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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of
resources by countries of the world and how the population is
distributed.
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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and
rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.
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3. Strategy
Focus on:
+ The highest proportion/ second highest proportion
Details (Type 1 - 1 pie
chart): + The quarter/ half/ a third, etc.
Percentage Fractions
25% A quarter
50% Half
75% Three-quarters
Percentage Fractions
small the
large the
good the
expensive
modern
Example: Food accounts for the largest percentage of the world spending.
4.4.2. Other comparison language
double/ triple (adj) The number of students in university A was double that in
university B.
Task 3: Analyze the following pie chart. Read the statements and decide whether they
are correct (C) or not correct (NC). If the statement is not correct, rewrite it.
The pie chart shows the average household energy used in Someland in 2021.
(Adapted from https://ielts-fever.com/the-pie-chart-below-shows-where-energy-is-used-in-a-
typical-australian-household. IELTS FEVER.)
1. Just over a third of the total energy was used for heating and cooling purposes. C / NC
2. The people in Someland used just a little under a quarter of their household electricity for
water heating. C / NC
3. Another significant usage of energy was for other appliances in the household, which was
approximately a fifth of the total amount. C / NC
4. Energy used for lighting as well as fridges and freezers was equal at 9% each. C / NC
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Task 4: Read the pie chart information. Choose the correct options to complete comparison
sentences.
The pie chart below shows the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to
access the news in a typical week.
(Archer, G., & Wijayatilake, C. (2018). Mindset for IELTS Level 3. Cambridge University Press.)
(Adapted from Academic task 1 sample essay: World Food Consumption. IELTS
Podcast. (2021, March 19).)
1. Meat was consumed the most, at just …. a third of the total amount.
a. exactly b. over c. under
2. Fish had the second highest consumption levels, at …..
a. a fifth b. 28% c. 12%
3. …. consumption accounted for 12% of the total.
a. Fruit b. Vegetable c. Cereal
4. Fruits’ share of consumption is just …. a tenth, followed closely by
vegetables (10%).
a. over b. under c. exactly
5. The consumption of …. contributed to only 5% of the world consumption in
2014.
a. rice b. bread c. cereals
6. The smallest food group in terms of world consumption was rice, at …..
a. 5% b. 2% c. 3%
7. Animal-based foods (meat and fish) made up the …. proportion when
added together.
a. highest b. lowest c. average
2. Structures
2.1. Structure of an introductory paragraph
2.1.1. Background information:
- is information on the topic
- sets up the reader for the thesis statement
* Types of background information:
- a general explanation of the topic
- historical information on the topic
- relevant data and statistics
- a paraphrase of the question prompt/ topic
2.1.2. The thesis statement: tells the reader what ideas will be developed in the body essay. It
often includes:
- a topic
- controlling idea, i.e. point of view that outlines what will be discussed in the body essay.
Examples:
Thesis statement is a point of view, not a statement of fact that everyone agrees on.
People may not agree with this idea and have a different point of view.
(Aquino-Cutcher, A. (2016). Unit 1. In Final draft 3: Essay, Cambridge University Press.) (Alice, O.,
& Ann, H. (2014). Page 202. In Longman Academic Writing Series 3: Paragraphs to Essays.
Pearson.)
Structures
Examples:
- There is a growing concern about children obesity rate. This essay will examine
the causes of this problem.
- There is a growing concern about games online. This essay will discuss the
advantages that young children can have from playing these games.
- It is true that Nha Trang and Da Nang are very popular among tourists. This
essay will analyze the similarities and differences between these two cities.
Structure Example
Advantages – disadvantages
BENEFITS - DRAWBACKS In conclusion, shopping online would
definitely benefit people, but there are also
In conclusion, topic [N phrase] would
some drawbacks that should be taken into
definitely benefit + someone/ something
consideration.
[, but there are also some drawbacks that
should be taken into consideration.]
In conclusion, learning another language
would definitely benefit students in the
future.
II. While-writing
1. Useful language for paraphrasing
1.1 Use synonyms
Example 1:
Example 2:
………………………………………………………………………………………………….
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
2. Many students nowadays choose to study English as a second language because they think
that English is a tool which helps them get a good job in the future.
………………………………………………………………………………………………….
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
3.Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money.
………………………………………………………………………………………………….
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
Task 2: Paraphrase the statements in Task 1 using synonyms and the techniques in 1.2.
For example: The government should support local businesses.
=> Local companies should be assisted by the authorities. (=> Technique: change the sentence to
passive voice)
1.Homework plays an important role in the education of children.
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2. Many students nowadays choose to study English as a second language because they think
that English is a tool which helps them get a good job in the future.
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
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3.Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money.
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
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Task 3: Read the question and the introductory and concluding paragraphs. Choose the
best introductory and concluding paragraph for the provided question. Explain your
answer.
Some people argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
What are some positive effects of doing homework for children?
