Looped_v4
Looped_v4
Written by
Cole Groth
BLACK
ALEX (OFF-SCREEN)
You're in a what?
JAKE (OFF-SCREEN)
A time loop.
ALEX
What do you mean?
JAKE
I'm living the same day over and
over again.
ALEX
Jake, you're an idiot.
ALEX
Okay, let's say you are in a time
loop. How ca-
JAKE
Can I prove it?
JAKE
This is the 'Alex Hernandez
Dialogue Tree.' It took me a few
hundred loops to construct it, but
here's how it works.
2.
JAKE
I've mapped out a few different
paths of dialogue that show how
you'll react if I tell you about
certain things. Think of an NPC in
a video game.
ALEX
(sarcastically)
Thanks, Jake.
(normal)
How do I know that you didn't just
make this up?
JAKE
That's the thing! You might think
that I've just made it up. I
haven't. I've sat through too many
conversations about how your
cheetah print underwear is just a
bit too tight on you and how you
pissed yourself a few nights ago
for this to have been “made up”
ALEX
(whispering)
Dude, shut up!
MRS. HYNES
(stern)
Mr. Thompson, since you've been
paying so much attention, could you
please tell us what happens as x
approaches two?
JAKE
(turning around to face
Mrs. Hynes)
(MORE)
3.
JAKE (CONT’D)
As x approaches two from the
negative side, y goes to infinity,
and when x approaches two from the
positive side, it goes to negative
infinity.
MRS. HYNES
Alright, thank you, Jake. Pay a bit
more attention, please!
Jake gives a goofy look to Alex, like, "see? look how awesome
I am!" Alex rolls his eyes. He looks over and traces Jake's
dialogue line to a box that says, "Alex will trace the
dialogue line to this box." He then scrolls around the tree
to a line that says "confess my love," but the box is empty.
ALEX
(playfully)
Oooh, you’re finally saying that
you love Sarah? It’s taken long
enough.
Jake looks down at the map and quickly folds it up. Alex
wasn't supposed to see that. Alex squints inquisitively.
ALEX
Speaking of, where is she anyways?
JAKE
She’s at some orchestra competition
and doesn’t get back until 6:00.
Honestly, I don’t think I’ve seen
her in a few... weeks? Months?
ALEX
Oh, that sucks.
Jake shrugs.
JAKE
It’s fine.
MRS. HYNES
OK class! Remember that your limit
definitions project is due
tomorrow!
4.
JAKE
Here’s the thing, Alex: you’re
beginning to bore me.
ALEX
(scoffs, taken aback)
I’m sorry, what?
JAKE
Sorry, this whole loop has made me
more blunt. It's just - I've spent
so much time with you, and it's
just... not interesting anymore.
You just do the exact same thing
every day, and there's only so much
I can change in my life to change
what you do. You feel me?
ALEX
(offended)
No, Jake. I don't 'feel you.' You
sound like an asshole.
JENNA
Oh, thank you!
JAKE
(indifferent)
Yup.
JAKE
(turns to Alex and stops)
Are you familiar with Groundhog
Day, Alex? Don't answer that; I
know that you are.
ALEX
What about it?
5.
JAKE
Okay, so I'm at that point where
Bill Murray realizes that
everything he does is meaningless
and starts killing himself
repeatedly. I haven't gotten the
balls to do it yet, but today I
think I'm going to do something
fun. Blow up a bridge or something;
I'm not sure yet.
ALEX
If you kill yourself, what if it
all ends there? What am I supposed
to do when I show up to class
tomorrow and everyone’s asking
where you are, and I have to sit
there with a smile telling people:
(mockingly)
“oh, Jake killed himself but he’s
in a time loop so he’s fine!”
JAKE
See, you won't have to live with
that though, ‘cuz I'm positive the
loop will continue.
ALEX
For you, yeah. But for me, you'll
be dead, and I won't have anybody
to cheat with for my exam tomorrow.
You're being very selfish.
JAKE
(feigning distress)
Wow, I’m gonna be dead and all you
care about is that you won’t be
able to cheat on your test?
ALEX
Think of it like this. For you,
yesterday happened... when? A few
weeks ago? A few months?
JAKE
(laughs)
I would say years, but honestly I
have no idea how many todays I’ve
had.
ALEX
Anyways, for me, yesterday was -
6.
ALEX
About ten hours ago. And in another
fourteen hours, it’ll be tomorrow
for me. If you kill yourself, will
this version of me have to live
with that?
JAKE
Maybe? I’m not sure.
ALEX
‘Maybe?’ Shouldn’t you know this
stuff by now?
Jake shrugs.
ALEX
It just seems like you haven’t
thought this out very much. Why
don’t you give yourself a few more
days to think it over before
killing yourself?
JAKE
Fine. You've convinced me. During
the next loop, I’ll kill myself
before you can beg me not to,
though.
ALEX
(relieved)
Thank you!
The two of them stand in silence. Alex looks on, waiting for
Jake to do something interesting.
ALEX
Is that it? What's something cool
you can do with your ability?
JAKE
Well, I know something we can do.
Jake and Alex step into a GAS STATION. Jake walks right up to
the GAS STATION ATTENDANT (20s), who's listening to music.
7.
JAKE
Could I get a few lottery tickets?
JAKE
I’ll take the whole stack!
JAKE
(annoyed)
Do you not want my money?
JAKE
On second thought, just give me...
JAKE (CONT'D)
That one.
JAKE
You want it? Here.
Jake flicks the card across the counter and begins to walk
out.
JAKE
(to Alex)
One of those tickets has the
jackpot but I haven’t memorized it
yet.
Alex chuckles.
ALEX
Let’s say I hypothetically believe
this time loop nonsense for a
second...
JAKE
...which you don’t...
ALEX
You haven’t done a good job at
convincing me yet!
JAKE
Have you not seen my dialogue tree?
How could I create that if I was
lying?
ALEX
The creepy map is... interesting...
but I want you to detail a day in
your life for me. That would
convince me.
JAKE
Fine, but this never convinces you,
either. Each day begins at -
BEGIN FLASHBACK:
9.
JAKE (VO)
6:07 AM.
JAKE (VO)
At this point, I've given up
dressing for each day. Thankfully,
I wake up in these stylish pajamas
every day.
ALEX
Don't get distracted!
JAKE (VO)
Right.
Jake steps out of his room into the upstairs hallway. He hops
onto the railing of the stairs and - BOOM - he misses and
crashes down the stairs. In another loop, he hops on and
slides all the way down. Success!
10.
JAKE
Good morning, bitches!
ROBERT
Who the hell do you think you’re
talking to?
JAKE
(loudly)
Great eggs, dad!
ROBERT
Good morning, J!
ROBERT
Your mom’s conference is running
late, she’s getting a later flight
and should be home by dinner
tonight.
JAKE
(mumbles)
I’d bet a thousand bucks she won’t
be!
ROBERT
Oh, don’t be ridiculous.
(beat)
Want some eggs?
JAKE
No, thanks! I’ve got to go. Super
important project!
ROBERT
What project?
In another loop, Jake pops out from under Lucas and SHOVES
Lucas out of his chair.
LUCAS
What the -?
Jake skips over to the living room and walks to the fire
place. Folded up is a TRAVEL MAP. Jake grabs that, then heads
over to his dad’s desk and grabs a pen. He puts both into his
pocket before skipping out of the door.
ROBERT
(to Lucas)
Why is your brother wearing pajamas
to school?
LUCAS
(on his phone)
How should I know?
ALEX (V.O.)
Okay, how many times have you
crashed doing that?
JAKE (V.O.)
Weirdly, I haven't.
ALEX
(while writing,
sarcastically)
Nice pajamas, Jake.
ALEX
Hey! I'm still working!
JAKE
I need to tell you something.
ALEX
What is it?
JAKE
I'm stuck in a time loop.
ALEX
(laughing)
Okay...
Alex goes back to doing his work. Jake quickly grabs and
spins him around.
JAKE
(serious)
I've never been more serious about
something in my life. I've lived
this day hundreds of times before.
13.
ALEX
(more serious)
I'm sorry, you're in a what?
JAKE
A time loop.
END FLASHBACK:
JAKE
I mean, that's an average day for
me, but, like, I'm not an idiot, so
I don't go to school every day. I
went through this period where I'd
watch movies all day long, and I
want to say I've seen, like, two
thousand movies. I can't really
track them because... you know, the
day loops.
ALEX
Two thousand movies? I never
thought of you as a movie person.
JAKE
I mean, I guess I wasn't a movie
person yesterday.
ALEX
You don't take your calls? I guess
you probably know who that's from.
JAKE
It's Sarah. She's in tears right
now and desperately needs me to
comfort her.
(mockingly)
Not today!
ALEX
You sound like a terrible
boyfriend.
JAKE
Alex, I have been the greatest
boyfriend in the world hundreds of
times to her. I proposed to her
once, did you know that?
14.
ALEX
Really?
Jake nods.
ALEX
(laughing)
What?! How’d that work out?
JAKE
(fake outrage)
She rejected me!
ALEX
(playing along)
No way!
JAKE
(shaking head)
Women...
JAKE
Don’t go to the party. It sucks.
Actually, it’s pretty fun but after
so many loops it isn’t interesting
anymore.
ALEX
Party?
Jake points down. Alex checks his text and sees: “PARTY @
STERLING’S TONIGHT. BYOB.”
