Abbas & Herdi (2018) - Solving The Students' Problems in Writing Argumentative Essay Through Collaborative Writing Strategy
Abbas & Herdi (2018) - Solving The Students' Problems in Writing Argumentative Essay Through Collaborative Writing Strategy
Herdi
English Education Department, Faculty of Teacher Training and Education, Universitas Lancang
Kuning Pekanbaru, Indonesia
E-mail: [email protected]
APA Citation: Abbas, M. F. F., & Herdi, H. (2018). Solving the students’ problems in writing
argumentative essay through collaborative writing strategy. English Review:
Journal of English Education, 7(1), 105-114. doi: 10.25134/erjee.v7i1.1499.
Abstract: This research is based on the students’ problems in writing argumentative essay,
especially in developing and organizing ideas, using good grammar and diction, and applying
correct writing mechanics, such as the use of capital letter, spelling, and punctuation. The purpose
of this research is to solve the students’ problems in writing argumentative essay through
collaborative writing strategy. The design employed in this research was classroom action
research. The participants involved in this research were 23 students of English Education
Department, Faculty of Teacher Training and Education, University of Lancang Kuning
Pekanbaru, Indonesia. The instruments used in this research were writing test, field note,
observation checklist, and interview. Based on the result of the test, the students’ score had
reached the criteria of success set, and it was significantly improved from the result before the
research conducted. The mean score of the mid-term test was 54.9, and the mean score of the cycle
test was 74.3. In addition, based on the data gained from the field note, observation checklist, and
interview, it was found that the students were active, creative, and enjoy the learning process. In
conclusion, the use of collaborative writing strategy can solve the students’ problems in writing
argumentative essay as well.
Keywords: writing skill; writing aspects; argumentative essay; collaborative writing strategy;
classroom action research.
the scoring rubric and final score category (Adapted from Abbas, 2015, 2018).
provided in Table 1 and Table 2 below
introduction activity, the researchers the students were asked to display their
conducted a warming up activity in the form written work in front of the class. This was
of recalling what students understood about done so that all students in the class could
the argumentative essay and how to write it understand and could give feedback on their
down. This was done to make sure whether friends’ work. At this meeting, the students
the students understood about argumentative got good input in learning to write
essay or not. Argumentative essay.
After the recalling process done, the At the fourth meeting, the researchers
researchers provided an example of an gave an assessment toward the students’
argumentative essay to students to be work in writing argumentative essay. The
analyzed or discussed together. Then, the assessment focused on aspects of content
researchers asked the students to look for the (topic development), Organization (structure
main idea of the essay, understood the of paragraph), vocabulary (diction/word
development of the idea, and determined the choice), grammar (sentence sturcture), and
language characteristics used, such as tenses mechanics (writing mechanism). At this
and other aspects of writing. Then, the meeting, the researchers assessed in terms of
researchers asked the students to exchange content that can be seen from the topics
their worksheets with their friends to get development capabilities at the
feedback. Argumentative Essay writing. Then, the
After the above process was completed, researchers assessed in terms of organization
the researchers introduced a teaching which can be seen from the paragraph
strategy called Collaborative Writing structure in the writing. Then, the
strategy and its implementation in the researchers assessed in terms of vocabulary
teaching and learning process. After that, the that can be seen from the students’ ability in
researchers asked the students to make a word selection in the argumentative essay
group in pairs and determined one student as writing. Furthermore, the researchers
a writer and other students as helper. assessed in terms of grammar that can be
Furthermore, the researchers provided a seen from the good grammatical abilities of
topic about Education to be written by the the argumentative essay writing. Finally, the
students into an Argumentative essay. Then, researchers assessed in terms of mechanics
the researchers asked the students to find that can be seen from the ability of the
many ideas that should be written into the writing mechanism in the argumentative
initial draft. Then, the researchers assigned essay.
the students to work at home. At the fifth meeting, the cycle test was
At the second meeting, the students were administered. Therefore, the researchers
asked to submit the assignment given at the carried out the stage of giving a writing test
first meeting (generating idea and drafting). to students to measure the extent of student
Then, the researchers gave comments on the achievement in the process of writing
students’ work both in spoken and written argumentative essays. After the test, the
comments. After giving comments on researchers assessed the students’ work and
students’ work, the researchers assigned the the results of the assessment can be seen in
students to revise and edit again the drafts Table 3.
