Evil Ellie

By George carter
Chapter 1-Narnia
Standing by the burning fire ,Max (a small shy boy) who was becoming more
and more braver about being picked to go on the quest.Shakes ran down the
spine of his back and his eyes darted like a jet .A couple hours later he waited
for the king to explain evrything.
You have a choice yes or no! yes max decided I am happy the wise king
explained but why cant you pick somebody else because you’re the only one
who is old enough to do this challenge can you get the fire-ice ball.
Despite feeling scared, max knew he couldn’t back down doing this quest he
said I wlll beat this challenge .
Chapter 2-Freaky forest
Meanwhile,max met the limit of the freaky forest
, he started to shake and tremble GRRRRR! What
was that noise ? The noise was like a meanicing
tiger.
Pacing forwads, a tear of fire hit him.Spit there it
was again he was aproaching the forest he ses a 4
headed dragon in the distance BOOM the dragon is
like a storm of lightning.after being chased he met
some crosroads should he go left or right?
Chapter 3-right
Having decided to take the right path , max ventured on
his journey –he was steps closer to getting the fire ice
ball. Before long, he met the river(a bubbling river) which
was his least fear. SPLASH! He was under the water. He
went under in a tunnel .

In the corner of his eye he saw a golden hilt on top o a
sword, he pulled it out of the wall, water spiders were
storming everywhere he saw bones floating as he floated
back up he said I can beat evil ellie.
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Chapter 3 left
Having decided to take the left path,max
ventured on his journey –he was steps closer to
getting the fire ice ball.before long,he met a
cave –a horror cave-which was his worst fear.
feeling shocked, he tip toed in to the cave.
In the corner of his eye,he saw a golden hilt on
top of a sword , he pulled it out of a rock.
Meanwhile spiders were running like tigers. He
knew he would deafeat evil ellie.
Chapter 4
After a while, tired Max finally he reached the rohan
castle. He couldn’t wait. CLICK! PHEW! It was open he
was inside Max went to the magnificent shiny dungeons .
Suddenly, max was ready” you will never beat
me.”SWOOSH! WING! SQUINK! One more hit to the head
and kaboom he fell to the ground like a plane crashing.
Dertermanation flooded his body he ran to the dungeon
there it was a fire ice ball.
Chapter 5
Slowly , walking down the path he had the fire ice
ball and he ran out of this castle , stormed through
the crossroads and skipped the forest , evry one
was cheering ad congratulating him also the king
said well done .
Besides , going to the forest he threw the fire ice
ball all it did was melt te 4 headed dragon and he
was balling and screaming.
Despite, saving lives evry body was so impressed
also he saved the land.

Evil ellie george carter

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    Chapter 1-Narnia Standing bythe burning fire ,Max (a small shy boy) who was becoming more and more braver about being picked to go on the quest.Shakes ran down the spine of his back and his eyes darted like a jet .A couple hours later he waited for the king to explain evrything. You have a choice yes or no! yes max decided I am happy the wise king explained but why cant you pick somebody else because you’re the only one who is old enough to do this challenge can you get the fire-ice ball. Despite feeling scared, max knew he couldn’t back down doing this quest he said I wlll beat this challenge .
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    Chapter 2-Freaky forest Meanwhile,maxmet the limit of the freaky forest , he started to shake and tremble GRRRRR! What was that noise ? The noise was like a meanicing tiger. Pacing forwads, a tear of fire hit him.Spit there it was again he was aproaching the forest he ses a 4 headed dragon in the distance BOOM the dragon is like a storm of lightning.after being chased he met some crosroads should he go left or right?
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    Chapter 3-right Having decidedto take the right path , max ventured on his journey –he was steps closer to getting the fire ice ball. Before long, he met the river(a bubbling river) which was his least fear. SPLASH! He was under the water. He went under in a tunnel . In the corner of his eye he saw a golden hilt on top o a sword, he pulled it out of the wall, water spiders were storming everywhere he saw bones floating as he floated back up he said I can beat evil ellie. Next Page
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    Chapter 3 left Havingdecided to take the left path,max ventured on his journey –he was steps closer to getting the fire ice ball.before long,he met a cave –a horror cave-which was his worst fear. feeling shocked, he tip toed in to the cave. In the corner of his eye,he saw a golden hilt on top of a sword , he pulled it out of a rock. Meanwhile spiders were running like tigers. He knew he would deafeat evil ellie.
  • 6.
    Chapter 4 After awhile, tired Max finally he reached the rohan castle. He couldn’t wait. CLICK! PHEW! It was open he was inside Max went to the magnificent shiny dungeons . Suddenly, max was ready” you will never beat me.”SWOOSH! WING! SQUINK! One more hit to the head and kaboom he fell to the ground like a plane crashing. Dertermanation flooded his body he ran to the dungeon there it was a fire ice ball.
  • 7.
    Chapter 5 Slowly ,walking down the path he had the fire ice ball and he ran out of this castle , stormed through the crossroads and skipped the forest , evry one was cheering ad congratulating him also the king said well done . Besides , going to the forest he threw the fire ice ball all it did was melt te 4 headed dragon and he was balling and screaming. Despite, saving lives evry body was so impressed also he saved the land.