ALEX
Well, even if you’ve had your share
of Sterling’s parties, I’ll still
be attending. Let’s go!
ALEX
So, I’m not gonna see you tonight?
JAKE
Not tonight, tonight. Another
tonight, definitely!
ALEX
Shame. I might be boring you, but
you’re more interesting than you’ve
ever been.
ALEX
Wait, so when I go to bed what’s
going to happen to you?
Jake shrugs.
JAKE
I suppose you’ll wake up with a new
version of me. Maybe a cooler one
from another universe.
ALEX
(crossing fingers)
Let’s hope for a better one!
JAKE
(awkwardly)
See ya tomorrow.
Alex nods. Jake chuckles, then speeds off. Alex looks at the
ground for a second, thinking about the wild day he had. He
walks to his house.
Jake enters the house and walks to the stairs, through the
kitchen. Robert’s been preparing dinner: glazed salmon,
broccoli, and rice. Robert starts speaking, and Jake mouths
along.
ROBERT
Dinner! I've made your favorite!
16.
JAKE
(somewhat patronizing)
Salmon and day-old rice?
ROBERT
That's right! Good guess. Can you
get your brother down here?
JAKE
(fake panic)
LUCAS! GET DOWN NOW! SOMETHING
HORRIBLE HAS HAPPENED! DAD'S DYING!
Robert rolls his eyes, but eagerly looks up the stairs to see
how Lucas responds.
LUCAS
(uninterested)
What's up?
JAKE
We're having dinner.
LUCAS
(texting)
What is it?
JAKE
Why, are you planning on not eating
it?
ROBERT
(to Lucas, singsongy)
I’ve made your favorite!
LUCAS
Let me guess: salmon and old rice?
ROBERT
Am I that predictable?
LUCAS
Give me one second, dad.
17.
Jake grabs three water glasses and fills them up. After
placing them down, he sits down. Robert walks up to get
Lucas.
ROBERT
Where is that boy?
JAKE
(to Robert)
Don't bother, he'll open the
door...
(beat)
...now.
ROBERT
So, Lucas, how are your classes?
LUCAS
(garbled)
They’re easy.
ROBERT
Chew your food.
LUCAS
I don't know, I like my art class a
lot because my teacher lets me play
on my phone.
ROBERT
(sarcastically)
Ah, a quality education!
(beat)
Jake, what about you?
Jake shrugs.
18.
ROBERT
Nothing? What are you doing all
day, then?
JAKE
(matter-of-fact)
I’ve been in a time loop for the
last few years, and each day is the
same for me. In terms of education,
my film class is pretty good.
ROBERT
A time loop? Fun!
JAKE
(sarcastically)
Yeah, super fun.
LUCAS
I wish I could’ve been in film
class.
ROBERT
Why didn’t you pick it?
LUCAS
The teacher didn’t pick me. It’s a
bit competitive, I guess.
JAKE
You should see the kids in there.
Competitive, my ass.
Lucas goes onto his phone and texts. Jake pulls his phone
out, too. A beat.
ROBERT
You know, when I was in school, we
didn’t have these soul-sucking
devices to distract ourselves.
Every day, we’d have to do crazy
things like read or play outside.
LUCAS
Hypocrite!
19.
ROBERT
Oh, hush. I’m an adult. Looks like
mom won’t be home until tomorrow
morning. Her flight got delayed.
ROBERT
What the hell is wrong with you?
JAKE
Nothing. I’m going upstairs.
ROBERT
So, Lucas, what else is going on?
Any new girls?
LUCAS
(laughs)
Dad, stop. You're ridiculous.
Jake opens his backpack and pulls out the dialogue tree from
earlier. The map's vastness is outstanding. He puts in
earbuds and bobs his head to music.
He traces through the day that he’s had, starting with a box
marked: “Mess with R + L @ breakfast,” then to “explain loop
to Alex.”
JAKE
I’ll discover you tomorrow.
20.
JAKE
(to self)
In 3...2...
It’s a BIG WIN! Jake cashes out a few thousand dollars worth
of very specific sports bets.
STREAMER
(doesn’t believe it)
Wait... what?
STREAMER
Holy shit!! $25,000?! Is this
serious?! Thank you so much,
fartwarrior123!
JAKE
Fuck!
LUCAS
Dude! Shut up!!
Back to the map, Jake puts a note: “DO NOT SHOWER WITH
EARBUDS IN”
ROBERT
(muffled)
WHICH ONE OF YOU ORDERED 150
PIZZAS?!
6:07 A.M. Jake's eyes suddenly open, and he turns to his side
to rest for a moment.
JAKE
(to self)
Ready for another day, Jake?
JAKE
(cheerfully)
Morning, dad!
22.
ROBERT
Good morning, J.
ROBERT
Oh, your mother called: She'll be
home by dinner tonight.
JAKE
(sarcastically)
So excited!
ROBERT
Want some eggs?
JAKE
Sure. Thanks.
Jake goes over to the table and sits down. Jake is sitting on
his phone at the counter.
ROBERT
Lucas! Sit at the table and eat!
LUCAS
I'm not hungry.
ROBERT
Nonsense! Sit with us!
LUCAS
Alright.
ROBERT
So, Jake, what are you doing today?
JAKE
Oh, you know, the usual.
ROBERT
Which is?
JAKE
I dunno. There’s a party tonight. I
might go to that.
23.
ROBERT
Well, if you’re drinking tonight,
make sure you’re safe. Under no
circumstances do I want you driving
home, do you understand?
JAKE
(with obnoxious salute)
Sir, yes, sir!
LUCAS
Wait, since when is he allowed to
drink? Can I?
ROBERT
Absolutely not.
LUCAS
Ugh, you’re the worst!
ROBERT
Eat your breakfast.
JAKE
Well, I’ve got to get going.
ROBERT
Wait, why are you leaving so early?
JAKE
I’ve got a project... remember?
ROBERT
Remember what?
Jake gets up, grabs the map and a pen, then heads to his car
to go to school.
ALEX
(while writing;
sarcastically)
Nice pajamas.
JAKE
Ready to hear something crazy?
SKIP EXPLANATION
AND CUT TO:
ALEX
Okay, well, let’s assume that you
are in this time loop. What number
am I thi-
JAKE
Alex, just quit it with the games
and believe me! I hate having to
explain this to you.
ALEX
Alright. I believe you!
ALEX
So... what’s on the agenda for
today?
STUDENT #1
Are you going to Sterling's party
later?
JAKE
Alex, you don’t know about
Sterling’s party yet, but that’s
what we’re doing tonight.
ALEX
It’s Monday.
25.
JAKE
Even better! Let’s get the weekend
started with style.
ALEX
Are you even friends with him?
JAKE
We go way back!
JAKE
(caving)
Okay, I don’t actually know him
know him, but his party will be
pretty fun.
ALEX
(suspicious)
You hate parties.
JAKE
It depends on how much I drink! Too
much, and... bleh. Being blacked
out with you is funny, though.
ALEX
(laughs, convinced)
Sounds like a blast.
MRS. HYNES
OK class, remember that your limit
definitions project is due
tomorrow!
Jake walks through the crowded hallway with Alex. Jenna, the
girl from earlier, is walking far behind them.
JAKE
Quickly, turn around.
JAKE
See that girl?
ALEX
Oh, her? That’s, uh... who is she?
Jake shakes his head. If he did know who she was, he doesn’t
know anymore.
JAKE
Every day she forgets to tie her
damn shoes and... if I don’t catch
her from falling, she is going to
have a very painful day.
JAKE
(showing heads)
Heads says I catch her, tails says
I let her hit the ground.
Jake gets ready to toss the coin, but Alex covers his hand
and gives him a mean look.
JAKE
What?
ALEX
Seriously, dude?
JAKE
Relax, she’ll be fine tomorrow.
ALEX
You’re an asshole.
JAKE
Fine! I’ll save her today.
Tomorrow, though, she’s hitting the
ground.
JENNA
Thank you!
27.
JAKE
Yup. See you tomorrow!
Jenna scurries ahead of them. Alex thinks about what her name
is as she walks away.
ALEX
Jamie!
JAKE
What?
ALEX
That’s her name!
JAKE
Her name doesn’t matter. I have
this theory I’m the main character
in a video game and saving her from
tripping is one of those fun side
quests.
ALEX
(dumbfounded)
What is wrong with you?
ALEX
Not going to class today?
JAKE
Nah. Remember that big film project
I was working on?
ALEX
Yeah, why?
JAKE
Well, if I go in, Mrs. Washington
is going to tell me that I didn’t
even place at competition.
(beat)
I haven’t been to class for months
now. It’s too big of a hit to my
ego.
ALEX
You and your ego. I couldn’t name a
more inseparable duo.
JAKE
Oh, by the way, you’re about to
BOMB a history test.
ALEX
Wow, reassuring! Thanks.
Jake pulls out a pen and grabs Alex’s hand. While talking,
Alex looks into Jake’s eyes momentarily.
JAKE
(while writing, a bit
distracted)
Fortunately... I’ve got the answers
for you. Wait a few minutes before
checking your hand, otherwise Mrs.
Molina catches you cheating and
will call you out in front of
everybody. Talk about an ego
killer.
ALEX
Got it. Thanks, Jake. I gotta go
now.
Jake nods at Alex. Jake watches Alex walk away before turning
his own way and walking down the hallway.
JAKE
(while flicking through
clothes)
Already done... did that...
check...
