Writing 2 Book
Writing 2 Book
WRITING ENGLISH II
DAKLAK, 2016
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THE SENTENCE- SENTENCE PATTERNS
A knowledge of basic sentence structure is necessary to write well. Despite the complexity
of our language there are only six basic sentence patterns into which words are arranged.
Once the six basic patterns have been learned, the study of more complicated patterns will be
easier. Most of the more difficult sentences are merely combinations of the basic sentences
or well-defined orderly alterations of them.
Note that in each of the six basic sentence patterns, the function of the verb and the nature of
the complement or completer required by the verb, are what distinguishes one pattern from
another. Verbs are identified as transitive or intransitive. Transitive verbs transfer the action
of the verb to a receiver. Intransitive verbs have no noun or object to act upon.
Sentence Pattern #1: Made up of a subject and a verb plus any modifiers--there is no
complement or completer; therefore, the verb is intransitive: SV
Examples (subject is bold, verb is underlined, and prepositional phrases are in parentheses):
Boys sing.
The boys (in the choir) (from Detroit) sing sweetly (at Christmas).
One (of the thieves) must have been hiding (in the basement).
Sentence Pattern #2: Made of a subject and a verb and a direct object. The verb is transitive
because it is acting upon an object directly: S V DO
Examples (subject is bold, verb is underlined, and direct object is italicized):
Students write essays.
JCCC students write amazingly well-written essays about themselves.
With one special kind of verb there is a problem of distinguishing between a direct object
and an object of a preposition. Notice these two sentences:
Harry jumped off the box.
Harry took off his raincoat.
The first sentence is Pattern #1. Off is a preposition, box is the object of the preposition, and
the prepositional phrase is used as an adverbial modifier, because it tells where Harry
jumped. The second sentence is Pattern #2. The verb, with its adverbial modifier off, is the
equivalent of the transitive verb remove. Raincoat is the direct object.
There is another way to distinguish between the adverbial use and the prepositional use of
such a word as off in the above examples. When the word is a vital adverbial modifier of the
verb, it follows the direct object--"Harry took off his raincoat" or "Harry took his raincoat
off." But when the word is a preposition, the alternate position is not possible. "Harry
jumped the box off" is non-English.
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Here are some other examples of this kind of verb with adverbial modifier(s). Notice that in
each case you can easily find a transitive verb synonym for the combination:
...give up (relinquish) his rights
...leave out (omit) the second chapter
...put out (extinguish) the fire
...make over (alter) an old dress
...make up (invent) an excuse
Sentence Pattern #3: Consists of a subject and a verb with two completers of the verb: the
direct object, which directly receives the action of the transitive verb and answers who or
what, and the indirect object, which indirectly receives the action of the verb and answers to
whom (or which) or for whom (or which). S V IO DO
Sentence Pattern #4: Consists of a subject and a verb and two completers. The one closer to
the verb is the direct object and the second one is the objective complement, which is either a
noun that renames the direct object or an adjective that describes the direct object.
NOTE: You may test this pattern by inserting to be. Sometimes the word as is used between
the direct object and object complement.
The following verbs are the most frequently used in Sentence Pattern #4: elect, appoint,
name, call, consider, find, make, think. S V DO OC
Examples (subject is bold, verb is underlined, direct object is italicized, and object
complement is in all capital letters):
The parents considered their child a GENIUS.
Sentence Pattern #5: Consists of a subject, a special kind of intransitive verb called a
linking verb (a list follows) and a subjective complement (may be a noun which renames the
subject): S LV NC
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Example (subject is bold, linking verb is underlined, subjective complement—noun—is
italicized):
The child is a genius.
verb and a subjective complement (may be an adjective which describes the subject):
S LV AC
Example (subject is bold, linking verb is underlined, subjective complement—adjective—is
italicized):
The child is stupid.
Linking Verbs--Verbs that do not always express action.
Become She became a housewife.
Grow He grew weary of the lecture.
Turn Mac turned green with envy.
Seem Mary seemed ill to me.
Appear Gladys appeared well to me.
Look Frances looks good in red.
Remain He remained calm.
Stay He stayed my friend.
Continue The weather continued warm.
Feel Later he felt better.
Smell The fish smells spoiled.
