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Sitara Effat Ahangari - stargirlwriting

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A solo tabletop roleplaying game. Not sure I understand your question...

This is really really beautiful. Love the idea of building a garden.

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Oh my god I love this. 

"wrists shackled to the bed. -> You are the HERO" is such a brilliant line progression. This game is so well done. Simple, smart, and polished.

This is AWESOME! Familiar but unique. I'm not very good at puzzle games but I was really insistent about seeing this one through. Visuals were so well done too, the little animation was a really special touch.

Love itttt! Thank you so much!

Thank you!! Solid time, racer.

Thirty seconds is DAAMN good. I made the game and I cant get sub 40 ;-;

SUB 20???!!??!?!?!?! THIS IS INSANE! I NEED TO SEE HOW YOU DID THIS I DONT UNDERSTAND

The car is VERY responsive. I think I want to tune down the max speed and acceleration. Thank you for playing!

Oooo this is brilliant. I love the 3D idea. 

Thoughts on a minimap?

Great idea! I'm thinking about a minimap. Thanks for playing!

Thank you!! So glad you had a good time playing. I agree the collision isn't great, that's my first priority update after the jam ends!

Hell yea! Thank you so much, it was a fun layer of polish to add

Ah thank you! Glad you enjoyed

Thank you so much :)

Thank you! Zeeey is truly amazing 

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed!

And that's a good suggestion, I agree the car moves a bit too quickly and you end up slamming into that first wall too hard.

This is officially my favorite submission in the jam. To me, this kind of game is exactly what the eldritch genre is about. It's not some grand battle, just a person on the beach, trying not to look up.

Truly a beautiful experience, and has shown me that a very small game can be just so impactful for these things.

I wouldn't even want more gameplay, necessarily. Maybe just more dialogue, or a couple of dialogue choices. Alternatively, you could implement the mechanic that the thing in the sky only gets larger when you look at it, but eventually you have to look at it.

Amazing game, top marks from me.

Okay. This is very very awesome. I love the UI, your writing really lets the terror spill slowly in. With some sound design, and maybe some more varied documents (like recovered transcripts/videos) this could be a really special fully fledged game.

I think there's something really special at the heart of this game. The art design is wonderful. & the atmosphere is well set. 

But, as it is, the game felt very repetitive and not challenging at all. And, even once I started trying to lose, I didn't really get a sense that there was a monster at all - I didn't see anything. Which I think is part of the problem in a genre about monsters we can't comprehend, but I think there is an inspired answer that could definitely work in this set up. 

All the same, good work :)

I would play this game for hours ngl. Choosing to go 3rd person pov for the writing is a very inspired choice, and helps maintain the quiet dissociative removal I correlate with the dark fantasy genre. My only critique really was that I wanted more story per the amount of battles, but that's mostly because I really loved the story!

This is very cute, def made me smile. Didn't totally see how descent factored in, but I think the game is charming enough to get away with it.

Quite a well made game, congrats!! The menu writing was cute, I'm a big fan of "loving craft"

Okay, I did it! THIS GAME IS SO COOL! Definitely has inspired me to make an audio input game, because this style of interactive dialogue is really amazing. So properly dreadful, and you managed to incorporate the unknowable terror of eldritch into a visual medium extremely well. This is great work, and I'd love to collab some day!

Very cool experience with well polished writing! Just felt more like a zombie game than the existential dread of the eldritch to me.

So glad you felt that way!!! :) Thank you. 

Agh, sorry for the bug. 

Ah wait very cool! I may have to re-explore this later...

Had a great time with this game! Writing was direct and clear, and there were some fun puzzles to solve :) Art design was cool and consistent. 

I would love more of a narrative set up for the game, but honestly, I had a good time :)

Cool environment, and I was definitely curious to explore! 

I felt unsure about what to do, and the lights off hallway was a cool variation, but there doesn't seem to be much of a game here. I'd love to have something change at least a little bit, and I worry most players will assume everything is infinite without slight variations. 

Still, a cool experiment!

I'm glad you did!! I can tell this is an idea you feel strongly about. 

Ah thank you so much! Sorry about the bug, it's a shame you didn't get to see the endings.

We'll be patching the game after the jam, hopefully you'll return then :))

really loved this. A very cool atmosphere. My favorite line was when the journal's author suddenly addressed themselves in the 2nd person saying you need to calm down or smth. It was a really nice moment to see the turn in the story.

Also, such an interesting and active take on the theme! 

Great work, cheers :)

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Very nice game! The environment is extremely well designed, and I enjoyed finding those letters! With a coat of polish and more content, this could be such a freaky atmospheric game. Cheers :)

This is fucking hilarious. Great work.

I really dug this game :) Cute and consistent and honestly quite sizable for the timeframe! 

The story was cute but was also a little bit freaky in a way I didn't expect. The kind of dissociative normalcy of all these characters really contributed to an atmosphere that I felt could definitely hold horror. 

I do have a feeling that this is just a game you've been wanting to make for a little while, and I didn't see much relation to theme, but I'm glad you made it and I'm glad to have played it! Excited to see more 

Thank you both for the comments! :) Sorry about the bugs affecting gameplay. We're aware of them, and will be patching them out once the jam voting period is over!

Glad you were engaged all the same, and I hope you'll return when all is fixed!

So glad you liked :) We're really proud of it

Silly game, the opening definitely made me laugh! Really good stuff, and a fun take on the eldritch theme. The MC's journey seems very interesting and I'd love to see more. 

Platformer was cool, but I got stuck at one jump I think is impossible! It was after the first diagonal wood piece. Hope I didn't miss any cool story beats!

Cheers :)

Thank you so much!! Ah, shame about the bug!

Thank you :)