A R T I C L E

The Four Zoas: Intention and Production

Robert N. Essick

Blake/An Illustrated Quarterly, Volume 18, Issue 4, Spring 1985, pp. 210-220
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The Four Zoas: Intention and Production

BY ROBERT N. ESSICK

Paul Mann's challenging theory in "The Final State of illustrations to the works of other poets, but it is difficult
The Four Zoas" offers an opportunity for others to test even to imagine a late eighteenth-century sponsor for
their sense of Blake's plans for his long and various an epic like Vata or The Four Zoas. This does not, of
manuscript poem. Mann very kindly allowed me to read course, allow us to rule out completely the theory that
his essay before publication and accepted my suggestion Blake originally planned to create a beautiful illumi-
that I send to this journal a companion piece in the nated manuscript as his final product and only later
hope that the two articles together will produce more allowed it to degenerate into a working draft. Yet, as
light than would either in isolation. I wish merely to Mann suggests, Blake's entire career as a publisher in-
pursue a few lines of speculation that support his basic dicates a consistent desire to find a wider audience for
theory but evolve into a hypothesis about Blake's first his poetry than the very limited number of people who
plans for his text. could see, read, and be moved by a unique manuscript.
I trust it has become something of a truism that From the prospectus of October 1793 to the first chapter
Blake was much concerned with the processes and ma- of Jerusalem (c. 1804-1820), Blake addressed himself
terials of publication. A man trained to the book and "To the Public"2 and tried an extraordinary range of
print business of his time who also invented a number media and publication methods to reach them.
of unconventional ways of producing and distributing The development of Blake's publishing efforts in
images could hardly avoid such interests. A corollary the mid- and late- 1790s provides some sense of the range
proposition is that Blake's works are media specific of media he had available for the publication of his
that is, his images (whether pictorial or calligraphic) illustrated poetry. In 1795, Blake published The Book
differ in some observable ways because of the different of Los and The Book of Ahania (illus. 4). Both have texts
technologies used to produce them. Given the practical etched in intaglio, whereas the other illuminated books
exigencies of image production, as well as Blake's in- were printed from letters etched in relief.* The visual
sistence on the radical unity of conception and execu- differences between intaglio and relief letters are less
tion, 1 it is reasonable to assume that the preliminary significant than the considerable changes in production
stages in the development of an image may reveal the procedures. It is not at all clear why Blake abandoned
medium in which Blake intended to produce the final his own invention, relief etching, which he trumpeted
form of that image. I take this to be the perspective, as both a practical and beautiful method of self-publi-
as well as the context in which we are to understand cation in his 1793 prospectus, and returned to a far
the meaning of "intention," implicit in Mann's essay. I more conventional medium.4 The Books of Los and Ahania
share that perspective and usage, and thus I will also are also notable for their paucity of interlinear decora-
view The Four Zoas manuscript not only as the "text" of tion, as in letterpress, even though the intaglio medium
a "poem" (i.e., the physical embodiment of an aesthetic would not in itself prohibit the root and vine motifs
experience) but also as a preliminaryperhaps even a punctuating The Book ofUrizen or even larger and more
mockupfor a subsequent work never executed. elaborate designs set anywhere on the page. Clearly,
Is The Four Zoas manuscript the signifier of an Richard Edwards' 1797 edition of Young's Night Thoughts,
unrealized intention to produce the poem in some other with a typographic text surrounded by intaglio designs
form? The physical condition of the work as we know on slightly less than half the printed pages, bears a
it, with its deletions, erasures, marginal insertions, and special relationship to The Four Zoas. But we should also
designs rendered as pencil sketches, immediately sug- keep in mind The Book of Los and The Book of Ahania,
gests as much. Mann has argued cogently that Blake for they indicate the medium Blake chose for the pro-
did not intend to create a single illuminated manu- duction of his own poetry published closest in time to
scripteither the one we have or another never exe- the beginning of his labors on Va/a or The Four Zoas."