Taste The fish tastes terrible.
Sound This sentence sounds all right to me.
Prove She proved faithful to the end.
Get The roads have been getting progressively worse.
Wear Her patience is wearing thin.
The following to be verbs:
Be Shall be Being Will be Am Has been
Are Have been Is Had been Was Shall have been
Were Will have been
NOTE: An alternative to the basic sentence patterns given is the passive voice. Only
transitive verbs can have passive verb forms; therefore, only patterns #2, #3, and #4 can be
altered to this structure. Because the use of passive voice is considered to be lifeless writing,
many composition teachers will discourage it.
Examples:
Sentence Pattern #2 Active--Students write essays.
Passive--Essays are written by students.
Sentence Pattern #3 Active--I gave the teacher my essay.
Passive--My essay was given to the teacher by me.
Sentence Pattern #4 Active--The parents considered their son a genius.
Passive--Their son was considered a genius by the parents.
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If the doer of the action is expressed in a sentence using a passive verb, the doer must occur
as the object of the preposition.
Active--I have.
Passive--I am had.
Sentence Pattern #6: Consists of a subject, a special kind of transitive verb and a
prepositional phrase/ or an adverb S V O Adverb (location)
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Exercise C. Indicate the S, V DO, IO, C
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REVIEW OF NOUNS, ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS
Proper Adjectives
The adjectives formed from proper nouns (Canadian, Shakespearean, etc.) generally are
capitalized. They are called proper adjectives. Here are some proper nouns and the proper
adjectives that can be formed from them.
Make your writing more concise by replacing a wordy expression with an adjective.
WORDY: The diplomat visited several nations on the continent of Africa.
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CONCISE: Avoid hasty decisions.
Before using an adjective, make sure that it is needed.
QUESTION: What is wrong with the following sentence?
should read:
We want the facts
PRACTICE
Exercise1 Rewrite the following paragraph, using possessive nouns wherever possible.
You should be able to reduce the number of words in the paragraph from69 to 56.
The dog that Anna owns is huge but gentle. He tries to get the attention of her friends to
show that he likes them. The parents of Anna, too, are fond of the dog. At first some
neighbors were frightened by the size of the dog. They feared for the safety of their children.
Now they no longer worry. By the way, the name of the dog is Tiny.
Exercise 2: Rewrite the sentence, using an adjective instead of the italicized expression.
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Sample:
Many dealers sell products manufactured in Japan.
Many dealers sell Japanese products.
1. Olives imported from Spain are sold in supermarkets.
2. They spoke in words that were full of bitterness.
3. I read an article on the Internet about Inuits who live in Canada.
4. Coffee grown in Brazil is flavorful.
5. He never makes a move that involves risk.
6. Many gifts made by hand are deeply appreciated.
7. In every class there are students who give in to laziness.
8. What is the name of the ambassador from the Commonwealth of Australia?
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7. Do you own any old antiques?
8. One student slept throughout the entire assembly.
9. It happened on a summer evening in July.
10. A cold icy wind is blowing from the northeast.
Exercise 7 Rewrite each sentence, changing the predicate adjective to a predicate noun.
Sample:
Ben was sensational.
Ben was a sensation.
1. You were cowardly.
2. Gambling can be risky.
3. He was brutal.
4. The puppy is beautiful.
5. Don‘t be bossy.
6. They said the man in the blue baseball cap was creepy.
7. It was pitiful to see him this way.
8. Their meeting was coincidental.
9. The loss of the running back was catastrophic.
10. Driving under the influence of alcohol is felonious.
Exercise 8. Express the following thoughts more concisely. Hint: Change the italicized
expression to an adverb ending in ly.
Samples:
The motor runs with a noisy sound.
The motor runs noisily.
Under normal conditions, we leave at 3 P.M.
Normally, we leave at 3 P.M.
1. They behaved in a strange way.
2. Under usual circumstances, the school bus is on time.
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3. He acted like a foolish person.
4. All of a sudden, the lights went out.
5. My heart was beating at a rapid rate.
6. It is probable that you will soon feel better.
7. Our meetings are run in a democratic way.
8. In an angry voice, she demanded that we leave at once.
9. Try to explain the problem in simple language.
10. From a financial point of view, the business is sound.
Exercise 9 Rewrite the sentence, replacing the italicized adjective with a prepositional
phrase.
