bangs hard and loud on the wall behind the driver
STOVER
We're done here.
EXT, STREET - DAY
As Matt stands there, rubbing his wrists, watching the van pull
away. When he finally turns, we see his face is tense, getting
angrier by the minute.
EXT, PETER KRISTO’S APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
As Peter crosses the street to the shitty building. He looks dead
His eyes are red; his face, wan and cheerless. His clothing looks
like it’s all been run over. He enters the building, trips on the
first step, goes down and cuts his lip.
INT. PETER’S ROOM - DAY
Kind of place with a hotplate instead of a kitchen. Peter comes
in, right away takes a packet of smack from his pocket and starts
to’ put together a fix. He doesn’t notice Matt sitting there in the
ragged armchair. Matt watches him a long moment, then...
MATT (0S)
In the program, they have this
saying.
Peter jumps out of his skin.
PETER
Scudder. Jesus-~
_ MATT
Don’t give up five minutes before the
miracle happens.
Peter stands there frozen. He really needs to finish what he’s
just started.
MATT
Of course, the flip side of that one
isco if you do give up, you'll never
now.
PETER
What are you doing here?85.
MATT.
Admiring your wallpaper.
Matt gets up out of the chair now, and moves to a wall full of
DRAWINGS. All are of Carrie.
PETER
Those are studies I did for the
painting.
In one, she’s nude, looking back at us over her shoulder.
MATT
You do them all here?
PETER
We had to. She wanted it to be a
surprise for Kenny.
MATT
And was he?
(looks at Peter)
Surprised?
PETER
What do you want?
Matt looks at the drawings.
MATT
You and Carrie put the DEA onto your
brother, didn’t you?
Peter stares at the works spread out on the counter.
MATT
I wouldn’t blame you for hating the
guy. I mean, it’s not just that he
has a beautiful wife, and it’s not
just that he’s got all that money
while you WOEK some get well job
making donuts. What would really get
me is how he can be around all that
junk and never use.
PETER
(beat)
Carrie had nothing to do with it.
Peter sits down, sets his works on the table in front of him.
PETER
About nine months ago, they go to
i Bermuda for their anniversary
Carrie asks me to watch the house.
He shakes his head, stares at the tabletop86.
PETER
I’m there maybe a day, I find some
cash Kenny hadn't locked up. Right
Sway, 1 don’t even think about it, T
go to Queens, to this guy I know to
Score...
MATT
And you get busted.
Peter nods, takes a moment, then:
PETER
raget put ings Foon with this woman
DEA agent. She’s so nice to me..
(then)
I give up Kenny like that.
MATT
Of course it didn’t hurt that you
were in love with his wife.
PETER
You know, sometimes I think he left
that money out on purpose.
MATT
Yeah, I’m sure that’s what he did.
T’m sure this is all exactly what he
wanted to happen.
PETER
What do you mean?
MATT
That agent who busted you? The nice
one? She was killed by the same two
men who got Carrie.
PETER
How did they know about--
MATT.
They stole her files.
peter sits there a moment, letting the implications of what Matt
has just said sink in.
PETER
Oh, God...
suddenly Peter wipes the paraphernalia off the table with his arm.
He sits there, his head in his hands and starts to shake. Matt
starts for the door...
MATT
Tell your brother I’m done.
Peter looks up.87.
MATT
Ill return his money tomorrow.
PETER
Does Kenny know? About me...
MATT
Not unless you tell him.
And Matt walks out. Peter waits a moment, then gets down on his
hands and knees and starts picking his shit up off the floor.
EXT. TIME SQUARE - NIGHT
As TJ walks along wearing new boots. The icy WIND picks up and
RAIN starts to fall.
[A BLACK LINCOLN NAVIGATOR pulls to the curb and TWO BALLERS jump
out and now fall in step behind TJ.
BALLER #1
Yo, son, those new timbos?
Td keeps walking.
BALLER #1
Yo, son, I'm talkin to you...
TJ stops, turns around and looks at the trouble that now stands a
few feet away on the sidewalk. One of them now opens A KNIFE and
they shove TJ into the dark space between two stores.
BALLER #1
You got somethin’, doesn’t belong to
you.
EXT. WASHINGTON HEIGHTS - NIGHT
As Matt crosses to the bar we saw in the opening, He peers into
the window. The place is nicer, more a quaint “tavern” now. In
fact the entire neighborhood has changed. Matt turns away..
EXT. TIME SQUARE ~ NIGHT
As the other baller steps up, puts the knife under TJ’s chin.
BALLER #1
You got my jammie, son. My favorite
piece.
To
I don’t got it no more
in the fucking river
I threw it
The two thugs look at him, take him down to the ground, and tear
into his backpack. They dump out bags of dried fruit, sunflower
seeds, bottles of water.88.
BALLER #2
Fuckin Sierra sprout ass
motherfucker...
EXT. WASHINGTON HEIGHTS - NIGHT
As Matt sits down on a bus stop bench. Across the street, we see A
aR. A police sedan, It seems to be the only thing LIT UP. Two
men sit inside it. One of them is Matt...
EXT, TIME SQUARE - NIGHT
As baller #1 yanks pages of TJ’s drawings from the backpack and
lets them scatter in the wind.
BALLER #1
What’s all this cartoon shit?
But then the kid finds some cash, looks at TJ.
BALLER #1
Yo, son, where you get this loot?
He grabs TJ by the collar...
BALLER #1
You sold my fuckin jammie!
BALLER 42
I’m gonna take them Timbos...
They move to pull TJ's boots off. TJ kicks #2 in the face---
BALLER #2
Motherfucker!
EXT, STREET - ACROSS FROM THE ALLEYWAY ~ NIGHT
As the kids kick TJ over and over, then run off into the night.
EXT. WASHINGTON HEIGHTS - NIGHT
ag Matt stares at the car across the street. We move towards it
now.. +
ORTIZ (VO)
You need some help, man...
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR - MORNING
our opening shot. Matt’s old partner, ORTIZ, behind the wheel-
Matt looking out the window at the bar across the street.
ORTIZ
[ don’t care, you wanna mess up your
own shit, but you gonna mess up mine,
too. I need to know cia gonna watch
my back, not come fallin’ through the
door behind me.
Matt says nothing.89.
oRTIZ
Anyway.
(shrugs)
That’s all I'm saying.
Matt then turns and looks at Ortiz.
MATT
Fuck you.
As Matt starts to get out of the car:
oRTIZ
Manana.
JUMP CUT TO: THE STREET
[As Matt gets out of the car, kicks the door closed and we...
JUMP CUT TO: THE BAR
As seen now from across the street, Matt running outside and firing
off shots into the Bonneville...
JUMP CUT TO: THE ALLEY
From inside the alley this time as the banger is blown off his
feet, starts crawling. Matt appears at the mouth of the alley.
JUMP CUT TO: A WOMAN
As she SCREAMS and we...
CUT BACK TO: THE BENCH - NIGHT
As Matt sits there a moment, staring into the street. He then gets
up and walks away...
INT. MIDTOWN NORTH - DETECTIVES ROOM - NIGHT
Quiet. Matt and Jo Durkin are the only two in here. They both
have cups of coffee in front of them. She looks at her notebook.
Jo
So the brother, Peter, he just stays
sober, doesn’t try to’score, none of
this éver happens. Right?
MATT
I guess not.
go
And he was clean how long before he
gets popped in Queens?
MATT
Almost two years.90.
go
You'd think he could make it that
long, he could make it forever.
MATT
A day's the most anyone can make it.
She considers him a moment as he slides his chair back.
MATT
Watch yourself, Jo.
