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A jam submission

One RockView game page

A very rough puzzle platformer with all in-house art. Game Jam Submission for Pirate Software #17
Submitted by GloriouslyDim — 5 hours, 34 minutes before the deadline
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Judge feedback

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  • This is an interesting concept, using a single object (the rock) as the primary tool for navigating the level. It’s a creative mechanic with potential, and the cute pixel art style gives the game a charming and approachable feel. However, the experience feels very short. After only four jumps, the game ended, and as noted in your submission, the exit currently does not function. Additionally, the music stopped playing after just one loop, which made the atmosphere feel a bit empty afterward. Despite these issues, this entry works well as a proof of concept and could serve as a solid foundation for further development. Your GDD is currently quite minimal and lacks several key components. I recommend reviewing the provided example document. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vl7BMvzUOhbunJrI_X1gUc6x-LAp3aaBiPwHUf27B70 Overall, this feels like a promising early prototype. With some polish and additional content, I can see it growing into something very enjoyable.

Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12_WF3-9XuImys_nLVSgqRc-ff0J40SljSwF4dFBt_No/edit?tab=t.0

Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes

Is your game set to public on itch.io so we can see it?
Yes

Summarize your game!
Puzzle Platformer with a magic rock. Level exit doors broke last minute, not too much to see

Please explain how your game fits the theme.
You only have one rock.

Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
The music and art is all original

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I couldn't figure out the key door so my secondary goal was to make it on the left platform, and I won that at least

Developer

Sorry about that, our doors broke and we were not able to fix them before the deadline. We also had to combine versions of the game from me and my teammate for some vital features, so we couldn't submit a backup either. Thanks for the review, I'll make a note in the description.