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Analysis of the Use of Conjunctions as Cohesive Devices by 100 Level Students of the
College Of Humanities at Al-Qalam University Katsina State
Department of English,
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Abstract
English as a language of education and instruction in Nigeria continues to remain a rich ground
of enquiry for linguists and language educators. The examination of its use by the teeming
population often reveals the level of mastery of this language that is spoken in most places in
Nigeria, especially on Nigerian tertiary institution campuses. From its word classes to its
meaning, proficiency in English is considered as a positive stride in Nigeria. This study focuses
on the analysis of the use of conjunctions as cohesive devices by 100 Level students of the
College of Humanities at Al-Qalam University Katsina State. Halliday and Matthiessen's
Conjunctions Theory was adopted for the study. The research employed a mixed method
research design on five students’ essays randomly collected. The findings of the research show
that investigating the use of conjunction is essential for students as it provides them with
effective writing skills. Consequently, the results of the study reveal that students use different
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types of conjunctions in their written essays including additive, causal, temporal and
clarification. The study concludes that the correct use of conjunctions helps to create coherence
in sentences as shown in the sampled essays. The study recommends that ESL learners should
improve on the appropriate use of conjunctions as cohesive devices to achieve coherence in their
essay writing. It could be done by learning processes to prevent incoherent text of students
writing.
Introduction
Conjunctions are fundamental cohesive devices that bind different parts of a text together. They
help to establish logical relationships between sentences and paragraphs. According to Halliday
and Hassan (1976:10), "Conjunctions are central to the textual function of language, enabling the
organization of information and establishing coherence in texts." Also, Quirk (1985:23) states,
"Coordinating conjunctions facilitate the linking of grammatical equivalents, whereas
subordinating conjunctions introduce subordinate elements, providing information that is
dependent on the main clause." Biber. (1999:5) highlights that "Conjunctions contribute to the
overall rhetorical structure of texts, indicating relationships between propositions and helping
readers discern logical connections.
The Conjunction
Conjunctions are cohesive by semantic connection and are typically realized at the lexico-
grammatical level by adverbs, adverbial and prepositional expressions. Bryson (1997) sees
conjunction as a word that links words, phrases or clauses. There are three types of conjunctions.
Coordinating conjunction may join single words or they may join groups of words, but they must
always join similar elements e.g. subject + subject, verb phrase + verb phrase sentence +
sentence. A coordinating conjunction is used to join elements, the element become a compound
element. Correlative conjunctions also connect sentence elements of the same kind: however,
unlike coordinating conjunctions, correlative conjunctions are always used in pairs.
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Additive conjunctions are used to add more meaning to a clause, they include: and, furthermore
etc, adversatives show contrast between clauses which has the following examples - but,
however, on the other hand, nevertheless etc. Causals are used to explain reason between clauses
and the examples include - so, consequently, for this reason, etc. Temporal conjunctions are time
related and they are - then, often, that before, later, after, at last, finally, etc. Aliyu (2006) views
conjunction as "an uninflected word employed to link some words or some part of a sentence".
The two main clauses of conjunctions are the coordinating and subordinating conjunctions. The
coordinating conjunctions are introduced by such words as ‘and’ ‘but’ ‘or’ and ‘nor’. The
subordinating introduced by such words like: when, if, because and while. Lester (1994) sees
conjunctions as single words used to connect parts of a sentence such as ‘and’, ‘but’ and ‘or’. He
added that conjunctive adverbs are special kinds of adverbs used instead of a coordinating or
correlative conjunction to join the simple sentence in compound sentences. Conjunctive adverbs
are at times stronger and more precise than coordinating conjunctions e.g. however,
equally, besides etc.
