Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging
their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating
people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.
Body 1: - có hiệu quả với người chưa ăn nhiều
On the one hand, there are some reasons that explain why education can mitigate the
problem of over-consuming junk food that has become more prevalent in this day and
age.
Junk food is often processed with oil and a lot of additives( đồ phụ gia) to enhance
the taste, so consumers may over-eat it easily, which leads to health issues such as
obesity or hypertension. However, realizing the problem is not easy, as any health
issue only emerges after a long period of time. As a result, young people, especially
ones who have not over-consumed it, should be educated to understand the problems
associated with junk food, leading to earlier intervention and helping people eat more
healthily.
Body 2 : Không có hiệu quả với người đã ăn nhiều
On the other hand, opponents of the previous views think that education may not
work in specific situations. For people who have already over-consumed junk food, the
excessive caloric content may already make them addicted, making it very hard for
them to quit. These affected people require careful withdrawal from this type of food
by following strict guidelines from experts and gradually eating better. Also,
medications can be required when the issues have become very severe, such as once
obesity has reached a more advanced stage.
In conclusion, although there are mixed opinions on determining whether education is
effective against the rising prevalence of junk food, I believe that it should be part of a
comprehensive plan rather than being used exclusively. Although education can act as
a preventative method, individuals who have already….