Samples:
You may find yourself penniless.
You may find yourself without a penny.
A mayor is an important person.
A mayor is a person of importance.
1. Many European tourists visit the United States each year.
2. My help was useless.
3. Many cars are designed to use unleaded gasoline.
4. The Canadian people are our neighbors.
5. Take the end seat.
Exercise 10. In each sentence, underline the correct form of the verb.
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15. (Was, Were) you surprised to find your watch in that old jacket?
16. Jennie Lynn (doesn’t, don’t) know whether or not to get her hair cut short.
17. The front tires of your sister‘s car (are, is) worn and smooth.
18. The first clock to strike the hours (was, were) constructed in 1754 by Benjamin
Banneker.
19. Aunt Ginny, with her two daughters, (are, is) arriving on the ten o‘clock train from
Danville.
20. Fog, with poor visibility, (are, is) often a problem on the coast.
21. There (was, were) several good scoring opportunities in the playoff game between the
Pirates and the Reds.
22. At the Halloween party, (was, were) you the vampire with the long cloak?
23. At the intersection of Church Street and Main (are, is) two new stores.
24. Four questions on the biology test (are, is) really difficult.
25. Heavy rainfall during September and October (help, helps) to keep down forest fires.
26. One of the twins (are, is) taking Russian next year.
27. Neither the coach nor his assistants (was, were) available for an interview after the
game.
28. Either broccoli or asparagus (are, is) perfect for tonight‘s dinner.
29. In the barn (was, were) two ancient tractors still in good running order.
30. (Was, Were) there any doughnuts left after the meeting?
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19. I felt relieved when the robot worked (good, well) at the science fair.
20. Cameron was considerate and played the music (soft, softly).
21. That haircut makes Brian look as if he hasn‘t (any, no) hair.
22. There isn‘t (any, no) more iced tea in the jug.
23. Paulina doesn‘t go (anywhere, nowhere) without her pocket calculator.
24. The light was so dim I (could, couldn’t) hardly read the message.
25. Don‘t (ever, never) cross the street against the light.
Exercise 12. In each sentence, underline the correct form of the pronoun (used as a
subject) in parentheses.
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28. Our pen pal in Bosnia wrote a long letter to Karin and (I, me).
29. We saw Marisol and (he, him) in the stands at the baseball game.
30. (Him and I, He and I) went on a rafting trip on the Nantahala River.
Exercise 14 :
Use the sets of words given to write complete sentence. Do not change the order of the words
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14. my way/ work/ I generally/ meet/ a lot of children/ go / school.
15. Listen /those people. What language/ they speak?
16. when/ I last/ see him, he/ be/ good health.
17. She/ do/ little work recently.
18. Miss Clark/ be/ this company/ two years /now.
19. As soon as he/ save/ $500, he will retire/ business.
20. When / I/ be/ boy, every holiday/ seem/ ideal.
21. patient/ condition/ improve/ considerably/ last night.
22. brother/ serve/ army/ 1980/ 1983
23. Jenny/ study/ French/ few months/ last year
24. You/ ever/ yourself what/ make/ life beautiful / worth/ live?
25. We/ not hear/ her/ nearly/ six months
26. Men/ travel/ since/ they / first appear/ earth.
27. Tom/ meet /Mary/ 1986 and they/ be good friends since then
28. Is John in? – No, he/go/ cinema.
29. I / can tell you whether/ machine/ be/ good/ bad only after I /try /it
30. A taxi just/ come round/ corner.
31. by/end/ summer/ farmers/ harvest/ crop.
32. I/ go/ shop/ they/ sell/ book/ I want.
33. he/ tell/ me/ he/ be/ ill/ since/ he/ return/ abroad.
34. How many countries/ you/ visit/ by March/ last year?
35. We/ live/ through terrible time during/ war years.
36. Before I/ can/ say anything, they/ admit/ mistakes.
37. The thief/ already/ run away by/time/ I arrive.
38. Where/ you/ go/ holiday/ last year?
39. yesterday/ father/ buy/ new watch/ as/ old one/ be/ stolen.
