IELTS WRITING ACTUAL PRACTICE TEST 3
3/2024
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TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four
countries from 1990 to 2012. (Actual Test, 03/02/2024)
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
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Overall, the proportion of exportation from TO Japan and the US experienced a
downward trend, while that of China and India increased during the period from
1990 to 2012. In addition, a majority of Australian exports was to Japan in 1990
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but it was taken OVER by China later on at the end of the period.
In 1990, Japan held the dominant position with about 25% of the Australian
exports. However, this figure witnessed a noticeable decline over five years to
20% and continued to drop to below 20% at the end. In contrast, China from
the third position with roughly 2% in 1990, the percentage of China’s exports
increased dramatically, even becoming the highest proportion by 2012 with
nearly 30%.
Regarding the US export, it f
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Overall, there is WAS a decline in the percentage of Australian exportation to
Japan and the US while Australian increasingly export to China and India
between 1990 and 2012. China became the largest exporting partner of
Australia at the end of time period after a significant rise.
In 1990, with around 25% of exportation from Australia, Japan was the largest
exporting partner. In the next 22 years, the percentage of Australian
exportation to Japan fluctuated between 20% before reaching a slight decrease
at 18% in 2012. The same trend can be seen in the proportion of exportation
from Australia to the US. From 1990 to 2003, this figure fluctuated between
10%, after which the US witnessed a 5% decrease in the percentage of
exportation from Australia in the last years of time period.
On the contrary, between 1990 and 2000, China
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Overall: nêu main trends nhưng không quá chi tiết
Đa dạng diễn đạt: ‘The percentage of exports to Japan …” → The figure for
Japan ; Japan imported 20% of Au goods ; 20% of A products were exported to
Japan
TASK 2
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Education plays an important role ….
COMMON = POPULAR = UBIQUITOUS = PREVALENT
THE EDU of Young pp is seeming to be everywhere.
The education of young people is the main priority in countries around
the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot
read or write is essential for society and more funding should be
made available for it.
Do you disagree or agree? - OPINION
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Body 1: YOUNG PEOPLE (reasons)
- skills & knowledge learnt today → ….
- children: natural ability to learn new concepts … >< adults
Body 2: ADULTS WHO CANNOT READ AND WRITE
- illiterate [limited to manual work - find jobs in knowledge-based industries]
→ better career + higher salary → contribute to the development of the
economy & …
- promote communication ← …
In conclusion, the fact that young people learn quickly and play a crucial role in
the development of society in the future fuels prioritized investment in their
education. Nevertheless, I strongly believe/hold a firm belief that education
illiterate adults is also significant as it will help enhance their life, build a more
informed and developed community, and foster people communication.
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The issue of providing higher education to young people is important in several
countries. However, some people claim that improving literacy skills in adults
who lack the ability to read and write is equally essential for society. In my
opinion, although there might be some reasons why governments pay
attention to high-quality education for youths, I still believe teaching adults is
as significant.
On the one hand, giving education to young people provides a great number
of benefits. To begin with, youngsters with the natural ability to learn new
concepts help them to learn quickly and generate more creative ideas. On the
contrary, the energy and ability to apprehend new knowledge of young people
are always higher than that of adults. In addition, many countries are focusing
on educating youngsters as they will shape the future of their country. Their
skills and knowledge learned today are the main contributors to the economic
growth. The fact is that countries that have higher literacy rates are
progressing better than countries that have lower rates.
On the other hand, educating adults also brings a great number of merits.
Firstly, this can bring chances to develop themselves. Illiterate people are
limited to manual work, they will have trouble in finding jobs in knowledge-
based industries. By learning high education of adults, they can have a better
career that brings high salaries
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The education-related issues have gained a deal of attention in every country
around the world. While educating the young plays a vital role in society, some
people opine that it is more urgent to invest in adults’ education development.
The education has been a hot topic in every country around the world; in
particular,
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Educating the young plays a vital role in societies. However, some people opine
that it is more urgent to invest in increasing adults’ illiteracy rate. While there
are some reasons for developing children’s education, I believe that there is a
need of educating illiterate adults for several reasons.
Giving priority to the education of young people is ubiquitous in all societies as
its merits. Firstly, skills and knowledge youngsters learn today can have a
great impact on the future as they can apply their learnt information to boost
the economy and the nation. Another reason for education children from the
early ages is that children have a natural ability to absorb knowledge quickly,
which helps them save time when learning new concepts. Adults, on the
contrary, with the typical brain development and different responsibilities, are
not likely to learn as effectively as the young.
It is essential to increase adults’ illiteracy due to its positive side. Firstly, more
well-educated adults can contribute to the development of the economy. While
the illiterate are limited to manual work with lower salary, the well-educated
seeking jobs in knowledge-based industries tend to boost the work productivity
and get a higher salary. Thanks to better career paths and higher income, they
can enhance their standards of living contributing to the overall economic
development. Moreover, it is also a good way for promoting communication as
people can understand words and letters. Besides face-to-face communication,
there is an increase in keeping in touch with others via online platforms where
people are required to read and write so that they can better understand each
other’s messages.
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The given table illustrates the values of the New Zealand's exports of kiwi fruit to
five countries including Japan, China, Mexico, Russia, Saudi Arabia from 2010 to
2012. Overall, Japan, China and Russia saw an increase in the values of the
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exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand while there was a fluctuation in that of
Mexico and Arabia. The most substantial growth could be seen in Japan's figures,
and this country became the leading export market of New Zealand's kiwi in the
period.
In 2010, Japan was the largest export partner of New Zealand's kiwi with around
$270,000,000, which was nearly four times as much as the firgure of the second
largest export market, China. In 2012, these two countries underwent a
substantial growth to approximately $325,000,000, and $94,000,000
respectively. The same trend can be seen in the firgure of Russia, which surged
from $968,000 in 2010 to nearly $2,400,000 in 2012.
In contrast, in 2010, the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to
Mexico was $6,000,000 which was 200 times as much as that of Saudi Arabia. In
2011, the Mexico's value of import of kiwi fruit from New Zealand decreased by
three times before rising to $3,300,000 in 2012. The reversal can be seen in the
firgure of Saudi Arabia. In 2010, Saudi Arabia imported nearly $300,000 kiwi fruit
from New Zealand, which rose to 400,000 in 2011. After which, Arabia
underwent a four-time decrease in 2012.
In modern workplaces, people are motivated to work industriously for different
reasons, especially for the chances of being promoted. In this essay, I will give
my explaination for this phenomenom and suggest other motivation that drive
people to work hard.
Employers often stick to promotion opportunities at work due to some following
reasons. One of the major reason is people can earn higher salary when being
promoted. In higher positions, employers are likely to get higher income when
they shoulder more responsibilties. Thanks to a higher amount of money, they
can fully accommodate their daily needs and family life in a higher standard,
which motivated them to progress in their career ladder. Moreover, receiving
promotion offers individuals better opportunities for personal growth. They have
to master essential skills such as leadership or critical thinking and widen
specialized knowledge to fulfill their roles and duties at working environment. It
is a good way to develop and accomplish their job goals.
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Besides promotion chances, there are several factors that stimulate people to
work hard. For some people, feeling of success is one inspiration for them to
concentrate and work hard. Hard-working makes it easier for employees to
complete their given tasks in particular time, which gives them feeling of
achievement and success. Besides, working hard can be stemmed from the
desire for contribution to the society. People often attach working hard to
increased work productity; thus,