cutedas an end in itself. Such works are generally Turning to the manuscript itself, we can imme-
produced on commission only, much as Blake was hired diately see that some pages are written in what Bentley
by Flaxman, Butts and others to make watercolored calls a "Copperplate Hand" (illus. 1), others in a related
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but "Modified Copperplate Hand," and still others in was an indirect process in that the image was generally
Blake's usual plain manuscript hand (illus. 23, 56).6 developed to a fairly high level of completeness and finish
Our sense of an important structural distinction between in materialsusually pencil, ink, or wash on paper
the copperplate and plain hands is reinforced by stab preliminary to the graphic medium itself. This work
holes indicating that Blake "had once sewed together was then transferred, often by mechanical or semime-
into one group all the sheets with elegant script [i.e., chanical means, to the copper. Blake describes a com-
both copperplate and modified copperplate] and into pletely mechanical transfer process in his Notebook, but
another group those sheets . . . in his usual [plain] like most it requires an image executed in "black lead
hand." 7 If we now consider the manuscript as a mockup, pencil"10 or chalk. In a letter to George Cumberland of
it is reasonable to begin with the assumption that the 6 December 1795, Blake outlines a soft-wax technique
three hands may indicate at least two different intentions that works very well for transferring an intaglio print
to publish. In what follows I will also assume that the to copper for reengraving. n Lines printed in intaglio are
deletions and marginal additions to pages bearing fine raised slightly above the surface of the paper, and thus
script, as well as designs that intrude into fine text areas it is possible to make an impression of them in a soft
(on page 25, for example), were made after the aban- material. The copperplate hand in The Four Zoas is of
donment of whatever intentions for publication the cop- course in ink on paper, and I suspect that even a soft-
perplate hand(s) may embody. wax process would not permit its transfer.
Through a process of elimination and the weighing If we must rule out mechanical transfer, the sec-
of practical probabilities, we can reach some conclusions tions of The Four Zoas in copperplate hand could still
about the intentions that may lurk behind those sections serve a purpose for an intaglio etcher/engraver. After
of The FourZoas written in fine script. There would have composing his script with some care on paper, Blake
been no reason to write in such a hand if the method could look at the manuscript in a mirror and copy it
of publication was to be either letterpress or relief etch- backwards onto an etching ground or blank plate, fol-
ing. A typographic printer must of course select one of lowing the manuscript letter-forms as closely as he wished
the available typefacesor go to the great expense of within the limitations set by a nonmechanical method.
having a new font castregardless of the author's manu- This two-step process avoids the problems of composing
script hand. All that is wanted is a clear script, as in (as distinct from copying) a handsome script backwards
the Tiriel manuscript and large portions of The Four Zoas on a varnished plate or copper surface. Throughout the
itself. As for relief etching, that is a direct process in manuscript, Blake has consistently limited illustration
which the forms of the letters are composed directly on to the margins and avoided interlinear designs on major
the copper. Here again, the manuscript needs to be no pictures set between sections of the text on a single
more elaborate than a fair copy. Blake may have even page. This format follows what we find in the intaglio
avoided that stage of production by moving directly plates of The Book of Los and The Book of Ahania. If the
from a finished working draft, of the sort found in his copperplate hand sections of The Four Zoas, before dele-
Notebook, to the copperplate because corrections can be tions and insertions, are in some sense a mockup for a
made easily on the plate at any time before acid is publication, the most probable technology would seem
applied. The one extant mockup for pages in a published to be a text etched and/or engraved in intaglio with
illuminated book is a rough pencil sketch with only surrounding intaglio designs. This method of produc-
horizontal lines to indicate the approximate position of tion would allow Blake to produce the entire book using
the text. 8 There is no extant manuscript for any of the techniques in which he was thoroughly skilled and not
illuminated books with lettering even vaguely like the require him, as would letterpress, to acquire the services
copperplate hand(s) in The Four Zoas. This negative evi- of journeymen with tools and materials he did not him-
dence cannot prove that such manuscripts never existed; self possess.
but, given the production characteristics of relief etch- Where would Blake acquire enough large copper-
ing, there are practical reasons why Blake need not have plates to etch or engrave a poem anywhere near the
written such manuscripts. Even if Blake used a transfer length of Vala or The Four Zoas? Mann's suggestion that
method for applying his texts to the surface of the copper Blake may have acquired the Night Thoughts coppers
(which I very much doubt), the letters would have to from Richard Edwards is compelling. It is certainly
be written on specially treated paper in a glutinous, possible that Blake was paid partly in copper for his
acid-resistant material. 9 No part of The Four Zoas manu- labors on Night Thoughts, regardless of who retained the
script meets these requirements and it is difficult to rights to publish the images first etched on the plates.