(gets up)
These guys might even be tougher than
you are.
She smiles, watches him turn to go.
JO
You did good work, Matthew. Just
like the old days.
MATT
I notice you didn’t say the good old
days.
And now she smiles at him.
JO
They weren't so bad.
EXT, COVENANT HOUSE - NIGHT
It’s POURING RAIN now as TJ, in his socks, his face cut and
bleeding, stands at the entrance, a two-hundred plus pound TRUSTEE
(a homeless person who works there) mans the door.
TRUSTEE,
You just missed curfew, son.
Tg
Fine, I'll sleep on the floor.
TRUSTEE
(closing the door)
You know the rules, doors close at
ten.
Ta
Look, I can’t be out in the rain, I
can’t get wet...
‘TRUSTEE,
What are you, like ‘fuckin Broom
Hilda? You gonna melt you get wet?
‘The guy shuts the door in TJ's face. TJ looks up at the pouring
rain, hurries across the street to a PAYPHONE. He fumbles in his
pockets for change. Starts to dial, but he starts coughing so hard
now, he has to double over.91.
INT. MATI’S HOTEL - NIGHT
Howie sleeps with his head on the desk. Matt comes in bangs the
BELL and nearly launches the clerk out of his chair.
MATT
Any messages?
HOWIE
Uh-- JR called.
Matt looks at him, gets on the elevator.
MATT
13?
HOWIE
Whatever.
MATT
He leave a message?
HOWIE
Uh, let me think...
(then)
Oh, yeah. He's at Bellevue.
Matt stops the doors with his foot.
INT. BELLVUE ER - DAY
[As Matt comes through the doors. He sees TJ sitting in a plastic
chair, shivering.
MATT.
What happened? Who did this?
He looks at Matt, his teeth chattering, but he can’t speak, A MALE
NURSE comes over with some hot towels and begins to drape them over
TJ's legs..
MALE NURSE
Here you go, sport.
MATT
What's with the towels?
MALE NURSE
Said he had some pain in his legs.
Looks like someone threw him a good
beating.
MATT
Why's he shaking so bad?
MALE NURSE
Detox.
MATT
what?92.
Matt looks at TJ who has trouble focusing on Matt now.
MALE NURSE
He comes in, first thing he asks for
some demoral or a phentinol patch
MATT
80?
MALE NURSE,
The junkies ali do that, come in
here, think they can get free
morphine.
MATT
Look... nurse... the kid’s not an
addict: Hell, he won't even drink a
can of soda.
MALE NURSE
I'm sorry, and you are?
MATT
Right now I'm the one telling you to
go get a fucking doctor over here
Now.
MALE NURSE
He’s underage, and he won’t tell me
who his parents are. By law I have
to call Social Services. Let them
decide what to do with him. Now if
you'll excuse me...
MATT
Hey--
He turns to walk away, Matt grabs the guy and pulls him back by his
white coat.
MATT
You don’t wanna walk away from me.
CUT 10: A CURTAIN BEING PULLED BACK
As a young DOCTOR turns and faces Matt
DOCTOR
He got worked over pretty good, but
he was also out in the rain. fither
one could have triggered the crisis.
MATT
Crisis?
DOCTOR
He's a Sickler.
(then)
He's got Sickle Cell Anemia.
Matt looks at the curtain.93.
DOCTOR
You didn't know that?
MATT
No.
DOCTOR
Oh, Well, a sickler gets a cold or a
chill, anything that makes a normal
person’s blood cell ‘count go up ~~
anytine the body gets ready to fight
Something, the red blood cells panic
take on a sickle shape... actually
creates a jam in the arteries, the
blood gets really thick. Suddenly
you're not getting any oxygen...
Matt looks at the curtain...
MATT
What're you doing for him?
DOCTOR
Well, when the blood gets thick like
that, it can be pretty painful so
we're hydrating him to help thin it
out, giving him demoral for the pain.
He knew the drill, got in here early
enough, so I don't think it'll go on
for too long.
Matt nods and then moves behind the curtain, takes in TJ lying
there in the bed. TJ turns and looks at him standing there.
Ta
Don’t feel sorry for me.
MATT
I don’t
Tg
How long I gotta be here?
MATT
Depends on well you behave.
TJ looks at Matt.
To
y.mom gaid one time T got, special
blood, that I can never get Malaria.
MATT
Really.
TI
That’s how Sickle Cell got started
In Africa. As a defense against
Malaria.
MATT
Where is your mother, TJ?4.
To
Why aren't you a cop no more?
MATT
(beat)
You first.
Tg shrugs, looks up and says to the ceiling:
Ts
I had a crisis one time, I was about
eleven. She took me to’ the hospital,
but never showed up to check me out.
T guess she thought if she left me
there, they’d put me with a nice
family. Little did she know, 1 saw
her a few times on the street after
that, but that was a while ago.
(then)
I guess she had some issues.
He turns and looks at Matt.
Tw
Your turn.
MATT
I was off duty one night in the
summer. I was in a bar in Washington
Heights where cops didn’t have to pay
for their drinks.
Ts
Wait a minute--
MATT
Two kids held up the place. On their
way out they shot the bartender in
thé heart. 1 chased them out into
the street and shot one dead and
Gaught the other one in the thigh.
Tu.
I heard this already--
MATT
No, you didn't.
(then)
See, one shot, well, the bullet took
a bad hop ...
EXT. THE ALLEY - DAY
As Matt gets to the mouth of the alley, sees the crowd standing
there, the WOMAN SCREAMING, cradling a limp body in her arm, a
single tiny SHOE on the ground at her feet. Matt drops his gun.
MATT (VO)
It hit a seven-year-old girl in the
eye, killed her instantly.95.
Matt drops down beside the woman who now rocks the girl back and
forth. Matt tries to see the child, but the woman pulls away
MATT
Ma‘ am-—
INT. HOSPITAL - DAY
As TJ looks at Matt...
MATT
An inch higher and it would have
grazed her head, left a nasty scar,
that's all.
To
And so they quit your ass? After you
took on three bangers by yourself? I
don’t know anybody that tight.
MATT
Tight?
Td
Brave.
MATT
I wasn’t brave. I was just drunk.
TJ stares at him. Takes Matt's hand. Matt looks at the kid.
MATT
Don’t feel sorry for me.
Tg
I don’t.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - NIGHT
As the rain comes down hard now.
INT. GIRL'S ROOM - SAME
As the Girl reads on her bed, the dog at the foot. The NURSE
sticks her head into the room, says something in RUSSIAN.
GIRL
Okay.
EXT, TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - NIGHT
As the NURSE comes out of the house in her raincoat, gets into the
Mercedes and pulls out, drives past the WHITE VAN.
INT. VAN - SAME
The sound of A POLICE RADIO, The two figures inside. The tall one
reaches for the door, but the Round One holds him back...
THE ROUND ONE
In a minute.96.
INT. BELLEVUE - NIGHT
As TJ quietly slips out of bed, keeping an eye out so that nobody
sees him. The rain pounds the window as he starts to put on his
ripped clothes when he sees a SHOPPING BAG beside the bed
Scribbled in pen on the side of the bag is: "TO: D. CULPEPPER, PI."
PJ opens it and takes out some NEW TIMBERLANDS, A PAIR OF JEANS.
WU-WEAR T-SHIRT and a CELLPHONE,
INT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - MOTHER’S BEDROOM - NIGHT
As the young girl, the DOG behind her, comes into the room. She
leans over and drops some EYEDROPS into her mother’s open eyes,
then sits down beside her mother’s bed and starts to read. The dog
lays down at her feet.