JAKE
Full suit? Let’s do it.
29.
Jake gets into the suit. After most of the clothes are on, he
starts putting on his shoes. Suddenly, a KNOCK.
JAKE
Come in, Lucas!
JAKE
What’s up, buddy?
LUCAS
Can I come to Sterling’s party? My
friends are going and dude, you owe
this to me after what you did
yesterday.
JAKE
What’d I do yesterday?
(a beat, thinking)
It doesn’t matter. No.
Lucas puffs with rage storms out of the room. Jake shrugs.
Whatever. He continues putting on his shoes. He looks over at
the dialogue tree.
JAKE
(to self)
Why would I invite him? He’d just
make everything worse.
LUCAS
Get out, Jake.
30.
Jake looks like he’s about to say something mean, but takes a
deep breath and readjusts.
JAKE
Look, Lucas, I’m sorry. I really
am.
LUCAS
I don’t care.
JAKE
Lucas, I promise I’ll change in the
future.
(beat)
But... since that’s not coming any
time soon, I suppose I can be nicer
to you now. That being said, do you
want to go to the party with me?
LUCAS
(hopeful)
Wait, really?
JAKE
Of course! It’s the least I can do
for you.
LUCAS
(rushing Jake)
Let’s go!
JAKE
Woah, you’ve gotta change before we
can leave.
LUCAS
(overconfident)
I’m a stud already. Why would I
need to change to impress the
ladies when they already love me?
LUCAS
(confidently)
Let’s go get some girls.
31.
JAKE
(laughs)
You’re ridiculous. Let’s go.
JAKE
Bye, dad! We’ll be back later!
ROBERT
That’s great, just don’t do
anything stupid!
(realizing that he said
“we”)
Wait, we?!
LUCAS
I’m heading out, too!
JAKE
Ready?
LUCAS
Let’s go.
Jake and Lucas flip down shades and walk in. Cool guys.
Lucas looks overwhelmed, but Jake grabs him by the arm and
leads him through the crowd to his kitchen.
JAKE
See that?
(points to some tequila)
Don’t drink that one, it tastes
like shit. This one, on the other
hand -
(points to a plain looking
vodka handle)
Will get you fuuucked.
JAKE
Here you go!
LUCAS
Am I supposed to pour it myself? I
don’t even know how much I’m
supposed to drink.
Jake shrugs.
JAKE
(shouting over the music)
Just drink until your head starts
feeling funny!
JAKE
Here, use this as a chaser!
LUCAS
Would’ve been nice to know that
before...
ALEX
Oh my god! You made it, Jake!
LUCAS
(shouting)
Hey, there! Are you looking for a
bit of young love tonight?
33.
Back to Jake and Alex, who are walking through the house.
Well, Jake is walking; Alex is stumbling.
ALEX
How are you doing, buddy?
JAKE
(amused)
I’m fine. How much have you had to
drink?
ALEX
Well, I had one shot, then another,
then shotgunned a beer, then
another shot, and I just took one
more. That’s... what? Three shots?
JAKE
(chuckles)
I don’t think your math is adding
up.
ALEX
I think that you haven’t had enough
to drink. Take a few more shots.
JAKE
Alright, big man! Pour me!
Jake pulls Alex into the living room and to the center of the
mob. It’s a colorful mess of loud party music and sweaty
teenagers jumping senselessly.
For the first time, we see SARAH WELLS (17, gorgeous, closed
off) walk through the door. Oh shit. Jake hops out of his
seat and tries to look confident.
34.
JAKE
Looking good, babe.
SARAH
(disgusted)
Oh... hey, Jake.
JAKE
What’s wrong? Oh, let me guess,
you’re PMSing again?
SARAH
(convictive)
Funny. You wanna apologize for that
one?
JAKE
Yeah, probably shouldn’t have said
that.
SARAH
Look, Jake. I came here to talk to
you. Mind if we move somewhere
separately?
JAKE
Let me guess: you’re mad because
you failed your orchestra
performance?
SARAH
I - how did you know that? I didn’t
tell you.
Jake shrugs.
SARAH
Whatever.
SARAH
I’m not sure how to say this, Jake.
We just... don’t connect anymore.
(MORE)
35.
SARAH (CONT’D)
For the last few weeks you’ve been
so distant and I’m not sure if
you’re just pulling away because of
something else or if it’s my fault.
JAKE
It’s something else.
She figured.
SARAH
Is it someone else?
JAKE
God, no!
SARAH
(getting up)
Right. Um, I have to go.
Sarah gets up. She balls her fists up and works up some
courage.
SARAH
I... we should take a break. This
isn’t working.
JAKE
You know, you’ve broken up with me
a thousand times. I just don’t get
it, is there no way you’ll change
your mind?
SARAH
I... what? I don’t know what you’re
talking about, J.
JAKE
Forget it. It’s fine, we’ll go our
own direction. We’re mature adults.
The two occupy the same space for a moment. Mature adults.
Sarah leaves.
Jake lays at the table before looking across the house at the
outside porch. Alex is walking to sit outside. Jake follows.
LUCAS
So, ladies. What do you say we take
this upstairs?
PRETTY GIRL
You’re cute.
Both girls give him a kiss on the cheek at the same time.
Does he get with them? Probably not. We don’t stick around to
find out.
Jake slides open the door and steps out. The sound of the
party is drowned as he makes his way down to the backyard.
Alex is sitting on a lawn chair facing the lake. Jake
stumbles to a seat next to Alex.
The two are still clearly a bit drunk but coming off of it
slightly.
ALEX JAKE
How’s the night been? Sarah just broke up with me.
ALEX
Wait, what?
JAKE
Yeah, she does this every night.
ALEX
I thought -
JAKE
I lied. I never break up with her.
I don’t have the heart to do it. No
matter what I do, she walks in to
this party and breaks up with me.
That’s why I don’t usually go.
ALEX
I’m sorry to hear that. I’m always
here for you, dude.
37.
The two sit in silence. Jake sits and thinks about what he’s
going to say next. After a beat:
JAKE
I -
ALEX
What?
Fuck it.
JAKE
I’ve been thinking about this for a
long time.
ALEX
Thinking about what?
JAKE
Can you keep a secret?
Alex nods.
JAKE (CONT'D)
Do you know what the worst part of
being trapped in this loop is? It’s
not that I get dumped by my
girlfriend every single time I see
her without fail. It’s not the fact
that I wake up in this stupid city
in the middle of February and I
can’t do anything to change it.
It’s not the knowing that my life
can’t add up to anything because
there are literally no consequences
for my actions. You want to know
what it is?
(beat)
It’s the fact that I have sat here
on this day for my entire life
knowing that I am in love with you.
JAKE (CONT'D)
I’ve wasted the last few years
dating Sarah when I knew that the
person who I really belong with is
you. I know everything there is to
know about you, but I’ve never been
able to work up the courage to just
tell you how I feel. But...
(MORE)
38.
JAKE (CONT'D)
(he chokes up)
...even though I’m telling you this
now, I won’t get to live with this.
You are the one constant in my life
that I’ll never get to have.
ALEX
I...
JAKE
It’s okay, you won’t remember
anyways.
Suddenly, Lucas pulls the patio door open. He’s still drunk,
but a phone call with his dad has sobered him up a bit.
LUCAS
(yelling across the
backyard)
Jake! It’s 11:00 and we haven’t
left yet. Dad is pissed.
JAKE
(not facing Lucas)
Whooo cares about dad?
LUCAS
(shouting, cups ear to
hear better)
What?
JAKE
(to Alex)
This fuckin’ guy.
LUCAS
Jake?!
Lucas starts to jog over to Jake, but trips on the way over
in his drunkenness. He gets back up and walks to Jake.
LUCAS
Get up! We’ve got to go.
(to Alex)
Hey, Alex.
39.
ALEX
(quietly)
Hey, Lucas.
LUCAS
How are you?
ALEX
(staring forward)
Uh...
JAKE
Let’s go!
Jake rockets out of his seat and stares at Alex for a second.
Alex doesn’t look up.
ALEX
Jake, wait!
He’s already inside. Alex sits back down slowly and looks out
to the lake again.
ROBERT
Jake! Come here...
JAKE
Hello, dad.
ROBERT
(sternly)
Jake. You're drunk.
40.
JAKE
(slowly)
No. You are drunk.
ROBERT
Look. I was a teenager once, too.
I'd hate it when my parents would
reprimand me for drinking too much.
Tonight, it's fine. Just... don't
make it a habit. The road to
addiction is a dark place and I
don't want to see you end up like
my father.
JAKE
Dad, I love you so much, and I know
I don't say it very much, but even
if you don't remember today I will.
It's been such a long time since
I've seen mom, and you're always
the one here for me; I don't always
show my appreciation, but it's nice
that I can wake up every morning
and you're making breakfast even
though I get sick of eggs after so
long.
Jake leans into his dad's chest and gives him a hug. Robert
is a bit taken aback by his speech but returns the hug
anyways.
ROBERT
I love you, too, J.
(beat)
Alright. It’s time for bed!
ROBERT
Lucas... not so fast!
ROBERT
Dude, you’re fifteen. Cool it on
the partying until you’re a senior
or something, alright?
JAKE
(pointing at clock)
You. I hate you.
We watch the alarm clock as the colon between the hours and
minutes flash. 11:59 PM. We slowly push in to obscure the
date as the seconds past until 12:00 AM.