conceive how they could be added after writing had By writing much of his poem on unused leaves of What-
begun. man paper also left over from the Night Thoughts project,
We are left then with intaglio publication of text Blake insured that the size of his text blocks and ac-
and illustration. As practiced in Blake's day, intaglio companying designs would fit with minimal adjust-
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ments onto the plates illustrating Young. We need not illuminated book was made from a quarter-piece of the
assume that Blake intended to use the engraved Night "Moore & Co's Advertisement" Blake designed and en-
Thoughts designs themselves in The Four Zoas. The proofs graved c. 1797-1798. u The presence of the Moore plate
used in the later parts of the manuscript may be there in Jerusalem indicates that Blake may have retained pos-
because of similarities in formata text panel sur- session of similar commercial engravings, clearly exe-
rounded by designsrather than symbolic or thematic cuted on commission, and reused them for his own
conjunctions between Young's poem and Blake's. The productions. The possibility that Blake could have used
presence of proofs from the plate printed on page 73 of Night Thoughts coppers for Milton and Jerusalem lends
Night Thoughts, showing Christ crowned with thorns, some (admittedly circumstantial and speculative) sup-
on pages 59 (illus. 3), 111, and 115 (illus. 5) of The port to Mann's theory that Blake might have retained
Four Zoas creates an unusually repetitious sequence of those very plates and once contemplated using them for
illustrations. It is unlikely that the present arrangement Vala or The Four Zoas.
of Night Thoughts designs in the manuscript represents The plain-hand portions of The Four Zoas offer even
the format for an intended publication of any sort. If less evidence than pages in copperplate hand concerning
Blake did have the Night Thoughts coppers, he could methods of publication. The intended medium might
simply scrape and burnish away the designs to Young's have been relief etching (although that still seems un-
poem and etch or engrave new images. The backs of the likely), intaglio etching/engraving, or letterpress. It is
plates could also be used, as in many of the illuminated most tempting to conclude with Mann that the change
books, for a total of eighty-six etchings and/or engrav- from fine scripts to plain might record a change in
ingsa good many more than the thirty-eight pages of publishing plans, roughly parallel in chronology to the
The Four Zoas bearing fine script. Or, if one side only shift from an unrecoverable poem entitled Vala to an
was to be used, perhaps it is significant that the number unfinished poem entitled The Four Zoas. 16 The contextual
of fine script pages is just five short of the number of and historical evidence Mann assembles in support of
Night Thoughts coppers. his letterpress hypothesis comes from what is generally
Pursuing this line of speculation a bit further, we taken to be a middle or later period in the development
should even consider the possibility that Blake aban- of the manuscriptthe years with Hay ley, 1800-1803.
doned the idea of using all the Night Thoughts plates for Blake's work with the provincial printer Joseph Seagrave
The Four Zoas between c. 1804 and 1807 and began on a book (the 1802 Ballads) with a typographic text
using them for Milton and Jerusalem. By then the manu- and intaglio illustrations may have suggested a return
script poem may have grown too long for the forty-three to that combination of techniques, also used in Edwards'
known Night Thoughts coppers,12 forcing on Blake some Night Thoughts edition, for the publication of The Four
alternative publication plans if he had not already made Zoas. Such a change could account for the appearance
them before extending the poem. Exact comparisons of of Night Thoughts proofs in the plain script pages of the
the sizes of the Night Thoughts, Milton, and Jerusalem manuscript and the use of their text panels as a mockup
plates are not possible because of paper shrinkage and for a projected publication with the same format. At
stretching and the unavoidable loss of some copper when this point, Blake could have cut up some of the Night
a plate is cut and its edges beveled. It is certain, however, Thoughts coppers for other purposes if the new plans for
that the Night Thoughts plates could have supplied more The Four Zoas required fewer than one design per page
than enough copper for both illuminated books. If pieces of text, again as in Night Thoughts. The first Night Thoughts
of copper were made from seventeen Night Thoughts plates proof appears on page 43 of the manuscript (illus. 2),
by cutting along a horizontal line at a point 13-5 to 17 immediately following the last page in fine script. If
cm. from the top or bottom edge (ie., just short of the the plain-hand revisions to pages first composed in cop-
middle of the plate), each of the pieces could be cut perplate script are later revisions, as seems probable, the
into thirds to make three Milton coppers. If all seventeen differences between pages 42 and 43 may record a sig-
pieces were cut this way they would provide a total of nificant shift in Blake's intentions for publication. 17
fifty-one plates for etching on one side.13 Each of the As attractive as Mann's theoryor the combination
remaining, slightly larger pieces from these seventeen Mann/Essick theorymay at first seem, the manuscript
Night Thoughts plates could be cut in half to yield two pages on Night Thoughts proofs exhibit a few recalcitrant
Jerusalem coppers each, for a total of sixty-eight pages features. The number of lines written in the text panels
in the illuminated book if etched recto and verso. This ranges between twenty-eight and fifty-seven (not in-
procedure would require no further cutting, except pos- cluding pages bearing part-titles or those on which Nights
sibly for minor trimming or filing of edges, and would end short of the lower margin), the text begins above
waste very little copper.14 Other Jerusalem plates could the panel on fourteen pages (illus. 6), and extends below
have been cut from the remaining Night Thoughts cop- it on two (illus. 5). Accommodating marginal additions
pers, although we know that at least plate 96 of the would cause further dislocations. If these portions of the
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manuscript are a letterpress mockup, they form a rather production plans for The Four Zoas. Yet I believe that
loose one. Blake may have planned to create somewhat these companion essays may contribute to a better un-
larger text panels in a variety of sizes. If the panels were derstanding of the manuscript and the intentions it never
not altered, a sympathetic printer might be able to completely reveals. Our speculative arguments may have
manage difficulties by shifting the text about as re- the additional benefit of providing a more comprehen-
quired, although this would probably disrupt some text- sive view of the evolution of Blake's activities as a poet,
design relationships. A minor form of this problem oc- engraver, and printer from 1796 to 1807.