A moment of just the rain on the roof, and then THE DOG BEGINS TO
GROWL. He gets up and leaves the room..
GIRL
Watson?
And now we hear THE DOG BARKING LIKE MAD. And then a loud ZAP!
Followed by silence.
GIRL
Watson?
She gets up and we follow her into...
THE OTHER ROOM
[As she moves to the front hall, stops cold when she sees the DOG
LYING ON THE FLOOR, shaking. The door is AJAR. She gasps, runs
back to her mother’s bedroom, stops cold as...
The Tall Man appears in the doorway, soaking wet. Before she can
scream, he holds out THE STUN GUN and fires a taser at her.
As the Tall Man bends down to pick her up, we see the Round Man
sitting by the bed looking at the girl’s mother. He drops some
drops into her eyes, then leans over and whispers in her ear...
ROUND MAN
You don’t know how lucky you are.
INT, KENNY KRISTO’S HOUSE - DAY
[As Matt pushes open the door. The place is quiet.
MATT
Hello? Anybody home?
Matt pulls out an envelope full of cash that Kenny had given him
and tosses it onto the coffee table. He turns to go when..97.
PETER (0S)
Where have you been?
Matt sees Peter come out of the kitchen, stringy hair in his tired
eyes. The man looks shaky.
PETER
We’ ve been trying to call you...
MATT
Where’s Kenny?
PETER
Brighton Beach, with a friend, says
he’s having the same kind a problem
Kenny had.
MATT
His wife?
PETER
Worse.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - DAY
As Matt follows Peter to the entrance where two thick bodied
RUSSIANS in tweed jackets and caps immediately brace them.
PETER
It’s okay... This is Mr. Scudder.
Mr. Landau’ s expecting us.
INT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH ~ DAY
Where Kenny stands with YURI LANDAU, a big man, broad in the chest
with a face straight off one of those Socialist Realist murals of
the idealized worker. This is the Russian man of Ray’s DEA file.
YURI
Where the fuck am I going to get a
million dollars?
He stops, turns as Matt and Peter step into the room.
YURI
You’ re the detective.
MATT
Matthew Scudder.
yuri catches sight of the big guy who came up with them.
YURI
Dani, that’s a good boy. | Go back
down’ to the lobby and keep an eye
out.
(then)
Now I post guards. The horse is
stolen, so I lock the barn, For
what? ‘What can they take from me
now? She's fourteen-years-old...98.
And now we see the woman from the Mercedes come into the room
It's clear she's been crying all day.
YURI
This is Anna, the nurse.
Matt nods to her. She can barely look at him. She rubs the back
of the dog, looks away. Matt looks at A PHOTOGRAPH OF THE GIRL.
He stares at it as Yuri goes on..
YORI
They took her last night, Call us
this morning, tell us not to call the
police. 1 remember Kenny calling me
lp the other day, put two and two
together-~
Matt stands there. This is the last place he wants to be. Sucked
back into something he just walked away from
MATT
Mr. Landau, listen, you have to know
that -- I’m sorry “~ what's your
daughter’s name?
YURI
Ludmilla. But she calls herself
Lucia.
MATT
You have to know that the men who
took Lucia have already killed at
Teast two women in addition to
Kenny’s wife.
Matt lets that sink in, then...
MATT
As things stand, they haven’t got the
slightest intention of releasing your
daughter alive.
Yuri looks at him, horrified.
MATT
In fact, there’s a strong possibility
that shé’s already dead.
YORT
No...
MATT
The police know about these two
They know who they are, what they're
doing.
Kenny looks at Matt.99.
YURI
No. No police. You have to help me
Kenny said you would... 1/11 pay you
T’ll do whatever you ask. Please
Matt tries hard not to look at that photograph of the girl. Matt
looks at all of them, looking back at him. Now the PHONE RINGS.
And RINGS AGAIN. Yuri picks it up. Matt stands there, listens
YURI
Hello. Yes. Yes. I understand..
(then)
Please. I want to talk to my
daughter. You've got to let me talk
to her. I/1l give you whatever you
want...
Matt watches the man, sees the pain in his eyes as he pleads for
his daughter. Suddenly, Matt takes the phone from Yuri
MATT
I hope the girl’s alive, asshole
‘The nurse gasps at Matt’s tone. Matt keeps Yuri away from him
Silence on the other end. Then...
VOICE
Who the fuck are you?
MATT
I’m the best chance you've got, you
wanna ‘get, your money. | But yop better
not hurt the girl because she’s gotta
be ‘alive and all in one piece for any
kind a deal to happen. You hear me,
rape-o?
VOICE
(beat)
Fuck this shit.
And the line goes dead. Matt hangs up
YURI
Ican’t believe you talked to him
like that-~
KENNY
He knows what he's doing.
But then he looks at Matt, "don't you?"
MATT
The important thing right now is to
keep Lucia alive. That means these
guys have to know they can’t get a
nickel out of you until we first know
that she’s okay.
YORT
But if you make them mad...100.
MATT
They’ re already mad.
YURI
But you'll give them an excuse to
kill her.
MATT
They don’t need an excuse. They’ re
gonha kill her anyway.
Yuri turns away, Matt puts a hand on his shoulder.
MATT
What they need, is a reason to, keep
her alive. If she is alive, I'll
help you get her back, fgeet rou have
fo play it exactly as'I tell you.
All right?
Yuri looks at Kenny who nods.
YURI
All right.
MATT
How much cash have you got?
YURT
1 got damn little right now. Do the
pastards want cocaine? I got fifteen
kilos of slab ten minutes from here.
(then)
I can maybe get_my hands on a few
hundred worth of schlock, but I can’t
guarantee the quality and 1’d have to
return it.
xenny exchanges a look with Matt, then turns to Yuri
KENNY
I got a bit over five hundred in
cash, Time comes, 1/11 run back to
the house and get’ it.
Yuri nods, touched by the kindness of his fellow drug dealer.
MATT
Is there another phone I can use?
YURI
My daughter’s room.
INT. LUCIA’S ROOM ~ DAY
As Matt enters, moves to the phone, picks it up and dials. He
paces, looks around the room at the posters of In-Sync, Brittany
Spears and so on. He looks at the FAMILY PHOTOS on the chest, the
pretty face of Lucia staring back at him. He turns away101.
TJ (PHONE)
Culpepper Investigations. Daunte
speaking.
MATT
Give me a fucking break.
TJ, (PHONE)
Matthew. You just wake up or
something?
MATT
The hospital said you left.
TJ (PHONE)
Didn't want some Social Services
person come haul my ass away to a
foster home.
MATT
I need you to get over to my hotel,
get something out of my room.
‘TJ (PHONE)
What's going on?
MATT
There’s a box in my closet. I want.
ou to get it for me. I’m gonna call
jowie at the desk, he’1l let you go
up. A guy named Peter will meet you
ont front. Give it to him.
tg
They got another one, didn’t they?
WE HEAR THE PHONE RING in the other room.
MATT
Room 812. Key's above the door.
INT. OTHER ROOM - SAME
As Matt comes in and answers the phone.
MATT
Yeah.
THE OTHER VOICE (RAY)
I understand we have a new player in
the game. I don’t believe we've been
introduced.
MATT
I’m a friend of Mr. Landau’s. My
name’s not important.
CUT TO: AN EXTREME CLOSE-UP OF RAY’S MOUTH
As he speaks into the receiver.102.
RAY
one likes to know who’s on the other
side.
INTERCUTTING THE TWO OF THEM:
MATT
We're on the same side. We both want
this to happen.
RAY
Then all you have to do is follow
instructions.
MATT
No, it’s not that simple.
