Part G
         Chosen Conventions and how it
                   develop
   Convention      Use/Develop/Challenge                             Description and             Examples from film
                                                                     Purpose                     with still shot
   Conflict and    Use- this convention of conflict in a drama       This is the scene where     Precious
                   film is kind of predictable, as most drama        Precious and her mum
   Arguments       films have arguments between characters.          were fighting after
                                                                     Precious gets home
                   Develop- We will develop this convention in       with her new baby. This
                   our opening sequence by using close ups and       challenges the
                   extreme close ups with an addition of             convention as it have
                   gestures and movements of the characters.         high violence between
                                                                     characters.


   Love Triangle   Use- this convention of love triangle is rarely   This scene is when she      Closer
                   scene in a drama film, but in a drama-            told her husband that
                   romance films are possibly have a love            she’s seeing another
                   triangle or a challenge for the couples.          guy. This uses the
                                                                     convention of love
                   Develop- we will develop this convention by       triangle, because it is a
                   using another girl, so that the girlfriend of     confession that she’s
                   the boy will think he’s cheating. However,        seeing another man.
                   there will be a twist and it was just a
                   misunderstanding
Who are the Characters & who they
Part H
              represent Draft 1
                             Ramina: Nevaeh
                                          The Boyfriend’s close friend


                             Clothes:
                                          Black clothes to show jealousy, and dark




Neil: John
                                                                  Ina: Lily
             The Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his girlfriend
                                                                               John’s Fiancée
Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing
                                                                  Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’s proposing
              Jeans and Hoody when going out with
                                                                  to her
other girlfriend
                                                                              Jogging bottoms and Top when she
                                                                  saw them holding hands
Who are the Character and who they
            represent Draft 2
                                                               John’s Semi Formal Outfit
                   Name: Neil Guevarra                         - For their Date with Lily
                   Age: 17
                   Character Name: John
                   Character Age:


                                                    John’s Non- Formal Outfit
                                                    - When he is with Nevaeh
Character Clothes
•Wears semi-formal clothes when he’s
with Lily on their date
•Wears jeans and hoody when he’s
with Nevaeh in the park




                        Phone when Lily calls him              The necklace that he will
Part H                                                         be wearing throughout the
                                                               film
Who are the Character and who they
            represent Draft 2
                                                                  Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit
                  Name: Ina Bayson                                - For their Date with John
                  Age: 17
                  Character Name: Lily
                  Character Age:

                                                   Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit
                                                   - When following John to the
                                                   Park with Nevaeh
Character Clothes
•Wears semi-formal clothes when
she’s with John on their date
•Wears jogging bottoms, and top
when she saw John and Nevaeh in
the park
                                  Phone that she      The ring that
                                  will be using       John will give    Jewellery that she
Part H                                                to her            will wear ing their
                                                                        date
Who are the Character and who they
             represent Draft 2
                        Name: Ramina Arlauskaite
                        Age: 18
                        Character Name: Nevaeh
                        Character Age:




Character Clothes
•Wears black clothes throughout the
scenes                                         Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit
                                               - When she is standing outside the Café
                                               - When she is with John in the Park




  Part H
Who are the Character and who they
      represent for (draft 2) opening sequence

                           Name: Neil Guevarra
                           Age: 17
                           Character Name: John
                           Character Age:



Character Clothes
•   Grey and Black hoody
•   Black Jacket
•   Grey/ blue jeans
•   shoes
                                                  Both pictures represent an
                                                  average teenager with normal
                                                  clothes



    Part H
Who are the Character and who they
    represent for (draft 2) opening sequence

                             Name: Ina Bayson
                             Age: 17
                             Character Name: Ina
                             Character Age:




Character Clothes
•   Dark blue skinny jeans
•   Pink hoody
•   Black jacket
•   Thick Scarf                                    Both pictures represent an
•   Shoes                                          average teenager with normal
•   Pink top
•   Blue and red polo                              clothes
•   Necklace
•   Mack up



Part H
Part I
         Location/Setting Draft 1

 • Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while
   Nevaeh is outside looking at them.
Part I
         Location/Setting Draft 1

 • Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and
   Nevaeh holding hands
Part I
                        Location/Draft 2
    We are going to use the Park (Roundwood Park) for our whole Opening Sequence.




