How To Win GKS (Ebook)
How To Win GKS (Ebook)
written by
Ace Apolonio
2016 GKS-U Awardee
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ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Ace Apolonio
I am a 2016 Undergraduate Global
Manager in Seoul.
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DISCLAIMER
Please note that I am no longer associated with the Global Korea Scholarship
(GKS) or the National Institute for International Education (NIIED) since my
graduation from Yonsei University in 2021. My GKS mentorship program is a
registered entity, distinct and separate from these organizations.
The contents of this short ebook are the culmination of extensive research,
analyzing the experiences of thousands of students who have applied for the GKS
over the past five years.
I sincerely hope that you appreciate the time and effort invested in writing this
eBook. My journey and experiences, coupled with the extensive research
undertaken, have been channeled into creating a resource that I believe will be
immensely beneficial for those embarking on the GKS application journey. It is my
earnest desire that this book not only serves as a practical guide but also inspires
and empowers you to pursue your academic and professional goals with
confidence and clarity.
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“Education is the passport to the future, for tomorrow
belongs to those who prepare for it today.”
– Malcolm X
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Introduction
Our Communities
Contacts
HOW I WON GKS
Here's a story that I hope encourages you to always give your best, no matter
where you are.
In 2014, I tried to apply to the Global Korea Scholarship (GKS) for the first time and
didn't succeed. Only the top 2 out of 10 people in the Embassy Track interview
round got the scholarship, and I ended up being the 3rd on the list. This came after
failing three other scholarship programs I applied to, such as MEXT, CGSP, and
Stipendium Hungaricum.
When I found out I was so close to getting the Global Korea Scholarship, I called
the Korean Embassy in the Philippines, asking them to consider me even as a
waitlisted applicant. Unfortunately, they refused. I also contacted NIIED, but they
said they couldn't do anything. I felt desperate because I graduated the year
before, and my parents couldn't afford to support my college education anymore.
I was heartbroken because I believed the scholarship could finally change my life
and my family's situation. I grew up in a poor neighborhood, and my parents
worked abroad for minimum wage. I knew I couldn't rely on anyone else to save me.
After a month of feeling down, I went outside, looked at the moon (quite
dramatically), and told myself that I wouldn't give up until I got this scholarship.
Tears rolled down my face as I imagined what it would be like to study in South
Korea. I could already see myself playing in the snow, something that doesn't
happen in my country, the Philippines. I had a dream, and I was determined to
make it come true.
For the next year, as I waited for the next application round in October for
undergraduates, I studied Korean language and participated in various online
competitions. One of them even led me to win a trip to Japan.
I wasn't ready for that question, but what I said turned out to be the answer that
mattered. I shared something like, "In the past year, I faced some of the most
challenging failures in my life. Despite that, I persevered. No one else is going to
do it for me. If I don't get this scholarship, it means I'm still not ready, and someone
else is. I'll try again next year. I'll keep trying until you think I deserve it." They
didn't have any more questions, and I left feeling proud. I gave it my all, and I had
no regrets.
A week later, I received a call from a lady. "Congratulations, you've passed the
first round of the Global Korea Scholarship."
I couldn't hold back my tears. I remember my knees giving in, and my grandmother,
who understood what was happening, cried in our little kitchen, hugging me. She
said, "Your life will never be the same, son. You worked hard. I saw you every night
preparing and practicing. I am proud of you."
Today, my plans have taken a slight detour, but I've been in Korea for almost 8
years now. I've secured a stable job in a good company and am also working on
building my own business on the side. Each year, I run an initiative in my
neighborhood where I started feeding young underprivileged children and giving
them gifts on Christmas day. I've upgraded our house, saved enough to start a few
other businesses, including the mentorship program for the Global Korea
Scholarship (GKS). Now, I can assist other students who share the same dreams I
once had.