RAY
Of course it is, We tell you what to
do and you do it. Tf you ever want
to see the girl again.
MATT
You have to convince me she’s alive
in the first place.
RAY
You have my word on it.
MATT
That's funny.
RAY
It's not good enough?
: MATT
Let's just say you lost a lot of
credibility when you returned Mrs.
Kristo in poor condition.
A pause on the other end.
RAY
There were special circumstances with
Mrs. Kristo. Her husband tried to
haggle. He sliced the price, and we
in turn -- well, you can finish that
thought yourself, can’t you?
MATT
We’re not gonna argue the price.
RAY.
You'll pay the million?
MATT
For the girl alive and well.
RAY
I assure you she’s both.MATT
Your assurance means shit to me. Put
her on the phone, let her father talk
to her.
RAY (PHONE)
I’m afraid that won't--
RECORDED NYNEX VOICE
Please deposit sixty-five cents.
MATT
Out, of quarters? Give me your
number. I/1l call you back.
Ray laughs. CLICK. He hangs up. Matt does the same.
MATT
He'll be moving to another payphone.
EXT. MATT’S HOTEL ~ DAY
As TJ crosses to it, goes inside.
INT. YURI'S TOWNHOUSE - DAY
As the PHONE RINGS. Matt picks it up.
RAY (PHONE)
I’m afraid the girl cannot come to
the phone. ‘That’s out of the
question. How else can we reassure
you of hér well-being?
Matt covers the mouthpiece, looks at Yuri.
MATT
Something your daughter would know.
Yuri looks at the DOG lying on the floor.
YURI
The dog’s name?
MATT
Have her tell you-- no, wait a
minute.
(covers the phone
again)
1 They could, knoy that. | They’ve been
i following her for a week or more.
They know your schedule, they’ ve
, robably seen her walking the dog,
ard her call him by name. Think of
| something else.
YURI
We had a dog before this one. A
little black and white one, it got
sick and we had to put it to sleep.
Matt takes his hand away from the phone.104.
MATT
The pode name. And the name of the
dog before this one. Haye her
ao both of them. Then call me
ack.
Matt hangs up on him.
INT, MATT’S HOTEL - ELEVATOR - DAY
As TJ rides up in the elevator with an old man. The elevator
arrives and TJ walks down the hall to Matt’s room. He stands on
his tiptoes, reaches up and takes down A KEY
INT. MATT’S ROOM ~ DAY
As TJ comes into the room, takes in the austere décor. He looks at
the muted TV, then something on the fridge catches his eye. As he
moves to it, we see one of TJ’s drawings is taped there.
Td looks at it a moment, then moves to the closet and opens it. He
sees a box, the size of large boot box, on the top shelf and takes
ft down. fe wants to open it, but it’s wrapped round and round
with duct tape.
INT. YURI'S TOWNHOUSE - DAY
As Yuri paces, Matt looks at the photographs above the fireplace of
the family before the stroke. The woman and the little girl. The
father and the little girl.
Matt looks off to where Yuri is in the kitchen with Anna, holding
her. Matt turns, looks down the hall, sees LIGHT spilling out of a
doorway.
INT. WIFE’S ROOM - SAME
The wife in bed. Staring up at the ceiling. Matt moves to the
doorway and stares at her. And now, Yuri comes up beside him
YURI
The sixteen years we've been married,
[ don’t ever remember her even having
a cold. Then one morning, she wakes
up, says she can’t smell anything
He looks at Matt.
YURI
You were a policeman?
MATT
That’s right.
YURI
you dealt with situations like this?
MATT
No. Not like this.105.
YURI
Still, your gut must tell you
something, no?
(then)
What does it tell you now? Is she
alive?
MATT
I don’t know.
Yuri nods. Not the answer he wanted. THE PHONE RINGS. The two
men quickly move out of the room.
INT. THE LIVING ROOM - SAME
As Matt picks up the phone.
RAY (PHONE)
I’d still like to know how you figure
in this.
MATT
What’s the dog’s name?
RAY (PHONE)
Bh, well, let’s see, what are the old
standbys? Fido? Towser? King.
gover, that’s always 2 popular
favorite, isn’t it? Or Bingo...
Matt reacts, looks at Yuri who sees his expression and lets out a
breath.
RAY (PHONE)
(sings)
I had a dog and Bingo was his name-o,
B-I-N-G-0... B-I-N-G-0...
Ray LAUGHS and Matt closes his eyes: She’s dead.
RAY (PHONE)
How about Spot? Run, Spot, run!
That’s not a bad name for 4 Rhodesian
Ridgeback.
Matt opens his eyes.
RAY (PHONE)
' The dog’s name is Watson.
MATT
Watson,
Across the room, the big DOG LIFTS HIS HEAD at the sound of his
name. Yuri nods.
MATT
And the other dog? The one before?106.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - SAME
Ray's back to us, standing at a payphone.
RAY
She couldn't tell me what breed the
other dog was. She was young when it
died. They had to put it to sleep,
she said. Silly term for it, don’t
you think? When you kill something
You ought to have the courage to call
it that. You're not saying anything
Are you still there?
INT. YURI'S TOWNHOUSE- SAME
As Matt and Yuri stare at each other
MATT
I’m here,
INTERCUTTING THE TWO OF THEM NOW:
RAY
I_gather it was a mongrel. So many
of us are. Now the name’s a bit of a
problem. It’s a Russian word and I
may pot have it right. How's your
Russian, my friend?
MATT
Tell me--
RAY
(beat)
I may be saying this wrong.
(then)
Balalaika.
MATT
Balalaika.
And Yuri nods unequivocally, turns and hugs Anna
YURI
She’s alive...
RAY
It’s supposed to be the name of a
musical instrument, or so she tells
me. What do you say, does it strike
a chord?
He laughs at his own joke while, Matt, feeling lightheaded, leans
against the wall and closes his eyes...
RAY
You have two hours to get the money
together.107.
EXT. MATI’S HOTEL - DAY
As TJ comes out carrying the box just as Peter pulls to the curb,
the passenger window glides down and Peter leans over...
PETER
TI?
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - NIGHT
As Kenny pulls a large satchel from the back seat of his car.
Peter pulis up behind him, gets out followed by TJ clutching Matt’s
box.
INT. TOWNHOUSE - BRIGHTON BEACH - NIGHT
[As Kenny comes into the room followed by Peter and then TJ. He
looks around. Matt comes out of the kitchen, stops cold
MATT
TJ... what are you doing here?
Tw
(gives him the box)
Handing you this.
MATT
I told you to give it to Peter. Not
to come down here-~
TJ takes Matt aside, indicates the zonked Peter.
Ta
Matthew, that dude’s all spun. No
way I was gonna give it to him.
No time to deal with this now, Matt takes the box from TJ, looks to
where Kenny opens the satchel he brought
MATT
How much have we got?
YURI
Hang on a sec...
Dani, the body guard, now comes into the room and spills the
contents of an athletic bag onto the floor, banded stacks of
hundreds.
| YORI
Keep it separate...
7,
Holy fucking shit.
Yuri now notices TJ who stares at the cash with his mouth open
MATT
This is TJ. My associate.108.
Kenny gives Matt a look as Dani hands him a stack of bills. Kenny
slips them from their wrapper, looks them over.
KENNY
Paper’s good. Ink looks right. Nice
used bills. Looks real enough...
Matt looks at the money.
MATT
We'll repackage them slightly. We'll
use the Chase wrappers, but we’ 11
take six bills out of éach stack and
replace them with real ones, three on
top, three on the bottom. What's
this make the count?
YURI
Let’s see, about two ten in schlock.
