How Did You
Attract/Address Your
     Audience ?
The next few slides I have shown examples
 of what my front cover, contents page and
  double page spread look like and I have
 annotated them showing different features
  on the pages of why I put them there and
       how they attract the audience.
Stars add to the         The picture stands
  ‘American’ theme         out straight away from
                           the rest
         Clear font
         which stands       Shows the price
         out to ALL         in pounds,
         audiences          dollars and euros

The leather jacket          Shows the date of
adds to the ‘rock’          that edition to
genre and adds              show the reader
style                       how old it is
      Other cover           Gives a brief
      lines which are       idea of how
      likely to attract     established it is
      the reader            and if its been
                            going for long
        Match with the
        American theme
                            Giving provides
                            the audience to
                            go to it easily
                            rather than
                            searching the
‘PIA-ELIZA’ stands out      magazine
more than any of the
other cover lines to       Persuasive
show this is the main      language to try
article in the magazine    and attract the
                           reader

                           Barcode to make
Competitions attract       it seem realistic
audience and grab their
attention as they may be
interested in the prize
Carries on the
     American          Pictures give
     theme             us a bit on
Typical thing          an idea of
for a magazine         what to
to do – have           expect in the
the weekly             articles
articles which
feature each
week                   The line shows a
                       clear marker of
  All the latest       where the two
  news articles        sections
  are page             separate from
  number to            each other
  help the
  reader
                      A plain subtle
  navigate
                      background
  through the
                      gives some
  magazine
                      colour to the
 An editors note      page but not too
 makes the            much so the
 magazine seem        reader isn’t
 more friendly and    distracted or
 gets to have their   diverted from
 say and is           what’s on the
 encouraging the      rest of the page
 reader to get
 involved.            The boxes round the
                      pieces of text help to
Competitions
                      separate the writing
attract the
                      and make it clear to
readers attention
                      read
to get involved
more
Bold colours & font to   The red, white and blue
  It also                  stand out and attract    colours continue with the
  introduces the           the reader               American theme
  piece of text so
  you know more
  or less what
  you’re going to
  read




The                                                                             The questions
introduction                                                                    and the
makes it seem                                                                   answers are in
more friendly                                                                   a different
and a lot less                                                                  style of text so
casual.                                                                         they clearly
                                                                                differentiate




                                                             This finishes off the
                     The pictures make it seem               conversation so you know it’s
                     more appealing and not as               coming to an end and gives the
                     boring                                  reader an idea that there will be
                                                             more interviews to come
Feedback
    The following questions are questions I asked someone of a similar age to me and this is the
                                               feedback
                   I got from them about what they think of my music magazine:


Q: Would you pick up this magazine If you saw it in a shop?
A: - Yes I think I would, it appeals to me very much

Q: Would you pay £2.20?
A: Yes definitely, it has a lot of pages so you get a lot for your money and most other music
    magazines are a lot more expensive so yes definitely

Q: Do you think it looks professionally done?
A: Very! I don’t think I would have noticed it had been made by you if you didn’t tell me

Q: What do you think of the contents page?
A: It’s brilliantly done! There is lots going on, just as there usually would be on a contents page,
      makes you feel like there is lots to read and it is a good layout and easy to read

Q: What do you think of the double page spread?
A: The interview is well written and the content of it is interesting but it looks a bit plain, you should
    put more pictures on there and maybe not so much writing!

Q: What do you think of the photographs taken?
A: The photographs all look very professionally done and are all well thought out. From their actions,
    to facial expressions, to clothes and the props they have.

Evaluation question 5 amy newman

  • 1.
  • 2.
    The next fewslides I have shown examples of what my front cover, contents page and double page spread look like and I have annotated them showing different features on the pages of why I put them there and how they attract the audience.
  • 3.
    Stars add tothe The picture stands ‘American’ theme out straight away from the rest Clear font which stands Shows the price out to ALL in pounds, audiences dollars and euros The leather jacket Shows the date of adds to the ‘rock’ that edition to genre and adds show the reader style how old it is Other cover Gives a brief lines which are idea of how likely to attract established it is the reader and if its been going for long Match with the American theme Giving provides the audience to go to it easily rather than searching the ‘PIA-ELIZA’ stands out magazine more than any of the other cover lines to Persuasive show this is the main language to try article in the magazine and attract the reader Barcode to make Competitions attract it seem realistic audience and grab their attention as they may be interested in the prize
  • 4.
    Carries on the American Pictures give theme us a bit on Typical thing an idea of for a magazine what to to do – have expect in the the weekly articles articles which feature each week The line shows a clear marker of All the latest where the two news articles sections are page separate from number to each other help the reader A plain subtle navigate background through the gives some magazine colour to the An editors note page but not too makes the much so the magazine seem reader isn’t more friendly and distracted or gets to have their diverted from say and is what’s on the encouraging the rest of the page reader to get involved. The boxes round the pieces of text help to Competitions separate the writing attract the and make it clear to readers attention read to get involved more
  • 5.
    Bold colours &font to The red, white and blue It also stand out and attract colours continue with the introduces the the reader American theme piece of text so you know more or less what you’re going to read The The questions introduction and the makes it seem answers are in more friendly a different and a lot less style of text so casual. they clearly differentiate This finishes off the The pictures make it seem conversation so you know it’s more appealing and not as coming to an end and gives the boring reader an idea that there will be more interviews to come
  • 6.
    Feedback The following questions are questions I asked someone of a similar age to me and this is the feedback I got from them about what they think of my music magazine: Q: Would you pick up this magazine If you saw it in a shop? A: - Yes I think I would, it appeals to me very much Q: Would you pay £2.20? A: Yes definitely, it has a lot of pages so you get a lot for your money and most other music magazines are a lot more expensive so yes definitely Q: Do you think it looks professionally done? A: Very! I don’t think I would have noticed it had been made by you if you didn’t tell me Q: What do you think of the contents page? A: It’s brilliantly done! There is lots going on, just as there usually would be on a contents page, makes you feel like there is lots to read and it is a good layout and easy to read Q: What do you think of the double page spread? A: The interview is well written and the content of it is interesting but it looks a bit plain, you should put more pictures on there and maybe not so much writing! Q: What do you think of the photographs taken? A: The photographs all look very professionally done and are all well thought out. From their actions, to facial expressions, to clothes and the props they have.