40. He/ pay/ visit/ Halong Bay/ 1980.
Exercise 15 Rewrite each of the following sentences in such a way that it means the same
as the sentence printed above it
1. If you don‘t want Sally to be angry with you, I suggest you apologize.
You‘d .............................................................
2. You might fall if you‘re not carefully.
Be careful ........................................................
3. Mrs. Edwards is the owner of that house.
That house .......................................................
4. The station clock showed half-past ten.
According ..............................................................
5. Henry found a wallet with no name in it.
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The wallet ........................................................
6. Ronald denied stealing Mrs. Clark‘s handbag.
Ronald said that ...............................................
7. Susan likes staying in hotels but she prefers camping.
Susan doesn‘t ..................................................
8. The fridge was so heavy that we couldn‘t move it.
The fridge was too ..........................................
9. ―John, Please don‘t tell anyone my new address,‖ said Mary.
Mary asked ......................................................
10. The judges had never seen a prettier flower display.
It was ...............................................................
11. Whose documents are these?
To ............................................................ ?
12. ―Have you had enough for lunch?‖ the landlady asked me.
The landlady asked ...............................
13. We ought to leave the party now if we are to catch the last train.
If we don‘t ............................................
14. It‘s Alice‘s job to look after new staff.
Alice is responsible .....................................
15. What‘s your date of birth?
When ..........................................................
16. John could not find the right house.
John was ......................................................
17. The doctor should have signed my insurance form.
My insurance form .....................................
18. Michael laughed when I told him the joke.
The joke .....................................................
19. Jenny does not play tennis as well as she used to.
Jenny used ...................................................
20. The door was so heavy that the child couldn‘t push it open.
The door was too ........................................
21. That meal was excellent!
What ............................................................
22. I don‘t really want to visit the museum.
I‘d rather......................................................
23. John missed the ferry because his car broke down.
If .................................................................
24. Jane is a better cook than Robert.
Robert can‘t .................................................
25. Please do not smoke in this area of the restaurant.
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Customers are requested ............................
26. ―‗I‘m sorry. Angela,‖ said Martin, ―I‘m afraid I‘ve damaged your car.‖
Martin apologized .................................
27. Although he took a taxi, Bill still arrived late for the concert.
In spite .........................................................
28. Carol finds it easy to make friends.
Carol has no ................................................
29. Mark is too young to see the horror film.
Mark is not .................................................
30. The architect has drawn plans for an extension to the house.
Plans ……………………………………………………………………………..
Exercise 16 Fill in the blank with the correct form of the words in parentheses.
1. Many people think that Faraday is the greatest (INVENT) ___________ in history.
2. The young apprentice broke the chemistry glassware because of his (CARE)
______________
3. He looked very (EXCITE) ____________ because the messenger came to invite him
to the laboratory.
4. The little boy felt very (DISAPPOINTMENT) _______________ his parents did not
let him go with them.
5. That singer has such a _______________ voice that she has just won a contest.
(WONDER)
6. Drawing and singing were among her many _______________ (ACCOMPLISH)
7. My father is working for Intel branch as an _______________ in Ho Chi Minh City.
(ACCOUNT)
8. She has decided to settle _______________ in France. (PERMANENT)
9. Astronauts work in _______________ conditions. (WEIGHT)
10. Money can‘t buy _______________. (HAPPY)
11. He said, ―Good morning‖ in a most _______________ way. (FRIEND)
12. My teacher _______________ me to take this examination. (COURAGE)
13. No-one with a recent _______________ record will be considered for this job.
(CRIME)
14. We have decided to interview only the best six _______________ for the job.
(APPLY)
15. David‘s _______________ at winning the competition was clear to everyone.
(ASTONISH)
16. That large dog is perfectly _______________ and has never been known to attack
anyone. (HARM)
17. Work is going on to _______________ the bridge, which carries a great deal of
traffic. (STRONG)
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18. The country is very _______________ so travelling by road is difficult.