ROBERT
Good morning, J!
JAKE
Good morning, dad.
ROBERT
(while cooking, to Jake)
Oh, your mother called -
JAKE
Yeah, I know. She’ll be here later
today. I’ve got to go, there’s a
big project due.
Lucas bursts out of his room and makes his way down the
stairs.
Once in the kitchen, Lucas groans loudly and puts his head
down.
ROBERT
Not so fun the day after, is it?
LUCAS
I need some peace and quiet.
ROBERT
Oh, your mom will be here in about
thirty minutes! You can say hi to
her. Jake left really early.
Jake walks into class, holding his head in his hands. Alex
notices him walking in, but doesn't say anything. Jake sits
down.
ALEX
What’s this?
(notices the map)
Oh, God. Not this agin.
JAKE
Again? What do you mean, again?
43.
ALEX
Let me guess... you’re in a time
loop, and you know exactly what I’m
going to say.
MRS. HYNES
Jake, I noticed you didn’t turn in
your project. It’s due today, do
you have it with you?
JAKE
Uh... I have to go.
Jake begins to stumble out of class. Mrs. Hynes and Alex look
at each other.
MRS. HYNES
Is he alright?
ALEX
He partied a bit too hard last
night; it made him a bit...
(makes the Cuckoo signal)
The girl from before who dropped her books, Jenna, stops in
her footsteps and stares at him.
JENNA
Are you alright?
JAKE
This?
(gestures to everything)
This isn’t happening right now. You
aren’t supposed to be here right
now! In -
(checks watch)
fifteen minutes, you’re going to
trip over your shoelaces and if I’m
not in this hallway you’ll bash
your head on the floor. Not fun for
you, right?
44.
JENNA
Um, that happened yesterday. I got
new shoes, see?
JENNA
Look. I’m not sure what’s going on
in your life, but I really
appreciated you helping me out
yesterday.
JENNA
What’s going on with you?
JAKE
(deep breath)
Alright, to make a long story
short: I was stuck in a time loop.
I can try to prove it to you later.
Today, for the first time in...
years? I’m out of it.
JAKE
(laughs)
You know, it’s kinda funny! In this
whole loop, I never learned your
name.
JENNA
(awkwardly)
Oh, it’s Jenna. Jenna Lewis.
JAKE
Nice to finally meet you, Jenna.
I’m Jake.
JENNA
You’re joking, right?
JENNA
You’re Jake Thompson. We literally
have a class together this ye-
(after seeing Jake shaking
his head)
Okay, whatever. You want some
wisdom? Say you were in a time
loop, like in -
JAKE JENNA
Groundhog Day. Groundhog Day.
JENNA
Right. Well, in a time loop, your
life is pointless. You can’t make
any real change in your life
because every day resets. Now that
you’re out of that loop, there’s
real purpose to every decision you
make. I think that’s worth
celebrating, right?
JENNA
I’ve gotta get to class.
(beat)
Again, thanks for helping me out
yesterday. I hope you get this
sorted out.
JAKE
Wow, thanks, Jenna! Sorry I forgot
your name.
Jenna laughs, gets up, and walks off to class. Jake doesn’t
get up. He sees a shadow walk by him and looks up. It’s Alex.
Jake stands up to walk over to his locker.
JAKE
Hey, Alex.
ALEX
(uninterested)
Hi, Jake.
46.
JAKE
This is the first time in years
that I have no idea what to say to
you.
ALEX
Really? No way.
JAKE
You do believe me, right?
ALEX
All that stuff you showed me
yesterday is... impossible. I
believe there’s some truth to what
you think happened, but... a time
loop?
JAKE
I know it sounds insane but I SWEAR
that I can prove it to you.
ALEX
It’s not the time loop that’s the
issue.
JAKE
What is?
ALEX
Do you seriously not have any idea
what you said to me last night?
JAKE
Alex, last night means a lot more
to me than it means to you. I’ve
had a thousand last nights and at
this point they all blur together.
ALEX
(exasperated)
Great. So you don’t even remember
what you said.
JAKE
Wait, what did I say?
ALEX
You... forget it.
JAKE
Wait, I think I remember.
(beat, Alex looks hopeful)
Did I tell you about the lottery
numbers?
ALEX
(is disappointed)
What lottery numbers? Ugh. You’re
ridiculous.
JAKE
(laughs)
Look, if it’s something I said, can
you just tell me?
ALEX
You can’t fuck with my feelings
like this, Jake. It’s not fair to
me.
JAKE
Oh, shit.
ALEX
Right. I have to go.
MRS. WASHINGTON
So, can anybody tell me why we
should shoot horizontally if we’re
using our phones to film something?
JAKE
(from behind her)
Because vertical video looks
ridiculous?
MRS. WASHINGTON
Oh, Jake! That’s right! Thanks for
deciding to show up today.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Oh, Jake. I have some bad news. You
didn’t place at the festival.
JAKE
Yeah, I know.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Well, if you wanted to re-edit the
video, you could probably send it
off to another competition and see
if you could place! I know you put
a lot of work into that; I’m sorry.
JAKE
It’s alright.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Also, since you weren’t here
yesterday to sort through my
paperwork, I have a lot of stuff
for you to do.
JAKE
(to self)
No wonder I stopped coming.
(mockingly)
Being a teacher’s assistant will be
so easy!
JAKE
What’s this?
49.
MRS. WASHINGTON
When my students cared about the
class, we’d win awards there every
year! I wouldn’t even bother
applying now.
JAKE
How does it work?
MRS. WASHINGTON
You have seven days to plan, shoot,
and edit a film with a certain
prompt.
JAKE
What’s the prompt?
MRS. WASHINGTON
Are you sure you want to apply?
It’s a lot of work!
JAKE
(overdramatic)
Yeah, might as well distract myself
from the eternal pain of losing.
A beat.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Last time you worked alone, so
maybe you should get a crew
together this time. The prompt is
on the website.
Mrs. Washington gets out of her chair and scans the room. Her
students sit on their phones and screw around on their
computers. Why are they even in this course?
MRS. WASHINGTON
(to Jake)
At least I have one other student
who gives a shit.
(across the room,
searching)
Jenna! Where are you?
MRS. WASHINGTON
Could you come here, please?
50.
JAKE
Wait, why are you in this class?
JENNA
What? I’ve been in here all year.
JENNA
JENNA
(sarcastically)
Oh... right. You were stuck in the
time loop. What’s up, Mrs.
Washington?
MRS. WASHINGTON
I’m assembling a team to
participate in an elite film
competition!
JENNA
The Central Florida Film Slam?
Isn’t that for middle schoolers?
MRS. WASHINGTON
They have a very distinguished
jury.
JAKE
‘Distinguished’ meaning the local
librarians.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Oh, hush. You two will need a third
to round out the team.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Sterling! Get over here.
STERLING
What’d I do this time?
MRS. WASHINGTON
You’re going to help Jake and Jenna
on this film project.
(to group)
I already told Jake here, but
you’ll have seven days to make a
film with a certain prompt.
STERLING
I’m sorry, what is this? I don’t
want to participate in this.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Mr. Knight, I am creating a 1,000
point assignment and will give you
a zero if you don’t participate.
STERLING
Okay, geez. I’ll do it.
JAKE
Oh, wait, we should probably check
the prompt before entering.
STERLING
So, is this, like, a horror thing?
JENNA
Looks like it.
JAKE
Before we start planning, could we
assign roles? I can write and
direct, Jenna can shoot and act,
and Sterling can be an assistant.
Does that work?
JAKE
Alright. I’ll look for ideas
tonight and present them tomorrow.
52.
Jake arrives home from school and throws his backpack across
the living room.
JAKE
(loudly and sing-songy)
I’m hooome!
MELISSA (O.S.)
What’s that, sweetie?
JAKE
(in shock)
Mom!!!
MELISSA
(caressing his shoulder)
It’s great to see you again, J.
JAKE
(through tears, laughing)
You have no idea.
The two hold in their embrace for a moment. Robert and Lucas
walk in from the living room.
ROBERT
What’s all this ruckus?
JAKE
Dad! Lucas! Mom’s home!
ROBERT
Yeah, buddy. I told you her flight
was delayed.
MELISSA
So, Jake, what have you been up to
recently?
MELISSA
What’s so funny?
JAKE
(through laughter)
It’s just - haha - I don’t even
know where to begin.
Melissa looks to Robert and Lucas to find out what he’s been
up to.
LUCAS
What? This dude has been up to jack
shit; I have no clue what he’s
talking about.
MELISSA
Lucas, language.
JAKE
Alright, if I told you guys that I
was in a time loop and lived the
same yesterday over and over again,
would you believe me?
ROBERT
(while eating)
No.
JAKE
Okay, well, I’ve been digging into
my own character and I’m now
dedicated to being a better person.
54.
ROBERT
(to Lucas)
See? It looks like you could learn
a thing or two from your brother.
MELISSA
I’m happy to hear that you’ve had a
productive few days, Jake.
Jake walks into his room with a smile on his face. He puts
his backpack on his desk, and pulls out his computer, a
charger, and plugs it in.
JAKE
(to self)
It doesn’t hurt to keep a few
memories...
JAKE
(to self)
Alright, Jake. Today is the first
day of the rest of your life.
55.
Jake walks into class and goes to his desk. Jenna is already
sitting on the other side, ready to go. Sterling is on his
phone.
JAKE
Guys, I have a great idea!
