First production final production changes

First production final production changes

• 1.
  CORRECTIONS FROM FIRST PRODUCTION DRAFT
• 2.
  Front Cover: FirstProduction Draft – Final Production
• 3.
  Changes made toFront Cover • Splash changed from ‘How 3 Liverpudlians sold out Wembley one year after their debut’ to ‘How three Liverpudlians sold out Wembley’. • Font for splash changed to ‘Calibri’ in italics (cover line font) – more conventional for a magazine cover to stick to a minimal amount of fonts. • Red outer glow added to splash – before it wasn’t standing out from background enough. • Splash centred, made smaller, and line space made smaller – looked more effective. • Gutterline added to bottom with additional magazine content – before there was too much space along bottom, and the image of Tom provides cohesion with the contents page. • Institutional information aligned to the right in order to avoid it blending in with the gutterline and to look sophisticated to appeal to a sophisticated audience – font also changed to Calibri to minimalise amount of fonts used.
• 4.
  Contents Page: FirstProduction Draft – Final Production
• 5.
  Changes made toContents Page • Font of the band index and social media changed to Calibri to match the contents on the right. • Page numbers added to image of Tom and ‘The Cloaks’ – make it obvious to the reader where to find the story. • Text of stories on right hand side made slightly smaller and line spacing reduced – more content fit in and looks more sophisticated. • Line spacing of Louis Del Grido headline made smaller and centred – more conventional. Red stroke and italics also added – makes it stand out more. • Bottom left image of Josh replaced with image of ‘The Cloaks’ as there were too many similar images of Josh. • More stories added to contents on right hand side of page including interview with main cover band – shows more content. • Box of social media made for Josh ($am Winston) which groups images together, captions changed to suit the images more, and image of Josh with thumbs up given a background of the Mercury Music Awards – show an awards show associated with this genre. • Prize giveaway added – fill up white space and replaces the one which I was going to put on the front cover but did not fit in – allows audience involvement.
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  Double Page Spread:First Production Draft – Final Production
• 7.
  Changes made toDouble Page Spread • ‘Wembley one year on:’ made slightly smaller and a colon used instead of ellipsis – this was done in order to focus attention on ‘The Cloaks’ which has been enlarged. • Margin placed around the text in the boxes – looks more sophisticated and conventional. • Pull quote moved further down to make it more conventional and not centred. • Body text font changed to Arial – easier to read. • The stand-first ‘The Cloaks can only go up’ has been made bold like the other stand- firsts. • Pull quote font changed to match that of ‘The Cloaks’ – Lucida Handwriting, provides cohesion with the title. • Article un-hyphenated and properly proof read. • Paragraphs now have drop caps which are more conventional and effective. • All numbers now written out as words rather than figures ie. three rather than 3. • Box with date etc. in now has page number and has been aligned left and made smaller.