that have been made. The revising and Table 3. The result of test cycle
editing process were focused on the use of Test Score Category
appropriate language features, correct choice Cycle 74.3 Good
of words, and correct use of writing
mechanics, such as spelling, punctuation, Based on the result of the test cycle
and capital letters. provided in Table 3, it can bee seen that the
At the third meeting, the learning process result of test cycle was in good category. It
focused on publishing stage. At this stage, means that this score was in good level of
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ability. The score achieved by the students 54.9 and the score for the cycle test was
was 74.3. In relation to the result of the test 74.3.
cycle, the comparison of the result of the test In relation to the the results above, in the
cycle and mid term test result can clearly be mid term test, there is no students who got
seen at Table 4. the score above the standard score. The
Table 4. The result of the writing tests score that the students obtained was the
No Test Score Category score that was in fair and poor score
1. Mid term 54.9 Poor category. Furthermore, from 23 students
2. Cycle 74.3 Good
who were participated in this research, 12
students were achieved fair score category,
Based on the information provided in and 11 students got the poor score category.
Table 4, it can be seen that the average score In the cycle test, it was found that the
of the students mid term test was 54.9 and it overall score of students was in good
was categorized into poor level of ability. category. From 23 students involved in this
However, after conducting the research for 5 research, there were 5 people who got very
meetings (1 cycle), the average score of the good category, 12 people got good category,
students increased significantly. The mean and 6 students got fair score category.
score of the students in this test was 74.3, Furthermore, the details can be seen in Table
and it was categorized into good level of 5.
ability. Table 5. The comparison of participants
Referring to the results of the tests amount and the score categories achieved
showed on the Table 3 and Table 4, the No Tests Amount of Score
results of the writing tests obtained by Participants Category
students can be described in Diagram 1. 1. Mid 12 Fair
term 11 Poor
5 Very Good
2. Cycle 12 Good
6 Fair
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Diagram 2 shows the criteria assessed and chronological order (did not organize
were the development of a deep topic paragraph well and did not show good
(thorough development of topic) in the coherence and chronological order) with a
category of very good, related to the topic poor category.
but not detailed in the explanation (relevant Third, for the aspect of vocabulary, the
to topic but lacks details) with good score ontained was 15 and it was in good
category, inadequate development of topic in category. The criteria assessed were about
the fair category, and does not show a the ability in using correct word choice in
scientific understanding of the topic (do not the category of very good, using accurate but
show knowledge of topic) with a poor ineffective diction (employ accurate diction,
category. but not effective) with good category, using
First, in the aspect of content in the cycle diction or words that were less precise but
test, the score obtained was 16.5 and it was the meaning of the word was not too vague
categorized into good score category. There (employ lacks accuracy of dictionaries, but
was no problem in developing the topic of meaning not obscured) in the fair category,
the assigned task. Second, in the aspect of there was an error in the selection of diction
organization, the score was 21.7 and it was or word form and meaning of the word was
in the fair category. According to the scoring unclear (errors in applying diction or word
rubric, the criteria assessed was to compile form, and meaning obscured) with the poor
paragraphs well and show good category.
