AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: Beth Aldridge
Planning – Comments and mark out of 18/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 45/60
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills
Footage:
Is appropriate for target audience, fitting genre conventions of drama well.
Controlled use of camera throughout.
Editing:
Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end.
Would have benefited from more footage. Good variety of shots used throughout.
Sound:
Good use of diegetic and non-diegetic sound.
Overall:
A proficient drama piece. Good use of location and mise-en-scene
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 18/20
Question 1: Answered using a video podcast and youtube. Excellent inclusion of
Todorov’s narrative theory. Candidate explains well how she conforms to her genre
conventions using good examples from films within the genre.
Question 2: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Candidate explains well
who the target audience is and how they are represented in her film opening. She
acknowledges that ideally the actors should have been played by older people to
make it more believable to the audience.
Question 3: Answered using prezi. Candidate explains well that 20th Century Fox
would be best to distribute her film using good clear examples.
Question 4: Answered using an annotated photo of typical target audience.
Candidate describes well the likes and media preferences of her target audience.
Question 5: Answered using blogger and powtoon. Candidate conducted a survey
and displayed the answers using powtoon. Results are analysed and reflected on in
good detail.
Question 6: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Excellent detail on all the
technologies used throughout the process.
Question 7: Answered using word and slideshare in an essay style response.
Candidate provides a very detailed reflective piece explaining what she has learnt
throughout her journey, excellent detail, well done.
Overall an excellent evaluation, great attention to detail and uses a good range of
technologies, well done.
Total 81/100 Grade: A

Beth aldridge as coursework overall marksheet

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    AS Coursework OverallMarks Name: Beth Aldridge Planning – Comments and mark out of 18/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 45/60 There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills Footage: Is appropriate for target audience, fitting genre conventions of drama well. Controlled use of camera throughout. Editing: Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end. Would have benefited from more footage. Good variety of shots used throughout. Sound: Good use of diegetic and non-diegetic sound. Overall: A proficient drama piece. Good use of location and mise-en-scene Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 18/20 Question 1: Answered using a video podcast and youtube. Excellent inclusion of Todorov’s narrative theory. Candidate explains well how she conforms to her genre conventions using good examples from films within the genre. Question 2: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Candidate explains well who the target audience is and how they are represented in her film opening. She acknowledges that ideally the actors should have been played by older people to make it more believable to the audience. Question 3: Answered using prezi. Candidate explains well that 20th Century Fox would be best to distribute her film using good clear examples. Question 4: Answered using an annotated photo of typical target audience. Candidate describes well the likes and media preferences of her target audience. Question 5: Answered using blogger and powtoon. Candidate conducted a survey and displayed the answers using powtoon. Results are analysed and reflected on in good detail. Question 6: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Excellent detail on all the technologies used throughout the process. Question 7: Answered using word and slideshare in an essay style response. Candidate provides a very detailed reflective piece explaining what she has learnt throughout her journey, excellent detail, well done. Overall an excellent evaluation, great attention to detail and uses a good range of technologies, well done. Total 81/100 Grade: A