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Another  small thing i notice is that you can climb up the walls after the first time the rocks are introduce, and at that instance the guy calles you luma, but i hadn't yet had the conversatation where i introduced myself to him. cause i could get there before getting teh other conversation.
        Maybe keep a more close track of which places are accesible before or after others. 
        Also something that could be intresting for this is to have a system where it keeps track if certain events/triggers of dialogue have been checked to decide to show one or another line of dialogue (or maybe just be more cautious with the timings of dialouge)

ok, another piece of feedback, i found the spike hitboxes to be really unforgiving, espevially for "pogoing" throught them.

ok, im gonna give feedback on seperate comment so that the different issues can be discussed in a more organized way.

the first thing i noticed is that the fact of having to control the player with wasd, and having to press the spacebar with that same hand is really uncomfortable and makes my hand hurt.

what i would suggest is having the jump be mapped to the W key so that the left hand controls are all close to each other and don't break your hand.

or having the abilitty to remap controls but that of course would be more complicated.

the way the goals of the games are presented also have some things that are unfun. there are three statues suposedly but i only found two of them, the third one should be on the south wing of the firsts sector acording to the plaques on the floor next to umbros, but i found nothing there. did i missed something?

apart from that, the way they are presented are pretty good, you talk about three statues, have tree plaques on the floor and lakk about how they are previous guardians and that they contain the answer of why you are there.

but i still couldn't start the first quest/ the quest of the first statue after 30 mins.

Another comment is that i find main loop of the game pretty boring. you basically go around looking for stuff,read stuff or pick stuff up, and go elsewhere.
also there has been like 30mins of gameplay and i practically haven't done anything, just run around, read a few lines of texts and pick up some stuff that i don't know why i wa<s picking them up.

the first comment that i have is that i couldn't figure out the controls. after several minutes of smashing the keys of my keyboards i realised that you could also use the icons on screen as touch pads.

damn this is an astonishing improvement from the last games i played from you. Did you do all this alone? did you use some kind of template? how could you explain this?

muy buena la atmosfera del juego. lo unico es que me desmale en la tercera session y igual gane.

yea, see it this way, it is usefull to see the progress you have made. it will be like a time capsule.

el diseño de la pagina esta bastante bueno, sobre todo los colores.

i think what you did with the level design is to think of a fun series of actions you need to make in order to pass the obstaces.
"ok, you double jump here, double jump here and only do one jump here or otherwise you won't reach the floor soon enought"

but the player doesn't know this series of steps before playing so in the player's perspective you are just hit with obstacles which you can't clear in an intuitive way, which doesn't feels fun at the beggining.

it also is way to hard for beeing the beggining of the game.  did you adjust the dificulty based on your skill? because remember you got better while developing the game, but a new player will start from scratch.

i know this doesn't reflect your current skill but i wonder if that was what how you made the levels at the time.

oh i don't know. i just imagine it could be used in cool ways, don't know wich ones. thats for you to figure out 😉

pretty cool prototype. at first i just wandered around, then i used the scanner, but then i realised the cool stuff did nothing for now, so i started following the marine floor looking for the highest elevation trying to get to that 970 elevation, but i think there wasn't ground at that height and the idea was for you to rise when you were done. i found following the floor more intresting than simply using the radar and heading on a straight line. maybe you could consider using the floor as the guider instead, that could be done in several cool ways probably and would make the exploration feel better imo.

the inputs of this game are really nice. feels like im controllinga  machine with all the varied input methods.

what do you not like? did it made you feel like a little bit ill from how  bizarre it was? or what did you not like?

i mean it depends on the persin. Some people orefer arrows, some people prefer wasd. Maybe you coukd have added both, or an option to switch between them.

yea, we tried making it, but it was to complicated for a jam

damn i thought me doing 400 was imresive jajaj

damn, really good game. pretty impresive. did you have some systems ready from other games, or you have a backlog of systems to use? cause this game's sistems are insane. the only thing is that the conveyor's placements are a bit wacky, but really good. we don't see enough manegment games on itch.