chronological coherence and arrangement Fourth, for the grammar aspect, the score
(organize paragraph well and show good ontained was 13.5 and it was in the fair
coherence and chronological orders) in the category. The criteria assessed were about
category of very good, poorly structured the ability in using good grammar, such as
which was very good (loosely organized but pronouns, subject and verb agreement, and
ideas stand out) with good categories, there many others. It covered; 1) the use of correct
was no idea or coherence and incoherent grammar, pronouns, subject-verb agreement,
ideas and lack of logical sequencing in the and so on, with very good category, 2) there
fair category, and paragraphs were not well were some errors in the use of tenses,
organized and did not show good coherence pronoun, subject-verb agreement and so on,
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but the meaning was not vague (several very few errors in the writing mechanism
errors of tense, pronouns, subject-verb (very little errors of mechanics) with very
agreement, but meaning not obscured) with good category, 2) some errors that occured
good category, 3) there were many errors in in the writing mechanics but the meaning
the use of tenses, pronouns, the suitability of was not vague (few errors of mechanics, but
the subject and verb and so on and their meaning not obscured) with good category,
meaning were vague (major errors of tense, 3) many errors occured in the writing
pronouns, subject-verb agreement, and so mechanics and the meaning was fuzzy
on, and meaning obscured) in the fair (many errors of mechanics, and meaning
category, and 4) not mastering the sentence obscured) with the fair category, and 4)
structure and dominated by errors (no dominated by errors in the writing
mastery of sentence structure and dominated mechanics with poor category. In other
by errors) in the poor category. words, if the overall average score was
Fifth, in the mechanics aspect, the score obtained then the score would be in good
obtained was 7.6 and it was categorized into level ability. The details is presented in
fair category. The criteria assessed were; 1) Table 6.
In accordance with the information for vocabulary in mid-term was 11.9, and it
provided in Table 6, it can be seen that the improved in the test cycle to 15. For
scores obtained by the students in the mid- grammar aspect, the score in mid-term was
term test were lower than the scores obtained 9.8, and in the test cycle was 13.5. At last,
in the cycle test. The score for content in the the score for mechanics in mid-term test was
mid-term test was 12.6 and it was improved 7.2 and it was improved to 7.6 in the test
in the test cycle to 16.5. The score for cycle. Furthermore, the clear information
organization in mid-term test was 13.2 and about the comparison of the writing test can
improved in the test cycle to 21.7. The score be seen in Diagram 3.
Diagram 3. Significant comparison between mid-term results and cycle test results
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In line with the information in Table 6 mid-term test can also be seen in Diagram 4.
and Diagram 3, the results of the students’
The Diagrams show the comparison of the research until cycle 1. It means that the
students’ test results in writing research was not continued to the next cycle.
argumentative essay. It can be clearly seen It was because there was a match between
that the students’ achievement improves achievement and the criteria of success set in
from mid term results to the cycle test. In this research. The scores achieved by the
other words, the students scores in the cycle students were higher than the minimum
test were higher than the mid term scores. It passing score.
means that there has been an improvement in In line with the previous explanation, it
the students’ ability in writing can be stated that good ability of the students
Argumentative essay after conducting the in writing argumentative essays was
research using Collaborative Writing basically influenced by the students’ good
strategy. Thus, it can be stated that the ability in applying the Collaborative Writing
implementation of the Collaborative Writing strategy. This research result was in line
strategy in learning Argumentative essay with previous research conducted by Abbas,
writing could help students in improving Fachrurrazy, & Wahjudi (2013), Zuhri
their writing skill. (2009), Wahyuni (2017), Soraya (2016), and
Based on the results obtained from each Lestari, Setyowati, Sukmawan, and Latief
research instrument, it can be stated that the (2017) about the implementation of
ability of the 4th semester students of English collaborative writing strategy in improving
Education Department, Faculty of Teacher the students’ writing skill. Based on the
Training and Education, University of results of this research, it was proven that the
Lancang Kuning in Academic Year implementation of the collaborative writing
2017/2018 in writing argumentative essay strategy in the learning process could
were categorized into good level of ability. improve the students’ skill in writing.
Then, the researchers decided to complete
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researchers also would like to say thank to essay writing help develop leaners' critical
LPPM and team of Universitas Lancang thinking. SUST Journal of Humanities, 16(4).
Isnawati, U.M. (2009). Improving the writing ability
Kuning Pekanbaru, Indonesia who provided of the 11th grade students of MA Hasyim Asy’ari
good service for the researchers during the Kembangbahu Lamongan through the
research. At last, the appreciation goes to the implementation of the scaffolding strategy.
research assistants, head of English Unpublished Thesis. Malang: Universitas Negeri
Education Department, and head of UP2M Malang.
Lestari, Setyowati, S., Sukmawan, & Latief, M. A.
of FKIP UNILAK who supported totally (2017). Solving the students’ problems in writing
during the research. argumentative essay through the provision of
planning. A Journal of Culture, English
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