1123 s15 Ms 22-1 PDF
1123 s15 Ms 22-1 PDF
This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner
Report for Teachers.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2015 series for most
Cambridge IGCSE®, Cambridge International A and AS Level components and some
Cambridge O Level components.
1 (a) Identify and write down the advantages and disadvantages of social networking sites,
as outlined in the passage.
1 mark Advantages
for each 1 People can get in touch with friends easily
correct [given]
point up
to a max. 2 (People can keep in) regular / daily contact
of 15 (with details of their friends’ lives)
Disadvantages
11 Relationships formed are too impersonal to
be described as real friendships [given]
17 People can’t relax /enjoy themselves (in the 17. Others / other
company of others) because they’re people / friends
wondering what their (social networking site) (alone) for
contacts / online friends are doing ‘contacts’
20 Trivial / inappropriate information (about you / 20. ‘Seeing you 20. Specific
people) might not impress your / their boss // having examples of
Trivial / inappropriate information (about you / fun…charming as inappropriate /
people) might have repercussions / effects in you do’ trivial information
the world of / at work / behaviour
(alone) for
example, fun at a
party
Additional information
If any content point is made in the wrong box, do not award the mark.
Accept own words or lifting.
If more than one content point appears under a single bullet point, award each content point
separately if clearly made.
If content point being made depends on information contained in another bullet point, withhold the
mark unless a clear link is made between the two points.
(b) Use your notes to write a summary of the advantages and disadvantages of social
networking sites, as outlined in the passage.
Candidates have now fleshed out their notes into a piece of formal, continuous prose.
The mark for Style incorporates TWO categories of writing, namely OWN WORDS and USE
OF ENGLISH. The table which follows on later page provides descriptors of the mark
levels assigned to these TWO categories.
In assessing the overall mark for Style, first of all assign the script to a mark level under the
category of OWN WORDS. Then arrive at the mark level for USE OF ENGLISH.
Under OWN WORDS, key pointers are: sustained, noticeable, recognisable but
limited, wholesale copying and complete transcript. The difference between
wholesale copying and complete transcript is that, whereas in wholesale copying there
is nothing / little that is original, the copying has been selective and directed at the
question, but with a complete transcript the candidate has started copying and
continued writing with little sense of a link to the question. Complete transcripts are
rare.
Under USE OF ENGLISH, take into consideration the accuracy of the writing, and the
ability to use original complex sentence structures.
Write marks for OWN WORDS and USE OF ENGLISH separately in a text box (found in
the marking palette) beneath the question. Add the marks for OWN WORDS and USE
OF ENGLISH together and divide by two. Raise any half marks to the nearest whole
number e.g. OW 3, UE 2, giving 3 to be entered in scoris marks column.
Use margin (either left or right) to indicate OWN WORDS assessment, and the body of
the script to indicate USE OF ENGLISH assessment. Under OWN WORDS, use either
T (text), O (own words), MR (manipulated or re-worked text) and / or IR
(irrelevant).Where the candidate has more or less written a wholesale copy, but has
substituted an odd word here and there (single word substitution) indicate these single
words with O above them. Otherwise use the margin only for assessment of OW.
Under USE OF ENGLISH, use the body of the script for annotations. For accuracy
assessment, use a cross for errors (over the errors) and for serious omissions. Please
do not use carets for omissions, as scoris records the number of crosses and this helps
to arrive at the correct mark. Indicate only serious errors. If the same error is made
more than once, e.g. omission of definite article, indicate it each time it is made. Below
follows a list of serious errors:
SERIOUS ERRORS
Mis-spellings of simple, basic words, e.g. were / where // to / too /two // their/ there.
Breakdown of sense.
Serious omissions, or serious intrusions e.g. of definite article. Ignore what are clearly slips.
Please indicate only serious errors. Putting crosses over minor errors can give a false
impression of the script.
For sentence structure merit, use ticks where appropriate, in the body of the script. Tick only
instances where the sentence structure is both complex and original, i.e. belonging to the two
top boxes in the Use of English column on the MS. Ticks, therefore, tend to be over relative
pronouns, present participles and conjunctions. Do not tick vocabulary: this will be taken into
consideration under assessment of OW.