Jake pulls out his computer and flips it around to show them
the short film. After a few moments:
JENNA
Why are you showing us this?
JAKE
This is what we’re going to make!
STERLING
Why don’t we come up with something
original?
JENNA
(to Sterling’s remark)
Yeah, I agree with him.
STERLING
(continuing thought)
Let’s have ChatGPT write it for us.
JENNA
(frustrated)
Wait, no. That’s worse.
JAKE
As long as we change things up a
bit, it’s not technically copying!
Also, we only have four days so we
don’t have time to plan something
else out.
JAKE
C’mon guys... we’ve got this!
JENNA
Whatever you say, Jake.
BEGIN MONTAGE
Jake, Jenna, and Sterling going into the back closet of the
film room and grabbing film supplies.
The trio trying on various costumes for their film and having
a generally good time.
The next day, Jake raises his hand in class and gets the
question right. Alex is happy he got the question right.
Jake comes home too late for dinner, with the dishes already
put up. It’s fine, he goes upstairs and starts editing
together the footage.
Jake wakes up and hops out of bed the next morning. 1 day
left.
57.
In math class the next day, Jake pulls out his computer and
works on editing instead of answering questions. Alex looks
on in the distance.
At the end of the song, Jake finishes editing the short film
and after exporting his film, he clicks on a large “SUBMIT
FILM” button. It’s 2:57 AM. He leans back in his chair, proud
of his accomplishments.
JAKE
(sing-song-y)
Guess what happens today?
ALEX
(not having it)
What?
JAKE
(still happy)
Oh, don’t give me that attitude.
Today the results for the a very
fancy film competition come out.
Guess who’s going to be coming home
with a shiny trophy?
ALEX
Congrats.
JAKE
You know, it’d be nice if you
showed me some support whenever I
worked on a big project.
ALEX
(angrily, not looking
back)
Go to hell, Jake.
JAKE
Dude, what’s your problem?
58.
ALEX
(snaps)
Give me some fucking space! Holy
shit, you are so insufferable
sometimes.
Jake scoffs.
JAKE
(loudly)
Alex, wait! I’m sorry!
MRS. HYNES
Mr. Thompson, please keep your
voice down.
JAKE
Can I go to the bathroom?
MRS. HYNES
(sternly)
No. Finish your work.
Jake walks into class, and sees Sterling and Jenna sitting at
his desk. They look like they’ve just gotten some bad news.
JAKE
What’s wrong, guys?
MRS. WASHINGTON
Oh, Jake. Come here.
MRS. WASHINGTON
I just want to preface this with
saying that I loved the work that
you put together.
JAKE
Uh, okay?
59.
MRS. WASHINGTON
But, it didn’t place at the
festival.
JAKE
What do you mean it didn’t place?
We didn’t even get into the top
three?
JENNA
Look, this isn’t all bad! We can re-
edit it for a future competition
and try again.
Jake steps in the house and gives his mother a big, sad hug.
He doesn’t say anything to her.
BEGIN MONTAGE
After school, Jake walks into the house and eats dinner with
his family.
One night, Jake skips the studying and scrolls through his
phone instead. He opens up Instagram and swipes through
photos of his friends, liking their photos that seem much
more interesting than his life.
MRS. WASHINGTON
(droning on)
So, in essence, the tighter the
aperture is, the more stuff will be
in focus of the camera... which
matters why?
MRS. WASHINGTON
(to self)
Remind me why I left ESPN for this?
STERLING
Hey, Jake. I’m throwing tonight.
You should come.
61.
JAKE
(scratching neck)
I don’t know.
STERLING
Dude! Snap out of this attitude! I
know you’re upset about losing this
competition but that’s no reason to
be such a downer.
JAKE
(mumbles)
That’s not what it’s about...
STERLING
Then what is it?
(beat)
Anyways, I have all the drinks you
could want. Please, I am BEGGING
you to get shit faced with me
tonight.
MRS. WASHINGTON
I’m going to pretend I didn’t hear
that.
STERLING
You’ve been looking a bit upset,
too, Mrs. Washington. Wanna come
and get a few brewskis with us?
MRS. WASHINGTON
(not having it, but not in
a mean way)
Oh get the hell out, Sterling.
She points the two out of the room and they quickly leave.
STERLING
(while leaving)
So, are you coming?
JAKE
(giving in)
Uh... sure, I guess.
STERLING
Great! See you there!
(walks away then turns
back)
(MORE)
62.
STERLING (CONT’D)
Oh, and don’t forget to wear all
neon!
JAKE
(to self)
I look ridiculous.
He takes a deep breath and walks into the house. The peace of
the night is interrupted by the loud music and bright colors
streaming from inside the house.
STERLING
You made it!
JAKE
(unenthusiastic)
Yeah. Thanks for hosting.
STERLING
Drink this! Talk to me after you’ve
had a few shots!
JAKE
(reluctantly)
Alright.
After looking into the crowd and seeing how happy everybody
looks, he takes the handle into Sterling’s kitchen and gets a
large plastic cup. He pours far too much vodka into the cup
and mixes it with equal parts lemonade.
63.
Jake peers into the monstrous concoction he’s just made, and
begins to chug. He slams the cup down after he’s finished.
JAKE
(to self)
And... we’re off.
We slow down and for the first time in a while, Jake looks
completely happy. It’s almost a euphoric moment for him.
JAKE
(loudly)
Hey, Jenna!
JENNA
Oh, hey Jake! How are you?!
The noise around them is too loud for either of them to hear.
Jake gestures to his ear that he can’t hear her.
JAKE
(shouting)
What?
JENNA
I said ‘how are you?’!
JAKE
I can’t hear you! Follow me!
Jake and Jenna stumble on their way to grab seats and look
out toward the lake. Jake isn’t quite as drunk as he was
before but it’s safe to say neither one is level headed.
64.
JAKE
This -
(gesturing to the lake)
This is nice.
JAKE
So, what’s going on with you? Any
new lovers in your life?
JENNA
You know, I thought that by senior
I’d have somebody in my life. But
for now...
JAKE
..you’re bitchless.
JENNA
(laughs)
Sure, that’s one way of putting it.
Another beat.
JAKE
Seriously, though, are there are
romantic contenders in your life?
JAKE
(seeing her hesitation)
I get it. Don’t tell me if you
aren’t comfortable.
JENNA
It’s not like that. The last time I
told somebody I had a crush on, the
whole school knew about it in a
week.
JENNA
(checks around her)
Alright, you have to promise to
keep it a secret.
JAKE
Alright. Promise.
65.
JENNA
Okay, so do you know Alex
Hernandez?
JAKE
(laughs loudly)
Oh... I know Alex. Is that a joke?
JAKE
We’re literally best friends; I’ve
known him since I was, like, eight.
Well, I guess I’m not his best
friend anymore. What about him?
(realizing)
Wait, you have a crush on him?
JENNA
Well, he’s cute is all, and I’ve
been thinking about asking him out.
JAKE
Awe, I’m sure he’d appreciate that
but... he definitely isn’t into
you.
JENNA
(hurt)
Oh... really? Why not?
JAKE
I mean, he isn’t into girls.
He’s...
JENNA
Oh!
(disappointed)
Oh.
JAKE
Yeah.
Jenna frowns.
JENNA
Truer words have not been spoken.
66.
JENNA
(upset)
Well, I’m going to get back to the
party.
JAKE
Good talk, Jenna. Oh, and Alex he’s
not out yet... so don’t -
JENNA
Oh God, I would never. Don’t worry.
MELISSA
Jake? Is that you?
JAKE
(drunk)
Uh... no?
JAKE
I mean, yes!
MELISSA
It’s almost two in the morning,
where on Earth were you?
JAKE
I was at Sterling’s house. We were,
uh, working on a project.
Melissa gets up and walks into the hallway that Jake is in.
He tries to stand up straight but continually sways as he
fights the effect of alcohol.
MELISSA
(to Robert)
Honey! Jake’s drunk.
67.
ROBERT
Good for him! Make sure he drinks a
lot of water so he avoids a
hangover!
MELISSA
Alright, you’re safe tonight, J.
Get up to your bed and let’s not
make this a habit! Senioritis will
beat your ass..
After walking into his room, Jake plops down into his chair
and spins around. He gets up, but the combination of his
inebriation and the dizziness makes him fall flat on his
face. He laughs to himself.
JAKE
(drawn out)
I feel good.
The next morning, Jake gets himself off the floor. He yawns
and slogs to get his clothes on. He’s clearly hungover,
groaning as he slowly gets ready.
Jake walks down the stairs and plops himself at the table.
Melissa and Robert are busy in the kitchen, making food for
the family. Lucas is sitting on his phone at the table, as
per usual. Jake puts his head down and moans at his pain.
MELISSA
Rough night, huh?
LUCAS
Hah! You’re hungover.
ROBERT
Drink as much as you can right now
and throughout the day to alleviate
the symptoms.
JAKE
Thanks, dad.
Robert and Melissa put plates down for everybody, and begin
to eat.
MELISSA
Eat up!
JAKE
Ugh -- why is it so bright in here?
LUCAS
Since y’all are so chill with Jake
getting drunk whenever he wants,
can I have some friends here to
drink this weekend?
MELISSA
(stern)
Absolutely not!
LUCAS
That’s not fair! Dad let me go out
to a party a few weeks ago.
MELISSA
Oh... is that true?