Kenny brought another six.
KENNY
Puts us right about eight.
The PHONE RINGS.
MATT
That’s good enough.
EXT. YURI’S TOWNHOUSE - NIGHT
As Peter slips outside and lights a cigarette. Takes a deep drag.
We see Matt on the phone in the window upstairs.
INT. YURI‘S TOWNHOUSE - NIGHT
As Yuri and Kenny get the bills ready, Anna moves about the kitchen
fixing them all something to eat.
MATT
We have to meet face-to-face. You
have to have an opportunity to
inspect the money and we have to be
able to assure ourselves that the
girl is all right.
EXT. PAYPHONE - NIGHT
Ray’s back to us.
RAY
And then you people come down on us.
INT. YURI'S TOWNHOUSE - NIGHT
As Anna hands Matt a plate of food. He smiles, sets it down.
MATT
You'll have the girl covered,
RAY (PHONE)
A knife at her throat.109.
MATT
If you want.
RAY (PHONE)
The edge of the blade up against her
skin.
MATT
Whatever. We give you the money.
One of you holds the girl while the
other makes sure it’s all there.
RAY (PHONE)
I don’t like this face-to-face
business.
MATT
We" lL set up fifty yards apart,
You'll be in place first, you'll see
us arrive. You show the girl, then I
come over with the money.
RAY (PHONE)
By yourself?
MATT
Yes.
RAY (PHONE)
Unarmed.
MATT
I'll have a suitcase full of money in
each hand, a gun won't do me much
good.
RAY (PHONE)
Keep talking.
MATT
You check the money. When you’ re
satisfied, you let the girl go. Your
man takes’ off with the cash. You and
T wait until you feel good.’ Then we
go home.
RAY (PHONE)
You could grab me.
MATT
You’1l have that knife you keep
talking about, a gun, too, if you
want one.
RAY (PHONE)
You'll see my face.
MATT
Wear a mask.
RAY (PHONE)
Cuts the visibility.110.
MATT
(beat)
I already know what you look like,
Ray.
Silence on the other end. Kenny looks over from the table.
RAY (PHONE)
What do you know?
MATT
I know you're a fat perving fuck who,
if I'd met on the street ten years
ago, I’d a thrown you out a fucking
window.
(then)
It’s been a busy year for you and
your boyfriend.
RAY (PHONE)
You know, I could cut the little
cunt’s throat, send her back to Daddy
a chunk at a time.
MATT
Then you're dead.
RAY (PHONE)
oh?
MATT
Yeah "oh." Hear me on this one, Ray.
You kill this girl and I’11 make you
my lifelong project. 1/11 find you
under whatever rock you squeeze under
and I'll put a bullet in your fucking
mouth. ‘That goes for you and your
rape-o pal. fou hear ime?
And now all three men are looking over from the table. Yuri is
shaking. TJ's eyes are like saucers.
MATT
But if you do this deal, 1/11 sit on
what I know about you, ‘You can go
Set up shop on the other sidg of the
country. There’s plenty of dope
dealers in L.A.. Plenty of fine
ooking women out there, too, love to
go for a ride in a pretty new truck.
RAY (PHONE)
(beat)
Where do you wanna do it?
MATT
How about Green-Wood Cemetery?
RAY (PHONE)
I think I know where that is.MATT
You should, that's where you dumped
Leila Alvarez.
RAY (PHONE)
Right.
MATT
There are two entrances on the Fifth
Avenue side, one around Twenty-fifth
Street, the other ten blocks south of
there.’ Take the Thirty-rifth Street
entrance and head north about twenty
yards inside the fence. We'll enter
at twenty-fifth and approach you from
the north.
Matt looks at the clock.
MATT
Say ten-thirty. That gives you over
an hour to get there and set up.
RAY (PHONE)
Leila Alvarez. I haven’t thought
about her in a while. She was so
scared...
Matt hangs up, his hands shaking. He sees the other guys looking
at him.
MATT
Yuri, have you got a rifle?
Yuri looks at Dani who nods.
MATT
Is he a good shot?
YURI
During the day maybe. Dani’s a
little nearsighted...
KENNY
Peter was a sharpshooter in the army.
They all look at him. Him? Seriously?
PETER
Was a while ago.
MATT.
Give him the rifle.
Matt realizes he’s still holding the BOX TJ gave hin.
MATT
Excuse me.qi2.
INT. BATHROOM - DAY
As Matt sets the box down on the sink and begins unwrapping the
tape. He pulls it round and round the box and then opens it.
We see A COAT jammed in there. Matt takes it out, unfolds it so
that we see TWO GUNS -- a small .22 and Matt's .45 -” and a BOX OF
MMO folded up inside. And beneath that, A PAIR OF HANDCUFFS.
He stares at the .45 a moment, then jacks the clip, checks to see
that it’s loaded, replaces it, racks the slide and tucks the gun
into his waistband.
He then pulls on the coat, puts a finger through the BULLET HOLE in
one side. He looks at himself in the mirror, then turns away...
EXT, GREEN-WOOD CEMETERY - NIGHT
ls the two cars drive through the big stone gates and on into the
cemetery.
Jari and his bodyguard get out of his car and open the trunk. They
ake out the money while Matt looks at TJ sitting in the back seat.
MATT
What's the drill?
Td
(pissed off)
Stay in the car. Lock the doors,
Gall 911 anything goes down. This is
such bull-~
Matt shuts the door on him, watches Peter examine a RIFLE with very
shaky hands.
MATT
You gonna be okay with that?
PETER
I’11 be fine.
and as Kenny shuts the trunk, we
CUT TO: THE CEMETERY - NIGHT
‘The tombstones, dark shapes in the moonlight. Now we see THO
FLASHLIGHT BEAMS play over the top, the figures of Matt end Kenny
followed by the others now coming into view.
We TRACK WITH THEM as they move through the dark cemetery, Peter
holding on tight to the big gun in his hands.
They walk silently past the markers and crypts. Further down the
nuit, “we can see the MOON reflected in the small lake where part of
Leila Alvarez was found.
Matt looks at the wall, at the street signs on the other side and
Slows down so that the others can draw closer. He then gestures
Soe them to fan out a ways without advancing any further south:113.
That done, Matt turns and faces the pitch-black area where Ray is
supposed to be waiting and points his flashlight in front of him,
triggers three flashes.
For a long moment the only answer is darkness and silence. Then
THREE FLASHES OF LIGHT blink back at him, froma little right of
dead ahead.
Matt takes a breath and starts walking flanked by Kenny and Dani,
each carrying a suitcase containing the money.
ON PETER
As he kneels down behind a marker, using it as a shooting stand for
the rifle. He wipes his sweaty hands on his pants.
ON MATT
As he and Kenny and Dani get halfway there when we hear:
RAY (0S)
That's far enough.
Matt nods to Kenny and Dani who move off, leaving the suitcases for
Matt. Matt looks at where Ray is supposed to be, but sees only
dark shapes.
MATT
Come out where I can see you. And
show the girl.
They move into view. Two forms... and then, as the light gets
better, we see that one form is made up of two persons; one of the
men has the girl in front of him.
RAY
I’ve got a knife to her throat. If
my hand slips--
MATT
Let's hope it doesn't.
RAY
Then you better bring me the money.
Matt turns and hefts the suitcases, looks back at the others, then
starts to slowly approach Ray and his partner.
RAY
That’s close enough. Put the bags
down. And so you know, Albert has a
gun.
Matt looks from Ray and the girl to the enormously tall ALBERT. He
points a gun at Matt’s face. Ray calls from behind him...114.
RAY
Open the bags.