(MOUNTAIN)
19. The teacher stressed the need for regular _______________ (ATTEND)
20. Sarah _______________ opened the door of the cellar, wondering what she might
find. (CAUTION)
21. There were over fifty _______________ in the orchestra. (MUSIC)
22. Jim always does what he says; he‘s a very _______________ person. (RELY)
23. Alexander knows which mushrooms are _______________ so ask him before you
pick the (POISON)
24. The company is very efficient and gives a _______________ service. (SPEED)
25. The _______________ of the fire was very welcome after our long walk. (WARM)
26. They have agreed to _______________ the road because of the amount of heavy
traffic now using it. (WIDE)
27. John‘s _______________ improved at his new school. (BEHAVE)
28. Sally came in so _________ that she woke everyone up. (NOISE)
29. Martin was very _________ of what he had done. (SHAME)
30. The museum does not charge for _________ on Sundays. (ADMIT)
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A PERSONAL PROFILE
1. Read the writing task and the two personal profiles. Have the writers:
included all the information?
written the correct number of words?
Writing task
Write a personal profile of 80-100 words for an internet chatroom. Call your profile ‗The real
me‘. Include
an introduction with your name, hometown, age, and brief information about your
school and family
information about your hobbies, interest and sports
a description of your personality
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The modifying adverbs quite and not at all go before/ after a/ an when there is a
noun.
5. Rewrite the sentences to include the modifying adverb in brackets.
1. I‘m pessimistic.( slightly)
2. My best friend is confident. ( really)
3. He‘s an impatient person. ( not at all)
4. I‘m a student at a big school. (quite)
5. I find English difficult. ( quite)
6. I‘m sometimes shy. ( a bit)
6. Write your personal profile
7. Check that you have completed the writing task correctly by ticking the following:
name
age
town/ village
school
family
hobbies and interests
sports
personality
80-100 words
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STORY- TELLING WITH PICTURE PROMPT
Work in pair. Look at the following set of picture and guess what happened
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Now read the story and answer the questions below
The walk
One day a little girl wanted to go for a walk with her doll, so she made a sandwich and took
an apple and some fruit juice. She put them in her bag and put on her pink hat. Then she put
her doll in the stroller and went outside. Soon, a big wind came and blew her hat into the
tree. A nice little sparrow saw that, and he wanted to help the little girl. So, he took the hat in
his beak and gave it back to the girl. The small girl was very happy. She gave the bird some
pieces from her sandwich. Now the sparrow was happy, too.
1. What is the title of the story?
2. How many characters are there in the story? Who are they?
3. Where did the story happen?
4. What problem occurred?
5. How it was solved?
Writing techniques
Layout
Every story should consist of these components:
- The title
- Characters
- Setting
- A problem
- Events or/ and actions
- Solution/ ending
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Writing task : Using the following prompts to write a story
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AN INFORMAL LETTER
1. Read the letter. Find three things that Amy got for her birthday.
2. Find colloquial words and phrases in the letter that mean:
beautiful
to look good with something
to return something
the USA
I think ….
aeroplane
friends
very good
3. Put what Amy says in the correct paragraph and in the correct order.
a. She says that she enjoyed her birthday.
b. She says what Sophie gave her.
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c. She thanks her aunt for the scarf.
d. She says what her parents gave her.
e. She thanks her aunt again for scarf.
f. She says why she likes the scarf.
g. She says how often she‘s won the scarf.
Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3
1_______ 4_______ 7_______
2_______ 5_______
3_______ 6_______
4. Read the writing tip below. What expression does Amy use to end her letter?
Writing tip
When you write an informal letter:
put your address in the top right-hand corner
put the date below your address
start the letter Dear…
you can use colloquial language
finish the letter with Love or Best wishes and your name
5. Imagine you have received a present from a friend or a family member. Choose a
present from the box (or use your own idea) and say why you like it.
an MP3 player a CD a book a DVD some money some make- up
a necklace or earrings a bag some pens a mobile phone
6. Write an informal thank-you letter of 120-150 words. Use the plan to help you.
Paragraph 1
Say thank you. Say what the present is and say something about it: what‘s it
like? Why do you like it? Have you used it?
Paragraph 2
Say what you did on the special occasion. Say what other presents you
received.
Paragraph 3
Say thank you again
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DESCRIBING PEOPLE
I. APPEARANCE
Hair, face, skin and complexion
He used to have black hair bur now it's gone grey, almost white.
What sort of person would you like to go out with? Blonde, fair, dark or ginger-haired/
red-haired?
She has such beautiful auburn hair. [red-brown]
Fair and dark can be used for hair, complexion or skin.
