Jay Pinches, Callum Neilson, Sam Farrington, Laura Monument 
THRILLER PITCH
Film company 
Our film company is Optimum 
Productions and we strive to make 
the best thriller based films 
possible. We specialise in Crime 
Thrillers which is a sub genre and 
this will hopefully engage the 
audience to watch our films. 
Optimum symbolises that we are 
the best independent film 
company around, and what to 
continue making extraordinary 
films.
Film opening 
 We decided that out film starts with a girl leaving work, 
however someone suspicious is waiting for her. Her 
boyfriend is a detective, however the audience don’t 
know this yet. He is working on a case about a serial 
killer. On his desk there is images of the murderer and 
the victims, the boyfriend is trying to piece them 
together and find information that links them. The 
murderer is known to the characters as well as the 
audience. The girl gets mugged and murdered by the 
strange figure, however his face is seen, it is the same 
serial killer. As cross cutting will be shown in the opening 
a worker will tell the detective a body has been found. A 
picture is shown which then shows the audience it is his 
girlfriend, the opening then ends.
Overall Vision 
 The overall vision of our thriller is that the 
detective is trying to find the serial killer and 
get him arrested. This will create mystery and 
keep the audience on edge as they don’t 
know when or if he is caught. We want our 
thriller to be very mysterious and to keep the 
audience engaged. We will do this by using 
many genre conventions.
Questionnaire results 
The questionnaire results show that 
people would expect the hero to be 
male and taken place in a work place. 
We decided to use these answers and 
produce our opening around them. 
The majority of people answered 18 
for the certificate for film opening, 
however a lot of people also answered 
15, therefore we decided for out film 
target audience to be 15. Low key 
lighting was a popular answer, 
therefore we will use a lot of low key 
lighting as it engages the audience as 
well as creates a mysterious 
atmosphere and makes them sit on 
the edge of their seat.
Locations we use 
 We will film the murder scene in a dark room 
within school because it is easy to access and 
this works with the idea that the girl is 
murdered in the workplace. This setting also 
fits in with the idea of an ordinary person 
being put in a extraordinary situation. Also, 
our questionnaire results show that the most 
popular setting for a thriller film is in the 
workplace.
Costumes 
 The costumes have been chosen very carefully for our 
opening as we want to give the correct information out to 
the audience and use Mise En Scene correctly. 
 Victim(girl)-Casual yet sophisticated clothes, this shows she 
is leaving from work and gives the audience the impression 
she is well dressed and looks after herself. 
 Murderer – The murderer will be dressed in all black 
clothes, with a balaclava. This shows the audience he is 
dangerous and his identity doesn’t want to be seen. 
 Detective-The detective will be wearing very smart clothes, 
including a long coat. This suggests to the audience he has 
power. 
 Detectives worker-Very similar to the detective, smart 
clothes.
Thriller Themes 
 Themes that our thriller film will 
communicate include murder, weapons and 
crime. This is communicated by the villain 
being a serial killer on the run and the hero 
being a detective trying to avenge his 
daughter. This also reveals the sub-genre of 
our thriller which is a crime thriller.
Target Audience 
 Our target audience are people aged 16-21, 
we chose this because of our questionnaire 
results. We have decided to target an older 
age rather then young teenagers so we can 
have more explicit behaviour which will 
entertain and engage the audience to watch 
the film.
Genre Conventions 
 Ordinary person in an extraordinary situation. 
 Use of weapons 
 Fight scene 
 Photographs 
 Low key lighting 
 Shadows 
 Tension 
 Cross cutting

Thriller pitch

  • 1.
    Jay Pinches, CallumNeilson, Sam Farrington, Laura Monument THRILLER PITCH
  • 2.
    Film company Ourfilm company is Optimum Productions and we strive to make the best thriller based films possible. We specialise in Crime Thrillers which is a sub genre and this will hopefully engage the audience to watch our films. Optimum symbolises that we are the best independent film company around, and what to continue making extraordinary films.
  • 3.
    Film opening We decided that out film starts with a girl leaving work, however someone suspicious is waiting for her. Her boyfriend is a detective, however the audience don’t know this yet. He is working on a case about a serial killer. On his desk there is images of the murderer and the victims, the boyfriend is trying to piece them together and find information that links them. The murderer is known to the characters as well as the audience. The girl gets mugged and murdered by the strange figure, however his face is seen, it is the same serial killer. As cross cutting will be shown in the opening a worker will tell the detective a body has been found. A picture is shown which then shows the audience it is his girlfriend, the opening then ends.
  • 4.
    Overall Vision The overall vision of our thriller is that the detective is trying to find the serial killer and get him arrested. This will create mystery and keep the audience on edge as they don’t know when or if he is caught. We want our thriller to be very mysterious and to keep the audience engaged. We will do this by using many genre conventions.
  • 5.
    Questionnaire results Thequestionnaire results show that people would expect the hero to be male and taken place in a work place. We decided to use these answers and produce our opening around them. The majority of people answered 18 for the certificate for film opening, however a lot of people also answered 15, therefore we decided for out film target audience to be 15. Low key lighting was a popular answer, therefore we will use a lot of low key lighting as it engages the audience as well as creates a mysterious atmosphere and makes them sit on the edge of their seat.
  • 6.
    Locations we use  We will film the murder scene in a dark room within school because it is easy to access and this works with the idea that the girl is murdered in the workplace. This setting also fits in with the idea of an ordinary person being put in a extraordinary situation. Also, our questionnaire results show that the most popular setting for a thriller film is in the workplace.
  • 7.
    Costumes  Thecostumes have been chosen very carefully for our opening as we want to give the correct information out to the audience and use Mise En Scene correctly.  Victim(girl)-Casual yet sophisticated clothes, this shows she is leaving from work and gives the audience the impression she is well dressed and looks after herself.  Murderer – The murderer will be dressed in all black clothes, with a balaclava. This shows the audience he is dangerous and his identity doesn’t want to be seen.  Detective-The detective will be wearing very smart clothes, including a long coat. This suggests to the audience he has power.  Detectives worker-Very similar to the detective, smart clothes.
  • 8.
    Thriller Themes Themes that our thriller film will communicate include murder, weapons and crime. This is communicated by the villain being a serial killer on the run and the hero being a detective trying to avenge his daughter. This also reveals the sub-genre of our thriller which is a crime thriller.
  • 9.
    Target Audience Our target audience are people aged 16-21, we chose this because of our questionnaire results. We have decided to target an older age rather then young teenagers so we can have more explicit behaviour which will entertain and engage the audience to watch the film.
  • 10.
    Genre Conventions Ordinary person in an extraordinary situation.  Use of weapons  Fight scene  Photographs  Low key lighting  Shadows  Tension  Cross cutting