JAKE
Wait, yeah, why are you guys so
fine with me drinking?
ROBERT
It’s senior year! That’s when I
started drinking, too.
(MORE)
69.
ROBERT (CONT’D)
You’ve already gotten your
applications in, so there’s not
much that could change. Speaking
of, when do you hear back from your
schools?
JAKE
Uh, honestly... I forgot what
college I even I applied to. I
think I sent something in to
Florida and FSU but I’m not sure if
I applied anywhere out of state.
MELISSA
Let’s hope that you submitted an
application at all! You’ve been so
all over the place recently.
JAKE
Yeah. I know.
MELISSA
Can you drop Lucas off at cross
country practice?
JAKE
Ugh -- no.
MELISSA
(angrily)
What’s that?
JAKE
(backing down)
I meant yes! This hangover’s got me
all confused.
Jake goes back to eating his food, then grabs his stuff and
walks out the door with Lucas.
JAKE
So... what’s going on in your life,
Lucas?
70.
LUCAS
Huh? My life?
JAKE
Yeah.
LUCAS
Why do you care?
JAKE
(scoffs)
Uh, because I’m your brother?
LUCAS
I dunno.
JAKE
‘I dunno’? You’re ridiculous.
Lucas looks up from his phone and thinks long and hard about
what’s going on.
LUCAS
I’ve been thinking about joining
film club, but I don’t really know
where to start.
JAKE
Oh, I’m actually an officer, did
you want me to reach out to Mrs.
Washington to get you in?
LUCAS
Wait, could you really do that?
JAKE
Of course!
(beat)
Come to think of it, I haven’t been
to a meeting in a while.
LUCAS
Oh.
JAKE
Don’t worry! I could get you in,
probably.
LUCAS
Thanks!
Jake pulls into his parking spot and looks at the school
ahead of him.
Jake walks into math class and sits down. Alex is sitting
behind him.
JAKE
Hey, Alex.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Hey, Jake. Can you get these sorted
for me by the end of class?
JAKE
Uh... sure.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Great, thanks!
STERLING
Yo, Jake! My parents are leaving on
Friday for a party, ready to run it
back?
JAKE
Seriously? How many parties can one
man have?
STERLING
Is that a serious question?
JAKE
Yeah.
STERLING
(laughs)
Good one! I’ll see you then.
JAKE
(while on phone)
Oh, I forgot to tell you guys, I’m
going to Sterling’s tonight.
MELISSA
Again? Weren’t you just there last
weekend?
JAKE
Yeah.
ROBERT
I know we’re usually pretty
accepting, but come on.
JAKE
(still on phone)
Relax, dad. I’m working on a film
project, not getting drunk. I’m not
an alcoholic.
LUCAS
Sure...
Jake stares down Lucas. Lucas backs down. Jake backs out of
his seat.
JAKE
Alright, I’m going to head out now.
MELISSA
Already?
JAKE
Yup. Gotta get going.
Melissa looks sad to see her son going, but Jake doesn’t look
back.
Jake walks into the house. As per usual, it’s filled to the
brim with high school kids. Sterling stumbles over to Jake
with a Solo cup full of some sort of liquid.
He chugs down the drink and throws the cup to the ground,
navigating his way to the center.
JAKE
(loudly, drunk)
Hey, Alex!
ALEX
(uninterested)
Hey, Jake.
JAKE
Why are you here?
ALEX
Why do you care? Why are you here?
JAKE
I’m here... to confront you for
being a shitty friend.
ALEX
Jake, go home. You’re drunk.
JAKE
(stumbling over words)
No, you need to leave. Sterling
says that, uh, all losers need
to... to leave.
ALEX
Is this how you handle things? Are
you this pathetic that as soon as
you face any sort of problem you
devolve into... this?
ALEX
I mean, you lose one film
competition and this is how you
cope with it? Jake, come on. Look
at what you’ve become.
JAKE
At least I care about something in
my life. You’re passionless.
JAKE (CONT'D)
You are so complacent with doing
nothing. I pity you.
Alex sits with a straight face and collects his thoughts for
a beat.
ALEX
Remember how you told me you were
stuck in that time loop or
whatever?
Jake nods.
ALEX
Right. Did you learn absolutely
nothing from that? Let me assume
that you’re not making up some
psychotic lie and that you were
actually living the same day
repeatedly.
JAKE
It’s not a lie.
(smugly)
Go on.
ALEX
(sighs)
How the hell did you get out? You
are one of the shittiest friends I
know, and even after God himself
told you to change by putting you
in that loop, you left without
making any real change.
JAKE
I actually made a lot -
ALEX
(snaps)
Don’t interrupt me!
(MORE)
76.
ALEX (CONT’D)
(backing out)
You know what? I’m not even going
to bother. You don’t deserve my
time.
On the way out, Jake grabs his car keys and walks to his car.
COP #1
(speaking into radio)
Pulling into Tangerine Place,
checking out this noise complaint.
COP #1
What the hell?
COP #2
From the party, maybe?
FLASH!
Later in a cell, Jake sits with a two other inmates, who look
hardened by their time in prison. One is MARCO, and the other
FRANKLIN. Both are in their late 30s or 40s, and look
hardened by previous times spent in jail. They speak gruffly.
There’s a strong juxtaposition between Jake and the others.
MARCO
What are you in for?
77.
JAKE
(hesitant)
Uh - I got wasted and drove into a
pole.
FRANKLIN
Drunk driving? That’s a huge no-no.
Got my buddy in for thirty-five
years.
JAKE
(suddenly scared)
thirty-five years?! What?!
MARCO
Oh, don’t let Franklin scare ya.
His bud was also smuggling drugs
‘cross the border.
JAKE
(relieved)
Oh. Why wouldn’t you tell me that?
JAKE
Well, what are y’all in here for?
FRANKLIN MARCO
None of your business. Bank robbery.
JAKE
Wait, y’all were the ones robbing
the Bank of America off of Corrine?
MARCO
Joking! Franklin over here thought
it’d be a good idea to hit a police
officer.
FRANKLIN
You were the one who ran the red
light! I was protecting you from
that asshole cop.
Marco takes the hits and accepts that it’s his fault.
78.
MARCO
Relax. My lawyer friend said that
if I say I was trying to swat a bug
and accidentally hit him, I would
be fine.
FRANKLIN
What?! You need a better lawyer.
MARCO
Fine, but how did scrawny over here
know about it?
JAKE
Y’all are familiar with Groundhog
Day, right?
JAKE
Right. Well, the premise is that
this total loser gets stuck in a
time loop where he repeats the same
day over and over. At one point, he
sees when a bank truck is doing a
delivery and uses that window to
take the bag of money for the day.
That’s what I was doing with y’all.
FRANKLIN
(sarcastically)
Oh, sure. How did you actually find
out?
JAKE
I know it doesn’t make sense, but
that’s the truth.
MARCO
Wait, I understand. So you were
stuck in this loop thingy?
JAKE
(cautiously)
Yeah...
MARCO
Why?
79.
JAKE
I’m sorry?
MARCO
Why were you stuck in this loop?
JAKE
I’m not sure. I spent a lot of time
trying to figure out but it
wouldn’t work.
MARCO
Well, in Groundhog Day, Phil can’t
get out until he accepts his fate
and becomes a better person. One of
the things that helps him get there
is the girl - what’s her name?
JAKE
(boggled)
Uh, Rita.
MARCO
Right. Once Phil falls in love with
Rita, he escapes the loop. Did that
happen to you?
JAKE
Now that you mention it, the last
thing that happened was I confessed
my love to my best friend.
MARCO
Well, there you have it! What
happened to her?
JAKE
‘She’ is a ‘he’ and I don’t think
he’s into dudes.
MARCO
Oh! That’s fine! Franklin’s also...
you know.
JAKE
Really?
FRANKLIN
Sorry, what’s Marco telling you
now?
MARCO
(playfully)
We’re just talking about how much
of a fruit you are!
FRANKLIN
(gruffly)
Funny.
MARCO
Also, scrawny here has a crush on
his best friend and he doesn’t like
him back.
FRANKLIN
(mockingly)
Oh, boo-hoo. If I had a dollar for
every time I’d gotten rejected by
another guy I wouldn’t have had to
rob that bank in the first place.
JAKE
(sarcastically)
Thanks, Franklin. You’re such a
bundle of sunshine, I wonder how
you aren’t taken yet.
MARCO
Have you tried talking to your
friend since you left your little
loop?
JAKE
Yeah. We just didn’t click.
FRANKLIN
If I had sat around my entire life
without going after the people I
love, I wouldn’t be with the love
of my life.
MARCO
What? Do you have a problem with
this?
81.
JAKE
Oh shut up. You two are ridiculous.
Jake laughs, and the other two join in. A guard walks from
the hallway.
GUARD
Thompson! You’re free to go.
JAKE
Really?
The guard starts unlocking the cell and opens it up. Jake
looks around and gets up.
JAKE
(to Marco and Franklin)
Thanks for your advice, guys.
MARCO
Of course. Now get the hell out of
here! If we see you again...
JAKE
(to guard)
Wait, who made my bail?
GUARD
They did.
JAKE
Oh... shit.
The guard walks away. The two cross their arms. Jake puts his
hands in his pockets.
JAKE
(slow and awkwardly)
What’s up, guys?
Jake sits in the back of his mom’s car. Robert sits in the
passenger side seat. After a beat:
82.
