Part 2: Bố cục

Well, the given situation is that……

And with that situation come three options/ suggestions namely (…. And . and, …) ( đọc cái options
ra )
Were I in this situation, i would definitely go for option number ….. ( cái mình chọn) for many
reasons.
The first reason that is ( nói ra lí do 1) + lí do / ví dụ
The second reason that ……( lí do 2) + ….
Moreover, nói ra lí do 3 +….
The other two options have some good points. Nêu ra vài điểm tốt (. Nhưng ko nên nói quá
nhiều , ko phân tích quá kĩ ) .
However, i still don’t choose them as they have some disadvatages/ drawbacks
First of all, ( lựa chọn ko chọn 1) is not suitable for. …. ( đối tượng trong topic ) because ……
Secondly , ( lựa chọn 2 ko chọn ) is not suitale in this situation because ( lí do )….
Furthermore ,… ( nếu có thêm thì bổ sung vào )
In short, ( sự lựa chọn) will be an ideal choice in this situation for the above mentioned reasons.
1. You want to give your grandmother a present for her 2. You ‘ve been invited to a wedding party of your best friend
seventieth birthday, which of the following would you buy: and you want to choose a present for him/ her. There are three
An electrical massage options:
1. elderly people have health problems  an electrical massage is A pair of couple T-shirt
useful for them -> relax, feel pleasant - A couple is beautiful , fashionable and affordable
2. using this equiment before bedtime  help her to sleep well  good - However, I am not sure about the size, (style, design , Color)
for old people -> life expectancy - Another reason is My friend prefer wearing dress to wearing T-
3. show/ express the gratefulness to my grandmother ( when I was a shirt
child, she looked after me when my mother went out. A cookery book
4. besides, my family members can use it to reduce stress after work. • 1. she is interested in cooking  meaningful gift / practical gift
An expensive tea set • ( she is not good at cooking, so this book is useful for her, learn
It could be beautifut and helpful for the elderly people. how to cook)
However, Drinking tea is not my grandmother hobby / interest / not • ( cook delicious meal for her husband  build up family bonds
her cup of tea  not a meaningful gift. ( tie the knot - married, my friend and her husband spend time
• ( a beautiful tea set costs an arm and a leg / cost a fortune. So I cooling meals together after busy days )
think I can not afford for it. • Cooking at home save money, healthy / ( homemade food is
A CD player economical and healthy
• - my grandmother is not good at using smart devices / my An album
grandmother is a low- tech person, she doesn’t know how to use - Wedding Studio gave her an album.
smart electrical devices. - Save photos on smartphones  it is not necessary gift.
• She has a pain in her ear, that makes she can not listen well.  a cd
player is not an ideal choice.
 4. Your university is going to start a sport club to encourage the
3. Your younger brother is being bullied by other student
students to participate in outdoor activities more regularly. You
at school. What should you do to solve the problem ? are asked to recommend some kinds of sports :
Speaking to the teacher Swimming (v)
• It happened at school. Teachers can help him solve the • Swimming is a useful way to help students keep fit or stay in
problems on the spot ( immediately ) ( teachers always shape, improve the appearance/ physical health. ( taller )
directly solve troubles of students at school ) • It’s scorching weather, so it is ideal to go swimming in this
• Teacher can talk to his parents to educate him help his weather.
• Learning how to swim is a necessary for students, avoid water
parents know what he did at school  his parents pay
accidents . ( summer holiday, students often go to the beach, river,
more attention on their son to prevent him from doing stream ( swim in river ) ( save students from drowning (chết đuối)
similar thing in the future. • Badminton / Volleyball : sporty / good for health / improve health
Joining a martial art class such as karate, taekwondo condition.
• it is not necessary in this situation  it could be violent Volleyball : - not everyone can play this kind of sport because they
• It takes a lot of time to study a kind of martial art are not tall enough.
Ask for help from the police • it is the summer and it’s bolling , so students may be not like play
this games.
