Certainly!
Here's the corrected and enhanced storyboard for the 7up ad:
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### Storyboard for 7up Ad
#### Scene 1: Mahira Khan on the Street
**Visual**: Mahira Khan, wearing a green and yellow dress with a white dupatta, is sweating and
looking tired as she walks down a scorching street. She's holding a small green grocery bag in one hand.
She stops and watches a TV from outside a shop.
**TV News Audio**: "Aaj ki taza khabar! Hukumat ki taraf se ek aur mehngai ka jhatka! Khane peene ki
qeemat barhane ka faisla."
#### Scene 2: Mahira’s Reaction
**Visual**: Mahira looks at her small grocery haul and sighs.
**Mahira (thinking aloud)**: "Ek to yeh mehngai, aur upar se yeh garmi! Din ba din barhti ja rahi hai...
Aisa lagta hai zindagi ke saare mazay khatam ho gaye."
#### Scene 3: The Crowded Shop
**Visual**: Mahira notices a shop bustling with people.
**Mahira (curious)**: "Yeh itna rush kyun hai?"
#### Scene 4: Mahira Approaches Two Girls
**Visual**: Mahira stops two girls wearing white and yellowish dresses, who are leaving the shop,
looking refreshed.
**Mahira**: "Yahan kya ho raha hai?"
**Girl 1 (excited)**: "Aray bhen, aap bhi jaiye! Sirf 60 rupees mein thandak ka maza le lo!"
**Girls**: (giggle and laugh as they leave)
#### Scene 5: Mahira at the Shop
**Visual**: Mahira walks towards the shop, which is green and yellow on the outside and has a fridge
inside. She approaches the counter.
**Mahira**: (to shopkeeper) "Akhir kaun se mazay le loon?"
#### Scene 6: Fahad Mustafa, the Shopkeeper
**Visual**: Fahad Mustafa, wearing a green hat and green shirt with lemons printed on it, and white
pants, turns around with a smile.
**Fahad Mustafa**: "Sirf 60 rupees mein 7up ka maza le lo! Wohi tazgi ka ehsas, wohi thandak... ab sirf
60 rupees mein!"
#### Scene 7: The Refreshing 7up
**Visual**: Fahad opens a fridge, and Mahira feels a cold breeze. He hands her a chilled bottle of 7up.
She opens it, takes a refreshing sip, and smiles.
**Mahira**: (smiling) "Wah, kya tazgi hai!"
#### Scene 8: The Crowd Joins In
**Visual**: The crowd, along with Fahad, cheerfully exclaims.
**Crowd & Fahad**: "To phir, 1, 2, 3, 7up ka maza sirf 60 rupees mein le lo!"
#### Scene 9: Closing Shot
**Visual**: Mahira, now looking refreshed and happy, raises her 7up bottle.
**Text on Screen**: "7up - Tazgi ka ehsas, ab sirf 60 rupees mein!"
**Audio**: A refreshing jingle plays in the background as the logo and tagline appear.
---
This version includes the necessary corrections and further clarifies the scenes for a more cohesive and
engaging advertisement.
Certainly! Here's the corrected and enhanced storyboard for the 7up ad:
---
### Storyboard for 7up Ad
#### Scene 1: Mahira Khan on the Street
**Visual**: Mahira Khan, wearing a green and yellow dress with a white dupatta, is sweating and
looking tired as she walks down a scorching street. She's holding a small green grocery bag in one hand.
She stops and watches a TV from outside a shop.
**TV News Audio**: "Aaj ki taza khabar! Hukumat ki taraf se ek aur mehngai ka jhatka! Khane peene ki
qeemat barhane ka faisla."
#### Scene 2: Mahira’s Reaction
**Visual**: Mahira looks at her small grocery haul and sighs.
**Mahira (thinking aloud)**: "Ek to yeh mehngai, aur upar se yeh garmi! Din ba din barhti ja rahi hai...
Aisa lagta hai zindagi ke saare mazay khatam ho gaye."
#### Scene 3: The Crowded Shop
**Visual**: Mahira notices a shop bustling with people.
**Mahira (curious)**: "Yeh itna rush kyun hai?"
#### Scene 4: Mahira Approaches Two Girls
**Visual**: Mahira stops two girls wearing white and yellowish dresses, who are leaving the shop,
looking refreshed.
**Mahira**: "Yahan kya ho raha hai?"
**Girl 1 (excited)**: "Aray bhen, aap bhi jaiye! Sirf 60 rupees mein thandak ka maza le lo!"
**Girls**: (giggle and laugh as they leave)
#### Scene 5: Mahira at the Shop
**Visual**: Mahira walks towards the shop, which is green and yellow on the outside and has a fridge
inside. She approaches the counter.
**Mahira**: (to shopkeeper) "Akhir kaun se mazay le loon?"
#### Scene 6: Fahad Mustafa, the Shopkeeper
**Visual**: Fahad Mustafa, wearing a green hat and green shirt with lemons printed on it, and white
pants, turns around with a smile.
**Fahad Mustafa**: "Sirf 60 rupees mein 7up ka maza le lo! Wohi tazgi ka ehsas, wohi thandak... ab sirf
60 rupees mein!"
#### Scene 7: The Refreshing 7up
**Visual**: Fahad opens a fridge, and Mahira feels a cold breeze. He hands her a chilled bottle of 7up.
She opens it, takes a refreshing sip, and smiles.
**Mahira**: (smiling) "Wah, kya tazgi hai!"
#### Scene 8: The Crowd Joins In
**Visual**: The crowd, along with Fahad, cheerfully exclaims.
**Crowd & Fahad**: "To phir, 1, 2, 3, 7up ka maza sirf 60 rupees mein le lo!"
#### Scene 9: Closing Shot
**Visual**: Mahira, now looking refreshed and happy, raises her 7up bottle.
**Text on Screen**: "7up - Tazgi ka ehsas, ab sirf 60 rupees mein!"
**Audio**: A refreshing jingle plays in the background as the logo and tagline appear.
---
This version includes the necessary corrections and further clarifies the scenes for a more cohesive and
engaging advertisement.
