How to Add Details to Your Writing Display
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The document consists of various examples and structures related to language, including dialogue, descriptive adjectives, adverbs, sensory details, and metaphors. It features a narrative about a boy and his sister, including their experiences and feelings. Additionally, it contains numerical data about animals and environmental conditions during a picnic.
How to Add Details to Your Writing Display
- 1. Dialogue/Quotes The boy ran home. The boy ran home. “I’ll be there soon!” he thought.
- 2. She likes eating food like cakes, pies and sweets. Examples She likes eating food.
- 3. My sister was laughing yesterday at our house because of a TV show. ( Wh ) Questions (When?) (Where?) (Why?)! (Who?) (What?) My sister was laughing.
- 4. Adjectives She had a bag. She had a small 2-year old heart-shaped pink striped plastic bag. (size)! (shape)! (colour)! (pattern)! (material)! (age)!
- 5. Adverbs The boy walked. The boy walked happily. Quietly, the boy walked. The boy quickly walked.
- 6. Numb3r5 There were many animals. There were many animals four pigs, three goats, two hundred cows and one thousand chickens.
- 7. Feelings They went on a picnic. They went on a picnic. The girls were relaxed but the boys were excited.
- 8. Facts The weather was hot. The weather was hot.The temperature was 36°C and the humidity was 95%! Its true!
- 9. Senses The cake was amazing! The cake was amazing! It had three layers, it smelled like vanilla but wasn’t too sweet. The cake was soft. The people sang a birthday song. (see)! (smell)! (taste)! (touch)! (hear)!
- 10. Metaphors The man was angry. The man was angry. He was as red as a tomato. The man was like a volcano!
- 11. i talics Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay?
- 12. Punctuation Hello. I’m lost. Help. Hi? I’m lost! Help. Hi! I’m lost… Help? Hi, I’m lost. (Help)
- 13. HIGH Detail