• I think this situation is not serious enough to ask for help
Badminton : badminton costs higher, rent yard ( need large space ,
from the police. It can be solved at school. buy rackets )
- They are students, they are too young to resposible to their • Not many students are interested in this kind of sport.
behaviour.
5. A friends of your wants to lose some weight. There are three 6. You need to earn some extra money to pay for your study. What kind
suggested ways for her to practice. of part time job would you get to earn the money you need. There are
Going on a diet three suggestions
• - choosing healthy food with less calories and fat is perfect for losing Shop assistant at a book shop
weight. • - I think a book shop is a good / suitable working environment for
• - count exactly the number of calories input  control the weight. students  improve communication skill
• Should eat more vegetables and fruit in the daily meals. It not only • - besides, they can read roods when the shop is free or buy books with
helps her to keep fit but also good for health, skin. ( good for heart , many discounts.
reduce cholesteron in blood) • - the time is flexible for students , so it doesn’t distract their study.
• - prevent some diseases , live longer, good for mental health ( reduce • - the salary is quite high that it can help student pay for their study, for
stress ) example learning a new language or pay fee.
Going to the gym twice a week Waiter/ waitress at a coffee house
• It is not enough to lose weight. He/ she should do exercise on regular • The salary is lower.
daily basic  it’s more effective. • Coffee house is often crowded, so I have to work hard  affect health or
• She is busy, doesn’t have much time to go the gym. study.
• - it could be expensive ( take a course at the gym or pay money for the • It does not have days off at the weekend, as you know the coffee shop is
coach ) full of customers at the weekend.
Taking some pills ( help to lose weight immediately . However, : Receptionist at a hotel
• - it could be a dangerous solution, we don’t the origin or ingredients. • - work on night shift  make me exhausted / tired.
• Taking some pills cause some slight effects. ( harmful to liver / stomach • - work in a complicated working environment , follow many rules
/ heart / kidney ) • I do not have enough experience in working at a hotel. My
• Cost an arm and a leg. communication is not good to deal with the problems.
7. You and your family are going to visit your grandparents in Hanoi. 8. You are planning to study in Australia for a few months. The school
You need to consider how to get there : has sent you some information about different types of
accommodation. They are :
By plane
Home staying with natives
- it is the fastest among three means of transport  save time for • - staying with natives has many benefits for students :
travelling • It is good opportunities to practice English. ( communicate in English
- Travelling by plane is safer and more convenient. every day --> improve our language.
- The price of a plane ticket is not expensive, many people can afford. • I will experience the ways of natives live  explore culture, Know more
- I and my family member have never travelled by plane before. So, we about their customs or traditions.
• The host can teach you about life or things in Australia, you can enjoy
want to experience this kind of transport. local meals.
Going by car/ by train ( travelling by car or train has some interesting • - the price is affordable  save money  spend money for study/ doing
things. We can enjoy the scenes along the trip, take a lot of photos. These other thing.
transports are cheaper, so it can us save money. However, I do not choose Living in the dormitory
• - it could be inconvenient, because I have to share room with other
them because :
students.
- I live in ---. It is quite far from Hanoi. If I choose to travel by car or • - most of the dormintories are old and small. The quality of life can be
train, it will take a lot of time. affected
- Sitting in a car or train for a long time is harmful to health, it makes all Living in a rental flat
member tired  can lead to backache. • - the standard of living in Australia cost a fortune, so it is expensive to
- I have travelling sickness, so it will be terrible if I choose to travel by rent a flat.
• It could be too big/ large for one person to live in  feel boring.
car or plane. • It could be dangerous when you get sick at night because on one is
- Travelling by car is dangerous, and it is easy to stuck in a traffic jam beside you.
because Hanoi is crowed with a plenty of vehicles.
9. Your friend, a third-year English student, want to find a 10. Your friends are planning a 1-day trip for this weekend. They
part time job to do after class. She needs your advice on the need your advice on which. Place they should choose :
following jobs: Bach Ma national park.
