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Addressing High Suicide Rates in the Mountain West
Lucia Garramone
Colorado State University
CO 300: Writing Arguments
Sean Waters
December 5, 2023
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Addressing High Suicide Rates in the Mountain West
Suicide is a prevalent issue in the U.S., but there are some states more affected than
others. In western states, specifically the Mountain West, suicide rates are disproportionately
higher. This is due to significant cultural differences and existing negative attitudes towards
mental illness. With what we know, and if we intend to increase suicide prevention, we must
address the stigma and implement new methods of education.
In the U.S., suicide is the 11th leading cause of death. It is also one of the top leading
causes of death among young adults and adolescents. “Suicide may be one of the leading causes
of death in the United States, but it receives a fraction of research money devoted to thwarting
other killers” (Morton, 2019). Mental illness is a common affliction and more people experience
suicidal thoughts than one may think, “Every year, at least 10 million U.S. adults experience
suicidal thoughts”(Morton, 2019). If we look at the populations most affected, western states
have the highest suicides rates; “The six primary Mountain West states — Idaho, Montana,
Wyoming, Nevada, and Colorado — regularly have some of the highest suicide rates in the
country” (Kauffman, 2023). To understand the stark and crucial differences between suicide rates
in the U.S., we need to consider the culture and environment.
One significant aspect of life in Mountain West states is the isolation. There is a higher
population of people living in rural areas, “many people in the West are scattered in those vast
expanses, isolated from each other and from mental health services” (Morton, 2019). A culture of
isolation can breed a few problems in terms of mental health care. In other countries, culture is
based on community and suicide rates are significantly lower. In the U.S., there is a wide culture
of individualism and the people living in the more isolated, rural areas are often hyper-
independent. In isolation, issues of limited resources and mental health stigma persist.
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The environment alone raises problems in these areas, “A lack of jobs and economic
opportunity may contribute to suicide risk, and these communities are often short on mental
health treatment options” (Siegler, 2018). Mental health resources can be scarce in rural areas.
Having access to mental health services is crucial to many, and sometimes there are no available
resources in a reasonable proximity. Not only that, but the resources that are available face long
wait times, “people seeking help in rural areas often have to wait weeks and drive miles for an
appointment” (Kauffman, 2023). This poses a problem for a person in crisis; they shouldn’t have
to wait or travel far to seek help, mental health services should be accessible to them. However,
the availability of resources is only one part of the problem. Whether or not resources are
available, many people don’t want to seek help, this issue is rooted in stigma.
Stigma is a negative attitude or belief, held by certain populations, regarding a particular
issue. The U.S. faces mental health stigma in a multitude of ways, but the Mountain West may be
experiencing a more specific affliction. A higher number of isolated populations can be a source
of problematic mentalities that could be described as a “culture of pathological self-reliance and
stoicism” (Morton, 2019). Common mentalities referred to as “cowboy mentality” and “rugged
individualism” promote self-reliance and hyper-independence. It’s the idea that relying or
depending on anyone else shows weakness. It highly stigmatizes mental illness and causes
individuals to feel too proud to ask for help, “Mental health stigma may directly produce a sense
of burdensomeness and disconnectedness to one’s support system that can lead to suicidal
ideation and, in some cases, to suicidal intent” (Minot, 2022). This makes stigma a highly
dangerous risk-factor for suicide, “It can cause people to feel isolated and alone, preventing them
from seeking out the help and support they need” (SonderMind, 2023). For this reason, it is
crucial that we attempt to change these stigmas.
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These issues affect many people, so it’s important we ask who can make the most change.
Adolescents are at an advantage to make the most change and they also have the greatest reasons
to instill these changes. As mentioned before, suicide is one of the top leading causes of death
among young adults and adolescents. That gives this group a great incentive to take part in
solving these problems. We have also seen this generation display consistent acts of advocacy
and concern for their community. This is the kind of care for our community that we need to
raise awareness for suicide prevention. More specifically, we should not only be targeting
adolescents, but the adolescents within these rural communities who are directly affected by
these issues, “targeting not the vulnerable people themselves, but those around them” (Kauffman,
2023). This highlights the importance of the ability to reach out and support others who are
struggling.
We need to bring the attention of these issues to the adolescents of our community, but
we also need to raise more awareness within the mental health care community itself. Mental
health care workers are crucial in the process of suicide prevention. We cannot only rely on the
support and education of our own community, mental health care workers are capable of making
the most viable changes. However, stigma still exists even within this system, “Healthcare
professionals’ attitudes toward working with suicidal patients are often negative, perhaps due to a
lack of comprehensive training on how to competently address suicidality” (La Guardia, 2022).
This current state of our healthcare makes addressing them a priority.
We can start making a change by breaking the stigma that negatively affects suicide rates.