I don't consider myself special. In fact, the students who didn't get the scholarship
when I applied had better grades, backgrounds, and profiles than I did. What I
believe set me apart was how I presented myself. I rewrote my essay over 100
times, seeking feedback from more than 20 people, including friends and
teachers, to ensure it was the best it could be. With my mentorship program,
students no longer need to go through such efforts. They have access to over 50
essays from previous winners, and I've helped more than 120 students secure the
scholarship by teaching them the proper way to write their essays and prepare
their documents. Many fail simply because they didn't read the guidelines
properly, and I'm here to prevent that from happening and maximize their chances
of success.
I share this not just to promote my mentorship program, but to highlight its value. I
spent four years curating it, recording over 20 hours of workshops covering every
aspect of the application process and all the strategies needed to pass easily.
I hope my story has inspired you. I'm still at the beginning, aware that more
challenges lie ahead. I'll face more failures than victories, but I remain hopeful
because now I have a stronger mindset.
If you do your best in everything that matters to you, the only inevitable
result is getting closer to your goal. So, whether you fail or not on your
first try, maybe try a second time. Eventually, you’ll exhaust all that stops
you. Success then becomes natural.
– Ace Apolonio
INTRODUCTION
GKS IS A POINT-BASED
SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION.
The first thing you need to know about GKS is it’s a point-based system. How do I
know this? Look at this section on the guideline;
The term "total allocated points" refers to a criterion in which each element of the
application is assigned a maximum number of points, cumulatively amounting to
100%. While I do not have direct knowledge of the point allocation for other parts
of the application, my experience over the past five years in mentorship students,
and helping more than 120 of them pass the GKS, has taught me that the essays
are significantly weighted. Based on an educated guess, they might account for
around 30% of the total, and the recommendation letters about 15%. Therefore,
students should prioritize writing strong essays. The other application
components, such as grades, experiences, university, family background, and
country of origin, are fixed and beyond control at the time of application, so
there's no need to worry about them. The aspects you can control include your
Personal Statement, Statement of Purpose/Study Plan, Letters of
Recommendation, University and Track Choices, and Interview performance. I will
reveal some of the secret tips I offer to my students in this short book.
CHAPTER I
PERSONAL STATEMENT
Your personal statement is a crucial component of your application for several
reasons. Firstly, it is estimated to comprise about 30% of the total points
allocation. Secondly, it represents you to the reviewers of your application. It is
your first impression to them. Through your essay, they gain insight into who you
are both as a person and as a student. The way you use language reflects your
intellectual abilities, while the voice in your writing offers them a view of your
perspective on the world around you.
the structure—
Most students write their essays without considering the structure. They follow
the prompts and answer them, but that's just the first step. There are numerous
aspects to writing a Personal Statement (PS).
Once you have established the structure, review the prompts on the form and
determine their placement. After finalizing the structure and the placement of the
prompts, proceed to fill in the content. This approach is how you should write the
PS.
CHAPTER I
here are a few more tips for PS taken from a long list of tips I provide to my
students in the mentorship program:
Official Formatting and Style: The visual layout of your essay is crucial. A
minimum font size of 11 ensures readability, while margins of at least 1.27cm
create a clean, professional appearance. Line spacing and paragraph breaks aren't
just about fitting words on a page, they guide the reader's eye and help prevent
fatigue. Imagine reading a dense block of text versus one that's neatly spaced –
the latter is always more inviting.
Effective Introduction: The opening lines are like the front door to your essay. A
compelling first sentence, like “When I was 15, my pet parakeet died in my arms.”
immediately grabs attention. The sentences that follow should build on this,
creating a blend of curiosity and insight, leading the reader eagerly into the heart
of your essay.
Essay Theme Consistency: Your essay should revolve around a central theme
introduced in the first sentence. If you start with a theme of overcoming adversity,
each part of your essay should somehow tie back to this, ensuring a cohesive
narrative that doesn't veer off course.
Tone and Style: An academic essay should be engaging but not casual. Avoid
conversational phrases, rhetorical questions, or overly dramatic statements.
Instead, opt for a style that's informed, clear, and lets the reader see the world
through your lens.