looks pretty neat, un fortunatly you can only play it with arrow keys and i suck at that, especially with the shitty little keys of my keybord ajja. what a pitty

this game is really relatable. after a nose operation for turbinates iwas told that i had to clean my nose by flicking it, and that habbit perdured after the recovery. i don't if it was because of that or because either the recovery or the surgery went wrong, but ever since my nose has itched and i try not to touch it but sometimes i do it unconsioucly. The worst part is that that surgery didn't even solved my turbinates! such a disaster. IT WAS 2 YEARS AGOOO

yea, it was supossed to be a bit mind bending but i think we might have went a bit too hard ajjaja

nono, i mean with the level tiles, the walls edges. like you jump and just 2 pixels touch the cieling and you are completly stoped on your rails.

its a neat game. the theme interpretation may be a bit of a strech in my opinon, but pretty good content for a jam. One thing, is thatits pretty difucult to dodge stuff, the movement is to stiff.

what do you mean soft locks? that it gets too dificult for the skill? or that there are lock that can be overcomed that shouldn't?

really nice concept really nice levels. the only coment is that the blob getting jammed on the block when barely touching the corners.

i mean is the slither io mechanic and not much more, the art work is good though,

the shadow thing is a good technical thing, though i don't think it adds too much to the gameplay. if you die just go for the flames that you left before and hold enough for the shadows to collect the flames. It sn't frustating and feels nice though.

the idea of rounding up with the mouse is good, though teh game feels clunky, the airplanes teleporting especially feels weird.
nice entry

really cool gimmick. we also went for a pretty similar interpretation to the theme, though ourgame is more center on navigating the maze of a level and solving the riddles.

the personality this game has is awesome! The gameplay is not as awesome, its a chrome dino but a mit more vivid and tighter.

the interpretation of the theme is not that clever, though the game is fun. the controls feel right, the gameplay ig good,trying to do it faster and all, and the artstyle is amazing. the music is good too

the idea is preetty original. the gameplay is a bit unsatisfactory. for example the difrence in distance between beeing able to blow objects away, and those objects hitting you is too small, besides theres no way of knowing at which treshhold these objects get to you and deal damage.

the game is too unforviging, in an unfair way. for example teh square kills you with barely touching you, which feels wrong because it feels like it kills you without touching, making its hitbox a little bit smaller would help with that. Also the dificulty is way too high. you probably got better as you played this game for 4 days, but people who play it start from zero and don't have the skill level you ave after 4 days.

the concept is pretty good, though it doesn't fit the theme.

Damn! this game is trully something else. it leave me with a feeling similar to when you finish a movie, AND IT WAS A JAM GAME! The storry telling is amazing. not only for the moral of the story, but also the little stories inside, like the exiled executoner, and also by how you start regcognizing and growing affection for the kindom as well as melancoly.
the gameplay is simple and not to original, but the way its used is exeptional.

really fun and good idea! and the levels were well made too. the music wasn't impressive but it fitted the vibe very well. A comment i have is that the, i think fifth level, relies too much on player movement, so if you just slightly bounce on one of your iterations, it messes up everything which was a bit frustrating

really fun and good idea! and the levels were well made too. the music wasn't impressive but it fitted the vibe very well. A comment i have is that the, i think fifth level, relies too much on player movement, so if you just slightly bounce on one of your iterations, it messes up everything which was a bit frustrating

the gameplay is really fun, the controls are on point and the artsyle is fantastic. the theme was used correctly though its not the most ingenious interpretation.
really good game!

really cool game. the way tha aim work is really clever, and having to juggle between dringking and shooting is too. The only thing is that you can't get very high on the drunk meter and the drunkness goes away too quickly, i wouldlike to expirence more drunkness.

oh and the music is really good