Movie Title - Love of A Woman
Movie Title - Love of A Woman
CHARACTERS: NEIL, JERRY, BAR LADY, MAN, LADY AND TWO DOOR BOUNCERS.
In a dimly lit bar, with lively hip-hop music playing in the background, Neil (26) and Jerry (24)
enter engrossed in a vibrant conversation. They take a seat at a small table,Jerry gets up and
heads to the counter.
JERRY
(Jovial)
BAR MAN
Bar man starts mixing drinks. Jerry spots a skimpily dressed lady(22) sitting alone, a few stools
down the counter with her eyes fixed on her phone.
BAR MAN
JERRY
JERRY
(flirtatious)
A man (27) walks up from behind the lady and rudely shoves Jerry away.
MAN
JERRY
With a sudden and fast movement Jerry grabs him by the collar.
Man punches him in the face, a fight erupts, Jerry is knocked to the ground unable to get up.
Neil intervenes, kicking him from behind. Neil grabs the man and violently slams him onto the
table. He falls to the ground.
DOOR BOUNCER 1
DOOR BOUNCER 2
DOOR BOUNCER 1
JERRY
(Bitterly)
Weakling !
Neil and Jerry stand a few meters away from the bar. Neil wears a cold expression on his face.
NEIL
(Agitated)
JERRY
NEIL
(Frustrated )
JERRY
NEIL
All I'm saying is stop going after other people's women. It's inviting unnecessary tensions.
JERRY
(defensive)
Well, every woman has a right to choose who she wants to sleep with, it's not like I was forcing
myself on her.
NEIL
You need to get your game together, don't just go for every lady you see.
Just then two women seated at a distance wave at Jerry, his playboy eye lights up.
JERRY
(Jovial)
You see? One is taken away but the devil rewards my persistence with two.
NEIL
(Sighs)
He never listens
The camera runs through the sitting room, empty bottles of beer, scattered glasses show an
indication of an after party drinking.
CUT TO
Neil and the hooker lie in bed fast asleep.The alarm clock goes off, Neil jolts awake, checks the
time.
NEIL
CUT TO
He emerges with a towel wrapped around his waist and hastily gets dressed. While dressing up,
Neil notices the hooker still in bed, he aggressively nudges her.
NEIL
HOOKER
(Groggily)
NEIL
Time to leave.
She groans, covering her head with a pillow and turns to the other side. Neil retrieves a wad of
cash, tosses it on the bed.
NEIL
(Firm)
HOOKER
NEIL
HOOKER
(Glares in disdain)
NEIL
Agitated, she quickly grabs her things and storms out of the room.
A persistent knock at the door. Neil rushes to open it and finds two men, one (32) and the other
(30) standing there.
NEIL
(Jovial)
DEALER ONE
(Jokingly)
Boss Neil, we’ve been waiting here for ages.
DEALER TWO
NEIL
DEALER TWO
NEIL
DEALER ONE
(Teasingly)
NEIL
(Smiles)
Let's get to business, hope you’ve brought the material we agreed on.
DEALER ONE
(Jokingly)
Dealer one retrieves a small pouch from his pocket and hands it to Neil. Neil opens it and peeks
in. A smile spreads across his face.
NEIL
(Happy)
DEALER ONE
Nothing but the best for you. Just put in a good word for us
DEALER TWO
Neil hands them a plastic bag. Dealer two opens it and flips through a wad of cash.
The room is dimly lit, with curtains drawn.Empty bottles and scattered clothes litter the floor.
Jerry lies in between two ladies. Neil enters, shaking his head. He throws open the curtains
flooding in the light.
NEIL
Jerry groans shielding his eyes from the light, he turns to the otherside covering his head.
NEIL
Get your ass out of this bed right now! I told you to slow down with these women.
JERRY
(Groggily)
NEIL
(Urgently)
JERRY
Jerry leaps out of bed and hastily starts dressing up.Alarmed the women jolt awake
NEIL
LADY TWO
LADY ONE
JERRY
NEIL
(Firm)
JERRY
Neil retrieves a wad of cash from his pocket, he counts a few notes and throws them at the
ladies.
CUT TO
Neil drives the car and Jerry's in the passenger seat. A car drives slowly in front of them.
JERRY
(Frustrated)
NEIL
Sometimes speed kills, it's better to slow down, think and analyze then act.
JERRY
NEIL
Just make sure to cease, these games you’ve started playing. Behave yourself.
JERRY
NEIL
JERRY
(Into phone)
CUT TO
Neil and Jerry drive through the gate and park, they both step out. Neil tosses the keys to jerry
NEIL
Sure thing
Neil leaves, and Jerry slips on his shades and takes a vape. He then surveys the area, his eyes
scanning the surroundings. That's when he notices Scarlett, 23, dressed in a provocative outfit,
admiring the flowers and plucking a few.
JERRY
(Smiling)
Why is a beauty like you admiring flowers when you're far more beautiful than them?
SCARLETT
(Flattered)
Mr do you hate your life so much that you dare to flirt with Kiefer's daughter and Karl's fiance.
JERRY
(smiles)
We get stolen precious stones from dangerous people and supply them to your father. Tell me,
what will stop me from stealing the purest gem I've seen for myself.
SCARLETT
(smiles)
NEIL
Jerry is distracted, his gaze lingering as his eyes trace scarlet's curves while licking his lips. Neil
notices.
NEIL
JERRY
(Composed)
NEIL
My friend you are playing with death, stay away from the boss’s daughter. Don't dig your own
grave……
JERRY
NEIL