JAKE
I can explain, guys -
MELISSA
(curt)
I don’t want to hear it.
MELISSA
Jail?! I mean - after everything
we’ve done for you? Was it not
enough to send you to a good school
and to raise you in a good house?
What are you supposed to do for
college now? All of our years of
effort - GONE. It’s gone!
(weak laugh)
What did we do wrong, Jake? Why did
you think this was a good decision?
Should we have been stricter and
forced you to stay home every
night? We gave you everything you
wanted and you still blew it! What
a waste. What a waste!
ROBERT
(quietly to Melissa)
Sweetheart, calm down. It seems
like it was an accident, at least
he wasn’t trying to drive the car.
MELISSA
(quietly back, angrily)
This wouldn’t have happened if you
didn’t let him go out all the time.
ROBERT
Shh... would you rather have a
child who resents us or one who
makes a few mistakes?
With his head held low, Jake trudges into his house. He sees
his parents whispering about something - definitely him - at
the kitchen table. Melissa looks over and sees Jake, ending
the conversation and walking over to him.
83.
MELISSA
(concerned)
Jake...
JAKE
(dismissive)
I know... I know!
Jake tries walking straight to his room, but she stops him.
MELISSA
(snapping)
After what you’ve put me through
tonight, Jake, don’t you DARE walk
past me. I am your mother.
JAKE
(spiraling)
I’m sorry, okay! I’m a fuck-up!
What else can I say? I messed up.
I’m sorry! Is that what you want to
hear? It doesn’t even matter if
that’s what you wanted to hear,
because no matter what I tell you,
you will never believe that my life
has been destroyed because of
something that nobody else has
experienced before. You can only
judge me for what -
MELISSA
(comforting)
Jake... stop it. I’m sorry. Every
teenager -
(quietly)
“fucks up” -
(normally)
At least once. Granted, they don’t
usually go to jail, but we’ll
figure this out together.
Robert joins in for the hug. Jake hasn’t gotten this sort of
physical attention in a long time. He needed it.
After a beat:
MELISSA
(to Jake)
Alright, off to bed with you.
84.
JAKE
Wait, that’s it? No grounding, I
get to keep my phone?
ROBERT
We’ve decided to let you off the
hook for it this once. Don’t tell
your brother.
JAKE
I love you, guys.
ROBERT
We love you, too.
In his room, Jake walks over to his desk and plops himself
into his chair. After spinning around, he looks at the
scattered pieces of the dialogue tree he destroyed earlier on
top of his desk.
After putting the two pieces together, Jake sighs and puts
his head down.
Jake smiles while watching the two poorly act. He turns off
his phone and goes to bed.
85.
JENNA
Mrs. Washington said that a new
competition was opening up, and I
want to be the director this time.
JAKE
Mhm.
JENNA
What? Jake, did you hear me?
JAKE
Yeah.
JENNA
I want to be the director of our
next film. Are you okay with that?
JAKE
Yeah.
JENNA
What, no arguing? Since when are
you so willing to give up the role
as director?
JAKE
Jenna, have you ever experienced a
singular event in your life that
makes you rethink everything you’ve
done and everything you will do?
JAKE (CONT'D)
Well, that happened to me last
night when I was in jail.
JENNA
Arrested?!
JAKE
Doesn’t matter. How should I tell
Alex I’m in love with him?
JENNA
What the hell are you talking
about?
Jenna looks back to Jake. She slowly grabs a chair and sits
next to him.
JENNA
Well, are you two even on speaking
terms again? I thought y’all were
having a rough time.
JAKE
That’s what I’m trying to fix,
Jenna! Help me out here.
JENNA
I’ve already written the script.
It’s a love story. I can cast you
two as actors in it. That way, you
can reconnect with him under the
guise of just making a short film.
JAKE
Wait, you’d do that for me?
(beat, narrows eyes
suspiciously)
Why?
Jenna sighs.
JENNA
Clearly, you two have a bond that I
could never match. I’ll find
somebody someday, but for now let’s
get you your man.
87.
Jake smiles goofily and nods his head. Jenna rolls her eyes,
wanting him to take it seriously.
JENNA
(semi-seriously)
Stop that.
JAKE
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
JENNA
Yeah, yeah. Thank me when we get
this award!
BEGIN MONTAGE
Jake walks into his bedroom, satisfied with the day he’s had.
JAKE
This is my little brother, Lucas.
MRS. WASHINGTON
Oh, I remember! You were telling me
about him. Hi, Lucas!
88.
LUCAS
Hi!
JAKE
I know he hasn’t been to any of the
meetings, and he didn’t watch the
films for this week, but would he
be able to participate?
MRS. WASHINGTON
Of course.
(to Lucas)
Why don’t you join him in the first
group?
At home, Jake has dinner with his family. Lucas looks happy,
and Jake smiles at his brother’s happiness.
JAKE
(reading)
I knew it was you, you rotten
bastard! You’re going to rot in
jail.
(squints at script)
What is this? Did you do rewrites?
JAKE
Well, is it still romantic?
JENNA
Of course!
JAKE
(doesn’t trust her)
Okay...
At the dinner table, Jake reads the script while the family
is eating. He looks really into it.
89.
In his room, Jake paces around the room while practicing the
script. He leans in for a kiss in the air. His alarm goes
off.
END MONTAGE
JAKE
(boldly)
I knew you were innocent from the
moment I met you. Now that you’re
free, I can finally say... I love
you.
STERLING
(stilted, reading off
script)
I love you too, Joel. Give me a
kiss!
JENNA
And... cut! Jake, you aren’t
actually kissing Sterling.
JAKE
I knew that!
STERLING
Ew. Save that for Alex.
JENNA
I think it’s looking good! Great
work, Jake.
JAKE
Has Alex been practicing this on
his own?
90.
JENNA
I don’t know. I told him to, but
nobody ever listens to me. Anyways,
we’ll meet at the stage after
school and try to get it all done.
Guys, please be prepared! I don’t
want to stay until midnight
shooting.
JAKE
Got it.
JAKE
(gesturing to green
screen)
What’s up with all this?
JENNA
Well, we were planning on building
out this intricate jail set, but
time constraints came up and I
couldn’t find anybody to help me.
JAKE
This looks nothing like jail. Trust
me, I’d know.
JENNA
This is the fifth time you’ve
mentioned jail. You shouldn’t be
bragging about it. We’ll just green
screen the jail later and it’ll
look real.
STERLING
(laughs)
Fix it in post, right?
ALEX
(shouting across
auditorium while walking)
Sorry I’m a bit late, it took me
longer than I thought to get dre-
ALEX
(to Jenna)
What’s he doing here?
JENNA
Oh, it turns out Sterling doesn’t
know how to act, so we brought in
Jake to do it instead!
JAKE
(whispering to Jenna)
Wait, he didn’t know I would be
doing this?
JENNA
(to Jake)
Surprise! I thought it’d be good
for the romantic tension on screen.
JAKE
(whispering)
You’re ridiculous.
(to Alex)
Hey, Alex!
ALEX
What’s up with all the green
screen?
JENNA
Budget issues.
ALEX
That’s gonna make it hard to act.
JAKE
(excitedly)
That’s what I was saying!
JENNA
Don’t worry guys! If all goes
right, we should be out of here by
3:00.
JENNA
(exasperated)
And... cut!
STERLING
(overjoyed)
We did it!
JAKE
Wait, that’s it?
JENNA
Not so fast. We have one more scene
to shoot. The climax.
JENNA
I want to get out of here as much
as y’all, but come on! This is what
we’ve been building to! Let’s get
this on the first take and we’ll be
done.
ALEX
(gesturing to Jake)
Tell this asshole to get his lines
right the first time and maybe we’d
be done by... 3 hours ago!
JAKE
(sarcastically)
It’s my fault that I have a hard
time acting like I’m attracted to
you! Us, romantically? Ew.
ALEX
Oh, shut up.
STERLING
By the way, my parents are out of
the house again. Do y’all wanna
come over and drink to celebrate
once we wrap?
JAKE
Dude, are your parents ever home?
Sterling shrugs.
JENNA
Less talking, more filming! Get
into position.
Jake flips through the script to the end. Alex has his own
script. They both memorize their lines for a second, before
getting into position. Jake, in his warden outfit, puts
handcuffs on Alex and gets ready to remove them.
JENNA
And... action!
JAKE
(weak, kinda cheesy
acting)
Jordan, I knew you were innocent
from the moment you stepped into
this jail. I can’t believe you’re
finally getting out of here!
ALEX
(stilted acting)
I can’t believe I’ve lost so much
of my life because I was framed by
somebody drunk driving. I would
never drive drunk, the D.A.R.E.
program taught me well!
JENNA
(sighs)
Mrs. Washington wanted me to
include something about stopping
drug addiction, so I wrote it in.
JAKE
Now that we’re out of the prison, I
have a confession. I am in love
with you, Alex.
JENNA
Cut!
JAKE
What happened? I thought that was
great.
JENNA
Uh, Jake, his character is Jordan.
JAKE
Oops! Heh. Freudian slip.
ALEX
A freudian slip means you secretly
meant to say it, dumbass.
ALEX
(realizing)
Oh. You probably did mean to say
it.
STERLING
Let’s keep this moving! And... act-
JENNA
What are you doing? That’s my line.
STERLING
Sorry, I’m just getting a bit
antsy.
Jenna eyes Sterling angrily. Jake and Alex get back into
position.