Wrong or invented material: Put a cross in the margin to indicate a stretch / section of
wrong or invented material.
Short answers
While examiners are not asked to count words, candidates have been asked to write 150
words. There is no penalty for long answers but, if a script is OBVIOUSLY short, please
count the words, mark as normal (i.e. arrive at mark under OW and UE, then add together
and halve) and award marks to the following maxima:
2 Paragraph 2 gives two examples of ‘down time’. From your own knowledge or experience
give two examples of ‘down time.’ Do not use the examples given in the passage.
waiting (alone)
Additional information
3 From paragraph 4, select and write down two of the writer’s opinions. You may use the
words of the text or your own words.
1 mark (i)(Certainly) to describe a The views of critics of Lift of lines 27–29 ‘More
hundred people as your social networking sites are importantly…friendships’
‘best’ friends is (absolute) more important than the
nonsense. Excess denies views of supporters (of
social networking sites)
1 mark (ii)(In fact) most information
(posted) is (utterly) boring.
Excess denies
Additional information
4 From your reading of the whole passage, decide which one of the following statements is
true and tick the box you have chosen. [1 mark]
5 (a) What was the ‘obvious’ explanation for Monica’s ‘odd behaviour’?
1 mark old age / being (quite) old senility Lift of ‘I could not
decide.....old age or
not’ =0(N)
She was old enough /
had mental illness.
Her plan to get her
own way = 0(N)
She was becoming
old
Additional information
(b) What did the writer suspect was the real reason for Monica’s ‘odd behaviour’?
1 mark (It might be caused by a She liked to get her own Lift of ‘might it be
plan) to get her own way way // she liked to get caused.....own way?’
(an old lady’s prerogative) things done / do things her =0(N) Answer must
own way be distilled.
She was stubborn / wilful / an old lady’s
obstinate prerogative = 0(N)
Additional information
(c) Explain in your own words why ‘it was often hard to cope with’ the strands of Monica’s
conversation.
AND
Additional information.
This is an OWN WORDS question. Key words are MEMORY AND FORGETFULNESS and
CROSSED AND RECROSSED
Mark what you see, i.e. ignore wrong answers unless it contradicts a correct one.
Do not insist on synonym for ‘strands of conversation’ but a sensible context must be
established.
6 (a) In what two ways was Monica’s way of crossing the road ‘eccentric’?
1 mark (i) she didn’t look / check Lift of ‘she would cross Entire lift of lines
where she was going / to roads without so much as 7–10 (‘She would
left or right // she didn’t glancing to left or right’ cross…roads in
(even) glance to left or right Excess denies, verbatim or town’, i.e. inclusion of
otherwise reference to ‘drivers
would slam on their
brakes…shuddering
halt’ = 0 for the entire
question
1 mark (ii) she meandered / Lift of ‘(she) meandered She crossed / walked
zigzagged / wandered from across the busiest roads (in across / went across
side to side // didn’t cross in town)’. Excess denies. the busiest roads (in
a straight line/ by the most town)
direct route
She walked slowly
A general response
e.g. ‘she was
careless’
Additional information
(b) Pick out and write down the single word used later in the paragraph which continues
the idea of ‘eccentric’.
1 mark idiosyncrasies The use of the correct word More than one word
in a phrase or sentence
provided that it is
underlined or otherwise
highlighted
Additional information
(c) What did the writer think she would ‘never again’ do?
Additional information
7 (a) Explain fully what Cynthia and the writer learned with ‘the wisdom of hindsight’.
1 mark they should have told / They should have Lift of ‘neither Cynthia
warned / remonstrated with remonstrated with Monica nor I remonstrated
Monica not to take her when she said she’d take with her / Monica’ =
knitting // they should have her knitting (to a concert) 0(N)
told /warned / remonstrated Lift of ‘she insisted on
with Monica that you don’t They should have stopped taking her knitting’ =
take knitting to a concert Monica from taking her 0(N)
knitting They didn’t stop
Monica taking her
knitting to a concert
They shouldn’t have
taken Monica to a
concert
Additional information
(b) Explain in your own words how the writer felt sitting in the front row beside Monica.