Height and built
Fat may sound impolite. Instead we often say a bit overweight. If someone is broad and
solid, we can say they are stocky. A person with good muscles can be well-built or muscular.
If someone is terribly thin and refuses to eat, they may be anorexic.
General appearance
She's a very smart and elegant woman, always well-dressed; her husband is quite the
opposite, very scruffy and untidy-looking.
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He's very good-looking, but his friend's rather unattractive.
Do you think beautiful women are always attracted to handsome men? I don't. I think
first impressions matter most.
Tip: The surfix -ish is useful for describing people:
She's tallish. He has brownish hair. He must be thirtyish.
Exercises
1 Answer these remarks with the opposite description.
Example: A: I thought you said he was the short, chubby one,
B: No, quite the opposite, he's the tall, thin-face one
1 A: Was that his brother, the dark-skinned, wavy-haired one?
B: No, quite the opposite, his brother's...
2 A: She's always quite well-dressed, so I've heard.
B: What! Who cold you that? Every time I see her, she's...
A: So Charlene's that rather plump fair-haired woman, is she?
B: No. you're looking at the wrong one. Charlene's ……
4 A: So, tell us about the new boss; good looking?
B: No, I'm afraid not; rather... .
5 A: I don't know why, but I expected the tour-guide to be middle-aged or elderly.
B: No, apparently she's only...
2. Write one sentence to describe each of these people, giving information about their hair
and face, their height and build and general appearance.
1. you yourself 3 a neighbour
2 your best friend 4 your ideal of a handsome man/a beautiful woman
Now, in the same way, describe somebody very famous, give some extra clues about them,
e.g. pop star/politician and see if someone else can guess who you are describing.
3. From these jumbled words, find combinations for describing people, as in the above
example. Some of the combinations are hyphenated. Use a dictionary if necessary. Example:
good-looking
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5. Make a collection of descriptions of people from newspapers and magazines.
Court/crime reports, celebrity and gossip pages of magazines, and the 'personal‘ columns
where people are seeking partners are good places to 'start.
II CHARACTER
Intellectual ability
Ability: intelligent bright clever smart shrewd able gifted talented brainy
(colloquial)
Lacking ability: stupid foolish half-witted simple silly brainless
daft dumb dim (the last four are predominantly colloquial words)
Clever, in a negative way, using brains to trick or deceive: cunning ,crafty, sly
Looking on either the bright or the black side of things: optimistic , pessimistic
Outward-looking or inward-looking (i.e. to the world around one or to one's own inner
world): extroverted, introverted
Calm or not calm with regard to attitude to life: relaxed tense
Practical, not dreamy in approach to life: sensible down-to-earth
Feeling things very intensely; sensitive
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One person's meat is another person's poison
Some characteristics can be either positive or negative depending on your point of view. The
words in the right-hand column mean roughly the same as the words in the left-hand colon
except that they have negative rather than positive connotations.
determined —— obstinate stubborn pig-headed
thrifty/economical —— miserly mean tight-fisted
self-assured —— self-important arrogant full of oneself (colloquial)
assertive —— aggressive bossy (colloquial)
original —— peculiar weird eccentric odd
frank/direct/open —— blunt abrupt brusque curt
broad-minded —— unprincipled permissive
inquiring —— inquisitive nosy (colloquial)
generous —— extravagant
innocent —— naive
ambitious . —— pushy (colloquial)
Exercises
2. Do you think that the speaker likes or dislikes the people s/he is talking about?
1 Di's very thrifty. 5 Dick's quire bossy.
2 Moliy's usually frank. 6 I find Dave self-important. „
3 Liz's quite broad-minded 7 Don't you think Jim's nosy?
4 Sam can be aggressive. 8 Jill is very original.
3. Reword the sentences above to give the opposite impression. Example: Di's very stingy.
Magazines often publish questionnaires which are supposed to analyse your character (or
you. Look at the words below and then match them to the question which aims to decide
whether a person is like that.
Example: If you arrange to meet at 7 p.m., do you arrive at 7 p.m.? Reliable
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1 Do you prefer to be in the company of other people?