Conjunctions play a vital role in connecting ideas, sentences, and paragraphs, creating coherence
and ensuring a smooth flow of information in written texts. Previous researches (such as Osagie,
2018; Adeleke, 2019) have emphasized the significance of conjunctions as cohesive devices,
highlighting their contribution to the overall effectiveness of academic and non-academic
writing. These studies underscore that students' ability to use conjunctions correctly and
appropriately is crucial in producing well-structured and coherent writing. Ajayi (2015) analyzed
conjunction usage in essays written by Nigerian undergraduate students. The research found that
students frequently used coordinating conjunctions to connect sentences and ideas, but they
tended to underuse subordinating conjunctions, leading to less complex sentence structures. In
another study, Olatunji and Adebowale (2017) examined conjunction errors in writing samples
of Nigerian secondary school students. The research reveals common mistakes, such as using
incorrect conjunctions to link ideas and misplacing conjunctions within sentences. The study
recommends targeted grammar instruction and feedback to address these errors effectively.
Osagie (2018) explored the role of conjunctions in achieving coherence in research papers
written by Nigerian university students. The study identified a significant positive correlation
between effective conjunction use and the overall coherence of the papers. The research
highlights the importance of conjunctions as essential cohesive devices in academic writing.
Also, Adeleke (2019) study compared the conjunction proficiency of Nigerian English language
learners from different proficiency levels. The research reveals that advanced learners
demonstrated more sophisticated use of conjunctions, employing a wider range of conjunction
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types to convey various relationships between ideas. The findings underscore the developmental
nature of conjunction usage in language learning.
Similarly, Ogunleye and Bello (2020) examined the use of conjunctions in argumentative essays
written by Nigerian students. The study identified variations in conjunction usage based on the
students' academic disciplines, with some disciplines favoring specific conjunctions to structure
arguments. The research highlights the genre-specific nature of conjunction usage in students
writing. Another study by Nwabueze (2009) focused on the role of conjunctions as coherence
markers in Nigerian academic writings. The research analyzes how conjunctions were used to
connect ideas and maintain logical flow in academic texts. The study emphasized the
significance of conjunctions in achieving coherence and effective communication in Nigerian
academic writing. Furthermore, Sisulu (2012) explored the use of conjunctions in South African
political discourse. Sisulu analyzed speeches and written statements of political leaders to
understand how conjunctions were employed to structure arguments, emphasize points, and
create persuasive discourse. The research highlights the role of conjunctions in shaping the
rhetorical strategies of South African political communication. These studies reviewed show the
relevance of conjunctions in students’ writings which varies in terms of their appropriateness.
Inappropriate uses of conjunctions by the students show that applying conjunctions in writings
was problematic for ESL learners.
Theoretical Framework
Conjunctions Theory by Halliday and Matthiessen (2014) is used as the theoretical framework in
this study to analyze and interpret the data. A conjunction is concerned with rhetorical transitions
between whole ‘messages’, or even message complexes (Halliday and Matthiessen, 2014). It is a
resource for marking transition in the unfolding of a text (Halliday and Matthiessen, 2014). It
indicates the relations through which such textual transitions are created. Conjunctive elements
are cohesive not in themselves but indirectly by virtue of their specific meanings; they are not
primarily devices for reaching out into the preceding (or following) text, but they express certain
meanings which presuppose the presence of other components in the discourse (Halliday and
Hasan, 1976).
Research Methodology
The study adopts a mixed-method research design, combining both quantitative and qualitative
approaches. Thus, the analysis is done through conceptual explanation as well as through
statistical means using a table and percentile. The participants of this study are 100 level students
enrolled in various academic programs within College of Humanities at Al-Qalam University
Katsina. A purposive sampling method is used to select participants to ensure representation
from diverse linguistic and cultural backgrounds. Students were approached to write essays
about campus life in Al-Qalam University Katsina and five out of the pool of essays received
were randomly selected for analysis. Each essay was titled by the student who wrote them to
reflect the topic of their choice.
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The following essays are presented as they were collected, then a table of categorisation is
employed to analyse the categories of conjunctions that are in each essay and finally a
commentary is given on each text of essay presented.