MATT
Let the girl go.
RAY
The money first.
Matt looks at the guy, then kneels down and unfastens the straps on
one of the cases, lifts the lid to show the money
MATT
Now let her go.
Albert takes a step forward, reaches for the money, but Matt shuts
the lid.
MATT
Let her go.
The guy puts the gun right in Matt’s face now.
ALBERT
We oughta shoot this cocksucker.
MATT
Don’t change the rules now Ray.
ON PETER
Watching the scene through the gun scope, his hands shaking like
mad, so that...
THE VIEW THROUGH THE SCOPE
Jittery, back and forth. Hard to see anything
ON MATT.
Staring back at the guy with the gun, his hand drifting behind
toward his own gun tucked into his pants.
MATT
Let her go.
Ray looks down at the girl, sighs.
RAY
Ah, sweet Lucy. I hate to say good-
byé, child.
He lets go of her. Albert grabs the suitcases and hurries off into
the dark.
MATT
Lucia...
Even in the darkness the girl looks pale and drawn, her hands
clutched together at her waist, her arms tight against her sides.11s.
MATT
Come here.
She doesn’t move.
AT THE VAN
Albert opens the door, drops one of the suitcases onto the seat and
lifts the lid, flips through the money. He rips off one of the
Chase straps, fans out a few of the bills
IN THE CEMETERY
As Matt crouches down...
MATT
Your father’s over there, sweetheart
Go to your father. Go on, go
ahead...
She takes a step and then stops. She’s unsteady on her feet and
she grips one hand tightly with the other.
AT THE VAN
As Albert tosses the bills back into the suitcase, is about to shut
it when he stops, looks at his hands. He reaches back and turns on
the dome light. His fingers have INK on the tips
IN THE CEMETERY
Matt is trying to get the girl to move...
MATT
Come on, honey.
let's go
Matt keeps his arm at his side. We see the barest hint of the tip
of his .22 now protruding into his palm..
RAY
Go on. Run!
She looks at him, then at Matt. Her eyes are vacant and unfocused.
MATT
Yuri. Call her.
YURI
Luschka! Luschka, it’s Papa! Come
to Papa!
She recognizes the voice, but doesn't move. Yuri replies with
something in Russian and the girl unclasps her hands and takes one
step, then another.
MATT
What’s the matter with her hand?116.
RAY
Nothing. She’s right as rain...
(gives her a shove}
Go on, kid...
As she draws alongside Matt, he reaches for Lucia’s hand. she
snatches it away, but we can see that TWO FINGERS ARE BANDAGED.
Matt stares coolly at Ray.
RAY
Before you set the terms.
AT THE VAN
As Albert holds a bill up to the light. He grabs another, holds it
up as well...
IN THE CEMETERY
There’s another burst of Russian from Yuri, and now she’s moving
faster, but hardly running. She can’t seem to manage more than an
awkward shuffle.
She gets to her father and he gathers her up in his arms. He holds
onto her for dear life. He looks back at Matt.
MATT
Go on, Yuri, get outta here.
Matt watches them a moment, then turns back and faces Ray who now
has HIS OWN GUN ON MATT.
RAY
I liked her. She was nice.
Matt looks at him a moment, his expression like he’s just bitten
into an aspirin.
AT THE VAN
As Albert stares at a bill, gets a dark look. He slams the case
shut, gets into the driver’s seat of the van and takes a portable
walkie from the dash...
IN THE CEMETERY
As Matt just stares back at Ray.
RAY
Why aren’t you afraid? I’ve got a
gui, on you and you act like it’s
ucking water pistol.
MATT
I don’t know. Maybe I don't care if
ou shoot me or not. Or maybe _
there's a high powered rifle pointed
at your head right now...
Ray looks around as we now...117.
CUT TO: PETER
As the rifle in his sweaty hands slips off the tombstone and into
the grass. He fumbles for it.
PETER
shit.
ON MATT & RAY
Ray looks back at Matt.
RAY
I could still kill you.
MATT
I'm right here. Some ways, you'd be
doing me a big’ favor.
Ray considers this, then...
RAY
No, I think I’1l just melt into the
shadows now.
ALBERT (RADIO)
RAY! THEY FUCKED US!
Matt raises his arm and SHOOTS RAY point blank in the chest with
the little .22. Ray goes down on his back screaming at a high
pitch and clawing at his shirt.
AT THE VAN
As Albert fires a blast with the shotgun and Matt throws himself
behind a marker and pulls his .45.
IN THE CEMETERY
Albert keeps firing everywhere. He pauses, gets a bead on YURT AND
HIS DAUGHTER, is about to shoot when bullets begin whizzing past
his head.
ON PETER
Firing from his position. He bolts back, fires again...
AT THE CARS
As Yuri, Dani, and his daughter now get into Yuri’s car and drive
off...
AT THE VAN
As Albert gets inside, starts it up....ii.
ON MATT
As he sees Ray scrambling away on all fours, LIGHT PLAYS ON HIM and
now we see the van
oving through the cemetery, jumping as it mows
Beee "Sone of the old markeESs
ON PETER
As he runs through the dark with the rifle, stops to set up on the
van when Ray shoots him from the ground and Peter goes down, grabs
his leg. Suddenly the LIGHT FROM THE VAN is on him as...
PETER
Wait--
Albert hits him with the van. Stops beside Ray. The fat man gets
up and pulls himself inside as now...
The VAN STARTS BACKING UP THE WAY IT CAME, Matt gets up and runs
after it. Ray fires at him from the front window. Matt keeps on
running, slipping and falling as he goes, all the while firing at
the receding truck which now backs over monuments and trees.
As they near the other gate, Albert cuts the wheel and the van
jerks into a tight turn to one side. For a split second, Matt sees
Ray’s face in the window and fires until his clip empties.
The van disappears through A CYCLONE FENCE onto the avenue and
takes off into the night. It starts to RAIN..
Matt turns, sees Kenny standing over Peter. Peter’s leg is at an
impossible angle, blood runs from his ear as he reaches for Kenny.
KENNY
No, don’t move...
PETER
Kenny, I have to tell you--
KENNY
Shhh...
PETER
No, you gotta know-~
Peter’s eyes meet Matts for a second, then...
PETER
I loved...
KENNY
(misunderstands)
I know. I know. I love you, too,
man.
(holds his brother)
I love you, too.
Kenny holds his brother a moment, then stops, looks at Peter, and
we see that he stares up at the dark sky, his eyes wide, but empty119.
Kenny looks at him a moment, then slowly stands up, keeps his back
to Matt as he looks out over the cemetery.
KENNY
What fucking direction did they go
in?
ON KENNY’S CAR
As Matt opens the door and freezes.
MATT
Where’s TJ?
KENNY
He’s not in there?
MATT
No.
Matt looks off towards the dark graveyard, concerned.
KENNY
Maybe he ran off, panicked when he
heard all the shooting.
MATT
He can’t be out in the rain.
(starts walking)
We have to find him...
KENNY
He’s got a phone, right?
MATT
Yeah...
Kenny takes out his cell phone, holds it out for Matt.
KENNY,
What’s the number?
INT. THE VAN - SAME
As the two men drive in silence. We then BOOM DOWN to the back
where we see TJ lying under the mattress. And now we PUSH IN ON
THE PHONE CLIPPED TO WIS ELT
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
As Kenny listens, then takes the phone from his ear, looks at it.
KENNY
No signal...
Kenny takes a few paces, tries to find a better signal...120.
INT. VAN - SAME
As Ray rips his shirt open, we see a KEVLAR VEST. He pulls it down
at the neck, reaches inside. His hand comes away bloody
RAY
I’m shot...
