Looking back at your preliminary
 task, what do you feel you have
learnt in the progression from it
        to the full product.
            Question 7.
Looking back at my preliminary task
Here is the draft copy of my
front cover and although my
draft is not yet perfect, as it
still needs editing slightly.
I feel that my experience in
doing this task will enable me
to do a much more
professional job on my final
product.
My plans are to use the
gradient tool to to add a lighter
background as I feel this will
enlighten my magazine and
make my model stand out
more giving it the extra effect.
I plan to change the font on
“Bal P” as I think using a
different font from the
masthead will be more
effective.
Here is my draft copy of my
contents page as you can see it still
looks quite unfinished and
ineffective.
I plan to edit the font on the
“features” and “every month” as at
the moment they look very plain.
I am going to change the middle
image as I do not think it fits in very
well with the hip hop genre and
also I think I am going to edit the
brightness and reposition the
photos so that they do not look out
of place and appeal more to the
reader.
I have learnt in the process of
making my draft contents how to
use different fonts and how to align
my text and images using the grid
so that I could make sure each
image lined up correctly.
Here is my draft double page spread. Feedback I received indicated that I should
steer away from using the black box around “Bal” and “Alex E” as this is used too
much already in my magazine, so with this in mind I decided to simply change the
font into a more bold font which a white shadow behind it. Also I plan to change
the font of “Latest Hip Hop Sensation” to a more stylish font, to make it appeal
more to the target audience. I also intend on editing the text slightly so the
article is longer and I will add an introductory feature.
And my final designs..
• I feel that I have learnt to arrange my conventions
  better such as the photo on my front cover.
• This is more appropriately placed allowing the
  taglines to be more easily read next to my model.
• Also I edited the pictures better too for example I
  cut around the front cover model far more
  professionally than previously. I learnt the
  importance of various text/font sizes. For
  example the masthead had to be a lot bigger than
  the taglines as this is what I wanted to attract the
  attention first.
• I have improved with my photography, both shot
  and lighting, to produce a laid back feel.
• My models facial expression shows his attitude I
  think this is an improvement as previously my
  model had no facial expression evident.
• The camera was I used was more professional as
  for the draft I used a 5.0 megapixel camera, and
  for my final I used a 14megapixel camera.
• In my contents I developed my actual contents
  list and included a banner which displayed the
  issue no., the month, year and the website
  address.
• In conclusion I feel that I have learnt a great
  deal about using Photoshop and I have
  improved my skills and knowledge about using
  the tools and features available on the
  software. I have also improved in my
  photography as I strongly feel that my images
  look more professional and effective.

Question 7

  • 1.
    Looking back atyour preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product. Question 7.
  • 2.
    Looking back atmy preliminary task
  • 3.
    Here is thedraft copy of my front cover and although my draft is not yet perfect, as it still needs editing slightly. I feel that my experience in doing this task will enable me to do a much more professional job on my final product. My plans are to use the gradient tool to to add a lighter background as I feel this will enlighten my magazine and make my model stand out more giving it the extra effect. I plan to change the font on “Bal P” as I think using a different font from the masthead will be more effective.
  • 4.
    Here is mydraft copy of my contents page as you can see it still looks quite unfinished and ineffective. I plan to edit the font on the “features” and “every month” as at the moment they look very plain. I am going to change the middle image as I do not think it fits in very well with the hip hop genre and also I think I am going to edit the brightness and reposition the photos so that they do not look out of place and appeal more to the reader. I have learnt in the process of making my draft contents how to use different fonts and how to align my text and images using the grid so that I could make sure each image lined up correctly.
  • 5.
    Here is mydraft double page spread. Feedback I received indicated that I should steer away from using the black box around “Bal” and “Alex E” as this is used too much already in my magazine, so with this in mind I decided to simply change the font into a more bold font which a white shadow behind it. Also I plan to change the font of “Latest Hip Hop Sensation” to a more stylish font, to make it appeal more to the target audience. I also intend on editing the text slightly so the article is longer and I will add an introductory feature.
  • 6.
    And my finaldesigns..
  • 9.
    • I feelthat I have learnt to arrange my conventions better such as the photo on my front cover. • This is more appropriately placed allowing the taglines to be more easily read next to my model. • Also I edited the pictures better too for example I cut around the front cover model far more professionally than previously. I learnt the importance of various text/font sizes. For example the masthead had to be a lot bigger than the taglines as this is what I wanted to attract the attention first.
  • 10.
    • I haveimproved with my photography, both shot and lighting, to produce a laid back feel. • My models facial expression shows his attitude I think this is an improvement as previously my model had no facial expression evident. • The camera was I used was more professional as for the draft I used a 5.0 megapixel camera, and for my final I used a 14megapixel camera. • In my contents I developed my actual contents list and included a banner which displayed the issue no., the month, year and the website address.
  • 11.
    • In conclusionI feel that I have learnt a great deal about using Photoshop and I have improved my skills and knowledge about using the tools and features available on the software. I have also improved in my photography as I strongly feel that my images look more professional and effective.