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The document discusses two tasks: the first analyzes a bar graph depicting the population growth of seals, whales, and dolphins from 2006 to 2018, highlighting the significant rise in dolphin and seal populations by 2018. The second task examines the impact of online socialization, noting both the negative effects of social detachment and the positive benefits of convenience and speed in communication. Overall, it concludes that the advantages of online socialization outweigh its disadvantages.

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Task 1 and task 2 fixed

The document discusses two tasks: the first analyzes a bar graph depicting the population growth of seals, whales, and dolphins from 2006 to 2018, highlighting the significant rise in dolphin and seal populations by 2018. The second task examines the impact of online socialization, noting both the negative effects of social detachment and the positive benefits of convenience and speed in communication. Overall, it concludes that the advantages of online socialization outweigh its disadvantages.

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Task 1

The bar graph gives information about the population of seal, whale and dolphin and their growth in
percentage from 2006 to 2018.

Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of seal is higher in 2006 and the highest percentage showed a
significant growth during the period, while the proportion of dolphin is highest in 2018 which is undoubtedly
noticeable.

In details, the rate of dolphin is more than 40 % which is the highest compared to others and the percentage
of dolphin is slightly more than 15% which shows the lowest percentage in 2006. In 2010 all the population
growth is almost in same proportion but in 2014 the rate of seal and dolphin increases slightly. The percentage
of whale is above 20% and it grows up a little bit in 30% and shows an flat rate from 2006 to 2018.

On the other hands in 2018 the proportion of seal and dolphin jumps up indicating their high rise of
population sharply. The population of seal rises from 35% to 45% in 2018 and the rate of dolphin rises more
than 50% from 32% which is mostly observed in this bar graph.

The bar graph illustrates the population percentages of seals, whales, and dolphins, and their growth trends
from 2006 to 2018. Overall, the percentage of seals was the highest in 2006, while dolphins showed the most
significant growth by 2018.

In detail, the proportion of dolphins was more than 40% in 2018, the highest among the three groups,
compared to slightly over 15% in 2006. By 2010, the growth rates of all three populations were nearly equal,
but seals and dolphins experienced slight increases by 2014. The population of whales remained relatively
stable, starting at above 20% in 2006 and growing gradually to 30% by 2018.

In contrast, 2018 saw a sharp rise in the populations of seals and dolphins. The proportion of seals increased
from 35% in 2006 to 45% in 2018, while dolphins rose dramatically from 32% to over 50%, as shown in the
graph.

Task 2

It is certainly true that people are choosing socialize online rather than face-to-face has greatly change the
way of communicate with each other in socially. It has both positive and negative developments. Though
there are some positive impacts of online activities in our daily life but there are certainly some negative
effects which is also noticeable.
There are several drawbacks of online socialization. People are becoming dependent gradually in this
platform. The impact of online connection with friends and family become a trend which makes us inactive
and unsocial. If a person make connection with others online then they will not be able to connect with each
other face-to-face which make the society depended their activities online. This will put our future generation
totally blank and unsocial and they have to survive without friends and famil y. Sometimes fraudulence may
occur and people may put them in a trap which is unwanted to all.

In spite of these negative effects, however, online socialization has brought important benefits as well. One
obvious advantage of using online is that it is a fast and easy way to communicate with friends and family
wherever they are in the world. Another positive effect is that it allows them to send all kinds of information
such as pictures, photos, texts etc. very quickly, cheaply. This has a huge advance on earlier communication
systems.

To sum up, while there are some obvious drawbacks to using online, this fast and ever friendly technology has
greatly improved our ability to co communicate both professionally and socially. It seems to me that online
has brought us more benefits than disadvantages.

FIXED:

It is certainly true that the preference for online socialization over face-to-face interaction has significantly
changed the way we communicate. This shift has brought both positive and negative effects.

On the negative side, reliance on online platforms can lead to social detachment. Overdependence on virtual
communication may result in people becoming less active and unsociable in real-life interactions. For example,
individuals who spend most of their time online may struggle to build meaningful face-to-face connections.
Furthermore, online platforms can expose users to risks like fraud and scams, which are increasingly common
in the digital world.

Nevertheless, online socialization offers undeniable benefits. One major advantage is its convenience and
speed, allowing people to connect with friends and family across the globe. Additionally, online platforms
enable the quick and inexpensive sharing of information, including photos, texts, and videos, which was not
possible with older communication systems.

In conclusion, while online socialization presents challenges, its benefits in enhancing communication and
connectivity outweigh the drawbacks. It has revolutionized the way we interact, both socially and
professionally.

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