A.It is widely believed that students shouldA.To summarize, doing homework would
do exercises after school because these definitely benefit young students.
are an essential part of their study. However, there are also some drawbacks
that should be taken into consideration.
B.It is widely believed that students should
do exercises after school because these B.In conclusion, some people argue that
are an essential part of their study. This homework plays an important role in the
essay will discuss the advantages of education of children and I agree with this.
doing homework for young students.
C. It is widely believed that students should
C. In conclusion, doing homework would
do exercises after school because these
definitely benefit young students.
are an essential part of their lives, and
Therefore, they should be encouraged to
they can affect their future. This essay
maintain this practice on a daily basis.
will discuss the advantages of doing
homework for young students.
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Conclusion:
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Topic 2: Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money. Why is this the
case and what are some possible solutions to this problem?
Introduction:
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
Conclusion:
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
I. PRE-WRITING
1. What is an Advantages-Disadvantages Essay?
Advantages and disadvantages essays are among the most popular essay types in the IELTS exam.
When encountering this essay type, you have to write about the good and bad points of a
common situation or topic. There are two different types of advantages and disadvantages
essays requiring different approaches. Here are the examples:
a. Type 1:
The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. What are the
advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement?
b. Type 2:
In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these
vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
2. Patterns of Organizations
Type 1 Type 2
Body: Body:
Paragraph 2: Advantages [AREA] Paragraph 2: Weaker side
Topic sentence (1-2 advantages) Topic sentence
Explain the first advantage and provide Provide examples/ other supporting
examples/ other supporting details details to clarify this side
Explain the second advantage and Explain why it is not strong
provide examples/ other supporting
Provide examples/ other supporting
details
details
Paragraph 3: Stronger side
Paragraph 3: Disadvantages [AREA]
Topic sentence (1-2 Topic sentence (1-2 advantages/
disadvantages) disadvantages)
Explain the first disadvantage and Explain the first advantage/
provide examples/ other supporting disadvantage and provide examples/
details other supporting details
Explain the second disadvantage Explain the second advantage/
and provide examples/ other supporting disadvantage and provide examples/ other
details supporting details
Conclusion: Conclusion:
Restate thesis statement/ Restate thesis statement/
Summarize the main ideas Summarize the main ideas
Closing sentence (e.g., warning, Closing sentence (e.g., warning,
prediction, a suggestion, etc.) prediction, a suggestion, etc.)
In this level, the focus is on Type 1 – students only discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a
topic.
3. Sample Essay
Topic:
The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. What are
the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement?
Sample Essay:
It is generally believed that the Internet has revolutionized the world in many ways. Therefore,
people find it easier and more convenient to work from home. This essay will analyze the
advantages and disadvantages that arise when a person lives and works in the same place.
There are several benefits of working from home. Firstly, it can save the expenses and long
hours people spend on commuting because travelling to work can be expensive and time-
consuming. For example, I live about 15 km away from my company, and it usually takes me about
40 minutes to one hour to get to work. Therefore, when I worked at home during the COVID-19
pandemic, I saved about 2 hours of commuting and some gas money each day. Secondly, this
professional arrangement allows people to set up their own working schedules to work more
effectively. For instance, my co-worker realized that he is most productive at night.
Therefore, his productivity increased during the nights that he worked from home.
2. List two advantages of working from home that are provided in the sample essay.
3. List two disadvantages of working from home that are provided in the sample essay.
Below is an outline for the sample essay. Some of the information is missing. Reread the essay and
complete the outline.
I. Introduction (Paragraph 1)
A. Topic: It is generally believed that the Internet has revolutionized the world in many
ways. Therefore, people find it easier and more convenient to work from home.
B. Thesis statement:
II. Body
A. Paragraph 2 topic sentence: There are several benefits of working from home.
a. Advantage 1: Firstly, it can save the expenses and long hours people spend on
commuting because travelling to work can be expensive and time-consuming.
Supporting Details: For example, I live about 15 km away from my company, and it
usually takes me about 40 minutes to one hour to get to work. Therefore, when I
worked at home during the COVID-19 pandemic, I saved about 2 hours of commuting
and some gas money each day.
b. Advantage 2: _____________________________________________________________.
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Supporting Details:___________________________________________________________.
_____________________________________________________________.
a. Disadvantage 1: _____________________________________________________________.
Supporting Details: ____________________________________________
b. Disadvantage 2: _____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________.
Supporting Details: ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________.
B. Closing sentence:
III. Conclusion:
In conclusion, ...
To conclude, ...
To summarize, …
IV. Some synonyms of “advantages” and “disadvantages”:
Advantages: benefit, strength, merit, upside, positive aspect,
positive impact, positive effect.
5. Writing topic
With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people
see this as a good step forward while others do not.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Write a complete essay of at least 180 words
Task 1: Complete the following T-chart to brainstorm idea for the writing
topic above.