Comments: The essay contains eight sentences. The writer employs a number of conjunctions at
various parts of the essay as a means to bring cohesion into their flow of thought. The essay
focuses on friendship extended to deeper levels in the university. There is a kind of a dependency
on ‘additive’ conjunctions in an attempt to keep the flow. This reflects the average grasp of
English vocabulary by the writer.
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TOTAL 2 2 2
Comments: The essay has five sentences. The categorization of ‘in the end’ as ‘clarification’
instead of ‘temporal’ is due to the fact that the statement is specific to the fact that the writer
meant to sum up a thought and not merely disclose the time of an event. The essay contains six
conjunctions.
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Comment: the essay has nine sentences. It looks at how students pick up behaviours on campus.
The writer uses seven conjunctions in total.
my friends visit the library a lot. We believe that we can get more knowledge by reading more
books than others. My ambition is to graduate with first class and I will keep working hard to
make it In sha Allah.
TOTAL 1 4 1
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Comment:
The essay has seven sentences. There is a grammatical error in the use of ‘and so’. The use of
‘so’ to indicate the cause of the next point of action is the most appropriate without necessarily
using ‘and’ which the writer resolved to use. Also, the essay relies so much on ‘additive’
conjunctions.
Comments: the essay has seven sentences. The writer focuses on the idea of being the
breadwinner of their family. There appears a dependency on ‘causal’ and ‘additive’ conjunctions
in the essay.
Discussion of Data
Based on the findings of the five analysed essays written by 100 level students of college of
humanities at Al-Qalam University Katsina, it is evident that extension conjunctions, like
"and,""but," were the most frequently used. These conjunctions play a pivotal role in connecting
ideas within sentences, aiding in the overall coherence and flow of the essays. Despite their
extensive use, it is crucial to note that students encountered difficulties, particularly in the
technical application of correlating conjunctions like "neither nor" or "either or." This deficiency
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suggests a gap in their understanding of these specific conjunctions, leading to their avoidance in
essays due to unfamiliarity. The results of this study correlates with that of Osagie (2018) who
explored the role of conjunctions in achieving coherence in research papers written by Nigerian
university students. Furthermore, the inadequate use of conjunctions as paragraph linkers was
also noticeable, indicating a need for more explicit guidance on their utilization for broader text
organization.
The prevalent errors or challenges faced by students in the proficient use of conjunctions indicate
a need for focused educational interventions. The students' lack of expertise in applying
correlating conjunctions demonstrates the necessity for targeted instruction to enhance their
technical understanding. This is in line with the study conducted by Ajayi (2015) who analyzed
conjunction usage in essays written by Nigerian undergraduate students. Additionally,
encouraging students to incorporate conjunctions strategically as paragraph linkers could
significantly enhance the overall coherence and structural integrity of their essays. These
interventions might involve structured exercises, practical examples, and explicit explanations to
familiarize students with the diverse functions of conjunctions in written discourse. This
correlates with the results of the study conducted by Ogunleye and Bello (2020) who examined
the use of conjunctions in argumentative essays written by Nigerian students.
Findings
The findings of the research show that investigating the use of conjunction is essential for
students as it provides them with effective writing skills. Consequently, the results of the study
reveal that the students use different types of conjunctions in their written essays including
additive, causal, temporal and clarification. These textual organizations were the results of the
text cohesion brought about the use and frequencies of the different types of conjunctions in the
written essays produced by 100 level students enrolled in various academic programs within
College of Humanities at Al-Qalam University Katsina. The results reveal that the presence and
absence of any of the conjunctions affected the overall cohesion of the written essays.
Conclusion
Recommendation
Based on the results of this study, it is recommended that ESL learners should improve on the
appropriate use of conjunctions as cohesive devices to achieve coherence in their essay writing.
It could be done by learning processes to prevent incoherent text of students writing.
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