CHAPTER I
Content Balance: An essay is not the place to get bogged down in excessive detail
on one point. It's about balance. If you find yourself writing three paragraphs
about one minor aspect of your topic, it's time to edit down and redistribute your
focus.
Clarity and Brevity: Being concise is key. Overly long paragraphs can dilute your
message. Instead, aim for precision and impact. Every sentence should serve a
clear purpose.
Motivation for Studying in Korea: Generic reasons like “Korea is popular” won’t
stand out. Be specific – perhaps you're interested in Korea’s advancements in your
field, or there’s a particular professor whose work aligns with your research
interests.
Formal Writing Standards: In formal writing, contractions can seem out of place.
Using full forms like “do not” and “cannot” maintains a professional tone.
Plagiarism Warning: Your essay must be your original work. Even unintentional
plagiarism can be a serious issue, so always ensure your writing is uniquely yours,
reflecting your personal voice and experiences.
Describing Experiences: Don’t just list what you’ve done; tell a story. How did
these experiences contribute to your choice of major or personal growth? For
example, instead of saying “I worked on a project,” explain how that project
challenged you and what you learned from it.
CHAPTER I
Verb Tense Consistency: Consistent use of verb tenses is crucial for clarity. Past
experiences should be described in the past tense, and ongoing activities in the
present tense.
Essay Relevance and Precision: Evaluate every sentence for its importance to
your narrative. Remove fluff or redundant statements to make your essay more
powerful and focused.
Avoiding Overused Phrases: Steer clear of clichés. Instead, use fresh and original
language to make your essay memorable and engaging.
Paragraph Formatting: Clear paragraph breaks enhance the structure and flow of
your essay. It's not just about aesthetics; it helps the reader process your ideas
more effectively.
Concrete Reasoning: Be specific about why you want to study in Korea. Connect
your reasons to your academic and professional goals to demonstrate clear,
thought-out intentions.
Thematic Consistency: Keep revisiting your main theme throughout the essay.
This thematic thread should weave through every part of your essay, maintaining a
strong narrative flow.
CHAPTER I
Final Sentence Impact: The final sentence is your closing statement. Make sure it
resonates with the reader, tying back to the theme introduced at the start.
Incorporating Time Elements: Use time references (like dates or durations) to give
context to your experiences. This helps the reader understand the timeline of your
academic and professional journey.
Strong Reasons for Choosing South Korea: Your reasons for choosing to study in
South Korea should be specific and tied to your academic and professional
aspirations. Research and articulate why South Korea is the ideal place for your
studies.
Selecting Experiences: Choose two or three significant experiences that are most
relevant to your intended major. Explain these in depth using the STAR format.
CHAPTER II
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
Your statement of purpose or study plan essay is not a traditional essay like the
personal statement (PS). It is more of a templated document where you can
address specific topics, such as your language study plan, study goals, detailed
university study plan, and future plans. These are essentially pieces of information
you cannot include in your PS because, if you recall, the PS is limited to past,
present, and near future events. The SOP serves as an extension of this as it talks
about the far future.
the structure—
The first section of the Statement of Purpose (SOP) should detail your plans for
language study. Discuss how you intend to study Korean and English, as these are
the primary languages you will use. This section should include intricate details,
such as the number of hours you plan to study, how you will structure your day,
and what resources you will use.
In this section of the SOP, I advise my students to separate the 'Goal of Study' and
the 'Detailed Study Plan' for clarity. For the Goal of Study, you need to explain why
you have chosen to study in South Korea as opposed to other countries. What are
your aspirations with your education in Korea? Whether it's working in a specific
company or becoming a researcher, your goals should be detailed. For the Detailed
Study Plan, similarly to the language study plan, describe how you will approach
your classes, including the specifics of your curriculum.
Future Plans
In this part, I instruct my students to divide their future plans into short-term, mid-
term, and long-term goals. These are the plans you have for after your studies in
Korea.