He turns, reaches for a towel in the back. TJ doesn’t move as Ray
reaches around beside his face.
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
As Kenny stops walking, checks his phone.
EXT. A HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK - SAME
Even in the moonlight we can see the place has been neglected; the
clapboard needs painting, the shrubbery overgrown. A half-flight
of steps leads to a screened-in porch that sags in the middle
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
As Kenny steps up onto a grave marker, checks the phone
KENNY
Here we go...
EXT, HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK ~ SAME
The van turns up a driveway, concrete patched here and there with
blacktop that runs along the side of the house to a detached two-
car garage.
INT. VAN - SAME
As Albert and Ray get out of the car.
RAY
Albert--
Ray immediately falls onto Albert
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
As Matt walks over to Kenny...
KENNY
It's ringing--
INT. VAN - SAME
Through the back window, we see Albert, the tall one, reaching for
the garage door, pulling it down just as TJ'S PHONE RINGS, the
SOUND OF THE SLIDING METAL DOOR OBSCURING THE PHONE AS..
ts
(whispers)
Hello?EXT. CEMETERY - NIGHT
Bs Kenny nods to Matt, then.
KENNY
Where are you, kid?
(then)
oh, fuck.
MATT
(takes the phone)
19?
(listens, then)
Listen to me-- get outta there. Now.
INT. GARAGE - SAME
As TJ peers through a grimy window out at the street.
Tg
Shhhh. Calm down, dawg. It’s cool.
I’m in the garage. They're inside
the house.
INTERCUTTING MATT & TJ:
MATT
Which is where?
TI
Good question...
MATT
can you leave without them seeing
you?
Ts
I think so...
He slowly raises the metal door, it SCREECHES...
EXT. CEMETERY - SAME
As Matt hears it and winces...
INT. HOUSE - KITCHEN - SAME
As Albert helps Ray into a kitchen chair. Ray pulls his
lifts the bulletproof vest over his head. He whines...
RAY
I’ve never been shot before. There's
a first aid kit, Al, in the bathroom.
Albert walks right into the bathroom and begins taking a
1 Ray looks over. Can’t believe it. First things first.
shirt off,
loud piss.122.
EXT. GARAGE - SAME
As TJ slides under the space between the bottom of the door and the
driveway. Albert’s head in the window above him as the man takes a
feak. TJ stays low all the way out to the street. He looks back
at the dark porch, RAIN falling all around him now
Tw
I can’t see a number...
MATT
Try next door.
Tw
(looks)
694.
MATT
Okay, now walk away from the house,
go to the nearest corner
Ts
In motion...
‘tg gets to the corner and looks up at the sign
Tg
Fifty-first Street.
MATT
Sunset Park...
They all start walking back for the car
Ty
I’m gonna keep an eye on ‘em, make
sure they don’ t-~
MATT
No, TJ, you stay put, You hear me?
Just wait for us on the corner.
Understand?
But the phone's lost its signal
MATT
shit.
Matt yuns for Kenny’s car now.
INT. HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK - KITCHEN - SAME
As Albert comes out of the bathroom, and picks up the two suitcases
and starts down the stairs to the basement.
EXT. HOUSE ~ SAME
‘A few lights are on in the house. TJ steps into FRAME, moves
slowly up the driveway. A LIGHT goes on in the basement.123.
INT. HOUSE - BASEMENT - SAME
As Albert comes down the stairs with the suitcases and throws them
onto the ping-pong table. He opens them, sits down and starts to
inspect the money more closely.
__RAY
Is any of it real?
Ray now appears at the top of the stairs, clings to the banister as
he starts down.
ALBERT
Some.
Ray picks up the STUN GUN off the work bench, stuffs into his
pants, covers it with his shirt...
RAY
Let me help you.
Ray stumbles to the table.
ALBERT
Here.
(gets up)
Have a seat.
Ray sits down, keeps the gun in his lap as Albert moves to grab
another chair. Ray looks up and sees TJ looking in the window
RAY
Hey, who is--
And before he can get the rest out, Albert is behind him with the
LOOP OF WIRE, pulling it tight around Ray’s neck...
EXT. HOUSE - SAME
As TJ backs away, slips in the mud, as the tall man garrotes his
fat partner, hauls him right off his feet...
Tg
Shit...
TJ gets up, takes off running across the yard. He looks back at
the house, runs smack dab into: MATT. He starts to scream, but
Matt covers his mouth as he and Kenny step forward.
MATT
Guess we’re in the right place.
CUT TO: WINDOW POV - THE KITCHEN
Where we see Albert just below us sitting at the table eating a
bowl of cereal. Kenny jumps down.
KENNY
The tall one's in the kitchen. I
didn’t see a gun anywhere124.
CUT TO: THE FRONT DOOR
As Kenny gets ready to break the glass.
CUT TO: THE BACK
As Matt boosts TJ up to look in the window
CUT TO: KENNY
Breaking the glass.
CUT TO: THE KITCHEN
Albert doesn’t hear a thing, keeps eating.
cur To: TI
As he looks at Matt gives him a thumbs up.
INT. HOUSE - SAME
As Matt now comes through the front door followed by Kenny. They
walk to the kitchen and stand there. Albert is seated so that we
see him in profile, eating his cereal.
After a moment, he senses something and slowly turns to face them.
He says nothing at first, but then...
ALBERT
You can have your money back.
He doesn’t resist as Matt cuffs the man’s hands behind his back. TJ
now steps into the kitchen
Tw
It’s downstairs.
INT. BASEMENT - SAME
As Matt starts down the stairs in the dark. He pulls a string in
the center of the room and the light comes on. He stares at Ray,
now lying on the floor. He sees the knives on the workbench. A
stun gun. A cleaver.
KENNY
My God...
He sees Kenny on the stairs now. Matt grabs the two suitcases and
brings them up while Kenny stares at the tools.
INT. KITCHEN - SAME
Albert looks at Kenny as he comes back up the stairs.
ALBERT
You're the husband.125.
KENNY
So?
ALBERT
I was just wondering.
Matt opens the suitcase on the table, checks the stacks of bills.
MATT |
Were you just going to leave Ray down
there?
ALBERT
Ray? No, I was going to eat
something, then clean up before 1
eft.
MATT
What would you do with him?
ALBERT
Cut him up, (Wirap him, There’ s
plenty of Hefty bags in the cupboard
KENNY
And then what? Deliver him to
somebody in the trunk of a car?
ALBERT
No, that was just for you.
He looks at Kenny with those dark eyes, but Kenny doesn’t look
away.
MATT
You have a choice to make Kenny.
(closes the
suitcase)
There’s a lot of hard evidence
against this asshole. He’s got his
dead eae in the basement, not to
mention the van in the garage is
gonna be full of fibers and blood
races and God knows what else. He
oughta be looking at three life
sentences, plus an extra twenty or
thirty years tacked on as a bonus.
KENNY
Can you guarantee he’1l do life?
MATT
Nobody can guarantee anything when it
comes to the criminal justice system.
KENNY
What if I make the other choice? You
with me?
Matt sees TJ standing outside on the front porch.126.
MATT
No. I could turn him in and sleep
just fine.
KENNY
(looks at Albert)
I don’t think 1 could.
MATT
That's why it has to be your
decision.
KENNY
Yeah, well, I guess I just made it
He puts the gun on Albert.
KENNY
Take it easy, Matt.
Matt then turns and walks down the hall, TJ following
EXT. AVENUE ~ NIGHT
As Matt and TJ walk to the subway. Matt checks his watch
MATT
The shelter’s gonna be closed. Take
the train back to my place.