curred in the production of the 1797 Night Thoughts,
with the result that the lines illustrated by the design
1
on page 54 begin on page 53. See, for example, Blake's statement that "Invention depends
The treatment of the Night Thoughts proof on page Altogether upon Execution or Organization" in his annotations (c.
1808) to Reynolds' Discourses and similar statements in the Public
137 of The Four Zoas (illus. 6) throws into doubt at least Address (c. 1811). The best and most recent study of this central
two of our theories. Blake has drawn-in the back of one principle of Blake's aesthetics is Morris Eaves, William Blake's Theory
of the wrestling figures right through the text panel. of Art (Princeton: Princeton Univ. Press, 1982), Chap. III.
2
The text carefully follows the new lower left margin The Complete Poetry and Prose of William Blake, Newly Revised
created by the outline of the back. If this drawing was Edition, ed. David V. Erdman (Berkeley and Los Angeles: Univ.
of Calif. Press, 1982), pp. 145 (Jerusalem, pi. 3), 692 (1793 pro-
composed as part of the development of The Four Zoas spectus).
(as distinct from a drawing executed earlier for some 1
The one exception discovered to date is the title page of
other purpose), it strongly suggests that at least this one The Song of Los (1795), which appears to have been printed plan-
Night Thoughts design was to be used in Blake's poem. ographically. See Essick, William Blake, Printmaker (Princeton:
Princeton Univ. Press, 1980), pp. 128-29. This title page, like
At the same time, the drawing argues against a letter- the evolution of the 1795 color printed drawings, offers further
press text. It would not have been impossible to adjust evidence of Blake's movement away from relief etching in the mid-
the left margin of a typographic text according to the 17905.
4
pencil line of the back, but such a format would have There are a number of English eighteenth-century books
been highly unusual for an early nineteenth-century let- with etched and/or engraved texts, including several illustrated
terpress book. An etched or engraved text, however, editions of Philip Ayres, Emblems of Love. Several Continental pub-
lications of considerable length were completely engraved, includ-
would have accommodated the drawing without tech- ing a Virgil in five volumes (The Hague: Henry Justice, 1753-
nical difficulties or the violation of printing conventions. 1767) and an edition of Ovid's Metamorphoses in 141 plates (Paris:
On page 72 of the Edwards' Night Thoughts, a figure's Basan et LeMire, plates dated 17671770).
5
head intrudes slightly into the lower right corner of the G.E. Bentley, Jr., Blake Books (Oxford: Clarendon Press,
text panel, but this in no way disrupts normal letterpress 1977), pp. 4 5 4 - 5 5 , and Erdman, ed., Poetry and Prose of Blake, p.
817, agree that Blake worked on the manuscript c. 1796-1807.
margins. In spite of his introduction of printed designs Blake Books summarizes the information Bentley first presented in
with rigid text panels, Blake's extensions and revisions his facsimile edition of Vala or The Four Zoas (Oxford: Clarendon
of The Four Zoas forced the manuscript ever further from Press, 1963) and repeated in his edition of William Blake's Writings
a recognizable mockup. (Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1978), II, 1721-32.