It’s “…uncertainty [that] often contributes to the stigma around suicide, which can prevent
people from getting the help they need” (SonderMind, 2023). This is why we first need to
educate people on suicide. Learning about mental health can change the way we view these
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issues and how we talk about it to others. It can debunk stigmas rooted in myths and
misconceptions and with a greater understanding of the problem, we have more knowledge in
how to prevent it. Suicide is a difficult topic, so it is also important that we be careful and
thoughtful when discussing it with others; having compassion and avoiding judgment,
“Conversations around suicide should be had in a safe space that’s free of judgment or stigma”
(SonderMind, 2023). Creating a safer environment to have these conversations will make many
more willing to seek help. It will also make more people willing to speak up; speaking up
reduces the shame many fear when discussing mental health and suicide. Through educating,
reducing judgment, and speaking up, we can be better equipped to advocate for and support
those in need.
Education doesn’t guarantee prevention, but it lowers the risk. It is important that we
educate adolescents on prevalent mental health issues and we can do this by instilling programs
in schools. Teaching youth about suicide prevention can lower the risk, it “aims to teach people
how to identify signs that a person may be suicidal, how to talk to that person about their
thoughts and where to turn for help” (Watson, 2022). Bring these programs into schools seems to
be the most viable, “Public schools seem like a logical place to teach when and how to intervene,
since most people attend them at some point…” (Watson, 2022). This may be where we can
reach the most people and learning from a younger age promotes awareness and prevention.
Also, by making more people aware of how to notice the signs and how to help, we can lower
the suicide rates. Adolescents may be more trusting of their peers and education will make their
peers more equipped to help and create a more trusting environment.
It has also been suggested that we create more in-depth training programs for mental
health care workers for suicide prevention education. Due to existing negative attitudes towards
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mental illness, that even affect our healthcare system, suicide prevention training needs to be
more extensive. Current prevention training is limited to risk assessment and isn’t enough to
change current attitudes. Newer programs would be aimed at enhancing knowledge, attitudes,
and skills; it would be more comprehensive, collaborative, interactive, and self-reflective.
“Training consistently demonstrates positive short-term impacts on trainee suicide prevention
knowledge, attitudes, and perceived self-efficacy, and some evidence in objective skill
performance” (La Guardia, 2022). Increasing the overall understanding for helping suicidal
patients is crucial and would involve more community based plans.
Unfortunately, implementing suicide prevention tactics can be difficult, especially in
schools. There’s no denial that something needs to be done, but there are some controversies on
how it should be done. Suicide is a touchy subject and people are afraid to talk about it, but it
needs to be talked about. The reason people are so afraid to discuss it is rooted in myths and false
beliefs about suicide. One myth includes the belief that talking about suicide can influence
individuals to commit suicide. This is profoundly incorrect because the reality is that talking
about suicide creates a safer environment for people to speak up and seek help.
Even with the obstacles we face, difficulty implementing education and limited resources,
we can still play a part in suicide prevention. Though mental health resources are limited, we can
raise awareness of current resources that are available. By raising awareness and creating efforts
to break stigma, we can lower the risk of suicide and create a safer and ore supportive
community.
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References
Kauffman, G. (2023, July 1). Suicide rates on the rise in Idaho, Mountain West. AP News.
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La Guardia, A. C., Wright-Berryman, J., Cramer, R. J., Kaniuka, A. R., & Tufts, K. A. (2022).
Interprofessional Suicide Prevention Education. Crisis, 43(6), 531–538.
https://doi.org/10.1027/0227-5910/a000813
Morton, C. (2019, September 6). Suicide rates in the Mountain West are sky-high; now
researchers are asking why. oregonlive. https://www.oregonlive.com/news/g66l-
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seeking-answers.html
Minot, D. (2022, July 15). How mental health stigma drives suicide risk. Behavioral Health
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Siegler, K. (2018, October 23). How One Colorado town is tackling suicide prevention - starting
with the kids. NPR.
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is-tackling-suicide-prevention-starting-with-the-kids
Let’s talk: 5 ways to break the stigma around suicide. SonderMind. (n.d.).
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stigma-around-suicide/
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Watson, T. (2022, February 10). Reluctance to require suicide prevention education could cost
lives. The Hechinger Report. https://hechingerreport.org/reluctance-to-require-suicide-
prevention-education-could-cost-lives-but-its-complicated/
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Self-Assessment
For my essay, I feel that I captured my argument well. I intended to communicate how
crucial it is that we break stigma and be more educated in regards to suicide and suicide
prevention. I made an in-depth explanation of all the exigencies: isolation, cultural stigma, and
limited resources.
I tried to pinpoint who I thought best to be the target audience of this rhetorical argument,
specifically adolescents within the community. But, I thought it would be viable to include
healthcare workers as well, seeing as both could make great changes.
I created mostly in-depth explanations of what these groups of people could do to make a
change; implement education and break stigma. I did not have a counterargument really, but I
highlighted some of the possible constraints. Like the hesitation to implement prevention
methods due to fear and myths.
The one thing I would have liked to improve is finding more information on how to
successfully implement prevention methods. I found a lot of ideas in my research, but I mostly
came across reasons why schools have been unable to move forward with these programs. I
would want to learn more about what we could do to guarantee the implementation of education.