To
Where you going?
INT. AA MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt takes his seat in the back. A YOUNG GIRL, pretty, the face
of an angel, no more than nineteen, stands up to read THE TWELVE
STEPS.
GIRL
Step one. We admitted we were
Rowerlesa over alcohol, that our
ives had become unmanageable.
EXT. HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK - NIGHT
The lights on. The decrepit structure standing there like one of
the old tilted markers at Green-Wood Cemetery.
INT. AA MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt stares at the girl as she speaks.
GIRL
Step two. Came to believe that a
power greater than ourselves could
restore us to sanity...127.
CUT TO: THE HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK
As Matt steps into FRAME. He stands a moment there looking across
the street at the house, then crosses to it.
GIRL (VO)
Step three. Made a decision to turn
our will and our lives over to God as
we understood him.
CUT TO: THE GIRL AT THE MEETING
As she reads...
GIRL
Step four. Made a searching and
fearless moral inventory of
ourselves...
ON MATT
Troubled. Listening to the words, as if for the first time
GIRL (03)
Step five. Admitted to God, to
ourselves, and to another human being
the exact’nature of our wrongs..
CUT TO: THE HOUSE - NIGHT
As Matt slowly opens the front door. Stands in the doorway.
Staring down the hall. Listening. IT IS DEADLY SILENT. He draws
his gun and steps inside, the door closing behind him.
MATT
Kenny?
CUT TO: THE GIRL AT THE MEETING
As she continues...
GIRL (vo)
Step six. Were entirely ready to
have God’remove all these defects of
character.
CUT TO: MATT
Listening, staring at her...
CUT TO: THE HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK
We hear only the occasional creak of a floorboard as Matt now
starts down the hall for the lighted kitchen. He gets closer, and
we see A BLOODY HANDPRINT ON A WALL, and then he quietly moves into
the doorway and freezes.
GIRL (vO)
Step seven. ‘Humbly asked him to
remove our shortcomings.128.
WHAT HE SEES
Blood everywhere. On the floor. On the walls.
CUT TO: THE GIRL AT THE MEETING
As she tosses her hair back, continues reading...
GIRL
Step eight. Made a list of all
persons we had harmed, and became
filling to make amends to them all.
CUT TO: THE HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK
Matt turns, sees a smear of blood that leads to the doorway to the
basement.
GIRL (vO)
Step nine. Made direct amends to
such people wherever possible, except
when to do so would injure them or
others.
Matt cautiously moves to it, looks down the stairs at...
A BODY
Face down, at the bottom of the staircase. As if it had fallen
down the stairs. Or had been thrown down.
CUT TO: THE MEETING
Matt listening as she speaks, we begin TO MOVE AROUND HIM...
GIRL (VO)
Step ten. Continued to take personal
inventory and when we were wrong,
promptly admitted it.
CUT TO: THE HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK
As Matt moves down the stairs, slips in the blood and slides to the
bottom next to the man lying there.
GIRL (vo)
Step eleven, Sought through prayer
and meditation to improve our
Conscious contact with God as we
understood him. .
It’s Kenny Kristo. fSyes wide open, but empty. His head turned at
an impossible angle, looking back. Matt looks to where his arms
end in a pool of blood on the floor and we see that both of his
nands have been cut off.
CUT TO: THE GIRL AT THE MEETING
As Matt closes his eyes...129.
GIRL
wibtaying for the knowledge of His
will for us and the power to carry
that out.
CUT TO: THE HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK
Matt looks out into the basement. It’s dark. We see the figure of
Ray still slumped in the chair by the ping-pong table
As Matt picks himself up, then reaches up to pull the string on the
overhead bulb, we see the whites of a pair of eyes and some white
teeth grinning behind him.
Matt pulls the light on as we see the figure of Albert behind him
A LOOP OF WIRE IN HIS HANDS. He raises it. Matt turning just as
Albert slips the wire over Matt's head.
Matt instinctively puts his gun between his neck and the piano
wire, momentarily stopping the wire from biting into his flesh, but
he then also inadvertently pulls the trigger, the explosion
blinding him while the bullet grazes his cheek, leaving a faint RED
LINE along Matt’s jaw line on tte way Up inte the ceiling.
Matt tries to reach back for the taller man with his other hand
while Albert tries to get his own hand on Natt’s gun.
He jams the muzzle up into Matt’s chin, Matt yanks the gun and the
wire comes out of Albert’s hand, but the gun flies with it onto the
staircase.
Albert makes a move for it, leaps up the stairs and Matt grabs him
from behind, slipping in the thick blood on the stairs and the two
men go sliding down, right over Kenny Kristo and back into the dark
basement.
Albert grabs a hammer from the workbench and immediately brings it
down on Matt’s shoulder. Matt topples backwards, falling over the
dead Ray in the chair and collapsing the ping-pong table
Albert steps forward and kicks Matt in the face, brings the hammer
down again, this time on Matt’s hand as he tries to roll out of the
way. Matt sees THE STUN GUN in Ray’s hands, in his lap
Albert now grabs a bloody cleaver from the workbench, takes a step
towards Matt and raises it over his head. Matt yanks the STUN GUN
from Ray’s hands and jams it into Albert's belly. We hear THE LOUD
2AP and Albert folds up and goes down,
Albert doesn’t move for a moment. Matt lies there on the floor
beside him, breathing hard. He finally sits up and ZAPS HIM AGAIN
Matt then gets up, walks back up the bloody stairs
CUT T0: THE GIRL AT THE MEETING
As she takes a breath, then...130.
GIRL (vo)
Step twelve." Having had a spiritual
awakening as the result of these
steps...
CUT TO: KITCHEN - HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK - SAME
As Matt grabs his GUN from the top step and slowly starts back down
the stairs into the basement...
INT. BASEMENT - SAME
As Albert struggles to his knees. Matt walks up to him. Puts the
gun to his forehead. Albert slowly looks up at Matt, his eyes the
two black marbles of a rabid animal.
ALBERT
T wanted to-~
And Matt SHOOTS HIM before he ever finishes the sentence
INT, KITCHEN - SAME
As Matt comes up the stairs, and stands there in the doorway -- gun
at his side as we PUSH ALL THE WAY INTO HIS FACE
Completely torn by what he’s just done.
INT, AA MEETING - NIGHT
As Matt listens to the girl finish.
GIRL
:+.we tried to carry this message to
alcoholics, and to practice these
principals’ in our affairs.
We move around Matt, we now see the RED LINE down his face.
EXT, HOUSE IN SUNSET PARK - DAWN
Now a major crime scene, blue @ whites, yellow tape everywhere
Matt stands across the street watching Jo Durkin talk to several
DETECTIVES. Jo says something and they all look at Matt. Jo then
crosses to him. They stand there a moment.
MATT
You want my statement.
JO
Eventually.
(then)
Go home.
And with that, Jo turns and walks back across the street.
DISSOLVE TO:231
EXT. MATT’S HOTEL - MORNING
As Matt crosses to the building, another AMBULANCE pulls away.
INT. MATT’S APARTMENT - MORNING
As Matt comes in and takes off his coat. He pauses as he sees TJ
sleeping on the couch, a half-dozen pages of his drawings on the
floor beside him. Matt pulls a blanket off the bed and covers the
boy with it.
He picks up one of the drawings, then sits down in the armchair and
looks at it a moment...
He then looks up from the drawing to the sleeping TJ, Matt’s own
eyes getting heavy now as he SHUTS OFF THE TV and watches the boy
sleep, the drawing slipping from his hands to the floor as he
himself now drifts off and we then...
FADE OUT.