6
At some point Blake must have given up any plans Bentley, Blake Books, p. 455, where pp. 1-14, 17-18, 2 3 -
30 are listed as written in copperplate hand and pp. 1516, 31
for eventual publication, and perhaps that occurred be- 42 in modified copperplate. Erdman, ed., Poetry and Prose of Blake,
fore he ceased fussing with the manuscript. If this is p. 816, records pp. 1, 318, 2342 as containing all the "fine
indeed the case, then the suggestions presented here can copperplate script." Thus the only discrepancy is p. 2, the verso
be summarized as a three-step process of changing plans of the titlepage, which bears only a pencil sketch and a rough pencil
for a manuscript reflecting those changes as follows: inscription. In what follows, however, I will include that page
among the "fine script" sections since it clearly accompanies pages
(1) a manuscript and production mockup for a poem written in that hand.
(Va/aP) intended for publication of text and designs as Erdman, ed., Poetry and Prose of Blake, p. 817.
intaglio etchings/engravings (i.e., the Book of Los and 8
A drawing (sheet 22.4 X 31.7 cm.) for The Book ofThel,
Book ofAhania format), tentatively dated c. 1796-1800; pi. 6, and an alternative design for pi. 7, recently acquired by the
(2) a manuscript and production mockup for a poem British Museum. See Martin Butlin, The Paintings and Drawings of
William Blake (New Haven and London: Yale Univ. Press, 1981),
{The Four Zoas?) intended for publication as a letterpress I, no. 218, and II, pi. 249.
text accompanied by intaglio etched and/or engraved 9
Such a method was invented by Ruthven Todd and W.S.
designs surrounding selected pages of text (i.e., the Hayter and first described by Todd in 1948. See Todd, "The Tech-
Night Thoughts format), tentatively dated c. 1800-1804; niques of William Blake's Illuminated Printing," reprinted in The
(3) a working manuscript unrelated to any specific Visionary Hand: Essays for the Study of William Blake's Art and Aes-
thetics, ed. Essick (Los Angeles: Hennessey & Ingalls, 1973), pp-
publication intentions (i.e., The Four Zoas manuscript 35-36.
as we know it today), tentatively dated c. 1804-1807. "To Engrave on Pewter," Poetry and Prose of Blake, ed. Erd-
The foregoing has clearly proven only one propo- man, p. 694. Joseph Viscomi has demonstrated that Blake used
sition: it is impossible to prove any theory about Blake's this type of procedure for transferring the drawing for Jerusalem pi.
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26 to the copper for etching in white line; see Blake: An Illustrated graving were first pointed out and identified by Erdman in "The
Quarterly, 16 (1982), 46. Suppressed and Altered Passages in Blake's Jerusalem." Studies in
11
Poetry and Prose of Blake, ed. Erdman, p. 700. Blake's Bibliography, 17 (1964), 36-37. Other plates in Jerusalem may have
method is very similar to the one described in Sculptura Historico- been made from other pieces of the Moore copperor for that
Technica:or, the History and Art of Engraving, Fourth Edition (London: matter from any used intaglio plate.
16
J. Marks, 1770), pp. 99-100. Bentley accepts the usual assumption that the copperplate-
12 hand portions were composed before the plain-hand pages and states
There appears to have been at least one further plate, for
a "leaf from Night 5" (presumably illustrated) was offered for sale that a reversal of this sequence "cannot . . . satisfactorily account
by the London bookdealer Francis Edwards in a catalogue of c. for such diverse factors as symbolism, stab holes, corrections, and
1927-1928, item 44 (26). There may of course have been other handwriting" (Blake Books, p. 455 and n. 5). Erdman notes that
plates acquired by Blake or Richard Edwards in contemplation of "on certain copperplate pages a distinctly late style appears in the
publishing further Nights of Young's poem. script, marked by the g which Blake adopted after Nov. 1802" and
13 states that "it is safer to conclude that the copperplate pages range
We can assume that Jerusalem was etched on both sides of
its copperplates because of paired platemark dimensions and the in inception from 1797 to 1803" (Poetr)and Prose of Blake, p. 817).
presence of platemakers' marks. (Many Milton plates can also be Yet even if some of the fine script was written as late as 1803, the
paired, but I know of no evidence of platemakers' marks.) sequence of copperplate hand to plain is not thereby upset.
14 17
Bentley, Blake Books, p. 225 n. 2, suggests that the Jeru- Bentley places page 42 as the last in a group he dates 1797
salem plates could have been made from the text panels of the Night and page 43 (illus. 2) the first in a group he dates "?1802" (but
Thoughts coppers. This procedure would have wasted a good deal see Erdman's statements on the date of the fine script in note 16,
of copper, leaving large but awkwardly shaped and probably useless above). These are also the last and first pages in groups once sep-
fragments. arately sewn, as the two distinct patterns of stab-holes indicate (see
15
The telltale fragments of white lines from the Moore en- Bentley, Blake Books, pp. 454-56).

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