CHAPTER II
here are a few more tips for SOP taken from a long list of tips I provide to my
students in the mentorship program:
Inclusion of Specific Details: Incorporate specifics like the titles of the books
you intend to read, the particular research topics you are interested in, and the
exact time you allocate for each activity. For example, “I plan to read ‘The
Elegant Universe’ by Brian Greene to deepen my understanding of string
theory, allocating one hour each night for this purpose.”
Clear Section Headings: Make sure to include clear headings like “Goal of
Study” and “Study Plan” in your SOP. This helps in making your document more
structured and easier for the reader to navigate. For example, under the “Goal
of Study” section, you might outline your long-term academic and career
objectives, whereas the “Study Plan” section would detail the steps you’ll take
to achieve these goals.
Understanding Goals vs. Plans: It’s crucial to differentiate between your goals
(what you hope to achieve) and your plan (how you will achieve it). A goal might
be “to become fluent in Korean,” while the plan would detail the specific
actions to achieve this, like “enrolling in an intensive Korean language course,
practicing with native speakers for an hour daily, and using language learning
apps such as Duolingo.”
Plan Details: Your plan should include the resources you'll use, the courses
you'll take, and the amount of time you'll dedicate to each activity. For
example, “I plan to take the Advanced Microeconomics course offered by
Professor Lee and allocate 15 hours per week for study and research.
Additionally, I will use resources like the Econometrics Lab and JSTOR for
accessing research papers.”
CHAPTER II
Tailor your SOP for each application. Research the specific university,
program, and faculty members to understand what they are looking for in a
candidate. Customize your SOP to reflect how your goals and interests align
with what the program offers. For instance, if applying to a university known
for its research in renewable energy, highlight your interest and any relevant
experience in that area.
CHAPTER III
LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION
The letter of recommendation is another crucial document in your application. It
reveals how you performed as a student from the perspective of an academic
authority. Many students overlook this and simply request their recommenders to
write a generic LOR. It is quite evident which LORs are of high quality and which
are not. A telltale sign of a templated LOR is if the student's name can be replaced
and the letter would still make sense for another student.
the structure—
Introduction:
Writer's Identification: The recommender should introduce themselves, stating
their name, position, and relation to the applicant (how they know the
applicant and for how long).
Purpose of the Letter: Briefly mention that the purpose of the letter is to
recommend the applicant for the specific scholarship.
Comparison to Peers:
If possible, compare the applicant to peers to emphasize their standing. This
can help the scholarship committee gauge the applicant’s relative strengths.
Connection to Scholarship:
Tailor the recommendation to the specific scholarship. Explain how the
applicant’s qualities and achievements make them a suitable candidate for
this particular scholarship.
Conclusion:
Summarize the key points made in the letter.
Express a strong, unequivocal endorsement of the applicant for the
scholarship.
Provide a way for the scholarship committee to contact you for further
information if needed.
CHAPTER III
here are a few more tips for LOR taken from a long list of tips I provide to my
students in the mentorship program:
If the recommender only vaguely mentions your knowledge and skills without
delving into specifics, especially in the context of your intended field, it's a red
flag. For example, a good letter for a computer science applicant would detail
their proficiency in programming languages or specific projects. A weak letter
might just mention "being good at computers" without any details.
3. Interchangeable Content
If your name in the letter can be easily replaced with someone else’s without
affecting the overall message, the letter is likely too generic. Personalization is
key. A letter that says "Student A shows a strong understanding of engineering
principles" is less impactful than one that says "In their final year project, Student
A innovated a cost-effective bridge design that was recognized in a national
engineering competition."
CHAPTER III
High Quality
High-quality letters come from professors who not only know you well but are also
related to your intended major. These letters not only vouch for your academic
abilities but also attest to your skills and potential in the specific field you are
pursuing. For instance, a physics major would benefit immensely from a letter
from a physics professor who can discuss their research abilities and conceptual
understanding.
Medium Quality
Medium-quality letters might include one from a professor in your major and
another from a different academic area or a university official like a Dean. These
letters are still valuable, especially if they highlight qualities like leadership,
initiative, or other skills relevant across disciplines. For example, a letter from a
literature professor for a biology student might discuss their exceptional research
and communication skills, which are valuable in any field.