An English tutor for a group of secondary school students • - it is very beautiful, so we can take many photos. The weather is
- My friend want to be an English teacher in the future, so this job fascinated, it’s cool so it is an ideal place to visit.
is useful / perfect for her.
• - go on a picnic / go camping here , have a BBQ party , sing
-It is not difficult to find this part time job because the demand of
together -> sound fascinating.
society is very high. ( more and more parents find an English tutor
• – large enough to play team building games., besides there are
for their children )
- The salary is high, this can help her pay for study / live many restaurant or shops here, it is convenient.
- She gains more experience in teaching or working with student • There are many wild animals / plants here, we can go to see.
. This is necessary for her in the future. Thuan An Beach :
A shop assistant in a souvenir shop (tương tự bài work part- • My friends went to the beach last week, so they no longer want to
time) get there.
A waiter at a restaurant • Some of my friends do not how to swim, so it could be dangerous
for him to go to the beach.
Thien An Hill ( thien an hill is quite close the city center, but
• There are any exciting things here  could be boring
• There are not any shops near here, so it will be inconvenient for
us.
• Part 3 :
• Generrally speaking, i totally argree that + topic ( đọc lại chủ đề ) ( because of the following reasons )
• The first reason / benefit / advantage is that + ý 1 ( nhớ thêm chủ ngữ ) + phân tích / gỉai thich / ví dụ để làm
rõ
• In addition , ý 2 ( S+V) phân tích / gỉai thich / ví dụ để làm rõ
• Besides / another important significant point is that + ý 3 (S-V) + phân tích / gỉai thich / ví dụ để làm rõ
• Last but not least, + your idea (S+V) + phân tích / gỉai thich / ví dụ để làm rõ
• All things considered --------- ( paraphrase topic)
•
• ( dàn bài chỉ giúp anh chị trình bày theo 1 hướng rõ ràng, tránh lập ý ) ( anh chị có thể nói theo sườn bài của mình
, lưu ý không nói vòng vo ) ( ý sau phải hỗ trợ làm rõ cho cái luận điếm là cái ý trong bài đã hiển thị )
• Listening to music improves people’s mental health.
• Reducing stress :
• Listening to music is a kind of entertainment. It can make people relax, enhance their mood, delete negative feelings. For
example, after a hard- working day, listening to music can help us get over pressure or forget troubles in life. Many surveys
showed that listening to music is cure to treat mental health like listening to piano melodies or ballad songs.
• Creating peace of mind:
• reduce stress, create balance in spiritual life, get calm and peace inside. Treatment for soul , mind. So when we have problems in
working or studying, we should listen to some music.
• Developing concentration:
• Many scientists prove that music can improve the people’s c concentration.. In reality, a lot of parents let their children to learn to
play music in order to develop their focus.
• It relieves symtoms of depression : reduce stree, think optimistic, enhance / improve. mood., think positive., so we can say that
doing exercise is cure for physical health and music is remedy for mind.
• Plastic shopping bags should be banned from grocery stores.
• Making food harmful:
• Plastic shopping bags are not well-processed so they contain toxics or harmful chemicals. When we use these bags to put our
food in, those chemicals may come to our food --> affect our health.  cause many serious diseases such as cancer.
• Causing pollution:
• Plastic bag are not dissolved , it takes a lot of time to plastic bag can be dissolved , so they exist for a long time in the
environment. This causes pollution. More popular using plastic bags is, more contaminated the environment is.
• Paper bags or cloth bags as ideal substitutes:
• Instead of using plastic bags, people can use more environmentally-friendly bags which are made from paper or cloth. This will
noy only help reduce rubbish ( bag plastic) , but also save the earth. Besides paper bags or cloth bags can be dissolved.
• Your own ideas: a waste of money :
• Plastic bags are not often reused, people often throw them away after use , this is waste of money. Besides, shops have to pay a
lot of money to buy plastic bags for using.