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NZ e 1651300200 Level 2 Writing Persuasive Writing Annotated Exemplar Ver 1

The document presents a persuasive argument against allowing skateboards at school, citing safety concerns for both riders and nearby students. It emphasizes the lack of space for skateboarding on the playground, which could interfere with other activities. The conclusion urges the school to ban skateboards based on these reasons.

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NZ e 1651300200 Level 2 Writing Persuasive Writing Annotated Exemplar Ver 1

The document presents a persuasive argument against allowing skateboards at school, citing safety concerns for both riders and nearby students. It emphasizes the lack of space for skateboarding on the playground, which could interfere with other activities. The conclusion urges the school to ban skateboards based on these reasons.

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Persuasi

Why Skateboards Should Not Be Allowed


At School (1)

I strongly believe that skateboarding should not (1) Make sure the
be allowed at our school. (2) Skateboards are title gives the reader a
dangerous for the people who ride them. (3) They clear understanding of
are also dangerous for the people who are nearby what your persuasive
writing is about.
when they are being ridden! (3) If we allow
skateboards at school the skateboarders will take (2) State the point of
up too much space in the playground and there view clearly to begin the
won’t be room for anyone else. (3) introduction.

Skateboarding is dangerous! (4) (5) (7) (3) Support the point of


Professional skateboarders wear lots of safety view with brief reasons in
gear like knee pads, but the children I’ve seen the introduction.
bringing skateboards to school don’t even wear
(4) Give each reason its
helmets. It’s even more dangerous because own paragraph.
they’re still learning! (6) Our duty teachers are
already busy enough at break times, imagine (5) Begin each paragraph
if they had to look after lots of skateboarding with a statement about
the reason.
injuries too.(6)
Skateboards are also dangerous (7) for the people (6) Add extra detail for
who are nearby. (4) (5) There are lots of tricks to the reasons in the ‘reason’
paragraphs.
do on skateboards where the board or the person
on it goes flying around the air, and it would be (7) Use different starting
easy to hit another child. (6) At our school, all phrases for each
the skateboarders are seniors too, and it would paragraph.
be really easy for a junior student to be knocked
into and hurt. (6) (8) In the conclusion
paragraph, restate the
Finally, (7) we don’t have enough space for main point of view.
skateboarding at school. (4) (5) Skateboarders

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Persuasive Writing Annotated Exemplar

need the court areas because the wheels don’t (9) Summarise the
work on grass, and lots of skateboards would reasons briefly in the
mean not having enough room for court games conclusion.
like basketball. (6)
(10) Include an imperative
As you will see from my points, skateboarding is verb telling the reader
not a good idea at our school, for many reasons. what to do.
(8) They are dangerous for their riders (9) and for
the people nearby, (9) especially younger children.
Also, there simply isn’t enough room! (9) Please
ban skateboards from coming to school. (10)

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