  This is the place where
  Lily would see Nevaeh                                     This is the place where
  and John                                                  John will propose to her


    We chose this place, because we want to make the audience think that why would
           he be with Nevaeh in the same place, where he proposed to Lily.
Part J


 How are we going to create enigma

 • Showing pieces of the
   puzzle
         – Not showing everything
         – Building suspense


 • Flashes of clips
         – There will be a flash
           forward
5 bullet points of what is going to
Part K
           happen in the whole film
 • John and Lily got engage and move in together
 • Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her
 • They always argue on simple things
 • John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up, and Lily read it and
   become’s suspicious
 • John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that
   Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that
   him and Nevaeh are just friends
 • Tries to work thing out and they’re not engage anymore
Part K

         5 bullet points of what is going to
         happen in the opening sequence
   [Shows the date and time]
   • John and Lily meet up in the park, because he is going to say something
      important to Lily.
   • He proposed to her, and she was speechless, shocked, and happy.
   • Shoe accepted his proposal, he put the ring to her finger.

   [Next day: Shows the date and time]
   • John was on the same park with his close friend Nevaeh, talking and
      playing around (like what friends do).
   • Lily saw them, shocked and gets jealous, because she doesn’t know who
      Nevaeh is.
Part K
          5 bullet points of what is going to
         happen in the whole film for draft 2
   •     Ina (girl character) is sitting in front of the laptop looking through the internet
         (Facebook)
   •     She went to an album of pictures of her and her boyfriend (fiancée).
   •     She became very happy seeing their pictures together and having a great time.
         However all these changed when she got a message from someone who she
         doesn’t know
   •     After talking to the stranger she became curious about her boyfriend John and
         what is he finding from her.
   •     In the end, she couldn’t take the curiosity anymore and she argued with her
         boyfriend and broke up with him when she finds out that he have another woman.
5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the
Part K         opening sequence for draft 2

  •   The girl character (Ina) will be looking through Facebook looking at her and her
      boyfriend/husband-to-be’s pictures.
  •   While looking through the last 3 pictures she will get a flashback of what
      happened in each of the pictures, showing what kind of memories they had
      together.
  •   After looking at the pictures she had a message from a girl who she doesn’t know.
  •   The person started talking to her as if the stranger wants her to know something.
  •   Ina became curious about what the information from the person will be and the
      stranger told her its about her boyfriend.