Additional information
This is an OWN WORDS question. Key words are CONSPICUOUS and MORTIFIED
Mark what you see, i.e. ignore wrong answers unless it contradicts a correct one.
Do not insist on synonym for ‘from the outset’ but a sensible context must be established.
8 Explain fully why the pianist was ‘offended and embarrassed’ by Monica’s comment.
1 mark (i)she said she made her She compared her dress Lift of ‘I think ...curtains’ =
dress out of (old) curtains // with (old) curtains // said 0(N) but addition of ‘said
Monica had made a rude / her dress looked like (old) Monica’ = 1
unkind / derogatory / nasty curtains
/ bad / negative comment / Monica’s comment / it She made a rude remark
remark about her dress / meant her dress was ugly / about the pianist (alone) =
clothes hideous etc. 0 (N)
1 mark (ii) (she spoke loudly so Lift of ‘her stage The comment was made
that) everyone / all / the whisper....corner of the hall’ in front of everyone / in
audience could hear Excess denies. public
Lift of ‘her stage whisper
had reached every corner Including ‘fidgeted / trying
of the hall’ to get comfortable’ = 0(W)
Her comment ‘it echoed / in either limb in which it
resounded / reverberated occurs
throughout / in the hall’
Additional information
9 (a) Which one feature of ‘the atmosphere in the room’ made the occasion different from
other occasions when Monica did her knitting?
1 mark Silence / silent / no noise Quite for quiet She dropped her
/quietness needles = 0(N)
There was a wooden
floor =0(N)
Lift of ‘each time
....floor’ = 0(N)
Additional information
Question asks for one feature. If more than one feature is clearly given, award 0 even if one
of them is correct.
(b) What effect does the word ‘hissed’ have which would not be achieved by, for example,
the word ‘said’?
1 mark (Monica was) angry / Disapproval / it was spoken (Trying to be) quiet /
impatient / annoyed/ harshly / sharply silent / discreet / low
perturbed / exasperated / voice / quickly /
irritated / fed up whispering / contempt
= 0(N)
Additional information
1 mark she was distracted / put off She had a shock / surprise Monica was talking
/ disturbed / deterred by when Monica spoke / (alone) = 0(N)
Monica (talking / hissing) hissed
She lost concentration Monica distracted her / Monica hissed / she
because of Monica (talking) diverted her attention heard Monica = 0(N)
Monica confused her
She opened her eyes
= 0(N) // her eyes
were closed = 0(N)
Additional information
10 (a) Why do you think the writer tells us that Monica wasn’t deaf?
1 mark (To tell us / to suggest / She was acting / it was an (to tell us) she could
imply) she was pretending act hear (alone) =0(N)
(to be deaf) // wanted to
cause disruption // her She spoke intentionally She seemed to be
behaviour was a loudly deaf / she heard the
performance // she was attendant
showing off // she was She used an unnecessarily
attention-seeking loud voice She wanted to get her
own way
She behaved as if
she was deaf
Additional information
To give Monica an
ovation
Additional information
0(N) answers do not negate an otherwise correct answer. 0(W) answers negate an
otherwise correct answer.
(c) Explain in your own words what the writer decided about Monica’s ‘apparent senility’.
Additional information
This is an OWN WORDS question. Key words are RUSE and DELIGHT.
Mark what you see, i.e. ignore wrong answers unless it contradicts a correct one.
Answers linked specifically to leaving the concert e.g. ‘a plan to get pleasure from
leaving concert’ = 2
Do not reward acting if it simply means behaving. e.g. ‘the way she was acting’ = 0
11 Choose five of the following words. For each of them give one word or short phrase (of
not more than seven words) which has the same meaning that the word has in the
passage.
Additional information
For each word attempted, mark the first answer only when more than one answer is offered.
A comma or the word 'or' indicates a second attempt.
For two answers joined by ‘and’, allow one correct answer if the other answer is not wholly
wrong but neutral, e.g. ‘chaos and untidiness’ for ‘mayhem’.
For a short phrase answer, mark the first seven words only (RUBRIC). Credit a correct
element within this limit.
Ignore errors of tense and grammatical form but only if the meaning is correct.