This document discusses drafts of a movie trailer and provides feedback. The first draft introduced two characters and cut between them to keep viewers engaged. However, it lacked context and title screens. The second draft addressed this with title screens explaining the story and characters. It also used sound effects like heartbeats to build tension. The document provides positive feedback on elements like cuts, fades and clips that reveal character emotions and action. Areas for improvement include using music throughout and modifying some visual and sound effects. The final draft will incorporate lessons learned from feedback on the first two drafts.