The
general
quality of
the photo
has been
enhanced.
The article
titles have
been
spaced out
to prevent
confusion.
Changed the colour and position
of the puff to make it stand out.
I moved the
location of
this
competition
to draw
more
attention to
the right
hand side of
the page
where it
was looking
a bit bare.
Before
After
I rearranged
the order of
these photos,
so that they
went in
ascending
order.
I
reduced
the size
of this
line so
that it
every
line was
even.
I signed the editor’s
message with a hand-
written font to make it
look more personal.
Before
After
Before
After
I made sure that this
was central, so that
it looked even and
accurate.
I inserted this quote
from the interview
to fill up this bare
space.
I also added an anchor to
this photo, to make it clear
if you were just flicking
through the magazine what
interview was on this page.

Changes I Have Made to My Magazine

  • 1.
    The general quality of the photo hasbeen enhanced. The article titles have been spaced out to prevent confusion. Changed the colour and position of the puff to make it stand out. I moved the location of this competition to draw more attention to the right hand side of the page where it was looking a bit bare. Before After
  • 2.
    I rearranged the orderof these photos, so that they went in ascending order. I reduced the size of this line so that it every line was even. I signed the editor’s message with a hand- written font to make it look more personal. Before After
  • 3.
    Before After I made surethat this was central, so that it looked even and accurate. I inserted this quote from the interview to fill up this bare space. I also added an anchor to this photo, to make it clear if you were just flicking through the magazine what interview was on this page.