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Morning
Grade 8 Sapphire
“Preparing a burger
one layer at a time”
Instructions:
Make a hamburger based on
the Krusty Krab formula
and write a sentence about
the picture.
• What do you see in the picture?
• What can you say about the
burger you just made?
• If this picture resembles a real
burger, what can you say about it?
How would you describe a
hamburger?
Compose an effective paragraph
(EN8WC-IIa-2.8)
At the end of the lesson, the students are
expected to:
•Define a paragraph and;
•Differentiate the terms: topic sentence,
supporting sentence, and concluding
sentence;
•Arrange picture cards depicting daily activities to
create a sequence, and then write a corresponding
paragraph.
•Appreciate the value of clear and coherent
writing in composing an effective paragraph.
“What is a
burger”
Instruction:

Read the paragraph below


and answer the following
questions below.
GUIDE QUESTIONS:

• What can you say about the


text you read?
• Do you agree with the text?
• Is the text similar to what you
said earlier?
• What is a paragraph?
• What are the parts of a
paragraph?
A paragraph is a group of sentences
organized to discuss a topic. The main rule of
paragraph writing is to focus on one idea or
topic. To be able to write an effective
paragraph, one must have the essential parts.
• What is a paragraph?
• What are the parts of a
paragraph?
• Topic sentence
• Supporting sentence
• Concluding sentence
Topic Sentence
The top bun is the first sentence Key Idea
in each paragraph, which is also Supporting evid
called a "topic sentence" or "key
idea." This gives the reader a clue Supporting evide

on what the paragraph is about. Supporting evide

Conclusion sente
• Topic sentence
• Supporting sentence
• Concluding sentence
Supporting Sentence
The layers in the burger are the rest Key Idea
of the sentences in each paragraph.
Supporting evid
They are pieces of evidence that
reinforce the topic sentence. There are Supporting evide

usually two to three supporting details Supporting evide


in a paragraph.
Conclusion sente
• Topic sentence
• Supporting sentence
• Concluding sentence
Concluding Sentence
The bottom bun is the Key Idea

conclusion sentence in each Supporting eviden

paragraph. It may function as


Supporting evidenc
further supporting evidence or it
may sum up the ideas in the Supporting evidenc

paragraph. Conclusion sentenc


Conclusion:

thus, hence, indeed, finally, therefore,


consequently, in conclusion, to conclude, as a
result, in the end, and for all these reasons
Summary:

so, according, briefly, in brief, in sum,


summing up, in summary, to sum up, as can
be seen, given this point, and to summarize
“Arrange the parts of a burger”

Instructions: Identify the essential


parts of the paragraph, and paste
them onto their corresponding part on
the burger.
There are three reasons why I
prefer walking to other
physical activities.

One reason is that walking


can be done easily.
I can do it anywhere at any
time with no need for any
equipment.

Also, I prefer walking because


it is good for the heart.
I don’t have to do much effort
while walking.

Lastly, I prefer this physical


activity because it is safe.
It is not as risky as other
physical activities like
swimming, racing, or biking
For all these reasons, I
consider walking the best
physical activity of all.
Arrange the
jumbled words.
1. YTINU
2. ECNEREHOC
3. MENTPOLVEDE
The three principles of writing a
paragraph.
1. Unity
2. Coherence
3. Development
UNITY
Unity in a paragraph means that every
sentence focuses on the same main
idea, helping the writer stay focused
on one topic, which makes the writing
clear and organized.
Coherence
Coherence in a paragraph means that all
the ideas, from the main topic to
supporting details and conclusion, flow
smoothly and logically, linked together by
words like "first," "next," or "finally."
Development
Development in a paragraph means
thoroughly explaining and supporting
the main idea so that readers fully
understand without any lingering
questions.
Fix the hamburger!!
Instructions:

Arrange the sentences to form a


paragraph.
Fix the hamburger!!
There are several reasons why I enjoy
reading books more than watching
movies.

One reason is the flexibility of reading. I


can dive into a book anytime, anywhere,
without relying on screens or electricity.
Additionally, reading allows me to use my
imagination. I create vivid worlds and characters in
my mind, making the experience unique each time.

Lastly, reading offers a sense of tranquility. Unlike


the fast pace of movies, books let me immerse
myself in a story at my own pace, without
distractions.
For these reasons, I find reading books to be
the most enjoyable form of entertainment.
Picto-write
Instructions:
In groups, assemble the picture
depicting an activity and construct a
paragraph about the picture given to you.
Criteria Description Indicators Score
Parts of a Presents the essential 5 – the paragraph presents the three essential parts of a
Paragraph parts of a paragraph paragraph in a very organized way.
namely the Topic 4 – the paragraph presents the three essential parts of a
sentence, Supporting paragraph in an organized way.
1-5 points sentence, and 3 – the paragraph presents the essential parts in a fairly
Concluding sentence organized way.
2 – the paragraph presents the essential parts but it is poorly
organized.
1 – the paragraph fails to present the essential parts.

Principles of Applies the principles 5 – the paragraph clearly shows unity, coherence, and
paragraph writing of writing a paragraph development.
namely unity, 4 – the paragraph shows unity, coherence, and development.
1-5 points coherence, and 3 - the paragraph fairly shows unity, coherence, and
developme-nt development.
2 - the paragraph poorly shows unity, coherence, and
development.
1 - the paragraph fails to show unity, coherence, and
development.
• What is a Paragraph?
• Why is it important to have clear and coherent writing when
composing an effective paragraph?
• How does clear and coherent writing impact the reader’s
understanding?
• How can focusing on one main idea in a paragraph mirror
the importance of prioritizing goals in life?
“True or False”
Instructions: Write “TRUE” if the
statement is correct, and ‘FALSE”
if the statement is incorrect.
1. The topic sentence is always in the
first sentence of the paragraph.
2. The topic sentence is the most
important in the paragraphs.
3. The topic sentence does not contain
the central idea of the paragraph.
4. The topic sentence is always
the title of the paragraph.
5. Details provide the framework
for the paragraph.
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