Opening sequence draft 2 part 2

  • 1.
    Part G Chosen Conventions and how it develop Convention Use/Develop/Challenge Description and Examples from film Purpose with still shot Conflict and Use- this convention of conflict in a drama This is the scene where Precious film is kind of predictable, as most drama Precious and her mum Arguments films have arguments between characters. were fighting after Precious gets home Develop- We will develop this convention in with her new baby. This our opening sequence by using close ups and challenges the extreme close ups with an addition of convention as it have gestures and movements of the characters. high violence between characters. Love Triangle Use- this convention of love triangle is rarely This scene is when she Closer scene in a drama film, but in a drama- told her husband that romance films are possibly have a love she’s seeing another triangle or a challenge for the couples. guy. This uses the convention of love Develop- we will develop this convention by triangle, because it is a using another girl, so that the girlfriend of confession that she’s the boy will think he’s cheating. However, seeing another man. there will be a twist and it was just a misunderstanding
  • 2.
    Who are theCharacters & who they Part H represent Draft 1 Ramina: Nevaeh The Boyfriend’s close friend Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy, and dark Neil: John Ina: Lily The Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his girlfriend John’s Fiancée Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’s proposing Jeans and Hoody when going out with to her other girlfriend Jogging bottoms and Top when she saw them holding hands
  • 3.
    Who are theCharacter and who they represent Draft 2 John’s Semi Formal Outfit Name: Neil Guevarra - For their Date with Lily Age: 17 Character Name: John Character Age: John’s Non- Formal Outfit - When he is with Nevaeh Character Clothes •Wears semi-formal clothes when he’s with Lily on their date •Wears jeans and hoody when he’s with Nevaeh in the park Phone when Lily calls him The necklace that he will Part H be wearing throughout the film
  • 4.
    Who are theCharacter and who they represent Draft 2 Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit Name: Ina Bayson - For their Date with John Age: 17 Character Name: Lily Character Age: Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit - When following John to the Park with Nevaeh Character Clothes •Wears semi-formal clothes when she’s with John on their date •Wears jogging bottoms, and top when she saw John and Nevaeh in the park Phone that she The ring that will be using John will give Jewellery that she Part H to her will wear ing their date
  • 5.
    Who are theCharacter and who they represent Draft 2 Name: Ramina Arlauskaite Age: 18 Character Name: Nevaeh Character Age: Character Clothes •Wears black clothes throughout the scenes Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit - When she is standing outside the Café - When she is with John in the Park Part H
  • 6.
    Who are theCharacter and who they represent for (draft 2) opening sequence Name: Neil Guevarra Age: 17 Character Name: John Character Age: Character Clothes • Grey and Black hoody • Black Jacket • Grey/ blue jeans • shoes Both pictures represent an average teenager with normal clothes Part H
  • 7.
    Who are theCharacter and who they represent for (draft 2) opening sequence Name: Ina Bayson Age: 17 Character Name: Ina Character Age: Character Clothes • Dark blue skinny jeans • Pink hoody • Black jacket • Thick Scarf Both pictures represent an • Shoes average teenager with normal • Pink top • Blue and red polo clothes • Necklace • Mack up Part H
  • 8.
    Part I Location/Setting Draft 1 • Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is outside looking at them.
  • 9.
    Part I Location/Setting Draft 1 • Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh holding hands
  • 10.
    Part I Location/Draft 2 We are going to use the Park (Roundwood Park) for our whole Opening Sequence. This is the place where Lily would see Nevaeh This is the place where and John John will propose to her We chose this place, because we want to make the audience think that why would he be with Nevaeh in the same place, where he proposed to Lily.
  • 11.
    Part J Howare we going to create enigma • Showing pieces of the puzzle – Not showing everything – Building suspense • Flashes of clips – There will be a flash forward
  • 12.
    5 bullet pointsof what is going to Part K happen in the whole film • John and Lily got engage and move in together • Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her • They always argue on simple things • John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up, and Lily read it and become’s suspicious • John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that him and Nevaeh are just friends • Tries to work thing out and they’re not engage anymore
  • 13.
    Part K 5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the opening sequence [Shows the date and time] • John and Lily meet up in the park, because he is going to say something important to Lily. • He proposed to her, and she was speechless, shocked, and happy. • Shoe accepted his proposal, he put the ring to her finger. [Next day: Shows the date and time] • John was on the same park with his close friend Nevaeh, talking and playing around (like what friends do). • Lily saw them, shocked and gets jealous, because she doesn’t know who Nevaeh is.
  • 14.
    Part K 5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the whole film for draft 2 • Ina (girl character) is sitting in front of the laptop looking through the internet (Facebook) • She went to an album of pictures of her and her boyfriend (fiancée). • She became very happy seeing their pictures together and having a great time. However all these changed when she got a message from someone who she doesn’t know • After talking to the stranger she became curious about her boyfriend John and what is he finding from her. • In the end, she couldn’t take the curiosity anymore and she argued with her boyfriend and broke up with him when she finds out that he have another woman.
  • 15.
    5 bullet pointsof what is going to happen in the Part K opening sequence for draft 2 • The girl character (Ina) will be looking through Facebook looking at her and her boyfriend/husband-to-be’s pictures. • While looking through the last 3 pictures she will get a flashback of what happened in each of the pictures, showing what kind of memories they had together. • After looking at the pictures she had a message from a girl who she doesn’t know. • The person started talking to her as if the stranger wants her to know something. • Ina became curious about what the information from the person will be and the stranger told her its about her boyfriend.