Advantages Disadvantages
Advantage 1: easy to handle and carry Disadvantage 1: e-books can affect readers’
visual health seriously
Task 2: Use the texts below to choose the correct text for each part in the
Outline of the essay
6. HOMEWORK:
B. Thesis statement:
II. Body
A. Paragraph 2 topic sentence:
a. Advantage 1:
i. Supporting Details:
b. Advantage 2:
i. Supporting Details:
a. Disadvantage 1:
i. Supporting Details:
b. Disadvantage 2:
i. Supporting Details:
B. Closing sentence:
SPEAKING
1. Useful structures &
Practice
Sample answers
1. I am interested in a lot of activities. However, I am really passionate about
comedy movies. I can always relieve stress after watching them.
2. It depends a lot on each generation. The elderly like reading books
and newspapers or gardening since they can find peace of mind through
these pastimes. On the other hand, most youngsters would be crazy
about traveling. This is because traveling allows them to relax and expand their
knowledge.
3. Well, I am a big fan of dancing. I spend 2 hours in my dancing class since it
helps me relieve stress and improve my health.
4. I believe it is important to have a hobby in this modern world. We have to deal
with a lot of stress and pressure from work and study every day.
Therefore, doing something amusing will help us reduce stress and maintain a
happy life.
5. Frankly speaking, spending too much time on a hobby can have a negative
effect on someone because it is pretty challenging for them to balance their life.
For example, if we spend most of our day watching movies, we will not have time
for other activities, such as working or studying.
Sample answer
Our group of 3 people decided to visit this village because we wanted to get
away from city life. Moreover, we wanted to enjoy the
peaceful atmosphere and learn more about the lifestyle of the local
people there.
Since we had to begin our trip early, I was kind of tired from not having
enough sleep. However, I was over the moon shortly after embarking
on the trip to the village. This was because on the way to get there, we had a
chance to see the amazing views which are different from the city we are
currently living in. After a long drive, we got to the wonderful old village. We
rented some bikes to cycle around the village, visited some 400-year-old
ancient houses, and had a look at communal houses where the local people
gathered for festival celebrations or public meetings. The highlight of the
trip was going to the paddy fields to help the farmers harvest the crop. It
was challenging but also a once-in-a-lifetime experience which we really
enjoyed. At night, we had a lot of fun with recreational activities such as
singing and dancing with the people in the village.
It was such a nice trip that I hope that when I’m older, I can live a peaceful
life and surround myself with fresh air and beautiful paddy fields like in this
place.
Useful expressions to talk
Useful expressions to
talk about your about the benefit of
interest something
S + gain a lot of benefits from +
I’m into + Ving / Noun. Ving/ N phrase.
Sample answers
1. Yes, I did. I was really into art classes when I was young. I think it is
because I love playing with colors. Art lessons always uplifted my
mood. There was not as much stress as in math and literature classes.
Sample answer:
Reason: I always feel that technology has made our life easier and more
convenient.
(No alternative)
- From my perspective, I would say that the Internet has brought many
advantages to people's lives.
- I have to admit that I don't know much about this topic, but I
think the Internet has brought many advantages to people's lives.
- I really love using new technology. The reason for this is that it makes
my life more manageable.
E.g.: For example, a low-tech person would avoid using any modern
devices.
Sample answers
1. I believe that technology has had a big impact on people's lives. This is
because the young generation nowadays spend most of their time on their
phone instead of having face-to-face conversations. For example, we can
easily find teenagers filming themselves on TikTok or surfing Facebook while
sitting with others. Even when studying, they prefer to do homework on their
smartphones instead of in a book.
Sample answers
2. As I mentioned earlier, I like to read the news on Tuoi Tre and Thanh Nien
on a daily basis. When I have some free time in the evening, I can also watch
the latest news from some popular channels online like Fox News, abc News,
and CBS News.
4. Well, I think most of us are curious about famous people's lives since they
are very different from our ordinary lives. The Internet has made it possible
for the public to know more details about others’ personal lives. For
example, in the TV series “Blackpink: Light up the sky,” fans learn more
about their competition, practice sessions, dreams, and journeys to global
idols. Another reason might be because we can learn something from
celebrities, such as hard work and patience.
Sample answers
1. From my perspective, most environmental issues are caused
by human activities. Firstly, in order to run our vehicles and operate our
machines, we burn fossil fuels which emit a huge amount of greenhouse
gases such as carbon dioxide and cause serious problems such as air
pollution and global warming. Moreover, we also cut down forests for land to
expand our cities. This activity leads to the destruction of natural habitats
and threatens the lives of many wild animals.
3. I think it is likely that many new technologies will be able to save the
Earth from its current conditions. First, renewable energy can replace fossil
fuels which have caused severe damage to the environment. For example,
electric vehicles and machines in the future will get their energy from the sun
and emit zero greenhouse gas into the air. Moreover, biologists may find a
way to preserve the DNA of extinct animals and bring them back to the
environment to restore natural biodiversity.
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