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Writing HW Buổi 1 - Gia Thắng (Fixed)

The document discusses the average mobile contract bills in Europe during the first nine months of 2002, highlighting a slight decrease in Alpha's costs while others, particularly Sim TX, saw significant increases. Domo initially had the highest costs but was overtaken by Sim TX by September, with both showing upward trends. Additionally, it covers annual spending changes in a UK school from 1981 to 2001, noting a decline in resources and salaries for other workers, contrasted by increases in furniture and equipment expenditures.

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Writing HW Buổi 1 - Gia Thắng (Fixed)

The document discusses the average mobile contract bills in Europe during the first nine months of 2002, highlighting a slight decrease in Alpha's costs while others, particularly Sim TX, saw significant increases. Domo initially had the highest costs but was overtaken by Sim TX by September, with both showing upward trends. Additionally, it covers annual spending changes in a UK school from 1981 to 2001, noting a decline in resources and salaries for other workers, contrasted by increases in furniture and equipment expenditures.

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Given is the four line graphs of different European mobile which illustrateS the average bill of contract in

the first 9 months of 2002, paid by euro.

In general, while the average cost of Alpha decreaseD slightly after the given period, the reverse side is
true for the others, increasing significantly. Notably, Sim TX dominates with the highest cost at the end
of survey although the peak belonged to Domo at first

On January, It is obvious that the amount of money are spent by Domo’ users, peaking at 15 euro,
threefold that of Sim TX. After that, generally, both of them witness an upward tendency , while the cost
of Domo rise gradually to nearly 23 euro on September, 2 euro lower than that of Sim TX/with Domo
rising gradually to nearly 23 euro and exactly 25 euro of Sim TX

In terms of Lex and Alpha, at approximately 12 euro, Lex’s users have to pay higher than Alpha’s
counterparts, which under 10 euro monthly on the beginning month of THE given year. Instead of
increasing minimally to nearly 18 euro as Lex, the average cost of Alpha witness a fluctuating process,
and stand at around 8 euro.

 OVERALL FLOW ỔN NHƯNG SAI NHIỀU LỖI BASIC QUÁ NÈ, TỰ FIX LẠI NHE CHỦ YẾU LA CHIA SAI
THÌ
 CẦN MENTION 1 SỐ MAIN FEATURE VỀ XU HƯỚNG NỮA.
EX: LEX & Alpha có nearly similar trend sau đó opposite trend, còn câu của mình dùng instead
hơi bị confussing

TA CC LE GR OVERALL
6 6/7 6 5/6 5.5 – 6.0
10y

Increase: Insurance, teachers sal, resources,

Decrease: other workers salaries, furniture

10y

Increase: insurance,furniture

Decrease: teachers sal, resources, other

Writing task 1: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK
school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

The given illustrations demonstrated the proportion of 5 factors which a particular UK school distributed
in expending purposes annually from 1981 to 2001.

At first glance, it can be observed from the diagram that while both resources and other workers’s
salaries suffered a downward tendency after two decades, the opposite side was true for the others,
With the substantial increase in share belonged to Furniture and equipment.

It is obvious that Teachers’ salaries was responsible for the highest percentage of School’s expenditure
during the first 10 years, growing from two-fifths to a half. This data was tenfold as much as that of
Insurance. In addition, a fifth of resources suffered a gradual increase for a decade, stemming from 15%
in the early 1980s. In contrast, the figure for Furniture and equipment and other workers’s salaries saw a
downward trend, while the former declined dramatically by one in ten from 1981 to 1991, doubling that
of the latter.
Regarding the last 10 years, at 8%, only could Insurance increase after 10 years. Simultaneously, the
school’s expenditure of Furniture and equipment surged to roughly a quarter. On the other hand, despite
decreasing by 5%, the data of Teachers’s salaries accounted for a lion share, following by the proportion
of resources which plunge by nearly 10%. This decrease was higher than Other workers’s salaries,
decreasing by 7% at the end of the survey.

TA CC LE GR OVERALL
6 6/7 5 5/6 5.5 – 6.5

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