Language Accuracy	

Lessons from EL Paper 1 Prelims (2010)	

       Compiled by Mr Syamsul
Idioms
We were miffed when
 he let the cat out
of the bag about the
    surprise party!	

    An idiom’s meaning
    cannot be deduced
     from its individual
           words
Malformed Idioms
Aria turned to deaf
ears when they tried
     to advise her.
Aria turned a deaf
ear to all the advice
   that was given.
We are taught not to
 look for a gift
  horse in the
     mouth.
We are taught not to
look in the mouth
  for a gift horse.
Wrong
understanding 
  of idiom
Aisyah saw a degree as
a stepping stone to
    a bright future
When Aisyah received
criticism, she took it as
 a stepping stone
Literal use of idiom
He saw the light
     when...
He saw the light
     when...	

  ... his fingers 	

    found the 	

 correct switch.
He saw the light
      when...	


 ... he made time to
understand the notes.
So do not use an idiom
    unless you are
  ABSOLUTELY
    CERTAIN of 
    how to use it
Missing articles
Articles are words like
      a/an, the
Situation at home got
worse as our parents
   were constantly
       bickering.
The situation at home
  got worse as our
    parents were
 constantly bickering.
Wearing correct dress
 makes a difference.
Wearing the correct
  dress makes a
    difference.
Pronouns
Pronouns are words
used in place of nouns
e.g. he, she, they, 
myself, themselves
I just could not resist
myself from munching
        cookies
I just could not resist
myself from munching
         cookies	


 I just could not resist
 munching the cookies
I went to the party by
       myself
I myself am unsure 
   how to use the 
  microwave oven.
“I” vs “Me”
The girl and me then
became close friends.	


The girl and I then
became close friends.
Those books were
    bought by 
 my mother and I.
Those books were
    bought by 
 my mother and I.	

 Those books were
bought by my mother
     and me.
My mother and me
bought those books.	


 My mother and I
bought those books.
My mother and me
bought those books.	

 Those books were
     bought by 	

  my mother and I
My mother and I
bought those books.	

Those books were
    bought by 	

my mother and me.
“I” is used as the
    subject of 
     a sentence; 
    “me” is not!
Missing subject
How my brother acted
in difficult situations has
  not only opened my
eyes but also (??who?)
 to become a stronger
      person inside.
How my brother acted
in difficult situations has
   not only opened my
eyes but also enabled
    me to become a
 stronger person inside.
I tried to calm him but
   failed to do so and 
  (??what??) led him
    pushing me aside.
I tried to calm him but
failed to do so and this
 led him to pushing me
           aside.
Missing verbs
Every sentence must
    have a verb!	


  e.g. I love ice-cream
Shouts and screams
   here and there.	


 Shouts and screams
could be heard here
     and there.
Inaccurate choice 
     of verbs
We really wanted to
  graduate quickly in
order to prevent the
   presence of that
   arrogant Oscar.
We really wanted to
graduate quickly in
order to avoid the
 presence of that
  arrogant Oscar.
They exhausted
 their reserves.

They depleted 
 their reserves.
I was exhausted
   after the race.

 I was depleted 
   after the race.
Lie vs Lay confusion
He laid down and went
 to sleep right away.	


He lay down and went
 to sleep right away.
I have to lie down now.
               base	



  I lay down earlier.
     past	



       lain
I haveparticiple	

since noon.
I have to lay the
             base	

 blanket on the floor.

 I laid it before I left.
    past	




       laid it
I haveparticiple	

 for some
       time now.
Hanged vs Hung
  confusion
That is where we must
 hang the paintings
    base	



 I hung the paintings
    past	

  there this morning.

The walls were hung
                 participle	

  with our paintings.
The mob is planning to
 hang the murderer
  base	



The mob hanged the
           past	

murderer this morning.

 The murderer was
hanged by the mob.	

 participle
Punctuation in
  dialogue
Don't you want to enjoy
  tonight? , he asked. 

Please take me home, 
       , I pleaded.
Don't you want to enjoy
  tonight? he asked. 

Please take me home,
       I pleaded.
Contractions
I questioned him, knowing
there wouldn’t be a good
           answer.	



  Use contractions
  only in dialogue!
Acronyms
In secondary school, we are
       asked to do CIP.	



  In secondary school, we are
asked to do the Community
Involvement Programme
            (CIP).
Hockey was my CCA.


    Hockey was my 
Co-Currricular Activity
       (CCA).
Local expressions
The void deck was
 filled with people.
The ang moh got
kicked out of the bar.

The mamak made
some prata for me.
Punctuation
There is only one person
who would appear in my
 mind, my grandmother.

It was difficult at first, I got
       grumpy easily.
There is only one person
who would appear in my
 mind, my grandmother.

It was difficult at first, I got
       grumpy easily.
Commas are only used
 to separate items 
      in a list.
Colon

   :
The colon is used to
introduce a list or an
    explanation/
      example.
There is only one person
who would appear in my
 mind, my grandmother.

There is only one person
who would appear in my
 mind: my grandmother.
Semi-colon

      ;
A semi-colon is used to
  link two sentences
that are closely related
 or continue the same
        thought.
There is only one person
who would appear in my
 mind; my grandmother.

       Semicolon is wrongly used because	

       “my grandmother” is not a sentence
It was difficult at first, I got
       grumpy easily.

It was difficult at first; I got
       grumpy easily.
I really wanted some
ice-cream, however, I
   settled for a drink.

 I really wanted some
ice-cream; however, I
   settled for a drink.
Vagueness
We cannot control which
family we are born to, what
  skin colour we will have 
          etc etc
She wanted to get the
baby some clothes, toys
     and so on.
Less or Few?
He has less friends 
    than me
He has less friends 
      than me

He has fewer friends
      than me
Few is used for
 countable nouns

    Less is for
uncountable nouns
lesser means not of
  great importance
compared to others!
Alphabet vs Letter
    confusion
He likes to write the
 alphabets XYZ
 wherever he goes.
The English
alphabet is made
 up of 26 letters
He likes to write the
   letters XYZ
 wherever he goes.
Best Wishes!

Lessons in Grammar from EL Paper 1 (Prelims 2010)