Low Quality
Letters from employers, while they can attest to certain transferable skills like
punctuality, teamwork, and professionalism, often hold less weight in academic
contexts. They might not be able to address your academic abilities or potential
for success in a specific field of study. However, they can be useful in cases where
relevant work experience is a crucial part of your application.
In Summary
2. Internship
Internships, especially those in organizations well-known in your field, provide
practical experience and show your ability to apply academic knowledge in real-
world situations.
3. Job/Work Certificate
Certificates from relevant employment, particularly in roles closely aligned with
your major, highlight your professional experience and practical skills.
4. Research Paper
Publishing a research paper, especially in a recognized journal, shows your ability
to conduct in-depth study and contribute original ideas to your field.
7. Published Citation
If your name has been cited in a publication like a newspaper for achievements related to your
major, it adds credibility and recognition to your profile.
8. Published Book
Authoring a book related to your field showcases your in-depth knowledge and ability to
communicate complex ideas.
1. Volunteering
Volunteering, especially in roles related to your major, shows commitment to community
service and personal development.
3. Speakership/Participation Certificates
Certificates for participating or speaking at events can add value, especially if they are
related to your major or demonstrate skills like public speaking.
4. Online Courses
Certificates from online courses can demonstrate a commitment to continuous learning,
particularly if they're relevant to your field.
5. Online Competitions
Participation in or winning online competitions can be valuable, especially if they are relevant
to your major.
2. Online Articles
Writing online articles can be valuable, but they might hold less academic weight unless
published in recognized forums or journals.
A SPECIAL GIFT FOR YOU
This eBook serves as your first step in winning the Global Korea Scholarship.
However, the journey to securing a scholarship like the GKS is intricate and highly
competitive. Only 0.5% of applicants win the scholarship. This guide aims to equip
candidates with a few advanced knowledge to avoid common pitfalls and to start
their journey with a significant advantage. It's a primer, a launchpad for deeper
exploration.
I hope that by reading this ebook that I spent so much time writing, I have gained
your trust that I can help you win GKS too like I did for 120+ students. My students
are now in South Korea, enjoying their new lives. They are now able to help their
families in their own countries. I wish to give you the same opportunity through my
mentorship program.
For this reason, I have decided to give you a gift. I am giving only 100 students a
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My private mentorship for GKS application for both Undergraduate and Graduate
is a culmination of 5 years of studying previous winners and failed applicants. I
have read more than 1,000 essays and reviewed more than 2,000 profiles with a
demographic survey from more than 15,000 applicants through my communities
online.
In the mentorship program for GKS, you’ll receive these benefits to maximize your
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Not knowing which university and track will maximize their application.
Not knowing whether their major has a high chance of being accepted.
Not knowing how to strategize their choice of university.
Not knowing how competitive it is to apply for GKS.
Not knowing the questions asked in the interview.
Not knowing what GKS looks for in the application.
Not knowing how to compete with other students despite low grades.
Not knowing how to fill out the forms properly.
Not knowing how to prepare the recommendation letters and where to sign
them.
Not knowing the more than 100 mistakes that other students have committed
in the past that have cost them the scholarship.
These are just some of the mistakes that students make in their applications that
could cost them the scholarship. Many students have come to me for mentorship
and only realized that they committed simple mistakes, such as not signing the
letter properly, not providing the correct number of photocopies, or not
determining which documents needed notarization, consular confirmation, or
apostille.
It's easy to get lost in the sea of instructions and forms, which is why I created this
mentorship program. The goal is for students to focus on writing, ensuring they
have ZERO mistakes, good strategies, and a competitive profile. My role is to
alleviate their worries during the application process and guide and support them
through it. Our community of private mentorship members also helps each other,
so no one feels alone in this journey.
Here are some notable testimonials of my mentorship program for GKS from my
previous students who are now enjoying their new lives in Korea:
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CONTACTS
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Ace Apolonio
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