JENNA
Action!
95.
JAKE
Now that we’re out of the prison, I
have a confession. I am in love
with you, Alex.
JENNA
Cut!
ALEX
Jesus Christ.
JAKE
I’m so sorry, guys! Freudian sl-
ALEX
STOP CALLING IT A FREUDIAN SLIP!
JAKE
Now that we’re out of prison, I
have a confession. I am in love
with you,
(thinks hard about next
word, says it slowly)
Jordan.
ALEX
Joel, you don’t have to say
anything more. We’re on the same
page.
...slowly...
JENNA
Cut! What the hell was that? Look
at the script. What does it say? “A
passionate kiss is shared between
the two long-estranged lovers.
Juices drip down their faces like a
waterfall of pleasure.”
JAKE
Were you reading a Colleen Hoover
book while writing this? Why is it
so... descriptive.
ALEX
I thought that was weird, too.
“Waterfall of pleasure?” What the
hell does that even mean?
JENNA
Passion! PASSION!
JAKE
(mocking)
Passion, Alex.
STERLING
Alex, think about this. When you’re
holding the Orange County Student
Media Festival award for Best Same
Sex Kiss, you’ll be thanking that
waterfall of pleasure.
ALEX
That’s an awfully specific
category. I just don’t want -
STERLING
I’ll give you a hundred bucks.
ALEX
(enthusiastic about cash)
Passion? Oh, I’ve got tons of that.
Let’s do it again!
ALEX
Joel, you don’t have to say
anything more. We’re on the same
page.
JENNA
And... that’s a wrap!
Jenna and Sterling clap for the two. Alex gives a little bow.
Jake doesn’t know what to do, he’s still smiling over the
kiss.
ALEX
(to Jake)
That’s how acting is done, asshole.
JAKE
Want to act some more, later?
STERLING
Alright, remember: party at my
house tonight! One final
celebration!
JAKE
(to self)
Jake, you’re the star. You’ve got
this. Play it cool.
Jake scans the room and sees that nobody else is wearing a
costume.
He makes his way to the kitchen where the booze is laid out.
Sterling is in the middle, finishing up a conversation with
one of his friends. When done, Jake walks up.
98.
JAKE
(over the music)
What the hell? I thought this was a
costume party!
STERLING
Huh? I literally never said that.
JAKE
Okay, well. Yeah, you didn’t say
it. Look at me! I look like an
idiot.
STERLING
(playfully)
So... are you going to tell Alex
about your feelings?
JAKE
Who told you that?
JAKE
Jenna! Get over here!
JAKE
Yo, why did you tell Sterling?
JENNA
(drunkenly)
Tell him what? I didn’t say
anything.
JAKE
Don’t play dumb, you told him about
(whispers)
Alex.
STERLING
Dude, I don’t think she has to play
dumb, look at her! And... come on.
It’s obvious.
JAKE
You guys didn’t say anything to
him, right?
Jenna and Sterling sit in silence. Jake looks between the two
of the suspiciously. Under pressure:
JENNA
I... might have said something
about it.
JAKE
I wanted this to be a surprise!
It’d be all cute and now it’s
ruined.
(beat)
Okay, not ‘ruined’ but c’mon.
JENNA
(sadly)
I’m sorry, Jake.
JAKE
It’s fine. Sterling, uh, give me
your strongest shot possible.
STERLING
That’ll put hair on your chest.
JAKE
(points at both of them)
Fuck the both of you.
Jake downs the large shot. He pulls Jenna and Sterling in for
a hug.
JAKE
Wish me luck!
STERLING JENNA
You got this! Good luck!
Closing the door behind him, Jake steps onto the lawn and
walks to the dock. Alex is sitting on the steps, hitting his
vape.
Jake sits in the chair next to Alex and looks out at the
lake. The night is peaceful, and Jake doesn’t open his mouth
to speak just yet.
JAKE
So, what’s up with you?
Alex scoffs.
ALEX
I’ll be honest with you, Jake. I’m
not doing well. I lost my closest
friend, my grades are failing, and
I just embarrassed myself on video
for a stupid short film.
JAKE
Embarrassed? I’m sorry if you
thought it was embarrassing, but in
my professional opinion it was
beautiful. Very profound.
ALEX
(laughs)
‘Professional opinion’? Come on.
JAKE
Hey, they don’t give out third
place at the Orange County District
Short Film Slam Festival to
anybody!
Alex lets out a brief laugh. After, they stare off into the
distance for a beat.
ALEX
Jake, tell me honestly. What’s up
with this story about the time
loop?
Jake doesn’t know how to explain it. He racks his brain for
an answer.
JAKE
The loop was my past. I’ve moved
onto my future.
101.
ALEX
If I believe you, though, why
aren’t you more hung up on it?
JAKE
I dunno, man. It took me a long
time to realize this, but what I
was living in there wasn’t a life.
While it was my life, it wasn’t a
life. You know?
ALEX
(mockingly)
Woah. Deep.
JAKE
(playfully)
Shut up.
A beat.
ALEX
Did you really mean what you said
that night?
JAKE
Every word.
Another beat.
ALEX
I didn’t know you were... you know.
JAKE
Bisexual?
ALEX
Yeah.
JAKE
I wasn’t anything close to bisexual
before that loop.
ALEX
What made you realize?
JAKE
You did. I was happy with my
relationship with Sarah, but I
wasn’t entirely happy because I
knew my attention could never be on
her.
102.
ALEX
I just don’t get it. How could you -
why me?
JAKE
Alex, I know you more than anybody
could possibly know you. I got more
information in that one practically
infinite day then I will ever learn
from you going forward.
ALEX
Is that not a problem, though? You
know everything about me. Even
though we’ve been friends forever,
you know... too much.
JAKE
Would you rather have me conceal my
feelings? I learned that life is
much easier when you’re completely
honest.
ALEX
I guess that’s fair.
STERLING
(yelling)
Have you told him yet?!
JAKE
(yelling back)
Told who what?
Jake turns around and signals for Sterling to shut the hell
up. He doesn’t recognize the signal.
STERLING
Tell Alex about y-
JAKE
Shut up, Sterling!
STERLING
Oh. Sorry!
JAKE
What?
103.
ALEX
Nothing. You’re ridiculous. You
never learned how to keep your
mouth shut, did you?
JAKE
When my actions have no
consequence, it makes it a bit
hard.
ALEX
How did you find out?
JAKE
Find out what?
ALEX
That I’m bi, too.
ALEX
Jake? C’mon, you can’t leave me
hanging.
JAKE
I... don’t remember. It was such a
long time ago.
ALEX
Bullshit.
JAKE
I’m serious.
ALEX
Oh.
ALEX
Jake. You -
ALEX
You don’t know how long I’ve felt
this way about you. I’m just...
104.
ALEX
I’m at such a tough time in my
life. My parents might accept me
for who I am, but what if they
don’t?
JAKE
Alex, look at me. I will always,
always be here for you. And I know
that this world is a judgmental
place but as long as we have each
other’s backs - who cares?
ALEX
I love you, Jake.
JAKE
I love you, too.
ALEX
I would kiss you, but I think we
already got that out of the way.
ALEX
(chuckles)
I swear to God, if you got stuck in
another loop and just perfected
this day...
JAKE
I can prove that I didn’t.
Jake pulls out his phone, and Alex looks over. 11:59 PM turns
to 12:00 AM. Jake puts his phone away and looks back at the
lake. As we pull away:
ALEX
Wait, you’re telling me that at
midnight you just got flung back to
the next morning? What happened if
you were doing something?
105.
JAKE
Don’t ask questions. It’s too
complicated.
JAKE
Okay, if you really need to know,
as soon as it hit 12:00, everything
would go black and I would wake up
at 6:07 AM.
ALEX
Why 6:07?
JAKE
Dude, stop asking questions. Let’s
enjoy the moment.
Jake wears a crooked blue bow tie. Melissa sees it and fixes
it for him.
MELISSA
We’re running late, Jake! Why don’t
you run on ahead? I don’t want you
to miss your categories.
ROBERT
We’re going to be on the right side
of the theater. Come see us after
you get your award.
LUCAS
Oh. Good luck, Jake!
ALEX
There you are!
JAKE
What’d I miss?
ALEX
Jenna won an award for directing
and best screenplay?
JAKE
Best screenplay? What was she
against, The Room?
ALEX
Beats me. However, we’re up for
best in show... and I think we
could win.
JAKE
Oh, Alex. So optimistic.
ALEX
Shut up.
Alex grabs Jake’s hands and drags him into the theater. They
find seats by Jenna and Sterling. Jenna holds multiple
awards.
JENNA
There you are! Look at all of these
awards! Of course, this is all
thanks to you two.
JAKE
Thanks, Jenna. You deserve it all.
STERLING
Hold up, they’re about to announce
it!
ANNOUNCER
And now... for best in show!
Remember, here are the nominees:
Knightly Journeys.
Spaces, Places.
The Park Avenue Pack.
Murder Mayhem.
Finally, Jailbird: A Love Story.
After hearing their film, Jailbird, the group lets out a big
whoop.
MELISSA
Get together, you two!
JAKE
Mom, go to your seat!
She waves him off, clicks a photo, and happily walks away.
ANNOUNCER
Drumroll, please!
A drumroll.
ANNOUNCER
The winner, with a unanimous jury
decision...
CUT TO BLACK.
TITLE: “LOOPED”