Analysing copy text, writing editing

Analysing copy text, writing editing

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  Language Content StyleProof read: Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation Headlines There ae a lot of descriptive w ordsused for example; amazing, pesky and beautiful, although the language used is fairly straight forward here are next to non- metaphors and similes but I think that this goes w ell w ith the formal style of review that he has done. The purpose if this review was to inform people about certain aspects of a particular game. The style of the reviewis mostly formal;the review gives a detailed explanationof the game in subjectand seems fairly professionally done. There were only a couple of words that needed to be changed for example “mutagems” is actually spelt mutagens so I comments at the side of the review with the correct spelling. There was one a few sentences that required a full stop and a comma but overall he punctuation was good. There were no headlines as the review its self was a description of the game as well as brief synopsis about the characters.