Enjoying the heck out of this!
Spoilers below.
Just thought I'd drop a couple of... parts where I don't think the scene lined up in how it leads into the next? Where MC "dropped the knife" I didn't think they were still holding on to (pic 1 leading into pic 2).
And also a part where the first paragraphs seemed to be from a different story route. I circled the part I believe to be the start of the page, and question-marked the ones I.... questioned ;) (pic 3).
If this is unhelpful, feel free to tell me so. Sometimes an artful decision aren't what we'd expect as readers. :)
Thank you for sharing this chapter!