Essay (Part 1)
Test 1, Part 1, Question 1 (see task on page 17)
What can young people do to
help protect and improve their
local environment?
‘There are many things young people can do to
‘protect and improve their local environment
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First of all, they can make sure that shings such as
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many people use cars, evento go very short distances,
Young people can try to use public transport or walk
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All these actions will make their areas look cleaner
cand more pleasant and alo belp save the world’
natural resources, We will all havea beter future if
young people do everything posible to help protect
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