The document provides examples and exercises on using parallel structure in writing. It discusses using parallelism in series of words, phrases, and clauses. Examples are given of parallel and non-parallel sentences. Readers are asked to identify parallel ideas, rewrite sentences for parallel structure, complete sentences with parallel items, and identify satisfactory and non-satisfactory uses of parallelism in multiple choice questions.
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Parallelism
The document provides examples and exercises on using parallel structure in writing. It discusses using parallelism in series of words, phrases, and clauses. Examples are given of parallel and non-parallel sentences. Readers are asked to identify parallel ideas, rewrite sentences for parallel structure, complete sentences with parallel items, and identify satisfactory and non-satisfactory uses of parallelism in multiple choice questions.
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Review
• Use participles to describe the following nouns.
• 1.______ petals • 2. ______ message • 3. ______ game • 4. ______ rocks • 5. ______ farmer • Use the following participles to modify nouns. • 1. bored ________ • 2. stamping ______ • 3. burnt _______ • 4. broken ______ • 5. lighted ______ Pre-assessment
• Choose the ideas, which are in the same form in
each sentences. • 1. Antique furniture is classy, elegant, and expensive. • 2. The Creator is mighty, powerful, and glorious. • 3. Juan Marco aims to dance, to sing, and to act • in the contest this month. • 4. Being very wise, Bryan knew where he is to go, what he is supposed to do, and what he is expected to bring in the contest. • 5. The kids can find the Easter eggs hidden under the drawers, beneath the tables, and beside the shelves. Language Tool slideplayer.com • Parallelism is the placement of equal ideas in words, phrases, or clauses, of similar types. slideshare.net • A. Parallelism in a series of words • The parallel words must be the same parts of speech. • e.g. 1. The man is honest, kind, and sincere. • 2. The junior students will plan, organize, and evaluate the events for this month. • 3. The participants, organizer, and sponsors of the events are seated in front. • 4. The groom promises to love, to hold, and to cherish, his bride for the rest of their lives. • B. Parallelism in a series of phrases • A phrase is a group of words that does not contain a finite verb, which expresses a single idea by itself but cannot stand alone. • e.g. 1.The new computer software enhances speed, improves accuracy and lessens work in the office. • 2. The throne of a queen, the elegance of a palace, or the brilliance of diamonds is nothing compared to her radiant beauty. • C. Parallelism in a series of clauses • The clause is a division of a sentence that contains a complete thought and may or may not stand alone as a main or subordinate clause respectively. • e.g. 1. We need people who cannot be intimidated, who are not concerned about building an image, and who do not sell the future for the grandeur of the present. • 2. A student loves a teacher who considers the individual differences, and what interests his students. pinterest.com surry.learning.powerschool.com josecarilloforum.com slideplayer.com brainstudy.info Let’s Practice
• Rewrite the following sentences by converting the
irregular segment in the series to an identical grammatical construction that is parallel to the other items. • 1. Some elements of good writing are unity, clarity, and being coherent. • 2. Form, agility, and being able to endure are the signs of good athlete. • 3. Watching television, reading good books, and to collect stamps are her only forms of recreation. • 4.Swimming is a more rigorous exercise than to play tennis. • 5. Discipline, taste, and to imagine well shape the creative person. • Complete the idea of each sentence by supplying a parallel phrase. • 1. Daily exercise, consistent practice, and _____ are the necessities for the good athlete. • 2. New book, sharp pencils, and ______ will not automatically produce good students. • 3. Here are the talents of an artist: the ability to paint, the ability to sculpt, and ______. • 4. A well-rounded individual is mentally alert, emotionally stable, and ______. • 5. With beautiful weather, a trouble-free car and • ______ , our vacation was enjoyable. • The following sentences are weak because of faulty parallelism. Correct each so that the meaning is clear. • 1. What do people love to collect and like keeping? • 2. Some persons prefer collecting butterflies to collect stamps. • 3.Some ladies collect expensive perfumes imported from Paris, New York, and from Belgium. • 4. A typical lover of gardens collects flowering plants, builds fancy waterfalls and indoor plants classified. • Complete each sentence by providing a series of parallel words, phrases, or clauses. • 1. My seatmate is _____,_____, _____. • 2. The subject teacher in English is ____, _____, ______. • 3. My favorite things include _____, _____, _____. • 4. It will be great ____, ____, _____. • 5. I always ______, _____, ______. QUIZ
• Write S ( satisfactory )if the sentence has
parallelism and N ( not satisfactory ) it if has none. • 1. A sportsman enjoys to surf, to play golf, and skiing. • 2. Visit scenic spots, explore wonderful caves, and climb the highest mountains are the favorite activities of a nature tripper. • 3. A teenager loves jamming with his friends, downloading MP3s, and to surf the Internet. • 4. A first class chef considers exquisite food preparation, unique food presentation, and to plan well cooking procedures as his top priorities. • 5. Pop music, Rhythm and Blues ( RnB ) and doing rap are the choices of a young musical composer. • 6. A figure- conscious lady watches her diet and exercises daily. • 7. A dedicated food caterer evaluates food that will be served based on the quality and taste, consistency and proportioning, and expertise of the cook. • 8. A good basketball player points out the value of teamwork, discipline, and not to fumble. • 9. A disciplined actor studies his scripts, prepares his wardrobe and reports on time. • 10. A student loves a teacher who considers the individual differences, learning styles and what interests his students.