2 Look at the picture. Do you think my glass is half empty?
3 Do you find it easy to tell your boss if you feel he or she has treated you badly?
4 Do you always look out of the window if you hear a car draw up?
5 Do you often buy your friends presents for no particular reason?
6 Do you frequently disagree with what other people say?
7 Do you lie awake at night if someone has said something unkind to you?
5 What questions like those in 4 could you ask to try to find out whether a person is the
following
1 thrifty 3 sensible 5 even-tempered 7 obstinate
2 blunt 4 intelligent 6 original
6 Can you complete each of these word forks?
1 self- ...... ..... 2 ........... -tempered 3 ..... ..... -minded
Write a sentence to illustrate the meanings of each of your words.
7. Choose five or six adjectives from the opposite page which you think best describe either
your own or a friend's character. How do you or your friend demonstrate these characteristics
Example: Sociable- I am sociable because I love being with other people
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WRITING A POSTCARD
Discussion
a) Think of me last time you sent a postcard. Who was it to? Can you remember what vou
wrote about?
b) Look at the postcard below. Try to decide who is writing to who in each case. Which of
them seem strange? Why?'
c) Why do people usually write postcards? Who do they usually write them to?
Dear Alfed,
Dear Sir/ madam,
Thanks for letting
Could you please me stay at your flat
send me further last week and for
details of the the delicious meal. Alferd Hinds
We must get Flat 4
post advertised Personal Manager, together again soon 26, Rhindol Street
in the Times on Metal Box Co., All the best, London NW124 AW
Saturday? Jersey Marine Geogre
Yours faithfully, Swansea SAIB9TQ
John Francis
(4, ElmClose ,
Swansea)
2 This unit looks at postcards sent by people who are on holiday to their friends. Below is a
list of some of the things people often write in postcards. Look at postcards C and F in
exercise 1. Which of the following can you find in them?
Write C and/or F next to each.
a) description of a place _______
b) description of the weather ___________
c) expressions of feelings for the person to whom the card is being sent ___________
d) arrangements for the future_______
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e) description of things that have happened
Language focus
We‘re staying in a quiet hotel on a hill near the tiny secluded beach. Behind us are mountains
covered with tall pine trees and sweet-smelling bushes. Everything is so peaceful
This extract describes the location and the general atmosphere of the place the person is in.
using a thesaurus and or a dictionary, write down as many words as you can that could
replace the words underlined (they may not mean the same).
Write them in the grid at the top of the next page.
SIZE LOCATION ATMOSTPHERE
tiny secluded peaceful
huge
b) Now look at this picture. Imagine you are staying in the hotel and write description similar
to that in part a) above
Look back at postcard C in exercise 1. What adjective does the writer use to the weather?
Now look at these other words that can be used to describe weather. Put them in the correct
place in the grid.
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POSITIVE NEUTRAL NEGATIVE
BEAUTIFUL
Did you find that some words were difficult to put into the grid? Some words can be positive
or negative depending on the circumstances. Which words are they?
It is very common to begin a postcard with a sentence which tells the reader how much you
are enjoying yourself. Find an opening sentence that does this in one of the postcards in
exercise 1- Write it here.
3.4 As you can probably see, there is something odd about the sentence. It has no subject. It
is very common in postcards to leave out the subject if it refer'. to the writer. To include it is
a waste of space, and the reader knows perfectly well that it is the writer who is the subject.
Look at this text from a postcard. Which words could you leave out if you wanted to?
Dear John, we‘re having a lovely time. we went to visit a monastery yesterday. I had to
climb 400 steps up the side of a mountain! I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Best wishes, Sally
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• how you travelled
• what the castle was like
• how you felt
b) Now look at this picture. Imagine you went on a trip in the boat shown in the picture.
Write a few sentences to describe what happened. Try to make your description interesting to
the reader.
Writing model
Dear_______
1. See you soon , Harry
Describe your feelings 2. Dear Jane,
Describe the weather 3. Having a wonderful time here in Greece
Describe the place 4. Our hotel is in a valley about half a mile from the beach.
Describe something
you've done 5. Yesterday we took a boat to Aegina and spent the dav
Close lying on the beach and exploring the island
6. The weather is absolutely wonderful.
Writing task
Imagine you are on holiday, use the model in exercise 4 to write a postcard to a British
friend.
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